1. Hard (4,92 stars, 619 notes)
2. Light (4,75 stars, 437 notes)
3. Normal (2,68 stars, 228 notes)
4. Pangko (4,94 stars, 1080 notes)

Gabex3 wrote:

I love that map. :3 ...

May I have a Guess Diff? Or you are only doing it alone? o-o

1. On Alace's diff, what about slice the middle kiai time as other diffs? All I can say about this for now is 'Why not?' since the kiai are all the same but this.
2. Maybe make the 'Combo Break' sound? It's too low and the player needs feedback when misses a note.

1. 01:40:611 (2) - This is silder is hidden by the hitburst of 01:39:708 (5) - , I thought it was a note. I suggest you to move 01:39:708 (5) - like this, because it will keep the flow fine and solve the problem with HitBurst.
2. 02:35:084 (3) - The end of this slider is unsnapped. Set the Beat snap divisor to '1/8', make it like this and then move it back to it's place will solve your problem.

1. 00:22:340 (4,1) - Isn't it a bit hard for this kind of difficulty? I suggest you to remove 00:22:340 (4) - and then add a note correctly spaced with (1), like this.
2. The gap between calm part and c'mon part is so straight, I loved it.

1. 00:34:295 (3,4) - This overlap don't look really visual appealing, try to rotate (4) 90º clockwise and Space it correctly with (5) like this. It looks better imo and solves the weird overlap problem.
2. 00:37:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The flow here wasn't really good, you focused much on the top right part, try spreading it a bit..
3. 00:46:024 (3,4,5,1) - I would totally change this, and I will give you 2 reasons:
   
   1. 1st - The overlap between (3) and (4) is kinda ugly..
   2. 2nd - The flow of this part is really terrible.
   You may do something like this and then remap until you reach an consistent spaced part. You may open the following spoiler box and there you will have what I got with prints and the code.
   
   1. SPOILER

      1. First, delete these notes of you map: 00:44:220 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) -
      2. Save the map, 'Esc' the editor and open it again.
      3. Open the .osu file and search for the [HitObejcts] tag.
      4. Paste the following code in anywhere of the [HitObjects] tag.
         

         1. 280,144,44220,6,0,B|224:240|288:336,1,200,2|8
            384,360,45573,1,2
            452,284,46024,2,0,B|416:248|360:264,1,100,2|0
            256,264,46926,1,8
            168,304,47378,1,2
            72,344,47829,6,0,B|16:248|80:152,1,200,4|8
            72,56,49182,1,2
            168,72,49633,2,0,B|248:32|328:72,2,150,2|0|2
            200,168,51438,5,4
            128,296,51889,1,2

      5. Save the .osu file.
      6. Esc editor without save.
      7. Open editor and you will have what I did to you.
      8. Prints

         
         
         
4. 00:59:107 (1) - I think a newbie player needs a little more time to recover from a spinner, but it's up to you.
   
   

Katsuri wrote:

General

1. On Alace's diff, what about slice the middle kiai time as other diffs? All I can say about this for now is 'Why not?' since the kiai are all the same but this. nope
2. Maybe make the 'Combo Break' sound? It's too low and the player needs feedback when misses a note.it's pretty loud imo

Hard

1. 01:40:611 (2) - This is silder is hidden by the hitburst of 01:39:708 (5) - , I thought it was a note. I suggest you to move 01:39:708 (5) - like this, because it will keep the flow fine and solve the problem with HitBurst. okay
2. 02:35:084 (3) - The end of this slider is unsnapped. Set the Beat snap divisor to '1/8', make it like this and then move it back to it's place will solve your problem.1/8? lol.

Overall Grde: 9.6 < i lol'd
Light

1. 00:22:340 (4,1) - Isn't it a bit hard for this kind of difficulty? I suggest you to remove 00:22:340 (4) - and then add a note correctly spaced with (1), like this. no, it fits the rhythm perfectly
2. The gap between calm part and c'mon part is so straight, I loved it.

Overall Grade: 9.4

Normal

1. 00:34:295 (3,4) - This overlap don't look really visual appealing, try to rotate (4) 90º clockwise and Space it correctly with (5) like this. It looks better imo and solves the weird overlap problem.k
2. 00:37:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The flow here wasn't really good, you focused much on the top right part, try spreading it a bit..eeeh
3. 00:46:024 (3,4,5,1) - I would totally change this, and I will give you 2 reasons:
   
   1. 1st - The overlap between (3) and (4) is kinda ugly..
   2. 2nd - The flow of this part is really terrible.
   You may do something like this and then remap until you reach an consistent spaced part. You may open the following spoiler box and there you will have what I got with prints and the code.
   
   1. SPOILER

      1. First, delete these notes of you map: 00:44:220 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) -
      2. Save the map, 'Esc' the editor and open it again.
      3. Open the .osu file and search for the [HitObejcts] tag.
      4. Paste the following code in anywhere of the [HitObjects] tag.
         

         1. 280,144,44220,6,0,B|224:240|288:336,1,200,2|8
            384,360,45573,1,2
            452,284,46024,2,0,B|416:248|360:264,1,100,2|0
            256,264,46926,1,8
            168,304,47378,1,2
            72,344,47829,6,0,B|16:248|80:152,1,200,4|8
            72,56,49182,1,2
            168,72,49633,2,0,B|248:32|328:72,2,150,2|0|2
            200,168,51438,5,4
            128,296,51889,1,2

      5. Save the .osu file.
      6. Esc editor without save.
      7. Open editor and you will have what I did to you.
      8. Prints

         
         
         
   fixed it my way
4. 00:59:107 (1) - I think a newbie player needs a little more time to recover from a spinner, but it's up to you.
   cant think of a better decision here
   
   

Overall Grade: 7.8

1. 02:40:160 & 02:40:161 — что это, фонтан? Проще поставить через 1/4 после, как обычно, иначе путает. Я сначала подумал, что у тебя они вообще на одном и том же моменте стоят
2. 00:20:836 — мне упорно кажется, что этот трещащий звук начинается отсюда

1. 00:46:024 (3) - центральный узелок сдвинь чуть влево, чтобы поаккуратней огибал ноту
2. 00:46:024 (3) - на тело можно добавить свисток, он же шуршит
3. 01:23:468 (4) - поставить финиш сюда, а с конца слайдера убрать?
4. 02:09:032 (3) - нк?
5. 03:23:468 (1) - так и должен быть пустой, или свисток на тело?

1. 00:55:047 (1) - я б свисток добавил
2. 01:00:009 (4) - удлини на 1/4 же

1. 00:27:754 (4) - что-то он кривой немного, нижняя часть перевешивает, т.к. больше
2. 03:09:934 (1,2,3,4) - с одной стороны, вроде ничего так сидит. С другой — мне не нравится то, что 1/6 там на самом деле нет, только 1/4
3. 03:37:001 (1) - :O

TicClick wrote:

General

1. 02:40:160 & 02:40:161 — что это, фонтан? Проще поставить через 1/4 после, как обычно, иначе путает. Я сначала подумал, что у тебя они вообще на одном и том же моменте стоят
   
   ну это только в эдиторе путает
   
2. 00:20:836 — мне упорно кажется, что этот трещащий звук начинается отсюда

да, это так, но ритм лучше когда позже

Normal

1. 00:46:024 (3) - центральный узелок сдвинь чуть влево, чтобы поаккуратней огибал ноту
   
   ок
   
2. 00:46:024 (3) - на тело можно добавить свисток, он же шуршит
   
   нет
   
3. 01:23:468 (4) - поставить финиш сюда, а с конца слайдера убрать?
   
   и туда и сюда
   
4. 02:09:032 (3) - нк?
   
   не знаю, зачем, но можно
   
5. 03:23:468 (1) - так и должен быть пустой, или свисток на тело?
   
   а вот тут да, что это я
   

Light

1. 00:55:047 (1) - я б свисток добавил
   
   а вот в харде он и есть там \:D/ добавила
   
2. 01:00:009 (4) - удлини на 1/4 же
   
   можно и на 1/4

Hard

1. 00:27:754 (4) - что-то он кривой немного, нижняя часть перевешивает, т.к. больше
   
   а мне норм :O
   
2. 03:09:934 (1,2,3,4) - с одной стороны, вроде ничего так сидит. С другой — мне не нравится то, что 1/6 там на самом деле нет, только 1/4
   
   так приятней переход к 1/8
   
3. 03:37:001 (1) - :O
   
   да.

У меня всё.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset: i feel +6~+8.
Light seems a name for the easiest diff...? maybe just me, but you may want to consider this.

[Normal]
The setting is a little high imo, hope you could tone them all down by 1 tick (maybe including AR as well)
01:22:114 (3) - don't think the finish at the end is a good idea, you may want to change the sound gradually if i don't understand it wrong, but a drum sound there still feels odd to me.
02:09:032 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing a little larger if you could (i mean circles don't touch each other for better looking)
02:13:543 (3) - a 1/1 slider here?
02:25:272 (1) & 02:28:881 (1) - i may choose to use a soft hitsound sample here...
03:39:934 (1) - a group of 1/1 notes would be better here imo as the sounds are pretty strong, your choice though.

[Light]
00:20:987 (2,3) - Reduce the full length of each slider to 1/2? because it seems the stream doesn't last for that long, and the slider seems a little extra
00:46:024 (4,5) - move right+down a bit, after stack it looks not so well.
00:53:242 (4,5) - ^
01:01:475 (2,3) - if could maybe change this to a slider, the beat starts at a irregular place and may be not easy to catch.
01:03:280 (2,3) - second one would be better anyway but still ^
01:17:716 (4) - 1/4 earlier?
01:24:934 (3) - if you do ^ then again.
01:33:844 (8) - not sure if the sliderwhistle is on purpose, but i noticed that so if it's not maybe remove.
02:31:588 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/j7Oe ?

[Hard]
01:19:408 (1) - clap instead of finish?
01:33:844 (4,5,6) - i expect this to have larger spacing...
02:09:483 (5) - just a suggestion, as the volume is going up, increase the spacing (4 as a group) as well?
02:29:783 (7) - i got a combo-break here and to my surprise the combo-break sound fits it so great.
02:39:708 (8,1) - maybe switch new combo for the speed change.

Great map, have a star first.