hey man, saw your reddit post so i came here
check your AI mod and fixed the unsnapped object ends
00:29:454 (3) - I would NC every "group" that is separated by 2/1 in the timeline
00:39:054 (2) - picky, but this isnt a perfect blanket. the end is too little curved and the beginning of the 2nd curve is too curved.
you can make it perfect by trying to make the anchors a "perfect and symmetric" trapazoid
00:40:054 (3) - imo the NC should be on here and not 00:40:254 (1) - cause it sounds like the phrase begins here.
01:06:654 (1,2,3,4) - for your pink groups of two, i think you can make the distance larger to make up for the fact that every two is stacked. else, i think it is not intense enough relatively to the rest of the buildup
01:40:254 (1) - i think you want to make 01:40:254 (1,2) - ease into the stream, but i think this repeated slider would be better split into two close 1/4 sliders (so that the vocals are clicked)
01:49:954 (2) - i dont think this is on purpose (unsnapped)
01:55:454 (1) - for flow, i think this is better ctrl + G, so that it comes from 01:55:254 (2) - better (also i think it fits better, cause the bass from 01:55:254 (2) - almost slides into this one)
01:55:854 (1,2) - i think you can make larger spacing here for more umph. try placing (2) at roughly (300, 50)
01:56:454 (2) - i think this plays better as just hitcircles as head and tail leading into 01:56:654 (1) - (just like all your other 3 streams like 01:55:654 (2,3,1) - ) i know you want emphasis, but maybe increase DS a bit?
02:09:454 (1) - this feels like a good slow slider to me (then immediately contrast it to 02:09:654 (1) - )
02:22:554 (4) - i dont like this linear jump, i think its better with a tiny bit of curve.
02:33:054 (1,1) - i think SV can be larger for this (make it swing more)
02:35:454 (1,2,3,1) - hmm, i dont like the 1/1 gap. consider filling it
same with the other 1/1 gaps, but especially before the SV changes like 02:42:654 (1) -
02:48:254 (1,2) - for this section, i think you should consider grouping every two with a hitcircle in between
02:51:454 (1) - for 150 bpm, there isnt much stress in doing just stacked triplets for this section (personally i think this shouldnt tone down yet, so dont make it like the very end)
02:59:454 i think this is much better place to start the spinner. just do triplets until then (and make it die down into 1/1 plain circles if you want)
03:33:054 (1) - can you make the last red anchor a bit earlier? i think its late just a bit
03:36:254 (1) - i know the red anchor at the end is for the bass, but i think its better as the vocals right before
03:59:454 (2,3) - i really want you to fill in the beats, cause it sounds like theres a strong pickup in the drums. if you dont want much density, just stack it onto the next slider+repeats
04:04:354 (3,4,5,6) - i dont think this rhythm + pattern fits this part
04:24:254 (1) - these sliders definitely need to be 1/4 longer, otherwise it loses the stressful feeling of holding it out
04:29:054 (1,2) - i know this part is rhythm simplification, but it feels off...
04:55:654 (3) - this should be 1/4 longer for more sustain imo (even tho you want it to be parallel to 04:55:054 (2) - , i think its better this way)
05:02:054 (2,3,1) - abuse slider leniency lots more here. more distance between pls (easy fix is move all of 05:01:054 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - left more)
05:12:254 (1) - you can do something wacky with stacked hitcircle and slider right after if you want to
05:12:254 (1) - also i think that the end should lead into 05:13:054 (1) - using a stream pickup, instead of being this abrupt
05:15:654 (2,3) - i dont like this spacing because it feels too different from how youve placed things earlier (this is too experimental for the rest of what youve done, and it doesnt quite fit either imo)
05:17:454 (1,2,3,4) - i dont like this grouping cause i feel like the emphasis in the music should be on 05:17:654 (3,4) - and not 05:17:554 (2) -
05:19:854 (1,2) - dood this is the perfect place for a 1/4 stream using 1/8 sliders
05:20:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - i like this interpretation, but i think it should start growing at 05:21:054 (9) - (maybe even 05:20:854 (7) - )
05:30:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - keep this DS same as the other times imo (roughly 1.4)
05:34:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would recommend starting a lot larger (around 1.2 maybe) and then decreasing rapidly. otherwise, it feels too different from the previous 1.4 ds streams
overall very fun map, and sweet sb. good luck with this map and your future maps!
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