1. 00:02:389 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - I think tbh this looks odd and needs to be more curve - atleast more neat looking
   - maybe do something like this example ---> http://imgur.com/a/Cbx5P
   
2. 00:41:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this could follow the vocal a better
   For an example turn (2) turn to a slider
   - Remove (3)
   - Here is a jump 00:41:901 - so have a circle here
   - 00:42:084 - another circle
   - Basically above is just a suggestion and hoply you understand it
3. 
   Here is what I like to say here --> I notice a lot of the strong beat is at the slider end - oh course sometimes it can't be help but place like this
   00:00:926 (2,3,4) - the strong sound is on the white tick can easily be fix by changing the order where (4) comes first then (2) (3)
   oh course by changing the order - you would need to rearrange this -
   - This occurs more than once and is your decision to change it
4. 00:28:913 (6,7,8,9,1) - this should just has the same spacing tbh because even if you were trying to increase it gradually because of vocal - right as it is doesn't seem that way
5. 00:45:560 (2,3,4,5) - same tbh - remember you gotta remember this is also just an hard diff so anything like this is confusing for new players at this experience
   
6. Just saying ur kiai can be higher... they usually are in tv size anyways.

DJ Lucky wrote:

From Queue

For 1 - You gonna need a difficulty below 2* - although just reducing ur difficulty on ur Normal difficulty could work
- it might good to consider making a difficulty strictly 1/1 Beat Snap Division to prevent problems in the future

- Another thing if your consider having an extra and insane - you might as well consider having a light insane because ur hard is 2.39* at this moment and this also will have future problems - consider doing that/or increase the difficulty of you hard to possible 3.3* to 3.4* -


Anyways --> Modding only Hard

1. 00:02:389 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - I think tbh this looks odd and needs to be more curve - atleast more neat looking
   - maybe do something like this example ---> http://imgur.com/a/Cbx5P
   
2. 00:41:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this could follow the vocal a better
   For an example turn (2) turn to a slider
   - Remove (3)
   - Here is a jump 00:41:901 - so have a circle here
   - 00:42:084 - another circle
   - Basically above is just a suggestion and hoply you understand it
3. 
   Here is what I like to say here --> I notice a lot of the strong beat is at the slider end - oh course sometimes it can't be help but place like this
   00:00:926 (2,3,4) - the strong sound is on the white tick can easily be fix by changing the order where (4) comes first then (2) (3)
   oh course by changing the order - you would need to rearrange this -
   - This occurs more than once and is your decision to change it
4. 00:28:913 (6,7,8,9,1) - this should just has the same spacing tbh because even if you were trying to increase it gradually because of vocal - right as it is doesn't seem that way
5. 00:45:560 (2,3,4,5) - same tbh - remember you gotta remember this is also just an hard diff so anything like this is confusing for new players at this experience
   
6. Just saying ur kiai can be higher... they usually are in tv size anyways.

- If my mod is confusing forgive me...

Hope I help

• General

1. Retire Enable Countdown dans ton Song Setup

• Normal

1. OD et HP devrait être à 4
2. 00:00:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - à ce moment là le rythme est répétitive donc je te suggère de faire le même pattern en rajoutant un new combo comme ça quoi https://puu.sh/xmNJl/b920046ab7.png
3. 00:04:767 (9) - Ajoute un new combo
4. 00:05:682 (1) - retire le new combo
5. 00:14:279 (6,8) - ils ne sont pas vraiment stack
6. 00:14:645 (7) - New combo
7. 00:17:206 (1) - retire le new combo et ajoute le ici 00:17:938 (3)
8. 00:23:792 (8) - nc
9. 00:24:889 (1) - retire le nc, ajoute le ici à la place 00:25:255 (2)
10. 00:57:084 (1,2,3,4) - ce pattern sonne bizarrement tbh peut-être essaye un truc du genre c'est bcp mieux https://puu.sh/xmOaP/e021567ab8.png
11. 00:59:645 (7,8) - ne stack pas ces notes, sinon ce serait porter à confusion pour les joueurs car il y a un espace vide entre ces 2 notes (c'est le trait rouge le trou)
12. 01:01:657 - le kiai time devrait commencé ici 01:01:840 - et ce finir ici 01:13:548
13. 01:05:499 (8) - pas rankable! ce slider touche la drain bar https://puu.sh/xmOLz/09373d0c37.png

• Hard

1. Pour la Hard je te recommande de mettre CS (Circle Size) à 3.7, AP (Approach Rate) à 8 et OD (Overall Difficulty) à 6.
2. Le diviseur de mesure devrait être à 1/4 imo
3. Utilise comme DS (Distance Snap) x1.40 dans les Hard en général les notes ne se touchent pas sauf quand tu veux les stacks ou les overlaps, c'est pour ça que le mot "hard" pour rendre la difficulté plus difficile, donc évite le contact comme dans les Normal diffs
4. Le rythme est cool dans la hard mais d'abord je préfère que tu fixes les choses que je t'ai dites avant de bien la modder

DJ Lucky wrote:

From Queue

For 1 - You gonna need a difficulty below 2* - although just reducing ur difficulty on ur Normal difficulty could work
- it might good to consider making a difficulty strictly 1/1 Beat Snap Division to prevent problems in the future

- Another thing if your consider having an extra and insane - you might as well consider having a light insane because ur hard is 2.39* at this moment and this also will have future problems - consider doing that/or increase the difficulty of you hard to possible 3.3* to 3.4* -


Anyways --> Modding only Hard

1. 00:02:389 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - I think tbh this looks odd and needs to be more curve - atleast more neat looking
   - maybe do something like this example ---> http://imgur.com/a/Cbx5P
   

   ShogunMoon wrote:

   Heyo!
   
   Un mod juste comme ça~
   
   

   • General

   1. Retire Enable Countdown dans ton Song Setup

   • Normal

   1. OD et HP devrait être à 4
   2. 00:00:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - à ce moment là le rythme est répétitive donc je te suggère de faire le même pattern en rajoutant un new combo comme ça quoi https://puu.sh/xmNJl/b920046ab7.png
   3. 00:04:767 (9) - Ajoute un new combo
   4. 00:05:682 (1) - retire le new combo
   5. 00:14:279 (6,8) - ils ne sont pas vraiment stack
   6. 00:14:645 (7) - New combo
   7. 00:17:206 (1) - retire le new combo et ajoute le ici 00:17:938 (3)
   8. 00:23:792 (8) - nc
   9. 00:24:889 (1) - retire le nc, ajoute le ici à la place 00:25:255 (2)
   10. 00:57:084 (1,2,3,4) - ce pattern sonne bizarrement tbh peut-être essaye un truc du genre c'est bcp mieux https://puu.sh/xmOaP/e021567ab8.png
   11. 00:59:645 (7,8) - ne stack pas ces notes, sinon ce serait porter à confusion pour les joueurs car il y a un espace vide entre ces 2 notes (c'est le trait rouge le trou)
   12. 01:01:657 - le kiai time devrait commencé ici 01:01:840 - et ce finir ici 01:13:548
   13. 01:05:499 (8) - pas rankable! ce slider touche la drain bar https://puu.sh/xmOLz/09373d0c37.png

   • Hard

   1. Pour la Hard je te recommande de mettre CS (Circle Size) à 3.7, AP (Approach Rate) à 8 et OD (Overall Difficulty) à 6.
   2. Le diviseur de mesure devrait être à 1/4 imo
   3. Utilise comme DS (Distance Snap) x1.40 dans les Hard en général les notes ne se touchent pas sauf quand tu veux les stacks ou les overlaps, c'est pour ça que le mot "hard" pour rendre la difficulté plus difficile, donc évite le contact comme dans les Normal diffs
   4. Le rythme est cool dans la hard mais d'abord je préfère que tu fixes les choses que je t'ai dites avant de bien la modder

   Je reviendrai~
   
   gl!~

   x Arow wrote:

   I guess I'll mod normal then.
   
   If you don't consider making easy diff, think about lowering OD.
   
   What is this offset?
   I'm sure kiai time should be longer.
   Disable countdown.
   
   00:03:304 (1) - NC
   00:15:743 (1) - NC
   00:17:206 (1) - Delete NC
   00:18:487 (1) - NC
   00:23:426 (1) - NC
   00:24:889 (4) - Delete NC
   00:26:718 (1) - NC
   00:35:133 (4) - feels weird (placement)
   00:37:328 (9) - NC
   00:37:694 (1) - Delete NC
   00:39:157 (5) - This slider should start on red tick.
   00:44:279 (1) - NC
   00:45:377 (1) - Delete NC
   00:46:840 (1) - NC
   01:00:011 (8) - I don't think it should be stacked like that, it's first time you show 1 beat gap like this, what about stacking it with next slider.
   01:04:035 (1) - NC
   
   This mod is fun, lol...
   Good luck!

2. 00:41:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this could follow the vocal a better
   For an example turn (2) turn to a slider
   - Remove (3)
   - Here is a jump 00:41:901 - so have a circle here
   - 00:42:084 - another circle
   - Basically above is just a suggestion and hoply you understand it
3. 
   Here is what I like to say here --> I notice a lot of the strong beat is at the slider end - oh course sometimes it can't be help but place like this
   00:00:926 (2,3,4) - the strong sound is on the white tick can easily be fix by changing the order where (4) comes first then (2) (3)
   oh course by changing the order - you would need to rearrange this -
   - This occurs more than once and is your decision to change it
4. 00:28:913 (6,7,8,9,1) - this should just has the same spacing tbh because even if you were trying to increase it gradually because of vocal - right as it is doesn't seem that way
5. 00:45:560 (2,3,4,5) - same tbh - remember you gotta remember this is also just an hard diff so anything like this is confusing for new players at this experience
   
6. Just saying ur kiai can be higher... they usually are in tv size anyways.

- If my mod is confusing forgive me...

Hope I help

1. Normally I wouldn't mod a mapset that isn't ready and/or missing a <2* difficulty but everyone can appreciate some feedback.
2. Going to only look at the Hard since you have a Normal mod waiting to be applied.
3. Like others have mentioned, you need a difficulty under 2 stars as stated in the ranking criteria.

1. You should use a slightly higher SV than your Normal.
2. Try not to let combos go above 8.

Botan wrote:

Time Capsule wrote:

At least give proper reason if you not agree at some of my words

normal
there are a lots of rhythm issues start from inconsistency so I give some suggestion to polish it
00:04:767 - i would say its invalid rhythm tho. you give a break at the end of section so the circle is anchoring (which supposed to continue) something that doesnt even exist. due your calm pick as start too 00:06:048 - this point should be clickable, where i suggest this https://gyazo.com/fa24633ac26e86ba0f063302e45b5888 where the tail of (4) lead to upbeat as break time
00:19:035 - another miss emphasis issue. where at this point vocal > instrument. Simply change the 1/4 slider to single note at this point
00:22:328 (4,5) - its flexible tho, but the instrument feel a bit wasted, where supposed to be improved by this https://gyazo.com/f202c5258e187069e73cfc3df1474658
00:24:523 (2,3) - its not only felt boring when it come to stack 1/2 gap circle, it also not really good to look. if you want to stack try something like circle+slider just like you do at 00:23:426 (6,1) -
00:27:633 (6,7) - felt a bit pushed to emphasis something, what something btw? think simple https://gyazo.com/bf2a0912a48cc1a09ff7423a7154c99a yup it also support your consistency for rhythm picking
00:28:913 (10) - change to 1/2 slider followed by circle
00:30:194 - purpose undermap? add circle
00:32:206 - its not that strong imo eventho theres hs suppoert, i would like to use 1/2 slider instead for (5,6)
00:32:572 - this a lot better https://gyazo.com/584446b746417b2da7046c9e906d430f
00:36:596 - and then agin a wasted clutch vocal, i mean it worth to get a sound neother clickable or not, so same as before 00:36:413 (6) - change it to 1/2 slider
00:38:426 - i will just leave this here https://gyazo.com/f61301151bcdbb0108ea5541c1b621a3
00:43:548 - https://gyazo.com/72436b3c186a327b1783feb801bba26b
00:47:206 (3) - and somehow you do the reverse here to emphasis the vocal when the instrument > vocal. where make this 00:47:755 - strong beat wasted
00:50:682 (4,5) - switch rhythm (ctrl+g)
00:55:987 (7) - is this taiko? or maybe you miss that 1/1 slider?
00:57:084 - https://gyazo.com/5b0ac4875a2e73a3a905231163be8e00
01:00:377 (10) - 1/2 reverse slider prefered
01:04:767 (6,7) - you cant hold (stack) a vibrating vocal, ever i could say. if you sat it same like 01:06:962 (1,2) - no its not, this one is separated as 2 natural pronounce vocal, where its ok to stack here
01:12:084 - looking for this? https://gyazo.com/741e6636a7246057501125fc89a502ab
01:16:840 (3) - switch rhythm and do the stack at slider head, and make the slider as 1/1 instead. reason is clear already i guess
01:18:670 (7) - you miss this vocal try this rhythm https://gyazo.com/76e097567aab72a72e33fd4460981ea6
01:22:328 - and if you apply ^ one, move (7) to 01:22:877 - and add circle at the current tail beat
01:24:523 - its not closed really smooth tho. where 01:25:804 - is supposed to be the last clicked note.

hard
i can see the diff improved from the previous version, the rhythm is more flexible on hard and so the pattern choise, evenso i think from pattern side it could even more improve. Just search more refrance or listen some critical part more carefully could help.

Time Capsule wrote:

At least give proper reason if you not agree at some of my words

normal
there are a lots of rhythm issues start from inconsistency so I give some suggestion to polish it
00:04:767 - i would say its invalid rhythm tho. you give a break at the end of section so the circle is anchoring (which supposed to continue) something that doesnt even exist. due your calm pick as start too 00:06:048 - this point should be clickable, where i suggest this https://gyazo.com/fa24633ac26e86ba0f063302e45b5888 where the tail of (4) lead to upbeat as break time
00:19:035 - another miss emphasis issue. where at this point vocal > instrument. Simply change the 1/4 slider to single note at this point
00:22:328 (4,5) - its flexible tho, but the instrument feel a bit wasted, where supposed to be improved by this https://gyazo.com/f202c5258e187069e73cfc3df1474658
00:24:523 (2,3) - its not only felt boring when it come to stack 1/2 gap circle, it also not really good to look. if you want to stack try something like circle+slider just like you do at 00:23:426 (6,1) -
00:27:633 (6,7) - felt a bit pushed to emphasis something, what something btw? think simple https://gyazo.com/bf2a0912a48cc1a09ff7423a7154c99a yup it also support your consistency for rhythm picking
00:28:913 (10) - change to 1/2 slider followed by circle
00:30:194 - purpose undermap? add circle
00:32:206 - its not that strong imo eventho theres hs suppoert, i would like to use 1/2 slider instead for (5,6)
00:32:572 - this a lot better https://gyazo.com/584446b746417b2da7046c9e906d430f
00:36:596 - and then agin a wasted clutch vocal, i mean it worth to get a sound neother clickable or not, so same as before 00:36:413 (6) - change it to 1/2 slider
00:38:426 - i will just leave this here https://gyazo.com/f61301151bcdbb0108ea5541c1b621a3
00:43:548 - https://gyazo.com/72436b3c186a327b1783feb801bba26b
00:47:206 (3) - and somehow you do the reverse here to emphasis the vocal when the instrument > vocal. where make this 00:47:755 - strong beat wasted
00:50:682 (4,5) - switch rhythm (ctrl+g)
00:55:987 (7) - is this taiko? or maybe you miss that 1/1 slider?
00:57:084 - https://gyazo.com/5b0ac4875a2e73a3a905231163be8e00
01:00:377 (10) - 1/2 reverse slider prefered
01:04:767 (6,7) - you cant hold (stack) a vibrating vocal, ever i could say. if you sat it same like 01:06:962 (1,2) - no its not, this one is separated as 2 natural pronounce vocal, where its ok to stack here
01:12:084 - looking for this? https://gyazo.com/741e6636a7246057501125fc89a502ab
01:16:840 (3) - switch rhythm and do the stack at slider head, and make the slider as 1/1 instead. reason is clear already i guess
01:18:670 (7) - you miss this vocal try this rhythm https://gyazo.com/76e097567aab72a72e33fd4460981ea6
01:22:328 - and if you apply ^ one, move (7) to 01:22:877 - and add circle at the current tail beat
01:24:523 - its not closed really smooth tho. where 01:25:804 - is supposed to be the last clicked note.

hard
i can see the diff improved from the previous version, the rhythm is more flexible on hard and so the pattern choise, evenso i think from pattern side it could even more improve. Just search more refrance or listen some critical part more carefully could help.