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Demetori - Youyou Bakko ~ Who done it!!!

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Lasse
source should be
東方妖々夢 ~ Perfect Cherry Blossom.
(the dot at the end is necessary lol)

unicode title
妖々跋扈 ~ Who done it!!!
refer to: http://demetori.xii.jp/products.html

not really sure about how 妖々跋扈 is supposed to be romanized though :/


soft-hitwhistle3/drum-hitwhistle3 are really focused on one channel which makes them sound really weird and irritating
=> http://puu.sh/ygXJu/5ac55983cb.wav

00:11:853 - should put 5% and soft default sampleset imo since it doesn't end on any beat
00:31:139 (1) - finish?

would mute normal sliderslide since parts like 01:48:282 - sound pretty weird with it (or change the sliders in this part to soft sampleset on the sliderbody)

00:16:881 (2,3) - 00:21:496 (2,3) - think it would be nice to space this a bit to make the cymbal on downbeat stand out more, like https://i.imgur.com/uIhrEDF.jpg

00:22:403 (6,7,1) - why not keep the 1/4 spacing from before? not like the drums become less intense, something like https://i.imgur.com/4k4HpZ3.jpg could be nice. would differentiate if better from all the weaker triples

00:39:381 (2) - this one is kinda weird as 3/4 since guitar starts on the red tick already. could probably just do https://i.imgur.com/V0Wqktv.jpg

01:00:810 (1,2,3,4) - can you start with the repeat instead? would make transition to 1/3 rhythm so much nicer.

01:39:875 (1) - extended slider over snare is so weird here, either end it on red tick and map a double after or just use a 1/1 slider

02:13:699 (6) - sudden overlap looks out of place with your other visuals here, why not stack on 02:13:204 (4) - head?

02:20:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why not 4 note combos to match guitar and your patterns?

02:55:072 (1,1,1,1) - this is such an unexpectable rhythm, the sudden combination of 1/3 and 1/6. how about https://i.imgur.com/aO95IXY.jpg ? (or more sliders for the 1/6)

04:41:173 (1,2) - can you space the 1/3 here not so close to the 1/2 jumps before lol https://i.imgur.com/kMxioTW.jpg

actually wondering if the ending spinners are really needed, you have way over 5 min drain anyways and spinners of this length are just really annoying lol
and it's only a fade out
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map looks alright for someone with no ranked maps, so I'm fine with giving this a chance.
(also the hitsounds are really cute)
just need metadata stuff confirmed
Topic Starter
Crissa

Lasse wrote:

source should be
東方妖々夢 ~ Perfect Cherry Blossom.
(the dot at the end is necessary lol) oops, okay then

unicode title
妖々跋扈 ~ Who done it!!!
refer to: http://demetori.xii.jp/products.html

not really sure about how 妖々跋扈 is supposed to be romanized though :/ changed, will search for someone to confirm the romanized title, will keep current for now

soft-hitwhistle3/drum-hitwhistle3 are really focused on one channel which makes them sound really weird and irritating
=> http://puu.sh/ygXJu/5ac55983cb.wav changed

00:11:853 - should put 5% and soft default sampleset imo since it doesn't end on any beat sure
00:31:139 (1) - finish? missed it, done

would mute normal sliderslide since parts like 01:48:282 - sound pretty weird with it (or change the sliders in this part to soft sampleset on the sliderbody) i already added a muted sliderslide from a suggestion before

00:16:881 (2,3) - 00:21:496 (2,3) - think it would be nice to space this a bit to make the cymbal on downbeat stand out more, like https://i.imgur.com/uIhrEDF.jpg looks nice, added

00:22:403 (6,7,1) - why not keep the 1/4 spacing from before? not like the drums become less intense, something like https://i.imgur.com/4k4HpZ3.jpg could be nice. would differentiate if better from all the weaker triples yeah, i used more distance to remark that little pause but this seems to fit better

00:39:381 (2) - this one is kinda weird as 3/4 since guitar starts on the red tick already. could probably just do https://i.imgur.com/V0Wqktv.jpg i had my doubts about this, seems to be more clean now

01:00:810 (1,2,3,4) - can you start with the repeat instead? would make transition to 1/3 rhythm so much nicer. sure

01:39:875 (1) - extended slider over snare is so weird here, either end it on red tick and map a double after or just use a 1/1 slider took the double

02:13:699 (6) - sudden overlap looks out of place with your other visuals here, why not stack on 02:13:204 (4) - head? it was ok for me but yeah, helps with visuals overall

02:20:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why not 4 note combos to match guitar and your patterns? seems good here

02:55:072 (1,1,1,1) - this is such an unexpectable rhythm, the sudden combination of 1/3 and 1/6. how about https://i.imgur.com/aO95IXY.jpg ? (or more sliders for the 1/6)i'll take the repeat

04:41:173 (1,2) - can you space the 1/3 here not so close to the 1/2 jumps before lol https://i.imgur.com/kMxioTW.jpg done

actually wondering if the ending spinners are really needed, you have way over 5 min drain anyways and spinners of this length are just really annoying lol
and it's only a fade out well they aren't really needed, but i just felt to map that section with something, i agree with they being annoying and because of the same opinion from a lot of people i think it's time to say goodbye:(
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map looks alright for someone with no ranked maps, so I'm fine with giving this a chance.
(also the hitsounds are really cute)
just need metadata stuff confirmed going!
Thank you~

*According to Touhou Wiki the literal romanized title is "Youkai Domination ~ Who done it!" so it should be fine how it is now
from: https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/List_by_ ... tage_theme

**Nvm, talking with Silent Spica we came to the conclussion that "Youyou Bakko" is a more accurate taking in count the context behind it, everything from a discussion from touhou wiki:
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Talk:Per ... B.E6.89.88
Lasse
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Topic Starter
Crissa

Lasse wrote:

b
ooh man, thank you a lot!
Aisha
gogogo <3 <3
Izzywing
Did an IRC, the map has timing issues so I'm forced to pop here. I can rebub after everything is fixed and perhaps get a second timing check to confirm that it is correct.

https://pastebin.com/raw/uRKN5LUn
Topic Starter
Crissa

Hobbes2 wrote:

Did an IRC, the map has timing issues so I'm forced to pop here. I can rebub after everything is fixed and perhaps get a second timing check to confirm that it is correct.

https://pastebin.com/raw/uRKN5LUn
Fixed timing according to IRC, should've taken a look before rip :(
Izzywing
rebub @lasse double check the timing before heart i guess
Bonsai
I've been clickbaited

numbers are kinda "wrong" from 03:38:600 on and generally just a giant mess from 03:43:436 until 03:45:773 -, also wrong at the ending 05:46:518 -, here's a fixed timing-diff featuring:
  1. no random slidertick at 03:45:526 -
  2. this important beat being snapped 06:21:629 -
glhf
Topic Starter
Crissa

Bonsai wrote:

I've been clickbaited

numbers are kinda "wrong" from 03:38:600 on and generally just a giant mess from 03:43:436 until 03:45:773 -, also wrong at the ending 05:46:518 -, here's a fixed timing-diff featuring:
  1. no random slidertick at 03:45:526 -
  2. this important beat being snapped 06:21:629 -
glhf
Fixed all timing issues according to this diff
Thank you a lot Bonsai~
Lasse
just update with the new timing then
timing changes require a rebubble anyways
I can check after getting some sleep since I'm in bed already
Topic Starter
Crissa

Lasse wrote:

just update with the new timing then
timing changes require a rebubble anyways
I can check after getting some sleep since I'm in bed already
Updated
Lasse
04:18:519 - add kiai on this red line
if you put a red and green line on the same spot they have to use same kiai/volume/sampleset settings
Topic Starter
Crissa

Lasse wrote:

04:18:519 - add kiai on this red line
if you put a red and green line on the same spot they have to use same kiai/volume/sampleset settings
Done, fixed two early Drum sampleset from Bonsai's diff too
Lasse

Lasse wrote:

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Topic Starter
Crissa

Lasse wrote:

Lasse wrote:

b
Thank youu~
Izzywing
dont click
The intent is to provide internet users with a sense of pride and accomplishment for purchasing access to different websites. As for cost, we selected initial values based upon data from your search history and other info from recently signed terms and conditions. Among other things, we're looking at average per-user internet traffic rates on a daily basis, and we'll be making constant adjustments to ensure that users have domain blocks that are compelling, rewarding, and of course attainable via small payment. We appreciate the candid feedback, and the passion the internet has put forth around the current topics here on Reddit, our forums and across numerous social media outlets. Your ISPs will continue to make changes and monitor your internet activity to update everyone as soon and as often as we can.
Topic Starter
Crissa

Hobbes2 wrote:

dont click
The intent is to provide internet users with a sense of pride and accomplishment for purchasing access to different websites. As for cost, we selected initial values based upon data from your search history and other info from recently signed terms and conditions. Among other things, we're looking at average per-user internet traffic rates on a daily basis, and we'll be making constant adjustments to ensure that users have domain blocks that are compelling, rewarding, and of course attainable via small payment. We appreciate the candid feedback, and the passion the internet has put forth around the current topics here on Reddit, our forums and across numerous social media outlets. Your ISPs will continue to make changes and monitor your internet activity to update everyone as soon and as often as we can.
T h a n k Y o u u u~
Kilabarus
Nice song, gratz!
GoldenWolf
Man that mp3 quality is kinda poop tbh, it sounds like a ~128kbps reencoded into 192 xd
While it's still rankable, you can easily notice the difference and net loss on the high pitched guitar notes and cymbals, which this song has a lot of.
If you care enough, here's a decent quality mp3, straight from the CD.

Also here are some frequencies comparison:

Naxess
as requested
Topic Starter
Crissa

GoldenWolf wrote:

Man that mp3 quality is kinda poop tbh, it sounds like a ~128kbps reencoded into 192 xd
While it's still rankable, you can easily notice the difference and net loss on the high pitched guitar notes and cymbals, which this song has a lot of.
If you care enough, here's a decent quality mp3, straight from the CD.

Also here are some frequencies comparison:

You're totally right, thank you a lot for the new mp3~
Fixed offset and changed mp3
Lasse
re
Izzywing
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Kurai
Hello! Metadata brigade here!

The metadata is correct though there shouldn't be any spaces before the exclamation marks.
The unicode exclamation marks (!!!) don't have any spaces before them. It looks like there are spaces because ! is a full-width characters, there shouldn't be any in the Romanisation.
JBHyperion
DQ by mapper request to fix metadata

JBHyperion
whoosh
Kurai
/o/
Topic Starter
Crissa
\o\
GoldenWolf
^o/
iYiyo
2 dq's and 3 hearts in your first qualified map, what an honour xD

Grats again~
Topic Starter
Crissa

iYiyo wrote:

2 dq's and 3 hearts in your first qualified map, what an honour xD

Grats again~

Indeed, i hope it's the last dq :o
Thank you~
audinor
It was
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