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Mirea
NM request from modding qu'eue'

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00:04:801 (4801|2) - delete? cuma ada minor melody bukan drum, dan dari awal memang melodinya ga dimap

00:07:878 - 1 note cukup, bukan loud kick kek 00:07:263 -

00:10:032 (10032|3,10109|2,10186|0,10186|1) - ctrl+h, menghindari 00:09:724 (9724|3,9878|3,10032|3) -

00:22:494 (22494|0) - move ke col 2? lebih balance sih menurut w

00:32:801 - add 1 note, minor sound gitar, biar ga hampa banget mainnya 3 notes di 1/1 doang

00:51:109 (51109|0,51109|2,51263|1,51263|3) - alangkah baiknya jika dibikin reverse kek 00:50:494 (50494|2,50494|3,50648|2,50648|1) -
biar lebih terstruktur

01:02:186 (62186|0,62340|0,62494|0,62648|0) - rearrange >.>

01:11:878 - add 1 note, minor sound
01:12:494 - ^
untuk jelasnya bisa denger di playrate 25%

01:31:263 - dan 01:31:724 - mestinya 3 notes, snare+cymbal :/

01:31:263 (91263|2) - ini bisa diextend kok sampe 01:31:571 -

01:31:724 - ini bisa ditaruh LN buat ngikutin 01:31:263 (91263|2) -

untuk jack dari dari 01:46:494 - sampe 01:47:417 - saya rasa jacknya cukup sampe 01:46:955 - dan berganti jack di kolom yang berbeda menurut snare
lebih konsisten dengan pattern 01:47:417 - seterusnya dimana pitchnya sama

02:30:801 - 3 notes, loud drum+cymbal (sugesti ada di bawah)

02:30:494 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9173993

02:35:109 (155109|2) - move ke col 2, hand balance

dah itu aja, ngantuk pas ngemod :''v
goodluck ya beb <3
Topic Starter
FadillSan

chouyaa wrote:

NM request from modding qu'eue'

1|2|3|4


click
00:04:801 (4801|2) - delete? cuma ada minor melody bukan drum, dan dari awal memang melodinya ga dimap done~

00:07:878 - 1 note cukup, bukan loud kick kek 00:07:263 - ah iya, done~

00:10:032 (10032|3,10109|2,10186|0,10186|1) - ctrl+h, menghindari 00:09:724 (9724|3,9878|3,10032|3) - done~

00:22:494 (22494|0) - move ke col 2? lebih balance sih menurut w moved~

00:32:801 - add 1 note, minor sound gitar, biar ga hampa banget mainnya 3 notes di 1/1 doang iya juga yaa, fixed~

00:51:109 (51109|0,51109|2,51263|1,51263|3) - alangkah baiknya jika dibikin reverse kek 00:50:494 (50494|2,50494|3,50648|2,50648|1) -
biar lebih terstruktur fixed~

01:02:186 (62186|0,62340|0,62494|0,62648|0) - rearrange >.> my bad.. fixed~

01:11:878 - add 1 note, minor sound done~
01:12:494 - ^ ^
untuk jelasnya bisa denger di playrate 25%

01:31:263 - dan 01:31:724 - mestinya 3 notes, snare+cymbal :/ done~

01:31:263 (91263|2) - ini bisa diextend kok sampe 01:31:571 - fixed~

01:31:724 - ini bisa ditaruh LN buat ngikutin 01:31:263 (91263|2) - added~

untuk jack dari dari 01:46:494 - sampe 01:47:417 - saya rasa jacknya cukup sampe 01:46:955 - dan berganti jack di kolom yang berbeda menurut snare
lebih konsisten dengan pattern 01:47:417 - seterusnya dimana pitchnya sama oh iya, suaranya sama, fixed~

02:30:801 - 3 notes, loud drum+cymbal (sugesti ada di bawah)

02:30:494 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9173993 done~

02:35:109 (155109|2) - move ke col 2, hand balance moved~

dah itu aja, ngantuk pas ngemod :''v
goodluck ya beb <3

Aaaaa, makasih modnya yaa :3

Really Need SV Mod~
Nevertary
from queue
Start Beat!!!
00:10:032 (10032|0) - ini bukan suara yg keras jadi gk perlu dibuat jack sama yg bawahnya, move to column 3
klo yg atas diapply.. 00:10:186 (10186|2) - move to column 1
00:49:648 (49648|3,49648|2) - cukup single, suaranya udh beda sama yg atas & bawahnya
00:54:340 - coba https://puu.sh/xLunE/8a10d52fa9.jpg ini, karena suara yg keras cuma di 3 row pertama
00:45:571 - gk snap note kyk 00:55:417 (55417|3) - ini ?
00:46:801 - add 1 note kyk 00:56:648 (56648|0) - ini
01:05:878 - menurutku gk harus quad, suaranya sama kyk triple dibawahnya
01:10:648 - sebenernya mau ngikutin instrument atau vokalnya? w liat sebelumnya cuma instrument nya aja (bass drum, snare, etc)
04:14:801 (254801|3,254955|3,255109|3,255263|3,255417|3) - hindari banyak note di 1 column
04:49:724 (289724|1,289801|2) - gk ada suara apapun disini
04:52:032 - buat double atau triple
05:01:878 (301878|3,301878|2,301955|0,301955|1,302032|3,302032|2,302109|1,302109|0,302186|0,302186|2,302186|3) - ini kyk nya 1/3 beat, bukan 1/4
05:07:109 - add single
05:15:724 - mungkin mappingnya mau ditambah sampai suaranya berakhir disini?

coba cek mod ini buat seluruh bagian lagu, bukan cuma yg gw sebutkan 'v')b

bandori <3
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Nevertary wrote:

from queue
Start Beat!!!
00:10:032 (10032|0) - ini bukan suara yg keras jadi gk perlu dibuat jack sama yg bawahnya, move to column 3 ah iya, fixed~
klo yg atas diapply.. 00:10:186 (10186|2) - move to column 1 done~
00:49:648 (49648|3,49648|2) - cukup single, suaranya udh beda sama yg atas & bawahnya fixed~
00:54:340 - coba https://puu.sh/xLunE/8a10d52fa9.jpg ini, karena suara yg keras cuma di 3 row pertama iya juga yah, fixed~
00:45:571 - gk snap note kyk 00:55:417 (55417|3) - ini ? ah, kelupaan, fixed~
00:46:801 - add 1 note kyk 00:56:648 (56648|0) - ini ini juga, fixed~
01:05:878 - menurutku gk harus quad, suaranya sama kyk triple dibawahnya Kalo ini sengaja aku bikin quad, soalnya diakhir, istilahnya klimaks :3
01:10:648 - sebenernya mau ngikutin instrument atau vokalnya? w liat sebelumnya cuma instrument nya aja (bass drum, snare, etc) ah, ini tadinya mau ngikut vocal juga, tapi gak jadi deh :'v ngikut instrument aja :3
04:14:801 (254801|3,254955|3,255109|3,255263|3,255417|3) - hindari banyak note di 1 column okay, fixed~
04:49:724 (289724|1,289801|2) - gk ada suara apapun disini itu ada suara kick, walau kecil, coba deh play di 25% :3
04:52:032 - buat double atau triple jadiin double~
05:01:878 (301878|3,301878|2,301955|0,301955|1,302032|3,302032|2,302109|1,302109|0,302186|0,302186|2,302186|3) - ini kyk nya 1/3 beat, bukan 1/4 ah iya, fixed~
05:07:109 - add single done~
05:15:724 - mungkin mappingnya mau ditambah sampai suaranya berakhir disini? gak usah deh, sampe 05:07:109 - aja :3

coba cek mod ini buat seluruh bagian lagu, bukan cuma yg gw sebutkan 'v')b

bandori <3
Mkasih banyak modnya :3
zawz
NM mod from my queue

SV focused as requested

Start Beat!!
00:32:340 - Just a little too much. Change the x3 to a x2.5
00:45:263 - This acceleration lasts for too long. Move 00:45:417 - to 00:45:340 -
01:06:801 - That's way too fast, impossible to react in time unless you know it's here. This needs a slowdown half-way.
02:00:955 - Wow x4 is a little much. I understand this one is more intense, but I wouldn't go any higher than x3.5 here
02:23:648 - Add a slowdown here. Doesn't have to be x0.5 but it's too hard without
02:26:109 - ^
Too lazy to add SV after that?
02:35:417 - You should add SV here. Like at 01:06:801
03:10:186 - 03:20:032 - This part could use a slowdown to x0.9 or x0.8
03:38:648 - 03:39:109 - I'd add some SV here, like maybe x2 at 03:38:648 - and x0.5 at 03:38:801 -
03:52:032 - 04:01:878 - This part could use a slowdown
04:12:955 - This part screams SV. Like say x1 at 04:12:724 - and x0.1 at 04:11:724 -
Hope this helped

Nice map otherwise
Topic Starter
FadillSan

zawz wrote:

NM mod from my queue

SV focused as requested

Start Beat!!
00:32:340 - Just a little too much. Change the x3 to a x2.5 fixed~
00:45:263 - This acceleration lasts for too long. Move 00:45:417 - to 00:45:340 - fixed too~
01:06:801 - That's way too fast, impossible to react in time unless you know it's here. This needs a slowdown half-way. added x0.5 at half-way
02:00:955 - Wow x4 is a little much. I understand this one is more intense, but I wouldn't go any higher than x3.5 here changed to x2.5 like 00:32:340
02:23:648 - Add a slowdown here. Doesn't have to be x0.5 but it's too hard without added~
02:26:109 - ^ ^
Too lazy to add SV after that?
02:35:417 - You should add SV here. Like at 01:06:801 Ah, I forget it, done~
03:10:186 - 03:20:032 - This part could use a slowdown to x0.9 or x0.8 added x0.9
03:38:648 - 03:39:109 - I'd add some SV here, like maybe x2 at 03:38:648 - and x0.5 at 03:38:801 - done~
03:52:032 - 04:01:878 - This part could use a slowdown added x0.7~
04:12:955 - This part screams SV. Like say x1 at 04:12:724 - and x0.1 at 04:11:724 - this great! added~
Hope this helped

Nice map otherwise
That's very helped! Thank you so much :)
Couil
sup, M4M req

You wanted a SV check, so I'll pattern mod half of the map + check the SV, should amount to about the same amount of time you spent on my mod : )

Start Beat!!
00:11:417 (11417|1,11417|0) - Kinda weird to have a solo OH double here, don't see why it isn't a two handed but mb it's intentional /shrug. Would suggest you change it a two handed double though.
00:12:032 (12032|2,12340|2,12648|2,12801|2,12955|2) - Long anchor, would suggest changing the position of one of them.
00:19:878 (19878|3) - This LN feels pretty weird to me. Even though i can hear that there's a sound there, adding a note on a off-beat is usually not intuitive. I'd suggest removing it since the sound isn't too important imo.
00:22:494 (22494|1,22494|2) - Don't think this should be a double tbh, I'd say it's enough with only mapping it as a LN.
00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) - Don't think this is supposed to be a jack, since you've mapped the others without jacks.
00:35:417 - Missed soft-hitclap.
00:37:417 (37417|2,37571|2) - Why is this a jack? Don't know if intentional or not, but since the rest of them aren't jacks i'd say adding a jack without any sound supporting it would be very weird and inconsistent.
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - ^
00:42:340 (42340|2,42494|2) - ^
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - Missed double?
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - Should be triple, right?
00:44:494 (44494|1) - Think the map would work better without this note since most players would be focusing on the drums rather than the guitar.
00:49:648 (49648|2) - Ghost note?
00:54:186 (54186|2,54186|3) - Why is this a double? Unless you're mapping hi-hats as doubles I don't think this is intense enough to be a double.
00:56:955 - Maybe map the drums here?
01:15:571 (75571|0,75571|1,75648|3,75648|2) - Maybe map these as singles to contrast the bass drum?
01:16:955 - Triple?
01:25:186 - Add note.
01:25:494 - ^
01:26:801 - Triple.
01:31:263 (91263|2,91724|1) - Why are you mapping the crashes as LNs all of a sudden? Feels kinda off since there rest in this section have been normal triples.
01:32:186 (92186|0,92263|1) - I don't hear any noise for these. If there isn't any noise there i highly suggest removing them.
01:34:648 (94648|1) - Ghost note.
01:53:417 (113417|0) - Missplaced, think it's supposed to be a 1/2 down.
02:18:494 (138494|3,139109|0) - Why aren't these doubles?
02:21:571 - ^
02:25:571 - Would suggest adding a LN here if you aren't going to map the drum noise.
02:28:340 - I'd suggest normal notes on the echo/background singers to make a distinction between the two.
02:30:494 (150494|3,150801|3) - LN gap is soo small : ( this becomes really uncomfortable to play and really random. I'd suggest changing it to a 1/2 gap or just making it a normal note.
02:44:186 (164186|1,164263|2,164263|3) - As previously, i'd suggest changing both of these to singles, for better contrast between the sounds.
02:52:955 - Triple.
02:53:878 - Double.
02:54:109 - Missed note.
02:59:878 - Triple.
03:00:186 - Could end the LN here and map the drums instead. Would work better with the next point as well.
03:00:340 - Triple.
03:00:494 (180494|1) - Ghost note?
03:02:648 - Note?

Okey will do the SV check now;

00:32:340 - Think this SV is a bit too aggressive. Changing the numbers to 1.9x/0.7x or 2.05x/0.65x would work better imo.
02:00:955 - ^
02:35:417 - ^
00:45:186 - These SVs are really awkward. Since they're between notes it becomes super hard to read since it's no longer 1x + you don't know when it's coming. If you want a SV i'd suggest removing 00:45:109 (45109|2) adding a .83x SV at 00:44:955 and moving the 1x slider to 00:45:263. If you like this SV, I'd suggest changing the remaining ones to this as well. You could change the .83x and 1.5x SV to a couple more numbers; examples: 0.7x/1.9, 0.6x/2.2x, 0.5x/2.5, 0.8x/1.6x etc.
02:13:571 - ^ This could apply here i guess. Since it's the same sound.
02:23:417 - ^
01:06:801 - This 50/50 SV is a bit too slow imo, i'd suggest changing the 1.5x to a 2.5x SV and moving the 0.5x SV to 01:06:878. This would create a better SV imo.
03:38:648 - I'd change the 2x SVs to 1.25x SV, because then the distance between the notes becomes half of what its original distance was (it would basically look like you just stuck a 0.5x SV there instead of the 2x and 0.5x SV). This would make it easier to read since it doesn't look like it's snapped on a off-beat but rather snapped on a half-beat.
04:12:648 - This transition is hard to read, I'd suggest making it an "exponential" SV that rises each 1/4th, like this. Basically just start at 04:12:648 and increase it by a certain amount each 1/4th.

Hope you find something useful, GL ranking it!
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Couil wrote:

sup, M4M req

You wanted a SV check, so I'll pattern mod half of the map + check the SV, should amount to about the same amount of time you spent on my mod : )

Start Beat!!
00:11:417 (11417|1,11417|0) - Kinda weird to have a solo OH double here, don't see why it isn't a two handed but mb it's intentional /shrug. Would suggest you change it a two handed double though. re-arranged~
00:12:032 (12032|2,12340|2,12648|2,12801|2,12955|2) - Long anchor, would suggest changing the position of one of them. fixed~
00:19:878 (19878|3) - This LN feels pretty weird to me. Even though i can hear that there's a sound there, adding a note on a off-beat is usually not intuitive. I'd suggest removing it since the sound isn't too important imo. removed
00:22:494 (22494|1,22494|2) - Don't think this should be a double tbh, I'd say it's enough with only mapping it as a LN. my bad, removed a single~
00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) - Don't think this is supposed to be a jack, since you've mapped the others without jacks. fixed~
00:35:417 - Missed soft-hitclap. Ah, fixed~
00:37:417 (37417|2,37571|2) - Why is this a jack? Don't know if intentional or not, but since the rest of them aren't jacks i'd say adding a jack without any sound supporting it would be very weird and inconsistent. fixed~
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - ^ ^
00:42:340 (42340|2,42494|2) - ^ ^
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - Missed double? I think this should be single
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - Should be triple, right? what ??
00:44:494 (44494|1) - Think the map would work better without this note since most players would be focusing on the drums rather than the guitar. removed~
00:49:648 (49648|2) - Ghost note? removed~
00:54:186 (54186|2,54186|3) - Why is this a double? Unless you're mapping hi-hats as doubles I don't think this is intense enough to be a double. fixed~
00:56:955 - Maybe map the drums here? done~
01:15:571 (75571|0,75571|1,75648|3,75648|2) - Maybe map these as singles to contrast the bass drum? done~
01:16:955 - Triple? done~
01:25:186 - Add note. added~
01:25:494 - ^ ^
01:26:801 - Triple. done~
01:31:263 (91263|2,91724|1) - Why are you mapping the crashes as LNs all of a sudden? Feels kinda off since there rest in this section have been normal triples. changed to normal note~
01:32:186 (92186|0,92263|1) - I don't hear any noise for these. If there isn't any noise there i highly suggest removing them. There's a little kick here~
01:34:648 (94648|1) - Ghost note. removed
01:53:417 (113417|0) - Missplaced, think it's supposed to be a 1/2 down. ah, my bad, fixed~
02:18:494 (138494|3,139109|0) - Why aren't these doubles? The sound is low than 02:19:724 -, so i make it single
02:21:571 - ^ ^
02:25:571 - Would suggest adding a LN here if you aren't going to map the drum noise. added a drum noise
02:28:340 - I'd suggest normal notes on the echo/background singers to make a distinction between the two. done~
02:30:494 (150494|3,150801|3) - LN gap is soo small : ( this becomes really uncomfortable to play and really random. I'd suggest changing it to a 1/2 gap or just making it a normal note. changed o normal note~
02:44:186 (164186|1,164263|2,164263|3) - As previously, i'd suggest changing both of these to singles, for better contrast between the sounds. done~
02:52:955 - Triple. done~
02:53:878 - Double. done~
02:54:109 - Missed note. added~
02:59:878 - Triple. done~
03:00:186 - Could end the LN here and map the drums instead. Would work better with the next point as well. done~
03:00:340 - Triple. done~
03:00:494 (180494|1) - Ghost note? removed~
03:02:648 - Note? added~

Okey will do the SV check now;

00:32:340 - Think this SV is a bit too aggressive. Changing the numbers to 1.9x/0.7x or 2.05x/0.65x would work better imo.
02:00:955 - ^
02:35:417 - ^
00:45:186 - These SVs are really awkward. Since they're between notes it becomes super hard to read since it's no longer 1x + you don't know when it's coming. If you want a SV i'd suggest removing 00:45:109 (45109|2) adding a .83x SV at 00:44:955 and moving the 1x slider to 00:45:263. If you like this SV, I'd suggest changing the remaining ones to this as well. You could change the .83x and 1.5x SV to a couple more numbers; examples: 0.7x/1.9, 0.6x/2.2x, 0.5x/2.5, 0.8x/1.6x etc.
02:13:571 - ^ This could apply here i guess. Since it's the same sound.
02:23:417 - ^
01:06:801 - This 50/50 SV is a bit too slow imo, i'd suggest changing the 1.5x to a 2.5x SV and moving the 0.5x SV to 01:06:878. This would create a better SV imo.
03:38:648 - I'd change the 2x SVs to 1.25x SV, because then the distance between the notes becomes half of what its original distance was (it would basically look like you just stuck a 0.5x SV there instead of the 2x and 0.5x SV). This would make it easier to read since it doesn't look like it's snapped on a off-beat but rather snapped on a half-beat.
04:12:648 - This transition is hard to read, I'd suggest making it an "exponential" SV that rises each 1/4th, like this. Basically just start at 04:12:648 and increase it by a certain amount each 1/4th.
All SV mod are accepted~

Hope you find something useful, GL ranking it!
Thanks a lot for all the mods! :)
Madoka2574
Hello,from your modding queue :)
I have to say,when I firstly watched osu! play your map I soon fell in love with it.Good song and really nice map!The SVs are also pretty good in my eyes.
Start Beat!!
00:04:801 - 00:04:878 - I think you can add 2 notes.There are sounds and feels good
00:23:571 (23571|1,23571|2,24032|2,24032|1) - different pitch,so you'd better place them in different columns
00:32:648 - For this part you can create pattern like these notes 01:51:724 (111724|3,111878|3,112032|2,112186|2,112340|1,112494|1) - Place some notes in the same column.
00:42:494 - triple
00:49:724 (49724|0,49724|1,49801|3,49801|2,49878|0,49878|1) - Ctrl+H
00:52:263 (52263|2,52263|3,52878|2,52878|3) - single and 00:52:340 (52340|1,52340|0) - triple
00:56:955 (56955|1) - Delete,no snare here
01:17:494 (77494|0,77494|1) - single
01:21:878 - Triple for cymbal
01:25:109 - 01:25:417 - Why suddenly double?You didn't use double in previous parts and I can't see any difference here
01:38:955 (98955|1,98955|0) - Not here but here 01:39:032 -
01:48:955 - Add a note in column 3
02:15:724 - You can add a LN from here to 02:16:032 - for vocal sound
02:45:263 (165263|0,165263|2,165340|1,165340|3,165417|0,165417|2,165494|1,165494|3,165571|2,165571|0) - Change this pettern like this 00:59:263 (59263|1,59263|0,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1,59494|2,59494|3,59571|1,59571|0) - Since the current one is more difficult(no need to use it in this map I suppose) and you never use it in other parts.
02:45:571 - Triple for cymbal
02:50:494 - triple
From 02:53:571 - to 02:55:109 - Just see this https://puu.sh/xRcRA/479dd0613d.png
03:02:801 - triple
03:16:878 - Add a note here like the beginning
03:20:032 - triple here,maybe like this https://puu.sh/xRd1e/65f39b1979.png
03:33:417 - Add a note in column 1
03:37:263 - You may add a note in column 3 but the cymbal is not so loud so it's up to you
03:47:109 - are you sure about this stream? I can't hear so many sounds
04:04:032 (244032|1,244032|3,244340|3,244340|1,244648|1,244648|3) - Try to place them in different columns,and including 04:05:263 (245263|1,245571|1,245878|1,246186|1,246494|1) - you have 9 notes in column 2!
04:22:801 - triple
04:32:648 - I always suggest triple here but it is not a must,sometimes double would be better,I just point them out.you can decide by yourself.However if there is a really clear cymbal sound I still advise triple.Additionally pay attention to consistency.
04:37:571 - triple
04:40:032 - triple
04:44:955 - triple
04:54:340 - triple
04:59:263 - triple,but it seems fine with double here XD
05:07:109 - double

Sorry for simple mod but I love the song.

Shot a star and add as fav.

Good luck for ranking! :)
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Madoka2574 wrote:

Hello,from your modding queue :)
I have to say,when I firstly watched osu! play your map I soon fell in love with it.Good song and really nice map!The SVs are also pretty good in my eyes.
Start Beat!!
00:04:801 - 00:04:878 - I think you can add 2 notes.There are sounds and feels good good idea, added~
00:23:571 (23571|1,23571|2,24032|2,24032|1) - different pitch,so you'd better place them in different columns changed~
00:32:648 - For this part you can create pattern like these notes 01:51:724 (111724|3,111878|3,112032|2,112186|2,112340|1,112494|1) - Place some notes in the same column. done~
00:42:494 - triple done~
00:49:724 (49724|0,49724|1,49801|3,49801|2,49878|0,49878|1) - Ctrl+H done~
00:52:263 (52263|2,52263|3,52878|2,52878|3) - single and 00:52:340 (52340|1,52340|0) - triple done~
00:56:955 (56955|1) - Delete,no snare here deleted~
01:17:494 (77494|0,77494|1) - single done~
01:21:878 - Triple for cymbal done~
01:25:109 - 01:25:417 - Why suddenly double?You didn't use double in previous parts and I can't see any difference here ah, my bad, fixed~
01:38:955 (98955|1,98955|0) - Not here but here 01:39:032 - fixed~
01:48:955 - Add a note in column 3 added~
02:15:724 - You can add a LN from here to 02:16:032 - for vocal sound I'll skip this vocal sound..
02:45:263 (165263|0,165263|2,165340|1,165340|3,165417|0,165417|2,165494|1,165494|3,165571|2,165571|0) - Change this pettern like this 00:59:263 (59263|1,59263|0,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1,59494|2,59494|3,59571|1,59571|0) - Since the current one is more difficult(no need to use it in this map I suppose) and you never use it in other parts. fixed~
02:45:571 - Triple for cymbal done~
02:50:494 - triple done~
From 02:53:571 - to 02:55:109 - Just see this https://puu.sh/xRcRA/479dd0613d.png done~
03:02:801 - triple done~
03:16:878 - Add a note here like the beginning done~
03:20:032 - triple here,maybe like this https://puu.sh/xRd1e/65f39b1979.png done~
03:33:417 - Add a note in column 1 added~
03:37:263 - You may add a note in column 3 but the cymbal is not so loud so it's up to you I'll keep this double..
03:47:109 - are you sure about this stream? I can't hear so many sounds It's guitar sound, I re-arranged this
04:04:032 (244032|1,244032|3,244340|3,244340|1,244648|1,244648|3) - Try to place them in different columns,and including 04:05:263 (245263|1,245571|1,245878|1,246186|1,246494|1) - you have 9 notes in column 2! fixed~
04:22:801 - triple done~
04:32:648 - I always suggest triple here but it is not a must,sometimes double would be better,I just point them out.you can decide by yourself.However if there is a really clear cymbal sound I still advise triple.Additionally pay attention to consistency. I'll make it triple~
04:37:571 - triple done~
04:40:032 - triple done~
04:44:955 - triple done~
04:54:340 - triple done~
04:59:263 - triple,but it seems fine with double here XD I think i'll make it triple :3
05:07:109 - double done~

Sorry for simple mod but I love the song.

Shot a star and add as fav.

Good luck for ranking! :)
Thanks a lot for the mods~ :3
And thank you for the star and fav :)
FAMoss
modreq
short mod

====
00:00:648 (648|3) - suara panjang kenapa ga tambahin aja sampe 00:02:186 -
00:01:263 - tambahin note di 1
00:01:878 - tambahin note di 2
00:03:109 (3109|0) - ln sampe 00:04:648 -
00:03:724 - tambahin note di 4
00:04:340 - tambahin note di 3
00:05:263 - tambahin note di 4
00:05:417 (5417|0) - geser ke 3
00:05:571 (5571|2) - geser ke 1
00:05:571 (5571|1) - jadiin ln sampe 00:07:109 -
00:06:801 - tambah note di 1
00:06:186 - note di 4
00:08:032 (8032|2) - jadiin ln sampe 00:08:955 -
00:08:648 - note di 1
delete ini 00:07:263 (7263|1) -
^ 00:09:263 (9263|0) -
^ 00:09:724 (9724|3) -
00:20:801 (20801|2) - ke 2
delete ini 00:20:955 (20955|1) -
^ 00:21:571 (21571|2) -
^ 00:22:186 (22186|1) -
delete ini 02:00:955 (120955|0) - karena disini ga ada bunyi hentakan
^ 02:13:571 (133571|3) -
Topic Starter
FadillSan

FAMoss wrote:

modreq
short mod

====
00:00:648 (648|3) - suara panjang kenapa ga tambahin aja sampe 00:02:186 -
00:01:263 - tambahin note di 1
00:01:878 - tambahin note di 2
00:03:109 (3109|0) - ln sampe 00:04:648 -
00:03:724 - tambahin note di 4
00:04:340 - tambahin note di 3
00:05:263 - tambahin note di 4
00:05:417 (5417|0) - geser ke 3
00:05:571 (5571|2) - geser ke 1
00:05:571 (5571|1) - jadiin ln sampe 00:07:109 -
00:06:801 - tambah note di 1
00:06:186 - note di 4
00:08:032 (8032|2) - jadiin ln sampe 00:08:955 -
00:08:648 - note di 1
delete ini 00:07:263 (7263|1) - nope, ini suara kick nya lbih keras, jadi w bikin double
^ 00:09:263 (9263|0) - ^
^ 00:09:724 (9724|3) - ^
*dari awal sampe 00:10:494 - Itu emang sengaja gak dibikin LN & gak dikasih note buat suara piano, w cuma ngambil suara drumnya aja..
00:20:801 (20801|2) - ke 2 done~
delete ini 00:20:955 (20955|1) - removed~
^ 00:21:571 (21571|2) - ^
^ 00:22:186 (22186|1) - ^
delete ini 02:00:955 (120955|0) - karena disini ga ada bunyi hentakan Ini dibikin triple karna suara snare, lbih keras dri suara kick sbelumnya (double)
^ 02:13:571 (133571|3) - kalo ini dibikin triple karna ada suara symbalnya..


Makasih modnya~ :3
Gemu-
Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)



Columns:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |





  1. 00:20:955 (20955|1) - Move to the column 1.
  2. 02:12:801 (132801|1) - ^
  3. 02:13:109 (133109|2) - Move to the column 4.
  4. 02:14:494 (134494|2) - Move to the column 2.
  5. 03:14:532 (194532|0) - Move to 03:14:494 -
  6. 03:14:955 (194955|1,195109|2) - Ctrl G.
  7. 03:57:263 (237263|2) - Move to the column 2.
  8. 04:32:032 (272032|1) - Move to the column 4.
  9. 04:51:724 (291724|0) - Move to the column 4 and then Ctrl G 04:51:878 (291878|1,292032|2) -


Amazing map! Hope this can help you :33, Good Luck!
Topic Starter
FadillSan

game rock wrote:

Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)



Columns:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |





  1. 00:20:955 (20955|1) - Move to the column 1. I think i'll keep it
  2. 02:12:801 (132801|1) - ^ done~
  3. 02:13:109 (133109|2) - Move to the column 4. I think i'll keep it
  4. 02:14:494 (134494|2) - Move to the column 2. I'll keep it for consistency with 02:16:955 (136955|1) -
  5. 03:14:532 (194532|0) - Move to 03:14:494 - ah my bad, fixed~
  6. 03:14:955 (194955|1,195109|2) - Ctrl G. done~
  7. 03:57:263 (237263|2) - Move to the column 2. nope, 'cause the sound same as 03:57:417 (237417|2) -
  8. 04:32:032 (272032|1) - Move to the column 4. done~
  9. 04:51:724 (291724|0) - Move to the column 4 and then Ctrl G 04:51:878 (291878|1,292032|2) - done~


Amazing map! Hope this can help you :33, Good Luck!
Thanks for the mods :3
Drum-Hitnormal
hitsound done : https://puu.sh/xUclz/e52e519720.rar

I am replacing your soft clap and soft whistle.
Not using normal sampleset.

DL new version of Magic Copy in my thread to copy hitsound:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330
Topic Starter
FadillSan

dudehacker wrote:

hitsound done : https://puu.sh/xUclz/e52e519720.rar

I am replacing your soft clap and soft whistle.
Not using normal sampleset.

DL new version of Magic Copy in my thread to copy hitsound:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330
Thank you very much dude, I like your hitsound <3
Mentholzzz
Hello from my modding queue.
"Zombie~"
00:00:648 - triple here
00:12:878 (12878|0,12955|0) - this is evil, pls remove 00:12:878 (12878|0) -
00:44:186 (44186|1,44340|3) - swap column
00:46:648 (46648|2) - move to 1
01:07:109 - just a suggestion but you can put quad here
00:44:955 - if u want to put SV here, delete 00:45:109 (45109|2) - or if not, make 00:45:109 - double.
00:47:571 - add x0.5 sv here , change 00:47:878 - to x0.5 and add x1.0 at 00:48:032 - to make sv average x1.0
00:50:032 - add x0.5 sv here
00:50:648 - ^
00:51:263 - ^
00:51:878 - ^
00:52:032 (52032|0) - put the tail at either 00:52:186 - or 00:52:263 - and put a note at 00:52:340 -
00:54:955 - , 00:57:417 - same as above
00:59:878 (59878|0) - move to 3
01:06:571 - I suggest to add x1.5 sv here to make the note "bump" and 0.5x sv is pretty evil imo
01:16:878 (76878|3,76955|3) - please delete this kind of pattern every part else in this map
01:41:494 - x1.4 sv here
02:16:032 - change this SV to x1.0
02:18:648 - same as mentioned
02:19:263 - , 02:19:878 - , 02:20:494 - ^
02:33:263 - why don't u map here, it should be triple here imo.
03:32:340 - triple for crash
03:38:648 - the average SV of this gap is (1.25+0.5x2)/3 = 0.75 i suggest to change 1.25 to 2
03:39:263 - similar ^
03:41:571 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304505 , maybe try smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304507
03:52:032 - i think x0.7 is too slow, maybe change x0.7 , x0.8 , x0.9 to x0.79,x0.86 and x0.93 would be better
04:12:955 - this kiai are fun af i like this :D
05:01:776 (301776|0) - double here too
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Mentholzzz wrote:

Hello from my modding queue.
"Zombie~"
00:00:648 - triple here done~
00:12:878 (12878|0,12955|0) - this is evil, pls remove 00:12:878 (12878|0) - removed~
00:44:186 (44186|1,44340|3) - swap column done~
00:46:648 (46648|2) - move to 1 done~
01:07:109 - just a suggestion but you can put quad here I'll keep it triple
00:44:955 - if u want to put SV here, delete 00:45:109 (45109|2) - or if not, make 00:45:109 - double. I delete 00:45:109 (45109|2) -
00:47:571 - add x0.5 sv here , change 00:47:878 - to x0.5 and add x1.0 at 00:48:032 - to make sv average x1.0 I think that's not comfort to play, so i'm not change it
00:50:032 - add x0.5 sv here
00:50:648 - ^
00:51:263 - ^
00:51:878 - ^
00:52:032 (52032|0) - put the tail at either 00:52:186 - or 00:52:263 - and put a note at 00:52:340 - I think this part are already ok
00:54:955 - , 00:57:417 - same as above ^
00:59:878 (59878|0) - move to 3 done~
01:06:571 - I suggest to add x1.5 sv here to make the note "bump" and 0.5x sv is pretty evil imo I think adding x1.5 at 01:06:571 - isn't good idea..
01:16:878 (76878|3,76955|3) - please delete this kind of pattern every part else in this map done~
01:41:494 - x1.4 sv here done~
02:16:032 - change this SV to x1.0 done~
02:18:648 - same as mentioned done~
02:19:263 - , 02:19:878 - , 02:20:494 - ^ done~
02:33:263 - why don't u map here, it should be triple here imo. wtf, what am i doing ?? my bad, fixed
03:32:340 - triple for crash the crash sound is to low, so i keep it double
03:38:648 - the average SV of this gap is (1.25+0.5x2)/3 = 0.75 i suggest to change 1.25 to 2 done~
03:39:263 - similar ^ done~
03:41:571 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304505 , maybe try smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304507 done~
03:52:032 - i think x0.7 is too slow, maybe change x0.7 , x0.8 , x0.9 to x0.79,x0.86 and x0.93 would be better done~
04:12:955 - this kiai are fun af i like this :D Thank you~ :3
05:01:776 (301776|0) - double here too done~
Thank you very much for the mods!~ :3
Maneh
guud map
up up
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Maneh wrote:

guud map
up up
Hatur nuhun mhank >:(
Hestia-
Bandori :D
[Start Beat!!]
It's good, only issues are a couple of the SVs.
00:01:263 - Add 3; optional notes
00:01:878 - Add 4
00:03:724 - Add 2
00:04:340 - Add 3
00:06:186 - Add 1
00:06:801 - Add 2
00:08:648 - Add 3

00:32:417 - Change SV here to 0.7
00:47:648 - Move SV here to 00:47:724 -
01:05:878 - Change SV here to 0.55

01:13:878 - Add 23; There is noise but it might be overmapping if you add these... maybe move other things around and only add 1 note so there isn't so much jack spam. optional
01:18:801 - Add 23
01:21:263 - Add 23
01:23:724 - Add 23
01:28:648 - Add 23

01:41:494 - Change SV to 1.3
02:00:955 - This SV is good :)
02:13:801 - Change SV to 1.45

02:42:340 (162340|1) - Remove
02:42:494 - Add 2
02:47:417 - Add 23

03:10:801 - Add 2
03:11:417 - Add 1
03:13:263 - Add 3
03:13:878 - Add 4
03:15:724 - Add 3
03:16:340 - Add 2
03:18:186 - Add 2

03:20:032 - Change SV to 0.94
03:22:494 - Change SV to 0.92
03:38:801 - Change SV to 0.65
03:39:340 - Change SV to 0.65
04:12:878 - Change SV to 1.25

04:48:340 - Add 23
04:48:648 - Add 4
04:50:417 - Add 4
04:51:109 - Add 34
04:52:263 - Add 4
04:53:263 - Add 23
04:53:571 - Add 34

05:07:417 - Add 2 - mapping non drum noises lol
05:07:724 - Add 4
05:08:032 - Add 4
05:08:340 - Add 3
05:08:648 - Add 3
05:08:955 - Add 2
05:09:109 - Add 1
05:09:263 - Add 2
05:09:571 - Add 14
05:09:724 - Add 3
05:09:878 - Add 4
05:10:186 - Add 3
05:10:340 - Add 2
05:10:494 - Add 3
05:10:648 - Add 4
05:10:801 - Add 2
05:10:955 - Add 1
05:11:109 - Add 2
05:11:417 - Add 1
05:11:571 - Add 4
05:11:724 - Add 1

goodluck ~ !
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Hestia- wrote:

Bandori :D
[Start Beat!!]
It's good, only issues are a couple of the SVs.
00:01:263 - Add 3; optional notes
00:01:878 - Add 4
00:03:724 - Add 2
00:04:340 - Add 3
00:06:186 - Add 1
00:06:801 - Add 2
00:08:648 - Add 3
I map this part only on drum sounds..

00:32:417 - Change SV here to 0.7
00:47:648 - Move SV here to 00:47:724 -
01:05:878 - Change SV here to 0.55
fixed all~

01:13:878 - Add 23; There is noise but it might be overmapping if you add these... maybe move other things around and only add 1 note so there isn't so much jack spam. optional
01:18:801 - Add 23
01:21:263 - Add 23
01:23:724 - Add 23
01:28:648 - Add 23
Good idea, but I only add 1 note~

01:41:494 - Change SV to 1.3 done~
02:00:955 - This SV is good :) I like this too~
02:13:801 - Change SV to 1.45 done~

02:42:340 (162340|1) - Remove It's a kick, so I'll keep it
02:42:494 - Add 2 done~
02:47:417 - Add 23 only add single at 2

03:10:801 - Add 2
03:11:417 - Add 1
03:13:263 - Add 3
03:13:878 - Add 4
03:15:724 - Add 3
03:16:340 - Add 2
03:18:186 - Add 2
added all~

03:20:032 - Change SV to 0.94
03:22:494 - Change SV to 0.92
03:38:801 - Change SV to 0.65
03:39:340 - Change SV to 0.65
04:12:878 - Change SV to 1.25
fixed all~

04:48:340 - Add 23 only add single at 3
04:48:648 - Add 4 done~
04:50:417 - Add 4 added at 1
04:51:109 - Add 34 only add single at 4
04:52:263 - Add 4 added at 3
04:53:263 - Add 23 only add single at 4
04:53:571 - Add 34 only add single at 1

05:07:417 - Add 2 - mapping non drum noises lol
05:07:724 - Add 4
05:08:032 - Add 4
05:08:340 - Add 3
05:08:648 - Add 3
05:08:955 - Add 2
05:09:109 - Add 1
05:09:263 - Add 2
05:09:571 - Add 14
05:09:724 - Add 3
05:09:878 - Add 4
05:10:186 - Add 3
05:10:340 - Add 2
05:10:494 - Add 3
05:10:648 - Add 4
05:10:801 - Add 2
05:10:955 - Add 1
05:11:109 - Add 2
05:11:417 - Add 1
05:11:571 - Add 4
05:11:724 - Add 1
I just only mapping till 05:07:109 - :3

goodluck ~ !
Thank you very much~ :3
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
M4M as requested at here
0|1|2|3
Start Beat!!
00:04:801 (4801|1) - Ghost note
01:50:648 (110648|2,110648|0,110648|1,110648|3) and 01:48:955 (108955|0,108955|3,108955|2) - They sound the same though 1 of them is a quad. Reduce it to a triple
02:33:878 (153878|1,153878|3,153878|0,154032|1,154032|0,154032|3) - These should be doubles since in the same part at 01:49:571 (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3) , you mapped it as doubles
03:08:340 (188340|2,188340|3,188340|0,188494|2,188494|0,188494|3) - ^
03:24:494 (204494|0) - The LN start at 03:24:340
03:26:955 (206955|0) - Ghost note
03:44:648 (224648|3) - Add a note here
From 03:47:109 to 03:51:109 - There are TONS of ghost notes here. Play at 25% to see if it is a ghost note or not
03:57:263 (237263|2,237417|2) - These sound aren't the same, move 03:57:417 (237417|2) to 3
04:11:724 (251724|3,251724|2) - Make this a single
04:23:109 (263109|0,263263|0,263417|0,263571|0,263724|0) - Anchor here is unnecessary
04:24:340 (264340|3,264494|3,264648|3,264801|3,264955|3) - ^
And the other anchors in this part too which I won't mention
04:52:032 (292032|1,292032|0) - Change to a triple
05:07:109 - I'd suggest you extend this part to the end of the song
Hope this help and gl for ranking 8-)
Topic Starter
FadillSan

[B A D] wrote:

M4M as requested at here
0|1|2|3
Start Beat!!
00:04:801 (4801|1) - Ghost note removed
01:50:648 (110648|2,110648|0,110648|1,110648|3) and 01:48:955 (108955|0,108955|3,108955|2) - They sound the same though 1 of them is a quad. Reduce it to a triple for this 01:50:648 (110648|2,110648|0,110648|1,110648|3) i decided it to quad, 'cause want to make it fun to play
02:33:878 (153878|1,153878|3,153878|0,154032|1,154032|0,154032|3) - These should be doubles since in the same part at 01:49:571 my bad, fixed~ (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3) , you mapped it as doubles
03:08:340 (188340|2,188340|3,188340|0,188494|2,188494|0,188494|3) - ^ fixed too~
03:24:494 (204494|0) - The LN start at 03:24:340 I think the LN start at 03:24:494..
03:26:955 (206955|0) - Ghost note removed~
03:44:648 (224648|3) - Add a note here done~
From 03:47:109 to 03:51:109 - There are TONS of ghost notes here. Play at 25% to see if it is a ghost note or not re-arranged this
03:57:263 (237263|2,237417|2) - These sound aren't the same, move 03:57:417 (237417|2) to 3 ah you right, moved~
04:11:724 (251724|3,251724|2) - Make this a single done~
04:23:109 (263109|0,263263|0,263417|0,263571|0,263724|0) - Anchor here is unnecessary fixed~
04:24:340 (264340|3,264494|3,264648|3,264801|3,264955|3) - ^ ^
And the other anchors in this part too which I won't mention
04:52:032 (292032|1,292032|0) - Change to a triple done~
05:07:109 - I'd suggest you extend this part to the end of the song since there so much modders to suggest this, well, I mapped it till the end of the song~
Hope this help and gl for ranking 8-)
Thank you veryyy much~~ :3

Main update :
Re-arranged pattern of this part : 03:47:109 - 03:52:032
03:47:109 - 03:49:878 : I mapped drum and guitar sounds
03:50:032 - 03:52:032 : I mapped drum sounds only
Tell me if there's a problem with the pattern~

Extend mapping.
Before : mapping untill 05:07:109 -
After : mapping until 05:15:724 - (the end of the song)
Need suggest for start of this LN 05:13:263 (313263|1) -

That's the info~ thank you~
Kim_GodSSI

short mod
Modding
[4k]
  1. 00:43:571 (43571|1) - ghost note not, a piano sound
    I think piano sound snap is 00:43:609 - here so Just delete is better
  2. 00:44:494 - where is double note here ? add notes 3 4
    00:44:186 (44186|3,44186|2) - like this it's same thing

    00:49:417 (49417|1,49417|0,49494|3,49494|2,49571|0,49571|1) - ^ It's like here
  3. 00:52:263 (52263|2) - move to 2 and 00:52:340 (52340|1) - move to 3
  4. 02:21:571 - Add one more note :3
  5. 03:02:494 (182494|1,182494|3,182494|0,182801|0,182801|3,182801|1,183109|1,183109|0,183109|3) - you think it's sound for give you the same loud?
    hm I think 2, 3 ,2 or 3, 3, 2 (Notes number) it's better :3
  6. 03:48:494 (228494|3,228494|2,228494|0,228571|1,228648|2,228724|3,228801|2,228878|1,228955|0,228955|3,228955|2,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3,229263|2,229263|0,229340|1,229417|2,229494|3) -
    I think it's have to could be better, Does not match the song
    change please
  7. 03:52:340 (232340|2,232494|1,232648|3,232955|1,233109|0,233263|2,233571|3,233724|2,233878|1,234186|2,234340|0,234494|3,234801|1,234955|0,235109|2,235417|2,235571|1,235724|3,236032|3,236186|1,236340|2,236648|1,236801|0,236955|2,237263|2,237417|3,237571|3,237878|1,238032|0,238186|3,238494|2,238648|0,238801|1,239109|2,239263|1,239417|3,239724|1,239878|0,240032|2,240340|3,240494|1) -
    This section would be better to follow the piano , I don't understand this note's mean
  8. 05:07:417 (307417|2,307571|1,307724|3,308032|3,308186|1,308340|2,308648|2,308801|1,308955|3,309263|3,309417|1,309878|1,310032|0,310186|2,310494|2,310648|0,310801|1,311109|1,311263|0) - ^
    And have some ghost notes

I wish this map go to rank :D

Shoot~ 5
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Kim_GodSSI wrote:


short mod
Modding
[4k]
  1. 00:43:571 (43571|1) - ghost note not, a piano sound
    I think piano sound snap is 00:43:609 - here so Just delete is better It's a guitar sound..
  2. 00:44:494 - where is double note here ? add notes 3 4
    00:44:186 (44186|3,44186|2) - like this it's same thing
    Ah I miss it, but I only put single here, 'cause the sound too low for double

    00:49:417 (49417|1,49417|0,49494|3,49494|2,49571|0,49571|1) - ^ It's like here
  3. 00:52:263 (52263|2) - move to 2 and 00:52:340 (52340|1) - move to 3 done~
  4. 02:21:571 - Add one more note :3 my bad, added~
  5. 03:02:494 (182494|1,182494|3,182494|0,182801|0,182801|3,182801|1,183109|1,183109|0,183109|3) - you think it's sound for give you the same loud?
    hm I think 2, 3 ,2 or 3, 3, 2 (Notes number) it's better :3
    This is why I put 3,3,3 :
    03:02:494 (182494|0,182494|3,182494|1) - 3 note for snare
    03:02:801 (182801|0,182801|3,182801|2) - 2 note fore kick + 1 for crash, so i put 3 note
    03:03:109 (183109|1,183109|3,183109|0) - and 3 note for snare :3

  6. 03:48:494 (228494|3,228494|2,228494|0,228571|1,228648|2,228724|3,228801|2,228878|1,228955|0,228955|3,228955|2,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3,229263|2,229263|0,229340|1,229417|2,229494|3) -
    I think it's have to could be better, Does not match the song
    change please Re-arranged, I hope now is better owo
  7. 03:52:340 (232340|2,232494|1,232648|3,232955|1,233109|0,233263|2,233571|3,233724|2,233878|1,234186|2,234340|0,234494|3,234801|1,234955|0,235109|2,235417|2,235571|1,235724|3,236032|3,236186|1,236340|2,236648|1,236801|0,236955|2,237263|2,237417|3,237571|3,237878|1,238032|0,238186|3,238494|2,238648|0,238801|1,239109|2,239263|1,239417|3,239724|1,239878|0,240032|2,240340|3,240494|1) -
    This section would be better to follow the piano , I don't understand this note's mean
    But the truth is I follow the piano :"v
  8. 05:07:417 (307417|2,307571|1,307724|3,308032|3,308186|1,308340|2,308648|2,308801|1,308955|3,309263|3,309417|1,309878|1,310032|0,310186|2,310494|2,310648|0,310801|1,311109|1,311263|0) - ^
    And have some ghost notes I just mapped piano sound which the sound not too low :3

I wish this map go to rank :D
Thank you for the mods! :3
Awww and thanks for the stars :)
SyShawn
from my Q

Start Beat!!
00:47:417 (47417|2) - SV here should follow the previous one.
I can't tell the difference between them by listening to the music

01:06:648 (66648|2) - SV here is so hard to play.

think it's ready for rank
Topic Starter
FadillSan

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

Start Beat!!
00:47:417 (47417|2) - SV here should follow the previous one.
I can't tell the difference between them by listening to the music Ah you remind me for the unconsistency sv, I think 00:47:417 this part is better, so I fixed the previous sv :3

01:06:648 (66648|2) - SV here is so hard to play. I think this sv already fix

think it's ready for rank
Thank you very much~ :3
AlisceaSparku
halo~ idk the format for our own queue LOL but anyway here you go

col 1/2/3/4
[Start Beat!!]
  1. Since the map is mostly single notes anyway, I would increase the OD and HP to around 8.5 to 9 to discourage "keyboard mashing" and "PP map"
  2. 00:00:648 - I'd recommend to add slowjams for this part as the start is quite "meh" to play considering there's an almost-two-second gap between the first drum roll to the next drum part. Otherwise, you can use LNs to additionally give more emphasis to the cymbals. Or another suggestion, put a single note for the piano sounds as well, like how you mapped 03:15:724 (195724|2https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=reply&f=10&t=641298#,196340|1) - .
  3. 00:03:109 - ^same suggestion
  4. 00:05:571 - ^same suggestion
  5. 00:08:032 - ^same suggestion
  6. 00:07:417 - the hand here must have a different note structure from 00:08:032 - . because one is for snare and one is for cymbal. Here's a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386590
  7. 00:12:801 - this part seems like a kick will play three times, so I advise to make a hand for the cymbal sound. (and of course, avoiding an accidental minijack) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386606 . Additional note, this is the only place where the cymbal is mapped only with a double (focusing on the intro only)
  8. 00:26:801 - I advise you to rearrange this part into something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386621 , so that its easily distinguishable that the 1/2 note represents a different sound.
  9. 00:36:801 - not sure if this is meant but I think one note should go to col. 1 (no such pattern was repeated in the same section anyway)
  10. 01:39:032 (99032|3,99109|3) - please try to avoid things like this. (its actually pretty annoying to hit, well if you consider this as fun/challenging, then you may not remove the minijack.) Otherwise, you can remove 01:39:032 (99032|3) - .
  11. 02:55:340 (175340|3) - put the note to 02:55:417 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized.
  12. 03:29:801 (209801|0) - put the note to 03:29:878 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized.
  13. 03:32:801 - I'm pretty sure an SV can be inserted here.
  14. 03:32:801 (212801|2,212801|1) - This has different pitch than 03:33:109 (213109|2,213109|1) - (if you also consider the piano, which is very very audible), so I recommend you make a mirror pattern for this one. Here's an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386668
  15. 03:44:571 (224571|3,224648|3) - :(
  16. 03:57:417 (237417|3,237571|3) - not sure why these are in the same column. the only same sound I hear is already mapped with 03:56:955 (236955|2,237263|2) - .
  17. 04:21:724 (261724|0) - put it to col. 3 instead so it's not -too heavy- for the left hand.
  18. 04:22:724 (262724|3) - put this note to 04:22:801 - to put emphasis on the cymbal sound instead.
  19. 04:44:878 (284878|3,284955|3) - yes, this is unhealthy imo
  20. 05:07:032 (307032|3) - put to 05:07:109 - instead to put emphasis on the cymbals. i think i missed quite a lot of these.
  21. 05:07:571 (307571|1) - shouldn't this be at 05:07:878 - , and 05:08:186 (308186|1) - at 05:08:494 - instead? this goes until the piano section ends so, yes.
solid map, there's not much errors
-the whole map lacks creative layering (LN's + SN's patterns), which results in repetitive patterns. there are a lot of instruments you can map using LN's, so try to look out for those c: (in my opinion, it's quite bland to press doubles and hands for almost the whole song, so yes)

good luck~ :D
Topic Starter
FadillSan

AlisceaSparku wrote:

halo~ idk the format for our own queue LOL but anyway here you go

col 1/2/3/4
[Start Beat!!]
  1. Since the map is mostly single notes anyway, I would increase the OD and HP to around 8.5 to 9 to discourage "keyboard mashing" and "PP map" I think you right, I change them to 8.5~
  2. 00:00:648 - I'd recommend to add slowjams for this part as the start is quite "meh" to play considering there's an almost-two-second gap between the first drum roll to the next drum part. Otherwise, you can use LNs to additionally give more emphasis to the cymbals. Or another suggestion, put a single note for the piano sounds as well, like how you mapped 03:15:724 fixed, i did it like 03:15:724 (195724|2https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=reply&f=10&t=641298#,196340|1) - . xD
  3. 00:03:109 - ^same suggestion fixed~
  4. 00:05:571 - ^same suggestion fixed~
  5. 00:08:032 - ^same suggestion fixed~
  6. 00:07:417 - the hand here must have a different note structure from 00:08:032 - . because one is for snare and one is for cymbal. Here's a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386590 that's better!
  7. 00:12:801 - this part seems like a kick will play three times, so I advise to make a hand for the cymbal sound. (and of course, avoiding an accidental minijack) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386606 . Additional note, this is the only place where the cymbal is mapped only with a double (focusing on the intro only) fixed it~
  8. 00:26:801 - I advise you to rearrange this part into something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386621 , so that its easily distinguishable that the 1/2 note represents a different sound. yes i like it
  9. 00:36:801 - not sure if this is meant but I think one note should go to col. 1 (no such pattern was repeated in the same section anyway) done~
  10. 01:39:032 (99032|3,99109|3) - please try to avoid things like this. (its actually pretty annoying to hit, well if you consider this as fun/challenging, then you may not remove the minijack.) Otherwise, you can remove 01:39:032 (99032|3) - . YES, thank you for fix this, that's better~
  11. 02:55:340 (175340|3) - put the note to 02:55:417 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized. fixed too~
  12. 03:29:801 (209801|0) - put the note to 03:29:878 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized. fixed too~
  13. 03:32:801 - I'm pretty sure an SV can be inserted here. I think this better without sv :3
  14. 03:32:801 (212801|2,212801|1) - This has different pitch than 03:33:109 (213109|2,213109|1) - (if you also consider the piano, which is very very audible), so I recommend you make a mirror pattern for this one. Here's an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386668 fixed~
  15. 03:44:571 (224571|3,224648|3) - :( fixed xD
  16. 03:57:417 (237417|3,237571|3) - not sure why these are in the same column. the only same sound I hear is already mapped with 03:56:955 (236955|2,237263|2) - . ah you right, moved
  17. 04:21:724 (261724|0) - put it to col. 3 instead so it's not -too heavy- for the left hand. that's better
  18. 04:22:724 (262724|3) - put this note to 04:22:801 - to put emphasis on the cymbal sound instead. fixed~
  19. 04:44:878 (284878|3,284955|3) - yes, this is unhealthy imo sorry, fixed xD
  20. 05:07:032 (307032|3) - put to 05:07:109 - instead to put emphasis on the cymbals. i think i missed quite a lot of these. ups, fixed~
  21. 05:07:571 (307571|1) - shouldn't this be at 05:07:878 - , and 05:08:186 (308186|1) - at 05:08:494 - instead? this goes until the piano section ends so, yes. Ahh my bad, you rigth xD fixed all of that~
solid map, there's not much errors
-the whole map lacks creative layering (LN's + SN's patterns), which results in repetitive patterns. there are a lot of instruments you can map using LN's, so try to look out for those c: (in my opinion, it's quite bland to press doubles and hands for almost the whole song, so yes)

good luck~ :D
Thank very much for the mods, that's helpful :)
[ A v a l o n ]
M4M


  • [Start Beat!!]
  1. Kamu punya banyak hitsound yang tidak digunakan dalam map ini (unused hitsound) https://puu.sh/y99hQ/13ebc7f5ba.png hapus aja kalo nggk dipakai

  2. 00:00:648 - 00:03:109 - 00:05:571 - 00:08:032 - lebih cocok kalau dikasih LN aja disini, karena melodi gitar nya (long sound) itu strong banget
  3. 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) - aku kurang mengerti konsep kamu kenapa drum disini cuma dikasih satu note aja, sementara suara tsb lebih keras (menghentak) daripada kick di part ini 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) -
  4. 00:17:417 (17417|3) - sama seperti diatas ^
  5. 00:18:801 - akan lebih menarik kalau kamu kasih LN untuk saura long bass nya, coba divariasikan lagi supaya nantinya map kamu tidak terlalu "boring" dimainkan
  6. 00:25:571 (25571|2,25878|2,26186|2) - seharusnya berada di kolom 2 atau 4, karena pola nya seharusnya konsisten sama seperti sebelumnya 00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) -
  7. 00:28:032 (28032|0,28340|0,28648|0,28955|0) - hmmm, coba pindah ke kolom yang lain deh, soalnya kamu tidak mengulang penempatan pattern seperti ini pada bagian sebelum/sesudahnya . . . contoh 00:24:032 - 00:25:263 - 00:29:263 -
  8. 00:32:801 (32801|2,32955|2) - mungkin ada bagusnya dibedakan saja kolomnya, karena pada interval berikutnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, contohnya 00:34:032 (34032|0,34186|1) - 00:35:263 (35263|3,35417|2) - dan seterusnya
  9. 00:41:417 (41417|2,41571|2,41724|2) - sebelumnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, ada baiknya dikonsisten-kan penempatannya seperti ini saja https://puu.sh/y99Hl/92cb2480b6.png
  10. 00:42:494 - aku punya saran yang lebih bagus supaya "feel" dari penekanan suara gitar pada part ini lebih terasa https://puu.sh/y99Kn/7ea703737f.jpg
  11. 00:52:494 (52494|1) - pindah ke kolom 4 saja, untuk lebih konsisten dengan pattern pada part ini 00:52:955 - 00:53:571 - untuk jenis rhythm yang sama
  12. 00:58:494 - coba ditukar saja seperti ini http://puu.sh/y99PE/162ef4df5d.jpg karena suara kick pada part ini 00:58:494 - tentu berbeda dengan drum (clap) pada bagian ini 00:58:186 - so, bagian double note nya tidak perlu dalam posisi sejajar
  13. 00:59:494 - seharusnya bagian sini cukup dikasih satu note saja, karena suaranya jelas sekali lebih lemah dibandingkan pada part drum sound disini 00:59:263 (59263|0,59263|1,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1) - 00:59:571 (59571|0,59571|1,59648|2,59648|3,59724|0,59724|1) -
  14. 01:01:724 - 01:02:032 - bukankah 2 bagian ini mempunyai suara yang sama kerasnya ? hmmm, coba kamu re-arrange seperti ini saja http://puu.sh/y99VT/bd989114ab.jpg
  15. 01:05:186 - seharusnya 3 notes tersebut bisa dimulai dari sini
  16. 01:06:648 - well, menurutku lebih pas (cocok) seperti ini patternnya http://puu.sh/y99Zr/96a95d4ab8.jpg
  17. 01:13:724 (73724|1,73878|1) - jujur saya, aku tidak mendengar suara apapun yang mengharuskan part ini dikasih 1/2 jack (baik suara yang sejenis maupun suara yang mirip) sebaiknya dibedakan saja penempatan kolomnya
  18. 01:18:648 (78648|1,78801|1) - sama seperti diatas ^
  19. 01:21:109 (81109|2,81263|2) - 01:23:571 (83571|1,83724|1) - ^
  20. Hmmm kok kalo dirasa polanya berulang-ulang ya ? aku curiga ini pattern copy paste terus Ctrl H / Ctrl G, dan jujur sih agak "boring" pada bagian reff ini, karena kamu hanya fokus terhadap satu suara drum aja dan mengabaikan suara instrumen lainnya (seperti gitar, vocal, dsb) kalau kamu memang berniat ingin membuat map yang spesial dan bukan sekedar monoton untuk di rank, coba lebih diberi kesempatan lagi untuk mapping pada intrumen lainnya dan bikin variasi lebih banyak lagi
  21. 01:39:417 (99417|1,99571|1,99724|1,99724|2,99878|2,99878|1,100032|2,100186|2,100340|2) - mungkin hal seperti ini agak berlebihan, coba lebih ditata lagi
  22. 01:50:186 - please give some respect to this important guitar sound hehe http://puu.sh/y9aeS/a56f62b1e3.jpg
  23. 02:01:263 - emmm gimana yah, mulai dari timing sana sampai 02:11:109 - anchor sama 1/2 jack nya kok agak kurang beraturan yah ? maksudnya tidak terfokus sama penekanan gitar, ataupun suara tertentu gitu, contohnya kalo penekanan pada gitar https://puu.sh/y9aDU/67568f7fc9.jpg
  24. 02:14:955 (134955|2) - pindah ke kolom 2 supaya tidak terlalu ditekan pada tangan kanan, keep it balance as well
  25. 02:15:878 - 02:15:955 - ketinggalan note buat suara drum disini ? jelas banget loh suaranya
  26. 02:17:263 - sama seperti mod di interval sebelumnya, keep it balance
  27. 02:18:032 - ketinggalan note buat kick sound disini
  28. 02:23:109 (143109|1,143109|0,143263|2,143263|3) - bukankah pada bagian ini memiliki suara yang sejenis/sama ? re-arrange aja ke kolom yang sama http://puu.sh/y9aNf/10e20d9de0.jpg
  29. 02:25:109 - 02:25:417 - suaranya sama persis, kenapa berbeda jumlah notenya ? samakan aja
  30. 02:35:724 - seandainya kamu lebih berani bermain dengan LN untuk gitarnya, mungkin akan seperti ini hasilnya https://puu.sh/y9aS8/2a989ea666.jpg buatlah variasi sebaik mungkin, berhubung ini juga map marathon (5 menitan lebih) ya nggak fair dong hampir 90% isinya drum semua berulang-ulang
  31. 02:39:878 (159878|2,160032|2) - agak lebih berhati-hati aja dengan tipe pattern seperti ini, sama seperti mod pada bagian reff sebelumnya
  32. i don't know why i feels like de ja vu here hahaha xD
  33. 03:29:801 - agak sedih rasanya kalo piano se-spesial ini diabaikan dan kamu cuma ingin ngemap drum aja, ini coba aku kasih referensi untuk kombinasi piano sama drumnya https://puu.sh/y9b1E/a132c1f899.jpg http://puu.sh/y9b3Y/fc20efba68.jpg dan seterusnya
  34. hmmm kayaknya cukup sampai disini aja dulu, intinya sih masalah terbesarmu adalah pada sisi variasi mapping dan konsistensi penempatan anchor dan 1/2 jack
Goodluck ya :)
oh iya, ditunggu ya mod kamu di map aku
Navyzeap09
The map is perfect but I think something is missing :P <just my personal look tho>
I did not feel the song slowing down in this part :P maybe you should put SV's here to make the map feel more that it is slowing down then gradually speeding up again

BTW it's in this part
03:10:186 - This part i think needs an SV which is quoted at the bottom ^_^
03:29:878 - Up to here

And also I think the note patterns are a bit repetitive (like the pattern you used in 04:35:724 - 04:38:494 and in 01:20:032 - 01:20:955

By the way I think this song has a great potential to be ranked :D
Keep up the good work ^_^


SV's in
59. Offset: 190,186ms BPM: Inherited (0.65x)
60. Offset: 200,032ms BPM: Inherited (0.80x)
61. Offset: 204,955ms BPM: Inherited (0.90x)
62. Offset: 207,417ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
63. Offset: 207,724ms BPM: Inherited (1.05x)
64. Offset: 207,878ms BPM: Inherited (1.10x)
65. Offset: 208,186ms BPM: Inherited (1.15x)
66. Offset: 208,494ms BPM: Inherited (1.20x)
67. Offset: 209,263ms BPM: Inherited (1.25x)
68. Offset: 209,878ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

to save you time just copy this in the timing points in the osu go to files the open osu in notepad
190186,-153.846153846154,4,2,1,70,0,0
200032,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,0
204955,-125,4,2,1,70,0,0
207417,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
207724,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,70,0,0
207878,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,70,0,0
208186,-80,4,2,1,70,0,0
208494,-76.9230769230769,4,2,1,70,0,0
209263,-74.0740740740741,4,2,1,70,0,0
Topic Starter
FadillSan

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

M4M


  • [Start Beat!!]
  1. Kamu punya banyak hitsound yang tidak digunakan dalam map ini (unused hitsound) https://puu.sh/y99hQ/13ebc7f5ba.png hapus aja kalo nggk dipakai
    Kalo untuk yg ditandai merah itu dipakai buat suara piano :3 sisanya baru dihapus, makasih udah ngingetin

  2. 00:00:648 - 00:03:109 - 00:05:571 - 00:08:032 - lebih cocok kalau dikasih LN aja disini, karena melodi gitar nya (long sound) itu strong banget Karna banyak yg nyaranin sperti ini, jadinya ku tambahin LN deh
  3. 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) - aku kurang mengerti konsep kamu kenapa drum disini cuma dikasih satu note aja, sementara suara tsb lebih keras (menghentak) daripada kick di part ini 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) - supaya lebih nyaman dimaininnya~
  4. 00:17:417 (17417|3) - sama seperti diatas ^ ^
  5. 00:18:801 - akan lebih menarik kalau kamu kasih LN untuk saura long bass nya, coba divariasikan lagi supaya nantinya map kamu tidak terlalu "boring" dimainkan sip, saya tambahin~
  6. 00:25:571 (25571|2,25878|2,26186|2) - seharusnya berada di kolom 2 atau 4, karena pola nya seharusnya konsisten sama seperti sebelumnya 00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) - okee saya pindahin~
  7. 00:28:032 (28032|0,28340|0,28648|0,28955|0) - hmmm, coba pindah ke kolom yang lain deh, soalnya kamu tidak mengulang penempatan pattern seperti ini pada bagian sebelum/sesudahnya . . . contoh 00:24:032 - 00:25:263 - 00:29:263 - oh iya yah, moved~
  8. 00:32:801 (32801|2,32955|2) - mungkin ada bagusnya dibedakan saja kolomnya, karena pada interval berikutnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, contohnya 00:34:032 (34032|0,34186|1) - 00:35:263 (35263|3,35417|2) - dan seterusnya okee~
  9. 00:41:417 (41417|2,41571|2,41724|2) - sebelumnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, ada baiknya dikonsisten-kan penempatannya seperti ini saja https://puu.sh/y99Hl/92cb2480b6.png ah iya, fixed~
  10. 00:42:494 - aku punya saran yang lebih bagus supaya "feel" dari penekanan suara gitar pada part ini lebih terasa https://puu.sh/y99Kn/7ea703737f.jpg makasih sarannya, fixed~
  11. 00:52:494 (52494|1) - pindah ke kolom 4 saja, untuk lebih konsisten dengan pattern pada part ini 00:52:955 - 00:53:571 - untuk jenis rhythm yang sama okee
  12. 00:58:494 - coba ditukar saja seperti ini http://puu.sh/y99PE/162ef4df5d.jpg karena suara kick pada part ini 00:58:494 - tentu berbeda dengan drum (clap) pada bagian ini 00:58:186 - so, bagian double note nya tidak perlu dalam posisi sejajar ah iya, fixed
  13. 00:59:494 - seharusnya bagian sini cukup dikasih satu note saja, karena suaranya jelas sekali lebih lemah dibandingkan pada part drum sound disini 00:59:263 (59263|0,59263|1,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1) - 00:59:571 (59571|0,59571|1,59648|2,59648|3,59724|0,59724|1) - wah bener, fixed
  14. 01:01:724 - 01:02:032 - bukankah 2 bagian ini mempunyai suara yang sama kerasnya ? hmmm, coba kamu re-arrange seperti ini saja http://puu.sh/y99VT/bd989114ab.jpg donee~
  15. 01:05:186 - seharusnya 3 notes tersebut bisa dimulai dari sini oh iya, fixed~~
  16. 01:06:648 - well, menurutku lebih pas (cocok) seperti ini patternnya http://puu.sh/y99Zr/96a95d4ab8.jpg wah bener
  17. 01:13:724 (73724|1,73878|1) - jujur saya, aku tidak mendengar suara apapun yang mengharuskan part ini dikasih 1/2 jack (baik suara yang sejenis maupun suara yang mirip) sebaiknya dibedakan saja penempatan kolomnya okee~
  18. 01:18:648 (78648|1,78801|1) - sama seperti diatas ^ ^
  19. 01:21:109 (81109|2,81263|2) - 01:23:571 (83571|1,83724|1) - ^
  20. Hmmm kok kalo dirasa polanya berulang-ulang ya ? aku curiga ini pattern copy paste terus Ctrl H / Ctrl G, dan jujur sih agak "boring" pada bagian reff ini, karena kamu hanya fokus terhadap satu suara drum aja dan mengabaikan suara instrumen lainnya (seperti gitar, vocal, dsb) kalau kamu memang berniat ingin membuat map yang spesial dan bukan sekedar monoton untuk di rank, coba lebih diberi kesempatan lagi untuk mapping pada intrumen lainnya dan bikin variasi lebih banyak lagi iya sih ini hasil copas, ntar ku re-arranged deh :3
  21. 01:39:417 (99417|1,99571|1,99724|1,99724|2,99878|2,99878|1,100032|2,100186|2,100340|2) - mungkin hal seperti ini agak berlebihan, coba lebih ditata lagi fixed~
  22. 01:50:186 - please give some respect to this important guitar sound hehe http://puu.sh/y9aeS/a56f62b1e3.jpg oke donee~
  23. 02:01:263 - emmm gimana yah, mulai dari timing sana sampai 02:11:109 - anchor sama 1/2 jack nya kok agak kurang beraturan yah ? maksudnya tidak terfokus sama penekanan gitar, ataupun suara tertentu gitu, contohnya kalo penekanan pada gitar https://puu.sh/y9aDU/67568f7fc9.jpg oh iya berantakan juga ya xD oke aku re-arranged
  24. 02:14:955 (134955|2) - pindah ke kolom 2 supaya tidak terlalu ditekan pada tangan kanan, keep it balance as well donee~
  25. 02:15:878 - 02:15:955 - ketinggalan note buat suara drum disini ? jelas banget loh suaranya oh iya kelewat xD
  26. 02:17:263 - sama seperti mod di interval sebelumnya, keep it balance okee~
  27. 02:18:032 - ketinggalan note buat kick sound disini kelewat lagi xD
  28. 02:23:109 (143109|1,143109|0,143263|2,143263|3) - bukankah pada bagian ini memiliki suara yang sejenis/sama ? re-arrange aja ke kolom yang sama http://puu.sh/y9aNf/10e20d9de0.jpg oke donee~
  29. 02:25:109 - 02:25:417 - suaranya sama persis, kenapa berbeda jumlah notenya ? samakan aja oh iya, kusamain jadi single~
  30. 02:35:724 - seandainya kamu lebih berani bermain dengan LN untuk gitarnya, mungkin akan seperti ini hasilnya https://puu.sh/y9aS8/2a989ea666.jpg buatlah variasi sebaik mungkin, berhubung ini juga map marathon (5 menitan lebih) ya nggak fair dong hampir 90% isinya drum semua berulang-ulang iya nanti ku re-arrange beberapa part :3
  31. 02:39:878 (159878|2,160032|2) - agak lebih berhati-hati aja dengan tipe pattern seperti ini, sama seperti mod pada bagian reff sebelumnya okee :3
  32. i don't know why i feels like de ja vu here hahaha xD
  33. 03:29:801 - agak sedih rasanya kalo piano se-spesial ini diabaikan dan kamu cuma ingin ngemap drum aja, ini coba aku kasih referensi untuk kombinasi piano sama drumnya https://puu.sh/y9b1E/a132c1f899.jpg http://puu.sh/y9b3Y/fc20efba68.jpg dan seterusnya iya juga sih :'v ntar kutambahin terusannya :3
  34. hmmm kayaknya cukup sampai disini aja dulu, intinya sih masalah terbesarmu adalah pada sisi variasi mapping dan konsistensi penempatan anchor dan 1/2 jack
Goodluck ya :)
oh iya, ditunggu ya mod kamu di map aku


Wahh makasih banyak modnya :)
Waktunya ubah pattern di beberapa part xD

Navyzeap09 wrote:

The map is perfect but I think something is missing :P <just my personal look tho>
I did not feel the song slowing down in this part :P maybe you should put SV's here to make the map feel more that it is slowing down then gradually speeding up again

BTW it's in this part
03:10:186 - This part i think needs an SV which is quoted at the bottom ^_^
03:29:878 - Up to here

And also I think the note patterns are a bit repetitive (like the pattern you used in 04:35:724 - 04:38:494 and in 01:20:032 - 01:20:955

By the way I think this song has a great potential to be ranked :D
Keep up the good work ^_^


SV's in
59. Offset: 190,186ms BPM: Inherited (0.65x)
60. Offset: 200,032ms BPM: Inherited (0.80x)
61. Offset: 204,955ms BPM: Inherited (0.90x)
62. Offset: 207,417ms BPM: Inherited (1x)
63. Offset: 207,724ms BPM: Inherited (1.05x)
64. Offset: 207,878ms BPM: Inherited (1.10x)
65. Offset: 208,186ms BPM: Inherited (1.15x)
66. Offset: 208,494ms BPM: Inherited (1.20x)
67. Offset: 209,263ms BPM: Inherited (1.25x)
68. Offset: 209,878ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

to save you time just copy this in the timing points in the osu go to files the open osu in notepad
190186,-153.846153846154,4,2,1,70,0,0
200032,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,0
204955,-125,4,2,1,70,0,0
207417,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
207724,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,70,0,0
207878,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,70,0,0
208186,-80,4,2,1,70,0,0
208494,-76.9230769230769,4,2,1,70,0,0
209263,-74.0740740740741,4,2,1,70,0,0
Ahh thank you for the SVs~~ :3

Re-arrange done~
Please check at the 2nd & 3rd Kiai, tell me if there's an error!
Thank you :3
Navyzeap09
Hehe I think you forgot to remove the SV's here 03:21:571 (201571|0) and 03:22:494 (202494|2) - here the 0.9 and 1.0x
and also the timing points are doubled in the 03:20:032 (200032|1)
Topic Starter
FadillSan

Navyzeap09 wrote:

Hehe I think you forgot to remove the SV's here 03:21:571 (201571|0) and 03:22:494 (202494|2) - here the 0.9 and 1.0x
and also the timing points are doubled in the 03:20:032 (200032|1)
Aaaaaa forget about that!!
Thanks for reminding!~
deadbill
open AImod, it says that the kiai time is too much

00:59:494 - add a note .-.
01:04:801 - add a note .-.

these LNs feel out of place, what are you referring to?
02:35:724 (155724|3,156340|0,156955|2,157571|1) -
02:40:648 (160648|2,161263|1,161878|3,162494|0) -
also for the later sections.

just a consideration, you might want to map the melody accordingly instead of placing those LNs

03:20:032 (200032|1,200032|0,200340|1,200340|0,200648|0,200648|1,200955|0,200955|1,201263|1,201263|0,201571|1,201571|0) -
03:22:494 (202494|3,202494|2,202801|2,202801|3,203109|3,203109|2,203417|2,203417|3,203724|3,203724|2,204032|2,204032|3,204340|3,204340|2,204648|3,204648|2) -
03:24:955 (204955|1,204955|2,205263|2,205263|1,205571|1,205571|2,205878|1,205878|2,206186|1,206186|2,206494|2,206494|1,206801|2,206801|1) -
shuffle please =_=

03:27:724 (207724|2,207878|1,208032|0,208186|1,208340|2,208494|3) -
as refer to what?

03:29:878 - dat sudden usage of LNs for piano melody... why u no use those for all of piano melody? .-.


03:52:032 - you already have the piano samples why u no apply them here? ;w;
also 03:52:340 (232340|2,232494|1,232648|3,232955|1,233109|0,233263|2) -
as refer to what? the piano melodies for this section are using 1/2, because of that, the pattern feels really out of place

04:11:724 - add a note .-.
04:56:032 - add a note .-.

05:07:109 - same issue with 03:52:032 -

thats all goodluck o/
Topic Starter
FadillSan

deadbill wrote:

open AImod, it says that the kiai time is too much

00:59:494 - add a note .-. no, this one is lower sound than note before and after..
01:04:801 - add a note .-. this ine I follow the guitar sound

these LNs feel out of place, what are you referring to?
02:35:724 (155724|3,156340|0,156955|2,157571|1) - that LN is for piano sound, I add that to make a variation pattern
02:40:648 (160648|2,161263|1,161878|3,162494|0) - ^
also for the later sections.

just a consideration, you might want to map the melody accordingly instead of placing those LNs

03:20:032 (200032|1,200032|0,200340|1,200340|0,200648|0,200648|1,200955|0,200955|1,201263|1,201263|0,201571|1,201571|0) - I think for this section I just follow the kicks
03:22:494 (202494|3,202494|2,202801|2,202801|3,203109|3,203109|2,203417|2,203417|3,203724|3,203724|2,204032|2,204032|3,204340|3,204340|2,204648|3,204648|2) - ^
03:24:955 (204955|1,204955|2,205263|2,205263|1,205571|1,205571|2,205878|1,205878|2,206186|1,206186|2,206494|2,206494|1,206801|2,206801|1) -
shuffle please =_= done~~

03:27:724 (207724|2,207878|1,208032|0,208186|1,208340|2,208494|3) -
as refer to what? for guitar sounds~

03:29:878 - dat sudden usage of LNs for piano melody... why u no use those for all of piano melody? .-.
I don't know how to combine LN with pattern in this section 03:37:878 - 03:38:417 - , that's why I just use LN till 03:37:263 (217263|0) - qwq


03:52:032 - you already have the piano samples why u no apply them here? ;w; I want, but I can't found a piano chord, I'm not a pianist qwq
also 03:52:340 (232340|2,232494|1,232648|3,232955|1,233109|0,233263|2) -
as refer to what? the piano melodies for this section are using 1/2, because of that, the pattern feels really out of place ah, my bad, fixed~

04:11:724 - add a note .-. nope, the last one should be single, just try play with 25% speed then you will understand :3
04:56:032 - add a note .-. ah, I missed that, done~

05:07:109 - same issue with 03:52:032 - fixed too~~

thats all goodluck o/
Thank you for the mods :3
riunosk
helo
from queue 1234
i almost thought this was lovelive and wanted to slap myself
start beat sounds like lovelive for some reason
00:07:417 (7417|1,7417|3,7417|0) - this sound has 2 different snaps, one on 1/4 and the other on 1/8
01:05:878 (65878|3,65878|1,65878|0,65878|2) - this sounds very similar to the previous triples, why is this a quad?
01:16:494 (76494|1,76648|1,76801|1,76955|1) - anchor
01:40:340 (100340|3,100340|1,100340|0,100340|2) - same as before
02:18:494 - missing note for kick?
02:19:109 - ^
02:33:724 (153724|0,153878|0,154032|0,154186|0,154340|0,154494|0) - pretty long anchor
02:34:494 (154494|2,154494|0,154494|1,154494|3) - hnnngnrghrnh
02:59:417 (179417|0,179571|0,179724|0,179878|0) - anchor
03:03:878 - theres a sound here
03:08:955 (188955|3,188955|1,188955|0,188955|2) - iasjdoaisjd
good chart
gud luk for renk
Topic Starter
FadillSan

riunosk wrote:

helo
from queue 1234
i almost thought this was lovelive and wanted to slap myself
start beat sounds like lovelive for some reason
00:07:417 (7417|1,7417|3,7417|0) - this sound has 2 different snaps, one on 1/4 and the other on 1/8 fixed~
01:05:878 (65878|3,65878|1,65878|0,65878|2) - this sounds very similar to the previous triples, why is this a quad? I decided make that quad at every part like that, 'cause to make it more fun
01:16:494 (76494|1,76648|1,76801|1,76955|1) - anchor fixed~
01:40:340 (100340|3,100340|1,100340|0,100340|2) - same as before
02:18:494 - missing note for kick? this sound is lower than 02:19:724, so I make it single
02:19:109 - ^ ^
02:33:724 (153724|0,153878|0,154032|0,154186|0,154340|0,154494|0) - pretty long anchor fixed~
02:34:494 (154494|2,154494|0,154494|1,154494|3) - hnnngnrghrnh
02:59:417 (179417|0,179571|0,179724|0,179878|0) - anchor fixed~
03:03:878 - theres a sound here ah I missed that, added~
03:08:955 (188955|3,188955|1,188955|0,188955|2) - iasjdoaisjd
good chart
gud luk for renk
Thanks for the mods :3
Shima Rin
Hi, NM Request from my modding queue

4K:1|2|3|4


[Start Beat!!]
  1. 00:04:878 (4878|1) - Even though here is indeed a sound, I think it is too weak here compared to 00:04:955 (4955|2,5109|1,5263|0,5417|1) - , so maybe deleting it would make the patterns look more neat.
  2. 00:20:340 - to 00:22:801 - You are focusing on piano sounds here, but how about considering the pitch relavancy as well? You can remake the patterns here like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522584
  3. 00:26:955 (26955|2) - I know this is for the piano sound, but it is also too weak here, which also breaks some of the patterns that you intend to follow around this section. Deleting it would make your patterns look more consistent and neat too.
  4. I don't really see any reason you need to stack 01:13:878 (73878|2,74032|2) - here. Instead I think such pattern would follow with the music well: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522616 (Just an example).
  5. 01:16:648 (76648|1,76648|0,76724|3,76724|2,76801|0,76801|1) - and 01:15:571 (75571|3,75648|2) - are basically the same types of sound with similar volumes, so I think for 01:15:571 (75571|3,75648|2) - you may want to double them, and rearrange in a way like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522625
  6. 01:18:801 (78801|2,78955|2) - The same stack problem as I mentioned in 01:13:878 (73878|2,74032|2) -, correct here too if you apply my previous mods.
  7. 01:21:263 (81263|1,81417|1) - 01:23:724 (83724|2,83878|2) - Same as above
  8. 01:25:109 (85109|0,85186|1,85263|2,85263|3,85417|3,85494|2,85571|0,85571|1) - I would suggest to double all of them too, following the idea in 01:15:571 (75571|3,75648|2) - Only one difference here is not to double the note on 01:25:417 - since there is no drum on this line.
  9. 01:28:494 (88494|2,88648|2) - You don't need stack here too. The idea is for this 01:28:648 (88648|2) - sound it has no particularly similar element as 01:28:494 (88494|2,88494|3) -
  10. 01:36:648 - to 01:39:109 - Why not have some variation on the patterns? Try this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522658 You don't need to worry too much about longer stacks here since here the impacts of the drums are really strong, and it is indeed ok for you to make some challenge for the players, and stacks here can be reasonable to put.
  11. 01:39:417 - to 01:40:340 - Is there any perceived volume changes between the sounds you put with doubles and those with triples? I don't think so, so why not just make all of them into triple notes, which help with the consistency of note use here?
  12. 01:42:801 (102801|0,102801|1,102955|1,102955|2,103109|3,103109|2,103109|0) - It will be much better to do a ctrl+h here, so you can get rid of three exactly same patterns here. 01:45:263 (105263|2,105263|3,105417|1,105417|2,105571|3,105571|1,105571|0) - and here too. I know you are doing some kind of reflections of the patterns (three in a group), but repeating one certain patterns continuously for three times indeed makes it boring to some players, and I don't hear any elements that will make a huge difference if you do ctrl+h for these two.
  13. 01:46:494 - to 01:48:340 - You were using one col1&2 doubles, one col2&3 doubles and two col2&4 doubles, which makes me feel like the patterns are kinda biased on col2, and indeed you are doing some 4-note stacks here that you used to prevent in previous patterns here. Why not just do some simple patterns like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522711
  14. 01:49:571 (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3,109878|0,109878|1,109878|3,110032|1,110032|3,110032|0) - I think these four sounds have the same volume, and are indeed stronger than previous sounds, so add one for each of 01:49:571 (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3) - on col3 to make two triple notes here, keeping the consistency of the amount of note used here.
  15. 01:50:955 (110955|2,111109|2,111263|2) - This 3-note stack can be easily avoided by rearranging in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522732
  16. 01:57:571 - to 01:58:801 - the patterns are biased to col1 and col4, with 4 and 5 notes on each but only 3 on col2 and 2 on col3.I prefer some balanced patterns like 01:54:648 (114648|3,114801|2,114801|0,114955|1,115109|3,115109|2) - or you can rearrange in a different way to balance them.
  17. 02:12:494 (132494|0,132571|1,132648|3,132648|2) - Here these three notes have exactly the same volume, so I prefer to have 02:12:494 (132494|0,132571|1) - appear as double notes.
  18. 02:14:340 (134340|3,134494|2,134648|3) - What are you following here? I don't quite hear any drums, but only some unclear guitar sounds and vocals, but I don't think you need to follow vocals here. In my opinion, deleting 02:14:340 (134340|3,134648|3) - these two notes would make your patterns still focus on the drums.
  19. 02:26:648 (146648|0,146801|1,146955|0) - Here is the same idea as above, deleting 02:26:648 (146648|0,146955|0) - will give you a better focus.
  20. 02:33:878 (153878|1,153878|0,154032|0,154032|1) - Make these double notes into triple notes too. The idea is to have same amount of note used for similar volume, and from 02:33:878 - the sounds are indeed keeping at the loudest volume, that you used to perceive it in 01:05:263 -
  21. 02:40:032 (160032|1,160186|1) - The stack here is unnecessary, and the idea is mentioned above in 01:28:494 (88494|2,88648|2) -
  22. 02:44:186 (164186|3,164263|2,164340|1,164340|0) - It is better to make all into double notes since they are with the same volume.
  23. 02:49:878 (169878|2,170032|2) - Avoid the stack here too.
  24. 02:52:801 (172801|1,172878|2) - What kind of drums are you following here? I don't even hear any drums, but cymbals only, which you used to ignore.
  25. 02:53:724 (173724|0,173801|1,173878|2,173878|3,174032|3,174109|2,174186|0,174186|1) - Make all of them into double notes too, following the same idea as my suggestion for 02:44:186 (164186|3,164263|2,164340|1,164340|0) -
  26. 02:57:263 - I think you used to put a single note for this kind of rhythm, so maybe one here too.
  27. 03:00:263 (180263|1) - I don't really hear any clear new sound here (drums,cymbals, etc.) so I prefer you to delete it since it represents nothing for me.
  28. 03:07:109 - to 03:07:724 - you are reverting the flow of patterns here, but I prefer you to still keep the same since they are still an extension of this section of drums. Try this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522871
  29. 03:08:032 - to 03:08:801 - I tried my best but I still can't hear any volume difference between sounds with doubles and with triples. I think it is better for you to put triple notes for all of them since for me they are basically the same sounds with the same volume.
  30. 03:10:186 - 03:12:648 - 03:15:109 - You can have some LNs from these lines that last for one whole bar, just like what you did in the very beginning of this map.
  31. 03:22:340 (202340|0,202340|1) - I think this sound is much weaker than 03:22:032 (202032|1,202032|3,202186|2,202186|0) - , so a single note is enough.
  32. 03:27:724 - 03:28:032 - 03:28:340 - You can have double notes on these lines to express the drums on them, making some differences with other single notes here.
  33. 03:34:801 (214801|3) - I think you need to cut this LNs into two LNs, one from 03:34:801 - to 03:35:109 - and the other from 03:35:109 - to 03:35:263 - , because the piano ound has a percussion here.
  34. 03:38:263 - to 03:38:494 - the pattern of 1212 is a little bit unbalanced. Try this way to rearrange then:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522904
  35. 03:39:571 (219571|2,219648|1) - These two notes, in my opinion, are strong enough to put with double notes, comapared to 03:19:878 (199878|1,199955|2) -
  36. 03:40:186 (220186|0,220263|1) - 03:41:417 (221417|0) - 03:42:648 (222648|3) - I can be sure that they are just ghost notes. Delete them to make your patterns flow with the music better.
  37. 03:47:109 (227109|0,227109|3,227186|2,227263|1,227340|0) - 03:48:032 (228032|0,228032|3,228109|1,228186|2,228263|3) - 03:48:955 (228955|2,228955|0,228955|3,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3) - 03:49:571 (229571|0,229571|3,229571|1,229648|2,229724|1,229801|0) - Are these dump stuff or what? I don't see what sounds you are following. The solution for them is: delete 03:47:186 (227186|2,227263|1,227340|0,228109|1,228186|2,228263|3,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3) - and 03:49:648 (229648|2) - and you can see here 03:49:724 (229724|1,229801|0) - have two strong drum sounds, so make them into doubles like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522930. If you feel that after deleting those notes it is too empty, you may add 1/1 LNs on 03:47:109 - 03:47:571 - 03:48:032 - 03:48:955 - and 03:49:263 - for the guitar sounds. Is it clear?
  38. 04:10:494 - to 04:11:724 - I don't think chordtrills here express the music well. Why not try some creative ways, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522943.In this way you can even represent the increasing volume of the drums.
  39. 04:12:955 - to 04:32:648 - The patterns are not wrong, but they are indeed too generic for me. You are only focusing on the drums here, but they seldom have variations, so it will be a trouble for you to only pay attention to them. A solution for you is to also give some focus on vocals by changing some of the normal notes into short LNs that represent the vocals. You may have to reduce some of the notes but that is ok, since you are making this different but not just same patterns for each bar. I just do one bar for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522970. Doesn't it looks more creative and fun to play?
  40. 04:37:186 - You miss a note here, since the roll of 04:37:263 (277263|3,277340|2,277417|1,277494|0) - actually starts from 04:37:109 -
  41. 04:38:032 (278032|0,280494|0,280571|1) - They are ghost notes with no sounds. Delete them if you agree with me.
  42. 04:42:494 - to 04:44:955 - You may also try the way I linked to you before: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9522658, and the idea is the same as 01:36:648 - to 01:39:109 -
  43. 04:45:263 - to 04:46:186 - add one more note for each line, which keeps consistent with the patterns like from 01:39:417 - to 01:40:340 - (which I assume that you have change them with my previous mod to all triple notes except for the last quadraple.)
  44. 04:48:340 (288340|2,288494|2) - No need to stack here, and the idea is the same as 02:40:032 (160032|1,160186|1) -
  45. 04:51:571 (291571|1,291878|2) - I think these two notes are sufficient to be double notes, which has similar volume as 04:52:955 (292955|2,292955|1,293109|0,293109|1) - that you put with doubles.
  46. 04:56:955 (296955|2) - It is better to put this to col1 to avoid the 3-note stack here, and the patterns can be more balanced too.
  47. 05:00:109 (300109|1) - There is no drum on this line, so delete this note.
  48. 05:07:263 - 05:07:878 - To keep consistent with the rhythm of piano sounds after 05:08:340 - , you can add one more note on these two lines, where the piano sounds, maybe a little bit weaker, can be still heard.
  49. 05:13:263 (313263|1) - I prefer this to be on col1, which may balance for both hands.
  50. I would like to say that this map is nice when considering the mistakes inside. You are mostly on the right track of following the drums, discerning them correctly with doubles and triples, but till the end kiai you are emphasizing them too much, and another catchy element of the music, vocals, are mostly ignored. If I am going to map this, I will be following the vocals whenever available. Rices only will be just too generic for some parts, and I do think noodles for the vocals will help you a lot in improving the map to have more creativity.

I love this song <3, and I am gonna play BanG Dream soon. Good luck and hope my mods help with this map!
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