1. Easy (1.09 stars, 38 notes)
2. Normal (1.54 stars, 70 notes)

1. A lot of people play maps with background dim to 100%, so I wouldn't have a really dark combo colour as it can be hard to read.

1. 00:31:950 (2,3) - Somewhat inconsistent aesthetic. I would blanket this because you've used blankets in many other places throughout the map, so I think it would be more consistent. The aesthetic would also be nicer, and it would appear more structured.
2. 00:35:780 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't use this kind of rhythm in an easy. Firstly, beginners will have trouble reading the notes due to how one slider ends on a bliue tick, whilst the other starts on a white tick. Secondly, it is inconsistent with the rest of the map as you have used exclusively 1/1 rhythms up until this point.Therefore, I think just having three 1/1 sliders would be the most appropriate. (timeline)

1. 00:07:057 (2,1) - You could blanket these two for a more consistent structure and aesthetic.
2. 00:25:567 (1,2) - I would make this into repeat slider and then add a circle after, because I don't think the sound at (2) deserves much emphasis in comparison to the main melody. (timeline)

-Faded- wrote:

Hey, m4m from my queue!

[General]

1. A lot of people play maps with background dim to 100%, so I wouldn't have a really dark combo colour as it can be hard to read.

oh I just use this because a concept but it's ok I fixed \o/

[Easy]

1. 00:31:950 (2,3) - Somewhat inconsistent aesthetic. I would blanket this because you've used blankets in many other places throughout the map, so I think it would be more consistent. The aesthetic would also be nicer, and it would appear more structured. I agreed \o/ blanket is good looking // fixed <3
2. 00:35:780 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't use this kind of rhythm in an easy. Firstly, beginners will have trouble reading the notes due to how one slider ends on a bliue tick, whilst the other starts on a white tick. Secondly, it is inconsistent with the rest of the map as you have used exclusively 1/1 rhythms up until this point.Therefore, I think just having three 1/1 sliders would be the most appropriate. (timeline)

ok, for 1/1 in easy I think player probably confuse in rhythms and sound, But I agreed in easy should be 1/1 (it's for beginners lel) And fixed \o/

[Normal]

1. 00:07:057 (2,1) - You could blanket these two for a more consistent structure and aesthetic. I agreed \o/ blanket is good looking but I'm ot sure because distance note // ok and fixed <3
2. 00:25:567 (1,2) - I would make this into repeat slider and then add a circle after, because I don't think the sound at (2) deserves much emphasis in comparison to the main melody. (timeline)

Not agree because it not different after fix and in red line is not stress :3

Nice map, not really too much I can say considering that it's a 40 second EN spread. Good luck ~

timemon wrote:

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[General]
Why is Combo Colour 2 so grim? just use color like the miku's hair in the background picture. Fits way better with red. The combo follow name song "pink or black" // this is my concept

[Easy]
If you're worried about osu guideline on Easy as 1/1 only, that is based on a 180bpm map. Yours is 94bpm, half of that. This means the 1/1 is actually 1/2 in your map. :thinking:// ไทยได้ไหมง่า บางจุดก็ตั้งใจข้ามนะ ถถถ

00:08:972 (4,5) - you can combine this 2 as 1/2 slider with a reverse arrow. the bpm is basically half of what the guideline is.
00:29:397 (4,5) - same^

00:16:312 - you managed to avoid all the important sound on 3 red ticks, move the 00:16:312 (2) - to the red tick and add a reverse arrow or something else

00:34:823 - add a note here
งั้น easy หนูดูก่อนว่าจะมีใครว่าอะไรเยอะไหม แล้วเดี๋ยวจะแก้นะคะ :3

[Normal]
00:06:738 - why is this section empty? it never occurs again the entire map, just map like you do like the other parts

Paloch VeGa wrote:

Isla modding XD
[General and Metadata]

1. Background Image resolution should be 1366x768 pixels, this one is 851 height.
2. I love the chimes and bell hitsound, it makes the song so peaceful

[Easy]

1. 00:16:631 (2,3) - maybe this can land on the 1/2 line since BPM is so slow (maybe you can keep this idea for further use or just ignore it)
2. 00:42:033 - if you want to land the beats like (3,4,5) you may want to add a beat here or else you can skip some 1/2 beats for (3,4,5)

not much to mod here, these are just my ideas, no critical places to mod I think.


[Normal]

1. 00:07:057 (3) - Blanket this slider to 00:07:695(1) awesome!
2. 00:10:248 (1) - Move this a little bit to the right and 00:08:972(3,4) down a bit to maintain flow and modifiy the (2,3) like this https://puu.sh/xpNN4/a7f0f82710.jpg maybe
3. 00:17:589 (5) - NC(maybe) since I think the beats are better off with 2 sliders (than circle+repeat slider) or 4 circles
4. 00:24:610 (4) - would like this one in ctrl+J
5. 00:28:121 (1,2) - and this can look better ctrl+H (1) and ctrl+J (2) respectively
6. 00:34:823 (4,5) - the (4) is strong and can be used as sliderhead while (5) (still strong beat) but I think it can be placed on sliderend with ease
7. 00:38:014 (5) - prefer this beat to be clickable

beautiful song, get this one ranked soon. Cheers!