XVoIR wrote:

Isn't something wrong with storyboard? I mean at 03:13:589 - syllabes aren't there and the whole word is shown for a moment at 03:14:179 - but few moments later this happens

Nelly wrote:

Check the texting. The lyrics and description goes off the screen. Outstanding storyboard overall!

Bakari wrote:

Aren't these lyrics supposed to be parallel with the bar below?

also there's sme ghosting from the girl in the background, try making the PNG version bigger, s it'd cover up the ghosting?

1. Fix where color flashes don't appear because they were mistakenly considered as Taiko.
2. Despacito timing fixed.
3. Some of your favorite square effects have been changed. Please make sure that they look good to you. Sorry for the inconvenience.
4. Nerfed second wave's strength.
5. Foggy circular particles revised a bit.

Haruto wrote:

WHY NOT THE REMIX VER. IM SO MAD RN 😂😂🔫

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Added a note on Oni and fixed some general issues in Overdose, catch and taiko are ready to go!

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Added a note on Oni and fixed some general issues in Overdose, catch and taiko are ready to go!

1. Revised ending to transition from one background to another.
2. Lyrics and intro text more friendly for unconventional monitor sizes.
3. Foggy circular particles revised to fix conflicting fade issues.
4. Shortened filenames of common particles to save space.
5. Changed the second set of square effects to another more exciting random seed.

1. Ending revised.
2. Changed the cloudy particles effects to their final form. Conway's Game of Life!
3. Slowed frequency of second waves.
4. Minor fixes on the waves after their loop's completion.

1. With the SBs I make lately, I always want to draw more original content so it's a more unique experience. I did the same with Granat and Yoiyoi. With more artists being understandably sensitive about how their artwork is to be distributed, I think it's more important to take a step with trying to do more original things too. Hollow Wings' backgrounds and efforts are all original too, so I want to kind of push in that direction more.
2. I wanted to reward the player with a kind of special treat when they reached the ending. They've seen the girl throughout the whole map, why not reach the end and have the gratitude of our Despacito chica here? To me, it helps tie the beginning intro and the end together.
3. In addition, I want to give a sense of further awe reaching towards that end. So I built my last effects in the map demonstrating different effects in mind.

1. I am still kind of confused with the PlayStation Square triangle Circle Cross pin in the girl's hair. It makes no sense with the song/theme of the SB. Can't we just edit it out somehow?
2. The follwoing files appear to be unused:
   
   1. SB\common\s.png
   2. SB\ending\canvas_bg.png
   3. SB\ending\san_juan.png
   4. SB\lyrics\_04d.png

1. Some of the collab names are mash=ups, some not. Maybe make them consistent?

1. 01:03:478 (2,1) - since the timing changes and the whole thing gets a bit more complicated I'd unstack the pattern to help players and make it more readable.
2. 01:59:433 (4,1) - this doesn't look very beginner friendly due to the way overlap/flow change look. Isn't there any way to avoid it?

1. 01:24:039 (3) - I'd remove the circle to highlight the way instruments play. This circle follows some really weak sounds and doesn't really need to be here for a Normal.

1. 00:29:599 (7,1) - I'd space them a little further or stack to make things a bit more readable.
2. 01:00:272 (3,4,1) - visibly inconsistent spacing may look a little strange here. I'd recommend to increase it so that everything is neat and consistent.
3. 01:59:601 (2) - what is the slider snapped to? I think I'm missing something because I fail to understand the rhytm here.

1. 01:16:624 - I'm not entirely sure about leaving these beats unstressed. The vocals and drums are really strong here, after all.
   Note: same would apply for the similar pattern in the other kiai.

1. 01:30:612 (2,3) - 02:55:556 (2,3) - since they have very similar sound I'd expect them to be mapped in a similar way. So, yeah, maybe add a slight 2-3 jump in the first pattern?

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

dats why it doesnt gives a great express to the music, yea as u said the stronger sound should get larger spacing however i want to keep the structure more <...> or i would rather keep my structure(cuz its clean

Bakari wrote:

Storyboard

1. I am still kind of confused with the PlayStation Square triangle Circle Cross pin in the girl's hair. It makes no sense with the song/theme of the SB. Can't we just edit it out somehow?

Bakari wrote:

Storyboard

1. I am still kind of confused with the PlayStation Square triangle Circle Cross pin in the girl's hair. It makes no sense with the song/theme of the SB. Can't we just edit it out somehow? I really don't think this matters at all...
2. The follwoing files appear to be unused:
   
   1. SB\common\s.png
   2. SB\ending\canvas_bg.png
   3. SB\ending\san_juan.png
   4. SB\lyrics\_04d.png
   Removed them.

General

1. Some of the collab names are mash=ups, some not. Maybe make them consistent? Some people want to mash names, some don't.
   I think both are fine. Mashing up names for the Normal is going to be really confusing too.

Insane

1. 01:30:612 (2,3) - 02:55:556 (2,3) - since they have very similar sound I'd expect them to be mapped in a similar way. So, yeah, maybe add a slight 2-3 jump in the first pattern? Nah, I want to do a different jump pattern. It's more interesting. Also players won't remember what the pattern was from a minute and 30 seconds ago so consistency concerns like that arne't really relevant imo...

So yeah, that's that.

Bakari wrote:

Gero, ezek & MkGuh's Normal

1. 01:24:039 (3) - I'd remove the circle to highlight the way instruments play. This circle follows some really weak sounds and doesn't really need to be here for a Normal. I'd rather to keep it, since the voice here is not that weak, so it should be fine in my opinion.

Monstrata wrote:

No thanks but thanks