PATTERN, LAYERING, AND SNAPPING00:10:571 - I think in many cases, using quad usage here while the song is actually is still building up OR still in intro section feels a bit too much. Also given the SV, this is actually could be shocking for the newer insane caliber of players. Also another concern is that you suddenly use triples 00:11:256 - here despite it being exactly the same sound of the instrument.
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Giving quad in here means it's like end of beginning of this pattern (in my intention), also 00:11:256 - Because pitch goes down extremely, want to give difference.My suggestion is to tune down the quad into use of triples. This is the example 00:10:399 - from here
https://puu.sh/AkSci/24fba89d93.png -
This pattern looks more lighter, but I guess it's more technically hard,
00:21:556 - Totally wrong snapping here. The sound of the snares are absolute 1/6 snap instead of 1/8. With that in mind, maybe it could be re-organized into more interesting rolling type of pattern to increase difficulty curve instead of trill-able stair burst since this is the highest difficulty.
https://puu.sh/AkSr1/f3447fa409.png This is just 1 of many example you can use. (04:28:399 - same) -
You goddamn right, rearranged 00:33:213 - The actual sound for this part is richer than what u have mapped here. The sound of the bell is kinda different in pitch also making it seems arbitrary to put triple 1/3 in the same column, also plus 00:33:899 - could also be double since there is cymbal sound here that could also be emphasized. this is my suggestion to map those missing sound and cymbal
https://puu.sh/AkSwS/5fc1da205c.png (02:28:413 - same) -
arranged myself but no double 00:33:885 - here, actually that symbol sound is not so hard so I guess it doesn't need to emphasis
00:43:727 (43727|1,43785|2) - Again here is wrong snapping. 00:43:670 - The beat here has changed into 1/4 snapping for the stutter trumpet sound and then turn back into 1/6 again 00:43:842 - here. (02:38:927 (158927|2,158985|1) - same) -
Fixed01:06:470 - I personally believe that this snapping here should be 1/8. 01:06:727 - There is much more delay for the clicking hihat sound to the next section then to each other of the clicking sound itself before this particular timeline. It is really noticeable with 25% playrate.
https://puu.sh/AkSJz/1f8d29a835.png This is the intended suggestion for the pitch for the clicking sound. -
Right01:33:985 (93985|1) - This sounds like ghost note to me. But since you are keeping the consistency through the different section of this particular sound it is fine to keep it like that. -
Definitely has sound, I'm sure01:41:442 (101442|1,101556|1,101670|1) - Again, wrong snapping. The snap here should be 1/4 since it is very noticeable that the distance from the last vocal 01:41:670 (101670|1) - here is longer than the distance against the vocal before itself. (03:03:727 (183727|1,183842|1,183956|1) - same 03:09:213 (189213|2,189327|2,189442|2) - same) -
This is not 1/4, but not 100% correct with 1/3 too, but 1/3 is more better to play, so I'll keep it02:12:628 (132628|3) - The break here doesnt feels wrong at all but my suggestion is it could be more interesting if you can extend this into LN until 02:20:171 - here. -
nah I'll keep it, I like break time u know lol02:34:585 - Feels pretty weird here since the layering of cymbal sound stopped. I think you should continue it since it's weird to see the section that is closer to the buildup to the song is actually has less layering and density than the further one. -
I'll consider about this later.03:01:499 - Since this has kick sound compared to before, I think you can justify and fit up some jumps here to also emphasize the kick sound.
https://puu.sh/AkT8p/83537179e2.png this is my suggestion. -
for consistency with 01:06:285 - here also for more good playable pattern, I'll keep it as it is03:15:385 - There is kick sound here, should also be mapped as jump for consistency. Add a note at column |4| (03:18:127 - same) -
make difference with other 12-34 trills, 03:22:585 - I think you can emphasize this kick with 1 more note. Compared to before (01:16:413 - i mean here) , the layering transition allows you to put 1 extra note at column |3|. -
nah, I'll keep it because all of tor tor tor tor tor neido part has double only.04:12:713 - 04:13:056 - There are extra vocals now in this part compared to before. You can layer it like this to make it more interesting
https://puu.sh/AkTAc/2ea6bfc8ec.png -
nah, I used LN only 'come on' vocal04:18:456 - Add 1 note at column |4| for kick. -
goodNOTE PLACEMENT AND PITCH RELEVANCY02:25:156 (145156|0) - Make this the same column as before for pitch relevancy.
good03:43:999 - I think this works better
https://puu.sh/AkTjy/046a6b716c.png for the pattern flow. -
that is too simple I guess03:47:256 (227256|3,227428|3,227599|3,227771|3,227942|3,228113|3,228285|3,228456|3,228628|3) - I think the stacking notes here is possible to be re-arranged to be more balanced. Here is my suggestion 03:47:771 - from here
https://puu.sh/AkTp7/75d1e931d3.png to break the ice -
re-arranged myself 
