15:37 Smolboi: so if i were to recomend one good habit of mapping that i subscribe to
15:37 Smolboi: it would be set up general spacings before you start mapping, and figure out your rules beforehand
15:37 Smolboi: basically
15:37 Smolboi: look at the map
15:38 Smolboi: and decide how you are going to map everything before you do it
15:38 Smolboi: or at the very least
15:38 Smolboi: set some ground rules
15:38 Gokateigo: that's what I tried to do (a little bit)
15:38 Gokateigo: only with SVs tho
15:38 Smolboi: like, "all these sections are going to be .25 SV higher"
15:38 Smolboi: and
15:39 Smolboi: "i'm, going to use 1x spacing for regular things and 1.5 for lound sounds
15:39 Smolboi: or
15:40 Smolboi: figure out how far apart you want to space objects
15:40 Smolboi: like
15:40 Smolboi: 00:39:953 (3,4,5,6) - 00:41:153 (3,4,5,6) - 00:42:353 (3,4,5,6) - there's big differences between how these are spaced
15:41 Smolboi: even though there's not much of a difference intensity wise
15:41 Smolboi: 00:49:553 (3,4,5,6) - and this is the only time you use this pattern in the whole section
15:42 Smolboi: 00:53:153 (3,4,5,6) - 3 and 5 are closer together than all the other objects
15:42 Smolboi: all these small details add up
15:42 Smolboi: if you can keep all your loose ends tied and keep you map set to some rules
15:42 Gokateigo: 00:53:153 (3,4,5,6) - I stole this from rrtyui's map
15:42 Gokateigo: looked good
15:43 Smolboi: then it comes out looking much cleaner
15:43 Gokateigo: I see
15:43 Smolboi: do you have any spesific questions
15:43 Gokateigo: hm no
15:43 Smolboi: because i won'r be very good at a proper mod here
15:44 Gokateigo: 03:00:203 (3,4) - is this ok
15:44 Gokateigo: I don't know the real limits with kickslider
15:44 Gokateigo: and emphasis
15:44 Smolboi: do you think it represents the intensity properly?
15:44 Smolboi: because this is something you need to learn
15:44 Smolboi: it doesn't matter what other people think
15:45 Gokateigo: looks ok for me but I think A lot of people will disagree
15:45 Smolboi: what matters is if YOU can back up your mapping descisions with a reasonable argument
15:45 Smolboi: if you can explain to a BN why you did something with sound logic
15:45 Smolboi: then it is ok
15:45 Smolboi: all else is irrelevent
15:46 Smolboi: of course, if it's too extreme, you will have trouble finding a BN who agrees with you
15:46 Smolboi: but you will eventually find one that does
15:46 Smolboi: as long as you are confident in your own descisions
15:46 Gokateigo: If it's only a few patterns with a good logic behind them I guess it's ok
15:47 Smolboi: side note
15:47 Smolboi: 01:11:753 (1,2,1) -
15:47 Smolboi: please don't use high SV for calm sections of map
15:47 Smolboi: you are not rrtyui
15:47 Smolboi: you are not hollow wings
15:47 Smolboi: you are better than that
15:48 Smolboi: well not literally
15:48 Gokateigo: the voice is higher here
15:48 Gokateigo: the sv is higher
15:48 Gokateigo: it's the highest sv I used for the vocals
15:49 Smolboi: i say it's too high
15:49 Smolboi: but i see your logic
15:51 *Gokateigo is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1444673 Akira Complex - World Collapse]
15:51 Gokateigo: sounds cool
15:51 Gokateigo: I'll map it
15:51 Smolboi: no more questions?
15:51 Gokateigo: nope
15:52 Smolboi: aight
15:52 Gokateigo: I'll try to apply this for World collapse
15:52 Smolboi: i don't know why i'd bother posting this because kudos is prob gonna get removed but whatever

00:19:403 (2) - The little loop on this slider looks really bad in my opinion.

01:47:753 (1) - ^

02:42:053 (1) - This slider is mapped over a beat.

03:40:178 (4) - The high pitched sound you're following starts here. Maybe move this object a little bit closer to the next stream?

04:00:653 (1,2,3,4) - The stream here has pretty high spacing for such a quiet sound.

04:33:803 (1,2) - This flows pretty awkwardly in my opinion, maybe move (2) a little more to the left and just a tad bit closer to (4)?

04:45:953 (1) - Again I think this has pretty awkward flow. Consider rotating this slider by 15 degrees or so on Selection center.

04:52:253 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe this stream should start to space out the louder the music gets. Right now it feels pretty overmapped.

04:53:453 (1,2,3,4) - ^