Peep, M4MThanks for modding Taikocracy
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00:22:775 (93) - Think this could be changed to a d, all the sounds from notes 76-106 are actually the exact same noise, and continuing the ddkkddkk... pattern is more comfortable to play instead of changing it to ddkkddkkdkkkk.. so suddenly.
yeah I see your points in terms of patterning but I think dkkkkkkkkkkkk... can reflect the same pitches and sound effects for 00:22:775 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106) - ,and I also mapped 00:22:775 (93) - this as k as I think dkkkk...can emphasize the sfx too!
00:27:275 - I personally encourage mapping these piano sounds, as these are the only piano notes that you skip, which is kind of off-putting imo.
It's a king of progression as I put notes on 00:49:510 (161,162,163) - and then 01:00:804 (191,192,193,194) - ,which I think putting fewer notes for 00:27:275 - is a kind of proression
01:35:216 (9) - Pitch step downwards leading into note 8, meaning this note could stand as a kat. yeah ok
01:43:510 (44,45) - These notes, along with notes 43 and 46, are decreasing in pitch. k k k d does a poor job of representing that pitch change, and would be better if changed to k k d d OR k d d d. change to k k d d
02:03:451 (130,131,132,133,134,135) - The structure of xxx x x xxx... is broken here, and I don't see any musical support for this change. I highly recommend sticking to the structure xxx x x xxx, but instead to show that buildup, use xxx x x xxxxx. I see your points in terms of structure,but I do think 02:02:922 (127,128,129,130) - as 1/2 k d k d can give a better emphasizing for 02:03:628 (131,132,133,134,135) - ,which these fives notes can act as connection notes for the stream.
You can add a note on 02:03:893 if that makes it sound better to you[/color]
02:47:393 (494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538,539,540,541,542,543) - Lol, so many notes, but I think you started the stream a little bit too early. Refer to the pictures below for more clarification.At 02:46:687 - , I feel that you should kind of echo the 02:46:863 (490,491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502) - scheme before starting the stream, which would look like this:
Then after 02:48:628 (505,506,507,508,509,510,511) - , you can start the stream, which would look like this:
accept and also remap a bit too,suggestions also applied to 02:26:922 - too
03:35:216 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200) - Similar to above, I feel that stream starts too early. I recommend deleting 03:36:010 (169,171) - .ok
05:06:804 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394) - Similar to above again, except this time I recommend deleting 05:07:775 (363) - .ok
05:29:569 (556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571,572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596) - This is the exact same as 02:47:393 - . emm I decide to keep this part as this is final streams of the kiai times,and it's also the most intense part of the song,I think overmap a bit is ok
I think overall a good map, but could use some minor improvements. Feel free to call me back to this map after you receive some more opinions.