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petit milady - Seishun wa Tabemono desu

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-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
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Well, because people complain about ANYTHING, I made a new extended MP3 file. With a longer drain time (27 > 33) (Yes, there were complaints about 3 seconds being under the 30s M.)

Because there is now an inaudible joint, I'll time the multiple non-inherit sections that need to be done to make the timing "perfect".

So I need for you to hold on until I finish setting up everything.
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

_MasterTSP wrote:

Well, because people complain about ANYTHING, I made a new extended MP3 file. With a longer drain time (27 > 33) (Yes, there were complaints about 3 seconds being under the 30s M.)

Because there is now an inaudible joint, I'll time the multiple non-inherit sections that need to be done to make the timing "perfect".

So I need for you to hold on until I finish setting up everything.

Thanks Maxter Senpai <3 :oops:
Kyoshiro
193 posts
Joined February 2015
Kyoshiro
GD Request
osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Seishun Wa Tabemono Desu
TitleUnicode:青春は食べ物です
Artist:Petit Milady
ArtistUnicode:Petit Milady
Creator:yShadowXOP_
Version:KyoYushiro's Insane
Source:パンでPeace!
Tags:悠木碧 竹達彩奈 yuuki aoi taketatsu ayana プチミレディ opening CALENDAR GIRL short pan de peace _MasterTSP KyotoYushiro Makisokk UniqueBlock11
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Last edited by Kyoshiro , edited 2 times in total.
Silver Eyes
75 posts
Joined August 2016
Silver Eyes
GD REQUEST - ADVANCED
Status: Mapping - 32%
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Seishun Wa Tabemono Desu
TitleUnicode:青春は食べ物です
Artist:Petit Milady
ArtistUnicode:Petit Milady
Creator:yShadowXOP_
Version:S'Eyes Advanced
Source:パンでPeace!
Tags:悠木碧 竹達彩奈 yuuki aoi taketatsu ayana プチミレディ opening CALENDAR GIRL short pan de peace
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

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-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-
rnak wen
Ali-
63 posts
Joined December 2015
Ali-
from my mod q, ill do my best

[Bread Paradise]

00:10:371 (1) - this spacing here is very counter-intuitive, most emphasized sound in the jump but least spacing
00:08:750 (4) - if this circle were more to the right the jump would look a lot better imo
00:16:858 (1,2) - maybe a blanket on the slider end would be better, but it looks rankable as is, no biggie
00:26:912 (1,4) - consider overlapping these two?
00:31:128 (1) - flow is suddenly changed with this slider. having it pointed horizontally would be a lot more smooth

[KyoYushiro's Insane]

00:31:128 (1) - if there were anyway to move this pattern up a tad, itd look a lot nice going from the previous. perhaps just a rotation would do?
00:14:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - same issue here, the follow points go straight into the head by the slider body isnt consistent with that, like it is 00:15:885 (3) - here for example
00:18:966 (4) - very difficult to read. you could hint at a big gap in rhythm with an NC, so players can pay attention to the hitcircle
00:24:804 - undermapped a quiet drum hit here
00:27:074 (8,9,1) - flow into the slider from the triple is off, always use the same angle (hint: its easier if the triple is less spaced)
00:32:101 (5,6) - i feel like these two notes are very emphasized and deserve a flow change. like this?

---
two good maps, the kyoyushiro's diff is very innovative, i like it

gl with the rank <3
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Ali- wrote:

from my mod q, ill do my best

[Bread Paradise]

00:10:371 (1) - this spacing here is very counter-intuitive, most emphasized sound in the jump but least spacing Ok
00:08:750 (4) - if this circle were more to the right the jump would look a lot better imo Fixed
00:16:858 (1,2) - maybe a blanket on the slider end would be better, but it looks rankable as is, no biggie i'll leave it as it is
00:26:912 (1,4) - consider overlapping these two? Ok
00:31:128 (1) - flow is suddenly changed with this slider. having it pointed horizontally would be a lot more smooth Fixed

gl with the rank <3 Thanks For Modding :)
Rossi
685 posts
Joined January 2015
Rossi
Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
General :
  1. offset I find is -14
  2. 00:06:480 - delete new Timing Point
  3. did the kiai end is right?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


[maki's Normal]
00:01:934 (2,3) - this change to slider?
00:07:128 (2,3) - ^
00:17:831 (3,4) - ^
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


[Shaxter's Advanced]
00:20:425 (3,1) - too far
00:26:750 (3) - this slider change the end at 00:27:074 -
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


[Hard]
00:06:313 (4,1) - too far
00:11:182 (4,5,1) - same^ this is too far. some player will get combo break maybe xD
00:13:777 (3) - head reverse slider not good put at red line.
00:17:993 (1,2,4) - ^
00:26:912 (4,1) - too far
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


why the bg so cute xD lol
Nice map :) good luck~! :)
Last edited by Rossi , edited 2 times in total.
coke bottle
271 posts
Joined May 2017
coke bottle
hihi M4M reply coming through!!

[*Que's Easy]00:03:556 (3) - too close to 00:02:421 (2) -


[*KyoYushiro's Insane]00:33:398 (1) - Don't put this right after a spinner cause there's not enough time for players to react to it. I think this is unrankable.


[*Hard]00:18:804 (3) - Delete this maybe cause there's no sound on it?


BTW, idk about the kiai endung time tbh. i felt like it should have lasted till 00:32:263 -
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:

Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
  1. did the kiai end is right? okay, it was changed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


[Shaxter's Advanced]
00:20:425 (3,1) - too far
00:26:750 (3) - this slider change the end at 00:27:074 - Fixed
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


[Hard]
00:06:313 (4,1) - too far Fixed
00:11:182 (4,5,1) - same^ this is too far. some player will get combo break maybe xD ^
00:13:777 (3) - head reverse slider not good put at red line. ^
00:17:993 (1,2,4) - ^ ^
00:26:912 (4,1) - too far ^
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why the bg so cute xD lol
Nice map :) good luck~! :)

Thanks For Modding :oops:
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Reynolduh wrote:

hihi M4M reply coming through!!

[*Hard]00:18:804 (3) - Delete this maybe cause there's no sound on it?
Ok

BTW, idk about the kiai endung time tbh. i felt like it should have lasted till 00:32:263 - Fixed


Thanks For Modding :)
makisokk
928 posts
Joined August 2013
makisokk
@Franklin_DeJavu
I will not change this, because it sounds better notes
Nelliel
874 posts
Joined September 2015
Nelliel
Que's Easy
Maybe increase Distance Spacing to 1.3 instead

00:03:556 (3) - should be ds
00:05:177 (1) - point this slider towards the circle
00:06:150 (2,1) - i'd be nice if this was blanketed
00:12:642 (2) - circle here?
00:12:804 (2) - move this 00:12:966 (2) - here
00:16:534 (4,1) - blanket that better
00:20:425 (2,3) - ^
00:29:831 (1) - map this part
00:32:425 (1) - spinner here to 00:33:723 (1) -

imo i think this diff should just get remapped it's extremely messy
maki's Normal
00:01:934 (2) - 1/4 slider kick?
00:02:421 (3) - circle
00:07:128 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
00:23:344 (4) - end this slider here 00:23:669 (5) -
00:23:831 (5) - move slider here
00:24:317 (6) - circle
00:27:236 (1) - blanket this on slider end of 00:25:777 (4) -
00:29:831 (1) - map this spinner
00:32:425 (1) - spinner here
Shaxter's Advanced
make curve slider be the same across the map so it looks nice
00:02:907 (2) - ctrl+g
00:03:231 (3) - ^
00:03:556 (4) - ^
00:19:452 (2) - rotate this it doesn't look nice when its parallel to 00:18:966 (1) - maybe by like 45
00:21:236 (1) - terra bad curve slider
00:26:750 (3) - ^
00:30:317 (2) - ctrl+h
00:31:128 (1) - make it nicer
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

WhozChaos wrote:

Shaxter's Advanced
make curve slider be the same across the map so it looks nice
00:02:907 (2) - ctrl+g Nop,will break the flow
00:03:231 (3) - ^ ^
00:03:556 (4) - ^ ^
00:26:750 (3) - ^ Ok
00:30:317 (2) - ctrl+h ^
00:31:128 (1) - make it nicer ^

Thanks for modding :)
Last edited by yShadowXOP_ , edited 1 time in total.
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-

WhozChaos wrote:

Shaxter's Advanced
00:19:452 (2) - rotate this it doesn't look nice when its parallel to 00:18:966 (1) - maybe by like 45 - IMO that would look kinda bad, but I reworked it
00:21:236 (1) - terra bad curve slider - Added Blanket
makisokk
928 posts
Joined August 2013
makisokk

WhozChaos wrote:

maki's Normal
00:01:934 (2) - 1/4 slider kick? I think not, better not worth it
00:02:421 (3) - circle Here comes a long sound, better slider
00:07:128 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ ^
00:23:344 (4) - end this slider here 00:23:669 (5) - Remap this part
00:23:831 (5) - move slider here
00:24:317 (6) - circle hmm, not need
00:27:236 (1) - blanket this on slider end of 00:25:777 (4) - I did not initially make it, and I do not see the point
00:29:831 (1) - map this spinner
00:32:425 (1) - spinner here oki
Thanks for the mod
ss
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Peter
786 posts
Joined June 2016
Peter
General
Change combo colours to match background

Easy
00:03:556 (3) - blanket looks off would make 00:02:421 (2) less sharp
00:06:480 (1) - would move this like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102025
00:24:317 (4,1) - why you re placing these object here there already were circles here it looks so boring

Normal
00:27:236 (1) - make blanket with 00:25:777 (4) -

advanced
00:03:880 (1) - too close to previous would make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102094
00:17:669 (5) - place this somewhere else
00:31:128 (1) - same as before

hard
00:28:209 (3) - looks off to previous
00:31:615 (2) - ^

Light insane
00:12:155 (2) - looks off to previous slider
00:20:750 (1) - looks off to this 00:20:101 (3) -
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

PeterEU wrote:

advanced
00:03:880 (1) - too close to previous would make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102094 Ok
00:31:128 (1) - same as before Ok

hard
00:28:209 (3) - looks off to previous Ok
00:31:615 (2) - ^ Ok

Light insane
00:12:155 (2) - looks off to previous slider Hm, No
00:20:750 (1) - looks off to this 00:20:101 (3) - ^

Thanks For Modding :)
makisokk
928 posts
Joined August 2013
makisokk
@PeterEU
did not initially make it, and I do not see the point
Thanks for mod
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-

PeterEU wrote:

advanced
00:17:669 (5) - place this somewhere else - Rearranged a bunch of notes to fix this.
Thanks.
Botan
212 posts
Joined May 2017
Botan

  1. Use custom colors

Pan Paradise
Change the difficulty name to Pan Paradise.
  1. I suggest reducing the spacing in the entire section before the pre-kiai jumps 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7)
  2. Lower SV is nice to reflect the relative calmness in this section but the spacing is pretty much the same as the kiai. Would be nice if we could create a distinction between the two.
  3. It would make 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stand out a lot more too if we go from small spacing to gradually bigger kiai spacing.
00:02:421 (1) - This is one ugly looking slider (not symmetrical) Fix it.
00:07:615 (1) - Same as ^
00:14:588 (2,3) - CTRL + G these, that way we'll click on both vocal hits.
00:23:344 (1) - Same as ^
00:28:534 (1) - Same as ^
For the most part I am okay with the objects used in the kiai but I would maybe reduce the spacing during the calmer parts in the kiai for the same reasons above. Audibly there are moments where the song's intensity dies down a bit only to then spike up again but the equal large spacing for the entire kiai doesn't emphasize that as well as it could. Map is a bit messy though.

Maxter's Insane
00:02:258 (3,4) - Doesn't flow well. Slider would play a lot better if it was above the 3. I'd like to see the slider be placed further away to match the intensity/spacing of 00:02:096 (2,3) but the biggest issue here I believe is that it's placed below the 3.
00:03:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce spacing, bit ridiculous here for non-kiai.
00:03:718 (5,6) - Same as ^ Consider placing the sliderhead somewhere like https://imgur.com/a/Gd57t (obviously don't keep the shape)
00:17:831 - Add circle.
00:18:966 (1) - Stack this under the previous circle. Can be misleading as it has same spacing as 1/2 rhythm like previous pattern.
For the kiai... maybe try reworking the pattern so we click something on downbeats instead of having sliderends on them? Same general thoughts as I mentioned in in the top diff mod. Map looks a bit messy as well.
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Botan wrote:


  1. Use custom colors

Pan Paradise
Change the difficulty name to Pan Paradise.
  1. I suggest reducing the spacing in the entire section before the pre-kiai jumps 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) Ok
  2. Lower SV is nice to reflect the relative calmness in this section but the spacing is pretty much the same as the kiai. Would be nice if we could create a distinction between the two.
  3. It would make 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stand out a lot more too if we go from small spacing to gradually bigger kiai spacing.
00:02:421 (1) - This is one ugly looking slider (not symmetrical) Fix it. Fixed
00:07:615 (1) - Same as ^ ^
00:14:588 (2,3) - CTRL + G these, that way we'll click on both vocal hits. ^
00:23:344 (1) - Same as ^ ^
00:28:534 (1) - Same as ^ ^
For the most part I am okay with the objects used in the kiai but I would maybe reduce the spacing during the calmer parts in the kiai for the same reasons above. Audibly there are moments where the song's intensity dies down a bit only to then spike up again but the equal large spacing for the entire kiai doesn't emphasize that as well as it could. Map is a bit messy though.

Thanks For Modding
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding

Easy
  1. 00:27:236 (1,2,3,4) - I think you'd follow a lot more of the vocals by having these as 2 3/2 reverse sliders https://i.imgur.com/b94PzYI.png
  2. 00:29:831 (1) - it would fit the song more to end this at 00:33:561 or 00:33:398 . Or you could you use the same ending as top diff

top diff
  1. 00:18:317 (2,3) - delete clap
  2. 00:18:479 (3) - add whistle
  3. 00:25:452 (4,1) - the spacing between these objects is quite low. This is such an emphatic part of the song and the low spacing doesn't do it justice
  4. 00:32:263 (7) - An NC would give a bit more hp before the spinner; which would be nice
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yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Kisses wrote:

top diff
  1. 00:18:317 (2,3) - delete clap
  2. 00:18:479 (3) - add whistle
  3. 00:25:452 (4,1) - the spacing between these objects is quite low. This is such an emphatic part of the song and the low spacing doesn't do it justice
  4. 00:32:263 (7) - An NC would give a bit more hp before the spinner; which would be nice
All Fixed, Thanks for Modding :)
w
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:27:236 (1,2,3,4) - I think you'd follow a lot more of the vocals by having these as 2 3/2 reverse sliders https://i.imgur.com/b94PzYI.png
  2. 00:29:831 (1) - it would fit the song more to end this at 00:33:561 or 00:33:398 . Or you could you use the same ending as top diff
w
all applied, thank u

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Venix
Global Moderator
1,927 posts
Joined February 2015
Venix
last diff.
  1. 00:02:421 (1,2) - I think you should use less spacing here just because it's almost as big as 00:01:934 (2,1) - this one. Sound is the same with 00:01:286 (1,2) - this so i prefer use here similar spacing.
  2. 00:03:231 (3) - This one should be less spaced from previous slider because of reason above
  3. 00:10:209 (7,1) - This spacing should be bigger, if u have used high spacing 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here, you should use higher spacing 00:10:209 (7,1) - here because sound is more important in music
  4. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - back'n'forth pattern doesn't work well here cuz sound 00:18:642 (4) - here is stronger than previous ones
Also I think kiai should be a bit shorter cuz actually it's 3/4 of song
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Venix wrote:

last diff.
  1. 00:02:421 (1,2) - I think you should use less spacing here just because it's almost as big as 00:01:934 (2,1) - this one. Sound is the same with 00:01:286 (1,2) - this so i prefer use here similar spacing.
  2. 00:03:231 (3) - This one should be less spaced from previous slider because of reason above
  3. 00:10:209 (7,1) - This spacing should be bigger, if u have used high spacing 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here, you should use higher spacing 00:10:209 (7,1) - here because sound is more important in music
  4. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - back'n'forth pattern doesn't work well here cuz sound 00:18:642 (4) - here is stronger than previous ones
Also I think kiai should be a bit shorter cuz actually it's 3/4 of song

All Fixed Thanks For Modding :)
kwk
572 posts
Joined May 2010
kwk
q
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top diff seems ok
[Maxter's Insane]
00:06:480 (1) - extend this out the red tick? the current beat here 00:06:966 (2) - isnt that important imo and doing this way will give you more contrast for 00:07:128 (3,4) - since that contains the melody
00:10:696 (1,2) - why is the spacing here suddenly so low lol, im guessing it was like this before? better to have it like this http://puu.sh/xI7zC/77b547af6b.png.
00:11:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - hmm im having a bit of trouble figuring out what your following, are you prioritising the vocals? To me it just looks like your filling in beats but they dont actually represent anything. If you want to follow the vocals more closely whiile respecting the background something like this would be good imo http://puu.sh/xI7ND/e08e310e03.png
00:15:074 (4,1,2) - main problem here is 00:15:398 - is rather stressed, but its not clickable but this 00:15:723 - has no backing but its clickable?
try this out http://puu.sh/xI7QQ/6019e0c3ec.png similar thing happens here 00:16:696 (1,2) - where 2 is clickable but 00:16:858 - isnt. i'll stop mentioning the rhythm things cause it happens throughout your map but i suggest you go over your rhythming,maybe have a look at the top diff for ideas
00:17:831 - on the otherhand why isnt this clickable when theres a drum hit lol

[light insane]
00:19:777 (2,3) - swap rhythm around fits vocals better since atm 3 doesnt really represent anything
00:25:452 (4,1) - feels like it should be spaced more since 00:25:128 (3,4) - has more spacing for some reason
00:26:912 (4) - i know theres a beat on the last tick but i think its better for playability if you only had 1 repeat, since the jump to the next note is quite far
00:27:561 (2,3) - maybe stack this onto the slider head? dont think you should be forcing the blanket since the flow isnt very good
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yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

kwk wrote:

q
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top diff seems ok
[light insane]
00:19:777 (2,3) - swap rhythm around fits vocals better since atm 3 doesnt really represent anything
00:25:452 (4,1) - feels like it should be spaced more since 00:25:128 (3,4) - has more spacing for some reason
00:26:912 (4) - i know theres a beat on the last tick but i think its better for playability if you only had 1 repeat, since the jump to the next note is quite far
00:27:561 (2,3) - maybe stack this onto the slider head? dont think you should be forcing the blanket since the flow isnt very good
~

All Fixed, Thanks For Modding :)
DeletedUser_10209520
DeletedUser_10209520
Hello!

From my queue.

(wew, that's a lot of diffs)

Hard
00:01:286 (1,2) - Angling the slider slightly more towards the reverse slider's head would make for better flow.
00:06:480 (1,2) - ^

Maxster's Insane
00:02:421 (4,1) - Jump feels too far for the small increase in song intensity.
00:03:880 (6) - Angle this slider so that you start by heading towards the previous note instead of downwards for better flow.

Looks good other than that!

GL, HF!
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

SuperCSGO wrote:

Hello!

From my queue.

(wew, that's a lot of diffs)

Hard
00:01:286 (1,2) - Angling the slider slightly more towards the reverse slider's head would make for better flow.
00:06:480 (1,2) - ^
All Fixed

Looks good other than that!

GL, HF!

Thanks For Modding :)
-Master-
152 posts
Joined October 2015
-Master-

kwk wrote:

q
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top diff seems ok
[Maxter's Insane]
00:06:480 (1) - extend this out the red tick? the current beat here 00:06:966 (2) - isnt that important imo and doing this way will give you more contrast for 00:07:128 (3,4) - since that contains the melody
Applied, Sounds better.

00:10:696 (1,2) - why is the spacing here suddenly so low lol, im guessing it was like this before? better to have it like this http://puu.sh/xI7zC/77b547af6b.png.
Actually it was distanced like this, but because my diff was surpassing the last diff, Shadow tweaked some distances.


00:11:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - hmm im having a bit of trouble figuring out what your following, are you prioritising the vocals? To me it just looks like your filling in beats but they dont actually represent anything. If you want to follow the vocals more closely whiile respecting the background something like this would be good imo http://puu.sh/xI7ND/e08e310e03.png
Hm, yeah, I can see your point and I actually agree with it, some tweaks are necessary. I was following the background while respecting vocals like ya said, but it ended up looking like a complete clusterfuck w/o meaning, I made some tweaks.


00:15:074 (4,1,2) - main problem here is 00:15:398 - is rather stressed, but its not clickable but this 00:15:723 - has no backing but its clickable?
I made it like this to respect the vocal line too, it gets it's "clickability" from the vocal line, wich gives strength to the weak beat, but the reverse right there I'll make some changes, it really needs improvement.

try this out http://puu.sh/xI7QQ/6019e0c3ec.png similar thing happens here 00:16:696 (1,2) - where 2 is clickable but 00:16:858 - isnt. i'll stop mentioning the rhythm things cause it happens throughout your map but i suggest you go over your rhythming,maybe have a look at the top diff for ideas
00:17:831 - on the otherhand why isnt this clickable when theres a drum hit lol
HAHAHA I actually remember this, I was extremely angry with the offset not matching up correctly, the circle only matches the beat when like this https://puu.sh/xIUZu/06505ef7c4.png, so I just let it like this, I agree, this empty space gives me the shivers too xD

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THENQ YUU
YelloJello
205 posts
Joined November 2016
YelloJello
From my queue :) I'll Nm your map since I dont have a full set yet.

Maki's Normal

.Increase the OD by a bit, maybe 3.8 to 4
•00:05:177 (2) - Pull back to make 4 ticks long and add beats at the two red ticks left over.
Shaxter's Advanced

Spacing feels too weird on:
• 00:05:988 (3,4) - and maybe the slider before them
• 00:10:371 (1,2,3,1) -
• 00:19:452 (2) -
• 00:07:128 (2) - And some others that im iffy about.
• 00:30:804 (3,1) - Can be blanketed better.
• 00:11:020 (3) - I can't hear a sound on the sliderend worth emphasizing, pull it back two ticks.

Hard

• 00:06:313 (4) - Increase spacing.
• 00:07:128 (2) - Same here.
• 00:11:182 (4,5) - 1/4 jump is a bad idea in what a borderline 2 star map, and lone 1/4 sliders are even harder, remap this bit.
• 00:26:912 (4) - The extra tick is unexpected and will throw players off course, pulling it back a tick won't hurt.
• 00:28:209 (3,1,2) - Blanket better.

Light Insane


• 00:05:988 (3,4) - Stack these to make them easier to read (actually do this for every time i mentioned this same exact spot prior)

Maxter's Insane


• 00:01:286 (1) - Pulll back Two ticks and add a circle where the slidertail ended, it makes the emphasis more impactful. Maybe mute the sliderend as well.
• 00:06:313 (8,1) - Extremely ugly, place on the grid in the middle and one down from the top.
• 00:14:750 (2,3,4) - The anti jump into comaratively large vertical jump down the screen is very uncomfortable, move 3 three and a half spaces to the right and 1 up one the grid.
• 00:29:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - and 00:32:101 (4,5) - The ending of the map is typically where you add the more difficult patterns, the big jump sections low spacing makes it feel like no challenge whatsoever, increasing spacing on both of these will make it's difficulty reflect the intensity of the song and the pp gains typically made at the ending. 00:30:155 (3) - and 00:30:966 (1) - also should be symmetrical to the jump pattern.

Bread Paradise Looks fine from a quick skim over.

Most of these are pretty good apart from the Shaxter diff's spacing being a nightmare for a new player to read. Good luck on shooting towards rank!
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

YelloJello wrote:

From my queue :) I'll Nm your map since I dont have a full set yet.

Shaxter's Advanced

Spacing feels too weird on:
• 00:05:988 (3,4) - and maybe the slider before them OK
• 00:10:371 (1,2,3,1) - ?
• 00:19:452 (2) - ^?
• 00:07:128 (2) - And some others that im iffy about. Ok
• 00:30:804 (3,1) - Can be blanketed better. ^
• 00:11:020 (3) - I can't hear a sound on the sliderend worth emphasizing, pull it back two ticks. l'll think about it

Hard

• 00:06:313 (4) - Increase spacing. Fixed
• 00:07:128 (2) - Same here. ^
• 00:11:182 (4,5) - 1/4 jump is a bad idea in what a borderline 2 star map, and lone 1/4 sliders are even harder, remap this bit. ^
• 00:26:912 (4) - The extra tick is unexpected and will throw players off course, pulling it back a tick won't hurt.^
• 00:28:209 (3,1,2) - Blanket better.^

Light Insane


• 00:05:988 (3,4) - Stack these to make them easier to read (actually do this for every time i mentioned this same exact spot prior) Ok


Thanks For Modding :)
DeletedUser_423548
DeletedUser_423548
M4M
General
  1. 00:01:286 - 00:09:074 - The whistle here sounds very strange
    It is a good feeling to try using the default soft whistle according to the sound of the bell of the song
Ataraxia's Easy
  1. 00:02:421 - Add finish
  2. 00:03:069 - remove whistle
    It does not match the song. Sounds very strange
  3. 00:03:394 (3) - Additions Drum finish?
  4. 00:06:480 (1) - 00:08:101 (2) - 2/1 slider is better
    00:01:286 (1,2) - I think it's the same rhythm
  5. 00:18:642 - You should pick up the loud noise here
  6. 00:29:831 (1) - This spinner is very long
    00:32:263 - So far you should pick up the sound properly
Shogun's Normal
  1. 00:08:263 (5,6) - I think this rhythm is difficult for beginners
    00:08:263 - 00:08:588 - 1/1 slider 00:08:750 - Add circle is better
  2. 00:09:561 (2) - The rhythm is very strange
    00:09:561 - Put a circle here, 1/2 slider is good
  3. 00:11:669 - 00:32:263 - Your rhythm is very strange
    1. Have you picked up the song rhythm?
    2. Have you picked up the sound according to the vocal?
    However, your rhythm is not consistent because 1 and 2 are mixed
    The consistency of the rhythm is very important as the beginner plays Normal
  4. 00:32:425 (1) - I think the end of the spinner is here 00:33:561 -
Shaxter's Advanced
  1. Advanced is a diff to fill the difference when there is a big difference in Hard's Normal
    I do not think there is a big difference in this mapset. I think this diff is the most dangerous in each difficulty level
    This diff is not uniform in distance. I think that it is better to check the distances of other Advanced objects.
Hard
  1. 00:11:182 (4,1) - This distance is not very good in Hard
  2. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
  3. 00:26:344 - There is no sound here
  4. 00:27:723 (2,2,3) - Why is the rhythm different?
Light Insane
  1. 00:08:588 (3,4,1) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
    00:08:588 (3,4) - It might be better to bring it closer
  2. 00:11:182 (1) - Remove NC
    Just like Hard
  3. 00:12:804 (1) - Why is the difference between hard and rhythm?
    I think hard rhythm is good
  4. 00:25:452 (4) - Ctrl+G is better?
  5. 00:26:344 - Hard some
  6. 00:30:966 (2,1) - It would be better to increase the distance to express a big sound
  7. 00:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is almost the same place as Hard and it has the same rhythm so please change it slightly. lol
In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand :o
Good luck!
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao

Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M

Shogun's Normal
  1. 00:08:263 (5,6) - I think this rhythm is difficult for beginners
    00:08:263 - 00:08:588 - 1/1 slider 00:08:750 - Add circle is better
  2. 00:09:561 (2) - The rhythm is very strange
    00:09:561 - Put a circle here, 1/2 slider is good
  3. 00:11:669 - 00:32:263 - Your rhythm is very strange i follow drums in the background
    1. Have you picked up the song rhythm?
    2. Have you picked up the sound according to the vocal?
    However, your rhythm is not consistent because 1 and 2 are mixed
    The consistency of the rhythm is very important as the beginner plays Normal
  4. 00:32:425 (1) - I think the end of the spinner is here 00:33:561 -
In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand :o
Good luck!
No reply mean fixed~

Thanks for modding!~

ummm
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yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M
General


  • Hard
  1. 00:11:182 (4,1) - This distance is not very good in Hard
  2. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
  3. 00:26:344 - There is no sound here
  4. 00:27:723 (2,2,3) - Why is the rhythm different?
Light Insane
  1. 00:08:588 (3,4,1) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
    00:08:588 (3,4) - It might be better to bring it closer
  2. 00:11:182 (1) - Remove NC
    Just like Hard
  3. 00:12:804 (1) - Why is the difference between hard and rhythm?
    I think hard rhythm is good
  4. 00:25:452 (4) - Ctrl+G is better?
  5. 00:26:344 - Hard some
  6. 00:30:966 (2,1) - It would be better to increase the distance to express a big sound
  7. 00:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is almost the same place as Hard and it has the same rhythm so please change it slightly. lol
In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand :o XD
Good luck!Thanks and All Fixed

Thanks For Modding :)
Mithia
617 posts
Joined February 2017
Mithia
Hi Hi Hi!!, Here from My Modding queue :)
Light Insane
00:01:934 (2) - Ctrl + G?
I do not think there is a need for Kudosu

this is perfect for me :( :? GL!!!
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
yShadowXOP_

OsuDans wrote:

Hi Hi Hi!!, Here from My Modding queue :)
Light Insane
00:01:934 (2) - Ctrl + G? Nop :/
I do not think there is a need for Kudosu

this is perfect for me :( :? GL!!!

Thanks For Modding :)
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M

Ataraxia's Easy
  1. 00:02:421 - Add finish Sure
  2. 00:03:069 - remove whistle Think not, because the hitsound match with the music
    It does not match the song. Sounds very strange maybe its a drum toon, but its not necessary to use other hitsound if the whistle do that perfectly
  3. 00:03:394 (3) - Additions Drum finish? yes its cool
  4. 00:06:480 (1) - 00:08:101 (2) - 2/1 slider is better but the tonality is different, if i use the same patten, its not gonna fit correctly just because the "bell(?)" sound has great than 00:01:286 (1,2) -
    00:01:286 (1,2) - I think it's the same rhythm eh... ^
  5. 00:18:642 - You should pick up the loud noise here i don't understand so much, but i want to follow the drum anyway, if i need to follow vocal, i think the map just could be bad to play because its 1/2 pattens need, since easy need the maximum of 1/1 possible
  6. 00:29:831 (1) - This spinner is very long the long the better to a novice play follow and don't miss xD
    00:32:263 - So far you should pick up the sound properly Not necessary, the spinner Finishing match with the final moment of the music
thanks for mod

minha normal tava um lixo msm xD
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