from my queue
general
04:34:340 - 04:54:519 - maybe leave this a break if u want
tags lmao
idk what the combo colors yellow and red has to do with but i assume the twilight maybe try pastel colors
not general
00:20:638 (1) - this slider art can be confusing in the end the path is not so clear like this http://puu.sh/xNn0R/25ecc0a7fc.jpg
01:27:905 (1,2) - if u ctrl g these it will fit better the intens music
02:12:909 (1) - the sound of her vocal on blue tick sound stronger maybe make it clickable like here 02:11:838 (1,2,3) - and stack them on head of 02:13:266 (2) -
02:51:840 (1,4) - avoid this small overlap is not appealing
03:08:625 (3) - ctrl for the flow break here to emphasize more the finish sound here 03:08:983 (1) -
03:11:840 (3) - nc should be here to be consistent
03:20:054 (3) - same as before
03:21:840 (3) - a 1/2 repeat here can do better because of the sound that the slider body ignores here 03:22:197 -
03:25:947 (3,4) - u mapped 1/8 stacks differntly as 03:45:769 (1,1,1) - and same as 1/4 that way these 03:25:947 (3,4,1) - can be confused of 1/4 so maybe keep mapping them diffrent
03:46:006 (1,1) - dont think its needed to space the 1/8 here this is the only time u did it
04:06:125 (1) - this slider art can look lot smoother maybe smth like this http://puu.sh/xNmvp/94e70f1327.jpg
04:08:269 (2) - this note is overmapped there not audible clickable sound there
05:29:287 - this vocals feels need to be mapped maybe try add 1/2 slider there http://puu.sh/xNmHu/d58130b9bb.jpg
neat map over all good luck.
general
04:34:340 - 04:54:519 - maybe leave this a break if u want
tags lmao
idk what the combo colors yellow and red has to do with but i assume the twilight maybe try pastel colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,100
Combo2 : 85,225,255
Combo3 : 253,255,255
Combo4 : 255,100,100
not general
00:20:638 (1) - this slider art can be confusing in the end the path is not so clear like this http://puu.sh/xNn0R/25ecc0a7fc.jpg
01:27:905 (1,2) - if u ctrl g these it will fit better the intens music
02:12:909 (1) - the sound of her vocal on blue tick sound stronger maybe make it clickable like here 02:11:838 (1,2,3) - and stack them on head of 02:13:266 (2) -
02:51:840 (1,4) - avoid this small overlap is not appealing
03:08:625 (3) - ctrl for the flow break here to emphasize more the finish sound here 03:08:983 (1) -
03:11:840 (3) - nc should be here to be consistent
03:20:054 (3) - same as before
03:21:840 (3) - a 1/2 repeat here can do better because of the sound that the slider body ignores here 03:22:197 -
03:25:947 (3,4) - u mapped 1/8 stacks differntly as 03:45:769 (1,1,1) - and same as 1/4 that way these 03:25:947 (3,4,1) - can be confused of 1/4 so maybe keep mapping them diffrent
03:46:006 (1,1) - dont think its needed to space the 1/8 here this is the only time u did it
04:06:125 (1) - this slider art can look lot smoother maybe smth like this http://puu.sh/xNmvp/94e70f1327.jpg
04:08:269 (2) - this note is overmapped there not audible clickable sound there
05:29:287 - this vocals feels need to be mapped maybe try add 1/2 slider there http://puu.sh/xNmHu/d58130b9bb.jpg
neat map over all good luck.