Thank you for the mod Skylish!
Skylish wrote:It's modding time:
> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582
> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column
! Remove 'Reol' in tag column since it's duplicated in the Romanized title. Lower or Upper case is all considered the same in search engine in the beatmap search fx.
> 00:26:127 - this note can be shifted to 00:27:364 - and change to k, comparing with 00:37:261 - , the vocal there stands out from the base drum line obviously, hence should be HLed.
> 00:34:787 - shift it to 00:33:550 - to imitate the similar pattern of 00:23:653 - . The overall pattern at 00:32:931 - could be d k d as a mirror pattern of 00:23:035 - additionally.
> 00:47:777 - this on-beat should be back on the mapping channel after two consecutive off-beat vocal emphases. i.e. Shift 00:49:014 - to 00:47:777 -
! From 00:50:251 - to 00:59:529 - , the structure should be similar to that of 00:40:354 - . You can see the whole former section is 1/2 shifted forward. It is non-harmonic in Kantan (creating a weird rhythm pattern). Fixed it on your own according to mods above.
> 01:11:901 - / 02:11:282 - you can put a kat here to imitate the 5-plet usage at 01:02:004 - I think it will be to dense
> 01:18:086 - d should be put to prevent a sudden drop of density.
> 01:19:942 (44) - not sure why'd you choose an off-beat mapping strategy here. The mapping channel is unclear. Let's try:
At first glance the suggestion looks cleaner and clearer.
01:27:364 - / 01:27:983 - should share the same thing since they are the same in interpretation method in music (similar to 00:45:921 (7,8) - )
You can have your own fix of course. It is just a suggestion anyway to clarify the patterns.
> 02:36:644 (11,12) - change to kat due to the high pitch? No, because it ruins overall repetition. + its not high pitch, its just strong vocal and in this section I dont map vocals
! 03:10:044 - / 03:42:209 - this section should be similar with 02:09:426 - / 01:10:045 - . It is Kantan anyway, repeatitive patterns are acceptable, surprisingly they are preferred. Please refer to the mentioned mods as well.
> 03:42:209 - add a don to fill in the unnatural 4/1 gap.
! The overall structure and cuts are very loosen. Futsuu needs a in-depth care.
! From 00:20:560 (35) - to 00:30:457 - these 4 bars as an example, the pattern usages are inconsistent. 00:30:457 - is a more obvious section.
Let's try a more consistent pattern like: 00:20:560 (1) -
00:20:560 (1) - n nnn n + n nnn n for 2 bars
00:25:509 (11) - n n nnn + n n nnn for other 2 bars
00:27:055 - / 00:29:529 - notes are put on these 2 clear vocal notes.
This pattern would be considered as tidy and clean because of clear structure formation. You can compare it with yours. Try fixing the pattern usages in a very large extent among the whole difficulty, when and if necessary.
> Kiais look fine and do not have the problem mentioned above. Surprisingly you may overlook the normal sections only.
This mapset is undermapped in overall speaking (not a big deal). The spread between Kantan, Futsuu and GD Muzukashii is fine. However, the difficulties themselves have more rooms for improvement as far as I inspect and expect. Good luck!