1. Another - 4Key (4,35 stars, 1676 notes)
2. Beginner - 4Key (1,49 stars, 416 notes)
3. Hyper - 4Key (3,19 stars, 1123 notes)
4. Normal - 4Key (2,17 stars, 736 notes)
5. Spring - 4Key (4,69 stars, 1982 notes)

Difficulties
Beginner
Normal
Hyper
Another
Spring

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

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Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

Modding come to you !

Modding

[Spring]

1. 00:00:039 (39|1,78|0,195|3,234|2) - I think like this notes getting ghost note
   maybe it can't be a ranked changed the pattern
   
2. 00:21:328 (21328|2) - move to 4 ok
   
3. 00:24:687 - ~ 00:25:000 - Follow the drum is best I think. so, 00:24:765 (24765|3,24921|0) - delete these and add the note 00:24:843 - col 3
4. 00:29:687 - ~ 00:30:000 - ^ added them
   
5. 00:30:000 - ~ 00:38:750 - you have to change this patterns. too much same place notes
   more diverse pattern is make it good map changed the pattern drastically and tried to make it more technical insteadt
6. 00:50:000 - ~ 00:58:125 - ^ changed this so it would become more LN oriented so more skills will be tested
   
7. 00:44:843 - Add a note col 3 added
8. 00:49:843 - ^ added
   
9. 01:05:937 (65937|1,66093|1) - move to col 1 moved
   
10. 01:08:125 (68125|3) - missing the snap . move to 01:08:177 - here 1/6 thanks for pointing that out
    01:08:437 (68437|0) - ^ 01:08:489 - here ^
    
11. 01:08:828 -
    changed to look like that
    
    it's right snap
    
12. 01:22:031 (82031|1) - move to col 1 moved
    
13. 01:30:000 - ~ 01:37:500 - make more variety pattern

same as last part changed it to become more technical

Good luck !

Salty Mermaid wrote:

yooo m4m from the beautiful modding queue

1234 for the columns.

Another

1. 00:54:843 (54843|0) - Here it should be a double. changed
2. 00:30:312 (30312|2) - All those triple are a bit unnecessary. Tho it's not because it's too hard to play, but because the sound on the triples is the same sound as 00:29:843 (29843|1) -, on which you only put doubles. Make them doubles. And if you care very much about the sr, doing this will only decrease it of 0,05*. changed them to doubes
3. 00:34:843 (34843|3) - Double here. ok
4. 00:58:750 (58750|1) - The sound here deserve to be a triple just like you did 00:57:500 - and 00:58:125 - . You can do the same at 00:59:062 -, 00:59:375 -, 00:59:687 - and 01:00:000 -. It nice to play. changed these to tripes and aso in the rest of the map with this pattern
5. 01:00:156 (60156|3) - Since you seem to be mapping the voice here, this note should be at 01:00:078 - dont know how i missed that ty
6. 01:04:687 (64687|0) - Again, following the voice. this Ln should end at 01:04:921 - changed end location
7. 01:05:468 (65468|2) - Delete that note, the voice isn't there, or if you wanna keep that note, well map that sound for this entire part. removed
8. 01:06:093 (66093|2) - It's missing a note for the voice. added
9. 01:06:562 (66562|0) - Same. ^
10. 01:06:562 -You seem to always do the same pattern for those parts. You can try different patterns, like, instead of 1234 / 4321 , do stuff like 1243 / 4312 or 2134 / 3421. Also, you can still add triple at the end of each stairs, because of the sound. Since i'll have the same comment on these part, I won't mention them again. changed in al difficuties
11. 01:24:843 (84843|2) - Double here. Just like you did here 00:24:843 (24843|2) - added
12. 01:34:843 (94843|1) - Same.added
13. 01:37:500 -You're doing the exact same pattern as the other part like this.. Try something like this. Do something different for here 01:55:000 - as well. patterned all of those parts
14. 01:44:843 (104843|0) - Double here too. added
15. 01:54:843 (114843|2) - Same. ^

Ok that'll be all for my mod! Good luck! I just love how there are the perfect timing at 1 minute and 2 minutes in your beatmap

atian540 wrote:

hii tailsdk M4M via Illusionary Border Mania

free reject
1|2|3|4

easy

HP : 6,5
OD : 6,5 changed to HP and OD 7
this is "easy" diff right ? i think this diff is so hard for new player

1. 00:00:000 - to 00:38:750 - this almost same spread with normal,i think don't use 1/2, use 1/1 is better for easy
   EASY---------------------NORMAL
   
   
   changed to 1/1
2. 01:02:734 (62734|2) - del ok
3. 01:20:000 to 01:30:000 - same as above ok
4. 01:30:937 (90937|2) - col 2 moved
5. 01:31:250 (91250|1) - col 4 moved
6. 01:36:328 (96328|1) - hmm unsaped ? move here 01:36:250 - i have no idea how that happened LOL
7. 01:57:500 (117500|0,117656|1,117968|2,118125|3,118281|1,118593|2) - so hard,you can delete short LN or long LN removed shot LN
8. 01:58:750 (118750|1,118750|0,119375|2,119531|3) - same,you can try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9251481 changed to suggestion

normal

HP : 7
OD : 7 changed

1. 00:10:937 (10937|1,11093|0) - ctrl+G ok
2. 00:11:250 (11250|1) - col 4 ^
3. 00:11:406 (11406|2) - col 1 ^
4. 00:30:156 - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9251495 changed to suggestion
5. 00:50:000 - add note for cymbal added
6. 01:08:828 (68828|2) - change normal note ok

that's all and good luck

1. i think u should follow 00:00:312 - etc. snare sound than kick since snare sound is more audioable
2. 00:18:750 - change to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268451 , make a difference pattern since the sound is difference with 00:18:125 (18125|2,18437|3) - etc
3. 00:36:875 (36875|1,37187|0) - ctrl j
4. 00:37:500 (37500|0) - split into 2 LN here 00:38:125 -
5. 00:40:000 - double for cymbal
6. 00:50:000 - add note too for cymbal
7. 00:58:750 - this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268477 more playable for beginner n fit with cymbal sound
8. 01:15:000 - cymbal owo, double
9. 01:16:250 - cymbal
10. 01:18:906 (78906|2,79218|1,79531|3,79843|0) - same owo
11. 01:38:906 (98906|1,99218|2,99531|0,99843|3) - this too
12. 01:55:625 - i think this is single ._. no cymbal here 01:56:875 - same
13. 01:57:500 (117500|0,118125|3,118750|0) - double owo cymbal
14. 02:00:000 - add note for ending note

1. 00:00:312 (312|2,468|1,781|2,937|1) - isn't similar sound owo 00:00:312 (312|2,937|1) - n 00:00:468 (468|1,781|2) - same so rearrange plz, example like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268513 *apply the same problem, if u accept it*
2. 00:10:000 - double for cymbal
3. 00:37:500 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268530 try this
4. 00:58:125 - cymbal, double
5. 01:53:750 (113750|1) - extend till 01:55:000 -
6. 01:55:000 (115000|1) - double owo for cymbal 01:56:250 (116250|1) - same
7. add note i guess 02:00:000 -

Syadow- wrote:

aaaa sorry for delay ;w;

[Easy]

1. i think u should follow 00:00:312 - etc. snare sound than kick since snare sound is more audioable
2. 00:18:750 - change to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268451 , make a difference pattern since the sound is difference with 00:18:125 (18125|2,18437|3) - etc ok
3. 00:36:875 (36875|1,37187|0) - ctrl j done
4. 00:37:500 (37500|0) - split into 2 LN here 00:38:125 - ok
5. 00:40:000 - double for cymbal ok
6. 00:50:000 - add note too for cymbal ^
7. 00:58:750 - this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268477 more playable for beginner n fit with cymbal sound i like the idea
8. 01:15:000 - cymbal owo, double added
9. 01:16:250 - cymbal ^
10. 01:18:906 (78906|2,79218|1,79531|3,79843|0) - same owo ^
11. 01:38:906 (98906|1,99218|2,99531|0,99843|3) - this too ^
12. 01:55:625 - i think this is single ._. no cymbal here 01:56:875 - same changed
13. 01:57:500 (117500|0,118125|3,118750|0) - double owo cymbal changed to double
14. 02:00:000 - add note for ending note ok

[Normal]

1. 00:00:312 (312|2,468|1,781|2,937|1) - isn't similar sound owo 00:00:312 (312|2,937|1) - n 00:00:468 (468|1,781|2) - same so rearrange plz, example like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268513 *apply the same problem, if u accept it* re patternet to suggestion though out the first section
2. 00:10:000 - double for cymbal added
3. 00:37:500 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9268530 try this hmm i don't know if i can make it 2 since there is only 1 N sound but will change for now
4. 00:58:125 - cymbal, double ok
5. 01:53:750 (113750|1) - extend till 01:55:000 - ok
6. 01:55:000 (115000|1) - double owo for cymbal 01:56:250 (116250|1) - same added both
7. add note i guess 02:00:000 - added aswell

good luck >w<)/

Acnos wrote:

M4M From my queue

0|1|2|3

General :

1. Check Aimod u.uchecked through

 Easy :

1. 00:57:500 (57500|3,57500|2) - I think you should delete the short LN, because this is very hard for a Beginnerok

 Normal :

1. 01:41:484 (101484|0) - what?, this should be here 01:41:406 - thanks for catching that one didn't notice

 Hard :

1. 00:58:750 - need a triplet for the clashadded
2. well, in part the vocals... imo, is very confusing, bcs in this part you let much sounds like this 01:00:468 -, 01:01:250 - , 01:02:031 - and more, I just want to tell you that maybe, do you put a notes in those sounds? :3it's a part of the set i only focus on vocals here it also makes it more technical because then there is these small breaks in between notes that might catch people off guard

 Another :

1. 01:02:734 - here lack note for that this is conssistent with others difficulties ty for noticing
2. 02:00:000 - here should finish with some epic, maybe change them with LNs?this woud make me have to change all difficulties and it will not fit well in the spring diff and i think it would be kind of awkward to place an LN at the end

That's all man

GOOD LUCK!

Hestia- wrote:

hihi tails o/
[General]
Aimod- lots of unsnapped objects
you can Ctrl+A then drag to the closest to snap them. Also there is unsnapped timing things
or if you changed the timing, change it back so notes are snapped then go to new timing with snap objects checkedsorry ust changed some timing stuff and for some reson it did move the notes the right amount shoud be fixed now
[Easy]
00:34:829 (34829|1) - Remove i cant find this note?????
[Normal]
ok
[Hard]
01:01:392 (61392|2,61626|2,61861|2) - Make these 1/4th note LNs? ok
01:11:392 (71392|1,71548|1,71704|1,71861|1) - Make these 1/8th note LNs?ok
[Another]
ok
[Spring]
00:58:891 - 00:59:985 - These should be 16th notes instead of 12th notes (5 booms instead of 4)i think 1/16 is unplayabe in this scenario made it 1/6 to make it payable
01:18:891 - 01:19:985 - ^^
01:38:891 - 01:39:985 - ^^
01:57:641 - 01:58:735 - ^^
but having 16th note jumptrill here would be pretty hard... hmm

goodluck~

Mentholzzz wrote:

Hallo M4M

General
I think you should edit the audio, adding silence before the song start cause the first beat of this song is actually at 00:00:-031 for now. i dont have a program to edit that sadly otherwise would do
artist name should be "itaojirou" instead.ok
maybe add "Happy Hardcore" in tagsok
maybe change "Another" diff to "Insane" , it fit with easy-normal-hard more imohmm i like the name Another so i think im going to change the others indsteadt to Hyper and Beginner normal can star as normal
might change HP/OD to make it a bit increase between each diff like HP/OD : 7/7 7.5/7.5 7.7/7.7 8/8 8.5/8.5changed the OD and HP around on difficulties a bit

Spring
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9330368 I can't mod the dense pattern there, it is too hard for me qwq
00:00:000 - the intro here is actually easier than another ?jjust noticed that aswell welp changed Another to be easier
00:20:765 - why no double here ?missed that one
00:24:515 (24515|3,24672|3,24828|3,24984|3,25140|3,25297|3,25453|3,25609|3) - this stack is too long qwq, pls reduce it Changed the Pattern
00:38:734 - the average sv here is (0.75x+1.5x)/2=1.125x pls change x0.75 to x0.5 Hmm ok
00:44:984 - double here is enough imo added
00:58:890 (58890|0,58890|1,58942|2,58942|3,58994|0,58994|1,59047|3,59047|2,59203|3,59203|2,59255|1,59255|0,59307|3,59307|2,59359|0,59359|1,59515|1,59515|0,59567|2,59567|3,59619|0,59619|1,59672|2,59672|3,59828|3,59828|2,59880|1,59880|0,59932|2,59932|3,59984|1,59984|0) - those are 1/8 , so if you want to keep the same note amount, maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9330299 changed the pattern to it for now but it does feel really akward at 1/8 so need to find some fancy idea for at some point
00:59:984 - i really don't recommend mapping vocal here since it kinda much pretty too ez and it cause weird snap everywhere. i want to keep using the vocals here its a break and i think it makes the part a bit more technical then then if i ust continued the same style as before it also adds some variation
01:12:484 - all those note in blue line is ghost, pls delete them they are from the vocals did change one of them
01:28:734 - already mention about SV ^
01:38:890 - same as above^
01:55:609 - why quad here and 01:56:859 - ? my mistake
01:57:640 - ^ ^
01:59:320 (119320|3) - move to 01:59:359 - ok
01:59:711 (119711|0,119750|1,119867|0,119906|1) - maybe swap column to make pattern change because the sound change ? up to you i guessok
01:59:984 (119984|1) - - move to 3going to keep it there

Another
most of the point are the same as Spring, such as SV , 1/6 snap burst and vocal mapping
00:29:984 (29984|0,31234|2,32484|1,33734|0) - the sound actually go 1-2-3-4 so if u want to pr then change it ok changed
01:38:109 - maybe add triple here, same as 01:38:734 -ok

Hard
00:14:984 (14984|3) - split the Ln at 00:16:234 - and 00:17:484 - its supposed to for the build up sound in the background
00:31:234 - double here
00:32:484 - ^
00:34:828 - ^
00:41:234 - and so on every white line should be double. ok with all these might make it a little harder but will change for now
00:40:765 (40765|1) - this LN should start at 00:40:609 - ok
01:00:297 - same as Spring ok
01:31:234 - same as aboveok
01:59:437 - why double here ?, same as 01:59:593 - i think that got messed up when i changing offset should be fine now >.<
01:59:672 - start the burst here since the bzz sound start here and change the snap to 1/8ok

tailsdk wrote:

Mentholzzz wrote:

Hallo M4M

General
I think you should edit the audio, adding silence before the song start cause the first beat of this song is actually at 00:00:-031 for now. i dont have a program to edit that sadly otherwise would do

Here , I edit the audio for you, adding 1 second silence before the song start.

[-Chihuahua-] wrote:

here from M4M q

NM difficulty

Overall, I've found that you use the same patterns repeatedly for different parts of the map. Yes, the beat and the melody is the same, but
the feel and the intensity of the music are drastically different. An example is 00:11:027 - to 00:19:777 - and 00:41:027 - to 00:51:027 - . The first section is clearly not as intense and complex as the second section, but they both are being mapped by the same patterning. You could switch this by adding doubles into the second section. A few more examples of this pattern are 00:51:043 - to 00:56:027 - . 01:21:027 - to 01:29:777 - . i would change this but adding doubles it just becomes the same as the hyper difficulty which is too hard for so i think i will keep the patterns even though they are different intensity

00:16:964 (16964|1,17120|2,17277|3,17433|1,17589|2,17745|3) - maybe switch up the direction a little more as the music doesnt really call for all three to be the same direction changed the pattern
00:18:683 (18683|3,18839|2,18995|1,19152|3,19308|2,19464|1) - same here ^

00:19:777 - add a single note here (I would say column 3) for emphasisi dont think there is need for a secound note here the break in between the next note is the part i want to focus on or else i could just add notes for every voca there
00:23:527 - tentative suggestion: add another single not here for emphasis why add note there its the same as every other 1/4 beat in the rest of the song
00:26:027 - same as above ^
00:28:527 - ^^

00:31:027 - same as above, something like thisthis part already has an extra note no need for more on normal difficulty
00:33:527 - same as above, just shift around the notes ^^;no note needed here
00:36:027 - ^ ^
00:38:527 - ^^
00:39:308 (39308|0) - move this note to column 3 to avoid the shieldmoved it and changed around the pattern a little

00:41:027 - to 00:51:027 - suggestion: add LNs like you did before with 00:31:027 - to 00:39:777 - i thought of adding them but its the same LN's as the ending and i want that to stand out from this part since its higher pitched. also the LN's are more complex here then in the Kiai time mentioned before

01:01:027 - - to 01:10:558 - - in comparison to 01:10:558 - - 01:15:870 - - are the exact same sounds with slightly different intensity. The 1/2 patterning of the second section is confusing because they land on the offbeats of the vocals that you emphasized before. I suggest changing either of the sections to maintain consistency, but if you change the second section then add double notes to represent the intensity there is a cynbal and the song starts bulding up from there so i want to use 1/4 to but empathise this change in the song. also the part before can more be seen as a break in the map


01:59:777 (119777|3,120402|0,120714|1,121027|2) - use this pattern when the music actually gets louder ????

Hyper difficulty

00:16:027 - to 00:19:777 - these jacks arent appropriate for the intensity of the music. Try making them into stairs so it matches the intensity better changed the pattern a bit its not as jack focused

00:21:027 - to 00:29:777 - doubling every downbeat makes it kind of dull to play. Deleting beats 1 and 3 could fix it. Examples: 00:21:652 (21652|2) - 00:22:277 (22277|0) - 00:22:902 (22902|1) - 00:23:527 (23527|0) - 00:24:152 (24152|2) - 00:24:777 (24777|2) - 00:25:402 (25402|3) - 00:26:027 (26027|1) - 00:26:027 (26027|1) - 00:26:652 (26652|1) - 00:27:277 (27277|1) - 00:27:902 (27902|2) - 00:28:527 (28527|1) - 00:29:152 (29152|2) - 00:29:777 (29777|2) - i think it would be weird not using all of them because the rest of the map uses them and also every difficulty onwards

00:30:870 (30870|0) - I don't think this is necessary im keeping this one as the before its natural progression through the difficulties
00:39:152 (39152|3,39152|2,39308|0,39308|1,39464|2,39464|3,39620|1,39620|0) - switch this up so the doubles are different from previous setok changed

00:41:495 (41495|0) - suggestion: move this to column 2 to avoid the jack, for consistency with current pattern i would change this but it would create an even more annoying jack into a long note
00:41:027 - to 00:58:527 - again, dont emphasize every downbeat. follow example above here i removed the LN compleatly to empathise the ening better and to also have some preogressing between this part and normal and Another now it feels in the midle

00:59:777 - to 01:01:027 - there are clearly 4 sounds before every downbeat. Only 3 were mapped, unevenly too, making it confusing.

01:19:777 - 01:21:027 - same here

01:21:027 - to 01:29:777 - same as above, dont emphasize every downbeat, just beats 2 and 4 since more sounds are on those beats

01:31:027 - to 01:38:527 - same as above

01:39:777 - same as previous pattern, there are four sounds before each downbeat on the 1/8th, only 3 were mapped, making it confusing

01:41:027 - to 01:49:777 - same as above where this pattern was mentioned before, dont emphasize every downbeat

01:51:027 - to 01:56:027 - same as above

01:58:527 - to 01:59:777 - same as before where this pattern was mentionedchanged it actually be 1/8 was a mistake when changing mp3 i madei want the ending to be the most intesne part of the song so i want that to use all the beats

01:59:777 - to 02:01:027 - This pattern doesn't make sense. To me, it looks like just spam with little consideration over where the notes are placed. I don't really understand what you are trying to do here, please change it.changed it a little bit

Spueakypip wrote:

NM

00:03:683 - at this point, 00:06:183 - this point and 00:08:683 - you leave a column completely blank, I know it makes sense in terms of the music however it makes the beatmap feel slightly empty at these points, consider changing the pattern to include all fingers.changed the pattern around a little

All I could think of for this diff, pretty good

Hyper

00:27:589 - this point and 00:28:839 - this are exactly the same pattern, and so close together that it's noticeable while playing the song, consider changing it up. changed

00:39:933 (39933|0) - consider moving this to the 3rd column, when going from triple note to triple, it is much more satisfying to play when you only have to change one hands position rather than both.

00:40:714 (40714|0) - same as above. (maybe change 00:40:245 (40245|2) - and 00:40:558 (40558|2) - to the second column, and instead change 00:40:714 (40714|3) - to the 3rd, just a suggestion.

00:56:027 (56027|2) - consider changing to 2nd column, much nicer to play. because of this, alter the following notes to fit.

00:58:683 (58683|2,58683|3,58839|1,58839|0,58995|3,58995|2) - mirror these 3 double notes.
00:59:308 (59308|2,59308|3,59464|1,59464|0,59620|3,59620|2) - same as above.

01:12:433 (72433|1,72589|1,72745|1,72902|1) - personally I feel like these are too short to be LN's, kinda annoying to play and takes you out of the map, consider making them single notes, also consider moving them to the 4th column as you previously had the same pattern in the same column.removed the LN's from this difficulty

01:17:277 (77277|3) - consider moving to the 2nd column.
01:17:433 (77433|2,77433|3,77589|1,77589|0,77745|0,77745|1,77902|2,77902|3,78058|3,78058|2,78214|0,78214|1,78370|1,78370|0) - mirror these notes.
01:29:777 (89777|0) - consider moving to the third column, nicer to play.
01:30:714 (90714|0) - consider moving to 3rd column, same as above.
01:39:152 (99152|3) - consider moving to 2nd column, nicer to play.
01:39:777 (99777|3) - same as above.
01:50:714 (110714|2) - consider moving to 1st column, nicer to play.
01:58:527 (118527|0) - consider moving to 3rd column, ^. i changed some of the things idint move a the stripes but changed some of the pattern in between at some points (i also found a few inconsistencies that i fixed)

Another

00:33:995 (33995|1) - move to 1st column
00:34:152 (34152|0) - move to 2nd column
00:34:308 (34308|0) - move to 2nd column
00:34:464 (34464|1) - move to 4th column
00:34:620 (34620|3) - move to 4th column changed ^

00:42:745 (42745|3) - move to 2nd
00:42:902 (42902|1) - to 3rd
00:43:058 (43058|1) - to 3rd
00:43:214 (43214|2) - to 1st
00:43:214 (43214|2) - to 1st
00:43:214 (43214|2) - to 3rd
00:43:683 (43683|0) - to 3rd
00:43:683 (43683|0) - to 1st
00:43:995 (43995|2) - to 2nd
00:44:152 (44152|1) - to 3rd
00:44:308 (44308|1) - to 3rd
00:44:464 (44464|2) - to 1st i tried to change you did mark the same note 3 times in a row got a little confused but think i got it

01:06:652 (66652|2,66808|2,66964|2,67120|2) - same as the last diff, Personally don't like the extremely short LN's, suggest making them single.i will keep them here since it's harder difficulty

01:29:777 - I'd suggest the same as the last difficulty, make the triple notes so you only have to swap one hands position as it's much more satisfying to play
01:49:777 - here as well. didn't change these

01:57:277 (117277|1) - move to the 3rd column.^
01:58:527 (118527|2) - move to 2nd.^

This is all I found, good map ^^

FAMoss wrote:

|1|2|3|4
sorry
u can reject this D:

Hyper

00:41:183 (41183|0) - change to col 2not going to trying to make this chart having any acks already hard enough as it is also think these below are minor changes that dont really fit in the pattern
00:41:339 (41339|3) - to 2 ^
00:41:495 (41495|0) - to 4 ^
00:41:652 (41652|1) - to 1 ^
00:41:808 (41808|0) - to 2 ^
00:40:245 (40245|1,40245|0,40245|2) -
01:27:902 (87902|0) - to 3 ^
01:28:058 (88058|2) - to 1 ^
01:28:058 - add 2 why add note here
01:28:214 (88214|1,88214|0) - to 4 ^
01:28:370 (88370|3) - to 2 ^
01:28:527 (88527|1) - to 1 ^
01:28:683 (88683|0) - to 2 ^
02:00:870 (120870|1,120909|0) - ctrl + G ok

Another

02:00:441 (120441|0,120480|1,120519|3,120558|2,120597|0,120636|1,120675|3,120714|2,120753|0,120792|1,120831|3,120870|2,120909|0,120948|1,120987|3) -
try this D: i like this one

[B A D] wrote:

NM as requested in here
0|1|2|3

Stuff

Check your AImod

Spring

00:19:777 (19777|1,19777|2,20089|3,20089|0,20402|3,20402|2,20714|1,20714|0) - I'd suggest to reduce them to singles
Also, kiai should end at 00:19:777
00:21:027 (21027|3,21183|3,21339|3,21495|3) - This is unhealthy
00:23:370 (23370|3,23527|3,23683|3,23839|3,23995|3,24152|3,24308|3) - This is unhealthier than before
00:25:402 (25402|2,25558|2,25714|2,25870|2) - *cough*
00:25:714 (25714|0,25870|0,26027|0,26183|0) - *cough* *cough*
00:26:027 (26027|3,26183|3,26339|3,26495|3) - *cough* *cough* *cough*
00:30:402 (30402|2,30558|2,30714|2,30870|2,31027|2,31183|2) - Oh my
Basically just remove all the avoidable/unintentional anchors in this part
01:00:597 (60597|3,60636|2,60675|1,60675|0) - What is this monstrosity
01:06:027 (66027|3) - This LN end at 01:06:183
01:27:277 (87277|0,87433|0,87589|0,87745|0,87902|0) - Hi anchor
Similar to the 2nd kiai, remove all of the unnecessary anchors
02:00:441 (120441|0,120480|1,120519|3,120558|2,120597|0,120636|1,120675|3) - These are 1/6 i accepted all things and changed the patterns LOL

Neat map, nice SV, beautiful song A star for you
Hope this help and gl

error_exe777 wrote:

here i am! unfortunately, i don't really like the song, so ill do a SV mod instead. there wont be much to say but: no problem

box

these are for all diffs with SVs. they should be the same, but so you know im referencing Spring



00:39:777 - can you decide whether the SVs here are before or after the quads? its inconsistent.

00:39:777 (39777|1,39777|0,39777|2,39777|3) - from this one here, it would seem like they are after the notes, but 00:40:245 (40245|2,40245|0,40245|3,40245|1) - here they are before the notes? you'll need to change these.


01:29:777 - i've got the same problem here

01:49:777 - and here.

look, i fixed them for you if you want to use it.

[TimingPoints]
1027,312.5,4,2,1,15,1,0
21027,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
39777,-200,4,2,1,15,0,0
39855,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,0
39933,-200,4,2,1,15,0,0
40011,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,0
40089,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
40245,-200,4,2,1,15,0,0
40323,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,0
40402,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
40558,-200,4,2,1,15,0,0
40636,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,0
40714,-200,4,2,1,15,0,0
40792,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,0
40870,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
81027,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
89777,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
89855,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
89933,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
90011,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
90089,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
90245,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
90323,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
90402,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
90558,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
90636,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
90714,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
90792,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
90870,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
99777,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
101027,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
109777,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
109855,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
109933,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
110011,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
110089,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
110245,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
110323,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
110402,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
110558,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
110636,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
110714,-200,4,2,1,15,0,1
110792,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,1
110870,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
121027,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0

other than that, you used a basic half and half structure (except with that last section) meaning they were no troubles normalising them.

anyway, sorry i couldn't mod it. best of luck! o/

Asherz007 wrote:

This looked interesting...

Probably a couple of things that need reworking, but the top diff looks interesting, so I'll look just at that for now.

[General]
Dude, you got metadata in front of you and you're not using it lol

Artist: 痛男次郎
Title: 自強號

romanised stuff can remain as is.ok changed

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dx7gYH6aieU

Song also appears to be used in BMS, so that's the source (apparently there's some debate about this but BMS can still be used as the source for now)

Additional tags: 英國硬核 bof2013 added

Hitsounds: Execution looks a little odd. I mean, usually, the most used hitsound would be used as the hitnormal, but having a kick as the hitnormal and... that thing as the hitwhistle looks a little odd. If you're up to redoing the hitsounding a little bit, I suggest making the hitnormal the hitwhistle and finding a new hitnormal. Also find an actual hitfinish (ie a cymbal crash), rather than what you have now.

Another thing about the hitsounding: try not to apply more than one of the same hitsound per chord. More often than not it can be way too overpowering. (Thus having the hitnormal as, say, a hihat isn't such a bad idea.)i will add them ater pretty busy at the moment so for now its just the patterns

Also the mp3 is ear-bleedingly loud so here's one that's 2.6dB quieter so other people's ears don't bleed https://puu.sh/yhcKW.mp3 changed to this one

1|2|3|4

A foreword: don't be afraid to reject stuff. I'm just a person with a little more experience, but that doesn't mean I know absolutely everything. If you've got a layering that I haven't seen and a point contradicts that layering, say so.

I won't point every tiny bit out, but be prepared for plenty more words.

Spring, now with talk about lots of concepts

Okay, so the super dense jumpstream is an interesting concept, but I feel like it's jumpstream "for the sake of it" at times. For example, what you could do is have jumps every time there's either the bass kick or the synth heard. This would mean reducing jumps to singles like 00:21:183 (21183|2,21183|3) & 00:21:495 (21495|3,21495|2) & 00:26:183 (26183|1,26183|3,26495|0,26495|1) etc. since they contain neither. changed it

Similarly, I'm not really a fan of breaking the jumpstream since it reduces the physical difficulty slightly and I guess that's what you don't want. So:

1. 00:21:027 (21027|3,21027|2,21027|0,21027|1) - I'd rather this be like Another and just go for triple followed by a single on the 1/4
2. 00:25:714 (25714|1,25714|0,25714|3,25870|0,25870|1,25870|2,26027|0,26027|1,26027|3) - For layering consistency and to keep the difficulty up, I'd rather this just carry on with the jumpstream, since it's still justifiable.
3. 00:30:714 (30714|0,30714|3,30714|1,30870|1,30870|3,30870|2,31027|2,31027|0,31027|3,31027|1) - like before, reduce each chord by one note to keep that jumpstream going.
4. 00:38:527 - I'd still reduce the chords here to continue the jumpstream tbh

changed a of these

You get the idea.

Now to actually look at the jumpstream lol
So, not the most comfortable thing in the world, but I think that's fine. Just make sure the anchors don't get too long. 00:25:245 (25245|1,25402|1,25558|1,25714|1,25870|1,26027|1,26183|1,26339|1,26495|1,26652|1) - this is too long lol. I'd say maximum length for something this dense and difficult would be 5 or 6, else it would get too imbalanced for hand strain, and that's no fun. (I mean what else is there to say about it lol)will try my best to remove them

SVs: O...kay? I'd rather they be bumps than reverse bumps at this strength. If you're keeping them as is, I'd recommend making them a lot stronger, like 0.25/1.75 or greater. SVs before the quads are unnecessary imo.

00:39:933 - space the SVs out across the gap, as they are they just look a little odd. Eg:

1. 00:39:933 - SV 1
2. 00:40:089 - SV 2
3. 00:40:245 - SV 1
4. 00:40:402 - SV 2

And so on.
i changed the SV to bumps
Other general stuffs:

1. 00:39:777 (39777|0,39777|2,39777|1,39777|3,39933|0,39933|1,39933|2,39933|3) - to be honest, I don't really think you need quads (my suggestion in you changing the layering slightly would also make these unjustified). Besides, triples are harder to play anyway.
2. 00:41:027 - end kiai here
3. 00:41:027 (again) - Conceptually, this drastic layering change doesn't make much sense. I'd continue the dense js here to keep the difficulty high. Have jumps for the kicks and the synth-y sounding thing again. You'll end up with some small variations, which is fine. Something like this would fit the section pretty well. Otherwise the drop in difficulty is too much and players have too much time to regain stamina.
4. 01:00:011 (60011|3,60050|2,60089|3) - This... is painful. Something you could do would be to use "jumptrills" without anything actually being a jump, like this. Hard as hell but works for the buildup. (Conventional jumptrills here would inflate the star rating too much, I fear. Just by changing pictured in that screenshot, the image is 4.92, whereas everything with jumps is 5.25. Just by adding 16 notes. I strongly discourage these jumptrills since people will kill you for it. Also having a heavily underrated chart this hard is an impressive feat.)
5. 01:01:027 - Interesting tech section, but I'd also keep mapping at least the kicks and perhaps the snares just to make it a little more challenging.
6. 01:16:027 - I'd go for jumpstream burst here rather than this. Makes the jumptrill at the end have a little bit more sense.
7. I'd be repeating myself if I mentioned stuff in between here.
8. 02:00:454 (120454|3,120506|2,120558|0,120610|1) - Would just go straight to 1/8 rather than 1/6 here. So something like this, including the triple for the finish at the end.

i accepted them all
Well that was quite a bit, wasn't it?

You may want to change bits of the diffs beneath this to accommodate for the layering changes I'm suggesting in that box. Gather a few more mods, have a look into the hitsounds, and I think this will turn out to be quite an interesting thing I'd rather like to look into checking.

Anyway, hope this helps.