atian540 wrote:

IRC sore-sore (edisi laper :'''v)

14:31 atian540: wadaw kebetulan
14:31 FadillSan: yap ? :"v
14:32 atian540: mau sekalian irc ?
14:33 FadillSan: okee :"v
14:33 atian540: halo ?
14:33 *atian540 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1412400 Poppin' Party - STAR BEAT!~Hoshi no Kodou~ [Start Beat!!]]
14:33 FadillSan: kuy~
14:34 atian540: kayaknya kebanyakan chord deh
14:35 FadillSan: iyakah ?
14:35 atian540: iya
14:35 atian540: 00:10:109 - add note
14:36 FadillSan: done~
14:37 atian540: 00:12:955 - ini kok cuma 2 note ? padahal symbal yg lain 3 note ko
14:38 atian540: alo ?
14:39 FadillSan: oh iya itu :"v
14:39 atian540: bntr ya mau ganti kartu dlu :'v
14:43 atian540: i'am back =w=
14:44 FadillSan: koneksi ? :"v
14:44 atian540: 00:10:801 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078427
14:44 atian540: ganti kartu :v
14:47 FadillSan: done~
14:48 atian540: 00:14:648 - ini di bagian sini padahal suara tom di note sebelumnya cuma 2 loh
14:48 atian540: kick 2
14:49 FadillSan: dibikin 1 aja kali yah :"v
14:49 atian540: 00:13:263 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078442
14:49 atian540: iya
14:49 atian540: tuh saran
14:51 FadillSan: oh iya cocok tuh :3
14:51 atian540: trus ini 00:16:648 - symbalnya 2 note
14:51 atian540: 3 note aja
14:52 atian540: untuk jaga konsistensi :''3
14:53 FadillSan: simbalnya kan udah sama ln :"v
14:53 atian540: lah end LN kan ga ada soundnya =w=
14:53 atian540: kecuali klo di awal LN looh
14:54 FadillSan: iya juga sih :"v oke ane tambahin :'v
14:54 atian540: 00:15:724 (15724|3,15724|2,16032|1,16032|2) - ctrl+J
14:55 FadillSan: ship~
14:55 atian540: 00:16:955 (16955|0) - col 4
14:55 atian540: 00:17:263 (17263|1) - col 1
14:56 atian540: 00:17:417 (17417|2,17724|3) - del
14:56 atian540: dah blum =w=
14:57 FadillSan: done~
14:58 atian540: 00:18:186 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078464
14:58 atian540: 00:20:494 (20494|1,20648|0,20801|2,20955|3,21109|1,21263|0,21417|2,21571|3,21724|1,21878|0,22032|2,22186|3,22340|1,22494|0) - wadoo ini kok sama semua ?? :v
15:00 FadillSan: suaranya kan sama :"v
15:00 FadillSan: suaranya ngulang :"v
15:00 atian540: engga kayaknya deh
15:00 atian540: naik turun suara pianonya
15:01 FadillSan: jadi saran pattern nya gimana ? :"v
15:01 atian540: ntr
15:03 atian540: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078471
15:04 FadillSan: oh yg suara keras itu double ya :"v
15:04 atian540: yupz
15:04 FadillSan: ship :"v
15:05 atian540: sheep :''v
15:05 FadillSan: lanjut :'v
15:05 atian540: 00:32:340 (32340|2) - delet
15:06 atian540: 00:32:648 (32648|0) - col 3
15:06 atian540: 00:32:955 (32955|3) - col 2
15:06 atian540: 00:33:263 (33263|1,33263|0,33417|2,33417|1,33571|0,33571|2,33571|3) - ctrl+H
15:07 FadillSan: 00:32:340 (32340|2,32340|0,32340|3) - ini kan suaranya keras, masa cuma double ? :'v
15:07 atian540: ya terserah sih
15:07 FadillSan: 00:32:648 (32648|1,32648|3,32648|0) - dan yg ini w bikin triple karna ada symbalnya :"v
15:08 atian540: terserah mau ngkut ga
15:09 atian540: 00:34:648 (34648|0,34648|1,34801|0,34801|2,34801|3) - ini di ctrl+H aja biar ena
15:09 atian540: 00:37:109 (37109|2,37109|3,37263|3,37263|1,37263|0) - ini juga
15:10 FadillSan: ah iya :3
15:11 FadillSan: iya itu sama :'v
15:11 atian540: 00:39:109 (39109|2,39263|1) - ini biar sama kaya yg ini 00:38:186 -  soalnya bukan chord
15:11 atian540: 00:39:109 (39109|2,39263|1) - ctrl+H maksudnya
15:12 atian540: 00:39:571 (39571|0) - col 4
15:12 FadillSan: okay :3
15:13 FadillSan: done~
15:13 atian540: 00:43:571 (43571|1) - ghost ?
15:14 FadillSan: eh iya :'v
15:14 atian540: 00:44:186 (44186|1,44340|0) - ctrl+J
15:14 atian540: biar kicknya ga di col 23 mulu
15:16 FadillSan: okay :"v
15:16 atian540: yimyam lu :v
15:17 FadillSan: udah kbiasaan :"v
15:18 atian540: 00:50:032 (50032|1,50032|2,50494|3,50494|2,50648|2,50648|1,51109|2,51109|0,51263|1,51263|3,51724|1,51724|3,51878|0,51878|2) - ini dijadiin jack aja ??
15:18 atian540: biara sama kaya di bagian ini 00:59:724 - 
15:19 FadillSan: mending dibedain aja, biar berfariasi :'v
15:20 atian540: biar konsisten aja
15:21 atian540: 01:03:263 (63263|2) - col1
15:21 atian540: 01:03:263 (63263|3) - xol 3
15:22 atian540: 01:03:417 (63417|2) - col 4
15:22 FadillSan: done~
15:22 atian540: 01:03:571 (63571|1) - col 3
15:23 atian540: 01:07:109 - mungkin 3/4 note buat pembukaan reff
15:23 FadillSan: done~
15:23 atian540: 01:16:648 (76648|3) - delet
15:23 atian540: to hard
15:24 atian540: 01:16:340 (76340|2) - col 1
15:25 FadillSan: done~
15:27 atian540: 01:46:494 - dibikin kaya gini ena https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078537
15:27 atian540: patternya ga ulang2
15:28 FadillSan: okay~
15:29 atian540: 02:12:648 - biar variasi
15:29 atian540: eh
15:30 atian540: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078543
15:31 atian540: 02:33:263 (153263|0,153417|0,153571|0,153724|0,153878|0,154032|0,154186|0,154340|0,154494|0) - too har in left hand :''''v
15:31 FadillSan: done :3
15:32 atian540: 02:33:417 (153417|0) - col 3
15:32 atian540: 02:33:571 (153571|0) - col 4
15:32 FadillSan: astaga :"v iya juga :'v
15:32 atian540: 02:33:724 (153724|1) - col 3
15:33 atian540: 02:33:878 (153878|0) - col 2
15:33 atian540: 02:34:186 (154186|2) - ^
15:34 atian540: 02:34:340 (154340|3) - ^
15:34 FadillSan: done~
15:34 atian540: 02:45:263 (165263|3) - del
15:35 atian540: 02:45:263 (165263|0,165263|1,165340|2,165340|3,165417|1,165417|0,165494|3,165494|2,165571|0,165571|1) - dijadiin double trill aja
15:36 atian540: 02:44:955 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078554
15:36 FadillSan: okay~
15:36 atian540: 02:55:109 (175109|3) - ini juga delet :''v
15:36 FadillSan: ship~
15:38 atian540: 03:07:878 (187878|3,187878|2) - ghost
15:38 FadillSan: banyak yg gitu xD
15:38 FadillSan: removed~
15:40 atian540: 03:07:494 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078570
15:41 atian540: 03:10:032 - add note
15:42 FadillSan: done~
15:42 atian540: 03:26:648 (206648|1) - col 4
15:43 atian540: 03:29:263 (209263|0,209263|1,209340|2,209340|3,209417|1,209417|0,209494|2,209494|3,209571|0,209571|1,209648|2,209648|3,209724|1,209724|0,209801|2,209801|3,209878|3,209878|0,209878|1) - ctrl +H
15:43 atian540: 03:37:878 (217878|0) - del
15:43 FadillSan: done~
15:44 atian540: 03:52:032 - nah loh break time ???
15:46 FadillSan: sengaja itu buat istirahat :"v suara piano nya juga samar2 :'v
15:46 atian540: mending tambah aja
15:46 atian540: walaupun ga terlalu kedengeran
15:46 atian540: selama ada suara kenapa ga di tambah ? :'v
15:46 FadillSan: astaga dc :"v
15:47 atian540: weleh
15:47 atian540: 03:52:032 -  nih saran
15:47 FadillSan: astaga dc :"v
15:47 FadillSan: sengaja itu buat istirahat :"v suara piano nya juga samar2 :'v
15:47 atian540: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078595
15:49 atian540: next https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078600
15:51 atian540: next https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078603
15:51 atian540: 04:18:032 (258032|0,258032|2) - ghost
15:51 atian540: uyyy masih idup ga ???
15:52 atian540: 04:22:494 (262494|3) - del
15:52 FadillSan: masih :"v
15:52 atian540: 04:30:801 (270801|0) - del
15:52 atian540: 04:32:340 (272340|3) - ^
15:53 atian540: dah
15:54 atian540: uuuy
15:54 FadillSan: akhirnya beres juga :"v
15:54 atian540: yosh
15:54 atian540: kalo ada 7k kayaknya wnak =w=
15:54 FadillSan: laper njayy xD
15:55 FadillSan: w gak bisa mapping 7K :""v
15:55 atian540: code :3
15:55 atian540: kode kode :3
15:55 atian540: dah ya mau aplly mod yg lain :'v
15:56 FadillSan: okay :"v
15:56 atian540: otw thread :''v

Unknown_player wrote:

Yo sup my friends? I know you need a mod YES I NEED xD cuz i see you in the Uno's NM/M$M queue lol.

Ok here

[Note]
00:26:801 (26801|1,26955|0,27109|1,27263|2,27263|0) - Make it like this yeah, it's better~
00:31:417 (31417|0,31417|2) - Why double? 'cause that's a piano sound~
00:39:571 (39571|3,39571|1) - CTRL+H done~
00:40:648 (40648|1,40648|3) - Why double (again)? 'cause kick sound~
00:41:263 (41263|0,41263|1) - here also why? kick too~
00:41:724 (41724|1,41724|2) - what notes this refers to? there's no sound here. Delet dis there's a kick here~
00:45:109 (45109|2) - same here. Delet dis cuz i don't think you need a note there. instead move it to 00:45:571 in here 00:45:109, i think there's a little sound, so i put single here~
00:47:571 (47571|1) - make it chord. Since u put chord on basskick Ah, my bad, fixed~

Ok just that. hope it helps

dudehacker wrote:

Really like BanG Dream songs, thank you for mapping it.
I can do hitsounds for you later when I have time, if you dont mind. Yes pls, I need hitsound~

I am not good enough at 4K to mod your pattern.
Don't reply with yellow text pls, its so hard to read.

Start Beat!!

SV
Feels either too sudden or too slow, this isn't a dubstep song, I think it should be a lot more smooth. I'll fix it soon~

1
00:16:340 (16340|0) - Don't understand why LN here It's symbal sound..

2
00:45:263 (45263|0) - should have 1 or 2 LN here for the cymbal and emphasis of the end added~
00:47:724 (47724|2) - same as above yea~
00:50:186 (50186|0) - ^ ^
00:50:801 (50801|3) - ^ ^
00:55:109 (55109|1) - and so on, you get the point yup!

3
Feel like you should map those hihats on white lines added~
00:55:417 (55417|0) - ^
00:56:648 (56648|0) - ^
00:57:878 (57878|1) - and so on... yea~

4
02:01:263 (121263|3) - to 02:12:340 (132340|3) - feels quite undermapped, it is fine if you want give player a break here. I would add more notes on red lines for guitar Yes, I give a little break for player :3

5
02:28:648 (148648|2,149263|1,149878|2) - this vocal part feels really misleading as you are following the vocal that repeats, not the first vocal.
I think you should only map the first vocal at 02:28:340 - 02:28:955 - 02:29:571 - 02:30:186 -
or you can map both, just dont only map the repeating vocal Added LN at first vocal~

6
03:52:032 (232032|3) - to 04:00:648 (240648|3) -
This break feels too long, if you want it as a rest time, I suggest you map piano here. done, i mapped it at piano sounds~

7
04:01:878 (241878|3) - to 04:10:494 (250494|1) -
You should map the hihat here too, like what you did in 01:51:417 (111417|3) - to 02:00:955 (120955|2) - added all~

8
Missing note
04:57:878 (297878|0) - fixed~
04:58:186 (298186|0) - ^
05:03:109 (303109|2,303417|2) - I think it flows better for you to map this, since your emphasis is on drum fixed too~

Umo- wrote:

Hi fadil!
NM req from Umo-'s modding queue
1|2|3|4

Start Beat!!

00:00:648 - you could follow piano from this point because it seems a little too empty right now I think i'll skip this piano sound..
00:03:109 - 00:05:571 - 00:08:032 - ^ ^
00:10:494 - this section is a bit undermapped you could map hihats every 1/2 like this the sounds is too low, so i'll keep like this
00:33:571 (33571|2,33571|0,33571|3) - this feel too soft for a triple, use double instead done~
00:39:571 (39571|2,39571|0,39724|3,39724|2,39724|0) - ctrl+h works better done~
00:44:494 - could add a normal note here for a hihat done~
00:44:571 (44571|1) - remove, plays better fixed~
00:51:417 - why no LN like 00:50:801 - ? ah i missed this
01:06:801 - this SV is too sudden, make it slower a bit fixed~
01:56:494 (116494|0,116648|1,116648|2,116801|3,116955|1,116955|2,117109|0,117263|1,117263|2,117417|3,117571|1,117571|2,117724|0) - a bit too repetitive fixed~
02:01:263 - map hihats every red line here well, since you are a third people who said like this, I add all of that :3
03:00:340 (180340|0) - could make that a LN for a "finisher" like you did at 02:59:878 - done~
03:14:545 - add a note here for a drum done~
03:33:571 - missing note the sounds is to low..
03:47:417 - double done~
03:47:571 - triple done~
03:47:724 - double done~
03:48:032 - double done~
03:48:494 - triple done~
03:48:955 - double done~
03:49:263 - double done~
03:51:571 - add a note done~
03:51:878 - ^ ^

Good Luck!

chouyaa wrote:

NM request from modding qu'eue'

1|2|3|4

click

00:04:801 (4801|2) - delete? cuma ada minor melody bukan drum, dan dari awal memang melodinya ga dimap done~

00:07:878 - 1 note cukup, bukan loud kick kek 00:07:263 - ah iya, done~

00:10:032 (10032|3,10109|2,10186|0,10186|1) - ctrl+h, menghindari 00:09:724 (9724|3,9878|3,10032|3) - done~

00:22:494 (22494|0) - move ke col 2? lebih balance sih menurut w moved~

00:32:801 - add 1 note, minor sound gitar, biar ga hampa banget mainnya 3 notes di 1/1 doang iya juga yaa, fixed~

00:51:109 (51109|0,51109|2,51263|1,51263|3) - alangkah baiknya jika dibikin reverse kek 00:50:494 (50494|2,50494|3,50648|2,50648|1) -
biar lebih terstruktur fixed~

01:02:186 (62186|0,62340|0,62494|0,62648|0) - rearrange >.> my bad.. fixed~

01:11:878 - add 1 note, minor sound done~
01:12:494 - ^ ^
untuk jelasnya bisa denger di playrate 25%

01:31:263 - dan 01:31:724 - mestinya 3 notes, snare+cymbal :/ done~

01:31:263 (91263|2) - ini bisa diextend kok sampe 01:31:571 - fixed~

01:31:724 - ini bisa ditaruh LN buat ngikutin 01:31:263 (91263|2) - added~

untuk jack dari dari 01:46:494 - sampe 01:47:417 - saya rasa jacknya cukup sampe 01:46:955 - dan berganti jack di kolom yang berbeda menurut snare
lebih konsisten dengan pattern 01:47:417 - seterusnya dimana pitchnya sama oh iya, suaranya sama, fixed~

02:30:801 - 3 notes, loud drum+cymbal (sugesti ada di bawah)

02:30:494 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9173993 done~

02:35:109 (155109|2) - move ke col 2, hand balance moved~

dah itu aja, ngantuk pas ngemod :''v
goodluck ya beb <3

Nevertary wrote:

from queue

Start Beat!!!

00:10:032 (10032|0) - ini bukan suara yg keras jadi gk perlu dibuat jack sama yg bawahnya, move to column 3 ah iya, fixed~
klo yg atas diapply.. 00:10:186 (10186|2) - move to column 1 done~
00:49:648 (49648|3,49648|2) - cukup single, suaranya udh beda sama yg atas & bawahnya fixed~
00:54:340 - coba https://puu.sh/xLunE/8a10d52fa9.jpg ini, karena suara yg keras cuma di 3 row pertama iya juga yah, fixed~
00:45:571 - gk snap note kyk 00:55:417 (55417|3) - ini ? ah, kelupaan, fixed~
00:46:801 - add 1 note kyk 00:56:648 (56648|0) - ini ini juga, fixed~
01:05:878 - menurutku gk harus quad, suaranya sama kyk triple dibawahnya Kalo ini sengaja aku bikin quad, soalnya diakhir, istilahnya klimaks :3
01:10:648 - sebenernya mau ngikutin instrument atau vokalnya? w liat sebelumnya cuma instrument nya aja (bass drum, snare, etc) ah, ini tadinya mau ngikut vocal juga, tapi gak jadi deh :'v ngikut instrument aja :3
04:14:801 (254801|3,254955|3,255109|3,255263|3,255417|3) - hindari banyak note di 1 column okay, fixed~
04:49:724 (289724|1,289801|2) - gk ada suara apapun disini itu ada suara kick, walau kecil, coba deh play di 25% :3
04:52:032 - buat double atau triple jadiin double~
05:01:878 (301878|3,301878|2,301955|0,301955|1,302032|3,302032|2,302109|1,302109|0,302186|0,302186|2,302186|3) - ini kyk nya 1/3 beat, bukan 1/4 ah iya, fixed~
05:07:109 - add single done~
05:15:724 - mungkin mappingnya mau ditambah sampai suaranya berakhir disini? gak usah deh, sampe 05:07:109 - aja :3

coba cek mod ini buat seluruh bagian lagu, bukan cuma yg gw sebutkan 'v')b

bandori <3

zawz wrote:

NM mod from my queue

SV focused as requested

Start Beat!!

00:32:340 - Just a little too much. Change the x3 to a x2.5 fixed~
00:45:263 - This acceleration lasts for too long. Move 00:45:417 - to 00:45:340 - fixed too~
01:06:801 - That's way too fast, impossible to react in time unless you know it's here. This needs a slowdown half-way. added x0.5 at half-way
02:00:955 - Wow x4 is a little much. I understand this one is more intense, but I wouldn't go any higher than x3.5 here changed to x2.5 like 00:32:340
02:23:648 - Add a slowdown here. Doesn't have to be x0.5 but it's too hard without added~
02:26:109 - ^ ^
Too lazy to add SV after that?
02:35:417 - You should add SV here. Like at 01:06:801 Ah, I forget it, done~
03:10:186 - 03:20:032 - This part could use a slowdown to x0.9 or x0.8 added x0.9
03:38:648 - 03:39:109 - I'd add some SV here, like maybe x2 at 03:38:648 - and x0.5 at 03:38:801 - done~
03:52:032 - 04:01:878 - This part could use a slowdown added x0.7~
04:12:955 - This part screams SV. Like say x1 at 04:12:724 - and x0.1 at 04:11:724 - this great! added~

Hope this helped

Nice map otherwise

Couil wrote:

sup, M4M req

You wanted a SV check, so I'll pattern mod half of the map + check the SV, should amount to about the same amount of time you spent on my mod : )

Start Beat!!

00:11:417 (11417|1,11417|0) - Kinda weird to have a solo OH double here, don't see why it isn't a two handed but mb it's intentional /shrug. Would suggest you change it a two handed double though. re-arranged~
00:12:032 (12032|2,12340|2,12648|2,12801|2,12955|2) - Long anchor, would suggest changing the position of one of them. fixed~
00:19:878 (19878|3) - This LN feels pretty weird to me. Even though i can hear that there's a sound there, adding a note on a off-beat is usually not intuitive. I'd suggest removing it since the sound isn't too important imo. removed
00:22:494 (22494|1,22494|2) - Don't think this should be a double tbh, I'd say it's enough with only mapping it as a LN. my bad, removed a single~
00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) - Don't think this is supposed to be a jack, since you've mapped the others without jacks. fixed~
00:35:417 - Missed soft-hitclap. Ah, fixed~
00:37:417 (37417|2,37571|2) - Why is this a jack? Don't know if intentional or not, but since the rest of them aren't jacks i'd say adding a jack without any sound supporting it would be very weird and inconsistent. fixed~
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - ^ ^
00:42:340 (42340|2,42494|2) - ^ ^
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - Missed double? I think this should be single
00:38:648 (38648|1,38801|1) - Should be triple, right? what ??
00:44:494 (44494|1) - Think the map would work better without this note since most players would be focusing on the drums rather than the guitar. removed~
00:49:648 (49648|2) - Ghost note? removed~
00:54:186 (54186|2,54186|3) - Why is this a double? Unless you're mapping hi-hats as doubles I don't think this is intense enough to be a double. fixed~
00:56:955 - Maybe map the drums here? done~
01:15:571 (75571|0,75571|1,75648|3,75648|2) - Maybe map these as singles to contrast the bass drum? done~
01:16:955 - Triple? done~
01:25:186 - Add note. added~
01:25:494 - ^ ^
01:26:801 - Triple. done~
01:31:263 (91263|2,91724|1) - Why are you mapping the crashes as LNs all of a sudden? Feels kinda off since there rest in this section have been normal triples. changed to normal note~
01:32:186 (92186|0,92263|1) - I don't hear any noise for these. If there isn't any noise there i highly suggest removing them. There's a little kick here~
01:34:648 (94648|1) - Ghost note. removed
01:53:417 (113417|0) - Missplaced, think it's supposed to be a 1/2 down. ah, my bad, fixed~
02:18:494 (138494|3,139109|0) - Why aren't these doubles? The sound is low than 02:19:724 -, so i make it single
02:21:571 - ^ ^
02:25:571 - Would suggest adding a LN here if you aren't going to map the drum noise. added a drum noise
02:28:340 - I'd suggest normal notes on the echo/background singers to make a distinction between the two. done~
02:30:494 (150494|3,150801|3) - LN gap is soo small : ( this becomes really uncomfortable to play and really random. I'd suggest changing it to a 1/2 gap or just making it a normal note. changed o normal note~
02:44:186 (164186|1,164263|2,164263|3) - As previously, i'd suggest changing both of these to singles, for better contrast between the sounds. done~
02:52:955 - Triple. done~
02:53:878 - Double. done~
02:54:109 - Missed note. added~
02:59:878 - Triple. done~
03:00:186 - Could end the LN here and map the drums instead. Would work better with the next point as well. done~
03:00:340 - Triple. done~
03:00:494 (180494|1) - Ghost note? removed~
03:02:648 - Note? added~

Okey will do the SV check now;

00:32:340 - Think this SV is a bit too aggressive. Changing the numbers to 1.9x/0.7x or 2.05x/0.65x would work better imo.
02:00:955 - ^
02:35:417 - ^
00:45:186 - These SVs are really awkward. Since they're between notes it becomes super hard to read since it's no longer 1x + you don't know when it's coming. If you want a SV i'd suggest removing 00:45:109 (45109|2) adding a .83x SV at 00:44:955 and moving the 1x slider to 00:45:263. If you like this SV, I'd suggest changing the remaining ones to this as well. You could change the .83x and 1.5x SV to a couple more numbers; examples: 0.7x/1.9, 0.6x/2.2x, 0.5x/2.5, 0.8x/1.6x etc.
02:13:571 - ^ This could apply here i guess. Since it's the same sound.
02:23:417 - ^
01:06:801 - This 50/50 SV is a bit too slow imo, i'd suggest changing the 1.5x to a 2.5x SV and moving the 0.5x SV to 01:06:878. This would create a better SV imo.
03:38:648 - I'd change the 2x SVs to 1.25x SV, because then the distance between the notes becomes half of what its original distance was (it would basically look like you just stuck a 0.5x SV there instead of the 2x and 0.5x SV). This would make it easier to read since it doesn't look like it's snapped on a off-beat but rather snapped on a half-beat.
04:12:648 - This transition is hard to read, I'd suggest making it an "exponential" SV that rises each 1/4th, like this. Basically just start at 04:12:648 and increase it by a certain amount each 1/4th.
All SV mod are accepted~

Hope you find something useful, GL ranking it!

Madoka2574 wrote:

Hello,from your modding queue
I have to say,when I firstly watched osu! play your map I soon fell in love with it.Good song and really nice map!The SVs are also pretty good in my eyes.

Start Beat!!

00:04:801 - 00:04:878 - I think you can add 2 notes.There are sounds and feels good good idea, added~
00:23:571 (23571|1,23571|2,24032|2,24032|1) - different pitch,so you'd better place them in different columns changed~
00:32:648 - For this part you can create pattern like these notes 01:51:724 (111724|3,111878|3,112032|2,112186|2,112340|1,112494|1) - Place some notes in the same column. done~
00:42:494 - triple done~
00:49:724 (49724|0,49724|1,49801|3,49801|2,49878|0,49878|1) - Ctrl+H done~
00:52:263 (52263|2,52263|3,52878|2,52878|3) - single and 00:52:340 (52340|1,52340|0) - triple done~
00:56:955 (56955|1) - Delete,no snare here deleted~
01:17:494 (77494|0,77494|1) - single done~
01:21:878 - Triple for cymbal done~
01:25:109 - 01:25:417 - Why suddenly double?You didn't use double in previous parts and I can't see any difference here ah, my bad, fixed~
01:38:955 (98955|1,98955|0) - Not here but here 01:39:032 - fixed~
01:48:955 - Add a note in column 3 added~
02:15:724 - You can add a LN from here to 02:16:032 - for vocal sound I'll skip this vocal sound..
02:45:263 (165263|0,165263|2,165340|1,165340|3,165417|0,165417|2,165494|1,165494|3,165571|2,165571|0) - Change this pettern like this 00:59:263 (59263|1,59263|0,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1,59494|2,59494|3,59571|1,59571|0) - Since the current one is more difficult(no need to use it in this map I suppose) and you never use it in other parts. fixed~
02:45:571 - Triple for cymbal done~
02:50:494 - triple done~
From 02:53:571 - to 02:55:109 - Just see this https://puu.sh/xRcRA/479dd0613d.png done~
03:02:801 - triple done~
03:16:878 - Add a note here like the beginning done~
03:20:032 - triple here,maybe like this https://puu.sh/xRd1e/65f39b1979.png done~
03:33:417 - Add a note in column 1 added~
03:37:263 - You may add a note in column 3 but the cymbal is not so loud so it's up to you I'll keep this double..
03:47:109 - are you sure about this stream? I can't hear so many sounds It's guitar sound, I re-arranged this
04:04:032 (244032|1,244032|3,244340|3,244340|1,244648|1,244648|3) - Try to place them in different columns,and including 04:05:263 (245263|1,245571|1,245878|1,246186|1,246494|1) - you have 9 notes in column 2! fixed~
04:22:801 - triple done~
04:32:648 - I always suggest triple here but it is not a must,sometimes double would be better,I just point them out.you can decide by yourself.However if there is a really clear cymbal sound I still advise triple.Additionally pay attention to consistency. I'll make it triple~
04:37:571 - triple done~
04:40:032 - triple done~
04:44:955 - triple done~
04:54:340 - triple done~
04:59:263 - triple,but it seems fine with double here XD I think i'll make it triple :3
05:07:109 - double done~

Sorry for simple mod but I love the song.

Shot a star and add as fav.

Good luck for ranking!

FAMoss wrote:

modreq
short mod

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00:00:648 (648|3) - suara panjang kenapa ga tambahin aja sampe 00:02:186 -
00:01:263 - tambahin note di 1
00:01:878 - tambahin note di 2
00:03:109 (3109|0) - ln sampe 00:04:648 -
00:03:724 - tambahin note di 4
00:04:340 - tambahin note di 3
00:05:263 - tambahin note di 4
00:05:417 (5417|0) - geser ke 3
00:05:571 (5571|2) - geser ke 1
00:05:571 (5571|1) - jadiin ln sampe 00:07:109 -
00:06:801 - tambah note di 1
00:06:186 - note di 4
00:08:032 (8032|2) - jadiin ln sampe 00:08:955 -
00:08:648 - note di 1
delete ini 00:07:263 (7263|1) - nope, ini suara kick nya lbih keras, jadi w bikin double
^ 00:09:263 (9263|0) - ^
^ 00:09:724 (9724|3) - ^
*dari awal sampe 00:10:494 - Itu emang sengaja gak dibikin LN & gak dikasih note buat suara piano, w cuma ngambil suara drumnya aja..
00:20:801 (20801|2) - ke 2 done~
delete ini 00:20:955 (20955|1) - removed~
^ 00:21:571 (21571|2) - ^
^ 00:22:186 (22186|1) - ^
delete ini 02:00:955 (120955|0) - karena disini ga ada bunyi hentakan Ini dibikin triple karna suara snare, lbih keras dri suara kick sbelumnya (double)
^ 02:13:571 (133571|3) - kalo ini dibikin triple karna ada suara symbalnya..

game rock wrote:

Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)


Columns:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

• 

1. 00:20:955 (20955|1) - Move to the column 1. I think i'll keep it
2. 02:12:801 (132801|1) - ^ done~
3. 02:13:109 (133109|2) - Move to the column 4. I think i'll keep it
4. 02:14:494 (134494|2) - Move to the column 2. I'll keep it for consistency with 02:16:955 (136955|1) -
5. 03:14:532 (194532|0) - Move to 03:14:494 - ah my bad, fixed~
6. 03:14:955 (194955|1,195109|2) - Ctrl G. done~
7. 03:57:263 (237263|2) - Move to the column 2. nope, 'cause the sound same as 03:57:417 (237417|2) -
8. 04:32:032 (272032|1) - Move to the column 4. done~
9. 04:51:724 (291724|0) - Move to the column 4 and then Ctrl G 04:51:878 (291878|1,292032|2) - done~

Amazing map! Hope this can help you :33, Good Luck!

dudehacker wrote:

hitsound done : https://puu.sh/xUclz/e52e519720.rar

I am replacing your soft clap and soft whistle.
Not using normal sampleset.

DL new version of Magic Copy in my thread to copy hitsound:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330

Mentholzzz wrote:

Hello from my modding queue.

"Zombie~"

00:00:648 - triple here done~
00:12:878 (12878|0,12955|0) - this is evil, pls remove 00:12:878 (12878|0) - removed~
00:44:186 (44186|1,44340|3) - swap column done~
00:46:648 (46648|2) - move to 1 done~
01:07:109 - just a suggestion but you can put quad here I'll keep it triple
00:44:955 - if u want to put SV here, delete 00:45:109 (45109|2) - or if not, make 00:45:109 - double. I delete 00:45:109 (45109|2) -
00:47:571 - add x0.5 sv here , change 00:47:878 - to x0.5 and add x1.0 at 00:48:032 - to make sv average x1.0 I think that's not comfort to play, so i'm not change it
00:50:032 - add x0.5 sv here
00:50:648 - ^
00:51:263 - ^
00:51:878 - ^
00:52:032 (52032|0) - put the tail at either 00:52:186 - or 00:52:263 - and put a note at 00:52:340 - I think this part are already ok
00:54:955 - , 00:57:417 - same as above ^
00:59:878 (59878|0) - move to 3 done~
01:06:571 - I suggest to add x1.5 sv here to make the note "bump" and 0.5x sv is pretty evil imo I think adding x1.5 at 01:06:571 - isn't good idea..
01:16:878 (76878|3,76955|3) - please delete this kind of pattern every part else in this map done~
01:41:494 - x1.4 sv here done~
02:16:032 - change this SV to x1.0 done~
02:18:648 - same as mentioned done~
02:19:263 - , 02:19:878 - , 02:20:494 - ^ done~
02:33:263 - why don't u map here, it should be triple here imo. wtf, what am i doing ?? my bad, fixed
03:32:340 - triple for crash the crash sound is to low, so i keep it double
03:38:648 - the average SV of this gap is (1.25+0.5x2)/3 = 0.75 i suggest to change 1.25 to 2 done~
03:39:263 - similar ^ done~
03:41:571 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304505 , maybe try smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9304507 done~
03:52:032 - i think x0.7 is too slow, maybe change x0.7 , x0.8 , x0.9 to x0.79,x0.86 and x0.93 would be better done~
04:12:955 - this kiai are fun af i like this Thank you~ :3
05:01:776 (301776|0) - double here too done~

Maneh wrote:

guud map
up up

Hestia- wrote:

Bandori
[Start Beat!!]
It's good, only issues are a couple of the SVs.
00:01:263 - Add 3; optional notes
00:01:878 - Add 4
00:03:724 - Add 2
00:04:340 - Add 3
00:06:186 - Add 1
00:06:801 - Add 2
00:08:648 - Add 3
I map this part only on drum sounds..

00:32:417 - Change SV here to 0.7
00:47:648 - Move SV here to 00:47:724 -
01:05:878 - Change SV here to 0.55
fixed all~

01:13:878 - Add 23; There is noise but it might be overmapping if you add these... maybe move other things around and only add 1 note so there isn't so much jack spam. optional
01:18:801 - Add 23
01:21:263 - Add 23
01:23:724 - Add 23
01:28:648 - Add 23
Good idea, but I only add 1 note~

01:41:494 - Change SV to 1.3 done~
02:00:955 - This SV is good I like this too~
02:13:801 - Change SV to 1.45 done~

02:42:340 (162340|1) - Remove It's a kick, so I'll keep it
02:42:494 - Add 2 done~
02:47:417 - Add 23 only add single at 2

03:10:801 - Add 2
03:11:417 - Add 1
03:13:263 - Add 3
03:13:878 - Add 4
03:15:724 - Add 3
03:16:340 - Add 2
03:18:186 - Add 2
added all~

03:20:032 - Change SV to 0.94
03:22:494 - Change SV to 0.92
03:38:801 - Change SV to 0.65
03:39:340 - Change SV to 0.65
04:12:878 - Change SV to 1.25
fixed all~

04:48:340 - Add 23 only add single at 3
04:48:648 - Add 4 done~
04:50:417 - Add 4 added at 1
04:51:109 - Add 34 only add single at 4
04:52:263 - Add 4 added at 3
04:53:263 - Add 23 only add single at 4
04:53:571 - Add 34 only add single at 1

05:07:417 - Add 2 - mapping non drum noises lol
05:07:724 - Add 4
05:08:032 - Add 4
05:08:340 - Add 3
05:08:648 - Add 3
05:08:955 - Add 2
05:09:109 - Add 1
05:09:263 - Add 2
05:09:571 - Add 14
05:09:724 - Add 3
05:09:878 - Add 4
05:10:186 - Add 3
05:10:340 - Add 2
05:10:494 - Add 3
05:10:648 - Add 4
05:10:801 - Add 2
05:10:955 - Add 1
05:11:109 - Add 2
05:11:417 - Add 1
05:11:571 - Add 4
05:11:724 - Add 1
I just only mapping till 05:07:109 - :3

goodluck ~ !

[B A D] wrote:

M4M as requested at here
0|1|2|3

Start Beat!!

00:04:801 (4801|1) - Ghost note removed
01:50:648 (110648|2,110648|0,110648|1,110648|3) and 01:48:955 (108955|0,108955|3,108955|2) - They sound the same though 1 of them is a quad. Reduce it to a triple for this 01:50:648 (110648|2,110648|0,110648|1,110648|3) i decided it to quad, 'cause want to make it fun to play
02:33:878 (153878|1,153878|3,153878|0,154032|1,154032|0,154032|3) - These should be doubles since in the same part at 01:49:571 my bad, fixed~ (109571|3,109571|0,109724|0,109724|3) , you mapped it as doubles
03:08:340 (188340|2,188340|3,188340|0,188494|2,188494|0,188494|3) - ^ fixed too~
03:24:494 (204494|0) - The LN start at 03:24:340 I think the LN start at 03:24:494..
03:26:955 (206955|0) - Ghost note removed~
03:44:648 (224648|3) - Add a note here done~
From 03:47:109 to 03:51:109 - There are TONS of ghost notes here. Play at 25% to see if it is a ghost note or not re-arranged this
03:57:263 (237263|2,237417|2) - These sound aren't the same, move 03:57:417 (237417|2) to 3 ah you right, moved~
04:11:724 (251724|3,251724|2) - Make this a single done~
04:23:109 (263109|0,263263|0,263417|0,263571|0,263724|0) - Anchor here is unnecessary fixed~
04:24:340 (264340|3,264494|3,264648|3,264801|3,264955|3) - ^ ^
And the other anchors in this part too which I won't mention
04:52:032 (292032|1,292032|0) - Change to a triple done~
05:07:109 - I'd suggest you extend this part to the end of the song since there so much modders to suggest this, well, I mapped it till the end of the song~

Hope this help and gl for ranking

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

short mod

Modding

[4k]

1. 00:43:571 (43571|1) - ghost note not, a piano sound
   I think piano sound snap is 00:43:609 - here so Just delete is better It's a guitar sound..
   
2. 00:44:494 - where is double note here ? add notes 3 4
   00:44:186 (44186|3,44186|2) - like this it's same thing
   Ah I miss it, but I only put single here, 'cause the sound too low for double
   
   00:49:417 (49417|1,49417|0,49494|3,49494|2,49571|0,49571|1) - ^ It's like here
   
3. 00:52:263 (52263|2) - move to 2 and 00:52:340 (52340|1) - move to 3 done~
   
4. 02:21:571 - Add one more note :3 my bad, added~
   
5. 03:02:494 (182494|1,182494|3,182494|0,182801|0,182801|3,182801|1,183109|1,183109|0,183109|3) - you think it's sound for give you the same loud?
   hm I think 2, 3 ,2 or 3, 3, 2 (Notes number) it's better :3
   This is why I put 3,3,3 :
   03:02:494 (182494|0,182494|3,182494|1) - 3 note for snare
   03:02:801 (182801|0,182801|3,182801|2) - 2 note fore kick + 1 for crash, so i put 3 note
   03:03:109 (183109|1,183109|3,183109|0) - and 3 note for snare :3
   
6. 03:48:494 (228494|3,228494|2,228494|0,228571|1,228648|2,228724|3,228801|2,228878|1,228955|0,228955|3,228955|2,229032|1,229109|2,229186|3,229263|2,229263|0,229340|1,229417|2,229494|3) -
   I think it's have to could be better, Does not match the song
   change please Re-arranged, I hope now is better owo
   
7. 03:52:340 (232340|2,232494|1,232648|3,232955|1,233109|0,233263|2,233571|3,233724|2,233878|1,234186|2,234340|0,234494|3,234801|1,234955|0,235109|2,235417|2,235571|1,235724|3,236032|3,236186|1,236340|2,236648|1,236801|0,236955|2,237263|2,237417|3,237571|3,237878|1,238032|0,238186|3,238494|2,238648|0,238801|1,239109|2,239263|1,239417|3,239724|1,239878|0,240032|2,240340|3,240494|1) -
   This section would be better to follow the piano , I don't understand this note's mean
   But the truth is I follow the piano :"v
8. 05:07:417 (307417|2,307571|1,307724|3,308032|3,308186|1,308340|2,308648|2,308801|1,308955|3,309263|3,309417|1,309878|1,310032|0,310186|2,310494|2,310648|0,310801|1,311109|1,311263|0) - ^
   And have some ghost notes I just mapped piano sound which the sound not too low :3

I wish this map go to rank

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

Start Beat!!

00:47:417 (47417|2) - SV here should follow the previous one.
I can't tell the difference between them by listening to the music Ah you remind me for the unconsistency sv, I think 00:47:417 this part is better, so I fixed the previous sv :3

01:06:648 (66648|2) - SV here is so hard to play. I think this sv already fix

think it's ready for rank

AlisceaSparku wrote:

halo~ idk the format for our own queue LOL but anyway here you go

col 1/2/3/4
[Start Beat!!]

1. Since the map is mostly single notes anyway, I would increase the OD and HP to around 8.5 to 9 to discourage "keyboard mashing" and "PP map" I think you right, I change them to 8.5~
2. 00:00:648 - I'd recommend to add slowjams for this part as the start is quite "meh" to play considering there's an almost-two-second gap between the first drum roll to the next drum part. Otherwise, you can use LNs to additionally give more emphasis to the cymbals. Or another suggestion, put a single note for the piano sounds as well, like how you mapped 03:15:724 fixed, i did it like 03:15:724 (195724|2https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=reply&f=10&t=641298#,196340|1) - . xD
3. 00:03:109 - ^same suggestion fixed~
4. 00:05:571 - ^same suggestion fixed~
5. 00:08:032 - ^same suggestion fixed~
6. 00:07:417 - the hand here must have a different note structure from 00:08:032 - . because one is for snare and one is for cymbal. Here's a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386590 that's better!
7. 00:12:801 - this part seems like a kick will play three times, so I advise to make a hand for the cymbal sound. (and of course, avoiding an accidental minijack) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386606 . Additional note, this is the only place where the cymbal is mapped only with a double (focusing on the intro only) fixed it~
8. 00:26:801 - I advise you to rearrange this part into something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386621 , so that its easily distinguishable that the 1/2 note represents a different sound. yes i like it
9. 00:36:801 - not sure if this is meant but I think one note should go to col. 1 (no such pattern was repeated in the same section anyway) done~
10. 01:39:032 (99032|3,99109|3) - please try to avoid things like this. (its actually pretty annoying to hit, well if you consider this as fun/challenging, then you may not remove the minijack.) Otherwise, you can remove 01:39:032 (99032|3) - . YES, thank you for fix this, that's better~
11. 02:55:340 (175340|3) - put the note to 02:55:417 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized. fixed too~
12. 03:29:801 (209801|0) - put the note to 03:29:878 - instead so the cymbal gets emphasized. fixed too~
13. 03:32:801 - I'm pretty sure an SV can be inserted here. I think this better without sv :3
14. 03:32:801 (212801|2,212801|1) - This has different pitch than 03:33:109 (213109|2,213109|1) - (if you also consider the piano, which is very very audible), so I recommend you make a mirror pattern for this one. Here's an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9386668 fixed~
15. 03:44:571 (224571|3,224648|3) - fixed xD
16. 03:57:417 (237417|3,237571|3) - not sure why these are in the same column. the only same sound I hear is already mapped with 03:56:955 (236955|2,237263|2) - . ah you right, moved
17. 04:21:724 (261724|0) - put it to col. 3 instead so it's not -too heavy- for the left hand. that's better
18. 04:22:724 (262724|3) - put this note to 04:22:801 - to put emphasis on the cymbal sound instead. fixed~
19. 04:44:878 (284878|3,284955|3) - yes, this is unhealthy imo sorry, fixed xD
20. 05:07:032 (307032|3) - put to 05:07:109 - instead to put emphasis on the cymbals. i think i missed quite a lot of these. ups, fixed~
21. 05:07:571 (307571|1) - shouldn't this be at 05:07:878 - , and 05:08:186 (308186|1) - at 05:08:494 - instead? this goes until the piano section ends so, yes. Ahh my bad, you rigth xD fixed all of that~

solid map, there's not much errors
-the whole map lacks creative layering (LN's + SN's patterns), which results in repetitive patterns. there are a lot of instruments you can map using LN's, so try to look out for those c: (in my opinion, it's quite bland to press doubles and hands for almost the whole song, so yes)

good luck~

• 
  [Start Beat!!]

1. Kamu punya banyak hitsound yang tidak digunakan dalam map ini (unused hitsound) https://puu.sh/y99hQ/13ebc7f5ba.png hapus aja kalo nggk dipakai
   
   
2. 00:00:648 - 00:03:109 - 00:05:571 - 00:08:032 - lebih cocok kalau dikasih LN aja disini, karena melodi gitar nya (long sound) itu strong banget
3. 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) - aku kurang mengerti konsep kamu kenapa drum disini cuma dikasih satu note aja, sementara suara tsb lebih keras (menghentak) daripada kick di part ini 00:14:494 (14494|2,15109|3) -
4. 00:17:417 (17417|3) - sama seperti diatas ^
5. 00:18:801 - akan lebih menarik kalau kamu kasih LN untuk saura long bass nya, coba divariasikan lagi supaya nantinya map kamu tidak terlalu "boring" dimainkan
6. 00:25:571 (25571|2,25878|2,26186|2) - seharusnya berada di kolom 2 atau 4, karena pola nya seharusnya konsisten sama seperti sebelumnya 00:24:032 (24032|0,24340|0) -
7. 00:28:032 (28032|0,28340|0,28648|0,28955|0) - hmmm, coba pindah ke kolom yang lain deh, soalnya kamu tidak mengulang penempatan pattern seperti ini pada bagian sebelum/sesudahnya . . . contoh 00:24:032 - 00:25:263 - 00:29:263 -
8. 00:32:801 (32801|2,32955|2) - mungkin ada bagusnya dibedakan saja kolomnya, karena pada interval berikutnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, contohnya 00:34:032 (34032|0,34186|1) - 00:35:263 (35263|3,35417|2) - dan seterusnya
9. 00:41:417 (41417|2,41571|2,41724|2) - sebelumnya kamu tidak menggunakan pola seperti ini, ada baiknya dikonsisten-kan penempatannya seperti ini saja https://puu.sh/y99Hl/92cb2480b6.png
10. 00:42:494 - aku punya saran yang lebih bagus supaya "feel" dari penekanan suara gitar pada part ini lebih terasa https://puu.sh/y99Kn/7ea703737f.jpg
11. 00:52:494 (52494|1) - pindah ke kolom 4 saja, untuk lebih konsisten dengan pattern pada part ini 00:52:955 - 00:53:571 - untuk jenis rhythm yang sama
12. 00:58:494 - coba ditukar saja seperti ini http://puu.sh/y99PE/162ef4df5d.jpg karena suara kick pada part ini 00:58:494 - tentu berbeda dengan drum (clap) pada bagian ini 00:58:186 - so, bagian double note nya tidak perlu dalam posisi sejajar
13. 00:59:494 - seharusnya bagian sini cukup dikasih satu note saja, karena suaranya jelas sekali lebih lemah dibandingkan pada part drum sound disini 00:59:263 (59263|0,59263|1,59340|2,59340|3,59417|0,59417|1) - 00:59:571 (59571|0,59571|1,59648|2,59648|3,59724|0,59724|1) -
14. 01:01:724 - 01:02:032 - bukankah 2 bagian ini mempunyai suara yang sama kerasnya ? hmmm, coba kamu re-arrange seperti ini saja http://puu.sh/y99VT/bd989114ab.jpg
15. 01:05:186 - seharusnya 3 notes tersebut bisa dimulai dari sini
16. 01:06:648 - well, menurutku lebih pas (cocok) seperti ini patternnya http://puu.sh/y99Zr/96a95d4ab8.jpg
17. 01:13:724 (73724|1,73878|1) - jujur saya, aku tidak mendengar suara apapun yang mengharuskan part ini dikasih 1/2 jack (baik suara yang sejenis maupun suara yang mirip) sebaiknya dibedakan saja penempatan kolomnya
18. 01:18:648 (78648|1,78801|1) - sama seperti diatas ^
19. 01:21:109 (81109|2,81263|2) - 01:23:571 (83571|1,83724|1) - ^
20. Hmmm kok kalo dirasa polanya berulang-ulang ya ? aku curiga ini pattern copy paste terus Ctrl H / Ctrl G, dan jujur sih agak "boring" pada bagian reff ini, karena kamu hanya fokus terhadap satu suara drum aja dan mengabaikan suara instrumen lainnya (seperti gitar, vocal, dsb) kalau kamu memang berniat ingin membuat map yang spesial dan bukan sekedar monoton untuk di rank, coba lebih diberi kesempatan lagi untuk mapping pada intrumen lainnya dan bikin variasi lebih banyak lagi
21. 01:39:417 (99417|1,99571|1,99724|1,99724|2,99878|2,99878|1,100032|2,100186|2,100340|2) - mungkin hal seperti ini agak berlebihan, coba lebih ditata lagi
22. 01:50:186 - please give some respect to this important guitar sound hehe http://puu.sh/y9aeS/a56f62b1e3.jpg
23. 02:01:263 - emmm gimana yah, mulai dari timing sana sampai 02:11:109 - anchor sama 1/2 jack nya kok agak kurang beraturan yah ? maksudnya tidak terfokus sama penekanan gitar, ataupun suara tertentu gitu, contohnya kalo penekanan pada gitar https://puu.sh/y9aDU/67568f7fc9.jpg
24. 02:14:955 (134955|2) - pindah ke kolom 2 supaya tidak terlalu ditekan pada tangan kanan, keep it balance as well
25. 02:15:878 - 02:15:955 - ketinggalan note buat suara drum disini ? jelas banget loh suaranya
26. 02:17:263 - sama seperti mod di interval sebelumnya, keep it balance
27. 02:18:032 - ketinggalan note buat kick sound disini
28. 02:23:109 (143109|1,143109|0,143263|2,143263|3) - bukankah pada bagian ini memiliki suara yang sejenis/sama ? re-arrange aja ke kolom yang sama http://puu.sh/y9aNf/10e20d9de0.jpg
29. 02:25:109 - 02:25:417 - suaranya sama persis, kenapa berbeda jumlah notenya ? samakan aja
30. 02:35:724 - seandainya kamu lebih berani bermain dengan LN untuk gitarnya, mungkin akan seperti ini hasilnya https://puu.sh/y9aS8/2a989ea666.jpg buatlah variasi sebaik mungkin, berhubung ini juga map marathon (5 menitan lebih) ya nggak fair dong hampir 90% isinya drum semua berulang-ulang
31. 02:39:878 (159878|2,160032|2) - agak lebih berhati-hati aja dengan tipe pattern seperti ini, sama seperti mod pada bagian reff sebelumnya
32. i don't know why i feels like de ja vu here hahaha xD
33. 03:29:801 - agak sedih rasanya kalo piano se-spesial ini diabaikan dan kamu cuma ingin ngemap drum aja, ini coba aku kasih referensi untuk kombinasi piano sama drumnya https://puu.sh/y9b1E/a132c1f899.jpg http://puu.sh/y9b3Y/fc20efba68.jpg dan seterusnya
34. hmmm kayaknya cukup sampai disini aja dulu, intinya sih masalah terbesarmu adalah pada sisi variasi mapping dan konsistensi penempatan anchor dan 1/2 jack