Sakurakou K-ON Bu - Don't say "lazy" (TV size Ver.) · forum

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-08-30T10:48:20+00:00

m3gB3g wrote:
Insane

00:09:801 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like that jump style in this moment. Dont like bcs not comfortable, too spaced patterns for map begin and Feels superfluous in comparison with other jumps. Pls make his style like others jumps : 00:20:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:08:807 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:19:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - It gonna be perfect diff with harmony jump styles.
ok, i nerfed the jumps' distance (dont change style)

00:05:492 (5,1) - make them parallel? keep for now

00:30:851 (4,1) - i think this need more spacing. No more patterns like this in diff. What mean this pattern is excess in concept. i wanna keep it lol

Thanks!!

edit: updated also gd

Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-08-30T11:43:43+00:00

quick look

Hard.
- 00:02:177 (2,3) - と 00:02:508 (4) - 音取りの位置かえません？Hardで00:02:343 - をclickableにするより 00:02:674 - にはkick drumが微かに聞こえるのでそうしてもいいかもしれないです。00:05:160 (3,4,5) - 同上 00:13:116 (3,4,5) - 00:15:768 (3,4,5) - ^
- 00:21:735 - hitsoundでN:clapを入れてるのは少しnoisyに感じます。あすかさんのと揃えてもいいかもしれないです。01:20:740 - ^
- 01:00:188 (1,2) - コンセプト的にはいいですが、ハードだと少しトリッキーかもしれないです。というのも00:59:525 (3,4) - とのスライダーと長さがほとんど同じで配置も直線的で似通ってるのでキックスライダーのように誤認するかもしれません。サークル４つに変えるか、配置やスライダーの形でアクセントをつけて差別化したりしてみてはいかがでしょう？
- 01:15:270 (5,3) - のoverlapがあまり視覚的によく見えませんでした。01:15:768 (2) - を1のスライダー側でなく逆側にflowを作れば解消されるかもしれません。

Insane.
- 00:54:718 (6) - これ消しませんか？サビ前のパートで比較的落ち着いてますし、特にclickableにすべき音がないように思いました。
- 01:21:486 - これ拾ってないのは意図的ですか？サビのクライマックス表現するならこことってもいいかもしれない…？

がんばって～！

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-08-30T13:55:35+00:00

joker- wrote:
quick look

Hard.
- 00:02:177 (2,3) - と 00:02:508 (4) - 音取りの位置かえません？Hardで00:02:343 - をclickableにするより 00:02:674 - にはkick drumが微かに聞こえるのでそうしてもいいかもしれないです。00:05:160 (3,4,5) - 同上 00:13:116 (3,4,5) - 00:15:768 (3,4,5) - ^ ok
- 00:21:735 - hitsoundでN:clapを入れてるのは少しnoisyに感じます。あすかさんのと揃えてもいいかもしれないです。01:20:740 - ^ ok
- 01:00:188 (1,2) - コンセプト的にはいいですが、ハードだと少しトリッキーかもしれないです。というのも00:59:525 (3,4) - とのスライダーと長さがほとんど同じで配置も直線的で似通ってるのでキックスライダーのように誤認するかもしれません。サークル４つに変えるか、配置やスライダーの形でアクセントをつけて差別化したりしてみてはいかがでしょう？ ok
- 01:15:270 (5,3) - のoverlapがあまり視覚的によく見えませんでした。01:15:768 (2) - を1のスライダー側でなく逆側にflowを作れば解消されるかもしれません。あいまいなoverlapだったのでちゃんとした意思としてoverlapさせる配置にしました

がんばって～！

JK

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478,202,50078,2,0,B|447:141|515:141|478:67,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,21,50575,2,0,P|379:29|338:32,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,23,50906,6,0,B|264:88|264:88|257:156,2,125.999996154785,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,51735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,51901,2,0,P|137:80|89:80,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,76,52232,6,0,P|14:162|14:208,1,125.999996154785,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,298,52729,2,0,P|86:284|132:284,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,308,53227,2,0,P|269:312|290:312,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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253,196,54553,2,4,P|256:131|249:86,1,94.499997116089,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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94,206,55879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
58,281,56044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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0,98,64497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,225,64663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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23,219,68641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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396,47,69469,2,0,L|384:123,2,77.0000023498536,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,103,69967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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280,43,70795,1,10,0:0:0:0:
280,43,70878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,43,70961,1,2,0:0:0:0:
169,127,71127,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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169,127,71292,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,236,71458,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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308,63,72453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,178,72618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,278,72784,6,0,L|141:298,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,353,73116,2,0,L|66:269,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,155,73447,2,0,L|127:218,1,77.0000023498536,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,278,73779,2,0,L|300:260,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,273,74110,5,4,0:0:0:0:
270,43,74442,2,0,P|262:89|275:147,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,90,74773,2,0,P|370:82|312:95,1,77.0000023498536,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,163,75105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,163,75270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,312,75436,6,0,P|364:250|366:214,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,335,75768,2,0,P|272:274|292:244,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,123,76099,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,236,76265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,242,76431,2,0,P|161:264|135:292,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,370,76762,5,4,0:0:0:0:
35,102,77094,2,0,B|83:119|83:119|186:89,1,154.000004699707,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,22,77591,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,143,77757,2,0,P|242:197|249:233,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,262,78088,6,0,B|432:241|432:241|448:189|429:135,2,154.000004699707,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,300,78917,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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289,103,82563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,103,82729,2,2,P|293:178|275:253,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
232,311,83226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,311,83392,2,2,B|162:295|162:295|92:320,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
30,368,83889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,368,84055,2,2,L|17:289,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
62,227,84386,2,2,L|75:121,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
107,95,84718,6,2,P|179:104|250:85,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
307,33,85215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-09-01T08:50:04+00:00

Insane.
- 00:54:718 (6) - これ消しませんか？サビ前のパートで比較的落ち着いてますし、特にclickableにすべき音がないように思いました。一応vocalが残ってるのと　少し疾走感を出したい（出てるかわからない）ので置いてます。　今んとこkeepでー
- 01:21:486 - これ拾ってないのは意図的ですか？サビのクライマックス表現するならこことってもいいかもしれない…？
ほんとや　音あるやん！！！

ありがとうございます！！！！！！

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DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-09-01T12:36:11+00:00

足し程度に
General

Tagに Yasaija 714 を追加してくださいまし

Easy

00:05:823 (2) - ほぼまっすくなので間の点は要らないかと
それか少し曲がってることを主張しよう
00:12:121 (4) - 00:01:845 (1) - ここと同じで単発で叩きたい感あるけど難しいかな？
00:13:779 (2,1) - なんか不恰好に見えると思ったらコピー使ってない感じですね
対称に見せたいときはコピー使うのが安全かと
00:45:602 (3,3) - stackはしないの？
00:52:232 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 同じところぐるぐる回ってるだけに見えるので変えれるなら変えてもいいかも
後の配置が難しそうならキープしてください
01:11:127 (4) - 2つめと同じ
01:22:066 (1,1) - コピーして同じ傾斜にしない？
00:23:061 (1,1) - これとか00:33:669 (1,1) - これのように

Normal

00:01:182 (3) - これ1/2スライダー2つで音とったほうがHardとの音取りの違いを少しマシにできると思う(Easyと同じ音取りだから違うほうがいいかも)
00:08:475 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Normalにしては音詰めすぎな気がする
00:09:636 (7,4) - これとか消してもよさそう(4)は残してもいいかもだけど(7)は消したほうが良いかも
00:20:243 (7,4) - 01:08:642 (7,4) - 01:19:249 (7,4) - ^
00:46:348 - ここの音は拾わないの？
01:00:188 (7) - Add NC (Insaneのように)

Yasai's Hard

00:56:873 - ここなぜかSampleset DurmのWhistleになってるのでAutoにしてもらえると助かります

Insane

自分の意見じゃないですけど00:03:171 (1,2) - この3/4スライダー使ってる終わりの音が案外聞こえてくるので少しめんどくさいかもですけどこういう音取りしてる部分のvolumeを下げませんか？(プレイヤーのスキンによってはHit音のせいでかなりうるさく聞こえるかも)
00:11:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - だんだんDSも上がっていってるのにここでDSを下げるのはもったいないと思った
Clapついて音もでかくしてるので00:11:127 (1,2,3,4) - このDSより広げて配置してもいいかも
00:22:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:774 (3) - これ00:43:115 (2,6) - ここでstackしてないからその間隔にあわせてstackしないのもありじゃない？
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8988571こんな感じ
00:44:608 (2,6) - overlap
00:49:083 (5) - 00:49:415 (7) - それぞれでCtrl+Gしたほうがaimしやすそう

good luck together

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-09-05T09:17:53+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
足し程度に
General
Tagに Yasaija 714 を追加してくださいまし
Easy
00:05:823 (2) - ほぼまっすくなので間の点は要らないかと
それか少し曲がってることを主張しよう
00:12:121 (4) - 00:01:845 (1) - ここと同じで単発で叩きたい感あるけど難しいかな？
00:13:779 (2,1) - なんか不恰好に見えると思ったらコピー使ってない感じですね
対称に見せたいときはコピー使うのが安全かと
00:45:602 (3,3) - stackはしないの？
00:52:232 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 同じところぐるぐる回ってるだけに見えるので変えれるなら変えてもいいかも　bnに言われたら変更しまー
後の配置が難しそうならキープしてください
01:11:127 (4) - 2つめと同じ
01:22:066 (1,1) - コピーして同じ傾斜にしない？
00:23:061 (1,1) - これとか00:33:669 (1,1) - これのように
Normal
00:01:182 (3) - これ1/2スライダー2つで音とったほうがHardとの音取りの違いを少しマシにできると思う(Easyと同じ音取りだから違うほうがいいかも)
00:08:475 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Normalにしては音詰めすぎな気がする
00:09:636 (7,4) - これとか消してもよさそう(4)は残してもいいかもだけど(7)は消したほうが良いかも
00:20:243 (7,4) - 01:08:642 (7,4) - 01:19:249 (7,4) - ^
00:46:348 - ここの音は拾わないの？　normalだから大丈夫だと思う
01:00:188 (7) - Add NC (Insaneのように)
Yasai's Hard
00:56:873 - ここなぜかSampleset DurmのWhistleになってるのでAutoにしてもらえると助かります
Insane
自分の意見じゃないですけど00:03:171 (1,2) - この3/4スライダー使ってる終わりの音が案外聞こえてくるので少しめんどくさいかもですけどこういう音取りしてる部分のvolumeを下げませんか？(プレイヤーのスキンによってはHit音のせいでかなりうるさく聞こえるかも)
00:11:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - だんだんDSも上がっていってるのにここでDSを下げるのはもったいないと思った
Clapついて音もでかくしてるので00:11:127 (1,2,3,4) - このDSより広げて配置してもいいかも
00:22:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:774 (3) - これ00:43:115 (2,6) - ここでstackしてないからその間隔にあわせてstackしないのもありじゃない？
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8988571こんな感じ
00:44:608 (2,6) - overlap
00:49:083 (5) - 00:49:415 (7) - それぞれでCtrl+Gしたほうがaimしやすそう　今の方が良い感あるかな。。 (imo)
good luck together

のーりぷらい＝ふぃっくすと
せんきゅー♥

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-09-16T10:45:41+00:00

insane
00:10:464 (1,2) - 1/2 slider would be so much nicer since vocals stop, your current rhythm seems too anime (oversimplified and bland)
00:21:072 (1,2) - 01:09:470 (1,2) - 01:20:077 (1,2) - ^
00:30:851 (4,1) - really don't get why this is suddenly an antijump, felt really out of place
00:49:415 (7,1) - continued movement doesnt really make the change on 1 stand out, how about breaking up the linear movement on it like https://i.imgur.com/VkQY2dN.jpg or similar?
01:00:188 (1,2,3,4) - could add some volume reducing green lines
01:27:536 (2) - how about a placement like https://i.imgur.com/TYdo9YT.jpg think that kind of movement makes it stand out nicely here

yasai
can you reduce volume/silence your overmapped blue tick slidertails like 00:25:630 - ?
00:38:310 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - two dense 1/4 click patterns right after each other is bit too much of a diff spike here. something like https://i.imgur.com/VTKC9PD.jpg could work
00:59:857 (4,1) - sv change is too extreme here for hard since the 1/2 slider just looks like 1/4 lol. use something like 0.75x for 01:00:188 -
01:20:077 (3,4,5) - stacking 01:20:077 (3,4) - instead would make more sense so you have a jump for vocal+drum on 5
01:27:370 (1) - could have more spacing like you did on 2, it's after slider so will still be easy to play

normal
od4 is enough imo
00:02:177 (2,4,5) - why do you have to abuse 1/2 sliders so much, they just add pointless difficulty considering sounds on tails are so weak, just a circle would work well to replace many of these
00:04:829 (2,4,5) - etc.
really should be toned down a bit
00:09:801 (1,2) - these make sense for example cause of vocals
00:20:740 (2,3) - bit too much overlapping makes this harder to read for newer players
00:29:028 (2) - no idea why this is clickable, really takes away from melody/vocal on next beat. maybe a 3/2 gap or even something like https://i.imgur.com/j4SgV3u.jpg would be nice. same for when this repeats
00:49:083 (7,8) - even more edgy overlap stuff, you cover way too much of the slider. just do something like https://i.imgur.com/12u15VM.jpg
01:01:181 (2,4,5) -etc. same thing as before

easy
looks okay

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can bubble if things get handled properly

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/668799

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-09-16T11:22:54+00:00

Lasse wrote:
yasai
can you reduce volume/silence your overmapped blue tick slidertails like 00:25:630 - ?
00:38:310 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - two dense 1/4 click patterns right after each other is bit too much of a diff spike here. something like https://i.imgur.com/VTKC9PD.jpg could work
00:59:857 (4,1) - sv change is too extreme here for hard since the 1/2 slider just looks like 1/4 lol. use something like 0.75x for 01:00:188 -
01:20:077 (3,4,5) - stacking 01:20:077 (3,4) - instead would make more sense so you have a jump for vocal+drum on 5
01:27:370 (1) - could have more spacing like you did on 2, it's after slider so will still be easy to play

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can bubble if things get handled properly

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/668799

all fix
thank you Lasse

code

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TitleUnicode:Don't Say "Lazy"
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Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Yasai's Hard
Source:けいおん！
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Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-09-16T17:15:33+00:00

Lasse wrote:
insane
00:10:464 (1,2) - 1/2 slider would be so much nicer since vocals stop, your current rhythm seems too anime (oversimplified and bland)
00:21:072 (1,2) - 01:09:470 (1,2) - 01:20:077 (1,2) - ^
00:30:851 (4,1) - really don't get why this is suddenly an antijump, felt really out of place
00:49:415 (7,1) - continued movement doesnt really make the change on 1 stand out, how about breaking up the linear movement on it like https://i.imgur.com/VkQY2dN.jpg or similar?
01:00:188 (1,2,3,4) - could add some volume reducing green lines
01:27:536 (2) - how about a placement like https://i.imgur.com/TYdo9YT.jpg think that kind of movement makes it stand out nicely here

normal
od4 is enough imo
00:02:177 (2,4,5) - why do you have to abuse 1/2 sliders so much, they just add pointless difficulty considering sounds on tails are so weak, just a circle would work well to replace many of these
00:04:829 (2,4,5) - etc.
really should be toned down a bit
00:09:801 (1,2) - these make sense for example cause of vocals

ok, i changed 00:03:171 (4,5) - to circle. but i keep 00:02:177 (2) - because it's fun imo, if you think remove it better, i change~
and changed also pattern of 00:09:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - etc...

00:20:740 (2,3) - bit too much overlapping makes this harder to read for newer players
00:29:028 (2) - no idea why this is clickable, really takes away from melody/vocal on next beat. maybe a 3/2 gap or even something like https://i.imgur.com/j4SgV3u.jpg would be nice. same for when this repeats
00:49:083 (7,8) - even more edgy overlap stuff, you cover way too much of the slider. just do something like https://i.imgur.com/12u15VM.jpg
01:01:181 (2,4,5) -etc. same thing as before

fixed all~ (plobably) Thanks!!
update gd.

https://puu.sh/xBepy/f29e6f84ee.zip buckup

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

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Lasse 2017-09-19T11:05:38+00:00

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DeletedUser_423548 2017-09-19T11:29:05+00:00

Go!

jeanbernard8865

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jeanbernard8865 2017-09-19T11:47:45+00:00

K-On!! PogChamp

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-09-19T12:04:35+00:00

Thanks Lasse!!!!!

pkhg

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pkhg 2017-09-30T19:57:55+00:00

shitposting to kill 2kds post

SAKURAKOU K-ON BU > Sakurakou K-ON Bu tbh

Yudragen

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Yudragen 2017-10-02T19:00:29+00:00

3 stars at ya, i'm too lazy to mod.

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-04T15:45:00+00:00

@pkhg i couldnt understand flow of your k-on map forum lmao
@ChaoticRed thanks!

Insane
i found that missing clap at 01:21:734 (5,6) - .
i'll fix when 2nd bn come. sry xd

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-10-05T19:02:06+00:00

hit sounds

hard
01:00:188 (1,2) - should go with soft sampleset. normal hitnormals sound so loud compared to song here

normal
01:21:734 (6) - hitsound (same one you're fixing on insane)

easy
00:12:453 (4) - 00:28:364 (1) - 01:11:458 (4) - finishes. your other diffs ahve them so shouldnt need to explain why
00:15:437 (3) - head/tail should have claps instead of whistles
00:21:402 (2,4) - 01:20:408 (2) - should have claps too tbh. 00:38:310 (2) -00:48:917 (3) - on tails

i can qualify if you post some stuff on the moddingv2 panel for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/664417

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-06T12:33:38+00:00

ok all updated~! (GD)
Thanks pishifat!

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-10-06T18:45:30+00:00

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makisokk

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makisokk 2017-10-06T20:56:06+00:00

#5
Good job

Doormat

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Doormat 2017-10-06T22:02:48+00:00

uhhhh shouldn't title be 'Don't say "lazy"'? the s and l shouldn't be capitalized
edit: image isn't loading strangely, but https://i.imgur.com/Q5uLZKZ.jpg

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-06T22:12:22+00:00

oh~ I'll check Tltle!!

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-07T05:30:29+00:00

aaa~ sorry! i had used old map meta xd

ok, checked title