00:20:560 (1) - 00:14:846 (1) - wired slider
00:28:931 (1) - 01:25:954 (1) - Add flow in this part pls. too straight forward,maybe add some curved slider
01:27:680 (2,3) - why jump
01:46:430 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:48:930 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - I think you can set a break time here to enjoy the music
02:11:838 - 02:33:980 - no flow here, too straight forward.
02:34:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can make these six slider into two Triangle,that may looks better.you can make sliders like this one:02:40:768 (3,4,5) -
02:37:264 (1,1) - why nc here?
02:38:335 (1,1) - ^
02:46:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad blanket
03:46:840 (3,4,5) - you want to make a triangle here? Well this part is wired, I can hardly find flow here. use ctrl+G at 03:47:197 (4,5) - . then I think it can make much more sense
05:15:001 (10) - Ctrl+G. I can hardly get your thought at here. IDK why you break your flow here
05:17:901 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - maybe separate a little
05:23:640 (11) - Ctrl+G
05:32:144 (3) - nice slider.
Good luck!!!
00:28:931 (1) - 01:25:954 (1) - Add flow in this part pls. too straight forward,maybe add some curved slider
01:27:680 (2,3) - why jump
01:46:430 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:48:930 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - I think you can set a break time here to enjoy the music
02:11:838 - 02:33:980 - no flow here, too straight forward.
02:34:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can make these six slider into two Triangle,that may looks better.you can make sliders like this one:02:40:768 (3,4,5) -
02:37:264 (1,1) - why nc here?
02:38:335 (1,1) - ^
02:46:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad blanket
03:46:840 (3,4,5) - you want to make a triangle here? Well this part is wired, I can hardly find flow here. use ctrl+G at 03:47:197 (4,5) - . then I think it can make much more sense
05:15:001 (10) - Ctrl+G. I can hardly get your thought at here. IDK why you break your flow here
05:17:901 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - maybe separate a little
05:23:640 (11) - Ctrl+G
05:32:144 (3) - nice slider.
Good luck!!!