Hi!
M4M from my queue ~
Some clarifications:
Good luck~
PLEASE TEACH ME HOW PLAY FULL-ALT !!!!
M4M from my queue ~
Some clarifications:
- k = kat d = don K = big kat D = big don
- It's just suggestions/corrections, don't take it badly. You are free to accept them or not.
- If you accept my suggestions/corrections, apply also in similar parts for consistency
- If you don't accept my suggestions/corrections, clarify why you do not accept them.
[ General ]
- You have an image unused, delete if you don't use it
- Check the gap between Muzukashii and Oni. Sometimes are almost the same patterns, some notes in Muzu don't have Oni and the jump to Oni is bigger.
Let see some examples:~
In this case Oni almost don't have 1/2 patterns.
[ Kantan ]
- 00:19:013 (5) - Change to kat, the pitch is similar to 00:26:178 (11) - and for don't repeat the same pattern than 00:14:536 (1,2,3) -
- 00:40:506 (8) - Maybe you can delete this to follow when start the vocal part of these notes 00:39:610 (7,9) -, fits better imo. Also swap this notes 00:41:402 (9,10) - (Ctrl + g) to fits better with vocal
- 00:48:566 (15) - Change to don, the pitch is low imo
- 01:01:103 (26) - The K is too noisy. I think with D fits better, as in Inner Oni. Also it make counterpart with 01:04:685 (29) - (like 00:18:118 (4,7) - )
Good diff!
[ Futsuu ]
- 00:16:999 (6) - Move to 00:17:446 - to keep consistency in the 1/1 patterns of 00:14:536 (1,2,3,4,7) - . Also fits better with the increase of the song
- 00:18:118 - This is a bit inconsistent with 00:21:700 - , try add don in 00:19:447 - and changing 00:19:909 (12) - to kat
- 00:32:446 (1) - D? in Kantan and high diff that is D by default
- 00:40:058 (14,15,16) - I think the 1/2 fits better if you move to 00:40:506 - , the same with 00:41:849 (18,19,20) -
- 01:01:103 (59) - The same as Kantan, change to D
- 01:03:342 (65,66) - Swap those notes to fit better with the vocal
Almost all is fine, needs a bit more of work
[ Hayate's Muzukashii ]
- 00:04:461 (10,11,12) - That triplet feels too forced to be the beginning of the song, the other diff don't have that. I suggest change it follwing the piano in 1/2 00:04:237 -
- 00:05:581 (14) - The pitch is too hight, make it kat
- 00:07:819 - Add note, is the same than 00:00:655 (2) -, keep the consistency
- 00:18:342 (18) - Delete o move that note. Oni don't have this and the spread between this two diff are inconsistent
- 00:19:461 (22) - Make it kat, the pitch is too high
- 00:19:685 (23) - Remove to a better gap with futsuu in the break
- 00:19:909 (24) - don, the pitch is low in this case
- 01:22:596 (191,192) - Swap the finisher, is too strange the finisher in 01:23:043 (192) - , and the pitch high is in 01:22:596 (191) -
Well... I think the style in this diff is too different to the rest of the mapset (for don't say is bad). I think you need change some parts to keep the consistency with the others diffs
[ Rew's Oni ]
- 00:12:745 (27) - The K is too noisy, I think if you remove the finisher fits better for low pitch
- 00:14:312 - I think some 1/2 patterns are fine to a better gap with Muzukashii. For example you can remove these notes 00:15:543 (37,44) -
- 00:16:327 - The rhytm is stranger here, I think you can repeat the same pattern than 00:14:312 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - but with some notes changed
- 00:29:312 - A lot double feels hard to a Oni, maybe move 00:30:096 (107) - to 00:30:208 - and Ctrl + g (00:29:984 (106,107) - ), feels better with the flow
- 01:06:700 (290,291,292,293,294,295) - Ctrl + G, dkd kdk fits better with the vocal
- 01:27:969 - Seems hard for a Oni, remove some notes to make it more easy
Good diff, but a lot double 1/4 for me
[ Inner Oni ]
That's all for me, great mapset!- 00:03:790 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Maybe is as it, for variation, but really I'm sure it is kddkddk like 00:00:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -. I don't think that is bad if you repeat the pattern again
- 00:19:349 (38) - Move to 00:19:125 - and change to don, follow better with the melody imo
- 01:29:088 (462) - Change to kat for high pitch and add finisher to 01:29:312 (464) - for a explosive finish
Solid diff, maybe I'll back for a another mod to this diff
Good luck~
PLEASE TEACH ME HOW PLAY FULL-ALT !!!!