REOL - Kamisama ni Natta Hi [Taiko]

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Skylish
Hi, from my Taiko modding queue. (NO KDS now)

[General]

> Before I start modding officially, I would like to point out that the mp3's quality is very poor. Please change a new one.

I've prepared one for you with red timing points set: https://puu.sh/yWg28/fb8877155d.mp3

Red timing points required:
767,618.556701030928,4,1,0,60,1,0
178911,618.556701030928,6,1,0,80,1,8
180148,618.556701030928,4,1,0,90,1,1
Preview time: 03:00:148 -

Please fix volume and green timing points correspondingly, if necessary. Re-snap all notes as well. I will mod the mapset when you have improved the quality of music in any ways.
Topic Starter
salchow

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my Taiko modding queue. (NO KDS now)

[General]

> Before I start modding officially, I would like to point out that the mp3's quality is very poor. Please change a new one.

I've prepared one for you with red timing points set: https://puu.sh/yWg28/fb8877155d.mp3

Red timing points required:
767,618.556701030928,4,1,0,60,1,0
178911,618.556701030928,6,1,0,80,1,8
180148,618.556701030928,4,1,0,90,1,1
Preview time: 03:00:148 -

Please fix volume and green timing points correspondingly, if necessary. Re-snap all notes as well. I will mod the mapset when you have improved the quality of music in any ways.
Fixed!
Skylish
It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column

! Remove 'Reol' in tag column since it's duplicated in the Romanized title. Lower or Upper case is all considered the same in search engine in the beatmap search fx.
[Kantan]

> 00:26:127 - this note can be shifted to 00:27:364 - and change to k, comparing with 00:37:261 - , the vocal there stands out from the base drum line obviously, hence should be HLed.

> 00:34:787 - shift it to 00:33:550 - to imitate the similar pattern of 00:23:653 - . The overall pattern at 00:32:931 - could be d k d as a mirror pattern of 00:23:035 - additionally.

> 00:47:777 - this on-beat should be back on the mapping channel after two consecutive off-beat vocal emphases. i.e. Shift 00:49:014 - to 00:47:777 -

! From 00:50:251 - to 00:59:529 - , the structure should be similar to that of 00:40:354 - . You can see the whole former section is 1/2 shifted forward. It is non-harmonic in Kantan (creating a weird rhythm pattern). Fixed it on your own according to mods above.

> 01:11:901 - / 02:11:282 - you can put a kat here to imitate the 5-plet usage at 01:02:004 -

> 01:18:086 - d should be put to prevent a sudden drop of density.

> 01:19:942 (44) - not sure why'd you choose an off-beat mapping strategy here. The mapping channel is unclear. Let's try:

At first glance the suggestion looks cleaner and clearer.

01:27:364 - / 01:27:983 - should share the same thing since they are the same in interpretation method in music (similar to 00:45:921 (7,8) - )

You can have your own fix of course. It is just a suggestion anyway to clarify the patterns.

> 02:36:644 (11,12) - change to kat due to the high pitch?

! 03:10:044 - / 03:42:209 - this section should be similar with 02:09:426 - / 01:10:045 - . It is Kantan anyway, repeatitive patterns are acceptable, surprisingly they are preferred. Please refer to the mentioned mods as well.

> 03:42:209 - add a don to fill in the unnatural 4/1 gap.

[Futsuu]

! The overall structure and cuts are very loosen. Futsuu needs a in-depth care.

! From 00:20:560 (35) - to 00:30:457 - these 4 bars as an example, the pattern usages are inconsistent. 00:30:457 - is a more obvious section.

Let's try a more consistent pattern like: 00:20:560 (1) -


00:20:560 (1) - n nnn n + n nnn n for 2 bars
00:25:509 (11) - n n nnn + n n nnn for other 2 bars

00:27:055 - / 00:29:529 - notes are put on these 2 clear vocal notes.

This pattern would be considered as tidy and clean because of clear structure formation. You can compare it with yours. Try fixing the pattern usages in a very large extent among the whole difficulty, when and if necessary.

> Kiais look fine and do not have the problem mentioned above. Surprisingly you may overlook the normal sections only.

[Volta's Muzukashii]

> 00:03:859 (6,7) - ctrl+G for a better pitch flow, same as 00:08:808 (14,15) -

> 00:39:426 - / 00:49:323 - / ... although I know that you map the instrumental layer concretely, shifting it 1/4 forward to match the vocal note can bring a refreshing feeling to the 'dough' patterns, as a new kick-off of new section (Bar:16/20/...)

> 00:57:055 (149,150) - lyrics 'do do', same notes usage as well?

> 01:16:694 - add a note here since this ornament music is unique apart from 01:12:983 - / 01:11:127 - / ...

> 01:21:797 - missed a kat to show the difference with 01:24:272 - emptiness.

> 01:26:591 - same as 01:16:694 -

> 02:27:364 (242,243) - ctrl+G to match the drum kick perfectly

> 02:37:261 - not sure why not k here too, the flow is acceptable even it is a kat

> 02:56:437 - nnn n is smoother than n nnn. The vocal density is tensed at 02:56:591 -

! Imo the last Kiai progression comes too late. The previous 3 Kiais are too blend comparitively. More self-mods may enhance the expression of progression in a better format.

[]

This mapset is undermapped in overall speaking (not a big deal). The spread between Kantan, Futsuu and GD Muzukashii is fine. However, the difficulties themselves have more rooms for improvement as far as I inspect and expect. Good luck! :D
-Kazu-

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column
how sure about this? because you can't search for tags with less than 3 characters... (asking for research purposes lol)
edit: lol just checked and he didnt add any of the tags I suggested :( so sad
Topic Starter
salchow

-Kazu- wrote:

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column
how sure about this? because you can't search for tags with less than 3 characters... (asking for research purposes lol)
edit: lol just checked and he didnt add any of the tags I suggested :( so sad
Yes I did
Topic Starter
salchow

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column

! Remove 'Reol' in tag column since it's duplicated in the Romanized title. Lower or Upper case is all considered the same in search engine in the beatmap search fx.
[Kantan]

> 00:26:127 - this note can be shifted to 00:27:364 - and change to k, comparing with 00:37:261 - , the vocal there stands out from the base drum line obviously, hence should be HLed.

> 00:34:787 - shift it to 00:33:550 - to imitate the similar pattern of 00:23:653 - . The overall pattern at 00:32:931 - could be d k d as a mirror pattern of 00:23:035 - additionally.

> 00:47:777 - this on-beat should be back on the mapping channel after two consecutive off-beat vocal emphases. i.e. Shift 00:49:014 - to 00:47:777 -

! From 00:50:251 - to 00:59:529 - , the structure should be similar to that of 00:40:354 - . You can see the whole former section is 1/2 shifted forward. It is non-harmonic in Kantan (creating a weird rhythm pattern). Fixed it on your own according to mods above.

> 01:11:901 - / 02:11:282 - you can put a kat here to imitate the 5-plet usage at 01:02:004 - I think it will be to dense

> 01:18:086 - d should be put to prevent a sudden drop of density.

> 01:19:942 (44) - not sure why'd you choose an off-beat mapping strategy here. The mapping channel is unclear. Let's try:

At first glance the suggestion looks cleaner and clearer.

01:27:364 - / 01:27:983 - should share the same thing since they are the same in interpretation method in music (similar to 00:45:921 (7,8) - )

You can have your own fix of course. It is just a suggestion anyway to clarify the patterns.

> 02:36:644 (11,12) - change to kat due to the high pitch? No, because it ruins overall repetition. + its not high pitch, its just strong vocal and in this section I dont map vocals

! 03:10:044 - / 03:42:209 - this section should be similar with 02:09:426 - / 01:10:045 - . It is Kantan anyway, repeatitive patterns are acceptable, surprisingly they are preferred. Please refer to the mentioned mods as well.

> 03:42:209 - add a don to fill in the unnatural 4/1 gap.

[Futsuu]

! The overall structure and cuts are very loosen. Futsuu needs a in-depth care.

! From 00:20:560 (35) - to 00:30:457 - these 4 bars as an example, the pattern usages are inconsistent. 00:30:457 - is a more obvious section.

Let's try a more consistent pattern like: 00:20:560 (1) -


00:20:560 (1) - n nnn n + n nnn n for 2 bars
00:25:509 (11) - n n nnn + n n nnn for other 2 bars

00:27:055 - / 00:29:529 - notes are put on these 2 clear vocal notes.

This pattern would be considered as tidy and clean because of clear structure formation. You can compare it with yours. Try fixing the pattern usages in a very large extent among the whole difficulty, when and if necessary.

> Kiais look fine and do not have the problem mentioned above. Surprisingly you may overlook the normal sections only.

[]

This mapset is undermapped in overall speaking (not a big deal). The spread between Kantan, Futsuu and GD Muzukashii is fine. However, the difficulties themselves have more rooms for improvement as far as I inspect and expect. Good luck! :D
Thank you for the mod Skylish! :)
Volta

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[Volta's Muzukashii]

> 00:03:859 (6,7) - ctrl+G for a better pitch flow, same as 00:08:808 (14,15) - retained for same color scheme with 00:13:756 (24,25,26) -

> 00:39:426 - / 00:49:323 - / ... although I know that you map the instrumental layer concretely, shifting it 1/4 forward to match the vocal note can bring a refreshing feeling to the 'dough' patterns, as a new kick-off of new section (Bar:16/20/...) although it match the vocal, it breaks the feel of the music so no change.

> 00:57:055 (149,150) - lyrics 'do do', same notes usage as well? sure, changed 150 to d

> 01:16:694 - add a note here since this ornament music is unique apart from 01:12:983 - / 01:11:127 - / ... added in last kiai for progression

> 01:21:797 - missed a kat to show the difference with 01:24:272 - emptiness. i think both emptiness are identical since the flows generally stopped there leaving only vocal and some background noise

> 01:26:591 - same as 01:16:694 -

> 02:27:364 (242,243) - ctrl+G to match the drum kick perfectly rearranged a bit

> 02:37:261 - not sure why not k here too, the flow is acceptable even it is a kat fixed

> 02:56:437 - nnn n is smoother than n nnn. The vocal density is tensed at 02:56:591 - both pattern can be used since vocal is actually occured 5 times at 02:56:437 (47,48,49,50) - , but i prefer current pattern to make a variety between 02:53:962 (40,41,42,43,44) -

! Imo the last Kiai progression comes too late. The previous 3 Kiais are too blend comparitively. More self-mods may enhance the expression of progression in a better format.

[]

This mapset is undermapped in overall speaking (not a big deal). The spread between Kantan, Futsuu and GD Muzukashii is fine. However, the difficulties themselves have more rooms for improvement as far as I inspect and expect. Good luck! :D
thanks for the mod~
update: https://volta.s-ul.eu/bSVNzN25
hikiko-
hello sorry i finally got around to doing this
[Kantan]
00:45:921 (48) - this offbeat k doesn’t fit - because the instrumental’s rhythm scheme doesn’t change (the synth notes continue to occur on beats 1, 2, and 3 of every bar), the rhythm change seems a bit abrupt. you can balance this with the stuff you’re doing 00:47:777 (50,51,52,53) - here by putting a d at 00:45:303 - and moving this k to 00:46:540 -
01:11:901 - add a k here. you have a group of 5 1/1 notes at the start of the kiai @ 01:00:148 (4,5,6,7,8) - , so adding a k would make for another group of 5 that correlates with that part
01:14:993 (21,22) - change these 2 to k, the chord in the instrumental here is higher pitch than the bars before so ks would work well
01:52:107 (60,61) - ctrl+g these two notes - in the section before this (from 01:52:107 (60,61) - to 01:52:107 (60,61) - ), you establish a flow of k for 2/1 then d for 2/1, so switching these 2 would allow for a correlating flow of d for 2/1 and k for 2/1 in this section
02:14:374 (6,7) - change these two to k for the same reason as before
02:26:747 (3,4) - changing these to k would reduce a bit of the d monotony and help lead into the lower chord at 02:29:220 - . you can change 02:34:170 (8,9) - to k for the same reason
02:54:582 (29,30) - ctrl+g these if you want, it would make this triplet consistent with all the other dkd and kdk triplets you have in this section
03:14:993 (19,20) - and 03:34:787 (41,42) - change to k, same as before
[Futsuu]
00:54:272 (102) - making this k would be nice - provides for variety with 00:49:014 (91,92,93) - and highlights the vocal syllables being the same @ 00:54:272 (102,103) -
01:15:612 - , 02:14:993 - , and 03:15:611 - i’d suggest adding a d here since this seems oddly sparse given how relatively 1/2 heavy the rest of the kiai is
for the section from 02:39:117 - to 02:55:199 - i’d suggest exploring how to use kkd 1/1 triplets while still maintaining the d k d k structure you have going on, just for some more variety’s sake
from 03:39:735 - to the end, you could also look into some more structured variety here just to take away a bit of the monotony
[Volta’s Muzukashii]
00:19:632 (37,38) - ctrl+g? you pattern this melody so that pitch goes upward at 00:09:426 (15,16,17) - , so switching the notes here would both make for consistency and match the synth melody and drums going up in pitch (change @ 01:48:705 (135,136) - too if you apply this)
01:03:550 (11) - changing this to k would contrast with 01:00:148 (1,2,3), where note 3 of the vocals is an entire octave higher whereas the 2 syllables at 01:03:550 (11,12) - are the same pitch (also change @ 02:02:931 (175) - and 03:03:550 (11) - if you apply this)
01:31:694 (85) - change to k; serves as a nice highlight to the snap/whatever higher pitch percussion sound is in the background and makes the note consistent with the corresponding notes in this section @ 01:34:169 (91) - , 01:36:643 (97) - , and 01:39:117 (106) -
also just a general point: i notice that you only introduced 2-color doublets in the last kiai, and they’re used fairly often there. it would probably be good to use a few more in, say, the second and third kiais for progression’s sake
good luck with rank! ^^
Volta
@hikikochan: almost fixed all, and made some multicolor duplet in 2nd and 3rd kiai. thank you!

osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Kamisama ni Natta Hi
TitleUnicode:神様になった日
Artist:REOL
ArtistUnicode:RΞOL
Creator:salchow
Version:Volta's Muzukashii
Source:
Tags:J-pop Volta Sigma Giga-P れをる
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Topic Starter
salchow

hikikochan wrote:

hello sorry i finally got around to doing this
[notice][Kantan]
00:45:921 (48) - this offbeat k doesn’t fit - because the instrumental’s rhythm scheme doesn’t change (the synth notes continue to occur on beats 1, 2, and 3 of every bar), the rhythm change seems a bit abrupt. you can balance this with the stuff you’re doing 00:47:777 (50,51,52,53) - here by putting a d at 00:45:303 - and moving this k to 00:46:540 -
01:11:901 - add a k here. you have a group of 5 1/1 notes at the start of the kiai @ 01:00:148 (4,5,6,7,8) - , so adding a k would make for another group of 5 that correlates with that part
01:14:993 (21,22) - change these 2 to k, the chord in the instrumental here is higher pitch than the bars before so ks would work well
01:52:107 (60,61) - ctrl+g these two notes - in the section before this (from 01:52:107 (60,61) - to 01:52:107 (60,61) - ), you establish a flow of k for 2/1 then d for 2/1, so switching these 2 would allow for a correlating flow of d for 2/1 and k for 2/1 in this section
02:14:374 (6,7) - change these two to k for the same reason as before
02:26:747 (3,4) - changing these to k would reduce a bit of the d monotony and help lead into the lower chord at 02:29:220 - . you can change 02:34:170 (8,9) - to k for the same reason
02:54:582 (29,30) - ctrl+g these if you want, it would make this triplet consistent with all the other dkd and kdk triplets you have in this section
03:14:993 (19,20) - and 03:34:787 (41,42) - change to k, same as before
[Futsuu]
00:54:272 (102) - making this k would be nice - provides for variety with 00:49:014 (91,92,93) - and highlights the vocal syllables being the same @ 00:54:272 (102,103) -
01:15:612 - , 02:14:993 - , and 03:15:611 - i’d suggest adding a d here since this seems oddly sparse given how relatively 1/2 heavy the rest of the kiai is
for the section from 02:39:117 - to 02:55:199 - i’d suggest exploring how to use kkd 1/1 triplets while still maintaining the d k d k structure you have going on, just for some more variety’s sake
from 03:39:735 - to the end, you could also look into some more structured variety here just to take away a bit of the monotony
added almost all of them. thx hikiko! :)
Topic Starter
salchow
18:01 salchow: Hi, can you give some opinions about my map?
18:02 Kin: sure
18:02 *salchow is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1411935 REOL - Kamisama ni Natta Hi]
18:12 Kin: im falling asleep with a 4min futsuu xd
18:12 salchow: X)
18:14 Kin: ye
18:14 Kin: as i though
18:15 Kin: just be careful about note density between futsuu & muzu
18:15 Kin: in the intro
18:15 salchow: ok
18:17 salchow: so should I remove these notes: 00:01:076 (2) - 00:06:024 (10) - ?
18:18 Kin: https://puu.sh/zcfQl/33bd37f314.png
18:18 Kin: ye that should work
18:19 salchow: is that it??
18:19 salchow: but what program did you use?
18:20 Kin: modding assistant
18:21 salchow: ok
18:22 salchow: updated
22:04 salchow: Hi, can you give some opinions about my map please? :3
22:04 Jonawaga: hi
22:04 Jonawaga: hmm
22:04 Jonawaga: what specifically?
22:04 salchow: if there are any minor issues
22:05 Jonawaga: such as... ?
22:05 salchow: just anything + spread
22:05 Jonawaga: ok...
22:05 *salchow is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1411935 REOL - Kamisama ni Natta Hi]
22:06 Jonawaga: im not accepting modding requests in game atm...
22:06 Jonawaga: but i will at least look..
22:06 salchow: ok
22:09 Jonawaga: futsuu needs more breaks
22:09 salchow: ok
22:10 Jonawaga: like 2/1 or 3/2 breaks
22:10 salchow: hmm like where?
22:11 Jonawaga: like if you can find areas with a long chain of 1/1 and 2/1
22:11 Jonawaga: long chains of 1/1 and 1/2 ***
22:11 Jonawaga: they should probably be reduced
22:12 Jonawaga: 00:19:942 - / 00:59:529 - you need a lot more 3/2 or 2/1 breaks here
22:12 Jonawaga: i dont want to do an in depth mod because im closed for mods atm
22:12 Jonawaga: sorrrry
22:13 salchow: ok
22:13 Jonawaga: >w</
22:13 Jonawaga: best of luck sir
22:13 salchow: thanks for pointing out atleast
22:13 salchow: :3
22:13 Jonawaga: of course
lazyboy007
heyho mod from queue ^^

Relatively new to modding taiko, so take what I say with a grain of salt haha.

[Kantan]

Generally the map has odd rhythm choices imo. It doesn't feel like it sticks to either the beat of the vocals as is, but it might be boring to do so. Still a bit more rhythmical structure would be nice to have, mainly to help with the predictability of the patterns ^^. Also lacks a bit of diversity with K's and D's, I'll suggest some below.

  1. 00:39:117 (41) - might be nice to make this a D instead
  2. 00:49:014 (1) - would be a nice place for a K
  3. 00:58:911 (3) - a K would be fitting here
  4. 01:18:705 (26) - same sound as the first one, so a D would make it consistent, but there's two reds before so probably make it a K?
  5. 01:20:560 - would add a note here, feels too empty compared to the speed of the vocals
  6. 01:38:498 (47) - D like the first one ^^(or make both K's I guess for consistency with the other one), same with 01:58:293 (67) - 02:37:880 - 03:18:705 (23) - 03:38:498 (45) - 03:58:292 (59) -
  7. 02:10:045 - also feels too empty here
  8. 02:14:374 (6,7) - any reason those two are on the drum hs?
  9. 02:19:323 - this part is a bit too empty, though it does fit the dropping intensity. Just filling the giant gaps with a single circle would be nice.
  10. 03:39:735 - this is way too empty imo. It is softer than the kiai for sure, but not that much softer. I'd even say it's more intense than the parts outside the kiai this far, so this low density feels unfitting.


[Futsuu]

Same applies with D's and K's as above, as well as the last section being really too low density, otherwise this is fun and quite nice imo :D

[Volta's Muzukashii]

Cool diif. My biggest complaint here is the placement of the color swapped triples and doubles. Since they're harder to play, they should be more present in the kiais, yet they are found at seemingly random places in the map, such as here 01:43:138 (117,118,119) - . I wish this distribution was more logical, with few to no colorswapping doubles/triples outside of the kiai and a decent amount during the kiais. Otherwise nice diff to play ^^

This set could really use an Oni diff, even if just a 3*5-ish one, the muzu doesn't exploit the song to the fullest :3

Good luck!
Topic Starter
salchow

lazyboy007 wrote:

heyho mod from queue ^^

Relatively new to modding taiko, so take what I say with a grain of salt haha.

[Kantan]

Generally the map has odd rhythm choices imo. It doesn't feel like it sticks to either the beat of the vocals as is ( it is literally between them, so its kinda improvised structure ) , but it might be boring to do so. Still a bit more rhythmical structure would be nice to have, mainly to help with the predictability of the patterns ^^. Also lacks a bit of diversity with K's and D's, I'll suggest some below.

  1. 00:39:117 (41) - might be nice to make this a D instead
  2. 00:49:014 (1) - would be a nice place for a K
  3. 00:58:911 (3) - a K would be fitting here
  4. 01:18:705 (26) - same sound as the first one, so a D would make it consistent, but there's two reds before so probably make it a K?
  5. 01:20:560 - would add a note here, feels too empty compared to the speed of the vocals
  6. 01:38:498 (47) - D like the first one ^^(or make both K's I guess for consistency with the other one), same with 01:58:293 (67) - 02:37:880 - 03:18:705 (23) - 03:38:498 (45) - 03:58:292 (59) -
  7. 02:10:045 - also feels too empty here
  8. 02:14:374 (6,7) - any reason those two are on the drum hs? lol probably just miss clicked.
  9. 02:19:323 - this part is a bit too empty, though it does fit the dropping intensity. Just filling the giant gaps with a single circle would be nice. did kdk pattern instead of kd
  10. 03:39:735 - this is way too empty imo. It is softer than the kiai for sure, but not that much softer. I'd even say it's more intense than the parts outside the kiai this far, so this low density feels unfitting. I think its alright tbh because the vocals stop like in the beginning.


I didnt added the finishers to those notes you mentioned because I feel like it dosent have enough impact for a finisher so I used oposite note of the first note to emphasize the sound.

[Futsuu]

Same applies with D's and K's as above, as well as the last section being really too low density, otherwise this is fun and quite nice imo :D

Good luck! thanks!
ty for the mod ;)
Ellyu
I love modding v1

[general]
02:58:911 - this red timing point could be deleted i think. or they plays weird in nightcore mod.

[Muzu]
00:39:581 - 00:49:478 - could add a note
01:04:323 (13,14,15,16) - 01:06:797 (20,21,22,23) - same pitch so I think they could be both kk d d.
02:03:704 (177,178,179,180) - 02:06:179 (184,185,186,187) - ...etc same as above
01:53:035 (147,148,149) - in this diff only this triplet is muticolored. is it intentional?
01:58:292 (164) - add finish? cause in other diffs this is a finish
02:27:983 (243) - d would be better for the kick.
02:39:736 (3) - a really special clap hit here so it's better to add a finish
02:56:437 (47,48,49,50) - low pitch so i think they should be d ddd
03:50:869 (151,152,153,154,155) - the last 2 note sould like high pitch to low pitch. how about dkkkd or another something.

[Futsuu]
this map is composed mainly with 2/1 beat, therefore you need some 6/1 rests i think.
00:20:560 (33) - a big D is always better for the downbeat.
01:09:427 (125,126) - how about delete these 2 notes? cause the kiai part is lack of 2/1 rest
02:08:808 (234,235) - same as above
01:32:313 (165,166,167,168) - sounds like dkd k is better for the pitch
01:39:736 (179,180,181) - 01:42:211 (184,185,186) - 01:44:685 (189,190,191) - it's would be found to see three same dkd in this little loop
01:49:633 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - same as above
02:19:323 (254) - could be deleted to emphasize 02:19:942 (255) - just like what volta do in his diff. and there will be a 6/1 rest too.
03:39:117 (41,42,43) - kkD sounds like better for the pitch

[Kantan]
same as futsuu. you need 6/1 rest too.
no big problem in this diff i think.

good song. and neat map too.
Volta

Ellyu wrote:

I love modding v1

[Muzu]
00:39:581 - 00:49:478 - could add a note the pattern constellation would be too long so no change
01:04:323 (13,14,15,16) - 01:06:797 (20,21,22,23) - same pitch so I think they could be both kk d d. retained for variety
02:03:704 (177,178,179,180) - 02:06:179 (184,185,186,187) - ...etc same as above same as above
01:53:035 (147,148,149) - in this diff only this triplet is muticolored. is it intentional? there are two, and yes it's intentional. i think i should introduce 1 or 2 multiolored triplet, should be fine since it's followed with break.
01:58:292 (164) - add finish? cause in other diffs this is a finish i think it would reduce the impact of the start of the kiai (01:59:529 - )
so no change.

02:27:983 (243) - d would be better for the kick. it's boring imo, if i followed the mindset d for kick and k for snare the whole section would be just k-d-k-d-k-d-k-d
02:39:736 (3) - a really special clap hit here so it's better to add a finish hmm not really special to me
02:56:437 (47,48,49,50) - low pitch so i think they should be d ddd considering the percusion sound, k kkk is also fine imo
03:50:869 (151,152,153,154,155) - the last 2 note sould like high pitch to low pitch. how about dkkkd or another something. changed

good song. and neat map too.

lazyboy007 wrote:

heyho mod from queue ^^

Relatively new to modding taiko, so take what I say with a grain of salt haha.

[Volta's Muzukashii]

Cool diif. My biggest complaint here is the placement of the color swapped triples and doubles. Since they're harder to play, they should be more present in the kiais, yet they are found at seemingly random places in the map, such as here 01:43:138 (117,118,119) - . I wish this distribution was more logical, with few to no colorswapping doubles/triples outside of the kiai and a decent amount during the kiais. Otherwise nice diff to play ^^
In some cases monocolor is harder than multicolor pattern. if i used the multi, it was in short pattern sequence or followed with break, while i use mono mostly in the middle of longer pattern sequence so i think it's very logical and fine.

This set could really use an Oni diff, even if just a 3*5-ish one, the muzu doesn't exploit the song to the fullest :3

Good luck!
thanks for the mod~
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96,160,167158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,96,172107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,172416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,172725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,173035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,173344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,173962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,174117,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,174272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,174581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,174890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,128,175818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,176437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,176746,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,96,176901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,177055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,177364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,177674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,178292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,160,178602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,180148,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,128,180457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,180766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,181385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,181694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,181849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,182004,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,182313,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,182622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,183241,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,183550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,183859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,184321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,184478,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,96,185096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,160,186024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,186334,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,160,186952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,187261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,187571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,188034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,160,188498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,188808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,189117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,189271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,189426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,189735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,190045,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,64,190354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,128,190663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,191282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,191591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,191746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,191900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,192210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,192519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,193138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,193446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,128,193601,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,193756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,194065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,194374,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,194683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,194993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,195611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,195921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,196230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,196694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,196848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,197157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,197468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,197777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,197931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,198085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,198394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,198704,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,96,199014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,199323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,199942,1,4,0:0:0:0:
32,160,200251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,200560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,201178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,201487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,201642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,201797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,202106,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,202415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,202879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,203034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,203343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,203652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,204116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,204271,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,204580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,204889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,205353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,205508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,205817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,206127,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,206590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,160,207054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,160,209220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,160,209529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,209838,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,96,210148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,128,210457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,211075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,211384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,211539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,96,212932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,213240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,128,213395,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,213550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,213859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,214168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,214477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,214787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,215406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,215715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,224,216024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,216488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,216643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,160,216952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,217261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,96,218189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,218498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,218808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,96,219736,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Lyawi
[Kantan]
  1. 00:30:457 (31) - making this k would make it more interesting I guess. 00:20:560 - you used a k aswell, leaving 00:30:457 (31) - not as k feels weird to me
  2. 00:39:117 (41,42) - would probably ctrl+g this
  3. 00:41:592 (43) - to be honest, having a k sounds "too much" imo, so I would suggest making this d. 00:42:829 (45,46,47,48) - sounds and plays much more interesting then
  4. 01:54:582 (63) - would make this k, to me it just sounds like it's really missing or something lol

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:49:014 (83,84,85) - you might change this to dkk? 00:49:323 (84) - got a pretty high sound
  2. 01:22:416 - intended this isn't mapped?
  3. would delete the note at 01:41:592 (181) - , at 01:31:694 - you didn't map it aswell and sounds fine without it. same goes for 01:44:066 (185) -
  4. 01:51:489 (197,202) - ^?
  5. 02:27:983 (9) - how about making this k
  6. 02:57:674 - somehow sounds higher, so maybe make this k


[Volta's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:859 (6,7) - ctrl+g?
  2. would delete 03:59:220 - , making 03:58:910 (171) - as a d and adding a d at 03:59:838 (173) - maybe?


such a great map, I hope this will be ranked soon :>
Topic Starter
salchow

Lyawi wrote:

[Kantan]
  1. 00:30:457 (31) - making this k would make it more interesting I guess. 00:20:560 - you used a k aswell, leaving 00:30:457 (31) - not as k feels weird to me Changed
  2. 00:39:117 (41,42) - would probably ctrl+g this
  3. 00:41:592 (43) - to be honest, having a k sounds "too much" imo, so I would suggest making this d. 00:42:829 (45,46,47,48) - sounds and plays much more interesting then
  4. 01:54:582 (63) - would make this k, to me it just sounds like it's really missing or something lol

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:49:014 (83,84,85) - you might change this to dkk? 00:49:323 (84) - got a pretty high sound Changed
  2. 01:22:416 - intended this isn't mapped? Yes, because the instruments stops.
  3. would delete the note at 01:41:592 (181) - , at 01:31:694 - you didn't map it aswell and sounds fine without it. same goes for 01:44:066 (185) -
  4. 01:51:489 (197,202) - ^? Somehow changed
  5. 02:27:983 (9) - how about making this k
  6. 02:57:674 - somehow sounds higher, so maybe make this k



such a great map, I hope this will be ranked soon :>
Thx. Just waiting for Surono to exist :^ ) and thx for the mod! I'll be modding your map this week.
Volta

Lyawi wrote:

[Volta's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:859 (6,7) - ctrl+g? retained for mirrored pattern with 00:01:385 (2,3) -
  2. would delete 03:59:220 - , making 03:58:910 (171) - as a d and adding a d at 03:59:838 (173) - maybe? it's not bad, but i prefer to make the ending 03:59:529 (173,174,175,176) - consistent with the intro, ex: 00:13:138 (23,24,25,26) -


such a great map, I hope this will be ranked soon :>
thanks for the mod~
neonat
Kantan

Don't know why the SV in the notepad seems to be SliderMultiplier:1.39655958129884

00:37:261 (39) - shift the note to 00:36:024 - the part here in the song is similar to 00:29:839 - 00:32:313 and 00:34:787 - it felt kinda weird for this one to differ
00:44:684 - feels empty after that pattern at 00:41:592 (43,44,45) -
00:50:251 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why does this follow this rhythm when it differs from 00:45:303 (47,48,49,50,51,1) - and is more like the rhythm used beforehand?
01:32:314 (40,41,42) - k k d with the lowering of pitch down the pattern? You did have that at 01:22:416 (29,30,31) - before a d k d 01:24:891 (32,33,34) - earlier on
03:33:550 (40) - k instead? The pitch goes back up here
03:45:921 - unlike 03:50:869 where there isn't new vocals not really seeing an obvious change in the music here for the sudden rest

Futsuu

00:22:416 (37) - removing this could give the music there more emphasis on that pause like you did at 00:23:653 (39,40,41,42) - having it repeated also helps brings across that rhythm so it stands out more
01:22:416 - really odd gap here, the music beat here is really strong
01:55:819 (204,205) - k d? 01:55:819 (204) is higher pitched compared to both 01:55:200 (203,205) -

Muzukashii

00:49:323 (126) - given how this is higher than 00:49:014 (125) - it seems nicer with k
00:55:509 (145,146,147) - music is like 00:56:746 (148,149,150) - with the kdd
02:12:518 (205) - having it different from 02:12:828 (206,207,208) - by being d might be nice since eventually at the triple beat there is the increase in tone, which is higher than the earlier phrase at 02:00:766 (168,169,170,171) - , also think that d k k d might be better at 02:13:447 (209,210,211,212) - and that the d k d d would have been better at 02:17:777 (223,224,225,226) - would then apply as well at the other kiais 01:13:137 (40,41,42,43) - 03:13:138 (41,42,43,44) - 03:32:932 (105,106,107,108) - and their subsequent parts (the d k k d, d k d d)
02:27:983 (243) - really don't think it should be the same as 02:27:364 (242,244) - given how clear the change in the tone in the music is, 02:29:839 (2,3) - could have been k k while 02:31:076 (4,5) - would be d k


Good Luck
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