REOL - Kamisama ni Natta Hi [Taiko]

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salchow

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~ from my queue. :3
Please keep in mind that this is only my opinion. Feel free~

[ General]
  1. Isn't the artist spelling of this music is REOL instead of Reol. But it doesn't that a big problem I guess. :3 it doesnt matter because skystar's Asymmetry has Reol instead of REOL
  2. Σ is really hard to search because there don't have this symbol in this keyboard. Try tag "sigma" for the ease while searching~ I just removed it instead


[Kantan]
00:05:993 - Change to d , to keep consistence to 00:07:230 (7) which it have the same pitch. Changed I guess
00:09:086 moves to 00:09:704 - In order to emphasize the distinguish pitch. It doesn't really fit tho
00:19:601 - Maybe add a note here, a distinguish pitch. =w= Same as the previous
03:23:931 - If we have compare the vocal here to the behind one (-03:22:694-) , this have a higher vocal so might change 03:23:931 to k Changed
03:40:013 - After this part, note dense is too far away. Might use 2/1 rhythm instead of 2/1 and 4/1 mix rhythm. If you're confuse what I'm saying here, I
mean you to might add a note on 03:42:487 - 03:46:199 - 03:49:291 - 03:51:147. The melody still herald here. And to make the note dense become better here.

[Futsuu]
00:19:601 - Finisher here isn't fit as well. It will make 00:20:838 pitch getting less attention. Changed
03:25:168 - How about k since the vocal here is high. Nah, it kills the ddk/kkd pattern in that section
03:40:013 - Why this is not D since even Kantan is use D here. 1/2 finisher here would be the most challenge part for this Futsuu :3 Changed kantan a bit
03:43:106 - 03:50:529 - Might add a note here. Too continuous 2/1 break here might cause boring to Futsuu player. Added some patterns
And after 03:40:013 part, I suggest to use some 1/2 pattern to not make the dense between Futsuu and Muzukashii become nice and not too far away.


This song and map is both nice >w<!
Good luck for ranking~ :)ty :)
thx for the mod Tyistiana :)
Volta

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~ from my queue. :3
Please keep in mind that this is only my opinion. Feel free~

[Volta's Muzukashii]
00:04:137 (6,7) - Only my opinion , might Ctrl+G since 00:03:209 (4) have a similar tone to 00:04:756 (7) more than 00:04:137 (6) Retained for mirrored pattern with 00:01:663 (2,3) - and 00:06:612 (10,11) -
00:14:034 (24,25,26) - ^ same as ^, it is mirrored from 00:11:560 (19,20,21) -
02:19:601 - If have a note here, it would be nice to end kiai with a note. 2/1 break here is too blank imo. since all instrument are stopped here except the vocal, i think it would be nice to leave it empty and give more emphasis to crash sound at 02:20:220 -
02:21:766 - How about d to match the similar vocal on 02:31:663 hmm i think making a variation would be nicer there due to empty space above ^
02:37:539 - How about k , this pitch is a clap sound. (With this suggestion , should change 02:38:158 to d will make more compatible) i think d is fine to highlight the decreased pitch of the violin. also at 02:38:158 - i hear percussion sound that can be reflected better with k

Already nice, I love this diff :3

This song and map is both nice >w<!
Good luck for ranking~ :)
thanks for the mod tystiana~
-Kazu-
mod req from my queue

[General]
  1. While this is not important since the quality is still okay-ish, probably you can find a 192kbps quality mp3 and use that instead since its the maximum allowed and probably the minimum you should use on every map. Not like this is a super rare to find song to not try to get a quality mp3 out there~
  2. Artist should be "RΞOL", Romanized Artist "REOL", Title "神様になった日", Romanized title is ok (Kamisama ni Natta Hi)
  3. Add the following tags: "Sigma" (romanized title of the disc this song comes from), "Giga-P" (arranger of the song), "れをる" ( "reworu", considering the artist should be "RΞOL", you need to add Reol to tags as the difference comes as "RΞOL" is the band and "Reol" is the singer), "Toy's Factory" (record label over RΞOL. It's the same as other well known artists such as Babymetal, Daoko and Bump of Chicken so its probably a common search tag).
  4. I'm not completely sure about what is the reason for the tags you're using right now (of course other than "J-pop"(genre) "Reol"(member of band) and "Volta" (guest mapper) if you could give me clarification about these I'd appreciate it (for example taiko isn't needed since you can just filter by taiko maps regardless of them having the tag or not, so its redundant to have it)-


[Kantan]
  1. Unsnapped green line in 03:00:426 - (the inherited point is at 03:00:427), same at 03:40:013 - (inherited point is at 03:40:015)
  2. Pattern wise I can't really go linking 999 notes asking you to change so I'll just tell you my main concern, at the kiai you completely follow the lead synths which is perfectly okay, but you miss on a lot of claps that are probably much more relevant to the map than the synths, which can spice a bit the diff by not overusing 1/1 triplets the whole kiai. I don't think this is gonna be a hassle to apply without adding too much difficulty to the map, because you do exactly what I say on the section from 00:40:632 - to 01:00:426 - . (this made me remember, please change 00:47:437 (49) - to k to stick to the clap)
  3. 01:14:035 (78,79,80) - probably this triplet can be changed to dkd to represent the clap on the middle and to make it better at following the synth(makes it consistent as you start most synth-following triplets with a d)
  4. 02:23:931 - maybe add a k for flavor here, as the gap from the previous note is kinda too long and even for a kantan diff you probably don't want to break too much the flow feeling the map has. Probably a good idea to do the same on 02:26:405 - , 02:31:354 - , 02:33:828 - and 02:36:302 - .


[Futsuu]
  1. Uncheck the "Widescreen Support" box
  2. There is a LOT of unsnapped objects. Go to Timing>Resnap all notes to fix this (make sure you have your beat divisor set at 1/2 else all the 1/2 notes will stack on 1/1 snaps)
  3. Unsnapped green line at 02:19:601 - (it is on 02:19:602 right now). Same at 03:00:426 - (green line is in 03:00:427) and 03:40:013 - (it is in 03:40:015 right now)
  4. 00:31:972 (58,59) - and 00:34:447 (63,64) - : CTRL+G. I firmly believe you shouldn't map claps to d even for abekobe reasons
  5. 00:46:200 (85,86,87,88) - while you probably know I hate vocalmapping as I stated on my queue, this really doesnt resemble really well the song even if its carbon copy of it just because it breaks the flow badly and doesnt do a good job at patterning into the following notes that you should probably just stick to whatever else. Just so you know, you do really good at 00:57:334 (105,106,107,108) - because it DOES have a good flowing pattern with the following section even if its vocalmapped, so yeah, I really believe you should modify the first probably in the way you did on the second.
  6. 02:20:220 - probably a good idea to add a note here since it is supported by the song and this isn't kantan anymore (I guess lmao)
  7. 02:53:623 (49) - change to k, same reason as 00:31:973


[Volta's Muzukashii]
  1. 02:19:601 - unsnapped green line (it is at 02:19:602), same in 03:00:426 - (it is at 03:00:427) and 03:40:013 - (it is at 03:40:015)
  2. to be honest the only thing I don't like from this map is the usage of notes like 01:16:508 (50,51) - on vocals, breaking completely the feel of the music which also happens mostly in kiais so its double trouble over here. This happens again on 03:16:508 (50,51) - so please also modify these
  3. Also, 01:07:075 (20,21) - and 02:06:456 (185,186) - 03:07:075 (20,21) - 03:26:868 (83,84) - should be dk mostly because thats what they sound like and the dd really feels off as I really believe the claps are the most relevant notes to follow on the song as they are the loudest most the time
  4. Other than that, really well structured map I really like it.


as a final word, I think the spread is kind of good (though they feel like Easy Kantan - Kantan - Inner Kantan xd) but it kinda bothers me that this set doesn't have a Oni diff considering the amount of notes skipped in Volta's Muzukashii, so if you end up getting an Oni diff I can probably check that out too, since I'll probably be around for the tags problem

Anyways, good luck with ranking process and Merry Christmas~
Topic Starter
salchow

-Kazu- wrote:

mod req from my queue

[General]
  1. While this is not important since the quality is still okay-ish, probably you can find a 192kbps quality mp3 and use that instead since its the maximum allowed and probably the minimum you should use on every map. Not like this is a super rare to find song to not try to get a quality mp3 out there~
  2. Artist should be "RΞOL", Romanized Artist "REOL", Title "神様になった日", Romanized title is ok (Kamisama ni Natta Hi)
  3. Add the following tags: "Sigma" (romanized title of the disc this song comes from), "Giga-P" (arranger of the song), "れをる" ( "reworu", considering the artist should be "RΞOL", you need to add Reol to tags as the difference comes as "RΞOL" is the band and "Reol" is the singer), "Toy's Factory" (record label over RΞOL. It's the same as other well known artists such as Babymetal, Daoko and Bump of Chicken so its probably a common search tag).
  4. I'm not completely sure about what is the reason for the tags you're using right now (of course other than "J-pop"(genre) "Reol"(member of band) and "Volta" (guest mapper) if you could give me clarification about these I'd appreciate it (for example taiko isn't needed since you can just filter by taiko maps regardless of them having the tag or not, so its redundant to have it)-


[Kantan]
  1. Unsnapped green line in 03:00:426 - (the inherited point is at 03:00:427), same at 03:40:013 - (inherited point is at 03:40:015) fixed
  2. Pattern wise I can't really go linking 999 notes asking you to change so I'll just tell you my main concern, at the kiai you completely follow the lead synths which is perfectly okay, but you miss on a lot of claps that are probably much more relevant to the map than the synths, which can spice a bit the diff by not overusing 1/1 triplets the whole kiai. I don't think this is gonna be a hassle to apply without adding too much difficulty to the map, because you do exactly what I say on the section from 00:40:632 - to 01:00:426 - . (this made me remember, please change 00:47:437 (49) - to k to stick to the clap)
    I dont think its necessary
  3. 01:14:035 (78,79,80) - probably this triplet can be changed to dkd to represent the clap on the middle and to make it better at following the synth(makes it consistent as you start most synth-following triplets with a d) it makes sence a bit
  4. 02:23:931 - maybe add a k for flavor here, as the gap from the previous note is kinda too long and even for a kantan diff you probably don't want to break too much the flow feeling the map has. Probably a good idea to do the same on 02:26:405 - , 02:31:354 - , 02:33:828 - and 02:36:302 - . yhea, just to make it less boring i guess.


[Futsuu]
  1. Uncheck the "Widescreen Support" box fixed but its also kinda unnecessary
  2. There is a LOT of unsnapped objects. Go to Timing>Resnap all notes to fix this (make sure you have your beat divisor set at 1/2 else all the 1/2 notes will stack on 1/1 snaps) fixed
  3. Unsnapped green line at 02:19:601 - (it is on 02:19:602 right now). Same at 03:00:426 - (green line is in 03:00:427) and 03:40:013 - (it is in 03:40:015 right now) snapped green lines
  4. 00:31:972 (58,59) - and 00:34:447 (63,64) - : CTRL+G. I firmly believe you shouldn't map claps to d even for abekobe reasons also i think it fits better
  5. 00:46:200 (85,86,87,88) - while you probably know I hate vocalmapping as I stated on my queue, this really doesnt resemble really well the song even if its carbon copy of it just because it breaks the flow badly and doesnt do a good job at patterning into the following notes that you should probably just stick to whatever else. Just so you know, you do really good at 00:57:334 (105,106,107,108) - because it DOES have a good flowing pattern with the following section even if its vocalmapped, so yeah, I really believe you should modify the first probably in the way you did on the second. changed to kk kk
  6. 02:20:220 - probably a good idea to add a note here since it is supported by the song and this isn't kantan anymore (I guess lmao)
  7. 02:53:623 (49) - change to k, same reason as 00:31:973 changed and relocated pattern



as a final word, I think the spread is kind of good (though they feel like Easy Kantan - Kantan - Inner Kantan xd) but it kinda bothers me that this set doesn't have a Oni diff considering the amount of notes skipped in Volta's Muzukashii, so if you end up getting an Oni diff I can probably check that out too, since I'll probably be around for the tags problem I think its enough with kantan, futsuu and muzukashii.

Anyways, good luck with ranking process and Merry Christmas~ Ty and Merry Christmas Kazu! :3
Volta

-Kazu- wrote:

mod req from my queue

[Volta's Muzukashii]
  1. 02:19:601 - unsnapped green line (it is at 02:19:602), same in 03:00:426 - (it is at 03:00:427) and 03:40:013 - (it is at 03:40:015) fixed
  2. to be honest the only thing I don't like from this map is the usage of notes like 01:16:508 (50,51) - on vocals, breaking completely the feel of the music which also happens mostly in kiais so its double trouble over here. This happens again on 03:16:508 (50,51) - so please also modify these rearranged and now more coherent with 03:35:684 (112,113,114). -
  3. Also, 01:07:075 (20,21) - and 02:06:456 (185,186) - 03:07:075 (20,21) - 03:26:868 (83,84) - should be dk mostly because thats what they sound like and the dd really feels off as I really believe the claps are the most relevant notes to follow on the song as they are the loudest most the time hmm i think dd is also fine to give the map more variety
  4. Other than that, really well structured map I really like it.


as a final word, I think the spread is kind of good (though they feel like Easy Kantan - Kantan - Inner Kantan xd) but it kinda bothers me that this set doesn't have a Oni diff considering the amount of notes skipped in Volta's Muzukashii, so if you end up getting an Oni diff I can probably check that out too, since I'll probably be around for the tags problem

Anyways, good luck with ranking process and Merry Christmas~
thanks for the mod~
update: https://volta.s-ul.eu/F2cuRkrH
Surono
nyew ya sellcow

>not Oni volte
bagian akhir ada ritim kek truru 03:43:415 - tapi situ buatnya simpel 1/2, okelah gpp ntar ribet ngurus penyebaran di futsuu. namanya juga not oni kwkwk

>Futsuu
* 01:16:508 - from here make the structures pattern as k ddk d k since muzukashii has high density and it close with kantan density
* 02:15:890 - same as above

ye
Topic Starter
salchow
hi Suro :):)

Surono wrote:

nyew ya sellcow

>Futsuu
* 01:16:508 - from here make the structures pattern as k ddk d k since muzukashii has high density and it close with kantan density
* 02:15:890 - same as above

ye
changed on futsuu!
Volta
tutturu~
idenya bagus tapi no change deh untuk sekarnag karna pas gw liat ternyata futsuu nya sepi
Surono
Tags Conflict:
Kantan: Blue Taiko Drop Reol J-pop Lights Slow Volta
Futsuu: Reol J-pop Volta Sigma Giga-P れをる
Volta's Muzukashii: Reol J-pop Volta Sigma Giga-P れをる

02:59:189 - Enable omit first barline

03:00:426 - change the vol. of redline as like vol. of greenline in here

20:55 salchow: k volta replied
20:55 Surono: ye
20:55 salchow: ye
20:55 Surono: bla
20:56 salchow: bra
20:56 Surono: mom
20:56 Surono: mum
20:56 salchow: ok
20:57 salchow: im confiused
20:57 Surono: same
20:57 Surono: edit mode was misskek
20:58 salchow: very wow
20:58 salchow: just saying
20:58 salchow: is my map good enough for bubbl?
20:59 salchow: cuz idk how good it is
20:59 Surono: wow what are you talking about ma bro
20:59 Surono: dem srslsysht intensofos
20:59 Surono: ye wait
20:59 salchow: idk how good is my map
20:59 salchow: thats it
20:59 Surono: dw, you mapped god song about
21:00 Surono: same, idk hows good ur map
21:00 salchow: because it can be garbage
21:00 Surono: idk
21:00 Surono: slow song
21:00 salchow: ye
21:00 salchow: reol
21:00 Surono: and you just did random structurs mappin
21:00 Surono: ye why u didnt makin smth neat strucutus or idk
21:00 Surono: or volta did too
21:00 Surono: or idk
21:00 salchow: idk how
21:00 Surono: wait
21:01 Surono: this is why tacos is madnuts, zzzz
21:01 salchow: I need rick and morty for that
21:01 Surono: jsut done cat dont
21:01 salchow: tbbh
21:01 Surono: and yeh
21:01 Surono: just dont cat done TSSS DUMSSSSBB
21:01 Surono: yeh, taiko still make me confusd to play........
21:01 salchow: I just mapped vocals + claps
21:01 Surono: tahts why iplay ctb
21:01 Surono: yeh ez mapping
21:02 salchow: ctb no ez mapping
21:03 salchow: neither is std
21:03 Surono: wt
21:03 Surono: std
21:03 Surono: cricle orzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
21:03 Surono: ctb editor makes brain ded
21:04 Surono: posted, fix that.
21:04 salchow: ok
21:04 Surono: nike
21:04 Surono: nic
21:04 salchow: but how you change metadata
21:05 Surono: ,. copypaste
21:05 salchow: I have some cringy tags on kantan
21:05 Surono: de kantan tags
21:05 Surono: yeh thats it
21:05 Surono: eeks deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
21:05 Surono: blue taiko dropu
21:06 Surono: kantan has no jaBan words there rip
21:06 salchow: what do you mean by Enable omit first barline
21:06 Surono: 02:57:952 - F5 on editor
21:06 Surono: from here, you can see it :-D
21:07 Surono: close 2barlines in a screen :eyes: frukos always luv to pointing smth like this wow pros ppl nowadays
21:07 salchow: wtf is omit
21:07 Surono: yeh taco
21:07 Surono: smth smth like...... pishifat b4..
21:07 Surono: madnezz many redlines or idk
21:08 Surono: yeh taco....
21:08 salchow: is that really nesesery
21:08 Surono: yeh,.
21:08 Surono: unless u want make someone come and saying smth dem
21:08 salchow: ok'
21:08 Surono: yeh taco it is
21:09 salchow: now i understud
21:09 salchow: weaw
21:09 Surono: weow
21:09 Surono: understud de taco - _-
21:09 Surono: at least fruitz and circle tofu clicking still madnuts
21:10 Surono: piano still make sense... or bcus its guitar hero reference, orz rip rhythm gaem bms reference or sdvx wqdqhfwqk
21:11 salchow: ok i removed the green line
21:11 salchow: thing
21:11 salchow: and replaced with red
21:11 Surono: ,.
21:11 salchow: k
21:11 salchow: gud
21:11 salchow: ithink
21:11 Surono: ye replaced a.k.a jst lev red
21:11 Surono: ye ikr
21:11 Surono: taco thingy qqqq
21:11 Surono: ok.. now me playin ur diff, to thonk about idk
21:11 salchow: w8
21:11 salchow: uploding
21:12 Surono: de
21:12 salchow: k
21:12 salchow: dun
21:12 Surono: comeon dun tak
21:12 *Surono is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1411934 Reol - Kamisama Ni Natta Hi [Futsuu]] <Taiko>
21:12 Surono: imma playing with Vsync noice rip ye
21:13 salchow: W E O W
21:13 Surono: ,
21:15 Surono: wait,.
21:15 Surono: ew
21:15 salchow: ew
21:16 salchow: wat
21:16 Surono: 01:15:271 - did you remmbre my mod here, no chang jst sayin yes to ma post u dem - __
21:16 Surono: idk
21:16 Surono: zzzzzzzz taco confusd
21:16 salchow: ok
21:16 salchow: i dint chnage that
21:16 salchow: my mom did
21:16 Surono: yes nice
21:17 Surono: de wa. yea laifu.exe
21:17 salchow: is there more "ew" things
21:17 Surono: or wee
21:17 Surono: k ddk d k 1/2 i mean
21:17 Surono: nice taco logoc - _-
21:17 Surono: yeh its k ddk dk already but 1/1 idk
21:18 salchow: sery
21:18 Surono: ye wait
21:18 Surono: np, taco logoc is madnuts
21:18 salchow: but it fits
21:18 salchow: !
21:18 salchow: tho
21:18 Surono: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9871485
21:18 Surono: yeh same taco
21:18 Surono: rip density spread
21:19 salchow: what dio meant
21:20 Surono: just look volta density
21:20 Surono: its far, then kantan.. it close
21:21 salchow: LOL
21:21 Surono: taiko da important = density spread, we just rembre if nardo alwayz come to haunting retarded density tacoset
21:21 Surono: yea ikr
21:21 salchow: shlould it be more dense
21:21 Surono: yeh a bit, just like da SS
21:21 salchow: not my faoult
21:22 Surono: so who!??!
21:22 Surono: dont say ur mom
21:22 Surono: =_= quality rip joks
21:22 salchow: o1:18:055 should i add a k here?
21:22 Surono: nice o
21:23 Surono: nice
21:23 salchow: that means yes?
21:23 Surono: yeh k__dkd k
21:23 Surono: that means o, rip 0
21:23 Surono: yeh jst add there k and similer part
21:24 Surono: 01:18:364 - so delete kantan here and chng 01:18:983 - this as kat for minibreak , as futsuu density
21:25 Surono: so ye just that.. and overall ur futsuu.. 1/2 3plet, wheres 1/2 5plet rip .. zz orz volta mapped muzu just like easier oni =_= fuckin orz rip me thinkin spread
21:25 Surono: ok nvm, its fine.
21:26 salchow: k changed
21:26 Surono: so the concept to make it not boring.. and yeah increasin smth....
21:27 Surono: futsuu: 01:03:828 - k and etc similar spot
21:27 Surono: at least u shuld have 1 5plet 1/2 in futsuu, then
21:27 Surono: kantan: 01:02:282 - k , so ye 5plet 1/1 dkkkd
21:27 salchow: k
21:27 Surono: and etc etc
21:28 Surono: copypaste ,
21:28 Surono: offline, afk.

we were discussed about spread density for kantan and futsuu, but I still concerning about overall concept both of these diffs since Muzukashii has complex density spreading while futsuu and kantan just simple but for now its still fine by added some 5plet and some structures to balance with muzukashii to lower diffs

02:17:436 - 03:18:054 - you forget add these spot on futsuu
01:02:282 - 02:01:663 - 03:02:281 - 03:22:075 - add notes for these spot on Kantan to balance with futsuu density

and I would like you to selfmod about this thing, try ask volta for assistance.. if available lol
@Volta dibantu cieg ni org aj bingung soal teko qq
Topic Starter
salchow

Surono wrote:

Tags Conflict:
Kantan: Blue Taiko Drop Reol J-pop Lights Slow Volta
Futsuu: Reol J-pop Volta Sigma Giga-P れをる
Volta's Muzukashii: Reol J-pop Volta Sigma Giga-P れをる

02:59:189 - Enable omit first barline

03:00:426 - change the vol. of redline as like vol. of greenline in here

20:55 salchow: k volta replied
20:55 Surono: ye
20:55 salchow: ye
20:55 Surono: bla
20:56 salchow: bra
20:56 Surono: mom
20:56 Surono: mum
20:56 salchow: ok
20:57 salchow: im confiused
20:57 Surono: same
20:57 Surono: edit mode was misskek
20:58 salchow: very wow
20:58 salchow: just saying
20:58 salchow: is my map good enough for bubbl?
20:59 salchow: cuz idk how good it is
20:59 Surono: wow what are you talking about ma bro
20:59 Surono: dem srslsysht intensofos
20:59 Surono: ye wait
20:59 salchow: idk how good is my map
20:59 salchow: thats it
20:59 Surono: dw, you mapped god song about
21:00 Surono: same, idk hows good ur map
21:00 salchow: because it can be garbage
21:00 Surono: idk
21:00 Surono: slow song
21:00 salchow: ye
21:00 salchow: reol
21:00 Surono: and you just did random structurs mappin
21:00 Surono: ye why u didnt makin smth neat strucutus or idk
21:00 Surono: or volta did too
21:00 Surono: or idk
21:00 salchow: idk how
21:00 Surono: wait
21:01 Surono: this is why tacos is madnuts, zzzz
21:01 salchow: I need rick and morty for that
21:01 Surono: jsut done cat dont
21:01 salchow: tbbh
21:01 Surono: and yeh
21:01 Surono: just dont cat done TSSS DUMSSSSBB
21:01 Surono: yeh, taiko still make me confusd to play........
21:01 salchow: I just mapped vocals + claps
21:01 Surono: tahts why iplay ctb
21:01 Surono: yeh ez mapping
21:02 salchow: ctb no ez mapping
21:03 salchow: neither is std
21:03 Surono: wt
21:03 Surono: std
21:03 Surono: cricle orzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
21:03 Surono: ctb editor makes brain ded
21:04 Surono: posted, fix that.
21:04 salchow: ok
21:04 Surono: nike
21:04 Surono: nic
21:04 salchow: but how you change metadata
21:05 Surono: ,. copypaste
21:05 salchow: I have some cringy tags on kantan
21:05 Surono: de kantan tags
21:05 Surono: yeh thats it
21:05 Surono: eeks deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
21:05 Surono: blue taiko dropu
21:06 Surono: kantan has no jaBan words there rip
21:06 salchow: what do you mean by Enable omit first barline
21:06 Surono: 02:57:952 - F5 on editor
21:06 Surono: from here, you can see it :-D
21:07 Surono: close 2barlines in a screen :eyes: frukos always luv to pointing smth like this wow pros ppl nowadays
21:07 salchow: wtf is omit
21:07 Surono: yeh taco
21:07 Surono: smth smth like...... pishifat b4..
21:07 Surono: madnezz many redlines or idk
21:08 Surono: yeh taco....
21:08 salchow: is that really nesesery
21:08 Surono: yeh,.
21:08 Surono: unless u want make someone come and saying smth dem
21:08 salchow: ok'
21:08 Surono: yeh taco it is
21:09 salchow: now i understud
21:09 salchow: weaw
21:09 Surono: weow
21:09 Surono: understud de taco - _-
21:09 Surono: at least fruitz and circle tofu clicking still madnuts
21:10 Surono: piano still make sense... or bcus its guitar hero reference, orz rip rhythm gaem bms reference or sdvx wqdqhfwqk
21:11 salchow: ok i removed the green line
21:11 salchow: thing
21:11 salchow: and replaced with red
21:11 Surono: ,.
21:11 salchow: k
21:11 salchow: gud
21:11 salchow: ithink
21:11 Surono: ye replaced a.k.a jst lev red
21:11 Surono: ye ikr
21:11 Surono: taco thingy qqqq
21:11 Surono: ok.. now me playin ur diff, to thonk about idk
21:11 salchow: w8
21:11 salchow: uploding
21:12 Surono: de
21:12 salchow: k
21:12 salchow: dun
21:12 Surono: comeon dun tak
21:12 *Surono is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1411934 Reol - Kamisama Ni Natta Hi [Futsuu]] <Taiko>
21:12 Surono: imma playing with Vsync noice rip ye
21:13 salchow: W E O W
21:13 Surono: ,
21:15 Surono: wait,.
21:15 Surono: ew
21:15 salchow: ew
21:16 salchow: wat
21:16 Surono: 01:15:271 - did you remmbre my mod here, no chang jst sayin yes to ma post u dem - __
21:16 Surono: idk
21:16 Surono: zzzzzzzz taco confusd
21:16 salchow: ok
21:16 salchow: i dint chnage that
21:16 salchow: my mom did
21:16 Surono: yes nice
21:17 Surono: de wa. yea laifu.exe
21:17 salchow: is there more "ew" things
21:17 Surono: or wee
21:17 Surono: k ddk d k 1/2 i mean
21:17 Surono: nice taco logoc - _-
21:17 Surono: yeh its k ddk dk already but 1/1 idk
21:18 salchow: sery
21:18 Surono: ye wait
21:18 Surono: np, taco logoc is madnuts
21:18 salchow: but it fits
21:18 salchow: !
21:18 salchow: tho
21:18 Surono: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9871485
21:18 Surono: yeh same taco
21:18 Surono: rip density spread
21:19 salchow: what dio meant
21:20 Surono: just look volta density
21:20 Surono: its far, then kantan.. it close
21:21 salchow: LOL
21:21 Surono: taiko da important = density spread, we just rembre if nardo alwayz come to haunting retarded density tacoset
21:21 Surono: yea ikr
21:21 salchow: shlould it be more dense
21:21 Surono: yeh a bit, just like da SS
21:21 salchow: not my faoult
21:22 Surono: so who!??!
21:22 Surono: dont say ur mom
21:22 Surono: =_= quality rip joks
21:22 salchow: o1:18:055 should i add a k here?
21:22 Surono: nice o
21:23 Surono: nice
21:23 salchow: that means yes?
21:23 Surono: yeh k__dkd k
21:23 Surono: that means o, rip 0
21:23 Surono: yeh jst add there k and similer part
21:24 Surono: 01:18:364 - so delete kantan here and chng 01:18:983 - this as kat for minibreak , as futsuu density
21:25 Surono: so ye just that.. and overall ur futsuu.. 1/2 3plet, wheres 1/2 5plet rip .. zz orz volta mapped muzu just like easier oni =_= fuckin orz rip me thinkin spread
21:25 Surono: ok nvm, its fine.
21:26 salchow: k changed
21:26 Surono: so the concept to make it not boring.. and yeah increasin smth....
21:27 Surono: futsuu: 01:03:828 - k and etc similar spot
21:27 Surono: at least u shuld have 1 5plet 1/2 in futsuu, then
21:27 Surono: kantan: 01:02:282 - k , so ye 5plet 1/1 dkkkd
21:27 salchow: k
21:27 Surono: and etc etc
21:28 Surono: copypaste ,
21:28 Surono: offline, afk.

we were discussed about spread density for kantan and futsuu, but I still concerning about overall concept both of these diffs since Muzukashii has complex density spreading while futsuu and kantan just simple but for now its still fine by added some 5plet and some structures to balance with muzukashii to lower diffs

02:17:436 - 03:18:054 - you forget add these spot on futsuu
01:02:282 - 02:01:663 - 03:02:281 - 03:22:075 - add notes for these spot on Kantan to balance with futsuu density

and I would like you to selfmod about this thing, try ask volta for assistance.. if available lol
@Volta dibantu cieg ni org aj bingung soal teko qq
Fixed the density
Skylish
Hi, from my Taiko modding queue. (NO KDS now)

[General]

> Before I start modding officially, I would like to point out that the mp3's quality is very poor. Please change a new one.

I've prepared one for you with red timing points set: https://puu.sh/yWg28/fb8877155d.mp3

Red timing points required:
767,618.556701030928,4,1,0,60,1,0
178911,618.556701030928,6,1,0,80,1,8
180148,618.556701030928,4,1,0,90,1,1
Preview time: 03:00:148 -

Please fix volume and green timing points correspondingly, if necessary. Re-snap all notes as well. I will mod the mapset when you have improved the quality of music in any ways.
Topic Starter
salchow

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my Taiko modding queue. (NO KDS now)

[General]

> Before I start modding officially, I would like to point out that the mp3's quality is very poor. Please change a new one.

I've prepared one for you with red timing points set: https://puu.sh/yWg28/fb8877155d.mp3

Red timing points required:
767,618.556701030928,4,1,0,60,1,0
178911,618.556701030928,6,1,0,80,1,8
180148,618.556701030928,4,1,0,90,1,1
Preview time: 03:00:148 -

Please fix volume and green timing points correspondingly, if necessary. Re-snap all notes as well. I will mod the mapset when you have improved the quality of music in any ways.
Fixed!
Skylish
It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column

! Remove 'Reol' in tag column since it's duplicated in the Romanized title. Lower or Upper case is all considered the same in search engine in the beatmap search fx.
[Kantan]

> 00:26:127 - this note can be shifted to 00:27:364 - and change to k, comparing with 00:37:261 - , the vocal there stands out from the base drum line obviously, hence should be HLed.

> 00:34:787 - shift it to 00:33:550 - to imitate the similar pattern of 00:23:653 - . The overall pattern at 00:32:931 - could be d k d as a mirror pattern of 00:23:035 - additionally.

> 00:47:777 - this on-beat should be back on the mapping channel after two consecutive off-beat vocal emphases. i.e. Shift 00:49:014 - to 00:47:777 -

! From 00:50:251 - to 00:59:529 - , the structure should be similar to that of 00:40:354 - . You can see the whole former section is 1/2 shifted forward. It is non-harmonic in Kantan (creating a weird rhythm pattern). Fixed it on your own according to mods above.

> 01:11:901 - / 02:11:282 - you can put a kat here to imitate the 5-plet usage at 01:02:004 -

> 01:18:086 - d should be put to prevent a sudden drop of density.

> 01:19:942 (44) - not sure why'd you choose an off-beat mapping strategy here. The mapping channel is unclear. Let's try:

At first glance the suggestion looks cleaner and clearer.

01:27:364 - / 01:27:983 - should share the same thing since they are the same in interpretation method in music (similar to 00:45:921 (7,8) - )

You can have your own fix of course. It is just a suggestion anyway to clarify the patterns.

> 02:36:644 (11,12) - change to kat due to the high pitch?

! 03:10:044 - / 03:42:209 - this section should be similar with 02:09:426 - / 01:10:045 - . It is Kantan anyway, repeatitive patterns are acceptable, surprisingly they are preferred. Please refer to the mentioned mods as well.

> 03:42:209 - add a don to fill in the unnatural 4/1 gap.

[Futsuu]

! The overall structure and cuts are very loosen. Futsuu needs a in-depth care.

! From 00:20:560 (35) - to 00:30:457 - these 4 bars as an example, the pattern usages are inconsistent. 00:30:457 - is a more obvious section.

Let's try a more consistent pattern like: 00:20:560 (1) -


00:20:560 (1) - n nnn n + n nnn n for 2 bars
00:25:509 (11) - n n nnn + n n nnn for other 2 bars

00:27:055 - / 00:29:529 - notes are put on these 2 clear vocal notes.

This pattern would be considered as tidy and clean because of clear structure formation. You can compare it with yours. Try fixing the pattern usages in a very large extent among the whole difficulty, when and if necessary.

> Kiais look fine and do not have the problem mentioned above. Surprisingly you may overlook the normal sections only.

[Volta's Muzukashii]

> 00:03:859 (6,7) - ctrl+G for a better pitch flow, same as 00:08:808 (14,15) -

> 00:39:426 - / 00:49:323 - / ... although I know that you map the instrumental layer concretely, shifting it 1/4 forward to match the vocal note can bring a refreshing feeling to the 'dough' patterns, as a new kick-off of new section (Bar:16/20/...)

> 00:57:055 (149,150) - lyrics 'do do', same notes usage as well?

> 01:16:694 - add a note here since this ornament music is unique apart from 01:12:983 - / 01:11:127 - / ...

> 01:21:797 - missed a kat to show the difference with 01:24:272 - emptiness.

> 01:26:591 - same as 01:16:694 -

> 02:27:364 (242,243) - ctrl+G to match the drum kick perfectly

> 02:37:261 - not sure why not k here too, the flow is acceptable even it is a kat

> 02:56:437 - nnn n is smoother than n nnn. The vocal density is tensed at 02:56:591 -

! Imo the last Kiai progression comes too late. The previous 3 Kiais are too blend comparitively. More self-mods may enhance the expression of progression in a better format.

[]

This mapset is undermapped in overall speaking (not a big deal). The spread between Kantan, Futsuu and GD Muzukashii is fine. However, the difficulties themselves have more rooms for improvement as far as I inspect and expect. Good luck! :D
-Kazu-

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column
how sure about this? because you can't search for tags with less than 3 characters... (asking for research purposes lol)
edit: lol just checked and he didnt add any of the tags I suggested :( so sad
Topic Starter
salchow

-Kazu- wrote:

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column
how sure about this? because you can't search for tags with less than 3 characters... (asking for research purposes lol)
edit: lol just checked and he didnt add any of the tags I suggested :( so sad
Yes I did
Topic Starter
salchow

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[General]

> Metadata check: http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/disco/1582

> 'Σ' can still be added into tag column

! Remove 'Reol' in tag column since it's duplicated in the Romanized title. Lower or Upper case is all considered the same in search engine in the beatmap search fx.
[Kantan]

> 00:26:127 - this note can be shifted to 00:27:364 - and change to k, comparing with 00:37:261 - , the vocal there stands out from the base drum line obviously, hence should be HLed.

> 00:34:787 - shift it to 00:33:550 - to imitate the similar pattern of 00:23:653 - . The overall pattern at 00:32:931 - could be d k d as a mirror pattern of 00:23:035 - additionally.

> 00:47:777 - this on-beat should be back on the mapping channel after two consecutive off-beat vocal emphases. i.e. Shift 00:49:014 - to 00:47:777 -

! From 00:50:251 - to 00:59:529 - , the structure should be similar to that of 00:40:354 - . You can see the whole former section is 1/2 shifted forward. It is non-harmonic in Kantan (creating a weird rhythm pattern). Fixed it on your own according to mods above.

> 01:11:901 - / 02:11:282 - you can put a kat here to imitate the 5-plet usage at 01:02:004 - I think it will be to dense

> 01:18:086 - d should be put to prevent a sudden drop of density.

> 01:19:942 (44) - not sure why'd you choose an off-beat mapping strategy here. The mapping channel is unclear. Let's try:

At first glance the suggestion looks cleaner and clearer.

01:27:364 - / 01:27:983 - should share the same thing since they are the same in interpretation method in music (similar to 00:45:921 (7,8) - )

You can have your own fix of course. It is just a suggestion anyway to clarify the patterns.

> 02:36:644 (11,12) - change to kat due to the high pitch? No, because it ruins overall repetition. + its not high pitch, its just strong vocal and in this section I dont map vocals

! 03:10:044 - / 03:42:209 - this section should be similar with 02:09:426 - / 01:10:045 - . It is Kantan anyway, repeatitive patterns are acceptable, surprisingly they are preferred. Please refer to the mentioned mods as well.

> 03:42:209 - add a don to fill in the unnatural 4/1 gap.

[Futsuu]

! The overall structure and cuts are very loosen. Futsuu needs a in-depth care.

! From 00:20:560 (35) - to 00:30:457 - these 4 bars as an example, the pattern usages are inconsistent. 00:30:457 - is a more obvious section.

Let's try a more consistent pattern like: 00:20:560 (1) -


00:20:560 (1) - n nnn n + n nnn n for 2 bars
00:25:509 (11) - n n nnn + n n nnn for other 2 bars

00:27:055 - / 00:29:529 - notes are put on these 2 clear vocal notes.

This pattern would be considered as tidy and clean because of clear structure formation. You can compare it with yours. Try fixing the pattern usages in a very large extent among the whole difficulty, when and if necessary.

> Kiais look fine and do not have the problem mentioned above. Surprisingly you may overlook the normal sections only.

[]

This mapset is undermapped in overall speaking (not a big deal). The spread between Kantan, Futsuu and GD Muzukashii is fine. However, the difficulties themselves have more rooms for improvement as far as I inspect and expect. Good luck! :D
Thank you for the mod Skylish! :)
Volta

Skylish wrote:

It's modding time:

[Volta's Muzukashii]

> 00:03:859 (6,7) - ctrl+G for a better pitch flow, same as 00:08:808 (14,15) - retained for same color scheme with 00:13:756 (24,25,26) -

> 00:39:426 - / 00:49:323 - / ... although I know that you map the instrumental layer concretely, shifting it 1/4 forward to match the vocal note can bring a refreshing feeling to the 'dough' patterns, as a new kick-off of new section (Bar:16/20/...) although it match the vocal, it breaks the feel of the music so no change.

> 00:57:055 (149,150) - lyrics 'do do', same notes usage as well? sure, changed 150 to d

> 01:16:694 - add a note here since this ornament music is unique apart from 01:12:983 - / 01:11:127 - / ... added in last kiai for progression

> 01:21:797 - missed a kat to show the difference with 01:24:272 - emptiness. i think both emptiness are identical since the flows generally stopped there leaving only vocal and some background noise

> 01:26:591 - same as 01:16:694 -

> 02:27:364 (242,243) - ctrl+G to match the drum kick perfectly rearranged a bit

> 02:37:261 - not sure why not k here too, the flow is acceptable even it is a kat fixed

> 02:56:437 - nnn n is smoother than n nnn. The vocal density is tensed at 02:56:591 - both pattern can be used since vocal is actually occured 5 times at 02:56:437 (47,48,49,50) - , but i prefer current pattern to make a variety between 02:53:962 (40,41,42,43,44) -

! Imo the last Kiai progression comes too late. The previous 3 Kiais are too blend comparitively. More self-mods may enhance the expression of progression in a better format.

[]

This mapset is undermapped in overall speaking (not a big deal). The spread between Kantan, Futsuu and GD Muzukashii is fine. However, the difficulties themselves have more rooms for improvement as far as I inspect and expect. Good luck! :D
thanks for the mod~
update: https://volta.s-ul.eu/bSVNzN25
hikiko-
hello sorry i finally got around to doing this
[Kantan]
00:45:921 (48) - this offbeat k doesn’t fit - because the instrumental’s rhythm scheme doesn’t change (the synth notes continue to occur on beats 1, 2, and 3 of every bar), the rhythm change seems a bit abrupt. you can balance this with the stuff you’re doing 00:47:777 (50,51,52,53) - here by putting a d at 00:45:303 - and moving this k to 00:46:540 -
01:11:901 - add a k here. you have a group of 5 1/1 notes at the start of the kiai @ 01:00:148 (4,5,6,7,8) - , so adding a k would make for another group of 5 that correlates with that part
01:14:993 (21,22) - change these 2 to k, the chord in the instrumental here is higher pitch than the bars before so ks would work well
01:52:107 (60,61) - ctrl+g these two notes - in the section before this (from 01:52:107 (60,61) - to 01:52:107 (60,61) - ), you establish a flow of k for 2/1 then d for 2/1, so switching these 2 would allow for a correlating flow of d for 2/1 and k for 2/1 in this section
02:14:374 (6,7) - change these two to k for the same reason as before
02:26:747 (3,4) - changing these to k would reduce a bit of the d monotony and help lead into the lower chord at 02:29:220 - . you can change 02:34:170 (8,9) - to k for the same reason
02:54:582 (29,30) - ctrl+g these if you want, it would make this triplet consistent with all the other dkd and kdk triplets you have in this section
03:14:993 (19,20) - and 03:34:787 (41,42) - change to k, same as before
[Futsuu]
00:54:272 (102) - making this k would be nice - provides for variety with 00:49:014 (91,92,93) - and highlights the vocal syllables being the same @ 00:54:272 (102,103) -
01:15:612 - , 02:14:993 - , and 03:15:611 - i’d suggest adding a d here since this seems oddly sparse given how relatively 1/2 heavy the rest of the kiai is
for the section from 02:39:117 - to 02:55:199 - i’d suggest exploring how to use kkd 1/1 triplets while still maintaining the d k d k structure you have going on, just for some more variety’s sake
from 03:39:735 - to the end, you could also look into some more structured variety here just to take away a bit of the monotony
[Volta’s Muzukashii]
00:19:632 (37,38) - ctrl+g? you pattern this melody so that pitch goes upward at 00:09:426 (15,16,17) - , so switching the notes here would both make for consistency and match the synth melody and drums going up in pitch (change @ 01:48:705 (135,136) - too if you apply this)
01:03:550 (11) - changing this to k would contrast with 01:00:148 (1,2,3), where note 3 of the vocals is an entire octave higher whereas the 2 syllables at 01:03:550 (11,12) - are the same pitch (also change @ 02:02:931 (175) - and 03:03:550 (11) - if you apply this)
01:31:694 (85) - change to k; serves as a nice highlight to the snap/whatever higher pitch percussion sound is in the background and makes the note consistent with the corresponding notes in this section @ 01:34:169 (91) - , 01:36:643 (97) - , and 01:39:117 (106) -
also just a general point: i notice that you only introduced 2-color doublets in the last kiai, and they’re used fairly often there. it would probably be good to use a few more in, say, the second and third kiais for progression’s sake
good luck with rank! ^^
Volta
@hikikochan: almost fixed all, and made some multicolor duplet in 2nd and 3rd kiai. thank you!

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:神様になった日
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Creator:salchow
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Topic Starter
salchow

hikikochan wrote:

hello sorry i finally got around to doing this
[notice][Kantan]
00:45:921 (48) - this offbeat k doesn’t fit - because the instrumental’s rhythm scheme doesn’t change (the synth notes continue to occur on beats 1, 2, and 3 of every bar), the rhythm change seems a bit abrupt. you can balance this with the stuff you’re doing 00:47:777 (50,51,52,53) - here by putting a d at 00:45:303 - and moving this k to 00:46:540 -
01:11:901 - add a k here. you have a group of 5 1/1 notes at the start of the kiai @ 01:00:148 (4,5,6,7,8) - , so adding a k would make for another group of 5 that correlates with that part
01:14:993 (21,22) - change these 2 to k, the chord in the instrumental here is higher pitch than the bars before so ks would work well
01:52:107 (60,61) - ctrl+g these two notes - in the section before this (from 01:52:107 (60,61) - to 01:52:107 (60,61) - ), you establish a flow of k for 2/1 then d for 2/1, so switching these 2 would allow for a correlating flow of d for 2/1 and k for 2/1 in this section
02:14:374 (6,7) - change these two to k for the same reason as before
02:26:747 (3,4) - changing these to k would reduce a bit of the d monotony and help lead into the lower chord at 02:29:220 - . you can change 02:34:170 (8,9) - to k for the same reason
02:54:582 (29,30) - ctrl+g these if you want, it would make this triplet consistent with all the other dkd and kdk triplets you have in this section
03:14:993 (19,20) - and 03:34:787 (41,42) - change to k, same as before
[Futsuu]
00:54:272 (102) - making this k would be nice - provides for variety with 00:49:014 (91,92,93) - and highlights the vocal syllables being the same @ 00:54:272 (102,103) -
01:15:612 - , 02:14:993 - , and 03:15:611 - i’d suggest adding a d here since this seems oddly sparse given how relatively 1/2 heavy the rest of the kiai is
for the section from 02:39:117 - to 02:55:199 - i’d suggest exploring how to use kkd 1/1 triplets while still maintaining the d k d k structure you have going on, just for some more variety’s sake
from 03:39:735 - to the end, you could also look into some more structured variety here just to take away a bit of the monotony
added almost all of them. thx hikiko! :)
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