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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月21日 at 20:06:07

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Hades: The rise
Tags: metanoia Mirash
BPM: 210
Filesize: 7853kb
Play Time: 04:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 199 notes)
  2. Extra (5.84 stars, 1271 notes)
  3. Hard (3.66 stars, 710 notes)
  4. Hardest (7 stars, 1394 notes)
  5. Insane (4.94 stars, 930 notes)
  6. Intermediate (2.51 stars, 483 notes)
  7. Normal (2.21 stars, 350 notes)


Download: Yousei Teikoku - Hades: The rise
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mirash mapped 46% of the hard diff, the rest of set is by me

tryhard
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Sharnoth Bro
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it reminds me lolcubes lol
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stack
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Yousei <3
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[Hardest]
00:56:374 - this part looks really uncreative and playability of it is really questionable, please consider remapping it (an example over here! https://star.s-ul.eu/7y33fE3G.mp4)
02:03:516 (5,2) - reverse stream note got stacked
02:32:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - it looks very bad visually! i dont know why but it just does!
04:02:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know that trying new stuff is fun and such but this stream does not fit the rest of the map style. I don't know if this is just your way to show the emphasis as 04:06:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here it's the same stream that plays and looks fine (just a few sec later, hard to stay consistent?) but without this weird constantly changing spacing between the notes which does not suit it at all. This is just my personal opinion, do whatever you want with it :)

Overall very lovely map, I really enjoyed playing it! big fan
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emphasis k thx aystar i is gonna check can later owo ook
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I contribute 11.5% shitpost on this thread
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Astar wrote:

[Hardest]
00:56:374 - this part looks really uncreative and playability of it is really questionable, please consider remapping it (an example over here! https://star.s-ul.eu/7y33fE3G.mp4) changed
02:03:516 (5,2) - reverse stream note got stacked reverted to stack leniency 2
02:32:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - it looks very bad visually! i dont know why but it just does! fix
04:02:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know that trying new stuff is fun and such but this stream does not fit the rest of the map style. I don't know if this is just your way to show the emphasis as 04:06:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here it's the same stream that plays and looks fine (just a few sec later, hard to stay consistent?) but without this weird constantly changing spacing between the notes which does not suit it at all. This is just my personal opinion, do whatever you want with it :)but variety is fun owo let's see if someone else would suggest me a better stream here :3

Overall very lovely map, I really enjoyed playing it! big fan


thx very helpful mod >w<
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Hi, Im here because twitter


[Insane]
  1. 00:47:659 (6,7) - Why not add more space between?, It look as you did those stacks to follow the voice, but for me it is a bit strange because previous patters like 00:34:088 (8,9,10,11) - are not stacked. Maybe something like this:
  2. 01:49:945 (12) - That was very difficult to see... It is hidden. Maybe adding manual stacking will solve this.
  3. 02:49:516 - Doing something clickable here will be more comfortable.
  4. 03:03:516 (1) - This stack was... boring ^^U, maybe you could try stacking over 03:04:088 (3) - ?
  5. :)


[Hard]
  1. 00:22:945 (7,8) - I think this spacing is a bit away. You did as in high diffs, but for a Hard diff, idk, I think its better to avoid between "doubles" and keep in the out:

    Or as in 00:36:374 (6,7,8,9) - .
  2. 01:45:445 (10,11) - wow, is not this a bit difficult for this diff?
  3. 02:55:802 (3,4,5) - It is even more difficult to read, imho xD, Maybe try to get some testplays to be sure.
  4. 02:58:659 (1) - It is veeery long, why not split it? (maybe in 03:02:088 - )
  5. 03:49:374 (2,3,4,5) - For sure, this is the more difficult thing in this diff :P, its cool, but idk
  6. 04:12:374 (3,4) - strange overlap?
  7. 8-)


[Intermediate]
  1. Why not name this just Advanced? :P
  2. 00:58:659 (5) - I found this slider boring, so I will suggest this:
  3. 01:15:802 (1,2,3) - This looks very ugly
  4. 03:48:374 (4,1,2) - Similar here.
  5. 04:14:088 (1,2,3) - And here.
  6. 03:51:659 (2) - I wanna suggest this:
  7. 04:16:231 (1,2) - lol, I think this is killer xD
  8. :lol:


[Normal]
  1. 01:00:802 (2,3) - Rhythmically, I feel a Ctrl+G more comfortable.
  2. 01:09:945 (3) - This looks strange, flipping concavity will looks better imo:
  3. 01:45:516 (1,2) - Unique
  4. 02:06:374 (1,2,3,4) - I sincerely, don't like how you did here xD. Why not continue following the voice?... In this order, I wanna suggest something like this:
  5. :roll:


[Easy]
  1. 01:17:516 (5) - I did not expected this note xD
  2. :D

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[Extra]
I tried to play, but I cant pass it with AR9 (In fact, I pass but using AR 9.3 ^^U)... I died many times in 03:02:088 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - xDD


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just some small fries (NM from my q)


general

00:59:802 - could add 1 short kiai bursts. Would help on lower diffs cause players of that level pobably dont 100% the BG


Easy

It looks like there is not much difference in density between the chorus and the verse parts : (
e.g. 00:59:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:36:374 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - are a bit too similar imo
02:08:374 (1,2,3) - the way these are placed is a bit odd.
02:22:088 (1,3) - i would have 02:24:374 (3) - a bti curved like 02:22:088 (1) - cause they look kinda odd when they come after eachother on similar notes. Like https://puu.sh/xHFeP/08fa7874a0.png
02:58:659 (1) - You could move the second/both red node/anchor(s) back a bit so the slider is more balanced
04:16:374 - you coudl start the 1/1 notes here again till 04:18:659 (5) - cause it would fit the structure of the song a bit better i believe.


Normal

00:44:088 (1,2) - move them a tiny bit closer so the follow point disapears : )
00:59:802 - the rythm here is really wierd/confused me playing this. 01:00:088 (1) - this isnt on a vocal note but 01:00:802 (2,3,4) - are on vocals. 00:59:802 - You have a vocal here doe. YOu kinda based the chorus aroudn that so idunno... changing this would be a lot of effort but it does feel awkward to play. (e.g. 03:26:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - this felt oke to play doe but 03:28:659 (1,2,3) - was way to sparce in rythm to really feel noticeable or "good")
01:45:516 (1,2) - you could move both of those down by like a unit so that 01:45:516 (1,3) - and 01:44:802 (4,2) - are similary visually spaced
03:10:088 (1,2) - This is easily misreadable as a 1/2 rythm (misread it on sightread ._ .). It looked like this 01:44:374 (3,4) - .
04:02:659 (1,1) - 04:06:088 (3,3) - Having these two different like that really messes with the rhythimcal perception of that part. i also feel that it makes the climax 04:11:802 - less intese since you increased the rythm density before it kicked in. Would go for the 3/2 sliders personally :/


Intermediate

some of your stacks got a bit wonky.
00:12:802 (3,4) - move this down a bit https://puu.sh/xHGxo/f095309078.png . Cause the way the notes stack on eachother move the first note a bit too high which breaks your visuals.
00:59:802 (1,2) - 01:02:088 (1,2) - i dont quite understand your stacking patterns here. Looking at a later occourance 01:08:945 (1,2) - i think you wanted to perfectly stack so you could do it here aswell 00:59:802 (1,2) -
(how did you get 01:05:231 (3,4) - to auto-stack but 01:08:945 (1,2) - not to stack? ) stacks work in a wierd way...
01:15:802 (1,2,3) - this looks really odd aswell https://puu.sh/xHHJy/981929df46.png. Same for 04:14:088 (1,2,3) -
03:19:231 (1,2) - you could do the same visual gimmick you did 03:16:945 (1,2) - here by having 03:20:374 (2) - with a red anchor instead
04:06:659 (6,1,2,3) - ^woudl be nice if you did this here 04:10:659 (4,5) - aswell. It fellt really cool to hit and i think doing it one more time somewhere in this part would be great : )


Hard

01:00:945 - The pause here is a nice touch but you nevere really exapand or reuse this concept. Since it can mess with reading (cause you do stack all kinds of rhythms) it might be better to avoid it and use a pattern which puts space between the two notes.
02:30:659 (7,8,9) - i think a 1/4 repeat slider would work better on this one. My reason being that the triplet puts emphasis away from 02:30:659 (7) - which this whole "finish" rythm is based on.
02:49:802 (2,3) - move both of these (down and) to the right. The visual spacing in this whole pattern looks a bit wierd to me.
02:58:659 (1) - this is really cool C:
03:28:088 (6,1) - i found this a bit confusing to read https://puu.sh/xHIFB/0ee3db0730.png.

The way you stacked 1/4 triplets and 1/2 triplets was kinda confusing at times 03:28:088 (6,1) - 04:15:231 (1,2,3) - 04:16:231 (1,2,3) - . It might be hard to get right because of the dark colours over dark background/100% dim. i mean 30 brightness on your first combo colour is pretty damn dark https://puu.sh/xHIRC/dcec6fc93b.png (sorry for German, dunno why its german when my osu! is in English) . Tthere was something in the ranking criteria about a minimum and maximum brightness thing for combo colours but i cant seem to find it, sorry :[


Insane

this insane is hella a lot of fun to play!!!
00:38:659 (9,10,11,12) - reducing the intensity of this right here by following the lowering of the pitch of the guitar notes would be a great touch. You did it here 00:36:374 (9,10,11,12) - by followign the heightening of the pitch. As a side note: I think hitting consecutive low spaced notes on a high BPM like this makes this pattern 00:38:088 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - more strenuous than probably intended, so i think lowering the intensity on the last 4 notes would greatly improve how this pattern comes across to the player.
01:18:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:20:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I thinkk these two create a contrast which doesnt really represent the song very well. Both of those together show a progressivly denser song as you transition between the each object but the song doesnt really get this much intenser throughout this section. I think the whole map is very consistent with its difficulty so this stands out quit a bit :S
In contrast 02:22:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is way more balanced
01:47:088 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - you could custom stack these to get something like this https://puu.sh/xHJys/e3e54e7215.png cause atm it looks like this https://puu.sh/xHJuj/9601af3340.png which screams the potential to custom stack it in some way (a bit like 01:47:088 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - from your Extra dif)
02:08:088 (7,7,8,9,10) - you could move the triplet further apart cause it auto stacks a bit too close to the slider
02:48:659 (1,2) - the pasue between these two feels kinda odd since you let the 174 end on the first vocal and you then continue to heavily focus them.
04:20:374 (9) - make this one longer just like you did in your Hard dif :S


Extra

00:33:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shouldnt this decrease in spacing instead? I think if this was reversed it would capture the lowering pitch of the guitar pertty well
01:43:516 (3) - this auto stacks into the slider https://puu.sh/xHJST/f8ecb6bb94.png :((
03:48:802 (2,3,4) - move this dlightly to the right or cutsom stack 03:48:802 (2,3,4) - like this https://puu.sh/xHK22/47419a4708.png so that the followpoints are perpendicular to the x-axis
04:00:088 (5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this felt kinda wierd to play because you got from a 2-stack to two 3-stacks. This is well readable and all but you could move 04:00:945 (2,3,2,3) - slightly away so that you have movement between 04:00:802 (1,2) - and 04:01:231 (1,2) - making it similar to 04:00:088 (5,1) - . The spacing is crucial here so something minimal (no-follow-point spacing) would be optimal, like https://puu.sh/xHKdM/98432dd688.png (just to get the idea across)
04:20:945 - same with Insane/Hard


Hardest (diff name is kinda lame :c )

i couldnt really play this but it look really cool in the editor.
01:42:088 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - this looks cool af
04:20:945 - same with extra


I thoroughly enjoyed my time with this map C:
wish you the best!*
posted
lolcubes preview point is better tbh

combo colors of higher diffs look way nicer than low diffs, would be cute if you used them for the whole set

do you have a source for metadata? seems weird that rise is not capitalized

anime
hp8 might be a bit much for this, 7 is enough imo
00:09:516 - making start of new part/measure not clickable is so tilt. doing https://lasse.s-ul.eu/iKqivE8k.jpg would just be so much nicer :c
03:52:374 (1,2) - normal w sound really out of place here since you never used them in similar parts
04:14:659 (1,2,3,4) - don't really get why you suddenly use a 4 note pattern when song doesn't change and it's 1-2 spam
04:19:802 (1,2,3) - even with your other spacing this seemed kinda overdone, sure the part is ending but the song is so consistent that I think lowering this a bit would fit better. maybe around 3.8ds https://lasse.s-ul.eu/2DcsrjNJ.jpg

some of these apply to lower diffs too, won't mention them again


extra
03:11:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - needs some hitsounding, or just map it like top diff this seems like such a pointless overmap with how clear the 1/2s are


insane
02:54:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - seems really out of place difficulty wise
03:00:088 (2) - 03:01:231 (2) - might count as hidden reverse
03:15:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - yea this is definitely too much and kinda fucks up the whole spread to suddenly have a 16 note stream


hard
02:23:802 (1) - not bezier
03:28:088 (6,1) - so ruined by autostack ;/
03:43:802 (4,5) -03:46:374 (4,1) - looks needlessly complicated to read suddenly, can you to a manual stack or overlap?


intermediate
01:02:088 (1,2) - 01:08:945 (1,2) - 01:21:516 (3,4) - etc. these perfect 1/2 stacks are a bit lol for such a low diff. what you did on 00:59:802 (1,2) - was nicer
there are more of these later into the map
01:16:231 (2,3) - 03:48:802 (1,2) - 04:14:516 (2,3) - autostacking makes thesereally confusing to read for newer players https://lasse.s-ul.eu/SnPmBiDG.jpg


normal
01:48:659 (2) - spacing is noticeably off which looks gross with such low ds

easy looks fine
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yea let me know when set is ready
posted
fixed things, thanks
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posted

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi, Im here because twitter


[Insane]
  1. 00:47:659 (6,7) - Why not add more space between?, It look as you did those stacks to follow the voice, but for me it is a bit strange because previous patters like 00:34:088 (8,9,10,11) - are not stacked. Maybe something like this: different part D:
  2. 01:49:945 (12) - That was very difficult to see... It is hidden. Maybe adding manual stacking will solve this. changed
  3. 02:49:516 - Doing something clickable here will be more comfortable. i wanted the pause
  4. 03:03:516 (1) - This stack was... boring ^^U, maybe you could try stacking over 03:04:088 (3) - ? fine because after the spinner
  5. :)


[Hard]
  1. 00:22:945 (7,8) - I think this spacing is a bit away. You did as in high diffs, but for a Hard diff, idk, I think its better to avoid between "doubles" and keep in the out: idk mine looks nicer

    Or as in 00:36:374 (6,7,8,9) - .
  2. 8-)


[Intermediate]
  1. Why not name this just Advanced? :Pall hail okorin the lord
  2. 00:58:659 (5) - I found this slider boring, so I will suggest this: the boring slider fits to the circles better
  3. 01:15:802 (1,2,3) - This looks very ugly fixed
  4. 03:48:374 (4,1,2) - Similar here.
  5. 04:14:088 (1,2,3) - And here. fixed both
  6. 03:51:659 (2) - I wanna suggest this: uh this is fine?
  7. 04:16:231 (1,2) - lol, I think this is killer xD what
  8. :lol:


[Normal]
  1. 01:00:802 (2,3) - Rhythmically, I feel a Ctrl+G more comfortable. 01:01:088 (3) - covers the word "kaze" (wind) so mine makes more sense?
  2. 01:09:945 (3) - This looks strange, flipping concavity will looks better imo: it's what i occasionally do.. improved the flow though
  3. 01:45:516 (1,2) - Unique
  4. 02:06:374 (1,2,3,4) - I sincerely, don't like how you did here xD. Why not continue following the voice?... In this order, I wanna suggest something like this: changed
  5. :roll:


[Easy]
  1. 01:17:516 (5) - I did not expected this note xD wot
  2. :D

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[Extra]
I tried to play, but I cant pass it with AR9 (In fact, I pass but using AR 9.3 ^^U)... I died many times in 03:02:088 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - xDD


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:3

Smokeman wrote:

just some small fries (NM from my q)


general

00:59:802 - could add 1 short kiai bursts. Would help on lower diffs cause players of that level pobably dont 100% the BG I've decided to not have any kiai times in my maps for ranked, only kiai flashes in maps for app (ignore too old ones tho)


Easy

It looks like there is not much difference in density between the chorus and the verse parts : ( uhhhh cuz easiest map
e.g. 00:59:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:36:374 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - are a bit too similar imo
02:08:374 (1,2,3) - the way these are placed is a bit odd. changed
02:22:088 (1,3) - i would have 02:24:374 (3) - a bti curved like 02:22:088 (1) - cause they look kinda odd when they come after eachother on similar notes. Like https://puu.sh/xHFeP/08fa7874a0.png looks fine to me
02:58:659 (1) - You could move the second/both red node/anchor(s) back a bit so the slider is more balanced k
04:16:374 - you coudl start the 1/1 notes here again till 04:18:659 (5) - cause it would fit the structure of the song a bit better i believe. sure


Normal

00:44:088 (1,2) - move them a tiny bit closer so the follow point disapears : ) ok
00:59:802 - the rythm here is really wierd/confused me playing this. 01:00:088 (1) - this isnt on a vocal note but 01:00:802 (2,3,4) - are on vocals. 00:59:802 - You have a vocal here doe. YOu kinda based the chorus aroudn that so idunno... changing this would be a lot of effort but it does feel awkward to play. (e.g. 03:26:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - this felt oke to play doe but 03:28:659 (1,2,3) - was way to sparce in rythm to really feel noticeable or "good") seems fine, changing this indeed would take a lot of time and effort but not being lazy ass, kinda hard to fix it up when I don't really see it problem
01:45:516 (1,2) - you could move both of those down by like a unit so that 01:45:516 (1,3) - and 01:44:802 (4,2) - are similary visually spaced mm k
03:10:088 (1,2) - This is easily misreadable as a 1/2 rythm (misread it on sightread ._ .). It looked like this 01:44:374 (3,4) - . idk why this happened, fix
04:02:659 (1,1) - 04:06:088 (3,3) - Having these two different like that really messes with the rhythimcal perception of that part. i also feel that it makes the climax 04:11:802 - less intese since you increased the rythm density before it kicked in. Would go for the 3/2 sliders personally :/ done


Intermediate

some of your stacks got a bit wonky.
00:12:802 (3,4) - move this down a bit https://puu.sh/xHGxo/f095309078.png . Cause the way the notes stack on eachother move the first note a bit too high which breaks your visuals. k
00:59:802 (1,2) - 01:02:088 (1,2) - i dont quite understand your stacking patterns here. Looking at a later occourance 01:08:945 (1,2) - i think you wanted to perfectly stack so you could do it here aswell 00:59:802 (1,2) - fixed
(how did you get 01:05:231 (3,4) - to auto-stack but 01:08:945 (1,2) - not to stack? ) stacks work in a wierd way... lmao this is smh
01:15:802 (1,2,3) - this looks really odd aswell https://puu.sh/xHHJy/981929df46.png. Same for 04:14:088 (1,2,3) - fix
03:19:231 (1,2) - you could do the same visual gimmick you did 03:16:945 (1,2) - here by having 03:20:374 (2) - with a red anchor instead simplified instead
04:06:659 (6,1,2,3) - ^woudl be nice if you did this here 04:10:659 (4,5) - aswell. It fellt really cool to hit and i think doing it one more time somewhere in this part would be great : ) why not


Hard

01:00:945 - The pause here is a nice touch but you nevere really exapand or reuse this concept. Since it can mess with reading (cause you do stack all kinds of rhythms) it might be better to avoid it and use a pattern which puts space between the two notes. fixed
02:30:659 (7,8,9) - i think a 1/4 repeat slider would work better on this one. My reason being that the triplet puts emphasis away from 02:30:659 (7) - which this whole "finish" rythm is based on.
02:49:802 (2,3) - move both of these (down and) to the right. The visual spacing in this whole pattern looks a bit wierd to me.
02:58:659 (1) - this is really cool C:
03:28:088 (6,1) - i found this a bit confusing to read https://puu.sh/xHIFB/0ee3db0730.png. rest is mirash part

The way you stacked 1/4 triplets and 1/2 triplets was kinda confusing at times 03:28:088 (6,1) - 04:15:231 (1,2,3) - 04:16:231 (1,2,3) - . It might be hard to get right because of the dark colours over dark background/100% dim. i mean 30 brightness on your first combo colour is pretty damn dark https://puu.sh/xHIRC/dcec6fc93b.png (sorry for German, dunno why its german when my osu! is in English) . Tthere was something in the ranking criteria about a minimum and maximum brightness thing for combo colours but i cant seem to find it, sorry :[ mirashmirashmirashmirash


Insane

this insane is hella a lot of fun to play!!! :lol:
00:38:659 (9,10,11,12) - reducing the intensity of this right here by following the lowering of the pitch of the guitar notes would be a great touch. You did it here 00:36:374 (9,10,11,12) - by followign the heightening of the pitch. As a side note: I think hitting consecutive low spaced notes on a high BPM like this makes this pattern 00:38:088 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - more strenuous than probably intended, so i think lowering the intensity on the last 4 notes would greatly improve how this pattern comes across to the player. the idea is cool enough but breaking the consistent spacing pattern is kinda shame also i was intended to express the pitch getting low by how it plays like so
01:18:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:20:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I thinkk these two create a contrast which doesnt really represent the song very well. Both of those together show a progressivly denser song as you transition between the each object but the song doesnt really get this much intenser throughout this section. I think the whole map is very consistent with its difficulty so this stands out quit a bit :S changed i think
In contrast 02:22:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is way more balanced
01:47:088 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - you could custom stack these to get something like this https://puu.sh/xHJys/e3e54e7215.png cause atm it looks like this https://puu.sh/xHJuj/9601af3340.png which screams the potential to custom stack it in some way (a bit like 01:47:088 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - from your Extra dif)shit forgot to remove the triplets to make this part consistent with the first section, i used the custom stack way for 1/2 circles btw
02:08:088 (7,7,8,9,10) - you could move the triplet further apart cause it auto stacks a bit too close to the slider wrong time stamp or i deleted it cant remember
02:48:659 (1,2) - the pasue between these two feels kinda odd since you let the 174 end on the first vocal and you then continue to heavily focus them. think its fine
04:20:374 (9) - make this one longer just like you did in your Hard dif :S thats not me xP fixed in all diffs anyway

Extra

00:33:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shouldnt this decrease in spacing instead? I think if this was reversed it would capture the lowering pitch of the guitar pertty well tbh current one works as well
01:43:516 (3) - this auto stacks into the slider https://puu.sh/xHJST/f8ecb6bb94.png :(( fixed
03:48:802 (2,3,4) - move this dlightly to the right or cutsom stack 03:48:802 (2,3,4) - like this https://puu.sh/xHK22/47419a4708.png so that the followpoints are perpendicular to the x-axis reworked nc here instead
04:00:088 (5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this felt kinda wierd to play because you got from a 2-stack to two 3-stacks. This is well readable and all but you could move 04:00:945 (2,3,2,3) - slightly away so that you have movement between 04:00:802 (1,2) - and 04:01:231 (1,2) - making it similar to 04:00:088 (5,1) - . The spacing is crucial here so something minimal (no-follow-point spacing) would be optimal, like https://puu.sh/xHKdM/98432dd688.png (just to get the idea across) mine feels fine as is
04:20:945 - same with Insane/Hard do ne


Hardest (diff name is kinda lame :c ) godlike diffname tbh

i couldnt really play this but it look really cool in the editor.
01:42:088 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - this looks cool af
04:20:945 - same with extra done


I thoroughly enjoyed my time with this map C:
wish you the best!*

Lasse wrote:

lolcubes preview point is better tbh i think this is good to imply that this map is harder (so preview point is at more intense part in music)

combo colors of higher diffs look way nicer than low diffs, would be cute if you used them for the whole set idk why i used different one there fixed

do you have a source for metadata? seems weird that rise is not capitalized
https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/71UMDsXtgVL._SX522_.jpg
http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACA-5707.html

anime
hp8 might be a bit much for this, 7 is enough imo but 8 fits to be "challenging" map?
00:09:516 - making start of new part/measure not clickable is so tilt. doing https://lasse.s-ul.eu/iKqivE8k.jpg would just be so much nicer :c ikr but after a 1/8 thats with streams in 210 bpm is hard to make it clickable, it requires a lot of reaction time as the diff is ar10
03:52:374 (1,2) - normal w sound really out of place here since you never used them in similar parts fixed
04:14:659 (1,2,3,4) - don't really get why you suddenly use a 4 note pattern when song doesn't change and it's 1-2 spam fixed
04:19:802 (1,2,3) - even with your other spacing this seemed kinda overdone, sure the part is ending but the song is so consistent that I think lowering this a bit would fit better. maybe around 3.8ds https://lasse.s-ul.eu/2DcsrjNJ.jpg done

some of these apply to lower diffs too, won't mention them again


extra
03:11:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - needs some hitsounding, or just map it like top diff this seems like such a pointless overmap with how clear the 1/2s are hitsounded


insane
02:54:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - seems really out of place difficulty wise replaced with the pattern in extra
03:00:088 (2) - 03:01:231 (2) - might count as hidden reverse no longer they are
03:15:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - yea this is definitely too much and kinda fucks up the whole spread to suddenly have a 16 note stream half slider now


hard
02:23:802 (1) - not bezier
03:28:088 (6,1) - so ruined by autostack ;/
03:43:802 (4,5) -03:46:374 (4,1) - looks needlessly complicated to read suddenly, can you to a manual stack or overlap? mirash parts


intermediate
01:02:088 (1,2) - 01:08:945 (1,2) - 01:21:516 (3,4) - etc. these perfect 1/2 stacks are a bit lol for such a low diff. what you did on 00:59:802 (1,2) - was nicer
there are more of these later into the map guess it was fine for this kind of diff but whatever fixed
01:16:231 (2,3) - 03:48:802 (1,2) - 04:14:516 (2,3) - autostacking makes thesereally confusing to read for newer players https://lasse.s-ul.eu/SnPmBiDG.jpg fixed all


normal
01:48:659 (2) - spacing is noticeably off which looks gross with such low ds tried to fix

easy looks fine
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yea let me know when set is ready


thanks all!

for anyone, i had a major change for a jump in the 3rd chorus (more squares ++) btw inconsistent end time looks ok I only just made top 2 diffs without a circle because they're streams feels wrong with an extra circle unlike these sliders thing
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