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_Epreus wrote:

00:43:477 (3) - how about turning down the volume at the end of this slider or changing slider to a circle? up to akitoshi, even though I don't believe it's needed, the slider is there to help with reading, making it a circle could confuse people of this skill level

00:58:640 (3,4,1) - I think this three notes doesnt flow well. I think they do.
Thank you!
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nice hitsounds

[expert]
for the beginning parts of this map, i really cant find any gleaming issues. its mostly a matter of preference, and its fine how it is, so i wont bother you with it. nice job <3

00:26:357 (6) - i dont like how the triple moves into this slider, the flow is janky. try rotating it a bit counter-clockwise.
00:16:738 (3,3,1,1) - personally, these types of sliders have nesting issues (like this). consider trying a different method, but its more of a personal thing
00:40:379 (4,5,6,7,8) - this would support your structure better if it was overlapped with a previous slider head/circle
00:43:477 (5,3) - these could overlap without adding a lot of unnecessary difficulty
00:50:162 (1,2) - would look better if this was a blanket
00:59:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this flow feels off, consider change
01:08:749 (2) - overlapped with a slider end instead of some thing like 01:07:444 (3) - , you could use rotation to make it work
01:10:216 (4,5) - these two slider ends are landing on much more important sounds than their heads
01:13:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - flow is rather bad here, too. try to imagine a direction of revolving (ideally based on the previous directions), then use that one direction for the entire jump pattern.
01:17:553 (1,2) - spacing doesnt make much sense here, its a sound where an anti-flow slider with large spacing would fit, but you happened to do the opposite
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very neat map, obviously predominantly focused on that. you should think about circular flow and emphasis through spacing more when you're mapping, especially a song like this which calls for that a lot. gl with ranking
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tell me when i need to change my hitsound samples lo
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you can now remove those hitsounds. Thanks
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awesome hitsound lol


im not good at english sorry xd


Easy
00:48:857 (3) - curve?
01:04:428 (3) - a misteke probabry lol

normal
00:16:249 (1,2,3) - 00:26:683 (1,2,3) - 00:27:988 (4,5,6) - vs 00:17:553 (4,5,6) - pls consistent
00:39:727 - you ignore big drum
00:54:564 (3,4) - too hard for beginner to read.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/b03bb8c9419622c4b9f ... c4d0e7.png
01:14:292 (2,3) - vs 01:16:901 (2,3) - pls consistent

hm... what you didnt unify the stacking of 1/2 rhythm makes it difficult for player who only can play normal diff to read rhythm imo.

Hard
00:34:510 (1,3) - - it could be beneficial to unstack these a little bit for readability like so.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/a0142911bbb2c6a95eb ... 127e69.png
00:43:803 - hitnormal of slierend is noisy to me. 20% better.
01:18:857 - why you dindt change sv? calm part starts from here. sv1.0 doesnt match with calm part imo.

Akitoshi
01:06:955 (1,2,3) - との対比考えて 01:09:564 (1,2,3) - をもうちょい広めにとりたい感あるー (その方が楽しそう)
hitsoundの神様(?)

top
00:28:640 (4,5,6) - you can change like 00:27:988 (1,2,3) - . because you made good patern such as 00:26:683 (1,2,3) -  vs 00:27:336 (4,5,6) -
maybe https://gyazo.com/03c458972ecfead41d3f0f3fab5f9018
00:50:162 (1,2) - more distance please. you have kill flow here, so not good to me. try move 00:50:488 (2) - to 23:181
01:17:471 - sound here! you did mapped 01:14:863 (8) - , there are identical to me!!
good diff

good luck
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Asuka_- wrote:

Akitoshi
01:06:955 (1,2,3) - との対比考えて 01:09:564 (1,2,3) - をもうちょい広めにとりたい感あるー (その方が楽しそう) 広げました
hitsoundの神様(?) やりすぎた()
thank you!

also rip my hitsound z

@kawashiro and friends basically u can remove normal addition on those moans and gay but maybe re-copy the hs is easier lole

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44455
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 2.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Honey Come!! (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Honey Come!! (TV Size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:Kawashiro
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:城下町のダンデライオン
Tags:Castle Town Dandelion Joukamachi no Dandelion Ending Akitoshi LowComboFC [_Space_] tkbaka
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Asuka_- wrote:

awesome hitsound lol

normal
00:16:249 (1,2,3) - 00:26:683 (1,2,3) - 00:27:988 (4,5,6) - vs 00:17:553 (4,5,6) - pls consistent Did this because of spacing issues but it works so lol ok
00:39:727 - you ignore big drum Hopefully the fix is good, I tried not to make it too difficult.
00:54:564 (3,4) - too hard for beginner to read. I originally declined this but the suggestion provided in the image changed my mind. Fixed.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/b03bb8c9419622c4b9f ... c4d0e7.png
01:14:292 (2,3) - vs 01:16:901 (2,3) - pls consistent Meant to have variety, as it's heading up to the final spinner and building intensity.

hm... what you didnt unify the stacking of 1/2 rhythm makes it difficult for player who only can play normal diff to read rhythm imo. I disagree. Most of the map stacks are only 1/2 and when they are 1/1 the note before the stack gets nc'd. The 1/2 "streams" are generally meant to emphasize a part of the song with more clickable objects.

good luck Thanks for the mod.
can someone update the hs for me lol thanks

osu file format v14

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Title:Honey Come!! (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Honey Come!! (TV Size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:Kawashiro
Version:Space's Normal
Source:城下町のダンデライオン
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posted

Ali- wrote:

nice hitsounds

[expert]
for the beginning parts of this map, i really cant find any gleaming issues. its mostly a matter of preference, and its fine how it is, so i wont bother you with it. nice job <3

00:26:357 (6) - i dont like how the triple moves into this slider, the flow is janky. try rotating it a bit counter-clockwise. - "I don't like this"
is the worst reason to suggest something. And I like it.

00:16:738 (3,3,1,1) - personally, these types of sliders have nesting issues (like this). consider trying a different method, but its more of a personal thing - Almost same as above. is there any objective reason to change this?
00:40:379 (4,5,6,7,8) - this would support your structure better if it was overlapped with a previous slider head/circle
00:43:477 (5,3) - these could overlap without adding a lot of unnecessary difficulty - Nah, this gap is too far so it can't be overlapped
00:50:162 (1,2) - would look better if this was a blanket
00:59:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this flow feels off, consider change - Nah, this flow feels good to me
01:08:749 (2) - overlapped with a slider end instead of some thing like 01:07:444 (3) - , you could use rotation to make it work - There is no overlap cuz they have big time gap.
01:10:216 (4,5) - these two slider ends are landing on much more important sounds than their heads
01:13:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - flow is rather bad here, too. try to imagine a direction of revolving (ideally based on the previous directions), then use that one direction for the entire jump pattern. - That seems very subjective things. I like current patterns so i'll keep this
01:17:553 (1,2) - spacing doesnt make much sense here, its a sound where an anti-flow slider with large spacing would fit, but you happened to do the opposite
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very neat map, obviously predominantly focused on that. you should think about circular flow and emphasis through spacing more when you're mapping, especially a song like this which calls for that a lot. gl with ranking

Asuka_- wrote:

top
00:28:640 (4,5,6) - you can change like 00:27:988 (1,2,3) - . because you made good patern such as 00:26:683 (1,2,3) -  vs 00:27:336 (4,5,6) -
maybe https://gyazo.com/03c458972ecfead41d3f0f3fab5f9018 - ur right but i like second things shape :3
00:50:162 (1,2) - more distance please. you have kill flow here, so not good to me. try move 00:50:488 (2) - to 23:181 - Nah, I don't think these are close.
01:17:471 - sound here! you did mapped 01:14:863 (8) - , there are identical to me!!
good diff

good luck
No comment = fixed

Thanks ></
posted
hihi from my (useless) q!

Space Normal
add a circle at 00:34:999 - maybe?
since you stacked 00:45:596 (2,3) - why not stack 00:48:205 (2,3) - for consistency? You stacked it for 00:56:031 (2,3) - and 00:58:640 (2,3) - as well


LCFC Hard
01:18:857 - maybe decrease your SV here cuz it's calmer


Akitoshi's insane
I feel like making 00:09:727 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders might be better than the 3/4 sliders


Hope you found this (useless) mod helpful!

-From some skrub who's bad at mapping
posted
rip best hitsounding 2017
posted

Reynolduh wrote:

hihi from my (useless) q!

Space Normal
add a circle at 00:34:999 - maybe? na, it's fine as is because it is calmer
since you stacked 00:45:596 (2,3) - why not stack 00:48:205 (2,3) - for consistency? You stacked it for 00:56:031 (2,3) - and 00:58:640 (2,3) - as well I did the thing I did at 48 sec to 58 sec section


Hope you found this (useless) mod helpful!

-From some skrub who's bad at mapping
osu file format v14

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update: fixed this 00:34:510 (1,2,3) - pattern asuka mentioned (not with an overlap though, I think that makes it harder, but there is no stack either anymore).

It's quite funny how you guys mention 01:18:857 (1) - this section while it's the exact same as 00:00:597 (1) - . To sum up I'd rather keep sv consistent ;-;

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Reynolduh wrote:

Akitoshi's insane
I feel like making 00:09:727 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders might be better than the 3/4 sliders nah i prefer 3/4 for faster SV + aesthetics, there's no sound on red ticks either so ye
thanks for looking :D
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I really liked the hitsound, congratulations.

00:49:836 - I missed a circle elsewhere also with this 00:52:444 - check the others you may need to place :oops:
you may need to change some place notes ;)
00:39:564 (9) - I recommend you remove this circle because it does not make any sound

Your kiai is what troubled me in this difficulty.
well, let's go :D

00:48:205 (2,3) - these notes that you put do not match the beat gets weird.
Some examples of how you could leave

ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9234587 I rolled a little the slider is not very polished but it's just as an example :)

ex 2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9234623 I put 2 circles in the white tick and a slider in the bigger white tick as it is in the image but you would have to change a lot on the map later on :D

There are a lot of mistakes in this kiai but I will not quit since it would be annoying. :lol:
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Hello, doing this for M4M.


General Feedback
You don't have custom combo colors; you need at least 2 (this is really easy to add but IDK if you're aware of it).


Many of my mods are subjective. If you disagree with my mods, that's fine by me, just do so respectfully please.

Expert
I would bump HP down to 6 just because the CS is low meaning it's harder to be accurate.
00:21:466 (1) - Could continue the stream for up to 5 more circles to match the echo of the song.
00:31:493 (5,1) - I get that you're trying to match the song with spacing but it's still somewhat weird and confusing to play. If you want that surprising addition try making the start of the stream on the other side so players have to do a 180 with their wrist.
00:33:694 (2,3) - Don't think the song warrants that big of a jump.
00:35:162 (3,4) - ...but here, a larger jump seems more logical.
00:42:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe some more dramatic / louder hitsounds here?
00:54:564 (9,1) - I would stack 1 below 9's tail.

Insane
00:20:162 (1,2,3) - Doesn't match the 1/2 beats of the song.
01:10:216 (3) - Odd to play after coming off 2 straight sliders, then going into another straight slider.
Other than this I really don't see any errors. Sure there are a few things that seem weird but for the difficulty it's okay to keep them. Outstanding!

Hard
HP probably works better at 5 instead of 6.
AR doesn't match the slider velocity and is jarring when a player sees lower AR, but then a very fast slider. I would up AR to 8, but not past 8.5.
00:53:260 (2,3) - Regardless of whether there's a beat there I don't think these match the flow of the map that well. Most triples are on ends of measures, so this one contrasts that.
01:03:694 (2,3) - Same as above. Although, since you copied the same pattern between each phrase of the chorus it should be fine.
01:10:705 (5,1) - No triples here? Remember, overmapping IS allowed in order to add flair or keep the rhythm of the map. I would add a triple to mimic the last 2 "choruses".


I don't know much about easy/normal so I won't mod them :P

Rankability: 8.5 / 10 This map is almost perfect. If it got ranked now it would be fine; the mods I did were mostly for stylistic, subjective issues.
It's not higher because you still need to add the combo colors :)


Good luck!
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Swegmec wrote:

Hard
HP probably works better at 5 instead of 6. whoops, changed
AR doesn't match the slider velocity and is jarring when a player sees lower AR, but then a very fast slider. I would up AR to 8, but not past 8.5. set it to 7.8 cause 8 is still too high for me
00:53:260 (2,3) - Regardless of whether there's a beat there I don't think these match the flow of the map that well. Most triples are on ends of measures, so this one contrasts that. I can perfectly hear a triple and I believe there's a fair balance between both triplet usages
01:03:694 (2,3) - Same as above. Although, since you copied the same pattern between each phrase of the chorus it should be fine. ^
01:10:705 (5,1) - No triples here? Remember, overmapping IS allowed in order to add flair or keep the rhythm of the map. I would add a triple to mimic the last 2 "choruses". there is no triple here lol; adding it would be detrimental to the rhythm, it wouldn't help keep it at all
Thank you!

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