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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年6月19日 at 17:58:07

Artist: Ceui
Title: Souai Calendula (TV Size)
Source: 八犬伝-東方八犬異聞-
Tags: hakkenden touhouhakkenibun tv size ed ending 小高光太郎 odaka kotaro abhor Lobelia Pata-Mon
BPM: 134
Filesize: 11585kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.71 stars, 183 notes)
  2. Lobelia's Calendula (4.23 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Normal (1.71 stars, 127 notes)
  4. Pata-Mon's Insane (3.68 stars, 229 notes)


Download: Ceui - Souai Calendula (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane by Pata-Mon
Calendula by Lobelia
metadata:http://www.lantis.jp/release-item/LACM-14114.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fcFmWZEBzNU
Hana ni Natta Shounen no Shinwa is included in this single so they maybe a little related.
victorfernando hitsound help
kanor hitsound help
lobelia awesome bg and video found by this one owo
Pata-Mon awesome diff

bg cut from a r-18 doujinshi's cover
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mk
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from pm req:
[Calendula]
  1. 00:13:782 (1,2,3) - 间距不合理,音乐明显加强了为什么00:13:111 (2,3) - 比00:14:230 (3,1) - 间距还大。随便摆了个意思一下。
  2. 00:20:163 (2,3) - 00:25:088 (4,1) - 1/4clickable jump?不太像是一个4.2星应该有的东西。
  3. 00:36:842 - 空拍比较莫名。
  4. 00:37:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这flow好乱啊,建议这样。
  5. 00:49:155 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g.
    版面很整齐,好看,kiai挺棒的。

[Insane]
  1. 00:12:439 (6,1) - blanket.
  2. 00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:27:439 (2,3) - 00:31:021 (3,4) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 01:07:290 (3,4) - 看过主难度再来打这个in就会感觉单点摆的有点偷懒,这几个叠的逻辑基本都不一样,尤其是00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 更加影响了前后节奏的流畅性。比如00:17:812 (3) - 完全可以移动到x:284 y:187。
  3. 01:06:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - 单独提一下这里,这段01:07:290 (3,4,5) - 的2+1节奏其实并不明显,在kiai段连跳的时候突然一个原地,除非有很强的、有规律的节奏支持,否则最好避免一下。
    感觉次难度比主难度少了好多东西,该体现节奏的地方基本都混过去了,00:56:767 (1,2,3,1) - 这边这样剧烈加强的节奏显然不能再用和00:03:036 (1,2,3,1) - 一样的排列,重复的东西太多缺少变化,可能需要大改一下。

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:260 (4,1) - 挡折返箭头了,unrankable.
  2. 00:21:058 (5,6) - 叠崩了,关edit stack看看。
  3. 01:07:737 (5,6,1,2) - hard这样摆不太好。
  4. 01:13:334 (1) - 这个不对称强迫症死了。
  5. 01:22:289 (7) - 向上摆一点比较好,滑条方向跟着变。

[Normal]

  • 不会摸,看了看没太明显的问题。

主难度和次难度节奏上有不少overmap,我节奏也不太好就不提了,再找人看看吧 :)
GL.
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@Imouto koko,
就是那个关于1/4跳的那种。。只能说这个是表面上看4.2星吧QWQ,所以这个没改
其他都改啦!
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:奏愛カレンデュラ
Artist:Ceui
ArtistUnicode:Ceui
Creator:Sandrew
Version:Calendula
Source:八犬伝-東方八犬異聞-
Tags:abhor Lobelia hakkenden touhouhakkenibun tv size ending 小高光太郎
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posted
:o 才发现主难度是个gd……想当然了。
in摆开一点还是很不错的,加油。
posted
[Normal]
00:19:155 (2) - Try that:


[Insane]
00:44:006 (3, 4, 5, 6) - Why stream?
00:47:588 (4, 5, 6, 7) - ^

[Calendula]
00:15:349 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) - ^
01:03:931 - 01:04:491 - This part of song also has words, so why don't you map them?
posted

Imouto koko wrote:

from pm req:
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:439 (6,1) - blanket.
  2. 00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:27:439 (2,3) - 00:31:021 (3,4) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 01:07:290 (3,4) - 看过主难度再来打这个in就会感觉单点摆的有点偷懒,这几个叠的逻辑基本都不一样,尤其是00:16:693 (3,4) - 00:17:588 (2,3) - 00:31:917 (5,6) - 更加影响了前后节奏的流畅性。比如00:17:812 (3) - 完全可以移动到x:284 y:187。
  3. 01:06:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - 单独提一下这里,这段01:07:290 (3,4,5) - 的2+1节奏其实并不明显,在kiai段连跳的时候突然一个原地,除非有很强的、有规律的节奏支持,否则最好避免一下。
    感觉次难度比主难度少了好多东西,该体现节奏的地方基本都混过去了,00:56:767 (1,2,3,1) - 这边这样剧烈加强的节奏显然不能再用和00:03:036 (1,2,3,1) - 一样的排列,重复的东西太多缺少变化,可能需要大改一下。提到的基本上都做了点改动,重复的地方主要是没梗……

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:260 (4,1) - 挡折返箭头了,unrankable.
  2. 00:21:058 (5,6) - 叠崩了,关edit stack看看。
  3. 01:07:737 (5,6,1,2) - hard这样摆不太好。改起来稍微有点难度……我再问问其他人意见
  4. 01:13:334 (1) - 这个不对称强迫症死了。
  5. 01:22:289 (7) - 向上摆一点比较好,滑条方向跟着变。
    其他都改了

[Normal]

  • 不会摸,看了看没太明显的问题。
[/notice]

主难度和次难度节奏上有不少overmap,我节奏也不太好就不提了,再找人看看吧 :)
GL.
鞋模 :) 现在做insane一个没梗一个放不开 :(

ChuuritsuTv wrote:

[Normal]
00:19:155 (2) - Try that:
fixed
[Insane]
00:44:006 (3, 4, 5, 6) - Why stream?because there are 1/4 here
00:47:588 (4, 5, 6, 7) - ^^
thx for modding :)
posted
Hello! ~ From my queue

00:20:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space-stream? in "Insane" difficulty? Why?
00:22:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is bad
00:26:431 (1) - there's no sound for 1/8 kickslider
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable spacing: 1 -- 2 - 3 -- 4 -1 ~ why?
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is stack here? can you make something like this? ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470339
00:54:528 (7) - new combo maybe?
01:03:484 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow is bad (grammar?)
01:03:484 (1) - nc here
01:09:528 (2,3) - overlap
01:16:913 (2,3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470390


Sandrew's diffs are ok. Good luck with map! :)
posted
From my M4M queue

Calendula

00:05:499 (1,2) - not sure why these are overlapped.
If your going to overlap any in that pattern. I would do 00:05:723 (2,3) - these two so that 00:06:170 (4) - gets more empathise
00:14:454 (1) - Small stuff but, I think that this would look better: https://goo.gl/oyUHp3
00:20:275 (3) - This doesnt need to be a 1/4 slider. Making it a 3/4 slider would be better because your holding the vocal and it empathises 00:20:723 (1) - more
00:26:431 (1) - why is this here lol. Something like this would work better https://goo.gl/GV3cxz because your starting the note of the small drum in the background. And extending it gives more empathise to the next note.
00:28:334 (1) - okay dude. I know this is a mistake but pls fix.
00:38:409 (4,5) - A 1/2 slider would work well here
00:40:200 (1) - minor slider aesthetics
00:52:066 (1,2) - spacing is pretty low here
00:54:081 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not sure why these are triples. There is no sound on the middle tick
This flow from 7 to 1 is pretty harsh. Using something like this could look and play better https://goo.gl/dCW8yN
01:11:208 (3) - Remove this and 01:11:431 (5) - The 1/4 should start here 01:11:543 (6) -

Insane

First off. Calling this an insane is rather odd. The ranking criteria says you should have a 3.75-5.25 to be insane. Maybe light insane would be better?
00:06:618 (5,1) - Vocals are the most prominent sound here. So mapping them actively would be preferable.
00:15:573 (6,1) - Moving 1 even further away would give more empathise.
00:20:275 - I would make this a 1/2 slider. There is no noise on 00:20:275 - but if you still want to map this sound 00:20:275 - then using a 1/2 slider would do just that
00:21:394 - 00:21:394 - making both these circles would be better.
GL with the map!
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ChuuritsuTv wrote:

[Calendula]
00:15:349 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) - ^
01:03:931 - 01:04:491 - This part of song also has words, so why don't you map them?
i'm not just follow the vocal...

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

Hello! ~ From my queue

00:20:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space-stream? in "Insane" difficulty? Why? 4.2 star not means it's a insane diff and using a space-stream is fit to this part.
00:22:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow is badqwq,i feel it's well
00:26:431 (1) - there's no sound for 1/8 kicksliderin fact,the drums are really soft in this part and there are definetly have many drums so use the 1/8 is fine for me.
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable spacing: 1 -- 2 - 3 -- 4 -1 ~ why? ?
00:30:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is stack here? can you make something like this? ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470339?
00:54:528 (7) - new combo maybe?i think this is no need to NC cause the music what i followed are not over to be honest
01:03:484 (4,5,6,7,8) - the flow is bad (grammar?) fixed!
01:03:484 (1) - nc herei'm not sure but NC in here maybe make people feel a little confused?
01:09:528 (2,3) - overlap ...it's a pattern,i do it on purpose
01:16:913 (2,3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9470390i know why you do like this but 01:17:140 - has a downbeat which is really different from the previous part so i use a small jump here.

thanks for mod~

b00 wrote:

From my M4M queue

Calendula

00:05:499 (1,2) - not sure why these are overlapped.
If your going to overlap any in that pattern. I would do 00:05:723 (2,3) - these two so that 00:06:170 (4) - gets more empathise
00:14:454 (1) - Small stuff but, I think that this would look better: https://goo.gl/oyUHp3i want to gradually increase the distance so the pattern maybe is not nice but i still think it's plays well.Then for the stack,i think there are no issue for me to stack begin on the red line because the stronger voice is obvious on the white line.
00:20:275 (3) - This doesnt need to be a 1/4 slider. Making it a 3/4 slider would be better because your holding the vocal and it empathises 00:20:723 (1) - morefixed,but i changed the rhythm with a new way
00:26:431 (1) - why is this here lol. Something like this would work better https://goo.gl/GV3cxz because your starting the note of the small drum in the background. And extending it gives more empathise to the next note.in fact,the drums are really soft in this part and there are definetly have many drums so use the 1/8 is fine for me.
00:28:334 (1) - okay dude. I know this is a mistake but pls fix.?
00:38:409 (4,5) - A 1/2 slider would work well here?why
00:40:200 (1) - minor slider aesthetics
00:52:066 (1,2) - spacing is pretty low here qwq,i want to gradually increase the distance and i NCed in here so it can be separated from the previous section.
00:54:081 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not sure why these are triples. There is no sound on the middle ticki hear the music to be honest...there are obvious voice on the middle tick
This flow from 7 to 1 is pretty harsh. Using something like this could look and play better https://goo.gl/dCW8yN
01:11:208 (3) - Remove this and 01:11:431 (5) - The 1/4 should start here 01:11:543 (6) -01:11:208 - but i still can hear the drums on this tick...
posted
From PM

Insane

00:56:543 (1,2,3) -这里下vocal音可能太单调了一点,感觉这样下节奏打起来会更舒服一点?(反正前后都用了那么多1/4滑条了)https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476422
01:16:913 (2,1) -をかお、1/4滑条后面接几个跳,打起来太难受了,改成叠在一起的二连怎么样?(假装这里没有变速)https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476445
00:59:006 (6) -这地方既然跟vocal就跟着吧,6 7的ds略大,而且7那个音太小了,建议直接去掉吧(打起来挺舒服的w)
01:04:155 (4,5,6,7) -这间距太imba了

同学叫我打l4d2去了,回头会补上其他三个diff的 :)
posted

AngelSnow wrote:

From PM

Insane

00:56:543 (1,2,3) -这里下vocal音可能太单调了一点,感觉这样下节奏打起来会更舒服一点?(反正前后都用了那么多1/4滑条了)fixedhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476422
01:16:913 (2,1) -をかお、1/4滑条后面接几个跳,打起来太难受了,改成叠在一起的二连怎么样?(假装这里没有变速)https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9476445改成二连容易acc杀手
00:59:006 (6) -这地方既然跟vocal就跟着吧,6 7的ds略大,而且7那个音太小了,建议直接去掉吧(打起来挺舒服的w)改了67的ds,确实和后面的一处排列比起来打了一点
01:04:155 (4,5,6,7) -这间距太imba了fixed

同学叫我打l4d2去了,回头会补上其他三个diff的 :)
先谢谢摸图 :)

b00 wrote:

From my M4M queue

Insane

First off. Calling this an insane is rather odd. The ranking criteria says you should have a 3.75-5.25 to be insane. Maybe light insane would be better?there are many insane ranked diff with 3.xx star so it's fine
00:06:618 (5,1) - Vocals are the most prominent sound here. So mapping them actively would be preferable. do you mean changing them into circles?imo compared to 00:13:782 (4,5,6) - , a reverse slider here is enough because its slighter than the next
00:15:573 (6,1) - Moving 1 even further away would give more empathise.fine
00:20:275 - I would make this a 1/2 slider. There is no noise on 00:20:275 - but if you still want to map this sound 00:20:275 - then using a 1/2 slider would do just thatthere are noise on 00:20:275
00:21:394 - 00:21:394 - making both these circles would be better.ok, if more people note this I will add circles
GL with the map!
thx for modding, I have mod your map in modv2 :)
posted
o/ m4m from my q
[Normal]
00:06:170 (5) - lift it a bit up for better 'curved' visuals
01:16:512 (1) - remove NC
[Hard]
00:20:275 (3,4) - as for hard this place can be confusing for players, consider placing 4 further
00:21:058 (5) - no sound on blue tick, if so then there's one 00:20:834 - too, so this is whether overmapped or undermapped
00:40:648 (3) - you could give some more visual spacing (like putting this sliders tale up)
00:44:230 (2) - this reversed slider should be moved so it'd start from 00:44:006 - bc I barely hear sound on 00:44:678 -
00:54:752 (3) - as for hard you could map sounds instead
01:12:887 (4) - if you use NCs after 1/1 stacking, then so do here
01:17:140 (1) - you could space this further
[Insane]
00:44:678 (8) - replace this with circle bc it represents different sound than 00:44:454 (7) -
00:54:081 (1,2,3,1,2) - you should match them due to similar sound (I suggest on both 1/4 slider and a circle)
00:53:633 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^ (I suggest on both triples)
01:14:902 (1) - two 1/2 circles imo would be better
01:16:512 (1) - ^ (like stacked or sth)
[Calendula]
00:30:573 (2) - this sound is ok emphasized but 00:31:021 (4) - this one shouldn't be
00:44:454 (6) - imo this spacing is too much
00:54:528 (7) - NC

Great map owo, here's a kudo
GL with rank 8-)
pls mod mine
posted

seselis1 wrote:

o/ m4m from my q
[Normal]
00:06:170 (5) - lift it a bit up for better 'curved' visualsfixed
01:16:512 (1) - remove NC bpm changed here so I add a nc to warn the player
[Hard]
00:20:275 (3,4) - as for hard this place can be confusing for players, consider placing 4 furtherI want a stop feeling here, which is the music presents so keep it, but I will move it further if more people say that
00:21:058 (5) - no sound on blue tick, if so then there's one 00:20:834 - too, so this is whether overmapped or undermappeduse a reverse slider
00:40:648 (3) - you could give some more visual spacing (like putting this sliders tale up)fine
00:44:230 (2) - this reversed slider should be moved so it'd start from 00:44:006 - bc I barely hear sound on 00:44:678 - fix the beats here
00:54:752 (3) - as for hard you could map sounds insteadfor now I don't want to add stars
01:12:887 (4) - if you use NCs after 1/1 stacking, then so do herefixed
01:17:140 (1) - you could space this furtherhere has a bpm changing so spacing is a little sensitive, I'm afraid
[Insane]
00:44:678 (8) - replace this with circle bc it represents different sound than 00:44:454 (7) - fine
00:54:081 (1,2,3,1,2) - you should match them due to similar sound (I suggest on both 1/4 slider and a circle)not understood, I use 1/4 slider and a circle due to the last stronger sound, but well I will ask some people about that
00:53:633 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^ (I suggest on both triples)
01:14:902 (1) - two 1/2 circles imo would be better
01:16:512 (1) - ^ (like stacked or sth)I get it but I want to keep the slider later due to the changing bpm, so the previous pattern will be kept both
Great map owo, here's a kudo
GL with rank 8-)
thx for your mod and kd :) You are so nice
posted
占位 发摸
posted
Hard
00:00:797 (2,3) - 其实要是我的话我不会叠起来 我会这样
https://puu.sh/yjD8r/3f8d9bb9ce.png
不过改不改无所谓
00:07:290 (1,2,3,4) - 挤成一坨了不太好
00:12:887 (1,2,3,4) - 同理
00:17:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这里分不清你想跟什么 可以音效改的金宝一点
00:19:827 (1,2,3,4) - 别叠了
00:48:260 (5,1,2,3) - 略丑
00:50:051 (6) - 这个略迷
01:17:140 - mp3是不是没cut好

懒 就摸一个diff
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243,152,59454,1,2,3:0:0:0:
230,133,59566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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84,30,59902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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317,157,64491,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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posted
From my queue - don't see much issues with the map so i'll just bring up minor stuff and suggestions

  • General

  1. Calendula has no video on
  2. I believe that having 7 od is low on the Insane - bring it up to 7.5
  3. Wide screen support either needs to be on or off (preferably off) because some difficulties is on and some is off
  • Insane

  1. 00:24:305 (4) - the clap here is too loud imo and doesn't match the music much at all - Just using the whistle works better with this note

    - this isn't the only but all in the slow part up - most soft hit clap you use don't work in notes like this 00:30:126 (3) -)
    (Around here this part of the song 00:48:484 (1) - it works just fine)
    - Id point them all out but it be better if you check it out yourself (plus I don't want this mod be too long about hit-sounds lol)
  2. 00:28:334 (4) - the normal whistle may have been a mistake but it doesn't sound right with the music so please remove it
  3. 00:32:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for the most part, I understand the reason behind this but at the same time, I do wish the spacing was lower down some because the jumps are a bit too high for this slow part of the song
  4. 00:59:006 (6) - helps flow a better if you bring the head of the slider down some



GL :)
posted

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

Hard
00:00:797 (2,3) - 其实要是我的话我不会叠起来 我会这样
https://puu.sh/yjD8r/3f8d9bb9ce.png
不过改不改无所谓我柑橘目前的停顿感挺好的,应该也不影响读,以及那啥你知道可以用img代码吗
00:07:290 (1,2,3,4) - 挤成一坨了不太好spacing影响吧……我觉得至少很整齐啊……
00:12:887 (1,2,3,4) - 同理
00:17:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这里分不清你想跟什么 可以音效改的金宝一点跟鼓啊,跟人声容易头轻脚重,我不是淫笑大师改不动orz
00:19:827 (1,2,3,4) - 别叠了改了
00:48:260 (5,1,2,3) - 略丑我觉得海星,你有没有别的推荐
00:50:051 (6) - 这个略迷emm
01:17:140 - mp3是不是没cut好没有办法,官方蜜汁剪辑

懒 就摸一个diff
邪魔

Hailie wrote:

From my queue - don't see much issues with the map so i'll just bring up minor stuff and suggestions

  • General

  1. Calendula has no video on
  2. I believe that having 7 od is low on the Insane - bring it up to 7.5up to 7.3
  3. Wide screen support either needs to be on or off (preferably off) because some difficulties is on and some is off
  • Insane

  1. 00:24:305 (4) - the clap here is too loud imo and doesn't match the music much at all - Just using the whistle works better with this note

    - this isn't the only but all in the slow part up - most soft hit clap you use don't work in notes like this 00:30:126 (3) -)
    (Around here this part of the song 00:48:484 (1) - it works just fine)
    - Id point them all out but it be better if you check it out yourself (plus I don't want this mod be too long about hit-sounds lol)
    thx, I got it
  2. 00:28:334 (4) - the normal whistle may have been a mistake but it doesn't sound right with the music so please remove it
  3. 00:32:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for the most part, I understand the reason behind this but at the same time, I do wish the spacing was lower down some because the jumps are a bit too high for this slow part of the song
  4. 00:59:006 (6) - helps flow a better if you bring the head of the slider down some


others all fixed
GL :)
thx for mod :)
posted
General
  1. 你的难度里在开头结尾两段适当加点whistle跟旋律
  2. 最后转盘加几根绿线渐弱一下,60%转到最后面很吵


Normal
  1. 00:22:961 (5,1,2,3,4) - 虽然说摆得很干净bpm也很低,但作为最低难度最好还是减少这种读图相对比较复杂的节奏。简化起来的话,00:22:961 (5) - 可以用圈,00:24:305 (2,3) - 用一个1/1就可以了,很多人声和鼓都不是必要跟,抓到重点就可以了
  2. 00:48:484 - 漏了finish,高难度同
  3. 00:52:066 - 可以用 https://puu.sh/ynRVz/47e367c54b.png 节奏跟到这个重音,也不影响跟人声
  4. 00:52:961 (3) - 可以长半拍,这里1/2鼓点比较紧凑,节奏也用1/2间隔比较合适
  5. 01:02:588 - 就这个finish压在滑条尾,建议调整节奏
  6. 01:09:976 (5,6) - 同前所说我比较倾向换成一个滑条,不过如果一定要跟牢人声也行吧


Hard
  1. 00:11:991 (3,1) - hard就不要这么拘谨了,人声所有音节可以基本跟到。我建议 https://puu.sh/ynSsX/c4c4c4881e.png,1/1滑条跟长音
  2. 00:54:752 (3) - 2333 https://puu.sh/ynSxC/351683d131.png


Insane
  1. 00:14:902 (2,3) - 直上直下有点别手
  2. 00:16:917 (4,1,2) - 这个往回拐的打起来有点不舒服,可以试试这个顺序https://puu.sh/ynTkQ/85c7b0fc5f.png
  3. 00:32:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 高音往低音感觉间距大到小比较好
  4. 00:44:006 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这是跟的什么啊? 慢段 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9558638 这样简单点就行了吧
  5. 00:59:902 (2,3,4,5,1) - 和 00:59:678 (1) - 包一下比较好看
  6. 01:02:140 (1,2,3) - 前面做一个重复没问题,这里既然要换方向不如跳开一点,这样stack前面的东西就显得比较挤
  7. 01:06:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里flow感觉打起来有点奇怪啊,你这样摆我也不知道怎么改好可以自己琢磨下


Calendula
  1. 00:11:543 - 00:12:439 - clap?
  2. 00:19:603 (6) - finish?
  3. 00:41:320 - 这段用40%不好,比起前面背景反而更加响了,很多hitnormal几乎听不到,建议改60
  4. 00:47:700 (5,6,7,8) - 这什么节奏。。。如果要这么下的话一定要自己音效制造一些其他反馈,虽然梗本身不难打
  5. 00:53:857 (3) - 我感觉这种一般优先finish吧
  6. 00:56:991 - 00:57:215 - 可以whistle
  7. 00:57:775 (2,3) - etc. 这间距就比较尴尬,当单点读有点快,当连打读的话容易断滑条.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9558800 我建议这样或者按你的排版喜好调整一下间距
  8. 01:11:767 - 01:12:439 - 也用softfinish就好



挺干净的set,自己再改改细节觉得ok满意了可以找我泡
我的图: 1 2 随便选一张摸
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