Priority | • 00:38:183 (38183|2,38264|3) - I really think you should move this all one col to the left, why? I think it'll transition better to 00:38:345 (38345|0,38426|1,38507|2,38507|3) - , which pretty much will be a more decent type of direction change. I think the minor concern here is the weight that would put into col 2 and thus strain into the left hand. It still remains as a 3412 roll in a sense, so I think it should be ok, even if a little odd.
Priority | • 00:51:074 (51074|1,51156|2,51237|1,51318|2,51399|0,51480|2,51561|0,51642|2) - Not so sure why did you add trills here at all since i don't see them fit at all with the rhythm or the music itself? I'd say you just finish it as a light JS rather than trilling it. this was sheep's idea So basically what happens is the js stops being broken and there was essentially no other way to signify this other than with stacks which you see here.
Priority | • 01:07:047 (67047|0,67129|2) - Even the broken stuff follows certain patterns; i think you should really move 01:07:129 (67129|1) - to [2] and CTRL+H all of this 01:07:210 (67210|1,67210|0,67291|2,67291|3,67372|1,67372|0,67453|2,67534|3,67534|0,67534|1,67696|2,67858|1,68020|0) - to fix it. Trust me, i've tested dis :^). Issue with your suggestion is that these two notes are 1/4 apart rather than 1/8, so they're not next to each other to signify it's not part of the roll. Although the suggestion may be more comfortable, I think players may be susceptible to misreading or misplaying from overdoing the burst,
so I think I'll keep as is.
Priority | • 01:18:723 (78723|3,78804|1,78885|2,78966|1,79047|3) - Edgyness at its finest.. Indeed. But they follow a pattern.
Priority | • 01:27:561 - There is a strong sound of what seems to be a rim hit here, i would highly recommend you map this I feel like at 100% speed this "rim hit" appears to be glossed over, which is why I didn't see it as that significant..
Priority | • 01:30:804 (90804|3,90885|2,90966|1,91047|2,91129|3) - From everything you used in that section, this feels very odd to play, i dont think you should add that type of hand movement there. Fair enough. Flipped the last two notes.
Priority | • 01:43:858 (103858|3,103858|1,104507|3,104507|1,105156|3,105156|1,105804|3,105804|1) - I think you might want to vary your jumps here since you use that one quite often and feels a bit repetitive. A little precarious to change, since I'd like to have the ministack gimmick for this, whilst maintaining column balance as best I can. Yeah, this end up being a little repetitve, but it's only for 2 measures rather than 8, so I don't think it would be too bad.
Priority | • 02:04:615 - Just saying you could add a small challenging LNs here representing the soft vocals, but thats pretty much up to you. I kinda ran out of columns lol
Priority | • 02:20:183 (140183|2) - Still pretty clueless on why did you add a single here, i think with the LN is enough to represent the small hi hat sound. Transitional note I guess. The 1/1 notes are following the constant synth, whilst this SN would've been an LN for the bass for a short while (to make sense of the 3/2 LN before this), but I ran out of columns again.
Priority | • 02:58:939 (178939|3,179020|1,179102|3) - I think you should make this a one handed trill, mostly say it because it can be a bit hard to hit with this jump 02:59:102 (179102|0,179102|3) - . Could be, but all the trills here are TH at the moment, and moving this woould break that consistency.
Priority | • 03:27:318 (207318|0) - Think you might wanna add a crash here in contrast with 03:27:642 (207642|3) - so the PAN fixes and also i think there should be a crash there. I didn't (and still don't) think the crash is suited to being applied there, which is why... well, it's not there.
Priority | • 03:34:453 (214453|1) - Since there is the same vocal repeated here at 03:34:615 - , you could maybe shorten this to a 1/4 LN and add another LN in the same col here 03:34:615 - so in that way both sounds are represented. There's really only one "attack" to the two notes which is at the start of the first note, thus why there's only one LN here, rather than two.
Priority | • 03:34:939 (214939|3) - This LN should be 1/2 instead of 1/1 since there is another vocal that starts at 03:35:102 - . ^
Priority | • 03:39:642 (219642|2) - Same things i mentioned with the 1/4 jacked LN. (read above) ^
Priority | • 03:44:831 (224831|1) - ^ ^
Priority | • 03:45:318 (225318|3) - Same here as well with the 1/1 LN, cut it to 1/2 and add another LN at 03:45:480 - . ^
Priority | • 03:50:020 (230020|1) - To summarize, 1/4 jacks. To summarise, not really wanting to do this.
Priority | • 04:00:561 (240561|3) - Change col pls, already used it for 03:59:912 (239912|3) - and still not even in the stack section. The LN pattern goes 23142413 x2, so I don't really think that's too much of a problem?
Priority | • 04:36:074 (276074|3,276237|3) - Move this to [3] so it doesn't interfere with 04:36:723 (276723|3,276885|3) - , or you could do it with this one too. Each measure utilises each column once for the LNs here, so moving one would break that pattern. Also,
what interference?
Priority | • 04:40:291 - You pretty much follow from that section on frequent direction change which is from left to right, might as well wana do it right to left to vary it a bit more. Not really seeing what should be changed here, to be honest.
Priority | • 05:01:047 (301047|0,301047|3) - WHERE IS MAH CRASH. Nuuuuuuuu plsno D: I completely dropped the hitsounds when the LNs went, so putting one here is D: