hi~ o/ via in-game
generally speaking, this diff is made mainly by 1/1 and 1/2. more and more longer breaks (3/1 or 4/1) are needed for newbies. it looks a bit boring for my sight.
also this diff is mostly made with triplets. it looks boring to be honest. true, didn't know how to variate patterns consider density and remove some notes, and you can make density difference and more variety of rhythm, and express how contrast this song has.
also one more point, you need consistency. each Kiais have different rhythm beside cosistency the song has. this can make newbies be confused when playing. you should use copy and paste agressively especially on lower diffs and a long song. Tried to Ctrl + c Ctrl + v
remember these => "longer breaks", "density and variation", "consistency"
these are just a few suggestions for making longer breaks.
try to remove those. 1/3 rest can make more variation without high difficulty.
00:49:911 (60) - 00:52:385 (63) - 00:57:334 (69) - 01:22:076 (96) - 01:32:592 (108) - ^00:28:880 (35,36) - consider removing these. 4/1 breaks before borders of sections (00:30:735 - ) have good effect.
...and so on. Changed a bit.
- 00:01:045 - ~ 00:10:941 - too high density i feel for such a calm part. agree. it'll be better even if you delete all notes on upbeats.
- 01:19:601 - add note. Kiai needs a bit more density (without 1/2 tho)
just i'd like to say "Kiai should have more density (difficulty) than other sections."
to do this, you should remove some notes on other sections than Kiai and take some five times 1/1 on Kiai. Dosen't really fit. + its the end of the kiai.
what i'd like to say is mostly same as Kantan. you can put a bit more various patterns than Kantan tho.
you need more and more 2/1 breaks.
well, here's my edition that is taken more breaks. i just removed some notes and changed color a bit. use as refference for how to take breaks.
http://puu.sh/xEKXn/366aa66781.osu That actually helped me ALOT.
i might look at Muzukashii sometime. (i think the diff can be "Volta's Oni" tho. cuz Futsuu-Muzu's difficulty gap is too big.)
if you need more my opinion, chat me again~