From my modding queue!
Remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.
00:05:993 (7,8,9) - Switch to kdk? The notes are different than 00:03:519 (4,5,6), so I don't think you should use the same pattern. Agree
00:15:271 (22) - Delete? Since you used a break at 00:10:941, I think this would be a good idea. Changed a bit
00:20:838 - I think you should add more breaks. Right now, first kiai has more breaks than this. Also, 00:31:045 and 00:42:179 stand out because of the change in note density. Made some breaks in some places
00:34:447 - ^
03:00:427 - I like the concept of increasing difficulty, but you should still have some breaks in this kiai. I don't think 1/2 spacing is enough. This is the most intense part of the song, so its ok.
01:10:941 (33) - Use d instead to reflect the more audible vocals?
02:10:322 (198) - ^
02:55:168 (44) - Use d to mirror the pattern at 02:55:787 (45,46)? You did this with 02:57:642 (51,52) and 02:58:570 (53,54).
03:10:941 (33) - Use d instead? Same reasoning as 01:10:941.
03:30:735 (97) - ^
Sorry for the short mod. Still helpfull
I think this is a good set, though. Good luck with ranking it!