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Chewin wrote:

Hello! Your mapset has been chosen from my Queue.

~General~

  1. I guess you still have to add your GD's names in the tags xP Do not forget it eheh waiting for hos to finish before adding tags xd
  2. Why not using capitalized first letter of diff names? This looks weird xD title is lower case so diffnames are lower case, only gimick i can ever put in my map


~collab beginner~

  1. 00:46:077 (3) - (Just a small point) can you make this slider symmetrical with the left part of the grid? Idk this imperfection kinda bothered me xD I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9357657 It gives a more impact because of the smoother and cleaner flow. This should be applied for the next 00:47:877 (5) - as well; oh boy i cant do symmetry for my life, but i tried to improve
  2. The map itself is good but I would work more on sliders' shapes because actually they are kinda unflowing for the same reason I mentioned above :3
  3. Do not forget to hitsound this diff O: ofc xd


~easy~

  1. 00:05:877 (2) - What about using some custom slidertick hitsound with the same sound of 00:05:277 (1) - 's tail to emphasize the clap in the music? It should be done for consistency due to the empty sound that should be filled with the custom clap imo. This applied for the next ones as well ofc; putting hs on sliderticks cuts them of halfway a lot so i prob wont do that nevermind, added
  2. 00:27:477 (2) - Add finish like you did for 00:32:277 (2) - and 00:37:077 (2) - ; sure
  3. 00:33:477 (4) - Add clap to be consistent with previous (4)s but actually there should be a finish here and on 00:28:677 (4) - like you did for 00:38:277 (4) - . Check these sliders carefully and make the hitsounding consistent between parts; hs is kinda messy but ill work it out, didnt change any of these, though
  4. 00:56:877 (1) - Honestly talking, I would avoid this kind of tricky slider on an Easy diff that would kinda make the player feel confused while playing it xD You could make something more artistic due to it's.. weird shape imo xD It can be improved (about shape, it's just a personal taste, but I would fix the slider so that the ball doesn't get trolled by the red points xD); yeah it was just cause i really liked this slider shape when i made this diff
  5. 01:05:877 (2) - Same of 00:27:477 (2) - and same thing about 01:07:077 (4) - (read above, make the hitsounding consistent between parts); changed first, not second


~hard~

  1. 00:17:727 - What about adding a circle here to fill the drum sound in the music? You could even make an 1/2 slider that starts at 00:17:577 (2) - instead to make it easier and to fill properly all the sounds in the bg; did the 1/2 slider solution
  2. 00:37:077 (1) - Try to move this slider some grid below because it's actually covered by HP bar and it looks ugly; moved it down to fix touching hp bar issue, aesthetics of this pattern is fine to me though
  3. 01:17:877 - I would feel more confident if this slider was reduced by 1/2 by adding a circle on the red tick where the slider actually ends just like you did for 01:19:077 (3,4) - and 01:20:277 (3,4) - . This looks kinda messy; yeah changed


~ex~

  1. This is the higher diff and HP drain should be at least +2 and read above what I said about 00:10:077 (1) - (It's not a good idea to keep the HP drain low just because you don't want to add those break times D:) ill make it hp6.5 at most, as i despise hp7 due to the hp drain with hardrock.
    set to hp6 for the time being, also added breaks
  2. 00:21:477 (5,1) - I felt this jump a little awkward and weird to play honestly after the 00:21:327 (4,5) - one. I would move the (1) somewhere else instead to make a smoother flow and a more enjoyable pattern/jump to play (I tried to give you an example but I didn't get any idea actually, sorry TwT You can try to find a better solution probably); i stacked it with 00:20:877 (1) - from previous combo, works fine i think
  3. 00:23:877 (1,2,3) - I would have expected to keep playing the same left-right pattern honestly and soo I highly suggest you to fix it like this, it's muuuuuch more fun trust me TwT https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9358078 and there should be NC at (3) to advice about the slowdown and to be consistent with previous (1)-(2) combo patterns; sure, changed
  4. 00:29:127 (2) - The jump from (1) is unflowing to play. I would suggest you to place it at x: 232 y: 80 to keep the same logic of 00:28:677 (1,2) - pattern with an up-down movement on the left side; changed, but didnt move to your suggested coordinates
  5. 00:33:777 (3) - Add NC for consistency; sure
  6. 00:35:127 (3) - Placing this circle at x: 348 y: 340 would make the jumping pattern more fun and smoother to play and you can even stack the next 00:36:027 (1) - with its new placement for the same reason; moved somewhere similar
  7. 01:02:577 (3) - If you applied the same suggestion of before at 00:23:877 (1,2,3) -you should use NC here for consistency; added nc but i think pattern is fine
  8. 01:10:077 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - How come did you decide to change the pattern rhythm here? I don't understand, this is the only part where you decided to use 1/2 sliders instead of the 3/4 sliders you did for all previous and upcoming parts; oops, fixed now xd
  9. Very good map but I would fix those unflowing jumping patterns that can IMO be improved and the last issue with sliders' snapping.


All right guys, good mapset here! I wish you good luck for the rank :3 thanks so much for the mod! :D
posted
All fixed, Thanks~
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58002
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:oyasumi
TitleUnicode:oyasumi
Artist:Shiggy Jr.
ArtistUnicode:Shiggy Jr.
Creator:bite you death
Version:hazu's expert
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1441095
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posted

Chewin wrote:

~ohwow's insane~

  1. First of all check unsnapped stuff AIBAT catched: https://puu.sh/y2SW1.png o
  2. 00:10:077 (1) - From here and all next parts consider to add some break times because with hr (and hr + hd for the pros) the HP drain would be too high even if the acc is to 100% and it would cause fails for no reason at all ;c k good point
  3. 01:05:277 (4) - Shouldn't be a NC here? o yeah messed up on NCs in that section. Thanks!
  4. I am loving your maps ohwow! I would probably ask guest diff to you someday xP ayyy forsure bro, i'd love to GD for ya, hmu ingame :3

Thanks!!!!!!!
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Hazu's Expert


01:19:077 (5,1) - I think that you could improve this blanket...

Easy


00:38:877 (1) - This slider could be improved...
01:17:277 (1) - This too.
The problem with these two sliders is that starting players could get confused. Or maybe i'm just trying to find problem and there are actually no problems...

Collab Beginner


00:58:077 (1,2) - You can make a better blanket than that.
01:01:677 (5) - Not a good slider. (That's just my opinion though)
01:06:477 (5,1) - You can make a better blanket than that.
01:07:677 (1,2,3,1) - Something's telling me this part is messy...
posted

SkyLifeHope wrote:

Easy


00:38:877 (1) - This slider could be improved... nty
01:17:277 (1) - This too. same
ty for trying atleast
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Collab Beginner


00:58:077 (1,2) - You can make a better blanket than that. fixed
01:01:677 (5) - Not a good slider. (That's just my opinion though) fixed
01:06:477 (5,1) - You can make a better blanket than that. this is fine
01:07:677 (1,2,3,1) - Something's telling me this part is messy... fixed
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@bite you death You can fix this for me? thx xd
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fixed @Hazu-
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Chewin wrote:

~searasp's extra~

  1. 00:10:077 (1) - Read what I said in the insane. It should be applied here as well because of higher HP drain while playing HR; KK
  2. 00:30:927 (2,3,4) - This spacing is kinda weird even if I kinda like it xD But I don't know what others will think about this. The space between 00:31:227 (3,4) - should be increased due to the 1/2 snap but it has the same spacing of 00:30:927 (2,3) - that is actually 1/4 (The issue is only here while all next parts are ok so you should really fix it imo); I'd rather keep it this way and it shouldnt really be an issue since the same patterns is previewed before so it should be readable
  3. God this map is so fun with these well structured jumps. Good job!
Well ty lol
Just add the breaks Bite
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fixed @SeaRasp
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is it just me or is the offset off by +14ms?
only tested the last diff.
posted

october wrote:

is it just me or is the offset off by +14ms?
only tested the last diff.
yea sure changed
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serasp's extra

This diff still has the old BG?

00:21:342 (4,1) - I don't get what's with the small spacing at this part. The white tick has an important sound, space this jump more.
00:28:542 (5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really understand the decrease in spacing throughout this set of jumps. 00:29:142 (9,1) - This jump in particular is horribly underspaced, there's a downbeat there...
00:48:492 (1,2,3,4) - What exactly is being mapped here? You should avoid having sliderends on strong sounds wherever possible. If you want to map the lyrics, I'd recommend this rhythm:

00:54:642 (2) - This note isn't mapped to a sound.

ohwow's insane

00:07:092 (4,5) - Repeat 00:02:292 (4,5,6) - this rhythm?

Hope this helps.
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mod
General/Modding Assist
  1. Try to find a blank soft-sliderslide, to silence the slidertrack sound. It is used on most maps so you can just borrow from them
  2. The hitsounds are also a bit too loud and are kinda overshadowing the song imo. you should reduce it a bit
  3. Unused hitsounds:
    drum-hitclap.wav
    drum-hitnormal6.wav
  4. I think your metadata is correct but you should provide the source in the beatmap description as well. Save yourself some time when the BNs come.


ex
  1. 00:02:292 (4) - you're undermapping this by a bit
  2. 00:07:692 (1,2) - I would recommend change this to 1/2 slider because 00:07:842 (2) - is really quiet
  3. 00:48:492 (1) - why NC?


searasp's extra
  1. 00:24:492 (1,2,3) - are mapped as sliders but 00:25:392 (4,5) - are mapped as 2 circles. I don't think there is such a change to require these two objects to be mapped differently, a slider would make it consistent. same for 01:03:792 (4,5) -
  2. 01:08:592 (4) - & 01:09:792 (4) - you're undermapping this significantly. mapping these as circles would fit better. Same for 00:30:192 (4,4) - & 00:34:992 (4,4) -
  3. 00:38:892 (1) - put it in the middle of the playfield it's slightly off
  4. 01:04:842 (5,6,7,1) - this spacing is just so small, making it somewhat weird in a kiai with big spacing. same for the previous kiai (the copy paste is real)


hazu's expert
  1. 00:19:992 (2) - mapping as 2 circles would fit better here


ohwow's insane
  1. 00:26:892 (1) - I think the slider is curved too much which makes the blanket quite bad imo
  2. 00:38:892 - would be cool if you make this clickable
  3. 01:16:092 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think heavily spaced 1/4 gap isn't introduced in your map properly. This happens way too late into the map which can be combo breaker for most people. If you want to keep this I'd also recommend you either putting it in the first kiai here as well 00:37:692 - . because it doesn't make much sense when the two are so different from each other


hard
  1. 00:01:092 (2) - I would recommend a circle and a 1/2 slider, fits better I believe. same for 00:03:492 (2) - and so on.
  2. 00:10:092 - so you decide to map this part on hard diff, which I actually think breaks fit here better as of right now this calm section is hella dense in terms of object density
  3. 00:59:892 (3) - slight overlap doesn't look good I'd rather space the slider a bit further away


GL
posted
Call me when the mapset is 100% completed and have received a few more mods
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timemon wrote:

mod
General/Modding Assist
  1. Try to find a blank soft-sliderslide, to silence the slidertrack sound. It is used on most maps so you can just borrow from them did
  2. The hitsounds are also a bit too loud and are kinda overshadowing the song imo. you should reduce it a bit i think its fine
  3. Unused hitsounds:
    drum-hitclap.wav
    drum-hitnormal6.wav removed
  4. I think your metadata is correct but you should provide the source in the beatmap description as well. Save yourself some time when the BNs come. sure edit: i dont have any confirmed metadata so yea


ex
  1. 00:02:292 (4) - you're undermapping this by a bit its fine imo
  2. 00:07:692 (1,2) - I would recommend change this to 1/2 slider because 00:07:842 (2) - is really quiet its kindof a step-up in rhythm,
    but i will consider
  3. 00:48:492 (1) - why NC? assuming you meant the one after, removed


hard
  1. 00:01:092 (2) - I would recommend a circle and a 1/2 slider, fits better I believe. same for 00:03:492 (2) - and so on. nah, i like this
  2. 00:10:092 - so you decide to map this part on hard diff, which I actually think breaks fit here better as of right now this calm section is hella dense in terms of object density removed
  3. 00:59:892 (3) - slight overlap doesn't look good I'd rather space the slider a bit further away i usually use this kind of overlap


GL
ty for mod!
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Chewin wrote:

Call me when the mapset is 100% completed and have received a few more mods
sure! thanks! :D
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hi~ m4m(PM) !

General
Pls change your Dark Combo Colours(Dark Red, Dark Blue) These colours merge with a black background and feels like HD gameplay. i know they fit with BG but hey i have a idea: Make "starstorm.png" pic main BG of mapset. This pic have same colours like in "1" but "starstorm.png" have more lighter tones (also i like this one more). After all this you can make your combo colours more lighter. Comfort colours not gonna force players to turn them off..

ex

00:21:792 (2) - i think this sould not be stacked with 00:21:492 (5) - bcs 00:21:792 (2) - have strong vocal moment what mean players cursor should go more far .. not back again to 00:21:492 (5) - place.

01:20:292 (1) - this slider feels weird when before you transfer this sound like these sliders 01:19:092 (1) - 01:17:892 (1) - . Pls make this long slider shorter like another and put circle(kick-slider?) here 01:20:892 - . Also your GD's didnt make moves like this.



extra by searasp

01:20:292 (6) - maybe add red anchor in this slider like you done in another sliders ( 01:17:892 (6) - 01:19:092 (6) - ) with red anchor gonna looks more cool.

expert by hazu-

00:12:192 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern is too sharpy..
00:17:742 (1) - and this circle should be more far away from prev circle for rhythm fit

insane by ohwow

I think ar8.8 for 200bpm insane diff is bad idea. Too big bpm for ar 8.8. Put ar9 pls
00:50:892 (1) - i think need more space from prev. object. (this analog have ok spacing 00:53:892 (3) - )

hard

00:31:692 (1) - feels bad in gameplay pls add red anchor like 00:30:492 (1) -
00:35:292 (1) - idk why but this feels better (maybe bcs song have strong moment here. Also ^ moment its not too strong so i still think it should be red anchored 00:31:692 (1) - )

normal by hootowlstar

00:30:492 (3,4) - i think patterns like this gonna have problem with ranking criteria..(00:30:492 (3) - his tail didnt "look" to 00:30:942 (4) - 's head .
00:49:692 (3,4) - and this pattern have too hard structure for normal diff have overlap and same issues like ^ ALSO didnt putted with DS..i recommend put all object's with ds..
Pretty cool mapset boys! All diffs seems very well! Shooted star for you,it must be ranked! GL with rank guys! :)
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m3gB3g wrote:

hi~ m4m(PM) !

General
Pls change your Dark Combo Colours(Dark Red, Dark Blue) These colours merge with a black background and feels like HD gameplay. i know they fit with BG but hey i have a idea: Make "starstorm.png" pic main BG of mapset. This pic have same colours like in "1" but "starstorm.png" have more lighter tones (also i like this one more). After all this you can make your combo colours more lighter. Comfort colours not gonna force players to turn them off.. imo the combo colours are different enough from the bg to be able to tell with 30% dim, so no change. about the bg part i'll ask searasp which bg he wants to use

ex

00:21:792 (2) - i think this sould not be stacked with 00:21:492 (5) - bcs 00:21:792 (2) - have strong vocal moment what mean players cursor should go more far .. not back again to 00:21:492 (5) - place. imo its fine but ill think about the placement of it

01:20:292 (1) - this slider feels weird when before you transfer this sound like these sliders 01:19:092 (1) - 01:17:892 (1) - . Pls make this long slider shorter like another and put circle(kick-slider?) here 01:20:892 - . Also your GD's didnt make moves like this. it's a slowdown as it is the end of the map, also it doesnt have to be consistent with GDs

hard

00:31:692 (1) - feels bad in gameplay pls add red anchor like 00:30:492 (1) - added curve
00:35:292 (1) - idk why but this feels better (maybe bcs song have strong moment here. Also ^ moment its not too strong so i still think it should be red anchored 00:31:692 (1) - ) didn't change this
Pretty cool mapset boys! All diffs seems very well! Shooted star for you,it must be ranked! GL with rank guys! :)
ty for mod and star!
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timemon wrote:

mod
General/Modding Assist
  1. Try to find a blank soft-sliderslide, to silence the slidertrack sound. It is used on most maps so you can just borrow from them
  2. The hitsounds are also a bit too loud and are kinda overshadowing the song imo. you should reduce it a bit
  3. Unused hitsounds:
    drum-hitclap.wav
    drum-hitnormal6.wav
  4. I think your metadata is correct but you should provide the source in the beatmap description as well. Save yourself some time when the BNs come.


hazu's expert
  1. 00:19:992 (2) - mapping as 2 circles would fit better here Isn't really needed imo, I would have to change 00:19:692 (1) - as well


GL

m3gB3g wrote:

hi~ m4m(PM) !

General
Pls change your Dark Combo Colours(Dark Red, Dark Blue) These colours merge with a black background and feels like HD gameplay. i know they fit with BG but hey i have a idea: Make "starstorm.png" pic main BG of mapset. This pic have same colours like in "1" but "starstorm.png" have more lighter tones (also i like this one more). After all this you can make your combo colours more lighter. Comfort colours not gonna force players to turn them off..

expert by hazu-

00:12:192 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern is too sharpy.. ok
00:17:742 (1) - and this circle should be more far away from prev circle for rhythm fit changed
Pretty cool mapset boys! All diffs seems very well! Shooted star for you,it must be ranked! GL with rank guys! :)
thx~
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188,28,57192,2,0,P|187:50|187:72,3,45,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,228,57642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,191,57717,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,147,57792,2,2,P|348:116|352:84,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,288,58092,6,0,P|84:332|88:400,1,90,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,162,58392,2,0,P|182:117|186:72,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,316,58692,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,156,58842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,236,58992,2,0,P|308:280|304:348,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,72,59292,5,2,0:0:0:0:
412,236,59442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,24,59592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,140,59742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,128,59892,2,0,P|500:172|496:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,325,60192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,144,60342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,340,60492,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,232,60642,2,0,P|208:228|144:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,356,60942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,61092,2,0,P|312:140|248:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,176,61392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,36,61542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,228,61692,5,6,0:0:0:0:
0,88,61842,2,0,P|40:84|104:80,1,90,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,140,62142,2,0,P|233:137|188:132,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,48,62442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,260,62592,2,0,P|300:228|208:236,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,62892,6,0,P|156:316|160:380,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,170,63192,2,0,P|350:218|346:282,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,204,63492,2,0,P|60:252|64:316,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,106,63792,2,0,P|254:154|250:218,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,64092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,216,64242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,24,64392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,156,64542,2,0,P|60:148|116:144,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,192,64842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,168,64992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,136,65142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,65292,6,0,P|208:272|136:272,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,352,65592,2,0,P|460:351|505:347,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,360,65892,6,0,P|172:356|100:356,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,272,66192,2,0,P|464:271|509:267,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,168,66492,5,6,0:0:0:0:
312,368,66642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,368,66717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,368,66792,2,0,P|316:324|324:268,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,80,67092,5,10,0:0:0:0:
420,272,67242,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,96,67392,5,8,0:0:0:0:
496,184,67542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,208,67692,6,0,P|160:168|20:192,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,36,68142,2,0,P|40:40|112:44,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,68442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,136,68592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,12,68742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,68892,6,0,P|120:240|0:232,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,69342,2,0,P|252:364|312:360,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,308,69642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,248,69792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,384,69942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,164,70092,6,0,P|120:124|116:72,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,166,70392,2,0,P|296:211|296:256,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,228,70692,6,0,P|40:188|36:136,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,38,70992,2,0,P|224:83|224:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,344,71292,6,0,P|124:304|120:252,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,71592,2,0,P|384:172|387:217,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,71892,5,2,0:0:0:0:
396,36,72042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,20,72192,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,128,72342,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,148,72492,6,0,P|32:204|40:332,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,72942,2,0,P|240:188|296:188,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,232,73242,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,284,73392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,128,73542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,368,73692,6,0,P|344:364|228:360,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,280,74142,2,0,P|56:280|128:276,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,74442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,164,74592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,376,74742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,74892,6,0,P|304:132|368:136,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,296,75192,2,0,P|464:292|400:288,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,75492,6,0,P|168:220|232:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,384,75792,2,0,P|328:380|264:376,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,124,76092,6,0,P|352:184|348:292,1,135,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,88,76392,2,0,P|400:44|312:48,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,76692,2,0,P|216:152|220:72,1,135,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,48,76992,2,0,B|88:92|88:92|80:220,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,260,77292,5,6,0:0:0:0:
200,232,77442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,232,77517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,232,77592,2,0,P|248:224|312:220,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,77892,2,0,B|48:160|200:160|108:12,1,270,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,104,78492,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,152,78642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,152,78717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,152,78792,2,0,P|224:104|216:48,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,236,79092,2,0,P|137:328|292:292,1,270,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,274,79692,5,2,0:0:0:0:
28,252,79842,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,252,79917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,252,79992,2,0,P|29:292|48:358,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,120,80292,2,0,B|184:96|248:148|248:148|292:88|384:96,1,270,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,204,80892,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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