00:22:555 (2,3,4) - would look pretty dope if 00:22:743 (3,4) were moved to overlap the peaks of the slider superseding it.though i can't make it look good for shit,you're like 10x more experienced than i am.
00:47:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't get why it's spacing more.it would be nicer if instead the stream was spacing less into the kiai.
00:49:836 (2) - why doesn't this overlap 00:49:836 (2) ? is it like flow or something and i'm just too stupid to notice
00:52:368 (3) - should be a slider.
00:55:368 (1,2,3,4) - would look bretty cool if 00:55:461 (2) and 00:55:649 (4) had ctrl+g on them and would go with the 'wub' more
00:56:305 (1,2,3) - a bit dangerous if this is getting ranked.the cross screen triples by rrtyui was already pushing it,this spits in its face.if it's not getting ranked than who cares disregard this.
00:59:305 (2,2) - having these replaced with straight sliders like pic related looks cool af (don't copy this though this is shit and wouldn't flow well with 00:59:868 (1,2) ):
01:00:618 (1) - maybe nicer as a slow slider instead
01:04:649 (2) - there's an important sound on the tail of this slider.not sure if you wanna shorten the slider and add a beat next to 01:04:930 (3) or something but it should at least be notable.like maybe a little hook on the end of the slider to show there's an important sound around there (again don't copy line for line any shit i do).
actually,this map has a lot of problems with putting slider ends on important sounds.not sure if you wanna clear those up or that would take too long and be too tedious.
01:05:305 (1,2) - a bit overmapped. 01:05:305 (1) shouldn't exist.
01:10:555 (1) - shouldn't this be linked with 01:10:180 (1,2) before it?like take out the nc and put it on 01:10:743 (2) ,move it closer towards 01:10:368 (2) or something,just make it not a part of 01:10:555 (1,2) .
01:26:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - a bit overmapped.just stress the beat on 01:26:118 (1,3,1) and you're good.
01:29:118 (1,2,1,2) - this might be cooler if it was like a horizontal version of 01:27:618 (1,2,1,2,1,2) .
01:57:618 (1) - why can't the spinner start here?
02:05:493 (2) - this should be a bit shorter so that it ends on the blue tick before 02:05:868 (1) .like use a smaller slider velocity there.
02:11:774 (1) - maybe make this like 02:11:493 (1) .
02:12:055 (1) - move the nc from here to 02:12:243 (2) .
02:24:618 (2) - there's no nc here?
02:35:868 (1,2,3,4) - this can just be a normal stream
02:36:993 (5,1,2) - these can be like two short sliders and the nc can start on 02:37:368 (3) instead.
02:39:993 (5,1,2) - same dealio here.
02:54:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think this is overmapped a bit.
03:04:368 (3) - this could be a short slider unless you wanted to follow 03:03:805 (1,2,3) before it.
03:06:618 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - needs a bit of cleaning.especially since 03:07:086 goes unmapped.
03:12:618 (4) - feels weird not having that be an nc
03:15:618 (4) - then again,if it's a pattern,i guess it's fine