This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月11日 at 20:54:08

Artist: ZUN
Title: Majotachi no butoukai ~ Magus
Source: Touhou
Tags: Yui thoubad
BPM: 148
Filesize: 1945kb
Play Time: 01:05
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.93 stars, 195 notes)
2. Normal (2.94 stars, 80 notes)
3. thou's Insane (4.96 stars, 235 notes)
4. Yui's Lunatic (5 stars, 226 notes)

Download: ZUN - Majotachi no butoukai ~ Magus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd beatmap
nomal~x847606653
hard~x847606653
thou's Insane~thou bad
Yui's Lunatic~Yui

guest diff做好了
很喜欢这首曲子~

Download: ZUN - Majotachi no butoukai ~ Magus (x847606653) [thou's Insane].osu

谢了，不过做的还真是快，我一个图起码就是半天才能做完。

Hello~~

I really Love zun really

but you bpm and offset are wrong

BPM: 148,000
1050: 1050

and beat Snap divisor is 1/4 and not 1/6

pleasse fix this this is more better and

Questions? call me in-game

good luck

路过前排=.=

前排而已=.=

As per queue:

[General]
Hitsounds could use some fleshing out in all difficulties.
Try to keep the final slider handle as near to the end of the slider as possible. This gives you more control over the shape, and will make spacing neater for notes after it.
You've used four different slider velocities in Easy and Hard, which is generally a bad idea. In fact, for an Easy difficulty you should really be aiming for one velocity.
You should look at using at least grid 3, too.
The audio file is far too long. Either map the entire song or find a shorter version.

[Easy]
00:07:536 (1,1) - This slowdown and the small spacing is confusing to a new player.
00:12:401 (2) - ^
00:43:212 (1,2,3,1) - Spacing is too big between all of these.
00:49:698 (3,1) - ^
00:51:725 (1) - Too short for an Easy diff.
00:52:941 (1) - Comes too soon after the spinner for an Easy.
01:03:482 (1,2) - Too far apart, and the slider is too fast.

[Hard]
Only going to go through this briefly because I think you need to remove most of the slider velocity changes and be very strict with distance snap.
00:01:050 (1,2) - Too far apart.
00:03:077 (4,5) - ^
00:03:482 (1) - This doesn't make any sense, and is too far from the other notes.
00:04:293 (1,2) - Too far apart.
00:07:536 (1,2) - Jumps like this don't make any sense and are confusing.
00:12:401 (1) - Most spinners should have a finish hitsound.
00:15:239 (1,2,3) - Different slider speeds within the one combo is bad.
00:20:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These short combos are a little messy.
00:26:995 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These jumps aren't obvious enough.
00:45:137 (1) - This should start at 00:44:833 and end at 00:46:049,
01:00:239 (1,2,3) - The spacing with these notes is wrong.

[thou's Insane]
Combos are too short in this diff. You should aim at making each combo go for a whole bar if possible.
00:12:406 (1) - Add a finish.
00:25:379 (1) - End this at 00:26:190 instead.
00:30:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This overlapping is messy.
00:31:865 (1) - End this at 00:32:676 instead.
00:38:352 (1,2,3,4,1) - It's hard to pick the blue tick in this stack. You might want to spread it out a bit instead, or maybe use a repeat slider.
00:51:527 (1) - End this at 00:52:541 instead.
00:53:149 (2,3) - This jump is a bit too subtle, especially coming straight after a spinner.
01:01:663 (4,5) - It looks weird how the 5 isn't lined up with the 4.

Until you map the entire song, I think this belongs in work-in-progress.

thank you.

Hello~

Sorry for my too late mod~

[Easy]

不設置kiai time嗎?建議設置一些~

HP Drain Rate太高了吧......用到2或3就差不多了......

[Hard]

不設置kiai time嗎?建議設置一些~

Overall Difficuity太低了......用到5或6吧......

00:12:604 (1) - 這個轉盤從00:12:401開始比較好

[thou's Insane]

做的還可以~

結束~

有些排版太直了......

長條也不是很美觀......

多玩玩別人的圖吧~

相信對你會有幫助的~

Good Luck~

Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late.

[General]
use small for the grid snap. it will make your slider more tidy.
how bout cut the mp3? u only play untill 01:05:514 right? or.. play till the end of the song.

[Easy]
01:04:293 (2) - OAO WTH IS THIIISS!!?? this is so RANDOM!! this is too haaaaaaarrrrrddd for a newbies. decrease the speed.
u should at the same kiai time with thou's Insane

[Hard]
00:01:252 (2,3,4) - resnap this.
00:04:495 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:077 (1,1) - better if it looked like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168048
00:50:914 (4,5) - grid : 1 time to the left.
00:53:752 (1,2,3,4) - grid : 1 time to the right.
u should at the same kiai time with thou's Insane

[thou's Insane]
01:01:865 (5,6) - grid : 2 times down.
01:05:514 (1) - grid : 7 times to the left.

thats all! Good Luck )

thanks for your help
谢谢大家的帮助0.0

Yo modding ur song because of ur request

General:
You should make a normal diff since it is a short song.

Easy:
00:02:671(3) - Make it like this http://puu.sh/7H62
00:18:077(2) - wow so many points lol anyways 1 grid right for the 2nd last point and 2 grids right for the end point
00:21:320(2) - same as above but this time go left
00:31:860(3) - am i seeing this right? the arrow is pointing up. either get rid of that point or turn the last point around

Hard:
thers problems in this map like the slider velocity change. i just cant point it out.

thou's Insane:
Slider tick rate has to be the same as the other 2 diffs.
00:08:757(5,1) - hidden repeat slider. this is unrankable.

This is the best i can do. GL

Hi~~


[General]

Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order.
Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.

Each difficulty of the mapset must have a preview point set (and be consistent in every difficulty). This is used for both the song selection menu and the online thumbnail preview.



Guidelines
Kiai should start on a white tick (or more commonly, the big white tick called the downbeat) of a measure. Generally, the main part of the chorus will start at this point.



You must make normal diff,and you should recheck your kiai time.

[Easy]
00:45:239 (3)　　　　　　DS

[Hard]
Guidelines
A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x). For example, you could have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x; or 0.75x, 1x, and 1.5x; etc. If more than three slider velocities are used, then they should make sense and be intuitive. If slider velocity changes are able to be merged (e.g. close values like 0.8x and 0.7x) while still flowing/working correctly, then they should be.


You must check this forum.
viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528


bye~

terametis wrote:

Hi~~


[General]

Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order.
Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.

Each difficulty of the mapset must have a preview point set (and be consistent in every difficulty). This is used for both the song selection menu and the online thumbnail preview.



Guidelines
Kiai should start on a white tick (or more commonly, the big white tick called the downbeat) of a measure. Generally, the main part of the chorus will start at this point.



You must make normal diff,and you should recheck your kiai time.

[Easy]
00:45:239 (3)　　　　　　DS

[Hard]
Guidelines
A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x). For example, you could have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x; or 0.75x, 1x, and 1.5x; etc. If more than three slider velocities are used, then they should make sense and be intuitive. If slider velocity changes are able to be merged (e.g. close values like 0.8x and 0.7x) while still flowing/working correctly, then they should be.


You must check this forum.
viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528


bye~

But i had made nomal diff.And others i'll fix it.
Thanks for your moding

看到ZUN的歌，我又要伤心了。我那首94SP ，1 MAT STAR的ZUN的歌，1年都没RANK

GUEST DIF INSANE
00:01:865 (6) 和(2)平行，既然你前面那样放了
00:05:919 (1)~(2)不要放前面的滚轮挡住他，往右放
00:09:163 (1) 移开点，和(5)粘在一起了，话说这位仁兄用DISTANCE SNAP了吗？他没放跳要把这个功能开起来的呀
00:16:460 (7) 被前面滚轮挡住一点点很难看
00:38:656 (2) 怎么手一抖又掉了一个GRID？

HARD
先看的INSANE，觉得做的不错，看到HARD不对了
HARD别用GRID ：中 用 GRID ： 小
00:01:050 (1)~(5) (1)与(2)(3)(4)那么远(5)缺那么进，错误的距离
00:03:482 (3) HARD不能这样随便变速，你HARD比INSANE还难？
00:09:766 (3) 距离
00:20:509~00:22:131 别叠在一起，要叠的话，把STACK-3~4格
00:27:401(1)(2) 错误的距离
00:30:847(4) 前面3拍都靠拢的(4)就突了-，-
00:39:968开始的几个滚轮，放HARD很不和谐，不是难是怪
00:53:752(1) 太近了
你最好学学你朋友做的难度的基本功

NORMAL
00:04:698 (2) 分开点
00:02:671 (1)就一个CLAP？
00:09:158 (1) 别挡住
00:43:212(2) 让滚轮覆盖他
00:51:117(3) 别被滚轮挡住
00:59:428(5) NORMAL别乱跳-，-

EASY
还不错

总体还要加油啊。你有心情的话看看我ZUN的歌，做成这样还RANK不了的
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/20843 已经墓地了，输在LUNATIC难度上，跳了太2

好多人MOD，好兴奋，正在慢慢改^_^

Here's your requested mod.

[General]
Easy is the only difficulty with a Preview Point. Add this to the others.
Easy's Slider Velocity is faster than Normal's. I'm not sure if this is alright or not. You'll have to get a MAT/BAT to look.

[Easy]
00:09:158 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:25:374 (1) - ^
00:34:293 (1) - ^
00:41:590 (1) - ^
00:44:631 (2) - Move this 1 point to the left.

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate: -2
I can see quite a few spacing mistakes in the first 15-20 seconds of this difficulty. My suggestion is to go through this difficulty and re-space.
00:25:374 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:25:374 > The Inheriting Timing Point isn't snapped here. Move it here.
00:35:104 (4) - Add a new combo.
00:42:401 (4) - Remove this new combo.
00:54:563 (4) - Add a new combo.
01:02:671 (4) - ^
01:04:293 (1) - If you did ^, then remove this new combo.

[Hard]
I can see some spacing mistakes here too. It might just be because you're using Grid Size 2, but try to fix these too.
HP Drain Rate: +1 / Overall Difficulty: +2
00:01:860 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:02:671 (8) - If you did ^, add a new combo here.
00:03:482 (1) - If you did ^, remove this new combo.
00:05:914 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:06:725 (1) - ^
00:14:428 (1) - ^
00:14:833 (1) - ^
00:15:239 (1) - ^
00:15:644 (8) - If you did ^, add a new combo here.
00:16:455 (1) - If you did ^, remove this new combo.
00:20:914 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:21:725 (1) - ^
00:25:374 (1) - Extend this slider 1/4 beat.
00:25:881 (2) - Move this slider 1/4 beat later, and make it end 1/4 beat earlier.
00:27:401 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:42:806 (3) - Try moving this to x:176 y:128.
00:47:266 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:48:887 (1) - ^
00:57:806 (1) - ^
01:01:860 (1) - ^

[thou's Insane]
The offset here is 1055. Change it to 1050.
Resnap this difficulty. (Timing > Resnap All Notes)
00:11:392 (1) - Remove this new combo.
00:11:595 (1) - If you did ^, add a new combo here.
00:23:348 (5,1) - Merge these two into one slider?

不知道说些什么了........
纯建议：末尾音乐结束得有点突然..........可以延长一点........
PS:不要KD.......

Download: ZUN - Majotachi no butoukai ~ Magus (x847606653) [thou's Insane].osu

random modding

[General]
comboburst.png那么大吓人呢? 而且看看这张图 = =

[normal]

音量和hard不一样?
so many ugly sliders, you should read this http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Hard]
00:06:725 (3,4) - change to 2 sliders?
00:28:415 (4) - 不要clap
00:28:617 (1) - 开始处clap 结尾不要
00:29:428 (2) - 开始处clap
00:35:104 (1) - 碰到血条了
00:46:455 (1,2,1) - 去掉2的whistle, 每个滑条第二个reverse clap
00:48:887 (2) - whistle,whistle,clap,-
00:48:887 (2,3) - spacing, 建议2换个方向
01:03:482 (3) - 结尾clap
01:05:104 (5) - finish

[thou's Insane]
00:01:860 (6) - 头上clap
00:02:671 (1) - clap
00:03:887 (6) - clap
00:09:158 (1) - 第一个转向clap
00:42:401 (1,2) - whistle
00:44:428 (4) - whistle
00:54:360 (9) - clap
01:03:279 (4) - no clap
01:03:482 (1) - clap
01:04:293 (9) - 结尾处也clap一下

Mod Request as Modding Queue

General:
-You have to change the mp3 because the bitrate is unrankable (320 kbps). To be rankable must be between 128 to 192 kbps
-The Sources and tags must be the same in all difficulties, so you have to add Touhou to source in thou and yui difficulties and delete touhou to tags
-You have to use the same time to kiais sections in all difficulties
- In Easy and Normal difficulty are very cut in General. Try to mantain a sequence

Easy:
HP Drain Rate: -2
Approach Rate: +1
00:07:536 (1,2): This slider looks weird, maybe you can change (make another form)
00:36:522 (1): Something like this:
00:44:631 (1): Remove New Combo
00:51:117 (1): ^

Normal:
Approach Rate: +1
Overall Dificulty: +1
Circle Size: -1
00:11:995 (x): Add a note and Remove the New Combo in 00:12:401 (1)
00:27:806 (1,2): Don't Stack
00:29:428 (1,2): ^
00:43:414: Don't add breaks in kiais sections becasue I think that is the most important part
00:51:320: And this break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it

Hard:
HP Drain Rate: -1
Overall Difficulty: +1
00:20:104 (1): Remove New Combo
00:33:077 (1): ^
00:35:104 (1): ^
01:05:509 (1): ^

tohu's Insane:
Circle Size: -1
00:05:914 (1,2 ; 1,2 ; 1,2 ; 1,2): It's not necesary add New Combo, I think that (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) is better
00:12:401: Remove this break is really short and unnecesary
00:16:049 (6): New Combo
00:18:077 (1): Remove New Combo here and add New Combo in 00:18:482 (3)
00:20:509 (1,1,1,1): It is not necesary add a New Combo in each note, (1,2,3,4) it's OK.
00:24:968 (6): New Combo
00:31:455 (5): ^
00:33:482 (1,2 ; 1,2 ; 1,2 ; 1,2): The same in 00:05:914
00:44:833: Don't add a break in kiai sections
00:56:995 (4): New Combo
01:05:509 (1): Remove New Combo

Yui's Lunatic:
HP Drain Rate: +1
00:16:860 (10): Unrankable Slider
00:18:887 (5): ^
00:23:347 (1): ^
00:23:347 (1): For consistency Remove New Combo and add New Combo in 00:23:955
00:24:968 (6): New Combo
00:25:374 (10): Unrankable Slider
00:35:509 (7): New Combo
00:51:725 (4): ^

Well That's all. Good Luck with your beatmap

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

random modding

[General]
comboburst.png那么大吓人呢? 而且看看这张图 = =

[normal]

音量和hard不一样?
so many ugly sliders, you should read this http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Hard]
00:06:725 (3,4) - change to 2 sliders? 改了哦
00:28:415 (4) - 不要clap 去除
00:28:617 (1) - 开始处clap 结尾不要
00:29:428 (2) - 开始处clap
00:35:104 (1) - 碰到血条了 移动下来了
00:46:455 (1,2,1) - 去掉2的whistle, 每个滑条第二个reverse clap 恩
00:48:887 (2) - whistle,whistle,clap,-
00:48:887 (2,3) - spacing, 建议2换个方向
01:03:482 (3) - 结尾clap
01:05:104 (5) - finish

[thou's Insane]
00:01:860 (6) - 头上clap
00:02:671 (1) - clap
00:03:887 (6) - clap
00:09:158 (1) - 第一个转向clap
00:42:401 (1,2) - whistle
00:44:428 (4) - whistle
00:54:360 (9) - clap
01:03:279 (4) - no clap
01:03:482 (1) - clap
01:04:293 (9) - 结尾处也clap一下

以上基本都改了，我对HITSOUNDS不熟悉,谢啦少年0.0