Bariton wrote:
Insane
00:06:619 (2,3) - essas notas tão tipo MUITO longes uma da outra pra uma parte tão lenta da música
00:03:166 (2,3) - essa curva deixa o spacing entre o círculo e o slider muito pequeno e vc faz isso várias vezes durante a música tipo aqui 00:11:152 (2,3) - e eu acho que não é muito bom ter um spacing tão pequeno seguido de um jump
00:17:411 - tem um som importante aqui
00:24:317 - ^
00:28:418 - ^ não ignora a strong beat da música
00:26:907 (1) - esse kickslider pode ser substituído por um circle
00:30:144 - a partir daqui era pra ser a sessão mais "calma" da música mas vc usa um spacing muito alto tipo aqui 00:30:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:45:792 (6,7,8) - VITO PRA QUE ISSO overmap fudido
00:57:878 (2) - transforma esse kickslider num circle no red tick (no caso aqui 00:57:986 - )
01:02:734 (1,2,3) - redução muito repentina de spacing, pode confundir o player
tem umas partes da música que tão meio overmappadas (cof cof 01:01:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - )
also deixa o AR 8,5 - 8,7 pq 9 tá muito alto pra 139 BPM
ok , fixed all nenem
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DJ Lucky wrote:
k NM from my q (if ya wanna drop 1 or 2 suggestions https://osu.ppy.sh/s/675527 (modv2) on this map that would be awesome but ya don't have to)
- Insane
- 00:30:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I think this jumpy part need to have slightly reduce spacing imo since this is part of the song is quite calm imo compare to the kiai
- 00:40:504 (2,3,4,5) - same ^
- 00:57:878 (2) - I don't see why this is a 1/4 slider since there isn't any noticable sound here 00:57:878 - so I suggest remove both 00:57:770 (1,2) - and just make this part a 1/2 slider starting at 00:57:770 -
- 00:58:418 (2) - this beat is stronger along with the vocals than 00:58:634 (3) - so I suggest giving it higher spacing and while we at it give (3) lower to give (2) more emphasis
- 00:59:497 (3) - there is also a strong note so give it more distance to show that
- 01:01:547 (2) - 01:01:979 (4) - 01:02:411 (6) - all of these have no beat to support them (not the vocals either since the vocals hold out from 01:01:439 (1) - to 01:01:763 - ,here 01:01:871 - to 01:02:195 - , etc if you were trying to follow them) I suggest remove them and think of a different pattern
Green - I understand and fixed all
Red - I fixed some things
No color - I fixed but don't know if it's right :3
Coming from my M4M queue!
00:17:842 (6) - You can probably stack this on the (7), it isn't the biggest change and you might not like it but it could make flow a little easier to hit the note and the slider, it seems easy as it is already but it can probably be adjusted to that.
00:31:008 (1,2) - I noticed that at 00:30:144 (1,2) you have the flow going up and down, I feel that you can make the same happen for 00:31:008 (1,2). It just looks better to be following the same pattern you initially started rather than changing it up randomly, even though it's only for 2 notes.
I also see that you LOVE to hog up the left side of the screen, for example: 00:58:202 to 01:02:734 most of the notes are basically on the left of the screen. It also happens on some occurrences of the map but you should definitely consider putting the notes to around the screen more rather than keeping them on the left most of the time.
Sorry about the horrible mod! The map definitely has a lot of potential and it's up to you if you'd like to give Kudosu or not!
P.S I found the source image for you while I was modding: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=65336338
00:17:842 (6) - You can probably stack this on the (7), it isn't the biggest change and you might not like it but it could make flow a little easier to hit the note and the slider, it seems easy as it is already but it can probably be adjusted to that.
00:31:008 (1,2) - I noticed that at 00:30:144 (1,2) you have the flow going up and down, I feel that you can make the same happen for 00:31:008 (1,2). It just looks better to be following the same pattern you initially started rather than changing it up randomly, even though it's only for 2 notes.
I also see that you LOVE to hog up the left side of the screen, for example: 00:58:202 to 01:02:734 most of the notes are basically on the left of the screen. It also happens on some occurrences of the map but you should definitely consider putting the notes to around the screen more rather than keeping them on the left most of the time.
Sorry about the horrible mod! The map definitely has a lot of potential and it's up to you if you'd like to give Kudosu or not!
P.S I found the source image for you while I was modding: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=65336338
fixed
I have fixed that point, thx for modding osu file format v14
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All fixed, thank you all
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Normal
00:05:324 (4) - this is weird if you can't fit it bcs of height place 00:02:519 (1,2,3) lower
00:50:864 (5) - NC maybe
00:50:864 (5) - NC maybe
Hard
00:05:540 (8) - i would ctr + j this
00:12:015 (7) - too sharp
00:13:742 (3) - look a little bit off move a little bit to the right
00:14:605 (6,7) - shapes are not the same
00:26:907 (6) - place it higher looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279216
00:31:871 (5) - NC here
00:38:778 (5) - ^
00:12:015 (7) - too sharp
00:13:742 (3) - look a little bit off move a little bit to the right
00:14:605 (6,7) - shapes are not the same
00:26:907 (6) - place it higher looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279216
00:31:871 (5) - NC here
00:38:778 (5) - ^
Bariton Insane
No issues
Insane
I've found only one issue that you should fix
00:11:799 (3,4) - tbh those circles feels really weird here and since 00:11:799 (3) - isnt really loud I would do blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279264 and then place 00:12:231 (5) - far cause 00:12:015 (4,5) - pretty strong sound here which mean NC for 00:12:015 (4)
00:11:799 (3,4) - tbh those circles feels really weird here and since 00:11:799 (3) - isnt really loud I would do blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279264 and then place 00:12:231 (5) - far cause 00:12:015 (4,5) - pretty strong sound here which mean NC for 00:12:015 (4)
Winter
01:15:684 (6) - NC
Sorry, I do not see the need for this NC
Topic Starter
M Flat wrote:
Coming from my M4M queue! (hey i didn't mod your map , but i'm making a guest diff and the hitsounds ok ?)
00:17:842 (6) - You can probably stack this on the (7), it isn't the biggest change and you might not like it but it could make flow a little easier to hit the note and the slider, it seems easy as it is already but it can probably be adjusted to that.
00:31:008 (1,2) - I noticed that at 00:30:144 (1,2) you have the flow going up and down, I feel that you can make the same happen for 00:31:008 (1,2). It just looks better to be following the same pattern you initially started rather than changing it up randomly, even though it's only for 2 notes.
I also see that you LOVE to hog up the left side of the screen, for example: 00:58:202 to 01:02:734 most of the notes are basically on the left of the screen. It also happens on some occurrences of the map but you should definitely consider putting the notes to around the screen more rather than keeping them on the left most of the time.
Sorry about the horrible mod! The map definitely has a lot of potential and it's up to you if you'd like to give Kudosu or not!
Green - I fixed all and understand
P.S I found the source image for you while I was modding: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=65336338 THANK YOU <3
Topic Starter
PeterEU wrote:
InsaneI've found only one issue that you should fix
00:11:799 (3,4) - tbh those circles feels really weird here and since 00:11:799 (3) - isnt really loud I would do blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279264 and then place 00:12:231 (5) - far cause 00:12:015 (4,5) - pretty strong sound here which mean NC for 00:12:015 (4)
Green - fixed
Red - maybe
Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say
Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?
Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?
Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced
Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard
Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?
Marianna's Winter > Good like this
Map are really good tho
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?
Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?
Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced
Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard
Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?
Marianna's Winter > Good like this
Map are really good tho
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
Topic Starter
Caporal wrote:
Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say
Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?
Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?
Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced
Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard
Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?
Marianna's Winter > Good like this
Map are really good tho
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
The name's aren't wrong it's just because has a huge star jump , we gonna fix it <3 , thank's for suggestions
139 BPMCaporal wrote:
Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say
Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?
Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?
Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced
Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard
Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?
Marianna's Winter > Good like this
Map are really good tho
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
also eu quero o antigo BG na minha diff ;A; (e AR 8.3)
m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/672681
general
check ai mod
mkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
00:24:101 (2) - maybe make it like this:https://puu.sh/xV6DN/c07775d910.png so it's symmetrical with (1) on a tilted axis
00:25:828 (5,6,1) - line this up better?
sandrew
to have good structure, you should make most things on your map visually similar, ie jump organization, similar curves when mapping, etc, you're lacking in the curve department. most of your sliders have different shapes and different curves when the song is doing nothing. I would understand if the song changed and you decided to change the type of slider, but it doesn't, so the map kinda looks messy. for example. you have 00:03:382 (3) - 00:06:835 (3) - and 00:12:015 (7) - these are essentially the same sound, but different sliders portray that they're different sounds. i understand if you say variety is the reason, but it should be the same when the song isn't doing anything special
00:05:108 (7,8) - maybe rotate (8) a bit so that it looks like they're in continuing flow
00:36:188 (7) - this slider shape is pretty ugly imo, you should flatten out the curve a tiny bit, if you want an example go to my m4m map and go to the "easy" diff and go to this object: 00:31:887 (3) - it has a better aestheitc and i think that's what you should try to achieve
bariton
i like the concept this diff uses, it's super cool
in the first 16 seconds you map the beginning with only circles and symmetry, but why dont you use the bottom 2 quadrants?
01:10:720 (1,1) - the overlap this has is kinda ugly when look at your other overlaps where the slider is perfectly within the other slider, maybe make 01:11:583 (1) - slider end inside the slider body of 01:10:720 (1) - ?
insane that isnt winter
00:25:828 (2,3) - make this the same spacing as 00:25:612 (1,2) - ?
00:37:914 (3,4) - i dont understand this jump, the song is still in the calm state and this random jump is here and it doesn't represent the music, so you should just make it like the other 1/2 rhthyms
00:46:331 (1) - shouldn't this end on 00:47:842 -
00:58:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think it would look better if this was a perfect star
01:16:116 (4) - this sv change is random, to make it noticable, maybe add an nc?
01:16:547 (5) - if you do above, also nc this
mariana
nothing wrong imo :shrug:
nice mapset, gl)
kappa
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/672681
general
check ai mod
mkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
00:24:101 (2) - maybe make it like this:https://puu.sh/xV6DN/c07775d910.png so it's symmetrical with (1) on a tilted axis
00:25:828 (5,6,1) - line this up better?
sandrew
to have good structure, you should make most things on your map visually similar, ie jump organization, similar curves when mapping, etc, you're lacking in the curve department. most of your sliders have different shapes and different curves when the song is doing nothing. I would understand if the song changed and you decided to change the type of slider, but it doesn't, so the map kinda looks messy. for example. you have 00:03:382 (3) - 00:06:835 (3) - and 00:12:015 (7) - these are essentially the same sound, but different sliders portray that they're different sounds. i understand if you say variety is the reason, but it should be the same when the song isn't doing anything special
00:05:108 (7,8) - maybe rotate (8) a bit so that it looks like they're in continuing flow
00:36:188 (7) - this slider shape is pretty ugly imo, you should flatten out the curve a tiny bit, if you want an example go to my m4m map and go to the "easy" diff and go to this object: 00:31:887 (3) - it has a better aestheitc and i think that's what you should try to achieve
bariton
i like the concept this diff uses, it's super cool
in the first 16 seconds you map the beginning with only circles and symmetry, but why dont you use the bottom 2 quadrants?
01:10:720 (1,1) - the overlap this has is kinda ugly when look at your other overlaps where the slider is perfectly within the other slider, maybe make 01:11:583 (1) - slider end inside the slider body of 01:10:720 (1) - ?
insane that isnt winter
00:25:828 (2,3) - make this the same spacing as 00:25:612 (1,2) - ?
00:37:914 (3,4) - i dont understand this jump, the song is still in the calm state and this random jump is here and it doesn't represent the music, so you should just make it like the other 1/2 rhthyms
00:46:331 (1) - shouldn't this end on 00:47:842 -
00:58:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think it would look better if this was a perfect star
01:16:116 (4) - this sv change is random, to make it noticable, maybe add an nc?
01:16:547 (5) - if you do above, also nc this
mariana
nothing wrong imo :shrug:
nice mapset, gl
)no because that icon you see when you look at the diffs doesn't represent the actual difficulty presented in the diff, ie that "insane" with the "hard icon" will have "insane" difficulty concepts, not "hard" difficulty concepts. take a look at https://osu.ppy.sh/s/644642 , youll notice the "normal" (novice) plays like a normal, but has a "hard" icon, so sometimes that difficulty icon is misrepresentetive of the actual difficulty mapped. the difficulty icon purely comes from the star rating, not how hard the level is. dont blame the game blam peppyCaporal wrote:
Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say
Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?
Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?
Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced
Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard
Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?
Marianna's Winter > Good like this
Map are really good tho
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
kappa
others all fixed, or I took a remap, thx for moddingPeterEU wrote:
Hard00:05:540 (8) - i would ctr + j this I copy the previous shape
00:12:015 (7) - too sharp
00:13:742 (3) - look a little bit off move a little bit to the right
00:14:605 (6,7) - shapes are not the same
00:26:907 (6) - place it higher looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279216
00:31:871 (5) - NC here
00:38:778 (5) - ^
all fixedCraEZy wrote:
sandrew
to have good structure, you should make most things on your map visually similar, ie jump organization, similar curves when mapping, etc, you're lacking in the curve department. most of your sliders have different shapes and different curves when the song is doing nothing. I would understand if the song changed and you decided to change the type of slider, but it doesn't, so the map kinda looks messy. for example. you have 00:03:382 (3) - 00:06:835 (3) - and 00:12:015 (7) - these are essentially the same sound, but different sliders portray that they're different sounds. i understand if you say variety is the reason, but it should be the same when the song isn't doing anything specialok I haven't noticed that so this time I try to use more similar patterns to make them in connect
00:05:108 (7,8) - maybe rotate (8) a bit so that it looks like they're in continuing flow
00:36:188 (7) - this slider shape is pretty ugly imo, you should flatten out the curve a tiny bit, if you want an example go to my m4m map and go to the "easy" diff and go to this object: 00:31:887 (3) - it has a better aestheitc and i think that's what you should try to achieve
thx for modding
remapped as said before, now 2.32
well I'm still a newbie mapper so if my diff is a drag on this set pls delete it with no hesitation, I really like this song and set, don't want it to be my fault osu file format v14
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412,345,50648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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70,117,52590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,117,52806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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219,125,53454,6,0,P|228:195|219:283,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,335,54101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,335,54317,2,0,P|108:343|38:338,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,267,54965,2,0,P|152:258|222:263,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,313,55612,2,0,P|302:280|302:222,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,186,56044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,102,56260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,102,56475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,267,56907,6,0,P|60:205|61:118,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,70,57554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,70,57770,2,0,P|139:132|138:219,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,282,58417,2,0,L|322:290,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,355,59065,2,0,P|400:372|449:375,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,298,59496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
458,298,59712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,298,59928,2,0,P|421:281|372:278,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,289,60360,6,0,P|299:219|308:131,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,79,61007,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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227,123,62950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,44,63166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,44,63382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,147,63813,6,0,P|43:209|44:296,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,344,64460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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427,266,68778,2,0,P|358:257|288:262,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,312,69425,2,0,P|208:279|208:221,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,185,69857,1,2,0:0:0:0:
250,101,70073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,101,70288,2,0,P|279:73|319:66,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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444,289,71367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,99,72230,2,0,L|233:100,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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97,119,73309,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,119,73525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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203,309,74820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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326,265,76763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,346,76979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,77626,12,0,79353,0:0:0:0:
one star for you, almost forgot it
oh，btw you'd better not change the diff name because there is a bug in osu website now, if you change all the diff name the set may become a mess, when players update a diff it may become a blank diff(my heart signal set has become that and I had to wait for 30 days to delete it and reupload
Topic Starter
CraEZy wrote:
insane that isnt winter
00:25:828 (2,3) - make this the same spacing as 00:25:612 (1,2) - ? (okay, i don't now how you see that difference but okay ;P)
00:37:914 (3,4) - i dont understand this jump, the song is still in the calm state and this random jump is here and it doesn't represent the music, so you should just make it like the other 1/2 rhthyms (Fixed)
00:46:331 (1) - shouldn't this end on 00:47:842 - (finished on red line, i see now)
00:58:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think it would look better if this was a perfect star (okay)
01:16:116 (4) - this sv change is random, to make it noticable, maybe add an nc? (yep fixed)
01:16:547 (5) - if you do above, also nc this ^
Thanks for the mod
kappa
not at all! your diff is pretty good and definitely rankable :>Sandrew wrote:
well I'm still a newbie mapper so if my diff is a drag on this set pls delete it with no hesitation, I really like this song and set, don't want it to be my fault
one star for you, almost forgot it
oh，btw you'd better not change the diff name because there is a bug in osu website now, if you change all the diff name the set may become a mess, when players update a diff it may become a blank diff(my heart signal set has become that and I had to wait for 30 days to delete it and reupload
hi i'm noffy t. coffee and originallyvocaloidsong maps with wrong metadata bothers me hi im here
Title: ツギハギスタッカート
Romanised Title: Patchwork Staccato
Source:初音ミク -Project DIVA- X
add to tags: とあ toa Tsugihagi
metadata sources:
idk what's going on here because your soundcloud source in the description says the same thing too for the unicode title but your map doesn't match this (p.s. never ever use a wikia as a source, not vocaloidlyrics wikia, not vocaloid wikia, not utaite wikia, never a wikia unless literally no other sources exists. wikias are not official sources.)
title: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm23827894
romanised title: http://karent.jp/album/1580 (official release of song on an english webpage, just the feat miku stuff wouldn't be included since this isn't miku's version obviously). It's also how it appears in-game in Project Diva x's english version - so you can leave it the same as you have it haha
source field: http://miku.sega.jp/ http://info.miku.sega.jp/category/x/page/7
about the tags: it's gross to me that the original composer is currently credited nowhere
and tsugihagi is the romanised word for patchwork in the title
this source field applies whether or not it's a cover version, cut version, or remix.
no kd
Title: ツギハギスタッカート
Romanised Title: Patchwork Staccato
Source:初音ミク -Project DIVA- X
add to tags: とあ toa Tsugihagi
metadata sources:
idk what's going on here because your soundcloud source in the description says the same thing too for the unicode title but your map doesn't match this (p.s. never ever use a wikia as a source, not vocaloidlyrics wikia, not vocaloid wikia, not utaite wikia, never a wikia unless literally no other sources exists. wikias are not official sources.)
title: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm23827894
romanised title: http://karent.jp/album/1580 (official release of song on an english webpage, just the feat miku stuff wouldn't be included since this isn't miku's version obviously). It's also how it appears in-game in Project Diva x's english version - so you can leave it the same as you have it haha
source field: http://miku.sega.jp/ http://info.miku.sega.jp/category/x/page/7
about the tags: it's gross to me that the original composer is currently credited nowhere
and tsugihagi is the romanised word for patchwork in the titlethis source field applies whether or not it's a cover version, cut version, or remix.
no kd
Topic Starter
thanks <3 <3
no kd, a bit supplement to the metadeta
this song is not the original cover that nameless uploaded on niconico , it's a new cover which is used in toa x nameless's album named "212" http://mikudb.moe/album/212/
it's the 4th track
and here is its official website: http://www.subcul-rise.jp/nameless_toa/212
so better to add a tag: 212
this song is not the original cover that nameless uploaded on niconico , it's a new cover which is used in toa x nameless's album named "212" http://mikudb.moe/album/212/
it's the 4th track
and here is its official website: http://www.subcul-rise.jp/nameless_toa/212
so better to add a tag: 212
Insane:
00:41:799 (1,2) - A intuição do jogador vai ser clicar em um círculo mais pra baixo, já que tinha a lógica de ''cima, baixo cima, ai no caso o prox circle (00:42:231 (1) -) teria que ser embaixo, só que está quase que reto. então pra não confundir um jogador iniciante é melhor aproximar aquele cirlce, e colocar ele mais embaixo
Last diff:
01:12:878 (3) - Dá pra fazer uma blanket do 3 com o 1,
01:14:173 (1) - O ângulo desse slider ta diferente do ângulo disso 01:13:742 (4,5,6) - é só um detalhe, mas vai ficar melhor ainda na estética. Mas nesse caso eu preferiria mudar as streams do que o slider, ia ocupar menos espaço e tals
Holy, é só isso,tomara que fique ranked, eu gostei muito do map, e a parte do tic tac ficou perfeita
00:41:799 (1,2) - A intuição do jogador vai ser clicar em um círculo mais pra baixo, já que tinha a lógica de ''cima, baixo cima, ai no caso o prox circle (00:42:231 (1) -) teria que ser embaixo, só que está quase que reto. então pra não confundir um jogador iniciante é melhor aproximar aquele cirlce, e colocar ele mais embaixo
Last diff:
01:12:878 (3) - Dá pra fazer uma blanket do 3 com o 1,
01:14:173 (1) - O ângulo desse slider ta diferente do ângulo disso 01:13:742 (4,5,6) - é só um detalhe, mas vai ficar melhor ainda na estética. Mas nesse caso eu preferiria mudar as streams do que o slider, ia ocupar menos espaço e tals
Holy, é só isso,tomara que fique ranked, eu gostei muito do map, e a parte do tic tac ficou perfeita
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