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R3 Music Box - Still Doll

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FlobuFlobs
579 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 4. September 2017 at 10:46:14

Artist: R3 Music Box
Title: Still Doll
Tags: (Anime "Vampire Knight" ED) Wakeshima Kanon
BPM: 112
Filesize: 1585kb
Play Time: 00:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ax3 (2,17 stars, 63 notes)
  2. Juiceys' Hard (2,16 stars, 60 notes)
  3. Normal (1,36 stars, 41 notes)
Download: R3 Music Box - Still Doll
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Last edited by FlobuFlobs , edited 3 times in total.
Juiceys
530 posts
Joined June 2016
Juiceys
ax3:

Turn the hitsound noise to like 15-20 or put in a silenced sliderbody hitsound bc right now the sliderbody sound is distractingly loud

00:12:931 (1,1) - The curves could be more apparent to make the blanket the second has more visible
SPOILER

00:23:109 (1,2) - Blanket needs to be fixed
SPOILER

00:26:591 (2,3,4,5) - 4 Should be further away from 2 so people don't get confused and click 4 before 3
SPOILER
FlobuFlobs
579 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
Fixxed all 3 i guess xD im not good at blankeds Thanks
Mking
102 posts
Joined March 2016
Mking
Hi there! M4M from my modding queue~
[ax3]
00:00:074 (1) - blanket still is off (around object 3) a tip I would give is moving object 3 closer in the timeline for a second to the slider and using the approach circle to fix it, also use smallest grid and grid snap
00:01:681 (3) - this one is a bit off from the 3 objects being in a line so move it to x144 y144?
00:04:895 (1) - remove NC? as the previous object fits these other objects 00:04:895 (1,2,3,4) -
00:12:931 (1) - the ending of this slider is shorter than the beginning could maybe use some more looking into it?
00:23:109 (1,2) - I can see you really struggle on the blankets xd ill show you something
take a good look at these anchors and the approach circle
https://i.imgur.com/cEHClqo.png

try to put the anchors in the middle of the heads like this
https://i.imgur.com/nDGFQqZ.png

00:26:591 (2,3,4,5) - are these not equally spaced? cause if you want to emphasize something it should be the fifth note

[Juicey's hard]
00:06:502 (5) - Make this object face the next object more? with cs as small as this a really good flow is required
00:08:109 (6,1) - blanket fix
00:19:359 (5,6) - this blanket is really off too
00:32:216 (4) - move the anchor in the end 1 pixel up so you get a straight slider?

That's about it, after some aestheticly fixing blankets it should be fine,
Good luck!
- titan
238 posts
Joined July 2016
- titan
hi nm from my queue
SPOILER
Normal
00:01:681 (2,1) - i think these should switch places on the timeline bc it kinda emphasizes the wrong sound
00:03:288 (2,1) - not a very good blanket
00:06:502 - i don't like the huge gap here
00:10:252 (2,1) - not very important but blanket is a tiny bit off
00:14:538 (2,1) - these should switch places on the timeline too
00:19:359 - i don't like the gap either

Juiceys' Hard
idk why this is ar8. it's a calm/very slow song, and this is barely 2*. (i'd suggest ar6)
00:06:502 (5) - center the anchors in this slider more it looks kinda uneven
00:08:109 (6,1) - imperfect blanket
00:09:716 (3) - this slider ends on nothing (other sliders with 1/4 gaps after do too, but this one doesn't work well)
00:11:324 (5) - slider shape thing
00:12:931 (1,3) - blanket
00:19:359 (5,6) - blanket
00:30:609 (3,4) - ugly overlap
00:41:324 (1,2,1,2) - make both of these things a few more pixels apart because they look too close

Ax3
ar & od +1?
00:04:359 (1) - why is this combo so short
00:19:359 - i don't like the gap thing here either
00:23:109 (1,2) - imperfect blanket
00:26:591 (2,3,4) - imperfect triangle
00:28:466 (1,2) - blanket
00:35:966 (1) - short combo again ?
good luck!
FlobuFlobs
579 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs

- titan wrote:

hi nm from my queue
SPOILER
Normal
00:01:681 (2,1) - i think these should switch places on the timeline bc it kinda emphasizes the wrong sound You are right
00:03:288 (2,1) - not a very good blanket
00:06:502 - i don't like the huge gap herei dont get it xD
00:10:252 (2,1) - not very important but blanket is a tiny bit off
00:14:538 (2,1) - these should switch places on the timeline too Fine for me since it emphasizes the louder notes better
00:19:359 - i don't like the gap either

Ax3
ar & od +1? I dont really want to increase difficulty since it already has Inconsistent Spacing as a Hard/ normal + diff
00:04:359 (1) - why is this combo so short I try to emphasize per NC
00:19:359 - i don't like the gap thing here either Changed
00:23:109 (1,2) - imperfect blanket
00:26:591 (2,3,4) - imperfect triangle Changed pattern anyway
00:28:466 (1,2) - blanket
00:35:966 (1) - short combo again ? ^
good luck!

Mking wrote:

Hi there! M4M from my modding queue~
[ax3]
00:00:074 (1) - blanket still is off (around object 3) a tip I would give is moving object 3 closer in the timeline for a second to the slider and using the approach circle to fix it, also use smallest grid and grid snap
00:01:681 (3) - this one is a bit off from the 3 objects being in a line so move it to x144 y144? Ive lined it up with (1) ^
00:04:895 (1) - remove NC? as the previous object fits these other objects 00:04:895 (1,2,3,4) - The Pitch on the Long combo is higher than on the (1) one, so ive nc'd it to emphasize it abit
00:12:931 (1) - the ending of this slider is shorter than the beginning could maybe use some more looking into it? fixxed
00:23:109 (1,2) - I can see you really struggle on the blankets xd ill show you something Mostly because i dont care abotu 3 px off XD
take a good look at these anchors and the approach circle
https://i.imgur.com/cEHClqo.png

try to put the anchors in the middle of the heads like this
https://i.imgur.com/nDGFQqZ.png

00:26:591 (2,3,4,5) - are these not equally spaced? cause if you want to emphasize something it should be the fifth note
You are right
Sorry for the very late answers, had lots of work
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