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stayed since botan is best girl
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ar9.1 is a bit random lol, just 9 is good imo
00:01:957 (4) - try ctrl+g on this, emphasis should be on the snare on (5) (which is missing a clap) so it works out nicely
00:03:269 (3) - also clap, 00:03:457 (4) - remove clap here and consider adding a drum clap on the end and head of 00:03:832 (5) -
00:04:582 (2,3,4) - soft clap on (2,4) drum clap on (3), there seems to be a lot of weird hitsounds so i'll leave them out for your sanity lol
00:06:925 - strongly recommend mapping this beat, it's quite audible so it sounds empty like it is atm
00:07:207 (1,2,3) - i love how this is constructed, 1,2 are mapped similarly and (3) is pointed the other way because it's distinctly different in the music, try to do the same thing in the next few sections as well - 00:10:207 (1,2,3) - 00:11:519 (1,2,3) - etc.
00:12:644 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not very appealing as a stream, try making a curved slider and ctrl+shift+f
00:13:394 (1) - 00:14:332 (4) - there's a crash on the end so it'd be nice if they were clickable, try this rhythm (and maybe pattern) instead http://puu.sh/xjNBB/081114a840.jpg
00:22:207 (1) - move this further away since spacing atm looks like this is a 1/2 gap i.e. 00:25:582 (2) - like this
00:29:707 (1,2,3,4) - try this pattern? seems cuter to me http://puu.sh/xjNKd/13c6029c94.jpg
00:37:957 (3,4,5) - doesn't flow nicely imo, try this http://puu.sh/xjNMN/8dd53d2c1c.jpg
00:38:519 (1,2,3) - a 3 slider pattern followed by 3 circles would suit this nicely, like this http://puu.sh/xjNQM/c832820f8a.jpg
00:46:207 (1) - try to have more spacing on notes like these, doesnt make sense that this is lower spaced than (3,4)
00:47:144 (4) - also try to avoid linear motion like here , moving it up more for an angle would be nice, good execution would be something like 01:02:144 (3,4,5) - suits a lot better since it's emphasizing the repetitive vocals
00:49:019 (1) - this is a very emphasized note, give it a jump!
00:50:707 (1) - skystar slider pattern like this doesnt really fit here imo
00:55:207 (1,2) - 01:01:207 (7,1,2) - 01:08:707 (1,2,3) - it's all the same stuff so you should try to make the rhythms more consistent with eachother
01:13:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - try this pattern. (3) is emphasized with a jump and change in flow, followed by circles for vocals. symmetry works nicely since it's 2 very similar melodies repeating http://puu.sh/xjO9e/bede0091cf.jpg I would also recommend changing 01:14:707 (1) - into 2 circles since there's a snare on the upbeat
01:19:207 (1) - 01:20:519 (1) - this current copy pasta section doesn't really represent the music well, i'd suggest scrapping the copy pasta and focus on emphasizing these 2 beats
01:22:019 (6,1) - 01:23:519 (5,1) - highly recommend making this into a 1/1 slider, there's no kick on the downbeat so it fits a lot more
01:26:144 (1) - slider + circle pls, the sliderend is very stressed and should be clickable
01:28:581 (1,2) - bad polarity here, consider making this into 1 slider
aa it became a wall mod so i'll stop here x.x if you want me to finish the mod then feel free to poke me in game
otherwise glhf!
stayed since botan is best girl
[!]
ar9.1 is a bit random lol, just 9 is good imo
00:01:957 (4) - try ctrl+g on this, emphasis should be on the snare on (5) (which is missing a clap) so it works out nicely
00:03:269 (3) - also clap, 00:03:457 (4) - remove clap here and consider adding a drum clap on the end and head of 00:03:832 (5) -
00:04:582 (2,3,4) - soft clap on (2,4) drum clap on (3), there seems to be a lot of weird hitsounds so i'll leave them out for your sanity lol
00:06:925 - strongly recommend mapping this beat, it's quite audible so it sounds empty like it is atm
00:07:207 (1,2,3) - i love how this is constructed, 1,2 are mapped similarly and (3) is pointed the other way because it's distinctly different in the music, try to do the same thing in the next few sections as well - 00:10:207 (1,2,3) - 00:11:519 (1,2,3) - etc.
00:12:644 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not very appealing as a stream, try making a curved slider and ctrl+shift+f
00:13:394 (1) - 00:14:332 (4) - there's a crash on the end so it'd be nice if they were clickable, try this rhythm (and maybe pattern) instead http://puu.sh/xjNBB/081114a840.jpg
00:22:207 (1) - move this further away since spacing atm looks like this is a 1/2 gap i.e. 00:25:582 (2) - like this
00:29:707 (1,2,3,4) - try this pattern? seems cuter to me http://puu.sh/xjNKd/13c6029c94.jpg
00:37:957 (3,4,5) - doesn't flow nicely imo, try this http://puu.sh/xjNMN/8dd53d2c1c.jpg
00:38:519 (1,2,3) - a 3 slider pattern followed by 3 circles would suit this nicely, like this http://puu.sh/xjNQM/c832820f8a.jpg
00:46:207 (1) - try to have more spacing on notes like these, doesnt make sense that this is lower spaced than (3,4)
00:47:144 (4) - also try to avoid linear motion like here , moving it up more for an angle would be nice, good execution would be something like 01:02:144 (3,4,5) - suits a lot better since it's emphasizing the repetitive vocals
00:49:019 (1) - this is a very emphasized note, give it a jump!
00:50:707 (1) - skystar slider pattern like this doesnt really fit here imo
00:55:207 (1,2) - 01:01:207 (7,1,2) - 01:08:707 (1,2,3) - it's all the same stuff so you should try to make the rhythms more consistent with eachother
01:13:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - try this pattern. (3) is emphasized with a jump and change in flow, followed by circles for vocals. symmetry works nicely since it's 2 very similar melodies repeating http://puu.sh/xjO9e/bede0091cf.jpg I would also recommend changing 01:14:707 (1) - into 2 circles since there's a snare on the upbeat
01:19:207 (1) - 01:20:519 (1) - this current copy pasta section doesn't really represent the music well, i'd suggest scrapping the copy pasta and focus on emphasizing these 2 beats
01:22:019 (6,1) - 01:23:519 (5,1) - highly recommend making this into a 1/1 slider, there's no kick on the downbeat so it fits a lot more
01:26:144 (1) - slider + circle pls, the sliderend is very stressed and should be clickable
01:28:581 (1,2) - bad polarity here, consider making this into 1 slider
aa it became a wall mod so i'll stop here x.x if you want me to finish the mod then feel free to poke me in game
otherwise glhf!