Idk why but I can't reply to you @AJamez so I'll do a budget reply :3
hi from my Q (quite late but better late than never)
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General
i approve the tags :^) :^)
increase ar by .1 pls hmmm I'll ask around for more opinions on that
please change combo colors D: choose something that blends with the bg I don't think that's a good idea, since people playing with dim (myself included) will have trouble reading if the circles are similar colors to the bg
Just a Little More
00:29:823 (2,3) - i feel like u could ctrl g these to be consistent with 00:35:359 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the pitch pattern changes from climbing to falling, so a rotational flow change is warranted
00:36:073 (5) - nc would fit here sure
00:36:788 (4) - ^ mmm ok
01:05:716 - ur missing the sound here :c i'd make this repeat instead I dont hear anything there
01:13:216 (5) - idk but i feel like u could emphasize the blue tick as well by making it a slider instead to acoid repititiveness for this part lo then make nescessary spacing adjustments after I think it's fine as it is
01:16:788 (4) - same as what i pointed out on 01:05:716 - it's just the "eto" part is a vocal that pops out more to the listener
01:27:859 (3,5) - i'd nc for emphasis hmm, it'll also help with reading, yeah that's a good idea
01:29:109 (2) - delet this note to follow the music like what u did on 01:31:609 - and other parts fine as it is
01:45:002 (1,2) - swap ncs for consistency ok
01:48:216 (5) - u could overlap this to 01:47:145 (2) - imo for better spacing emphasis nah, I'm avoiding overlaps
01:56:131 - u could add a note here to make the transition of the music more emphasized i'm only following violin here
02:00:059 - here u could emphasize the bass of the violin whynot add a note here as well eh ,it's fine as it is
02:12:195 (3) - quite underspaced imo make it simillar as 02:14:695 (1,2,3) - 02:14:695 - is stronger, thus a change from before. Also it's right after a spinner, so i want to ease into spacing and start small after the "break" (ie where i was just following violin with slow sliders)
02:33:266 (5,6) - would prefer a 1/2 slider instead mmm the slider end would land on a pretty significant note
03:49:518 (2) - delet note to avoid overmapping kiai justifies it
03:51:304 (10) - i'd delete this note too and make a repeat instead make necessary adjustments after fine as it is
03:52:375 (2) - pls delet note here and extend the slider instead make adjustments for the next sliders after ^
03:55:232 (2) - like what i mentioned before delet this note cus there's no specific sound on this part that supports the music at all and to avoid overmapping as said before, and deleting that is awkward as the pause can be weird in the kiai
03:59:518 (6) - ^ .
04:03:804 (2) - ^
04:20:054 (1) - place this on the right side instead to emphasize the spacing it's ok as it is
04:27:554 - missing note add circle here then stack it as well no violin sound there
04:54:518 (1) - add a timing point here and lower the volume to emphasize the piano sound ok
04:55:054 - spinner should start here and end 04:57:554 - here ok
05:07:680 (2,5) - these notes seems unncessary for me tbh cus it doesnt emphasizes nor clicks a specific sound cus the most prominent sound here is the vocals delet thiese two instead kiai filler rhythm
05:08:930 (4) - make this a repeat slider instead then add 2 circles for 05:09:466 (5) - sliders follow vocals, it's good as it is
05:09:823 (1) - delete this note after ^
05:17:723 (6) - pls delete this too ^
05:17:902 - aaaaaaaa i love this part <3 :D
05:34:286 (1) - overlap the sliderend of this to 05:32:144 (3) - it's already overlapping?
05:38:130 (2) - remove finish sounds better imo or just add a timing point here and lower the volumegood as it is, aka i really dont want to change every finish volume
the NC i I think as long as I'm consistent I'm fine, so no changes as of yet
Thanks for the mod!~~ >w<//
hi from my Q (quite late but better late than never)
optional to change | unrankable | suggested to change
General
i approve the tags :^) :^)
increase ar by .1 pls hmmm I'll ask around for more opinions on that
please change combo colors D: choose something that blends with the bg I don't think that's a good idea, since people playing with dim (myself included) will have trouble reading if the circles are similar colors to the bg
Just a Little More
00:29:823 (2,3) - i feel like u could ctrl g these to be consistent with 00:35:359 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the pitch pattern changes from climbing to falling, so a rotational flow change is warranted
00:36:073 (5) - nc would fit here sure
00:36:788 (4) - ^ mmm ok
01:05:716 - ur missing the sound here :c i'd make this repeat instead I dont hear anything there
01:13:216 (5) - idk but i feel like u could emphasize the blue tick as well by making it a slider instead to acoid repititiveness for this part lo then make nescessary spacing adjustments after I think it's fine as it is
01:16:788 (4) - same as what i pointed out on 01:05:716 - it's just the "eto" part is a vocal that pops out more to the listener
01:27:859 (3,5) - i'd nc for emphasis hmm, it'll also help with reading, yeah that's a good idea
01:29:109 (2) - delet this note to follow the music like what u did on 01:31:609 - and other parts fine as it is
01:45:002 (1,2) - swap ncs for consistency ok
01:48:216 (5) - u could overlap this to 01:47:145 (2) - imo for better spacing emphasis nah, I'm avoiding overlaps
01:56:131 - u could add a note here to make the transition of the music more emphasized i'm only following violin here
02:00:059 - here u could emphasize the bass of the violin whynot add a note here as well eh ,it's fine as it is
02:12:195 (3) - quite underspaced imo make it simillar as 02:14:695 (1,2,3) - 02:14:695 - is stronger, thus a change from before. Also it's right after a spinner, so i want to ease into spacing and start small after the "break" (ie where i was just following violin with slow sliders)
02:33:266 (5,6) - would prefer a 1/2 slider instead mmm the slider end would land on a pretty significant note
03:49:518 (2) - delet note to avoid overmapping kiai justifies it
03:51:304 (10) - i'd delete this note too and make a repeat instead make necessary adjustments after fine as it is
03:52:375 (2) - pls delet note here and extend the slider instead make adjustments for the next sliders after ^
03:55:232 (2) - like what i mentioned before delet this note cus there's no specific sound on this part that supports the music at all and to avoid overmapping as said before, and deleting that is awkward as the pause can be weird in the kiai
03:59:518 (6) - ^ .
04:03:804 (2) - ^
04:20:054 (1) - place this on the right side instead to emphasize the spacing it's ok as it is
04:27:554 - missing note add circle here then stack it as well no violin sound there
04:54:518 (1) - add a timing point here and lower the volume to emphasize the piano sound ok
04:55:054 - spinner should start here and end 04:57:554 - here ok
05:07:680 (2,5) - these notes seems unncessary for me tbh cus it doesnt emphasizes nor clicks a specific sound cus the most prominent sound here is the vocals delet thiese two instead kiai filler rhythm
05:08:930 (4) - make this a repeat slider instead then add 2 circles for 05:09:466 (5) - sliders follow vocals, it's good as it is
05:09:823 (1) - delete this note after ^
05:17:723 (6) - pls delete this too ^
05:17:902 - aaaaaaaa i love this part <3 :D
05:34:286 (1) - overlap the sliderend of this to 05:32:144 (3) - it's already overlapping?
05:38:130 (2) - remove finish sounds better imo or just add a timing point here and lower the volumegood as it is, aka i really dont want to change every finish volume
the NC i I think as long as I'm consistent I'm fine, so no changes as of yet
Thanks for the mod!~~ >w<//