Hilmi Ghazian wrote:

mod by my Queue :3
i mod for consistency and technical style :3

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Beginner

00:25:964 (25964|5) - i feel bad to use 1/8 sound in this diff,, delete it I think it's fine
00:28:798 - u can add LN like 00:23:464 (23464|1) -
00:30:964 - add note
00:32:631 - add note
00:39:131 (39131|0) - u can replace with 1/2 note
00:41:464 (41464|0) - move to 6
01:08:464 (68464|1) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:16:798 - add note for start kiai
01:21:964 (81964|3) - u can replace with 1/2 note or delete it I was following 1/8 sound
01:24:464 (84464|5) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:26:131 (86131|4) - ^
01:29:964 - add note please added LN
01:31:631 (91631|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note same as before
01:32:631 (92631|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note and move to 3 same as before but I've moved it to 3
01:35:964 (95964|2,96131|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9681099 rearanged
01:43:298 (103298|5) - u can replace with 1/2 note or delete it same as before
01:44:798 (104798|4) - u can replace with 1/2 note
01:45:798 (105798|6) - ^
01:47:464 (107464|3,107964|1,108131|5,108631|2) - u can use it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9681115

Normal

00:44:798 (44798|0) - move to 3
00:45:464 (45464|2) - move to 7 why
00:46:131 - add note please sound doesen't support the double
00:47:464 - add note ^
00:48:798 - add note ^
00:51:464 - ^ ^
00:51:798 (51798|0) - move to 7
00:52:798 - ^ this is fine imo
01:04:798 - add 1 LN same as 01:04:798 (64798|3) - sound is not really that loud to support it unlike other ones
01:05:464 - add 1 LN same as 01:05:464 (65464|1) - ^
01:06:131 (66131|2) - delete why
01:12:798 (72798|5,73131|0,73464|3,73798|2,74131|1) - if u like my pattern,,, u can change it XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9680983 I prefere mine
01:44:298 (104298|3) - ghost note,, delete it

Hyper

00:12:631 (12631|0) - why u add not at there?
00:12:798 - add 1 note please... same as 00:10:131 (10131|6,10131|4) -
00:34:964 - add 1 note please,, if u use vocal sound like 00:34:298 (34298|4,34631|3) - vocals fade out on that part so i didn't want to emphesize it
00:37:631 (37631|2) - move to 2
00:41:464 (41464|3) - move to 3
01:10:464 (70464|0) - move to 3 to avoid shield
01:14:798 (74798|1) - move to 6 or 7... too much in left side
01:23:131 (83131|3) - move to 6
01:37:798 (97798|3) - u can use 1/2 LN like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9680875
01:44:964 (104964|0) - delete this and 01:45:798 - add note to make 3-2-3 pattern

I hope this mod can help u.....

Ortlinde wrote:

damn seems like i'm late sorry lol
Beginner and Normal seems good to me
feel free to reject this

Hyper

1. 00:18:131 - add 1 note here since it has the same sound with 00:20:798 -
2. 00:20:631 (20631|2,20631|3,20631|0) - dunno if it deserves 3-note I think its fine since double wouldn't be enough and quad would be too much
3. 00:27:464 - 00:27:798 - add 1 note each for consistency
4. 00:32:798 - in this part, put 1 note on each LN
5. 01:10:631 (70631|0) - jacking this isn't necessary though
6. 01:24:631 (84631|2) - add 1 note here
7. 01:25:798 (85798|1) - how come this has only 1 note?
8. 01:32:131 - and why this is 4-note?
9. 01:43:048 (103048|2) - put this on the white tick or delete this like 01:44:381 -
10. 01:45:798 - either make this 3-note or 01:44:798 - delete 1 note here

Queen of Hearts

1. 00:07:464 - just suggestion but maybe you can accentuate the note with small 1/8 LNs nah, I don't think it'll fit the pattern very well
2. 00:18:131 - put note on 4 to emphasize the bassdrum
3. 00:22:798 (22798|2) - extend the LN to 00:23:464 - I prefere it like this
4. 00:33:631 (33631|4,33964|3) - tbh i found this LN unnecessary. either delete it or put LN at the previous one (since it sounds same)
5. 01:15:964 - maybe put LN here since the voice sounds "wobbly"? it doesen't really fit imo
6. 01:21:798 - make it 4-note maybe since you tend to put 4-noter on the bassdrums quad doesen't fit there imo, plus it would cause inconsistency problems
7. 01:23:131 - dunno why you make it only 2 notes
8. 01:26:131 (86131|5,86131|6,86298|0,86298|1,86464|5,86464|6) - maybe make these 3 or 4 notes
9. 01:27:131 - Add 1 note to emphasize the snare (and to differentiate from 01:27:298 - )
10. 01:29:464 - welp idk why this is the only 5-note bassdrum

fkn awesome song and set and everythin' <3
go for rank!

Ortlinde wrote:

540's Extreme

1. 00:32:798 - add 1 note here since it has bassdrum nope,for easier (?)
2. 00:44:131 (44131|1,44131|0,44131|3,44298|3,44298|1,44298|0,44464|2,44464|6,44464|5,44631|2,44631|6,44631|5) - this sounds like an ordinary kick so i think 2 notes would be enough
3. 00:49:798 (49798|3,49798|6,49798|1) - delete 1 note since it sounds the same as 00:49:464 - (it doesn't even have vocals) well i hear sound like umm apalah
4. 00:52:631 (52631|5,52631|3,52631|1) - 1 or 2 note would be enough (there's no bell sound) ^
5. 01:11:464 - maybe put 1 note here for the *ding* sound nope for consisteny
6. 01:21:714 - put 1 note to emphasize the bassdrum nope
7. 01:29:964 (89964|4,90048|3) - same as above ^
8. 01:44:798 (104798|3,104964|0) - maybe make it into mini-jacks to emphasize the bassdrum nope
9. 01:45:798 (105798|3,105964|5) - same as above ^

fkn awesome song and set and everythin'
go for rank!

Ortlinde wrote:

Satan's Insane

1. 00:15:464 (15464|5) - this LN is unnecessary i think
2. 00:28:798 (28798|0,28798|6,29131|2,29131|4) - make it into 3-note i think could cause inconsistency
3. 00:31:631 (31631|2,31631|1) - you put 3 note on 00:30:964 - so i think this deserves 3-note too (or change 00:30:964 - into 2-note)
4. 00:52:798 (52798|4,52798|5,53548|5,53548|4) - why not make it LN all the way through? (i think the buildup starts in 00:52:798 - gonna keep this
5. 00:55:464 - add 1 note to emphasize this part
6. 01:14:131 (74131|3,74131|4,74131|2) - this doesn't deserve 3-note since it isn't louder than the previous (actually it only has one click like 01:14:464 - )
7. 01:17:798 (77798|3) - 01:20:464 (80464|2) - 01:23:131 (83131|5) - 01:25:798 (85798|3) - etc. - unnecessary LN i think (the sound doesn't make it feel like mini-jacks) there is some kind of "break" on the sound so they fit

chouyaa wrote:

hi there,
as requested in My Super Modding Queue

Hyper

00:21:132 - 1 note is enough cause there's no drum like 00:20:132 - 00:20:465 -

00:28:132 - there should be a LN imo since the synth is gradually volume up and getting higher from 00:28:465 - which u mapped it with a LN there I only want to have doubles there that follow drums, I added that LN because it would be too much empty on that spot

01:08:799 - 4 notes eh? the sound is same as the other below

01:31:465 (91465|0) - move to col 5 and 01:31:799 (91799|4) - move to col 4 (this one is optional)
check > 01:30:799 (90799|0,91132|0,91465|0,91799|0,92132|0) - fixed the anchor but I wont move it to 5 because there will be a jackhammer

chouyaa should learn more how to mod 7k properly
also umo, pls check ur request on my queue, there's a reply about ur M4M

goodluck <3

• [Beginner]

1. 00:21:465 (21465|5) - i feel odd tbh, u can make like this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821226
2. 00:25:965 (25965|5) - maybe avoid using LN 1/2 beat n change into short note
3. 00:30:799 - how bout like this more balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821416
4. 00:39:2599 (39299|1,39465|2) - move to col 4 n 5, avoid put a stair in same hand
5. 00:55:465 - double to emphasis the cymbal
6. 01:11:299 - yah same like u do in 01:08:632 -
7. 01:21:965 (81965|3) - short note, tricky note for beginner player
8. 01:26:965 - same like 01:26:299 - add note
9. 01:29:965 (89965|0) - same issue
10. 01:31:632 (91632|4,92632|2,93965|3,95965|2) - ^
11. 01:40:632 - add note
12. 01:43:299 (103299|5) - same issue
13. 01:47:965 (107965|1,108632|2) - ^
14. 01:53:632 (113632|2,113799|3,113965|4) - maybe ignore this, cuz u put a loud sound with 1/1 beat n the calm sound 1/2 beat it more harder than other

• [Normal]

1. 00:23:799 - till 00:34:132 - i think u can buff this diff if u put a double in almost all loud sound n reduce the gap between normal n hyper example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821487 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821492
2. 00:52:799 (52799|5) - extend the LN till 00:54:799 -
3. 01:06:465 - till 01:10:799 - same issue double almost all loud sound
4. 01:17:132 - till 01:36:632 - ^
5. 01:54:132 - suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821516

Syadow- wrote:

feed me .....
sorry for delay mod

• [Beginner]

1. 00:21:465 (21465|5) - i feel odd tbh, u can make like this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821226 I think its fine
2. 00:25:965 (25965|5) - maybe avoid using LN 1/2 beat n change into short note
3. 00:30:799 - how bout like this more balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821416
4. 00:39:2599 (39299|1,39465|2) - move to col 4 n 5, avoid put a stair in same hand its the same sound as the other notes so there is no reason to move it to another column
5. 00:55:465 - double to emphasis the cymbal
6. 01:11:299 - yah same like u do in 01:08:632 -
7. 01:21:965 (81965|3) - short note, tricky note for beginner player
8. 01:26:965 - same like 01:26:299 - add note
9. 01:29:965 (89965|0) - same issue
10. 01:31:632 (91632|4,92632|2,93965|3,95965|2) - ^
11. 01:40:632 - add note
12. 01:43:299 (103299|5) - same issue
13. 01:47:965 (107965|1,108632|2) - ^
14. 01:53:632 (113632|2,113799|3,113965|4) - maybe ignore this, cuz u put a loud sound with 1/1 beat n the calm sound 1/2 beat it more harder than other I'll keep this because it would be too much empty and it would be weird not to map those sounds imo

• [Normal]

1. 00:23:799 - till 00:34:132 - i think u can buff this diff if u put a double in almost all loud sound n reduce the gap between normal n hyper example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821487 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821492
2. 00:52:799 (52799|5) - extend the LN till 00:54:799 -
3. 01:06:465 - till 01:10:799 - same issue double almost all loud sound
4. 01:17:132 - till 01:36:632 - ^
5. 01:54:132 - suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9821516

Good Luck guys >w<)b

1. 01:27:132 (87132|2,87215|3,87299|4,87382|5) - The glide really stands out so I think adding an LN or changing the pattern into an LN one would fit more just like here 01:33:965 (93965|2) - .
   Example

   
2. 01:34:132 - Missing triple here.
3. 01:40:632 (100632|6) - I think there's space to fit 1/8s here.
4. 01:43:299 (103299|6) - ^ but even more space.
5. 01:47:965 (107965|6) - ^
6. 01:48:465 (108465|5) - LNs would fit better here too.
   Suggestion

   

1. 01:15:799 - Should be a double LN here. (This is consistent wit Satan's difficulty though so I don't know if i'm missing something.)
2. 01:57:215 (117215|4) - Move this to 4, it creates a mini-thrill for no reason.
3. 02:00:799 - Usually a double here
4. 02:03:465 - ^

1. 01:16:799 - 01:36:632 This kiai is way too similar to the one in beginner difficulty and doesn't even stand out in it's own chart. Putting doubles should be playable since there are full beat gaps and will even out difficulty spread. Also in general you should add some doubles on big white ticks so that it doesn't look to much like beginner.

Slaerd wrote:

Hiya from my modding queue

[Hyper]

1. 01:15:799 - Should be a double LN here. (This is consistent wit Satan's difficulty though so I don't know if i'm missing something.) well its satan's choice for that to be double note, I made it single in hyper since its easier and it fits better since the vocals are not as loud as on other LNs
2. 01:57:215 (117215|4) - Move this to 4, it creates a mini-thrill for no reason.
3. 02:00:799 - Usually a double here
4. 02:03:465 - ^

[Normal]

1. 01:16:799 - 01:36:632 This kiai is way too similar to the one in beginner difficulty and doesn't even stand out in it's own chart. Putting doubles should be playable since there are full beat gaps and will even out difficulty spread. Also in general you should add some doubles on big white ticks so that it doesn't look to much like beginner. well it doesen't even have to stand out imo, this is fine because its alredy simple enough for normal difficulty,
   just because its a higher difficulty that does not mean that I have to make completely diffrend chart with whole new concepts and stuff

Beginner is clean.

GL for rank !

chouyaa wrote:

hi there,
as requested in My Super Modding Queue

Satan's Insane

00:20:465 (20465|1,20465|5) - will be more fit to the sound since thats a 1/2 synth that the sound is similar with 00:17:799 (17799|4,17799|0) - which is followed by LNs I think that doesn't similiar ngak sama itu coba dengerin lagi
so it would be more consistent on what sound u map with LNs.

00:25:632 (25632|1) - shouldnt be a note here cause u didnt do that on 00:23:965 - 00:24:632 - 00:25:299 - and just following the drum i don't remember put that note :v ulah bang umo kali :v

00:28:715 (28715|5,28715|1) - pretty sure this notes are ghostnote, no sound there besides a fading sound that appear gradually to 00:29:132 - which its already layered by 00:28:799 (28799|0,28799|6) - i think it's sound like this 00:27:715 (27715|3,27715|4,27799|5,27799|2,28049|1,28132|4,28132|5) - sama kok bang

00:44:799 (44799|4,44799|3,44799|2) - no need to put 3 notes imo, its not even louder than 00:44:465 (44465|2,44465|4,44632|4,44632|2) - etc Fixed udh dibetulin

00:35:465 (35465|1) - move to col 7? so empty on the right hand ok

00:43:465 (43465|1,43465|5,43632|5,43632|1,43799|1,43799|5) - and the other above, separate them every 3 notes in 1/1 snap like that is weird and doesnt feel match with the kicks itself. also it might be confusing when it played fixed udh dibetulin
prefer to do this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9817579

00:52:799 - 4 notes here eh? pretty sure its the same compared with 00:44:799 - okay ulah bang umo lagi ini :v

00:54:799 (54799|4,54799|5) - totally ghost notes, u'll know when u hear it in 25% playrate even in 100% playrate. yeah i think so

01:34:132 - should be 3 notes. fixed

01:41:799 (101799|1,102132|1,102465|1,102799|1,103132|1,103465|1) - rearrange. done

01:51:465 (111465|3,112799|3) - couldnt understand whats this LNs stand for whereas there are only 1/2 synths that has been covered by the LNs 01:51:632 (111632|4,111799|2,111965|4) - etc fixed

chouyaa should learn more how to mod 7k properly
also umo, pls check ur request on my queue, there's a reply about ur M4M

goodluck <3

Slaerd wrote:

Hiya from my modding queue

[Satan's Insane]

1. 01:27:132 (87132|2,87215|3,87299|4,87382|5) - The glide really stands out so I think adding an LN or changing the pattern into an LN one would fit more just like here 01:33:965 (93965|2) - fixed.
   Example

   
2. 01:34:132 - Missing triple here. done
3. 01:40:632 (100632|6) - I think there's space to fit 1/8s here.
4. 01:43:299 (103299|6) - ^ but even more space.
5. 01:47:965 (107965|6) - ^ fixed all this
6. 01:48:465 (108465|5) - LNs would fit better here too. i'l take your sugestion
   Suggestion

   

Beginner is clean.

GL for rank !

Lenfried- wrote:

very interesting.

i see some nice svs would be a shame if i... throw in a lot of suggestions?

sv

00:18:132 - 00:18:215 - not sv but there are some really random ass kiai like nobody would even notice it even happened.
00:34:132 - 00:34:215 - likewise
01:12:799 - 01:12:882 - seriously why are you doing these they are for effects to represent the change in music, alot of ranked maps have those

ok now to actual svs

00:07:465 - now this intro has a very mild spooky tone this would be best to have a slowjam like that of 00:55:465 - so use a x0.8 for this
00:12:799 - drop a x0.9 here
00:18:132 - get a x1 here
00:21:632 - use a similar effect here like that of 00:54:799 - or a simple teleport will do. or a 00:21:632 - x0.2 and 00:21:882 - x3.4 as a jumpy sv effect nah I dont really like that suggestion, its a bit weird to play imo
01:14:132 - wrong values here btw the 1.6 should be a 5.9 considering how the slowjam is placed on the next 1/8 tick (maths 5.9 + 0.3*7 = 8 ticks)
01:15:132 - there needs to be a jumpy sv here mostly because of the sudden introduction of the vocals. This time do a x3.1 in 01:15:132 - and a x0.3 in 01:15:174 - revert back to x1 by 01:15:299 -
01:36:799 - you can add a note here and use svs like that in 01:14:132 - as there are clock ticks here
01:50:799 - not as required but you can do that here too. If you think that specific application is too "strong" you can do either an slowjam to speed up or a 1/2 or 1/4+3/4 combi sv like:

speedup :
01:50:799 - 0.9
01:50:965 - 1
01:51:132 - 1.1
01:51:299 - 1.2
01:51:465 - 1
1/2
01:50:799 - 1.7
01:50:882 - 0.3
rinse and repeat
or a 1/4+3/4
01:50:799 - 3.1
01:50:840 - 0.3
rinse and repeat

01:59:465 - slowjam

queen of hearts

00:43:465 - i like the concept of this section but it would be nice to have that note moved to 4 for an actual descending motion. consider https://puu.sh/yPr1W/27eb3a57b9.png
00:49:799 (49799|6) - while i know youre extending this to prevent dead air, it's rather inconsistent to map this music box sound as a 1/1 when everything else is a 1/2
00:55:465 - when you have a really strong static sound like this section you are expected to do a more complex ln section. This is quite easy would like too see denser lns like for starters doubling stuff like 00:55:465 (55465|0,56799|6) - hm. I actully prefere my pattern because I dont really want to make that section harder then it is since that part is somewhat calm then the rest of the map so I would like to have it a bit easier then harder
01:08:632 - i dont see anything wrong with adding a 1/2 ln here
considering how 01:16:799 - is quite a lot easier than 01:38:132 - you can use larger chords for the former just to justify the sr and have something actually fairly difficult than being just a pushover section well I have no idea how I should add more longer LNs since there are not alot of sounds that can support them
01:38:132 - you know what would be more fun? more lns even a simple ln layer conversion would make this second bit of the kiai spicier consider something like: https://puu.sh/yPXUv/2e603b48ca.png um no thanks, even tho that I like the idea I wont apply since I think that this currect patter has alredy enough of LNs and I think that adding more would be a bit too much. That part is too hard for me to play it and I dont want to have patterns that I can't play in this difficulty since its alredy hard enough and knowing me if I'm going to add more LNs I'm just going to make it more cancerouus then it is.
01:45:965 - another playsafe thing, it's perfectly fine to add a 1/2 ln at col 2 it's more consistent and is not actually as difficult as you may think
01:56:799 - this is a very bland take on what is potentially a fun song ender. consider using chordstreams like that in 01:12:799 - and use a more rigid 1/8ths like this as a template: https://puu.sh/yPY92/dc353710c9.png

refreshing break from what ive been modding lately best of luck!

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

Hello~ here come to my modding :3

Modding

[Queen of Hearts]

1. 00:20:632 (20632|1,20632|0,20632|2,20632|4) - I think it should be normal note It doesn't same 00:20:299 (20299|4,20465|3) - like these sound
   
2. 00:23:799 (23799|0,23799|2,24132|2) - Ctrl+H and move to same place
   
3. 00:27:132 - How about
   This pattern?
   
   
4. 00:33:132 - add one more note at 1 col
   It make the more balance
   
5. 00:43:465 (43465|0,43465|6,43465|2,43632|6,43632|4,43632|0,43799|4,43799|0,43799|2,43965|0,43965|6,43965|2,44132|6,44132|2,44132|4,44299|0,44299|2,44299|4,44465|2,44465|0,44632|0) -
   Ah.... If you don't want change the pattern... ok .. but I recommend change the pattern I'll just rearange some notes
   
6. 01:08:465 (68465|0,68632|0,68799|0) - what's for make these ? I think just make the LN better like same LN like 01:07:965 (67965|5,68299|3) - these
   or change the LN to normal note
   
7. 01:15:299 (75299|6,75299|4,75465|0,75465|2,75799|4,76132|0,76132|1) - what do you want for sound to LN It need to make clearly
   I think you follow the vocal sound but it's not matched you have to do move that
   The first vocal sound it's start at 01:15:299 - here and end at 01:15:632 - here
   Second vocal sound is start at 01:15:799 - here and end at 01:15:965 - here
   Third is start at 01:16:132 - here and end at 01:16:465 - here I'm aware of your concerns but I think that would just be boring to play so i just split first two LNs to "A" 2nd two "lice" next one for "In" next two for "Voo" and last one for "dooland"
   
   if you follow vocal + another sound
   make it clearly
   
8. 01:18:299 (78299|1,78299|2,78465|1,78465|2) - this and 01:20:965 (80965|6,80965|4,81132|6,81132|4) - this it's a same sound
   why 01:18:465 (78465|2,78465|1) - these LN are more long ?
   
9. 01:22:799 (82799|5) - move to 1 col
   
10. 01:26:132 (86132|5,86132|4,86132|6) - why those LN ? it doesn't same sound 01:26:299 (86299|0,86299|2,86299|1,86465|4,86465|6,86465|5) - those
    Change to normal note I'd make them shorter since they have the violin sound as 01:23:632 (83632|0,83632|1,83799|0,83799|1) -
    
11. 01:26:799 (86799|1) - just change to normal note or make one more LN at 01:26:965 - here
    
12. 01:30:049 (90049|6) - delete this one it's doesn't matter to note's number

Good luck

MrDorian wrote:

Hello!
I'm from RRM queue and here's the mod you requested!

Queen of Hearts

1. I feel like using pitch revelancy for the beginning (so from 00:07:465 - to 00:17:799 -) would be the best option, because the part is really calm, pitch is easily heard, so it won't be a problem to use pr (like this https://puu.sh/yVwPi/aa649d64e6.png for instance)
2. 00:23:465 - 00:34:132 - lack of the space usage here hurts me really much ok?
3. 00:30:465 (30465|2,30632|4) - these two lns should be changed to 1 3/4 long ln, listen to the sound
4. 00:31:632 (31632|0,31632|1,31799|0,31799|1) - how about changing them to 23 13, the minijack on first column is pretty big and pitch changes a bit as well, so it would be nice to express the change no, sound is repetitive so it doesen't really hurt for minijacks plus its not painful to play
5. 00:38:299 - the lack of notes in second column doesn't look good to me, could you move some notes? (00:41:465 - here in sixth column as well)
6. 00:43:465 - I feel like this pattern could represent the song better if it was like https://puu.sh/yVxPq/b5c8e83e89.png this. Bells' pitch is decreasing and so the vocal's is and showing it like I did. Also your pattern is a bit uncomfortable in my opinion.
7. 01:13:299 (73299|3,73382|4,73465|5,73549|4,73632|3,73715|4,73799|5,73882|4,73965|3,74049|4) - this looks really uncomfortable to me and isn't really predictable by the player, so I would change that chordstream to https://puu.sh/yVyaW/283d6e1d75.png or something similiar
8. 01:36:132 - I do not really like this pattern because of the minijack on 2 it makes, the transition from burst to 12 is pretty meh, yet playable. I'd suggest you changing it to https://puu.sh/yVygz/b4b152b12d.png to prevent the 5notes minijack and to make it more pitch relevant I dont see a problem in here tbh, I think its fine how it is

I'll probably mod the rest later, I feel too bad now, sorry.
Good luck with the map!

YaHao wrote:

[General]
Why the song title is Alice In Voodooland (Edit Ver) instead of Alice In Voodooland feat.Aikapin
http://www.tanocstore.net/shopdetail/000000000946/
http://notebookrecords.net/cd/nbcd-026/ I asked IamKwan for metadata, here is the pic. but I think because the original version is longer then this one because I think the official one is like 4 minute long or something. https://i.imgur.com/rK9EHD1.png

[Beginner]
00:18:132 - I'm thinking add an extra note here like what you did here 00:20:799 -
02:02:132 - 01:59:465 - You might want to make them both the same notes amount as they sounds the same I think the first one is much louder then the 2nd one so thats why the first one is double

[Normal]
00:20:799 (20799|1) - Suggesting move this note the 7th col, make the whole pattern more balance. The current is too heavy on the left hand

Nice map

YaHao wrote:

There is a 02:15 long youtube video link directly from the offical website and i'm sure its the one you used.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OS5TrOWb3Yw and there is no "Edit Ver" in the title
the "Edit Ver" is only 02:01 long which you can see from
http://recochoku.jp/song/S1003537264/
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B01LXTORHB/

I dont see any differences between these two version of the song beside the length, so i guess they both ok??

YaHao wrote:

There is a 02:15 long youtube video link directly from the offical website and i'm sure its the one you used.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OS5TrOWb3Yw and there is no "Edit Ver" in the title
the "Edit Ver" is only 02:01 long which you can see from
http://recochoku.jp/song/S1003537264/
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B01LXTORHB/

I dont see any differences between these two version of the song beside the length, so i guess they both ok??

jkkd wrote:

hihi

about the title: i have this song, the title is like what you have rn but it's around 5 minutes long, i think this should be edit ver. will fix later since I'm getting cancer from this metadata

[Beginner]
00:10:132 - move to left hand (also rearrange stuff after so its back to alternating hands) I don't see a reason to do that
also i noticed theres no notes in 5 from 01:28:465 - 01:36:132 but that might just be my shitty ocd mapping style
[Normal]
00:59:465 - imo i find this more comfortable in 4+6
02:02:132 (122132|4) - this should probably start at 02:03:465 - or 02:02:799 - since thats when this sound becomes loud enough to be noticed well thats correct but thats not where it starts so I'm leaving it like it is
[Hyper]
00:52:132 - i would move this to 2 and 00:52:465 - to 5 (but thats really minor and probably subjective) I prefer my pattern

nice song and map

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~
1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Beginner

1.00:21:465 (21465|5) - move to 4 col.the first reason:you can reference your Normal diffhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10004166.the second reason:you can use this mapping very well to express a fade out. I don't really want to have the notes placed the same in every difficulty so thats why its like that, plus I don't see the problem of having it like it is
2.00:28:799 (28799|3) - move to 3 col.you can make where i marked it up to a balance00:27:465 (27465|5,27799|1,28132|4) -
3.01:10:799 (70799|4,70965|3,71132|1,71299|2) - change pattern to (7,5,1,3) may be better.
4.01:44:465 (104465|0,104799|5,104965|4,105132|3,105465|1) - change this maybe betterhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10004205 this is fine imo

Normal

1.00:28:799 (28799|0) - move to 2

Hyper

1.00:21:132 (21132|2) - should double this ,put not in 1 col&add kick hitsound
2.00:38:799 (38799|6) - move to 2,if you follow my advice,you will find these have the same spacehttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10004252 this is fine imo, I dont really see the problem in it
3.00:54:715 (54715|6,54715|4) - in my opinion,these notes error mapping a sounds. delete it they represent the loud pitch change in the sound
4.01:50:965 (110965|5) - move to 7,its will have these mirror like 01:51:132 (111132|2,111299|0) -

Satan's Insane

1.00:32:132 (32132|2) - move to 1
2.01:34:799 (94799|2) - move to 6

good luck!

lucari0lu wrote:

Queen of Hearts

01:32:632 (92632|0,92674|1,92715|2,92757|3) - this burst in the music is slightly different than the other bursts in this section, it's much faster. Therefore, I would map this differently to have it stand out, probably by mapping it as a faster burst. I don't really understand what you mean by "faster burst" well yeah its different but there is not enough space for me to make it diffrent

01:56:632 (116632|0,116632|6,116674|1,116674|5,116715|2,116715|4,116757|3) - same as above ^

01:56:632 (116632|0,116632|6,116674|1,116674|5,116715|2,116715|4,116757|3) - I wouldn't change the column this note is in, since it stays on the same note with the same sound in the music. I would rework this section for consistency. I think you got the wrong timestamp

Super solid overall, fun to play

Hestia- wrote:

hihi Umo- !! helo
[Beginner]
01:44:965 (104965|4) - Move to 4 for balance ?
[Normal]
00:20:632 - Add 2 I think that would be too complex for Normal diff
01:26:465 - Add 5
01:26:799 - Add 1
01:26:965 - Add 3 nope, would break the layering
01:38:132 (98132|0) - End LN at 01:40:632 -
01:40:632 - Add LN on 2
[Hyper]
01:57:632 - Add 2 I don't want any notes there tbh. It would break the layering since there is a burst in the song so it would just be weird to play imo
01:57:799 - Add 1 ^
01:57:965 - Add 7 ^
[Satan's Insane]
00:18:049 - Add SV of 1.3
00:20:715 - Add SV of 0.6
00:27:507 - Change SV to 0.9
00:27:840 - Change SV to 0.9
00:28:174 - Change SV to 0.9
00:28:840 - Change SV to 0.9
00:29:132 - Add SV of 1.0
00:47:382 - Add SV of 1.3
00:50:049 - Add SV of 1.3
00:54:840 - Move SV to 00:55:215 -
01:15:174 - Change SV to 0.85
01:37:507 - Change SV to 0.85
01:37:840 - Change SV to 0.65
01:50:799 - Change SV to 0.9 ?
[540's Extreme]
Move SV of 0.1 to 00:55:215 -
01:14:132 - 01:15:465 - Change SVs of 0.3 to 0.6
[Queen of Hearts]
00:07:465 - Change SV from 0.8 to 0.84
00:12:799 - Change SV from 0.9 to 0.92
01:54:132 - 01:58:132 - difficulty spike how to play practice .i.

gogo good luck !~

AncuL wrote:

idk why i mod maps but i do so here we go
from my queue

[Queen of Hearts]

1. 00:20:632 (20632|1,20632|2,20632|0,20799|4,20799|6,20799|5,20799|3) - i'd anchor this for better feedback
2. 00:34:965 - add a note because there's a syllable here. probably on 2
3. 00:44:465 (44465|3,44465|1,44632|3,44632|1) - why don't these chords have 3 notes the sound is really low comparet to other drum sounds on that part. But I'll consider this before qual
4. 00:52:799 - add a note (preferably on 4 for the anchor)
5. 01:00:132 (60132|6,60132|3,60465|5,60465|2) - these should go to right instead of left uh any reason why? I like them how they are place rn so no change
6. 01:02:799 (62799|3,63132|2) - swap the location for pitch didnt follow pitch there lol. But I'll consider
7. 01:06:132 - this should have 4 notes
8. 01:08:465 (68465|2,68632|2,68799|2) - maybe move these three notes to right hand because right now it's very boring with only left hand doing something
9. 01:15:799 - might change the positions of the LNs to 4 and 6 instead of only 5
10. 01:16:465 - add LN on 4 probably?
11. 01:18:632 - 01:21:299 - 01:23:965 - add a note because this part feels very empty
12. 01:18:465 (78465|2,78465|1) - 01:21:132 (81132|6,81132|4) - 01:23:799 (83799|1,83799|0) - you can extend these LNs by 1/4 so they have a length of 1/2 and they make their parts way less emtpy
13. 01:26:299 (86299|2,86299|1,86299|0,86465|5,86465|6,86465|4) - probably the most boring way to represent the sounds... do this instead https://i.imgur.com/17MwPwv.png
14. 01:29:132 - 01:34:299 - the same two points i talked earlier
15. 01:47:965 (107965|5) - might move to 5 to reduce the amount of anchors I really dislike how that plays, I'll figure something out
16. 01:50:132 - might do something so the left hand isn't just doing 1/1 patterns
17. 01:50:465 - why is the next 1 bar empty? feels very empty for me
18. 01:53:132 - https://i.imgur.com/hWzQ0q5.png might be able to represent the pitch better
19. 01:56:799 - I'm actually fine with having a 3-note chordstream here Hm, I'm not so sure about that tbh. If you want you can PM some good suggestion so I'll consider this for now
20. 01:59:465 - add notes on 6 and 7? seems logical because the song "ends" here I think this is fine lol. I dont really see the any problem to leave them as they are
21. outro - PR could be better eh I didnt really focus on mapping pitch so...
22. 02:04:799 - add a green line with below 25% hitsound volume because these notes are uncomfortably loud 02:04:799 (124799|4,124799|0) -