From one of my many modding queues. Also take this mod with a grain of salt cause I'd like to help you improve.
GENERAL
I have a feeling like this is your first map and for a first start its okay. But you dont always have to use copy and paste on rhythms and patterns. You can keep up to 2 or maybe 4 of the same pattern but people expect change sometimes too. Sure other maps talk about repetition to get the point across for players to understand. But they usually dont need that much, unless you are a lower ranked player just starting out. Have the freedom to explore outside the boundaries of copy/paste. Take some risks.
NORMAL
00:34:353 (1,2) - People generally playing normals don't necessarily have the concept of 1/2 sliders. Interesting to use this here while the first one you introduce of this a note into slider. Not a slider into slider
00:54:925 (1,3) - Make sure that your slider shapes are the same for cleanliness. Just copy paste (1) where (3) is and hit ctrl + h
HARD
Hard difficulties you can start to introduce more challenging rhythms. You don't always have to use spinners or sliders to put emphasis on a long sound. You can always skip it and go for vocals and or the kick and snare.
Not going to lie I like the beginning rhythm but it gets repetitive. Try mixing it up in different ways that still give off what you hear in the song.
00:40:353 (2) - Honestly should only repeat once into 2 notes instead.
01:50:210 (1) - No no no. Nothing should repeat this much. And this goes for all of these reverse sliders. Put it more interesting rhythms that fit the songs boundaries.
02:30:925 (1,2,3,4) - If you want to do something like this at least space it out more so players can read what comes next.
Also not you dont have to copy paste everything.
SSA
00:34:782 (1) - You need to do your kiai's differently. You will be shunned for doing something like this.
00:39:496 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Not going to lie. But this is like the only one highlight of the whole map to me. Or thus provides the challenge of the map.
Everything I want to talk about is already stated in the previous diffs. You can expand the sense of rhythms in the kiai. You dont have to have one thing going on for like 4 seconds at a time, except for easy and normal diffs, but some can handle more.
Good luck with your set.