Hi~ from my queue. :3thx for the mod Tyistiana
Please keep in mind that this is only my opinion. Feel free~
- Isn't the artist spelling of this music is REOL instead of Reol. But it doesn't that a big problem I guess. :3 it doesnt matter because skystar's Asymmetry has Reol instead of REOL
- Σ is really hard to search because there don't have this symbol in this keyboard. Try tag "sigma" for the ease while searching~ I just removed it instead
00:05:993 - Change to d , to keep consistence to 00:07:230 (7) which it have the same pitch. Changed I guess
00:09:086 moves to 00:09:704 - In order to emphasize the distinguish pitch. It doesn't really fit tho
00:19:601 - Maybe add a note here, a distinguish pitch. =w= Same as the previous
03:23:931 - If we have compare the vocal here to the behind one (-03:22:694-) , this have a higher vocal so might change 03:23:931 to k Changed
03:40:013 - After this part, note dense is too far away. Might use 2/1 rhythm instead of 2/1 and 4/1 mix rhythm. If you're confuse what I'm saying here, I
mean you to might add a note on 03:42:487 - 03:46:199 - 03:49:291 - 03:51:147. The melody still herald here. And to make the note dense become better here.
00:19:601 - Finisher here isn't fit as well. It will make 00:20:838 pitch getting less attention. Changed
03:25:168 - How about k since the vocal here is high. Nah, it kills the ddk/kkd pattern in that section
03:40:013 - Why this is not D since even Kantan is use D here. 1/2 finisher here would be the most challenge part for this Futsuu :3 Changed kantan a bit
03:43:106 - 03:50:529 - Might add a note here. Too continuous 2/1 break here might cause boring to Futsuu player. Added some patterns
And after 03:40:013 part, I suggest to use some 1/2 pattern to not make the dense between Futsuu and Muzukashii become nice and not too far away.
This song and map is both nice >w<!
Good luck for ranking~ ty