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[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67257
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 674,11340,22007,32673,43340,54007,67340,78007,88673,99340,110007
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Oriental Blossom
TitleUnicode:Oriental Blossom
Artist:Eisyo-kobu
ArtistUnicode:影翔鼓舞
Creator:Realazy
Version:Linada's Futsuu
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:Ayyri Linada Kagetora. Hayato Hitoshiro The 4th KAC Original Song Contest Cオリジナル楽曲コンテスト
BeatmapID:1405054
BeatmapSetID:663687

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Backfire wrote:

[General]
Never been a big fan of 2 BGs for one map, maybe pick one and stick to it. Nothing wrong with it, I just think it's weird. ayyri likes having her own backgrounds

[Kantan]
00:50:007 - Maybe don, for less of a monotonous pattern. changed the previous note instead
01:22:673 - Sorry for being so redundant but same here lol ^

[Muzukashii]
00:10:840 - I think you should re-use the kkdk here. kK is hard-ish to hit/confusing sometimes aaaa i really like how it sounds though, i'll wait for other opinions on this
00:44:840 - this is really awkward, I suggest deleting or moving to 00:45:007 - how is it awkward though? i think it plays fine and it follows the background noises decently so the map doesn't feel too empty, though if it's brought up again i'll change it


thanks for modding!
posted
It's awkward because its going directly from 1/3 to 1/4, and in muzu I would argue that's a no-no
posted
alright, deleted the note then
also made futsuu od4

posted
ALOOO sorry for late

[General]

- https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu!taiko check that... For more tips for lower diff(s)

[Kantan]

- mmm Is ok for me... But probably the BN'S tell you " kantan need more breaks" xd

[Linada's Futsuu]

- you should delete this one 00:02:340 (6) - emphasizing this sound right here 00:02:007 (5) - can be nice
- same here 00:05:007 (14) -
- 00:06:007 (15,16) - , 00:07:340 (18,19) - , no bigs here they aren't strong sounds like this one 00:06:673 (17) -
- delete this one 00:12:007 (30) - for make one little break
- same here 00:13:840 (36) - , 00:14:340 (37) -
- delete this one 00:17:340 (45) - for the little break
- ctrl + g this 00:23:007 (63,64) -
- 00:30:007 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - this is unrankeable... if you want put one 1/3 you should leave like one break of 3 lines... On both sides
- 00:34:507 (102) - delete this...
- 00:36:173 (106) - same
- Well and so many thing pls find me on osu! when i'm onlyne and we can talk better

[Muzukashii]

- Delete this one 00:01:840 (6) - gives more flow to the sound and fit's better
- same here 00:13:840 (49) -
- tbh this diff is too dense... should be more "easy" for newest players xd sadly you should nerf this one... if you want you can call me on PM " IN GAME "

[Ayyri's Oni]

- this one is ok for me

[Ayyri's Inner Oni]

- you can add one kat here 00:01:507 (5) -
- 00:21:673 (120,121,122,123,124) - change this to kkddK sounds better
- the other Suff are ok for me :3

[comentarios eks de]

Man The lowers diffs needs more work.... They are too hardy for new people the BN's will blame you for that actually xd Is a great song to map GL ranking this dide 4real
posted

Shinsekai- wrote:

ALOOO sorry for late what if you were so early that you went back in time?

[Kantan]

- mmm Is ok for me... But probably the BN'S tell you " kantan need more breaks" xd reworked kantan with massive help from ayyri!!

[Muzukashii]

- same here 00:13:840 (49) - eh i don't think it sounds as good here as 00:13:673 (48,49) - follow the same sounds and it's repeated in the next 1/2 triple
- tbh this diff is too dense... should be more "easy" for newest players xd sadly you should nerf this one... if you want you can call me on PM " IN GAME " i'll get more opinions on this, but i really think it should be okay for now

[comentarios eks de]

Man The lowers diffs needs more work.... They are too hardy for new people the BN's will blame you for that actually xd Is a great song to map GL ranking this dide 4real agree, that's why i went over kantan with some help, and will do the same with linada eventually
ayyri's reply

Shinsekai- wrote:

[Ayyri's Inner Oni]

- you can add one kat here 00:01:507 (5) -
- 00:21:673 (120,121,122,123,124) - change this to kkddK sounds better
- the other Suff are ok for me :3



thanks for modding!
posted

Shinsekai- wrote:

ALOOO sorry for late

[Linada's Futsuu]

- you should delete this one 00:02:340 (6) - emphasizing this sound right here 00:02:007 (5) - can be nice
- same here 00:05:007 (14) -
- 00:06:007 (15,16) - , 00:07:340 (18,19) - , no bigs here they aren't strong sounds like this one 00:06:673 (17) -
- delete this one 00:12:007 (30) - for make one little break
- same here 00:13:840 (36) - , 00:14:340 (37) -
- delete this one 00:17:340 (45) - for the little break deleted this one 00:17:673 (46) - instead, follow melody better imo
- ctrl + g this 00:23:007 (63,64) -
- 00:30:007 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - this is unrankeable... if you want put one 1/3 you should leave like one break of 3 lines... On both sides
- 00:34:507 (102) - delete this...
- 00:36:173 (106) - same
- Well and so many thing pls find me on osu! when i'm onlyne and we can talk better will try to find you ingame



fixed all and tried to fix some on my own, thanks !!

footshoe
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posted
[Inner Oni]
00:27:507 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175) - I mean I don't mind the burst here but two different snaps for the same sound looks silly to me. What about dddk 1/6?
00:28:173 (176) - Nothing major but could be removed to emphasize the 1/6 usage more and make the next part from 00:28:340 - stronger.
00:31:673 - the rhythm at 00:31:507 (200,201,202,203,204,205) - is perfectly fine but I think it's unnecessary to skip 00:31:673 - when the synth sounds are emphasized with kat notes anyway. Closing the gap with a don note is a smoother alternative.
00:53:007 - similar reason.

00:32:257 (207,208) - to don, purely because 00:32:173 (206,209) - rather go to emphasize the synth sounds better.
00:53:506 (344,345,346,347,348) - should be changed to kkddk, kkkkd doesn't really work here sound-wise, the slight tone increase at 00:53:840 - should be noticeable and mapped to kat instead.
01:41:007 (688,689,690,691) - I don't really get behind using 1/6 when on 01:42:173 - and 01:42:507 - are better places, especially when the 1/6 usage at 01:41:007 - appears pretty sudden.

[Muzukashii]
00:16:340 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - I tend to say it could have some changes in the emphasis, try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/L802vu4b.png
01:38:257 (447) - nah, that note alone is imo pretty silly when you have clearly nothing on 1/4. You could change it into a triplet, that looks fine then.

[Futsuu]
00:08:673 (21,22,23,24,25) - coressponding to 00:06:007 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - I find d d k k d neater to have.


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posted

Stefan wrote:


[Futsuu]
00:08:673 (21,22,23,24,25) - coressponding to 00:06:007 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - I find d d k k d neater to have. sure
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320,192,95840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99340,1,12,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,298,108673,2,0,P|280:92|405:257,1,560
256,192,110173,12,0,115173,0:0:0:0:
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everything fixed on muzu and inner as well
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allo

Linada's Futsuu
  1. 00:07:340 (18,19,20) - Change en kdk. Je comprend le choix de notes ici, qui fait un contraste avec les trois dernières notes, mais tu ne met pas l'accent à la bonne place, car il faudrait que tu mettes l'accent sur le snare. Alors, un k est mieux sur le (20), comme tu as fais précédemment à (17).
  2. 01:48:673 (312,1) - On voudrait plutôt commencer à taper le spinner que la fin du slider à 01:50:007 - .. Faudrait alors terminer le slider plus tôt afin de commencer le spinner à 01:50:007 (1) - !


Muzukashii
  1. 00:23:507 (93,94,95) - L'idée n'est pas mauvaise, mais l'application l'est, car techniquement le choix de triplet ici indiquerait l'usage d'un autre triplet à partir de 00:23:840 -, qui n'est pas le cas, car c'est une Muzu. Ce qui rend ce passage plus complexe qu'il serait sensé, puisqu'il ne permet pas au joueur de suivre correctement le pattern. Dans ce cas, je trouve qu'il serait mieux de suivre le pattern ci-bas. (Ou si tu veux rendre les choses un peu plus épicée, mais qui fait du sens, tu pourrais ajouter un don à 00:23:923 -. Ça pourrait introduire l'arrivée de 00:24:840 (100,101,102,103,104,105) - !)
  2. 01:03:340 (287) - fait un meilleur blanket la prochaine fois ;)
  3. 01:30:007 (406,407,408,409,410) - Même chose que la première suggestion, mais genre.. fait simplement ajouter un don à 01:30:507 -
  4. 01:35:590 - Il manque d'intonations par les triplets à cette partie. Ajoute un don! Ça va permettre d'équilibrer les choses un peu plus.


bin, c'est ça :)
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tout fix!!
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