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petit milady - Seishun wa Tabemono desu

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_IxApplePie_
246 posts
Joined November 2013
_IxApplePie_
From NM queueee

Marianna's Insane
- 00:20:750 (1) - i'm pretty sure you can emphasis this more like you did with 00:12:804 (1) ,00:14:263 (1) , and so on.

Maxter's Insane
- 00:17:506 (4) - is this a trap? if not, don't confuse players lol :o

Light Insane
- 00:10:371 (1) - pretty sure you can emphasis this more cause it has more "power"(strong beat) than 00:10:210 (7)
- 00:18:479 (3) - you can give this a sharper angle to 00:18:642 (4) to have better flow + more emphasis on 00:18:642 (4)
*sry, could only find some faults in emphasizing

Shogun's Norm
- 00:08:263 (4) - instead of slider, put a circle at 00:08:425 since the slider does not follow the bell(?) bgm

Ataraxia's Easy
- ctrl + shift + a, you got a unsnapped note. ( 00:06:475 (1) ) and i'm pretty sure you need to fix some distance snap...(not sure whether you could fix them or not)

don't give me kudos if these ain't helpful!!
goodluck! :D
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

From NM queueee


Light Insane
- 00:10:371 (1) - pretty sure you can emphasis this more cause it has more "power"(strong beat) than 00:10:210 (7) Ok
- 00:18:479 (3) - you can give this a sharper angle to 00:18:642 (4) to have better flow + more emphasis on 00:18:642 (4)
*sry, could only find some faults in emphasizing I will try XD

don't give me kudos if these ain't helpful!!
goodluck! :D

Thanks For Modding ;)
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
hmmm looks like i have a lot of mod to reply, sorry for all and the mapper for that :(

FOR THE MOTHER OF GOD WHY THAT NOT SNAPPED LOL


okye the slider whas snapped now

@IggyLp

Easy: 00:02:421 the Slider should be one Tick longer
00:03:394 this circle must be replaced one tick further

to be since, i don't understand nothing about that lol, why put one/futher tick ? i see now its fine what i have made and is fine, i don't see why switch snap instances (sorry if i see rude to you, i just don't understand the "why" of all...)

@siwu320

blanket is fine

@Bubblun

00:18:155 (2) - I think this is a snapping error. It sounds more accurate at 00:18:317 (2) - if you want to contrast the 3/2 difference in the timeline you can stack the note under 1 and stack 00:19:452 (1) - under the previous note. If you decide to fix the snapping this way boost the stack leniency up to 8 so the notes don't perfectly overlap. Criteria doesn't like perfect overlaps hgwouls;sghn

Since its a easy diff, i really don't want to "emphasss" nothing, i see u resolution in a good way to make a good map, but i wanted to do a simple thing, transform 00:18:155 (2) - in a repeat, now, its just a simple representation, with no circles, but sliders, i think now its fine to make a good flow with no need of circles emphas

unsnapped object at 00:06:475 (1) - in Ataraxia's Easy . Rest of diffs look good.


Thank you for all, if don't feel good for some of the modders, i open for a recheck

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CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
CucumberCuc
Hi :3

Ataraxia's Easy
00:06:480 (1,2,3) - hey, distance? :(
00:16:858 (1,2) - do better flow
00:21:398 (4,1) - a bit far

Shogun's normal
00:14:263 (1,2) - make distance better >//<

Shaxter's Advanced
The main difference of this complexity is the use of people's nicknames on the BG and it's a bit strange that this is where it is used, although I do not know if such a moment affects the ranking
00:06:313 (4,1) - strange flow
00:09:074 (1) - move a bit left?
00:17:182 (4) - it's rly strange placement, maybe do are close with next slider and make better flow with 00:16:534 (3) - ?
00:21:236 (1,2) - interesting NC pick, but it's not understand why Shadow use the same color if Master use him, maybe remake NC?
00:24:317 (3) move a bit left and make slightly far from next slider?

Maxter's Insane
00:14:750 (2,3,4) - it's slightly look is strange flow especially the slider, maybe think about change?
00:17:182 (3,4,5) - strange see this low distance when u need in all Kiai time do far objects
00:31:047 - put circle?
00:31:534 - ^
00:31:128 (2,3) - flow can be better

Marianna's Insane
00:02:907 - i think it's not good when u miss sound here

other things and diffs looks good
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3 ...

Ataraxia's Easy
00:06:480 (1,2,3) - hey, distance? :( Hmmm... fixed ?
00:16:858 (1,2) - do better flow Hm... what patten here you don't like ? where the problem ?, if you just put "do better flow" i never gonna understand what bad the flow are here, i don't want to be rude, I have analyzed your post in general, u have more than 2 years of mapping activities and you don't explain nothing about your mod, please, if you gonna mod a map, at least try to explain something

00:21:398 (4,1) - a bit far is about the DS, if that. fixed...

Please, you NEED to explain all things in your mod, don't do a LAZY modding like that for the mother of god

other things and diffs looks good
DS fix
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CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
CucumberCuc

Ataraxia wrote:

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3 ...

Ataraxia's Easy
00:06:480 (1,2,3) - hey, distance? :( Hmmm... fixed ? look on this: http://prntscr.com/hm1aq2, http://prntscr.com/hm1bdp; on Easy difficulty maximum distance between objects is 0.03x
00:16:858 (1,2) - do better flow Hm... what patten here you don't like ? where the problem ?, if you just put "do better flow" i never gonna understand what bad the flow are here, i don't want to be rude, I have analyzed your post in general, u have more than 2 years of mapping activities and you don't explain nothing about your mod, please, if you gonna mod a map, at least try to explain something well, u have this moment https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9741743 and it's not good, fix to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9741775 and it's be look better

00:21:398 (4,1) - a bit far is about the DS, if that. fixed...

Please, you NEED to explain all things in your mod, don't do a LAZY modding like that for the mother of god

other things and diffs looks good
UPD1: 00:13:615 (4) - i think be better if u do 1.21x distance
00:14:263 (1,2) - it's a bit far, like i say above - on Easy diff maximum distance 0.03x
00:21:398 (4) - 1.2x?
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

From NM queueee

Shogun's Norm
- 00:08:263 (4) - instead of slider, put a circle at 00:08:425 since the slider does not follow the bell(?) bgm

don't give me kudos if these ain't helpful!!
goodluck! :D

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3

Shogun's normal
00:14:263 (1,2) - make distance better >//<

other things and diffs looks good
All fixed!

Thanks for modding!!

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TitleUnicode:青春は食べ物です
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Alexsander
1,081 posts
Joined November 2016
Alexsander
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:777 (3) - Melhora esse slider está muito feio do jeito que ele foi colocado, vc poderia diminui a curva dele mais ou menos assim
    Ex:
  2. 00:24:642 (1) - você poderia colocar o ponto vemelho desse slider mais pro lado do slider head pois melhor visualmente
    Ex:
[Normal]

  1. 00:01:286 (1,2) - Avoid this overlap costs nothing (same thing happens in(00:06:480 (1,2) - )
    ex:
  2. 00:12:317 (2,3) - This was inconsistent I think I should have a reverse in 00:12:155 - the vocal and hitmo will become much more consistent.
  3. 00:17:344 - As before, I think there must be a reverse, but it's your choice.
[Advanced]

  1. 00:07:128 (2) - esse reverse ficou estranho, você poderia colocar 3 circulos ai ficaria melhor e mais agradável em jogo.
[Hard]

  1. 00:08:588 (3,4) - Coloca um slider 1/2 pois está interferindo 00:09:398 (2,3) - já que a musica da uma parada e esse 2 circle atrapalham já que os 2 próximos estão aumentando, dificil de explicar mas espero que entenda =/
[Light Insane]

  1. 00:15:398 (5) - Creio que se diminuir o DS para deixar melhor visualmente não tem problema mas é de sua escolha
    ex:
[Maxter's Insane]

  1. 00:03:556 (4,5) - muito distante, a relação de aumento no DS foi uma diferença muito grande em comparação a esta 00:03:231 (2,3) - você poderia deixar em 2.9x de DS e o som mais forte(00:03:880 (1) - ) do jeito que está.
  2. 00:14:263 (1) - Essa curva toda não ficou legal reconsidere diminuir um pouco, é sua escolha
  3. 00:16:371 (8) - Não entendi esse DS alto pois o vocal forte está em 00:15:398 (5,7) -
  4. 00:23:182 (2) - DS poderia ser maior para ressaltar esse vocal acredito que seria interessante
Só isso mesmo
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao

TheBenderGamer wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 00:01:286 (1,2) - Avoid this overlap costs nothing (same thing happens in(00:06:480 (1,2) - ) it's fine imo, begginers can understand where they need to click imo (i mean to click on 2)
    ex:
  2. 00:12:317 (2,3) - This was inconsistent I think I should have a reverse in 00:12:155 - the vocal and hitmo will become much more consistent. fixed in other way
  3. 00:17:344 - As before, I think there must be a reverse, but it's your choice. i keep this here because there are more vocals at this moment so i can make this, the chain should be too long
<:²
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-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-
WOOOOOOO HERE WE GO AFTER 1 MONTH, BACK TO ACTIVE BOIII
Prepare for posting avalanches lol, forum doesn't want to cooperate with a single thread.

-Alcaida wrote:

Short maps
Maxter's Insane
00:02:258 (3) - a little bit far like 00:02:096 (2) - Alright :3, I was thinking about this while testplaying, why not make those 2 distance's equal? I Have the bad habit to try to make things look different, and the final result is the map looking like sh

00:17:182 (3,4,5) - ds plz - I Actually messed up some patterns here while I was innactive, so, this mod is actually out of date here, sorry :c my fault
put this 00:20:263 (4) - or these 00:19:939 (2,3) - into "holes" 00:20:588 (5) - I Made this https://puu.sh/yFzVu/879d17b3e5.png, not the cutest thing, but better than before

Good luck!
Thank You
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-
Second Mod
(Repeating, the forum is not collaborating, sorry for the solo posts)

Bubblun wrote:

m4m from my queue

Maxter's Insane

My general concerns with this diff are how it's patterns look. You incorporated linear and circular patterns which is great, but the way they fit together visually is important as well because you want clear patterns that can be read easily. If you'll let me point out some examples;

  1. 00:02:096 (2,3,4) - From 1-00:12:317 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 4 your direction is counter-clockwise. 4 is a comparably strong note so it makes sense why you would switch the direction of that flow here. I think the problem is you went from circular to linear flow on 3-4 so it makes the pattern look random. I think if you arranged the slider in a way where you incorporate both linear and circular flow at the same time the map can play much better and will look more organized. https://puu.sh/yzDyg/ba6571bcfc.jpg - This Pattern (1-2-3-4) was one of my major concerns about aesthetics, I Improved it quite a bit, but I like the way it looks being here https://puu.sh/yFA86/28d25ceeba.png, I tweaked it a little.
  2. 00:12:317 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Here there is no circular motion. The way you go back and forth with the patterns on the strong beats at 00:12:804 (1,3) - makes sense, but then at 00:13:777 (5) - it doesn't switch directions. While the last note is playable, it is unexpected because you mapped it differently at 1 and 3. For this pattern I suggest rotating 5 so it switches direction on the strong beats so you establish a pattern to compliment the rhythm. - Hmm, Alright, this really looks like it was placed randomly actually, I pratically reworked this section, one thing leaded to another, thank you.

  3. 00:15:398 (5,6,7,8) - 5 goes up, but 6 is below. This contradicts the expected location of 6 because naturally players follow a circular and linear pattern. 7-8 the patterns play against what they imply. What I mean is 7 is counter-clockwise while 8 is clockwise. They cancel each other out, so it makes this pattern difficult to play. This is where you would want to incorporate circular and linear flow because if some parts play harder over others but they share the same intensity then the map plays inconsistently. That's why it's important to take into consideration how certain patterns play over others so you can guarantee consistency. - Yup, this makes things look more natural.

    Bottom line is you need to have consistency, or similarity in the way your patterns play so as to compliment the music. I highly suggest going through and checking to make sure your patterns follow a consistent pattern so as they don't break a player's expectation. - Yeah, I have this problem that is trying to make things less "repetitive", but doing this, I leave consistency behind, my major problem at mapping :/
Thank You
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

From NM queueee

Maxter's Insane
- 00:17:506 (4) - is this a trap? if not, don't confuse players lol :o - Why a trap? xD, I actually am kinda nervous with this pattern :s, it was made by accident, but I liked it so I left it there ;-; It is actually incredibly playable, but if more people complain about this, I'll Remove it ;-;

goodluck! :D
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3

Maxter's Insane
00:14:750 (2,3,4) - it's slightly look is strange flow especially the slider, maybe think about change? - Hmm GSHNDBASJDANSBHDGBAHSDASHGDJG Ok
00:17:182 (3,4,5) - strange see this low distance when u need in all Kiai time do far objects - Actually, this particular part is less "kiai-like" (less intense), and this 00:17:993 (1,2,3) - helps highlight it more :v
00:31:047 - put circle? - I Can't find any sound here :c
00:31:534 - ^ - Neither D:
00:31:128 (2,3) - flow can be better - I Prefer to let this pattern be like this ;-;
Thansks
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

TheBenderGamer wrote:

[Hard]

  1. 00:08:588 (3,4) - Coloca um slider 1/2 pois está interferindo Não vou colocar slider mas vou mudar a posição do circulo (4) para que o flow fique melhor

    00:09:398 (2,3) - já que a musica da uma parada e esse 2 circle atrapalham já que os 2 próximos estão aumentando, dificil de explicar mas espero que entenda =/ Vou ver isso depois :P
[Light Insane]

  1. 00:15:398 (5) - Creio que se diminuir o DS para deixar melhor visualmente não tem problema mas é de sua escolha
    ex: Para mim está bom como está :/
Thanks For Modding :)
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
CucumberCuc
_MasterTSP

try in future write all answers in 1 message, it's be better for u
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-

CucumberCuc wrote:

_MasterTSP

try in future write all answers in 1 message, it's be better for u
Like I said, fórum was not cooperating
YukiZura-
762 posts
Joined October 2015
YukiZura-
hi, q

[]
kaia mode is too long wth xD

[Maxster's Insane]
00:12:155 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - srsly idk what are you even following here? lol
ok i assume that you want to follow the vocal since you did here 00:10:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
let me give a bit like suggestion or just help you in general
00:12:317 (3) - this slider shoud be here 00:09:561 (3) - instead
00:12:479 - single note here and here 00:12:642 - because of the drum voice i think
00:12:804 (1) - this slider end should end here 00:12:804 (1) - cuz there is no sound to be clickable at all at this part 00:13:128 (2) -
00:13:290 (2,3) - swap this two places 00:12:804 - single note here and slider here 00:13:452 - cuz the "dise"sing in long sound (i hope you understand what i mean xD)
00:14:750 (2,3) - replace with slider .. nothing that make it clickable
00:25:777 (7) - nc should be here ... not here 00:26:263 -
00:27:236 (10) - again.. nc here .. not 00:27:561 -
00:32:101 (4) - nc

[marianna's insane]
00:13:777 (5,6) - swap places this two because here 00:14:101 - is more likely to be clickable
00:28:534 (1) - idk why the slider end here tho because there no sound at all there ... should end here 00:27:561 (2) -

that's all for me .. gudluck ^^
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3

Marianna's Insane
00:02:907 - i think it's not good when u miss sound here I'm not following this sounds

other things and diffs looks good

YukiZura- wrote:

hi,

[marianna's insane]
00:13:777 (5,6) - swap places this two because here 00:14:101 - is more likely to be clickable The whole map is following this pattern
00:28:534 (1) - idk why the slider end here tho because there no sound at all there ... should end here 00:27:561 (2) - It is to emphasize in the next note

that's all for me .. gudluck ^^
a little change from @Yuki's mod + changed last spinner
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Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
@CucumberCuc thanky now is fine, applied all xD (sorry for being rude too)

@Alexsander obrigado, apliquei tudo também xD

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Simuzax
251 posts
Joined September 2015
Simuzax
Ye XD
Ataraxia's Easy
00:03:394 (3) - move isso pra 00:03:556 - o som agudo tem mais impacto q o kick, fica estranho de se jogar
00:11:669 (1,2) - esse tipo de movimento é ok, mas eu preferiria algo >assim<, ficaria mais contínuo e fluido
00:26:912 - uma nota cairia bem aqui, ainda ta no kiai de qlqr jeito
00:27:236 (1,2) - isso só é um pouco feio mesmo, n sei exatamente como você poderia arrumar isso, tlvz algo >assim?<
00:29:831 (1) - deveria acabar em 00:33:642 se vc tiver seguindo os kicks ou em 00:33:885 se tiver seguindo o fade out do agudo, vc q decide
Shogun's Normal
00:29:831 (1) - change that to a 1/2 repeat slider, youre missing a note at 00:29:993
00:32:425 (1) - this should end at 00:33:642
Shaxter's Advanced
00:11:020 (3) - encerra esse slider em 00:11:344 e põe um circulo em 00:11:507 - o ritmo ta estranho parece q falta algo clicavel, faz algo >assim< sla
00:15:561 (1) - 00:18:317 (7) - o ritmo e o DS aqui tão simplesmente mto estranhos, n da pra entender direito o q vc ta seguindo na musica, tenta usar
>esse< e ve o q sai, atualmente n da nem pra jogar essa parte sem se perder
00:19:452 (2,3) - corrige o blanket
00:31:128 (1) - encerra o slider em 00:31:452 e põe um circulo em 00:31:615 - mesma coisa do slider la de cima
00:32:425 (1) - esse spinner deveria acbar em 00:33:642
Hard
00:11:588 - tem som aqui, acho q o ritmo ficaria melhor >assim< ja q o som em 00:11:344 - é mais forte q os outros
00:16:047 (2,3) - transforma o (2) num repeat slider e o (3) num slider 1/2 normal, tem um som forte em 00:16:534 - fica melhor de se jogar
00:19:452 (1) - 00:20:263 (4) - essa parte ta mto estranha de se jogar, tem esse slider 1/8 meio desnecessario e vc ainda poe menos enfase no som forte em 00:20:425 - tenta usar
>esse< ritmo e ve no q da
00:22:858 (3) - remove isso
00:22:534 (2) - transforma em um repeat e põe um circulo ou um slider em 00:23:020 por causa do som forte
00:32:344 (1) - vc ta perdendo umas notas aqui 00:33:398 , encerra o spinner ali e põe um triple/repeat
Light Insane
00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - os angulos desses jumps tão horriveis de jogar, tenta refazer essa parte
00:16:047 (2,3) - mesma coisa do Hard
00:22:534 (2,3) - ^
00:29:831 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - um pouco estranho de ler, n é major mas tenta refazer esses jumps tbm
00:32:344 (1) - mesma coisa do Hard
Marianna's Insane
00:02:421 (1) - encerra esse slider em 00:02:907 - os agudos tem mais impacto q os kicks aqui, atualmente ta estranho de se jogar
00:03:394 (2) - move pra 00:03:231 - ^
00:03:718 (3) - move pra 00:03:556 - ^
00:08:263 (3) - move pra 00:08:425 - ^
00:08:588 (4) - remove isso, explicação acima
00:10:858 (1) - move pra 00:10:696 e põe um circulo em 00:11:020 - ritmo ta estranho
00:12:804 (1,2) - meio desnecessario usar esse ritmo sendo q vc poderia simplesmente terminar o slider ond ta o (2), fica super estranho de se jogar e fica mais pesado do q deveria, esse caso se repete tanto no mapa q nessa parte 00:25:128 (1,2,1) - ond faz sentido usar esse ritmo, vc nem sente diferença, n sei se precisaria remapear td mas tenta dar uma arrumada
00:32:263 (1) - ta perdendo uma nota em 00:33:398
Maxter's Insane
00:02:421 (4,1) - da uma nerfada nesse jump
00:03:069 (1,2,3,4) - os angulos disso são horriveis de se jogar, tenta refazer esses jumps
00:11:263 - falta uma nota aqui
00:14:750 (2,3,4) - mesma coisa dos 1os jumps
00:15:398 (5) - troca isso por um circulo e põe um slider em 00:15:561 por causa do agudo
00:20:588 (7) - ta perdendo uma nota no meio desse slider, transforma ele em um repeat 1/2
00:29:750 - falta uma nota aqui
00:22:534 (5,6,1) - mesma coisa dos 1os jumps
Bread Paradise
00:16:371 (3,4) - põe um circulo aqui e um slider em 00:16:534 pelo som forte
00:20:263 (4,5) - mesma lógica do de cima
00:22:534 (2) - mesma coisa do Hard
00:32:344 (1) - ^

isso demorou mto pqp
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton
que mapa fofo, ainda precisa de mod?
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-
quem deu esse mapa pro cmb
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao

Simuzax wrote:

Ye XD
Shogun's Normal
00:29:831 (1) - change that to a 1/2 repeat slider, youre missing a note at 00:29:993 kk
00:32:425 (1) - this should end at 00:33:642 fixed on white tick
Thanks for modding!

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yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Simuzax wrote:

Ye XD

Shaxter's Advanced
00:11:020 (3) - encerra esse slider em 00:11:344 e põe um circulo em 00:11:507 - o ritmo ta estranho parece q falta algo clicavel, faz algo >assim< sla Irei ver
00:31:128 (1) - encerra o slider em 00:31:452 e põe um circulo em 00:31:615 - mesma coisa do slider la de cima ^
00:32:425 (1) - esse spinner deveria acbar em 00:33:642 Ok

Hard
00:11:588 - tem som aqui, acho q o ritmo ficaria melhor >assim< ja q o som em 00:11:344 - é mais forte q os outros Coloquei desse jeito para não ficar desconfortavel para ir para a slider 1/1
00:16:047 (2,3) - transforma o (2) num repeat slider e o (3) num slider 1/2 normal, tem um som forte em 00:16:534 - fica melhor de se jogar Ok
00:19:452 (1) - 00:20:263 (4) - essa parte ta mto estranha de se jogar, tem esse slider 1/8 meio desnecessario e vc ainda poe menos enfase no som forte em 00:20:425 - tenta usar Arrumei
>esse< ritmo e ve no q da
00:22:858 (3) - remove isso Nop
00:22:534 (2) - transforma em um repeat e põe um circulo ou um slider em 00:23:020 por causa do som forte Som forte está no tick vermelho
00:32:344 (1) - vc ta perdendo umas notas aqui 00:33:398 , encerra o spinner ali e põe um triple/repeat Nop

Light Insane
00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - os angulos desses jumps tão horriveis de jogar, tenta refazer essa parte Os jumps não estão desconfortaveis para a jogabilidade porque vi com alguns players e eles gostaram do flow dele
00:16:047 (2,3) - mesma coisa do Hard Ok
00:22:534 (2,3) - ^ Lol mais ai tbm tem som forte, vou deixar como está
00:29:831 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - um pouco estranho de ler, n é major mas tenta refazer esses jumps tbm Mesma coisa que falei dos jumps a cima
00:32:344 (1) - mesma coisa do Hard Nop, está bom assim

Bread Paradise
00:16:371 (3,4) - põe um circulo aqui e um slider em 00:16:534 pelo som forte Irei Ver
00:20:263 (4,5) - mesma lógica do de cima no tick vermelho o som é forte e tbm eu estou seguindo vocal XD
00:22:534 (2) - mesma coisa do Hard Mesma coisa que falei na light insane
00:32:344 (1) - ^ Nop

isso demorou mto pqp


Thanks For Modding :)
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna

Simuzax wrote:

Ye XD
Marianna's Insane
00:02:421 (1) - encerra esse slider em 00:02:907 - os agudos tem mais impacto q os kicks aqui, atualmente ta estranho de se jogar Eu e muitas pessoas jogamos isso normalmente.
00:03:394 (2) - move pra 00:03:231 - ^
00:03:718 (3) - move pra 00:03:556 - ^
00:08:263 (3) - move pra 00:08:425 - ^
00:08:588 (4) - remove isso, explicação acima
00:10:858 (1) - move pra 00:10:696 e põe um circulo em 00:11:020 - ritmo ta estranho Pra mim ta ok
00:12:804 (1,2) - meio desnecessario usar esse ritmo sendo q vc poderia simplesmente terminar o slider ond ta o (2), fica super estranho de se jogar e fica mais pesado do q deveria, esse caso se repete tanto no mapa q nessa parte 00:25:128 (1,2,1) - ond faz sentido usar esse ritmo, vc nem sente diferença, n sei se precisaria remapear td mas tenta dar uma arrumada Eu faço isso para dar ênfase na nota seguinte
00:32:263 (1) - ta perdendo uma nota em 00:33:398 Fixed
isso demorou mto pqp
Obrigado por moddar
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Source:パンでPeace!
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graças a Deus vai ser o último
Houtarou Oreki
303 posts
Joined March 2014
Houtarou Oreki
Ataraxia's Easy

00:06:480 (1) - A little thing: the distance after this slider is 0.95x, being 2/4 beats apart. 00:25:777 (3,1) also being 2/4 apart have a normal distance. Guess it should be 1.2x everywhere.

Shogun's Normal

00:32:425 (1) - Should this spinner end the way it ends? There isn't any sound on this downbeat.

Shaxter's Advanced

00:01:286 (1,2,1) - Practically the same visual distance between objects, even though musically they have different distances.
00:02:421 (1,2,3,4,1) - These are as close to each other as 00:05:177 (2,3,4), but they have different distance in audio. This really bothers me, use some distance snapping at lower diffs.
00:10:371 (1,2,3) - This really feels weird with this close distance. Overall, this diff's distances between objects feel weird.
00:16:534 (3,4) - No chance for a blanket here? Or make 4 further from 3. 00:17:669 (5,6) being 1/4 apart is further apart.
00:20:425 (3,4) - These are definitely too far apart for a 1/4.
00:21:236 (4,1) - And maybe correct this one a bit.
00:30:804 (3,1) - You could've just copied 00:03:556 (4,1), and while we're at it, it could look slightly better.

Hard

Suggestion, use different stacking patterns for different "doubles". 00:08:750 (4,1) is 1/1 apart, but looks the same as 00:20:588 (5,1) that is 1/2 apart.
Shunao
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Joined February 2016
Shunao

Houtarou Oreki wrote:

Shogun's Normal

00:32:425 (1) - Should this spinner end the way it ends? There isn't any sound on this downbeat. that's the point i want to extend this spinner because the diff in general isn't easy to play for newbies so i decided to finish spinner on white tick for bonus point c':
Thanks for modding!
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

Simuzax wrote:

Ye XD
Ataraxia's Easy
00:03:394 (3) - move isso pra 00:03:556 - o som agudo tem mais impacto q o kick, fica estranho de se jogar pra ser sincero, todos os ticks que eu tentar colocar aqui vai ficar estranho, por conta de ser um easy "bem easy"eu optei em tentar diminuir o numero de vezes q eu tive q colocar red tick, dessa vez, optei em colocar o circle onde nao ficasse muito estranho, onde tem um som de kick, o som agudo se repete dentro do slider, se eu representar esse som, terei q representar o que esta no slider, quebrando os 2 slider 1/1 q eu fiz, então ,
no xD
00:11:669 (1,2) - esse tipo de movimento é ok, mas eu preferiria algo >assim<, ficaria mais contínuo e fluido
00:26:912 - uma nota cairia bem aqui, ainda ta no kiai de qlqr jeito mas é o mesmo ritmo só que com curvas UHSAFDHUSHUDF, o player não é la tão detalhista assim, se fosse uma normal maybe... mas easy... prefiro manter o meu xD. e outra, é sua "preferencia" entende ? eu prefiro usar retos pois como o player é newbie, ao meu ver, sinto que devo usar coisas simples com um fluido basico, o meu consiste em retas simples e seguidas, ja o seu, são curvas não-simetricas, o player ele pega o slider pra fazer ele TODO, e não fazer .... (resumido) como nós que ja jogamos a um tempo fazemos (voce pode perceber, antes tu completava o slider, hoje, voce só passa o mouse/caneta/touch nele) Mas sua ideia não deixa de ser boa, bela sugestão, mas como mapper prefiro manter a minha ja que não tem mta diferencia no ponto de vista geral ja que o ritmo é igual.

00:27:236 (1,2) - isso só é um pouco feio mesmo, n sei exatamente como você poderia arrumar isso, tlvz algo >assim?< Isso foi em um mod do Kisses, ele falo para eu fazer repeats simetricos pois ja que eu fiz o mapa inteiro simetrico eu deveria representar o normal assim também, antes tava quase desse seu jeito, mas seu jeito é muito não-simetrico, e ja que eu optei por fazer algo simetrico so decidi seguir até o fim

00:26:912 - uma nota cairia bem aqui, ainda ta no kiai de qlqr jeito Caralho, eu jurava q tinha colocado uma nota ai... ainda bem que vc viu UHSDFHUSIDFUH colocado q
00:29:831 (1) - deveria acabar em 00:33:642 se vc tiver seguindo os kicks ou em 00:33:885 se tiver seguindo o fade out do agudo, vc q decide Decidi seguir o end de todos os outros mappers do set, consistencia entre eles, entao onde a maioria deixou, vou deixar também xD


isso demorou mto pqp
Minha opiniao sobre seu mod
Fiquei impressionado ! nunca vejo voce se interagir la no server etc e nem na comunidade, mas mesmo assim, vi que voce fez um baita texto trouxe argumentos que meio que cocei a cabeça pra responder, é isso q eu realmente gostei ! voce poderia ser mais participativo la no grupo do discord, a galera é super simpatica e divertida... voce iria evoluir muito mais do que voce ja conseguiu evoluir sozinho, enfim... continue assim !


@Houtarou Oreki yes i have fixed that, thanky


Hello ppl, i have talked with some veteran mappers that what i should do in 00:06:480 (1,2,3) - , and i have concluded that i can do a 1/2 repeat in a easy since i don't make them so much consistency, its one moment in the start of the map, so, i don't see any problem to do one little 1/2 repeat in a easy 1.38, if someone don't feel good with that, lets talk to, ideias makes me in a good way to do a good map!

caralhoOOOOOOOOO
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super simpática ta
yShadowXOP_
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yShadowXOP_

Houtarou Oreki wrote:

Shaxter's Advanced

00:01:286 (1,2,1) - Practically the same visual distance between objects, even though musically they have different distances. Ok I will increase the DS
00:02:421 (1,2,3,4,1) - These are as close to each other as 00:05:177 (2,3,4), but they have different distance in audio. This really bothers me, use some distance snapping at lower diffs.i will change
00:10:371 (1,2,3) - This really feels weird with this close distance. Overall, this diff's distances between objects feel weird.Lol, I'll change.
00:30:804 (3,1) - You could've just copied 00:03:556 (4,1), and while we're at it, it could look slightly better. Ok

Hard

Suggestion, use different stacking patterns for different "doubles". 00:08:750 (4,1) is 1/1 apart, but looks the same as 00:20:588 (5,1) that is 1/2 apart. lol, the player just needs to read :v

Thanks For Modding :P
Aniviuh
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Joined January 2015
Aniviuh
Easy: 00:03:394 (3,1) - I know it's very easy to hit these two consecutively but this is on an easy, the player goes to the left to hit the three and needs to yank him or her self to the right to hit the one. I think it would be cool to move these to make it easier. 00:02:421 (2,3)
Normal: ---
Advanced: 00:15:561 (1,2) - I think it would look nicer if both of these would curve like slider three.
Hard: ---
Light Insane:---
Bread Paradise: 00:23:831 (2) - This slider is going too high and is under lapping the health bar.
yShadowXOP_
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Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

ViolentBoo wrote:

Bread Paradise: 00:23:831 (2) - This slider is going too high and is under lapping the health bar. I lowered the slider a little :P

Thanks For Modding :)
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

ViolentBoo wrote:

Easy: 00:03:394 (3,1) - I know it's very easy to hit these two consecutively but this is on an easy, the player goes to the left to hit the three and needs to yank him or her self to the right to hit the one. I think it would be cool to move these to make it easier. 00:02:421 (2,3)
" I know it's very easy to hit these two consecutively" U just like answered your mod lol, if easy, how the player gonna confund ? and even he confund, he can replay since is the start of the music, so no.

--


o @shadow tem um NC desnecessario aqui e eu n acho LEGAL upar so pra arrumar um NC, enfim, o Nc em questão é aqui 00:08:101 (2) - (acho que ate tu percebe xD) se puder tirar... vlw <3
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gary00737
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gary00737
no kds


00:02:907 (2) - the slider end add whistle , <-- if you add it , 00:03:556 (5) - add whistle too

00:06:480 (1,2) - use this maybe better

00:08:750 (4) - change clap

00:13:452 (3) - the slider head add whistle

00:24:642 (1,2) - hitsound wrong(? the whistle should on 00:24:966 (2) - not 00:24:642 (1) - end (?

00:10:371 (1,2) - this slider end don't add hitsound 00:11:020 (3) - add whistle

00:14:263 (1) - this slider end don't add hitsound too

00:15:398 (5) - add whistle

00:31:128 (1) - this slider head add clap

00:31:615 (2) - change clap




good luck for rank \:D/
yShadowXOP_
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Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

gary00737 wrote:

no kds


00:02:907 (2) - the slider end add whistle , <-- if you add it , 00:03:556 (5) - add whistle too

00:06:480 (1,2) - use this maybe better

00:08:750 (4) - change clap

00:13:452 (3) - the slider head add whistle

00:24:642 (1,2) - hitsound wrong(? the whistle should on 00:24:966 (2) - not 00:24:642 (1) - end (?

00:10:371 (1,2) - this slider end don't add hitsound 00:11:020 (3) - add whistle

00:14:263 (1) - this slider end don't add hitsound too

00:15:398 (5) - add whistle

00:31:128 (1) - this slider head add clap

00:31:615 (2) - change clap

All Fixed, Thanks For Modding :P




good luck for rank \:D/ Thanks :)
Doj
232 posts
Joined March 2014
Doj
yo

[Maxter's Insane]
00:12:155 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - My problem with this is that I can't really tell what you're mapping to here. It's not following vocals or the guitar really. You should rework this and make clear what you're mapping to here.
00:17:182 (3,4,5) - Why is the spacing so low here? The intensity hasn't changed really
00:24:642 (3) - i think you should make this a slider so the drum 00:24:804 - here is played on the end of the slider
00:25:128 (5) - you could also make this a slider, buuut i see what kinda feeling you're trying to bring out here and a slider would be meh. It's up to you
00:26:263 (1,2) - the distance between these notes should be shortened imo
00:29:750 - there's a note here so you can make a triple on the end of the slider

[Marianna's Insane]
00:03:880 (1) - i really love this slider tbh
00:26:588 (5,6,7) - if you wanna spice this up a bit you could try something like this https://i.imgur.com/yTDcFgg.png

[Shaxter's Advanced]
00:14:750 (2,1) - fIX blANkET REeeeeEEeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe

all your other diffs seem good, gl m8
-Master-
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Doj wrote:

yo

[Maxter's Insane]
00:12:155 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - My problem with this is that I can't really tell what you're mapping to here. It's not following vocals or the guitar really. You should rework this and make clear what you're mapping to here.
00:17:182 (3,4,5) - Why is the spacing so low here? The intensity hasn't changed really
00:24:642 (3) - i think you should make this a slider so the drum 00:24:804 - here is played on the end of the slider
00:25:128 (5) - you could also make this a slider, buuut i see what kinda feeling you're trying to bring out here and a slider would be meh. It's up to you
00:26:263 (1,2) - the distance between these notes should be shortened imo
00:29:750 - there's a note here so you can make a triple on the end of the slider

all your other diffs seem good, gl m8
Changes done. Except for the Second one, Shadow nerfed the Distance for the sake of my difficulty not surpassing "Bread Paradise" in stars.

I'm currently with no internet connection on my computer, I'll send changes to Shadow when It returns..

Thank you :)
yShadowXOP_
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Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Doj wrote:

yo

[Shaxter's Advanced]
00:14:750 (2,1) - fIX blANkET REeeeeEEeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe Fix :)

all your other diffs seem good, gl m8

Thanks For Modding :P
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