riunosk wrote:

helo
from mod queue
1234
modding only those per requested

ESS SEE // yummy onigiri

00:12:798 (12798|2,12941|2) - seems rather high pitched, maybe move to col 4?
00:28:941 - this sound sounds continued, rather than stopped so i suggest adding an LN here to emphasize it
00:30:512 - suggested pattern to reduce focus on col 1
00:37:084 (37084|3,37226|3,37512|2,37655|2,37941|1,38084|1) - sounds increasing in pitch, probably better to flip
00:52:155 - missing note? the sound there is the background synth, which i didn't map it
00:53:298 - ^ ^
00:57:226 (57226|2,57369|2) - seems rather awkward
01:41:512 - same as before
01:47:941 - ^
01:59:512 - suggested pattern for pr
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:18:941 (138941|2,138941|0) - pretty awkward to start off this jumpstream with a 13 it's fine imo
Pretty good LN chart, but second kiai seems very similar to the first, try varying it slightly

SUPUR HURD DUFFUCULTY // salmonella

(unrelated) 00:17:941 - oh no i can't imagine UHD now
00:41:226 (41226|0,41369|0,41512|0) - unnecessary stack
(unrelated) 00:45:226 - seems pretty fun to play
02:00:798 (120798|0,120941|0,121084|0) - unnecessary stack
02:36:655 (156655|0,156798|0,156941|0,157084|0,157226|0,157369|0,157512|0,157655|0,157798|0) - quite the long anchor you got there
oishii chart

im hungry for sushi onigiri dammit both of them now

ULTERA HARDEU DIFFUCOLTY // unagi usagi

(unrelated) next ranked map to have inverse inc
(unrelated) 00:25:226 - INVERSE O BOI
01:18:941 (78941|0,79084|0,79226|0,79369|0,79512|0) - this anchor seems unnecessary
also the sv seems a bit awkward, can't really give any suggestions since im trash at svs
02:16:726 - col 4 seems to have more notes than the rest i hope this fixed now :thenk:
02:19:655 - ^col 1 i hope this fixed now :thenk:
02:26:834 (146834|2) - this note seems rather squished between the two LNs, some skins will make this extremely hard to read so consider changing this a little, not really sure how myself
02:43:726 - col 2 feels very empty compared to the others
LNhellholyshit

great song choice and noodles
gud luk for renk

Acnos wrote:

From my queue

0|1|2|3

General :

1. Check Aimod u.u

o about hitsound ? , i will fix them when i can find sample qwq
 Salmon Onigiri "SHD" :

1. 00:20:226 (20226|1) - I think that maybe you can change it for LN by the sound
2. 01:22:369 - where is the double? D:

 Unagi Onigiri "UHD":

1. 00:16:441 (16441|3,16584|0) - shouldn't these be like these 00:16:155 (16155|2,16298|2) - ?
2. 01:52:655 (112655|1) - double pls
3. 02:01:226 (121226|1,121226|2) - triplet? in SHD, you put triplet

wow, your map is perfect for practice LNs, I love it e.e
If my mod don't help, don't give me kudosu u.u

Good Luck and Take a star!

[B A D] wrote:

oo nice song
0|1|2|3

Salmon Curry

<_< I thought this is for salmon shd diff and like "wtf there nothing there"
00:06:941 (6941|3,7084|1,7226|2) - Change to 1,2,3 ok
00:39:798 (39798|3,39941|3) - These two are different sound moved
01:04:869 (64869|3,64941|0) - Suggest pattern: ctrl+h

ctrl-H make it kinda right heavy because it will create minitrill

Nato Makizushi

00:20:369 (20369|3) - Turn into normal note? change to LN with longer length instead
00:24:941 (24941|3) - End at 00:25:226 ok
01:33:226 (93226|0) - Move it to 2 or 3 to fit with the pitch ok
02:41:512 (161512|2,161512|3) - Since you map this sound previously as a single, make this a single tooi map this with double all the kiai ?

Hope this help and gl for ranking

zawz wrote:

NM from my queue
sorry for the delay

Columns:
|1|2|3|4|

MX

00:08:084 (8084|2) - LN here
00:08:655 - Why didn't you express the "Huh?!" here ? It goes together with the ringing at 00:05:798 (5798|0) - so you should either express both or none. Same goes for other difficulties i don't want to put the LN for vocal here. the "huh" sound isn't that important to map imo and the sound din't snap perfectly also.
00:15:798 (15798|1,15941|2) - Flip for pitch
00:39:084 (39084|0,39155|1,39226|2,39369|0,39512|3,39584|2,39655|1,39798|3,39941|0,40012|1,40084|2,40226|0,40369|3,40441|2,40512|1,40655|3,40798|2,40869|1,40941|0) - Flip these. They're opposite to panning. ummm, it is on the right side for me, idk, maybe i use the wrong side of headphone or smth lol.
00:42:655 (42655|3,42941|3,43226|3,43512|3,43798|3,44084|3,44369|3,44655|3,44941|3,45226|3,45512|3) - that's tapping the beat way too many times
01:06:941 - LNs here should be like this
01:07:512 (67512|3,67584|0,67655|2,67726|0,67798|3) - That's too hard to read compared to the rest. Move 01:07:584 (67584|0) to 2
01:32:584 (92584|3,92655|0,92726|3) - Feels weird placed offbeat. Move 01:32:726 (92726|3) - to 3
02:00:798 (120798|0) - Make this double or remove one of these 02:01:084 (121084|3,121084|2)
02:17:798 - same deal as 01:06:941
02:18:441 (138441|0) - move to 2
02:28:369 - Since you've expressed previous drum rolls, express this one too
02:36:084 - again 01:06:941

Quite fun and unusual

Edit: HP 9 and 9.2 are too high for the amount of LNs SHD and UHD have. ok nerf down the HP a bit, i set the high HP to prevent people mashing it /or/ pretend the LN is a normal js.

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

greatest feature artist map ever played

MX

the first is also in 02:05:226 (125226|0)

1. 00:05:798 (5798|0) - u can extend this LN until 00:07:369 - cuz the ring's sound end here n make it more playable
2. 00:13:369 (13369|0) - i think it more fit if u put a short note here. if u wanna keep it for roll sound, i suggest to make LN here 00:12:369 (12369|0) - for roll
3. 00:17:369 - add note plz same sound like 00:16:798 (16798|1) - to cover 1/4 sound
4. 00:20:369 (20369|3) - this LN seems awkward tbh, maybe change into short note it will be better for the next sound 00:20:655 -
5. 00:21:512 (21512|0) - this should be LN for roll
6. 00:22:369 - add note here, i'm quite sure this sound is similar with 00:22:655 (22655|3,22798|1) -
7. 00:59:512 - little cymbal would suggest to make double here
8. 01:11:584 (71584|1,71798|0) - swap col
9. 01:15:226 (75226|1) - extend the LN to white tick like thiis 00:56:941 (56941|1) -
10. 01:52:369 - from this until 2nd kiai, idk why u put 1/1 beat n ignore the main beat 01:52:512 - 01:52:798 - etc i like to suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421601 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421608 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421611 more fit with the song
11. 02:27:655 (147655|0) - how about move this to 02:27:798 - n than 02:27:941 (147941|1) - extend to 02:28:369 -
12. 02:44:369 (164369|3) - same above, extend to white tick

AlisceaSparku wrote:

sux that i only have small mod >_>_>_>_>
and i still don't know the format for mod posts

anyway here ya go, col 1/2/3/4

[SC]

1. 00:01:084 (1084|2) - I would really prefer this note to be in a different column with 00:00:798 (798|2) - as both follows a different sound in terms of pitch. However, I don't really see this as a clean solution. A lot of rearranging would be required so, it's up to you whether you want to rearrange notes or not. gonna keep as it is for now, since i don't find its really a problem
2. 00:09:941 - you can make the kick and the snare follow the pitch of that "arcade-y" sound (sorry not sure what its called D:). Here's an example, however I would prefer the doubles to be a [2][4] and [1][3] (which will require a lot of rearranging as well.) ok
3. 00:19:655 (19655|2,19798|2) - I'd prefer these to be placed at col. 2 (along with a few rearrangements.) because from 00:18:512 - until 00:22:084 - , all jacks were in the same column. (basically, for variation) ok
4. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - these notes can be placed to a different column, for example at 4. The sound these notes are following are higher in pitch than what was played in 00:20:798 - and 00:20:941 - , 00:19:655 - and 00:19:798 - , etc. ok
5. 00:25:869 - add note? delete other 1/4 instead
6. 00:44:941 (44941|2,45084|3) - I think these sliders should change columns? so that they follow pitch relevancy. ok
7. 00:49:655 (49655|3) - extend to 00:49:941 - ? seems better this way ok
8. 01:07:512 - compared to 02:18:369 - , personally I find the first one a difficulty spike so... up to you change the first pattern

[MX]

1. 00:03:369 - This should follow pitch relevancy as well as to stick to your previous patterns. ok
2. 00:21:941 (21941|2,22084|2) - same suggestion stated in SC ok
   didn't really find anything else tbh, seems like a solid difficulty

[HD]

1. 00:03:226 (3226|0) - i think its better to put it to col.2 as the lowering of pitch here is very audible.
2. 00:39:155 (39155|0,39369|0) - I recommend that these notes are in a different column to each other, as they follow a different pitch, unlike 00:39:084 (39084|2,39226|2) - .
3. 00:39:584 (39584|3,39798|3) - ^same suggestion
4. 01:50:012 (110012|0,110226|0) - ^
5. 01:50:441 (110441|3,110655|3) - ^
   on a side note i really like the point of not putting doubles/triples

[NM]

1. 00:51:512 (51512|0,51726|1,51941|2) - i recommend to make these ones sliders so that players can be clearly informed that theres the possibility of transitioning to a new snap. too lazy to state each one of these xd ok
   nothing else to state. only a NM diff anyway

hope it helps D:
too bad im late for ez diff

Syadow- wrote:

mark for mod sorry for delay :"""0

[NM]

1. 00:05:798 (5798|0) - u can extend this LN until 00:07:369 - cuz the ring's sound end here n make it more playable
2. 00:13:369 (13369|0) - i think it more fit if u put a short note here. if u wanna keep it for roll sound, i suggest to make LN here 00:12:369 (12369|0) - for roll
3. 00:17:369 - add note plz same sound like 00:16:798 (16798|1) - to cover 1/4 sound
4. 00:20:369 (20369|3) - this LN seems awkward tbh, maybe change into short note it will be better for the next sound 00:20:655 - change to shorter LN
5. 00:21:512 (21512|0) - this should be LN for roll
6. 00:22:369 - add note here, i'm quite sure this sound is similar with 00:22:655 (22655|3,22798|1) - it didn't have drum there
7. 00:59:512 - little cymbal would suggest to make double here
8. 01:11:584 (71584|1,71798|0) - swap col
9. 01:15:226 (75226|1) - extend the LN to white tick like thiis 00:56:941 (56941|1) -
10. 01:52:369 - from this until 2nd kiai, idk why u put 1/1 beat n ignore the main beat 01:52:512 - 01:52:798 - etc i like to suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421601 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421608 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9421611 more fit with the song would keep since it follow the background sound
11. 02:27:655 (147655|0) - how about move this to 02:27:798 - n than 02:27:941 (147941|1) - extend to 02:28:369 - add note at 02:27:798 - instead
12. 02:44:369 (164369|3) - same above, extend to white tick

deadbill wrote:

Hello

Umeboshi Onigiri MX

00:12:226 - pattern suggestion, imo in order to make the pattern comfortable you can make the stairs in one direction .-.



00:13:369 - same sound with 00:22:512 - , considering either to add a note or delete a note on 00:22:512 -
OR, make 00:22:512 - consistents with 00:27:084 - by adding a note on 00:22:655 - but the problem is you are using two notes for kicks in this section
while on the latter you are using two notes for snares. This is also a consistency matter that might have to be considered.
Because a player might end up not knowing which note for which sound, that could affect enjoyment in their playthrough (and now im exaggerating )

add a note at 00:13:441 - , i miss that, btw in the first part, i try to use single for all sound there except the jump every big(?) white line.

00:43:512 - might want to check its consistency. please compare it with 00:41:226 - i do the same thing tho, jump for both kick and snare,
single for the rest and LN for the melody.
00:48:084 - why stop using LN so sudden for main melody with 1/2 length? :C , u can add an LN here 00:48:084 - (please) ok
also 00:46:369 (46369|3,46655|3,46941|3,47226|3,47512|3,47798|3) - might want to shuffle ok


welp the reason is as i mentioned above,
add a note for each
00:57:226 - 00:57:655 - 00:58:084 - because you are using 2 notes for kicks and snares in the previous section and the next section

as the same for this section 01:15:512 -


umm you might want to use different pattern..
compare this 01:22:369 - with this 01:31:512 -
8 different tones and 6 different tones for the latter. and length of those notes is different for each section.
that kind of pattern cannot represent those differences >.> kinda changes(?0 for now, hope it works now

for this section 01:38:369 - through 01:42:369 -
as mentioned above, be consistent with how many note for each snare and kick ok fixed

the rest is fine, goodluck o/




ps. are you sure for using kiai that much? .-.

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, NM Request from my modding queue.

4K:1|2|3|4

[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]

1. 00:33:941 - You need one more note here for the drum sound, so you can try this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435588 change to something instead for pr but add the double
2. 00:34:798 - And also here too,so if you apply my previous mod, add a note on col4 then. uhh i think you mean 00:34:941 -
3. 00:53:798 - to 00:54:369 - If you want to fully represent the pitch relevancy, try this way to rearrange your LNs then: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435593 ok
4. 01:44:798 - Here is the same problem as 00:33:941 - How about trying a different way to rework the patterns? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435599 ^
5. 01:45:655 - Here is the same as 00:34:798 -, and also add a note on col4 for the drum sound. ^
6. 02:27:512 - to 02:28:655 - In this bar you are suddenly raising the difficulty in my opinion because you are using 1/8 patterns for nearly the whole bar. However, for most 1/8 sounds before you are just ignoreing them to catch some easier 1/4 or 1/2 melodic sounds. I think this way should also be applied here. My solution is, 02:27:512 - to 02:28:084 - for the first half of this bar, try to avoid using 1/8 patterns but just catch those 1/2 melodic sounds. The second half you can just keep them as it is now. Here is a way to rearrange them: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435613 change to something else to make it *a bit* harder than your but not as hard as the old one
7. This is a very decent chart. I can't see any big problems inside it.

[Salmon Onigiri "SHD"]

1. 00:25:298 (25298|1,26441|2) - I don't really think there are actually sounds there. You may slow down to check if I am right but I prefer you to delete them sicne there are no sounds for me. o yeah i miss that >w>
2. As what you did in 00:33:798 - , triple note for heavier snare, I do think on these lines with heavier snares: 00:34:512 - 00:34:941 - 00:36:084 - you will still need triple notes. oki
3. I would really prefer you to delete this 00:48:155 (48155|2) - even if there are sounds here because you have been catching a more obvious melody line around these bars with short 1/4 LNs, and here indeed has no such obvious melody sound but only the previous weaker one. With this note your focus here may be broken in my opinion, and what's more, why not giving players a small rest from 1/4 handstreams that continue for many bars? ummm. okii
4. 00:50:084 - Here is another heavier snare you used to make triple note with, so how about moving 00:50:155 (50155|1) - this to col3 and add one on 00:50:084 - in col2? oki
5. 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - I still don't like these notes mixing with all 1/4 LNs. The reasons go with 00:48:155 (48155|2) - this note, and deleting them will definitely make your patterns neater. ^
6. 01:06:441 (66441|1) - The same idea as 00:48:155 (48155|2) - , deleting it for clearer focus. ^
7. 01:13:298 (73298|3,73726|1,74155|1,74441|2,74869|3) - The same idea as 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - ^
8. 01:21:941 - 01:22:084 - Add one more note on each line to keep your pattern of catching drum sounds consistent.I prefer this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435680 woops forgot
9. 01:23:512 (83512|1) - Moving this to col3 will relieve a pressure caused by 01:23:512 (83512|1,83655|1,83726|1) - this 3-note stack. ok
10. 01:32:655 (92655|3) - Moving this to col3 will do the same thing as above 01:23:512 (83512|1) - ok
11. 01:37:941 - to 01:38:369 - I think this way can represent the music better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435697, as 01:38:084 - a triple here for heavier drum really keeps your pattern consistent and the double notes for weaker drums are still necessary for me. ok and also add a note to the last before the LN for the crash
12. 01:42:369 - Here you may also need a triple note for the heavier snare. ok
13. 01:45:369 - 01:45:798 - 01:46:941 - Still need triple notes on these lines for heavy snares. ^
14. 02:05:869 (125869|0,126298|2,126726|2,127012|1,127441|0) - Deleting them as the reasons for 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) -, clearer focus in short. ^
15. 02:17:298 (137298|1) - The same idea as above, deleting for better focus. ^
16. 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) - Still the same idea, deleting for better focus. ^
17. 02:27:798 (147798|2) - I know this LN is for melody, but don't you think that this LN pattern is broken too much? I mean, for a single LN standing here between 1/8, it makes players feel weird at first glance. It is even better to just delete it and leave that inteval empty for some while, which may also give players a short rest for preparation of next wave of 1/8 patterns.
18. 02:35:584 (155584|2) - The same idea as 02:17:298 (137298|1) -, deleting for better focus. ^
19. 02:42:441 (162441|3,163298|1,163584|2,164012|3) - The same idea as 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) -, deleting for better focus. ^
20. Well, you have really decent LN use in this difficulty. I appreciate your effort!

That's all for me. Good luck and hope this mod post help you more or less!

puxtu wrote:

<incoming mod>

-HD-
00:00:084 (84|0) - maybe replace this with LN? cuz it kinda make everything not so boring to play alright owo)b
00:01:226 (1226|1) - this one too and so on also accepted
00:09:226 (9226|0) - why is this a single note while you put a double in NM diff xd didn't notice this - nub mapper here owo
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make this into 1/2 ln because lulz (if you agree, apply to other part too) I considered before but didnt use LN as I was following up with the MX difficulty... it didnt have LN in the same place
00:13:369 (13369|3,13512|0) - I'm sure adding a 1/4 here wouldn't hurt so much for HD player rejected because i tried mapping the melody only for that part
00:18:369 (18369|2) - crash should be doubled right? didnt notice before, added!
00:25:226 (25226|0) - hmm I think the right one(NM) is better here http://puu.sh/xVukO/1984eed27a.jpg taken
00:27:084 - I can clearly hear the roll start here not there 00:27:226 (27226|0) - didnt notice that either =w= applied
00:41:226 (41226|1) - need more impact here alright
01:17:798 (77798|2) - same here, maybe add something add 1st column also accepted
01:34:941 (94941|3) - it shouldn't be different :thinking: http://puu.sh/xVuBL/5c21a79419.jpg changed to be the same
02:01:226 (121226|1) - again with the crash same as above
02:46:941 (166941|0) - I wanna hold something here HAHAHA i was being inconsistent, fixed
--

Eldergleam wrote:

Hello from LucianAWOOOOOOOO Queue

|1|2|3|4|

MX

00:04:941 (4941|2) - move this to col 4 ok
00:08:084 (8084|2) - ^ ok
00:23:941 (23941|1,24012|2,24084|0) - just my opinion, why not make same as 00:21:584 (21584|3,21655|2,21726|1,21798|0) - or 00:19:369 (19369|1,19441|2,19512|3) - cause same sound ok
01:08:084 (68084|3,68155|2,68226|1,68298|0,68369|3,68441|2,68512|1,68584|0) - just my opinion, this section can be change to single note with stairs cause this section i hear 2 instrument here, well up to you mentos it's your map xD would keep it be 1/4 LN stream
01:08:084 (68084|3,68155|2,68226|1,68298|0,68369|3,68441|2,68512|1,68584|0,88655|1,88798|0,88869|1,88941|2,89012|3) - put this LN to 1, and make stairs start from col 4
02:10:084 (130084|3,130155|2,130226|1,130298|0) - same as i mention above 01:08:084 -
02:18:941 (138941|3,139012|2,139084|1,139155|0,139226|3,139298|2,139369|1,139441|0) - ^
02:37:226 (157226|3,157298|2,157369|1,157441|0,157512|3,157584|2,157655|1,157726|0) - ^
02:46:655 (166655|3,166726|2,166798|1,166869|0) - ^

well your map freakin good for 8-bit song, go rank that. thanks xD

Garalulu wrote:

[Unagi Onigiri "UHD"]

1. 00:26:155 (26155|1) - I'm not sure about this has sound actually.
   same issue with above - 00:26:441 (26441|1,26869|2) -
2. 00:28:226 - 00:28:941 - compared with 00:29:369 - 00:29:941 - , they are same sound but length are different so I feel awkward, make same concept.
3. 00:30:655 (30655|2) - delete the rice to make same with 00:30:798 -
4. 00:31:798 - 00:32:084 - resize the 00:31:798 (31798|0,31869|1) - to 1/4 LN cause they are same length with 00:31:941 (31941|3,32012|2) - and add one note at 00:31:941 - for drum is more reasonable tho
5. 00:35:226 (35226|0) - stretch this to 00:35:941 - to retain same concept with 00:34:798 (34798|3,35369|2) - 00:34:226 (34226|2,34941|0) -
6. 00:57:012 (57012|3,57226|3) - delete this rice and stretch ln to 00:57:226 - so make same concept with 00:57:226 (57226|0,57369|1,57512|2) - 00:57:655 (57655|3,57798|2,57941|1) -
7. 01:04:084 (64084|1) - compared with 00:45:798 (45798|1) - , it should be rice tho
   and 01:05:226 (65226|2) - 01:06:369 (66369|1) - 01:06:941 (66941|3) - 01:07:512 (67512|1) - many unnecessary 1/4 lns, maybe more those are for the loud xylophone(?) sound.
8. 02:00:512 - you miss one note for melody

I'm sleepy so just quick view

[ Blaze ] wrote:

hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
it depends from you,feel free to reject my mod

column
l1l2l3l4l

plain onigiri "NM"

00:46:369 (46369|2,47084|2) - I choose this link for example,yeah I've look some of
part like this but I think shield pattern on normal diff was not exactly in
time,because maybe for newbie player playing shield pattern is hard imo.

01:59:512 (119512|2) - umm I wonder,are you accidentally putting this LN like this?yeah
different with other LN so you must change that or that pattern will be awkward

02:10:369 (130369|2) - add 1 note for cymbal

tbh I'm not good enough to mod low star rate diff,so just that my mod come from uwu

Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"

01:49:441 (109441|3) - want to add 1 note from this?there is a sound so I think it will
better if you do my suggestion owo i map only main melody there

02:24:941 (144941|3,145226|3,145512|3,145798|3,146084|3,146369|3) - link for example
again.just my suggestion from here,yeah some of part more or less like this,change the
position of the note cause there is a little stacks of note imo

well this diff probably need to be neated a bit again imo cause of little stacks

Ikura Onigiri "SC"

00:18:369 (18369|1) - remove 1 note?putting 4 notes for that part is awkward imo triple there for cymbal

00:27:084 (27084|3,27084|2,27155|1,27155|0,27226|3,27226|2,27298|1,27298|0,27369|2,27369|3,27441|0,27441|1,27512|3,27512|2) -
uhh why did you put double trill like that
since the sound is better??I need your reason or if you didn't have any reason then
rearrange it for sure owo since the sound is like WWCWWWW which i map both with jump

00:50:226 (50226|3) - move to col 3 to avoid stacks change there to something else

01:37:941 (97941|3,97941|2,98012|0,98012|1,98084|2,98084|3,98155|1,98155|0,98226|3,98226|2,98298|1,98298|0,98369|2,98369|3) - same problem ^

nice LN map!

I'm so sorry for little mod since that map is good enough for me
but good luck!

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

chiptune <3

requested NM from my q
1234

SHD

00:25:726 (25726|2) - i feels like didn't here anything here
1/4 background sound stopped at 00:25:655 - and skipped 00:25:726 - then start again at white line, same goes with 00:26:869 (26869|1) - i hear the first one but didnt hear the one at 00:26:869 (26869|1) -

00:28:941 - skipped ln?
the synth didn't stopped there, it just bends the sound so i suggest put another ln on another column and make 00:29:084 (29084|2) - to col 4 for pr

00:34:798 - add one more note
kicks, and consistency

00:39:084 - just a simple suggestion, make 00:39:084 (39084|3,39155|1,39226|3) - 434 trill pattern as its sounds only appear on right headset (or whtv) and make 00:39:512 (39512|2,39584|0,39655|2) - to 121 as its left, same goes to other sound that similar
you know the i dea is when you hear a sound only in right ear, make only your right hand plays it, same goes with left. I found this one interesting since i only found 2 column trill pattern on this part in this diff

01:24:655 - sounds 1/8 to me but nvm, would be bad if its 1/8 snapped yeah 1/8 would be ??:D??

01:29:226 (89226|1,89655|0,90084|3,90369|0) - make them 1/4 ln?
bend sound is just 1/4 long i think

01:31:512 - if you're not against 3 note minijack, you can make this 3 notes minijack 3 minijack is too hard imo, even this minijack is hard enough imo.

01:33:798 - again, 1/8 to me

01:45:655 - kick, as mentioned before

01:49:941 - also mentioned before

01:52:084 - can you make this part exactly the same emphasized as on UHD diff? oki and change UHD diff a bit

can't find much thing tbh, this diff is good already
good luck

AlisceaSparku wrote:

sux that i only have small mod >_>_>_>_>
and i still don't know the format for mod posts

anyway here ya go, col 1/2/3/4

[HD]

1. 00:03:226 (3226|0) - i think its better to put it to col.2 as the lowering of pitch here is very audible. taken
   
2. 00:39:155 (39155|0,39369|0) - I recommend that these notes are in a different column to each other, as they follow a different pitch, unlike 00:39:084 (39084|2,39226|2) - .
3. 00:39:584 (39584|3,39798|3) - ^same suggestion
4. 01:50:012 (110012|0,110226|0) - ^
5. 01:50:441 (110441|3,110655|3) - ^
   edited it to 232 and 323 alternatively for all 4 suggestions, wonder if it's ok now?
   on a side note i really like the point of not putting doubles/triples
   that was for the layering of harder difficulties. glad you thought it was nice

hope it helps D:
too bad im late for ez diff

ExNeko wrote:

Hi

1|2|3|4

[Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"]
00:09:512 (9512|2) - This clap sound inappropriate, I suggest you replace it wat i put it there for the main sound.
00:11:226 (11226|2) - make a LN I want to keep it all rice there to emphasize LN at 00:18:369 - and later
00:15:655 (15655|2,15941|2) - ^ ^
00:45:369 (45369|1,45441|0) - col12, look more neater ok
00:49:655 (49655|0) - make a LN ok
00:54:941 (54941|1) - col1 change the pattern there instead
00:57:369 (57369|0,57369|1) - exchange ok
02:01:226 (121226|0) - add a note for cymbals ok
[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]
00:42:941 (42941|0) - to col2, Because col1 is already full 00:42:369 (42369|0,42512|0,42798|0) - swap 00:43:512 (43512|2,43512|0) - column instead to follow pr
01:01:512 (61512|2,61655|1) - exchange ok
01:04:012 (64012|1,64084|2) - ^Easier to read ok
01:08:084 (68084|0,68084|3,68155|2) - I'm not recommend to use LNs here i use LN here to match the continuous woop sound and burst.
01:12:869 (72869|1,72941|2) - exchange
02:02:655 (122655|2,122726|3) - ^
02:10:084 (130084|3,130119|2,130155|1,130191|0,130226|3,130262|2,130298|1,130334|0) - ??
02:13:798 (133798|2,133941|3) - exchange following pr

nice song
Good luck! Thanks

Lenfried- wrote:

hey this map sucks cause no 6k pls nuke

nm

00:08:084 - should be the same as 00:03:512 - so that the density would be used twice ok
00:09:941 (9941|1,10084|3,11084|1,11226|3) - consider this so 00:12:226 - should look like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589638 ok
00:13:512 (13512|3,13655|1,14512|3,14655|1) - consider this again so 00:15:655 (15655|1,15798|3) - should have the same flow ^
00:16:798 (16798|1,16941|3) - likewise ^
00:17:226 - the trilly sound demends trills to be used so do that here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589650 ok
00:24:941 - do not forget that this is an nm diff so you would actually want to minimize ln release difficulty. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589666 check this. The LNs are indeed overextended but this is an nm diff as such ln usages are actually encouraged so that they wont be too hard to pull off. I'm not quite sure it's allow to do that :thinking: oki kinda fix rn
00:28:655 (28655|3) - 1/2 longer same reasoning
00:32:084 - ^ so yeah just do the same for the rest of the map ok, hope i dont miss some >_>
00:36:512 (36512|0) - extend to 00:38:084 - to decrease dead air oki
00:38:941 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589684 considering how hard the first kiai will turn out to be. You might as well buff this super simple section to something like this tfw you say this but the link is actually not at your 'this' ok
00:48:655 - the disconnect the differentiate the sounds is kinda important to do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589691
00:50:369 - MAJOR SUGGESTION: hold off from the weird lns for now. Just keep the mostly rice nature of the structure this 1/4 LN thing contrasts too much from the previous bit. that also applies to 01:08:655 - . Just catch up with the weird lns on the second kiai. Progresses better imo OWO:
a bit more discussion in RRM and fixed now
01:06:941 - fuk ur copypasta apply the same as previous ^
01:18:941 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589716 dood keep the difficulty ok
01:20:084 - the fact that you dropped the difficulty here despite the intensity of the song not changing is unsettling please buff.
01:24:655 - like previous
01:35:798 (95798|0) - ln-ify cause synth + 1/4 oki
01:36:084 - needs buffing too
01:38:369 - same thing with the lns also since this section is a second repeat you might as well start sneaking in a few doubles. Climax theory dont argue with it.
01:47:369 (107369|0) - same extension as previous
01:49:798 - fuk your copypasta smh smh
01:52:084 - very odd choice of layering. Stick with the lead lns but this time make the releases accurate i still kinda want to keep it to make this part here continuously harder in each diff tho, might fix later, let me think
02:05:798 - to 02:07:798 - buff. youre cutting too much slack with the difficulty
02:05:512 - btw because of climax theory u should add a note here. add 2 ALTERNATIVELY, YOU CAN START DOING THIS STARTING IN THE SECOND HALF OF THE KIAI THAT IS 02:28:655 - umm k taking the first solution
02:09:655 (129655|0) - extend by 1/1 to cover the 1/4 drums ok
02:14:655 - add 2 like the second suggestion above ^
02:15:798 - add 3 ^
02:16:941 - add 4 ^
02:17:512 - add 2 ^
02:18:798 - double up the lns cause you can add a similar ln at 1 ok

too much copypasta apply what is done in the first half of the kiai to the second half

02:47:226 - add a 1/1 pedal at col 1
02:48:084 - this is how you end a map http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9589747

uggh too lazy to reply "ok" to every mod there but well basically i accept all >_>
god i never expected modding nm this long ill do the other diffs soon (tm) owo i'm waiting for more nuke owo

chouyaa wrote:

NM request as requested in Modding Qu'eue'

NM

00:28:655 (28655|3) - extend to 00:29:084 - ? the sound is getting slow from 00:28:941 - already fix in len's mod

01:39:512 (99512|3) - extend to 01:39:941 - same reason as above ^


so here im actually felt bored to hear the song after mod the MX one lol

MX

00:15:655 (15655|2,15798|1,15941|2) - replace them to LNs? since its different melodies and has long pitch I want to keep it all rice there to emphasize LN at 00:18:369 - and later
00:19:226 (19226|0) - replace to LN? the same sound as 00:19:084 (19084|3) - i map LN there for the kinda-heavy-chordy(?) back sound there

00:23:798 (23798|2) - ^ ^

00:25:512 - should be 1 note only for consistency, u didnt map 2 notes for those snare sound since beginning ok

00:26:084 - ^ ok

00:47:369 (47369|0,47584|0) - i dont think its a good idea to put them stacks, check > 00:46:226 (46226|1,46441|2) - 00:45:084 (45084|1,45298|2) -
00:47:512 - suggestion > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9590473 changed

00:48:441 (48441|3,48512|2,48584|1) - move them one column to left? more balance imo ok

00:54:941 (54941|1) - move to col 1 for hand balance changed already

00:58:369 (58369|1) - move to col 1? its obviously has a huge difference pitch with 00:58:369 (58369|1) - the pitch here is getting loud
also check > 00:58:084 (58084|1,58369|1,58655|1,58798|1) - ok

01:01:512 (61512|2,61798|3) - i prefer to put them at the same column, its slightly different, i heard its pretty different imo

01:28:655 (88655|1,88869|1) - move to another column? to avoid 01:28:655 (88655|1,88869|1) - ok

01:39:798 - put a LN? i heard a sound here ok

02:01:655 (121655|1,121941|1) - better if u separate them ok

02:05:084 (125084|3,125298|3) - ^ ok

02:30:655 (150655|2,150941|3) - arrange in the same column, same as the one above same as above

02:33:012 - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9590512 ok
similar with 02:34:155 -

Goodluck <3 thanks owo)b

Mage wrote:

Yo

Modsu

[UHD]
00:08:084 (8084|3) - move to another column because sound isn't same as 00:06:941 (6941|3) move the first one instead
00:22:512 - repatern notes here, so it doesn't look like previous same one (00:13:369 - ) ok
00:34:084 - looks like it should be triple I cant hear any cymbal/clap there tho
00:38:941 - woah, looks too brutal for this part, maybe smth like https://puu.sh/yqGqa/194b287ed6.png It's fine for me tbh, and i use LN here for woops sound and make it inverse since it is suppose to be dense part. (and to make map Ln-y)
01:05:226 (65226|2) - what is this 1/4 LN for? Make simple note the sharp bell sound
01:06:369 (66369|1,66941|3) - same ^
01:08:084 - damn, why noodles, make 1/8 burst! https://puu.sh/yqGKo/9296305667.png - beautiful, isn't it?
01:10:941 - double for kick woops
01:13:226 (73226|2) - make simple note ^
01:16:941 (76941|1) - i guess it should be 1/4 LN for the same sound as 01:16:655 (76655|3,76798|0,77084|3) ok
01:29:941 - it should be double instead of 01:29:655 double here is for synth
01:31:512 - instead of 01:30:798 - ^ ^
01:38:941 - here should be 1/2 LN as you did before (00:28:084 - ) ok
01:39:798 - also here should be the same thing as 00:28:941
btw, these two part looks like Ctrl+C Ctrl+V, can you do Ctrl+H at least xd its the exact sound tho xd
02:18:941 - make burst OwO
02:37:226 - OwO
02:46:084 - make 1/4 LN

[SHD]
01:07:512 - Ehh, just make here 12 34 chord trill uhhh o--ok gonna do that first and lets see how it go
01:15:512 - looks the same as 00:57:226 - make mirror please ok
02:08:084 - 02:44:655 - are you serious ok
01:37:941 - chord trill keep to emphasize 01:38:084 - and 01:38:369 -

[SC]
00:00:084 - 00:01:226 - 00:02:369 - would be nice if these chords will stay at same columns the chord are different because i change the column for doing 123 pattern
00:06:941 - double I only do double for lead sounds and/or clap , also double there make it a bit too dense imo
01:09:226 - 01:10:369 - 01:11:512 - and etc. - add doubles for kicks ^
01:15:512 - uhh.. it copy of 00:57:226 , make smth difference ok
01:24:655 - use double LNs to highlight this "grrrgrrg" sound https://puu.sh/yqIU9/4202fb6b03.jpg - like this owo nice suggestion owo)b
02:20:798 (140798|2,141012|0) - they should be on same column ok
02:21:941 (141941|1,142155|3) - 02:37:941 (157941|1,158155|2) - 02:39:084 (159084|3,159298|2) - same

[MX]
00:18:512 - 00:19:655 - 00:20:798 - wow you used 3 times in a row the same column for jacks, move some of them It's the same pitch so i put them in same place
00:38:369 - https://puu.sh/yqJl3/22bd8cf685.jpg - feels better ctrl-H your suggestion and edit a bit for pr
01:28:512 (88512|2) - this LN should be extended to 01:28:798 - and then 01:28:655 (88655|1) - remove ok
01:29:584 - 01:30:012 - 01:30:226 - 01:30:298 - 01:30:726 - 01:31:155 - why don't you map here main melody as you did before :thinking: woops
01:47:512 - add note? ok

[NM]
00:26:798 - https://puu.sh/yqL3L/516d4d883b.png - better fits to the music oki
00:28:655 (28655|3) - end this LN 00:28:941 - here those LN I extend them to make them easier
00:32:084 - ugh i don't understand why need you to extend these LNs so much, they ends 00:32:369 -00:32:798 - 00:33:226 - 00:33:655 - and etc. here, and don't even say that it will be too hard for newbies, it will not be owo I'm pretty sure im used to LN releeasing when like i can do 3.5* so i think it would be too hard here.
00:47:512 (47512|2) - move this LN to another column to avoid repeat with 00:46:369 ok
00:51:512 - ehh why you need to make everything harder, https://puu.sh/yqLji/5e69765929.jpg - make this and in another same places the same (00:52:655 - 00:53:798 - and etc.)
01:24:655 (84655|1) - end this LN 01:24:941 - here (and do same with other same LNs)
01:34:084 - 01:34:512 - end LNs and start new 1/2 LNs
01:39:798 - end LN here
01:43:226 - you know what to do owo
01:43:226 - https://puu.sh/yqLxb/f02760d4be.png - much better fixed

Really good map! Last diff is so fun to play owo. Good luck!

Mage wrote:

Yo

[HD]
00:03:512 (3512|0) - move to column 4, because different sounds fixed along with some column adjustments to make pattern more comfy for its difficulty.
00:11:655 - 00:12:798 - 00:13:941 - 00:15:084 - why did you mapped jacks on the same column 4 times in a row, move the second pair (00:13:941 - ) on another column oof, fixed
00:18:512 - same here with 4th column, why did you do this xd fixed as well, along with some column changes to fit the difficulty. Also applied this to other similar jacks in the map
00:50:369 - new part starts, make double ok
00:59:512 - same here added
01:08:655 - same also applied
01:33:798 - https://puu.sh/yqKJB/a9af5217cb.png im a bit uncertain about this as i mapped the LNs according to MX. I'm trying out your suggestion to see how it goes first, thanks for the suggestion
01:36:798 - bg sound interrupt, 01:36:512 (96512|0) - end this LN here unsure for same reason^ but I'll apply it for now
01:37:226 (97226|1) - extend to 01:37:655 - Missed that out whoops =w=. Fixed!
01:52:084 - damn it's so confusing. Please map in this part main melody I thought it was pretty inconsistent too since i was mostly mapping the melody throughout the diff. Remapped with consideration for column bias and PR
02:10:369 - 02:19:512 - 02:28:655 - 02:37:798 - doubles Added too

Lenfried- wrote:

Another round of McNukes™ brought in by the glorious Ancapistan Police. This is a special delivery for poly do i need to pay for it? ow o

Large Value Meal McNuke™ for poly

ACTUAL COMPLAINT:
HOLY SHIT THAT DENSITY GRAPH IS SPIKES LITTERED EVERYWHERE YOU NEED TO EVEN THAT OUT. Main problem that causes this is how you treat ln sections. They lack an awuful lot of rice bits. Like 00:41:226 - to 00:45:084 - is just totally barren of rice. https://puu.sh/ysCtV/531fea2048.png The best thing to do is to throw in a single every 2/1 ie when a sound like 00:43:226 - takes place ... i actually did think that part was boring af because of the LN usage :/ Guess i'll have to even that out

00:08:655 (8655|3,8798|2,8941|1,9084|2,9226|3) - seeing this after the intro having no more than 3 creating a stair pattern is weird (im terrible at explaining this use this as an example: 00:01:655 (1655|1,1798|2,1941|3) - ) not to mention the amount of weight this bit has consider 00:08:655 (8655|3,8798|2,9084|2,9226|3,9369|2,9512|2) - didnt notice that, but now that you point it out it's awkward af. Fixed
00:11:512 (11512|0,11655|1,11798|1,11941|0,12084|1) - partially ass despite pr and w/e so 00:11:655 (11655|1,11798|1) - shift to the right. If you wanted to be very technical you shouldve taken a higher difficulty spot :paras: just so happens i didnt notice that D: noted
00:15:941 (15941|1,16084|0,16226|1,16369|2,16512|3) - knowing what you have been going for is this sensible in terms of PR? If no, change this around to some degree of PR-ness idk this looks so weird O O F fixed
00:16:655 (16655|0,16869|1,16941|2,17084|1,17226|0,17369|1,17512|2) - this implicit S-motion concerns me a bit mostly because of how it flows. So consider https://puu.sh/ysBF8/4d1c809a55.png taken
00:18:369 - to 00:20:369 - https://puu.sh/ysBMx/3693179dc2.png transitions better and get to repeat the positioning of the 1/2 jack mm ok
00:20:655 (20655|3) - why not use col 1, low pitch(?) rearranged some notes for that
00:21:369 (21369|3,21512|2,21584|3,21798|2,21941|3) - this is pretty awful so make the stream a 23412 alright
00:24:226 (24226|0,24369|0,24655|1) - swap col cause 1/2 jack area repetition applied
00:25:226 - this is exactly the same as NM and has no indications at all of difficulty increase. Throw in a couple of rice notes thx considering how hard this chart actually is. Dont do that here 00:29:369 - tho mapped a few singles according to the drums, that shd suffice?
00:32:084 - strongly suggesting to double the lns unsure but I'll take the suggestion for now, see how people think of it
00:33:798 - no more double lns here but go back to rice usage yep
00:49:226 (49226|0,49369|1,49512|2,49655|3) - lead vs 00:49:941 (49941|0,50084|1,50226|2,50369|3) - drums. Needs contrast having the same flow for both entirely unique sounds is eeeeeehhhh changed drums to 2413
00:59:226 - you can sneak in 1/4ths here spoopy. applied
01:07:941 - double up the lns cause yeah mmm
01:18:941 - something minor https://puu.sh/ysCRW/9c6891db05.png helps a lot thanks lenpai

01:20:084 - General complaint. Section suffers the same sickness as NM where the intensity maintains but the difficulty is severely decreased. If anything, this section could actually start using doubles while holding lns considering how hard the MX diff will become. look at this https://puu.sh/ysCY6/1df292b648.png
O O F. After considering this I added some single drums but I'm not sure if its buffed just enough to fit the spread.

01:42:941 - same as previous could use double lns and whatever similar stuff this shares as previous yep
01:52:084 - convert this section to release reliant lns cause you can and is sensible short LNs?
02:00:512 (120512|3,120655|2) - for something to connect like this and have very different sounds is super awkward i mean. You totally ignored the low pitch sound until 02:00:655 (120655|2) - so ignore that note ok, removed that note
02:00:941 - can be a double to serve as a transition point idk tryout but it seems to work out just fine?
02:01:226 - you can have a slightly harder kiai here than previous. Buffing is definitely needed whether you buffed the previous kiai or not. And apply whatever similarities this had with the previous. Alright, think this shd be a bit more fun after buff. If you're still following up on this pls check after update
02:48:226 (168226|3,168369|0) - move to 2 and 3 like in nm yes!

ow o
o wo

going to deport mx next

eyes wrote:

Setup: add tag "featured artist"
01:24:655 - I think it is 1/8 snap, reconsider it

1-9 / S+1-8 columns

Unagi Onigiri "UHD"

Would reduce OD to 7,5 tbh I think OD8 is find imo, it make it a bit challenging to play and harder than SHD.

00:04:084 (4084|3) - would move it to 2 to represent the pitch the pitch rises up here so i think col.4 suits more.
00:08:655 (8655|3) - ^
(consider this in SHD diff too)

00:05:798 (5798|3) - yeah triple LN would be to much, try to extend this to 1/2 LN for consistency ok

00:09:512 (9512|3) - moving it to 2 would fix the hand balance a little bit, actually this start looks too harsh, I've missed here on first try it looks fine for me tbh

00:11:226 (11226|3) - it sounds not so long, would recomment to cut this until 00:11:441 - or even 00:11:405 - to emphasize the "attenuation" effect ok

00:16:155 (16155|2,16298|2,16441|3,16584|3) - starting stream by overwhelming one hand is not really good idea, please try to alternate the loading between hands rearranged

00:19:084 - 00:19:226 - you can try to add secondary LNs for that additionally sound (consider other similar points) ok

00:25:226 - 1/2 LNs are not representing the music properly, would be fine if you use 1/4 LNs for 1/4 sounds and add long LNs for background noises ok fix it and add some jump

00:30:941 (30941|0,31084|1,31084|0,31226|0,31369|0,31798|0,31941|0) - yeah you can try to rearrange for hand balance would keep it ,it doesnt play that bad

00:32:226 - 00:32:655 - 00:33:084 - 00:33:512 - you can try to add +1 note, I think you can make it playable ok

00:36:655 - something like this would be more interesting, how do you think? https://puu.sh/yGjQX/00dd573a37.png would keep for now

00:38:941 - one-hand trill would be more interesting here imo woulp keep this and change the latter pattern to oh trill

00:50:369 - quadr note here for cymbal, this one actually sounds stronger than simple snare 00:50:084 ok

00:54:941 (54941|1) - 00:55:369 (55369|3) - 00:55:798 (55798|0) - 00:56:084 (56084|3) - 00:56:512 (56512|3) - I think these sounds are not emphasized properly, I think you'd not like my suggestions, so try to think one more time how you can represent it by more interesting way than just 1/2 solo LN MARKED

00:56:084 (56084|3,56512|3) - also these should be on different columns for PR ok

01:22:369 - weird choise of LNs length, the sound is kinda glitched and seems cutted (idk) so short LNs would fit more The sound here is actually lots of jack and cutted yeah, but i use inverse here to make it as hard as SHD that use jack

01:36:084 (96084|3,96512|0,96941|2,97226|1,97655|0) - 1/2 LN would be enough and would give more space for stream pattern fixed smth there

01:38:655 - should add 1/2 LN here for consistency with 01:39:798 (99798|0) The pitch change there but not here though

01:41:262 - I think here is pitch change, you could try to add note here it would be weird imo so would keep it

01:41:512 - do you think to map drums as LNs is good idea? Looks inconsistent a little bit fixed

01:46:655 - I think adding note here would be fine and not uncomfortable in compare with 01:47:084 (107084|0,107084|1,107226|2,107226|1,107369|3,107369|2) ok

01:58:655 (118655|2) - move to 2 because pitch differs from previous 01:57:512 (117512|2) rearranged

02:15:226 - by this point try to compare 1st column and others, it looks like 3+1 style, not sure if it's intended wat

02:48:655 - I think this pattern can be more interesting, just example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9762244


Salmon Onigiri "SHD"

I don't think elevated OD is needed, there are some LNs still OD9 plays fine imo

00:09:226 - what is the reason to place all 1/2 jacks on right hand. It would be ok if you place all 1/2 to left hand in the next similar part 00:13:798 - but it is not so rearranged

00:26:369 (26369|0,26726|2) - guess it should be a shield pattern for consistency with 00:25:226 (25226|0,25584|0) - 00:26:084 (26084|2,26298|2) - 00:26:798 (26798|3,27155|3) (not sure, try to make it look more logical) rearranged

00:33:369 (33369|2,33798|2,33941|2) - uncomfortable thing, you can avoid it rearranged

00:45:226 - 00:46:369 - 00:47:512 - I think these patterns lacks hand balance, try to compare 12 and 34 columns (first one is not that bad, but can be improved too)

00:38:369 - 01:49:226 - I think you need to swap these, first one looks more interesting fixed

02:05:798 - overloading right hand when left hand feels empty, try to rearrange it rearranged

02:21:655 - 1st column is empty, shift some note to 1 rearranged

02:28:655 - this part of song repeats 3rd time already, you might consider to change the style. Try out to add some extra LNs maybe ok add some


Ikura Onigiri "SC"

00:27:084 (27084|3,27084|2,27155|0,27155|1) - making these single notes would be more suitable (imo) and interesting pattern

00:31:798 (31798|1,31869|3,31941|2,31941|0,32012|1,32084|3,32084|2) - emphasize this sound more change some to LN

00:57:226 (57226|2,57226|3,57369|1,57369|0,57655|0,57655|3,57798|2,57798|1,58084|1,58084|2,58226|3,58226|0) - these are more impressive and audible than 00:58:512 (58512|3,58512|2,58655|1,58655|2,58798|1,58798|0) , reconsider that fact you made toms very easy and making bass harder than it should be

00:58:941 - boring choise of patterning (imo), try out this https://puu.sh/yGl8J/3b0ec8515d.png

01:31:869 (91869|1,91941|3,92012|1) - looks like random thing, anyway you need to shift this 01:32:655 (92655|1,92798|1) - jack (or better remove) to right hand for hand balance and PR consistency https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9769366

01:33:798 - this pattern looks much easier than previous 01:24:655 , consider to make them same or swap because gradual complication is more interesting It has the overlap LN thing tho, it might take some people feel harder, but yeah add some notes

01:50:655 (110655|3,110798|3) - insonsistent jack woops

02:07:369 (127369|1,127584|1,127941|1,128084|1) - would not recomment to overwhelm so much rearranged

02:14:369 (134369|1,134441|3,134512|1) - this is inconsistent in compare with other similar streams 02:15:512 (135512|3,135584|1,135655|2) - 02:16:655 (136655|3,136726|1,136798|2) fixed

02:26:798 - 02:27:512 - 02:28:369 - very insonsistent to use different styles for same sound within less than within 4 seconds I'd like to both introduce both the 1/8 burst and the LN burst for the higher diff

02:34:084 (154084|1,154155|3,154226|1) - inconsistent in compare with other similar streams (again) rearranged


Umeboshi Onigiri "MX"

00:12:798 (12798|1,12941|1) - should be on another column for PR (differs from 00:11:655 (11655|1,11798|1) ) and hand balance ok

00:22:512 (22512|0,22584|1,22655|2) - broken pattern would look more suitable because of drums, try out 1 4 3 rearranged

00:30:655 - seems too weak pattern, try to make it trill rearranged

00:38:941 - this part looks harder than 00:27:512 - which is more impressive, you might undermap the calm part for difficult consistency It's fine for me

00:42:512 (42512|1,42798|1) - 00:44:798 (44798|1,45084|1) - are different pitches, change columns for PR and hand balance ok
00:47:655 (47655|0,47798|0) - inconsistent jack single+double, in other similar streams you use single+single jacks fixed

also this stream 00:45:226 - has no any 1/2 jack, you can add it for consistency fixed

00:54:941 - 00:55:369 - 00:55:798 - 00:56:084 - 00:56:512 - you can add LNs, these sounds could be emphasized more than just simple notes It would be too dense to add LNs there so would keep

01:11:226 (71226|3,71226|0,71512|0,71512|3) - shouldn't be on the same columns since sounds are different fixed
01:11:155 (71155|2,71584|2,71941|2) - these also are different (PR) so consider to rearrange them ^

01:15:512 - 1st column is too empty, try to shift some notes to 1 ok

01:21:512 - this sound seems to be kinda glitched a little bit, try to CTRL+H these 01:21:512 (81512|2,81584|1) - to represent it and also PR is different from 01:20:798 (80798|2,80869|1) oki

02:00:084 (120084|3,120226|2,120369|0,120512|3) - 1 2 3 4 would be more accurate for PR fixed

02:01:084 (121084|1,121226|1) - not recommended, looks out of place in compare with previous part of difficulty rearranged

02:13:084 (133084|2,133369|2,133655|2) - all three are different pitches, shift some for PR ok

02:45:941 (165941|3,165941|2,166084|2,166084|1,166226|1,166226|0) - this pattern is harder than in SHD https://puu.sh/yGmN7/dd936b4063.png its fine


Plain Onigiri "NM"

00:17:226 (17226|2,17512|2) - I guess there's no actual reason for this, sounds are different and also not comfortable ok fixed

00:17:798 - oh please don't ignore bass wat

00:24:941 (24941|3) - it's better to split it to 2 LNs because there is 1/4 sound and you left it just unmapped. Also for consistency with 00:20:226 (20226|1,20369|3) ok

00:36:512 (36512|1) - better move to another column, pitch differs from 00:35:655 (35655|1) well it's kinda match with 3 rice notes before

00:36:655 - would be nice to add a note here well i only map main melody here.

Also all difficulties end this LN 00:36:512 (36512|1) - at 00:37:226 , why this one is not the same length? the pitch of the sound change at 00:37:226 but it actually stop there, so id keep the length here

00:44:226 (44226|3) - it's better to start pattern from left hand since right hand is already loaded a bit 00:43:226 (43226|3,43512|2,43798|3,43941|2) ok rearranged

00:51:512 (51512|0,51941|1) - you can swap columns for balance ok

00:59:226 - feels empty~ woops~

01:02:798 (62798|1,62941|3,63084|1,63226|3) - would not recommend to use such trill rearranged

01:06:369 (66369|3) - this should be started at 01:06:655 - and add some notes there instead ok

01:07:512 - this deserves a trill more than 01:06:941 (66941|1,67084|2,67226|1,67369|2) rearrange to remove the trill

01:22:369 - 1/1 LNs would be awesome ok

01:52:084 - this part is so calm but 1/2 LNs will make a newbie player tense up because it will hurt their accuracy

02:08:941 (128941|0,129226|0) - would be better if you avoid it ok

02:13:512 (133512|2,133798|2,134084|3,134369|3) - two jacks on right hand in a row, it's unbalanced a bit, try to shift second LN to left hand fixed

02:17:798 (137798|0,138084|0,138369|0) - anchor is not recommended in lowest diff rearrange

02:18:798 (138798|3,138941|0) - this will be definitely hurting accuracy and combo, better not to use any kind of colmpicated LN in lowest diffs, try to map it without LN comlication I thinks the LN here is fine tho, it isn't that complicated.

02:24:512 (144512|1,144798|1) - this can also make random miss rearranged

02:46:941 - well this is the same pattern as in HD diff, make it easier, I guess it can be too hard hmm fix

eyes wrote:

Poly's Konbu Onigiri "HD"

00:16:655 (16655|0,16869|0) - these are different pitches and also inconsistent with 00:17:226 (17226|0,17441|1) Changed it up a bit,
it should make more pr sense now?

00:28:941 - you can add LN here added and applied to the other one at 01:39:798

00:29:084 (29084|3) - actually this LN splits in 00:29:226 Also applied to this and the LN at 01:39:941

01:12:726 (72726|3,72941|3,73155|3,73369|3) - this is anchor and this is unneded, you can avoid this, try to rearrange the pattern Accepted, looks like this now This

01:17:226 - would not recommend to ignore this basses if you mapped other ones properly missed it by accident, oops! applied

00:27:512 - 01:38:369 - this are literally same parts, why don't you map drums in the second one? Looks very unlogical, you can make it the same or making the first one without one, instead of second, because gradual complication is more interesting missed this one out as well, glad you pointed it out.

01:52:084 - 1/4 and 1/2 are the same sounds with the same length, as I understand, you use 1/4 in the end of the every pattern, if yes, then this should be 1/4 too 01:54:798 (114798|1) . Anyway not recommend to use this way, looks inconsistent I used 1/4 to mark the end of every pattern with a shorter hold than 1/2 So I'm taking this suggestion for now, will wait for further mods to check for general consensus

02:00:512 (120512|3) - extending it until 02:00:798 - would fit more makes sense, applied for now

02:05:655 (125655|2,125798|2) - I don't think it is necessary, looks to hard in compare with other part of kiai, I think player will miss it :p Rearranged to avoid anchor.

02:40:726 (160726|1,160941|1) - ow, highly recommended to remove this shield since even doesn't contain 1/4 shields and also it looks out of place moved it a column away to avoid shield hmm