Shiggy Jr. - oyasumi

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Yauxo
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■ 00:10:092 (1) - I'd prefer if this one was further away to (6) than (5) is to empathize it a bit more, as it's the last object in the measure and before the break. It also has a nice snapping sound, so that'd work too. Across (4) maybe?
[searasp]
■ Personally disliking that the jumps end up in lowered spacing, but that's a subjective thing. Nothing to change.
[ohwow]
■ 00:17:742 (3) - I'd Nc this one for that tiny bit of readability
■ 00:38:067 (2,3,4) - I found this one to be a bit odd to play since the Slider ends on a strong big white, starting the what-should-be-stronger-than-a-sliderend double on a blue tick. Something like this would be better imo. Could also change the second Kickslider to a Triplet or anything else, really.

Honestly, the set seems fine the way it is. All diffs are solid and there's only nazi things to point out. Good Job :3
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bite you death

Yauxo wrote:

From Queueueueueueu hello

[ex]
■ 00:10:092 (1) - I'd prefer if this one was further away to (6) than (5) is to empathize it a bit more, as it's the last object in the measure and before the break. It also has a nice snapping sound, so that'd work too. Across (4) maybe? moved 6 rather than 1, because i'd like to keep 1 in the position it is currenty in

Honestly, the set seems fine the way it is. All diffs are solid and there's only nazi things to point out. Good Job :3
ty for mod!
Ohwow
@yauxo

1) i don't think an NC is needed tbh
2) made white click clickable.

Thanks

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bjlly
Shot some stars! REALLY love this mapset.

Just wish I wouldn't 1xMiss ;(

SeaRasp

cococolaco wrote:

[searasp]
00:00:792 (1) - remove nc? yes whoops
00:30:942 (2,3) vs 01:08:142 (2,3) different concepts
01:16:092 (1,1,1,1) - not a fan of nc spam Kinda works here
Topic Starter
bite you death

Tutti wrote:

Shot some stars! REALLY love this mapset. ty!

Just wish I wouldn't 1xMiss ;( you'll get it eventually!

Osatia
uh ok placeholre fort eh mod
toybot
doesn't even include the oyasumi at the end smh
Topic Starter
bite you death

toybot wrote:

doesn't even include the oyasumi at the end smh
smh my head
Chewin

Chewin wrote:

Call me when the mapset is 100% completed and have received a few more mods
~General~

  1. According to:

    ~ho's normal~

    00:10:092 (1) - welp this is the only diff that has this part mapped while the higher diffs don't. This is kinda weird so it looks bad to see but one of you should adapt to the whole mapset so that it's consistent between diffs.
    To be honest: just map it. You mapped the next section at 00:48:492 (1) - that has the same vocal/rhythm/intensity so I do not see any reason to skip it.


~collab beginner~

  1. 00:34:092 (1) - Make this horizontal (linear) like you did for 01:12:492 (1) - because now it's slightly inclined on the top;


~easy~

  1. 00:38:892 (1) - I feel this slider too much pushed on the right side on its last part, I would suggest you to direct it like this on top side. You could even improve its shape a bit because meh I don't like it tbh: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9480483 it gives a better impact while playing it;
  2. 01:01:692 (3) - Make it perfectly horizontal? Being slightly inclined on the top on the last part makes it look unflowing;


~ho's normal~

  1. 00:10:092 (1) - welp this is the only diff that has this part mapped while the higher diffs don't. This is kinda weird so it looks bad to see but one of you should adapt to the whole mapset so that it's consistent between diffs. To be clear: talk with other mappers and find a point in common;


~hard~

  1. 00:04:392 (2) - Being every 1/2 circle after the slider during this part placed on the same direction of its slider (like 00:06:792 (2) - and 00:09:192 (2) - ) move this circle to x:172 y:344 for the same reason and do not forget to fix the 1.00x spacing to the next slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9480535
  2. 00:28:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Instead to increase this spacing (that should be reduced some little more) I would just emphasize the spacing between 00:27:942 (4,1) - because of the higher intensity of the downbeat, this should be applied to all parts (but if I was you I would just keep consistency in the spacing like you did for 01:14:892 (1,2,3,4) - because the change of spacing of a whole pattern in a constant spaced part just makes the flow look messy and ugly to play. If you really want to increase it, just do it for the first element to emphasize the strongest sound on the downbeat but not the whole pattern, because the map is so flowing and it's a waste to ruin it with unnecessary higher spacing, but it's up to you);
  3. 00:38:292 (3,1) - Unnecessary decrease of spacing, it could confuse players, it looks 1/2 while it's still 1/1;


~ohwow's insane~

  1. 00:04:392 (3) - Compared to all previous stacked sliders that are reversed while stacked, this slider should be CTRL + G for consistency, or you could CTRL + G this one 00:03:942 (1) - to make it be in front of the previous 00:03:642 (4) - that is an usual cool pattern. The actual one is unexpected since every similar pattern are structured in a predictable way being them reversed;
  2. 00:38:067 (3) - Unnecessary circle, I can't hear anything in the music. Its presence even makes lose intensity to the 00:37:992 (2) - circle that should be emphasized because of its higher vocal pitch (and finish hitsound), just like you did for the second kiai time (maybe you could edit the whole pattern like the second one? It's much better imo);


~searasp's extra~

  1. 00:19:092 (8) - NC like you did for the next part at 00:57:492 (1) - ?
  2. 00:32:292 (3) - Give them the 1.13x spacing for consistency;
  3. 01:04:842 (5) - Stack it with the previous slider or just give it the same spacing you made for all those 3/4, this is the only unstacked 3/4 that has a smaller spacing than others;
  4. 01:18:342 (7) - Remove circle like you did for 01:19:542 or add it here. An other cool solution would be to extend the sliders till the red tick removing the circle like hazu made for his diff, it's much cooler imo;


~hazu's expert~

  1. 00:23:442 (2) - I would change this because the white tick should be clickable because of the finish hitsound: being the slider's tail it just lose its intensity that should be emphasized with a click and actually the rhyhtm makes the player feel perplessed without a circle/element on that tick, tbh (and I testplayed it and it looked weird to me). All other cymbals on other parts are all clickable, indeed. This applies to 01:01:842 (2) - too;


~ex~

  1. 00:29:292 (1,2) - Reduce the spacing like 00:30:492 (1,2) - and00:34:092 (1,2) - and so on ;
  2. 00:33:792 (1,2) - This antijump and change of up-down pattern made me feel sad honestly xD Just keep the same logic pattern? Or just avoid this sudden antijump that destroys the flow;
  3. 01:14:892 (1,2,3,4) - This is the only 3/4 part (I guess it's the same you skipped to map last time?) that has a weird spacing to play, just make it smoother with comparing it with others ew
  4. 01:21:117 (1,2,3,4,1) - Remove this elements to be consistent with all diffs. The slider 01:20:292 (1) - would perfectly close the map considering that it's 1/2 more extended compared to others to close the map in the best way, no need to add these elements;


This took a while (so much diffs TwT) but overall mapset is clean to me.
Call me back after changes and replies!
Hazu-

Chewin wrote:

Chewin wrote:

Call me when the mapset is 100% completed and have received a few more mods
~hazu's expert~

  1. 00:23:442 (2) - I would change this because the white tick should be clickable because of the finish hitsound: being the slider's tail it just lose its intensity that should be emphasized with a click and actually the rhyhtm makes the player feel perplessed without a circle/element on that tick, tbh (and I testplayed it and it looked weird to me). All other cymbals on other parts are all clickable, indeed. This applies to 01:01:842 (2) - too; Mmm... I disagree, I would stop following the vocals and it would be weirder imo.


This took a while (so much diffs TwT) but overall mapset is clean to me.
Call me back after changes and replies!
Thanks~ I changed some stuffs.
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Topic Starter
bite you death

Chewin wrote:

Chewin wrote:

Call me when the mapset is 100% completed and have received a few more mods oooooooooo
~collab beginner~

  1. 00:34:092 (1) - Make this horizontal (linear) like you did for 01:12:492 (1) - because now it's slightly inclined on the top; copy pasted 2nd slider into the first one cause lol


~easy~

  1. 00:38:892 (1) - I feel this slider too much pushed on the right side on its last part, I would suggest you to direct it like this on top side. You could even improve its shape a bit because meh I don't like it tbh: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9480483 it gives a better impact while playing it; tried to fix
  2. 01:01:692 (3) - Make it perfectly horizontal? Being slightly inclined on the top on the last part makes it look unflowing; did


~hard~

  1. 00:04:392 (2) - Being every 1/2 circle after the slider during this part placed on the same direction of its slider (like 00:06:792 (2) - and 00:09:192 (2) - ) move this circle to x:172 y:344 for the same reason and do not forget to fix the 1.00x spacing to the next slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9480535 fixed
  2. 00:28:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Instead to increase this spacing (that should be reduced some little more) I would just emphasize the spacing between 00:27:942 (4,1) - because of the higher intensity of the downbeat, this should be applied to all parts (but if I was you I would just keep consistency in the spacing like you did for 01:14:892 (1,2,3,4) - because the change of spacing of a whole pattern in a constant spaced part just makes the flow look messy and ugly to play. If you really want to increase it, just do it for the first element to emphasize the strongest sound on the downbeat but not the whole pattern, because the map is so flowing and it's a waste to ruin it with unnecessary higher spacing, but it's up to you); I dont want to increase spacing for singular objects, as throughout the whole diff I've increased it for sections only, not for lonely notes. I also think that 00:28:092 - to 00:29:142 - has the same intensity and I'd like to keep the spacing the same there for that reason
  3. 00:38:292 (3,1) - Unnecessary decrease of spacing, it could confuse players, it looks 1/2 while it's still 1/1; changed

als on other parts are all clickable, indeed. This applies to 01:01:842 (2) - too;[/list]

~ex~

  1. 00:29:292 (1,2) - Reduce the spacing like 00:30:492 (1,2) - and00:34:092 (1,2) - and so on ; oops that was a mistake that slipped for a while xd
  2. 00:33:792 (1,2) - This antijump and change of up-down pattern made me feel sad honestly xD Just keep the same logic pattern? Or just avoid this sudden antijump that destroys the flow; i will change this, but rn i cant come up with any fixes, will edit when i do changed it
  3. 01:14:892 (1,2,3,4) - This is the only 3/4 part (I guess it's the same you skipped to map last time?) that has a weird spacing to play, just make it smoother with comparing it with others ew moved 3 closer to 2
  4. 01:21:117 (1,2,3,4,1) - Remove this elements to be consistent with all diffs. The slider 01:20:292 (1) - would perfectly close the map considering that it's 1/2 more extended compared to others to close the map in the best way, no need to add these elements; did


This took a while (so much diffs TwT) but overall mapset is clean to me.
Call me back after changes and replies!
ty! :eyes:
Ohwow
@Chewin

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Tags:listen to the music jpop japanese pop おやすみ tomoko ikeda 池田 智子 shigeyuki harada 原田 茂幸 natsuhiko mori 森 夏彦 kazma moroishi 諸石 和馬 ohwow hazu- searasp hos hootowlstar walshy byd
BeatmapID:1437528
BeatmapSetID:665057

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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2,12692,13992
2,15242,16692
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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163,302,68142,2,0,P|177:255|210:219,1,97.4999955368044,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,320,68442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
333,161,68592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
434,257,68742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,86,68892,6,0,P|418:13|324:37,1,194.999991073609,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,82,69342,2,0,P|498:35|465:-1,1,97.4999955368044,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,100,69642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,52,69792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,220,69942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,156,70092,6,0,P|86:140|134:132,1,97.4999955368044,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,220,70392,2,0,P|160:223|113:235,1,97.4999955368044,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,179,70692,2,0,P|348:180|396:189,1,97.4999955368044,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,296,70992,2,0,P|389:282|340:277,1,97.4999955368044,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,317,71292,6,0,L|210:191,1,97.4999955368044,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,82,71592,2,0,L|300:179,1,97.4999955368044,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,211,71817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,211,71892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
405,116,72042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,9,72192,2,0,P|224:43|215:90,1,97.4999955368044,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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25,238,72942,2,0,L|122:244,1,97.4999955368044,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,260,73242,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,167,73392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
217,337,73542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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298,159,74142,2,0,L|395:152,1,97.4999955368044,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,273,74442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,260,74592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
398,118,74742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,324,74892,6,0,L|390:227,1,97.4999955368044,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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211,311,77742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
281,200,77892,2,0,B|336:196|336:196|377:205|377:205|433:201,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,201,78492,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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454,199,78942,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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218,271,79692,5,2,0:0:0:0:
156,200,79842,2,0,B|118:202,2,37.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,291,80142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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251,21,80892,5,2,0:0:0:0:
HootOwlStar
the intensities in the two parts are actually quite different due to the change in percussion. the second part is mostly four-on-the-floor beats so relatively it is much more fast-paced and intense than the first part, in which it's mostly snare beats with some brilliant kick fill-ins. easier difficulties will not be able to bring out the difference due to simplifications of rhythms and hence the first part is not mapped, while for higher difficulties the current rhythms are literally better adaptation to the rhythm since it brings out contrasts effectively.

these are my two cents anyway, the current condition should be fine.
m3gB3g
dont forget delete unused BG "1"
Topic Starter
bite you death

m3gB3g wrote:

dont forget delete unused BG "1"
i did?

m3gB3g

bite you death wrote:

m3gB3g wrote:

dont forget delete unused BG "1"
i did?

oh, then i cant understand why site's main BG can't change to the new one ...(maybe rename "starstorm" to "1" then reput him to all diffs and refresh mapset i hope this gonna fix main bg.)
Topic Starter
bite you death

m3gb3g wrote:

oh, then i cant understand why site's main BG can't change to the new one ...(maybe rename "starstorm" to "1" then reput him to all diffs and refresh mapset i hope this gonna fix main bg.)
nah, the bg shown there is the bg that the map was first uploaded with, it's a bug
Chewin
you need to redownload zzz
SeaRasp

Chewin wrote:

Chewin wrote:

~searasp's extra~

  1. 00:19:092 (8) - NC like you did for the next part at 00:57:492 (1) - ? Id rather keep that one as one pattern I think its better without nc
  2. 00:32:292 (3) - Give them the 1.13x spacing for consistency; since its a circle you cant really notice the difference in spacing plus I dont wanna go too far down so Ill leave this the same
  3. 01:04:842 (5) - Stack it with the previous slider or just give it the same spacing you made for all those 3/4, this is the only unstacked 3/4 that has a smaller spacing than others; Its like 00:26:442 (5) - and its not the same section either so this is the way Id like to keep them
  4. 01:18:342 (7) - Remove circle like you did for 01:19:542 or add it here. An other cool solution would be to extend the sliders till the red tick removing the circle like hazu made for his diff, it's much cooler imo; Hum I kinda wanna keep them the way they are, I placed a circle here cuz there is a bit more noticeable beat here and to transition and didnt place a circle on the next pattern to separate the last pattern to mark the ending of the song
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