heya poii, m4m with david o/
Try to fix the spread between muzu and oni star rating somehow, I think it's too large to get ranked.
Calm songs on taiko? Where are the 1/8 doubles and 1/6 pp patterns?!
Set looks good overall, but keep a look on the spread, it looks a bit off right now.
Good luck guys o/
Try to fix the spread between muzu and oni star rating somehow, I think it's too large to get ranked.
oni
- 00:03:402 (6,7,35,36) - shouldn't these be kd instead of dk? The beat and vocals on the white ticks have higher pitch. It would also be consistent with 00:01:002 (2,3,12,13,29,30,41,42) - .
- You could add some notes on gaps like 00:22:302 - during the kiai to difer it from the ones not on kiai like 00:10:302 -
- If you're mapping the beat on 00:28:152 (85) - then you should probably do it too at 00:28:752 - instead of the vocals to keep up with the flow. Mixing things up plays kind of weird, I think you should choose between the beat or the vocals here.
- There's a strong beat that would be good to be filled at 00:32:802 - . Try moving 00:32:952 (103) - there and change to don.
- 00:43:152 - aaaaa the don at 00:42:852 (140) - would fit better here since there's a sound here. Maybe even dkd starting from 00:42:852 - can work.
- To keep up with the 1/4 doubles rhythm you set and used quite a lot before try deleting 00:44:952 (147) - and moving 00:45:252 (148) - 1/4 backwards to the redline, this feels more natural and consistent with the map structure. You also continue the rhythm at 00:49:002 - and skips only the section I mentioned.
- 00:53:802 - Same thing as above, kd kd d kd instead of kd kdd dkd.
- aaaaa I honestly think you should map 00:58:602 - with the synth every 2/1 instead of the vocals here as you mapped the vocals through the whole song until now and the synth is what really stands out here, that would give emphasis on that. If you want to mix things up maybe switch the vocals notes that land on 1/4 blue ticks and map the synth on the white ticks (like moving 00:58:452 (196) - to 00:58:602 - , 01:00:102 (199) - to 00:59:802 - and 01:00:852 (201) - to 01:01:002 - ).
david muzu
- Hey, try to move 00:07:902 (13,15,17) - to the second vocal 1/3 snapping like 00:08:002 - . Short 1/3 sections shouldn't be a problem on muzu as it's a low bpm song. This fits the song better than the way it is right now.
- To go together with the previous suggestion you could add a kat at 00:09:802 - to give emphasis on dk dk dk kd.
- 00:19:902 (38) - This could be deleted to be more consistent with poii oni as there is no note on his diff here.
- 00:26:802 - Same suggestion as the first one. You can apply it on similar parts if you agree.
- 00:58:602 - same suggestion as I gave on oni regarding the synths on the white ticks instead of the vocals.
- 01:17:502 (195) - same as note 38.
futsuu
- 00:12:102 - a note can be added here as it's the only non 1/3 vocal syllable that you didn't map in this section, it's even a bit annoying xD. Also I don't think it's too overmapped for futsuu as the bpm is quite low.
- 00:38:502 - try a kat here for the transition after kiai. Feels better than keeping the same 1/1 flow even after the end of kiai imo.
tyis kantan
- even though this is low bpm I think it would be good if you put 4/1 breaks sometimes as it's always good to give the break for players on kantan. This would be good too as you even place 1/2 notes at 00:57:702 (16) - and no break in the map at all.
Calm songs on taiko? Where are the 1/8 doubles and 1/6 pp patterns?!
Set looks good overall, but keep a look on the spread, it looks a bit off right now.
Good luck guys o/