Hello
Your offset is a little late, change the red line number to 889 and you're probably good
00:00:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not perfect symmetry, use the Ctrl + H function. If it helps draw a slider and use the Ctrl + F function to make note spacing easier
00:02:658 (1,2,3,4) - Same as previous. Also, (4) is a significant note so I recommend placing it differently somehow
00:05:305 (1) - Space is closer as the spacing on the timeline is also closer
00:05:658 (2) - Do the same for this
00:06:364 (1) - Not a perfect blanket
Not going to comment on single note placements anymore, but I recommend using the Ctrl + Shift + D geometrical function to help with note placements
00:12:188 (1,2,3,4) - Imo slider velocity should not be this high here
00:23:482 (2,3,4) - Should not be so silent, also try making nicer shapes that don't overlap, or if they do overlap in a nice way
00:27:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not viable
00:29:129 (1,2,3) - Same as ^^
00:33:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Same as ^^
00:44:658 (2) - Problem: Spacing may suggest that it's a 1/2 spacing but it's actually a 1/1 spacing. You can either place it further or stack it to clearly show it
00:45:011 (3) - Same ^
00:46:423 (2,3,4,5) - Same ^^^^^^^
00:51:364 (5,1) - Players can't tell it's a 3/4 spacing if you place it like how you did all the others
00:54:893 (2,3,4) - Players can't tell it's a 1/2 spacing because the previous is 1/1 spacing with roughly the same amount
I think the other sections can have the same advice applied to them