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JAM Project - Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu]

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Sagisawa-Yukari

Mythol wrote:

[General]
Add whistle on the last spinner for all diffs! --fixed

[Easy]
00:35:931 (2) - Remove clap --fixed
00:41:738 (2) - Remove the clap on repeat and change the finish to clap on tail -fixed
00:48:318 (4) - Remove clap --fixed
00:51:415 (4) - ^ --fixed
00:55:286 (1) - Remove finish --fixed
01:03:802 (2,3,1) - Try
2 = Finish
3 = Clap
1 = Finish (head) --fixed
01:07:673 (1) - Finish + clap? sounds good o: --fixed
01:14:641 (2) - Remove clap --fixed

[Normal]
00:21:609 (2) - Fix claps starting from here they are on 1+3 beats --fixed
00:39:415 (3) - Remove all claps on this slider --fixed
00:40:189 (1) - Clap --fixed
00:51:028 (2) - Remove clap on end --fixed
00:51:802 (3) - Clap --fixed
Don't forget to re add claps
00:58:383 (1,2,3,1,2) - This will play better and follows vocals better
--oh,I think now it is well
01:03:415 (1) - Fix claps from here, they became every 1+3 beats again.. --fixed
01:04:576 (4) - Replace clap with finish --fixed
01:15:415 (1) - This is more accurate if you make the slider repeat on 01:15:706 but I guess current one is also fine.. ---Ummm...

[Hard]
00:34:189 (5) - Move this clap to previous note --fixed
00:38:835 (2,3) - Like this~
--all right~fixed
00:43:480 (2,3) - Same ^ --fixed
00:58:964 (4) - Change to this!
--fixed >A<
01:00:512 (4,5) - ^ --fixed
01:20:641 (2) - Remove clap on end --fixed
01:21:222 (3) - Clap --fixed



[Extra]
00:20:447 (7) - Add NC here to make this rhythm easier to read --fixed
00:23:738 (4) - Move this to 00:23:544 and fix spacing (I suggest 304/256) --not mod it
00:26:641 (5) - Extend to 00:26:931 --not mod it
00:29:931 (4) - Move to 00:30:028 (296/16) ---not mod it
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wow lol I'm not sure if this is rankable.. --no problem...
00:51:706 (10) - Remove this note, and make 5 note stream starting 00:51:802 --not mod it
01:13:673 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is not good.. change to this
--OK,fixed
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really not good ._. --no mod it

gl~
thank you for modding~
Axey
再不rank我儿子都要出生了

ExTrA

毛夫人的排版太让人蛋碎了..又是个那么固执的人 哎

00:18:415(1)-spinner还是到这里结束比较合适

前奏应该比较适合多加点clap

00:20:060(5,7)-add clap
00:21:609(2,4,7)-^
00:22:577(1,2,3)-把(1)换成note 然后把(2)的折返去掉 00:22:770-这里拉条slider
(1)头上加个whistle (2)头上加个clap 尾上加个whistle (3)的whistle去掉
00:24:318(3,4)-add clap (3)只要头上就可以了
下面这图是我觉得这样放比较合适 如果你觉得这么改比较好的话 改完来问我音效的加法
反正前奏部分你就往24白线上加clap 合适就保留 不合适就删 whistle也不用加太多 参考我上面的就行 不然会有点喧嚣
00:45:996(5)-add NC
00:48:512(12)-remove clap
这部分的clap加在二四白线上就可以了 太多也吵

水梦部分我就不看了 放心
SamiPale
给贵阳军区跪跪
Flask
好久的圖 好像很厲害的樣子

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Untick "Letterbox during breaks" in all standard diff. There's no breaks & you've added a video
  2. Rotte's Insane has different Preview Time, please change to 58251 (Current 58189)
  3. Remove "Jam Project" from tags since that's the title of the song
[ ExTrA Collab]
  1. 00:16:638 (1) - Move this spinner end at 00:18:574 - (1/4 later) to make consistent with other diff
  2. 00:25:735 (1) - I don't think reserve at downbeat is a great idea. 感覺重音缺少打擊感... use note + 1/2 slider instead
  3. 00:29:026 (1) - Remake this slider please, it's so ugly imo lol 扭的這麼奇捌有意義? Try this
  4. 00:30:380 (1,1,1) - Please make their spacing consistent. 前兩個中間有空拍 後兩個中間沒空拍可是spacing卻一樣想害誰
  5. 00:46:058 (5) - NC to prove this is different to 00:45:671 (1,2,3,4) -
  6. 01:09:574 (2,3) - NC since SV change, so make an attention will make the pattern more readable
  7. 01:24:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - change the rhythm to this, your rhythm is hard to read & unfit with songs imo

    This diff needs more work on the flow/placement imo.
[ Rotte's Insane]
  1. 00:22:058 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel your flow is a bit awkward, maybe try smf like this?

    212,88,22058,1,0,0:0:0
    111,48,22251,1,0,0:0:0
    43,132,22445,1,0,0:0:0
    102,223,22639,1,0,0:0:0
    206,195,22832,2,0,P|240:228|248:280,2,90
  2. 00:32:122 (4,1) - You use soft-sound at (4), so swap their NCes to make an attention to the player
  3. 00:46:832 (1,2) - This jump appears so soon, and the flow is not good at all, consider reduce the spacing (put at x:296, y:328)
  4. 01:19:929 (6) - Why you change the spacing here? There's no reason to make a jump after somewhere should use same spacing. (3,4,5,6)這裡的音樂都一樣 沒有特別起伏 所以用同樣spacing然後在(6,1)做個跳感覺好一點
[ Hard]
  1. 00:21:477 (2,3) - I have no idea why you add jump like this. (3) should be place with 1.0 DS. Anyway put (3) to x:248, y:80 to make a better flow
  2. 00:34:058 (4) - missing clap or serious?
  3. 00:34:445 (6) - Remake this by a random curve slider or something please, current is so ugly
  4. 00:34:445 (6,1) - why anti-jump here? makes me feel it's a 1/2 part actually. Use 1.0 DS to replace this please
  5. 00:39:090 (3) - Why change spacing? A mistake? lol Use 1.0 DS to place this please since I don't see any reason to change spacing here
  6. 00:39:864 (1,2) - I'd use 1/1 slider to change these objects, like you did at 00:41:413 (1) -
  7. 01:12:768 (3) - 我覺得要做跳就做大一點 1.2跟1.0看起來差距真的不大 但是就變的很醜 不然就是都統一用1.0就好了
[ Normal]
  1. 00:53:413 (3) - I'll use 2 notes instead this slider because the downbeat is at sliderend. 這裡的音樂感覺就是前面跟後面不同句 用slider串在一起變的超違和
  2. 01:17:026 (3,1) - Swap nces is better imo. That's your nc rule...
  3. 01:25:542 (1,2) - (有夠nazi)這兩個對稱嘛 (2)ctrl+H過去跟(1)沒完全重合
[ Easy]
  1. 00:22:445 (2) - clap instead finish to make consistent with other diff. Finish here is soooooo unfit D:
  2. 01:15:477 (1) - (end) remove finish
加油!
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Flask wrote:

好久的圖 好像很厲害的樣子

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Untick "Letterbox during breaks" in all standard diff. There's no breaks & you've added a video --fixed
  2. Rotte's Insane has different Preview Time, please change to 58251 (Current 58189) --fixed
  3. Remove "Jam Project" from tags since that's the title of the song
--fixed

[ ExTrA Collab]
  1. 00:16:638 (1) - Move this spinner end at 00:18:574 - (1/4 later) to make consistent with other diff --fixed
  2. 00:25:735 (1) - I don't think reserve at downbeat is a great idea. 感覺重音缺少打擊感... use note + 1/2 slider instead --no mod it
  3. 00:29:026 (1) - Remake this slider please, it's so ugly imo lol 扭的這麼奇捌有意義? Try this
    --不,这很符合我的美学
  4. 00:30:380 (1,1,1) - Please make their spacing consistent. 前兩個中間有空拍 後兩個中間沒空拍可是spacing卻一樣想害誰 --no mod it
  5. 00:46:058 (5) - NC to prove this is different to 00:45:671 (1,2,3,4) - --fixed
  6. 01:09:574 (2,3) - NC since SV change, so make an attention will make the pattern more readable --fixed
  7. 01:24:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - change the rhythm to this, your rhythm is hard to read & unfit with songs imo

    This diff needs more work on the flow/placement imo.
--no mod it


[ Hard]
  1. 00:21:477 (2,3) - I have no idea why you add jump like this. (3) should be place with 1.0 DS. Anyway put (3) to x:248, y:80 to make a better flow --fixed I put to x:244,y:100
  2. 00:34:058 (4) - missing clap or serious? --no mod it
  3. 00:34:445 (6) - Remake this by a random curve slider or something please, current is so ugly --fixed
  4. 00:34:445 (6,1) - why anti-jump here? makes me feel it's a 1/2 part actually. Use 1.0 DS to replace this please --fixed
  5. 00:39:090 (3) - Why change spacing? A mistake? lol Use 1.0 DS to place this please since I don't see any reason to change spacing here --fixed
  6. 00:39:864 (1,2) - I'd use 1/1 slider to change these objects, like you did at 00:41:413 (1) - --no mod it
  7. 01:12:768 (3) - 我覺得要做跳就做大一點 1.2跟1.0看起來差距真的不大 但是就變的很醜 不然就是都統一用1.0就好了
--change 1.3 DS

[ Normal]
  1. 00:53:413 (3) - I'll use 2 notes instead this slider because the downbeat is at sliderend. 這裡的音樂感覺就是前面跟後面不同句 用slider串在一起變的超違和 --fixed
  2. 01:17:026 (3,1) - Swap nces is better imo. That's your nc rule... --fixed
  3. 01:25:542 (1,2) - (有夠nazi)這兩個對稱嘛 (2)ctrl+H過去跟(1)沒完全重合
--fixed

[ Easy]
  1. 00:22:445 (2) - clap instead finish to make consistent with other diff. Finish here is soooooo unfit D: --fixed
  2. 01:15:477 (1) - (end) remove finish
--fixed

加油!
OK my diff has been checked,and I'll wait Rotte to finish check her diff.Thanks for your modding~
Rotte

Flask wrote:

好久的圖 好像很厲害的樣子

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Untick "Letterbox during breaks" in all standard diff. There's no breaks & you've added a video
  2. Rotte's Insane has different Preview Time, please change to 58251 (Current 58189)
  3. Remove "Jam Project" from tags since that's the title of the song

[ Rotte's Insane]
  1. 00:22:058 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel your flow is a bit awkward, maybe try smf like this? I changed it with others ways

    212,88,22058,1,0,0:0:0
    111,48,22251,1,0,0:0:0
    43,132,22445,1,0,0:0:0
    102,223,22639,1,0,0:0:0
    206,195,22832,2,0,P|240:228|248:280,2,90
  2. 00:32:122 (4,1) - You use soft-sound at (4), so swap their NCes to make an attention to the player ok~
  3. 00:46:832 (1,2) - This jump appears so soon, and the flow is not good at all, consider reduce the spacing (put at x:296, y:328) I changed it with others ways
  4. 01:19:929 (6) - Why you change the spacing here? There's no reason to make a jump after somewhere should use same spacing. (3,4,5,6)這裡的音樂都一樣 沒有特別起伏 所以用同樣spacing然後在(6,1)做個跳感覺好一點 同样也是用其他办法改的

加油!
http://puu.sh/1HEnK
Leorda
Hi there

[Easy]
00:58:445 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it's hidden for beginners while gameplay
01:10:832 (1) - ^ (hitbursts are also overlap this too)


[Normal]
00:18:961 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden due to blend w/ default spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553078
01:10:832 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it's hidden for beginners while gameplay
01:17:800 (2) - Why finish?
01:18:187 (3) - Clap?


[Hard]
00:21:090 (4) - Why finish?
00:25:542 (4) - ^
00:34:058 (4) - Clap?
00:34:445 (6) - Clap at tail slider?
00:40:832 (4) - Why finish?
01:25:542 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden due to blend w/ default spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553078


[ExTrA Collab]
* If this collab, please name the part with SB elements inside this map


Once you done, in-game PM me
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
00:58:445 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it's hidden for beginners while gameplay --fixed,move up
01:10:832 (1) - ^ (hitbursts are also overlap this too) --fixed,move right


[Normal]
00:18:961 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden due to blend w/ default spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553078 --fixed,change blue
01:10:832 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it's hidden for beginners while gameplay --fixed,move up
01:17:800 (2) - Why finish? --fixed,remove finish now
01:18:187 (3) - Clap? --fixed,add clap now


[Hard]
00:21:090 (4) - Why finish? --fixed,remove finish
00:25:542 (4) - ^ --fixed,remove finish
00:34:058 (4) - Clap? --fixed
00:34:445 (6) - Clap at tail slider? --fixed
00:40:832 (4) - Why finish? --fixed
01:25:542 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden due to blend w/ default spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553078 --fixed,change pink colour


[ExTrA Collab]
* If this collab, please name the part with SB elements inside this map --fixed


Once you done, in-game PM me
Leorda
IRC Modding
19:05 Sagisawa-Yukari: Hi,Leorda.
19:05 *Sagisawa-Yukari is listening to Jam Project - Meteor Lovers (TV Size)
19:05 Sagisawa-Yukari: all done
19:05 Leorda: ok
19:05 Sagisawa-Yukari: please check it
19:17 Leorda: um hey
19:17 Sagisawa-Yukari: ?
19:17 Leorda: there some inconsistent preview time through each diff. Please fix it using notepad
19:18 Leorda: also, remove letterbox at Collab diff for consistency through all diff
19:18 Sagisawa-Yukari: oh.Let me see
19:19 Sagisawa-Yukari: Umm...which diff's preview time is different?
19:19 Leorda: Extra Collab only
19:19 Sagisawa-Yukari: OK
19:19 Leorda: also, 00:34:445 (6)- in hard diff, why clap?
19:20 Sagisawa-Yukari: OK this clap removed
19:22 Sagisawa-Yukari: OK,I sumbit again
19:24 Sagisawa-Yukari: remove letterbox at Rotte's Insane
19:24 Sagisawa-Yukari: orz..I remeber I have removed but why...orz
19:32 Leorda: ok
19:32 Leorda: i'll check
19:34 Leorda: hello?
19:35 Sagisawa-Yukari: ?
19:35 Leorda: Preview time in Extra collab are not consistent with other diff
19:35 Sagisawa-Yukari: oh...
19:36 Sagisawa-Yukari: Umm...Let me sumbit and download again ...
19:38 Sagisawa-Yukari: OK...now ExTra collab's previewTime will be the same as other diff
19:38 Sagisawa-Yukari: I have sumbited again...
19:40 Leorda: ummmm, looks good~

Bubbled
Melophobia
[General]
  1. Obviously the artist has to be "JAM Project"
  2. The original title of this song is "流星Lovers (Ryuusei Lovers)" 流星 translates into "meteor", but I think it's best to use original one. or at least add "ryuusei" into tags so that people can seach for this song with the original title.
  3. The source is also wrong; you should add subtitle as well. it should be "Super Robot Wars OG2 -The Inspector-".
I'm sorry that I have to pop this ><
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
  1. Obviously the artist has to be "JAM Project" --fixed
  2. The original title of this song is "流星Lovers (Ryuusei Lovers)" 流星 translates into "meteor", but I think it's best to use original one. or at least add "ryuusei" into tags so that people can seach for this song with the original title. --fixed
  3. The source is also wrong; you should add subtitle as well. it should be "Super Robot Wars OG2 -The Inspector-". --fixed
I'm sorry that I have to pop this ><
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

BakaHuang wrote:

再不rank我儿子都要出生了

ExTrA

毛夫人的排版太让人蛋碎了..又是个那么固执的人 哎

00:18:415(1)-spinner还是到这里结束比较合适 ---最后想了想还是结束在原地比较好。。

前奏应该比较适合多加点clap

00:20:060(5,7)-add clap
00:21:609(2,4,7)-^ --综合前面的节奏感觉还是不要加了
00:22:577(1,2,3)-把(1)换成note 然后把(2)的折返去掉 00:22:770-这里拉条slider
--fixed
(1)头上加个whistle (2)头上加个clap 尾上加个whistle (3)的whistle去掉 --最后考虑下whistle和clap都不加了
00:24:318(3,4)-add clap (3)只要头上就可以了 --no mod it
下面这图是我觉得这样放比较合适 如果你觉得这么改比较好的话 改完来问我音效的加法
--这一段的地方还行,保留原来的吧
反正前奏部分你就往24白线上加clap 合适就保留 不合适就删 whistle也不用加太多 参考我上面的就行 不然会有点喧嚣
00:45:996(5)-add NC --fixed
00:48:512(12)-remove clap --fixed
这部分的clap加在二四白线上就可以了 太多 也吵

水梦部分我就不看了 放心
abalee
每次過來看都是這map被戳 233
Strawberry
  • --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--
[ General]
 
  1. None!
 
[ Easy]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:55:348 (3) - i'd prefer to add a circle here and put it after slider(2) with finish, after that, shorten and delay the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 tick
    2. 01:07:735 - same pattern as above..
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:25:929 (1) - umm~~ sounds like there should be a finish on that start~~ i can heard the vocal with "A~~~" , and finish is very suitable imo. :p
    2. 01:14:703 (2) - 也加个finish? 很燃喔.
 
[ Normal]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:55:348 - 这里和easy一样,下面的就不讲了.
    2. 01:23:219 - 这里也是~
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 01:15:477 (1) - clap on that end.
    2. 01:20:122 (1) - 这么燃不加个finish嘛 :3
 
[ Hard]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 对了,还是提一句滑条前加circle的那个梗,如果别的diff都加了这里也改改吧~ 个人觉得很适合这首歌。
    2. 00:31:638 (6) - 这里听起来节奏理当是个四连啊~ 试试这样的节奏?~ 铺面基本不用变 去掉repeat就好了~
    3. 01:20:122 (1) - 这个叠在原地打起来有点别扭。。前面刚是一个往返,觉得打这里的时候下意识的要继续往回走,所以干脆把这个滑条往下移,像这样?
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. clear~!
 
[ Insane]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:20:800 - 这里不连打不性福!!
    2. 00:23:413 (5) - 不能理解这里为什么空一拍。。感觉一空把前面烘托出来的一点东西都扔掉了。。塞个circle放在x:224 y:312吧。
    3. 00:39:768 - add a circle and stack with (1,2)? plays fine and sounds better imo.
    4. 01:25:542 (9) - 果断要加两个repeat啊!~~或者再加两个然后spinner后移1/4也可以。现在觉得缺东西..
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. clear..!~
 
[ ExTrA Collab]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. clear.
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:42:961 (4) - sounds wired.. how about remove the clap or change it to finish?~ :3
    2. 01:03:864 (2) - move the clap which on that slider's repeat to end? sounds a bit wired in red tick..
    3. 01:25:058 (4,7,11) - add whistles on these circle?~ sounds pretty. :3
[ Aoiko]

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:20:413 - add a not here?
    2. 01:11:219 - sounds like there should be added a k.
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:20:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you followed the thing i said in suggestions of design, dddkd is much more suitable imo.
    2. 00:29:026 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try d ddk ddk ddk ?
    3. 00:31:735 (2) - 感觉用D的话更燃诶 :3
    4. 00:44:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - dddkd kdk kk
    5. 00:50:703 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dddkd kd sounds much more better and plays fun imo.
    6. 01:07:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - dddkd k kddkd k ?
    7. 01:12:671 (4) - k
    8. 01:25:155 (6) - ^
    9. 01:25:929 (1) - D
 
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神图lol 燃成渣了。~ Good luck with ranking~
Rotte
Aoi is offline,I moded it.

Strawberry wrote:

[ Aoiko]

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:20:413 - add a not here? fixed
    2. 01:11:219 - sounds like there should be added a k. Add it.
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:20:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you followed the thing i said in suggestions of design, dddkd is much more suitable imo. not really ,ddddd is moe~
    2. 00:29:026 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try d ddk ddk ddk ? ddk ddd ddk is well
    3. 00:31:735 (2) - 感觉用D的话更燃诶 :3 还是保留以前的吧...
    4. 00:44:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - dddkd kdk kk ok这个不错
    5. 00:50:703 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dddkd kd sounds much more better and plays fun imo. however,ddddd is not bad
    6. 01:07:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - dddkd k kddkd k ? not mod it
    7. 01:12:671 (4) - k ok
    8. 01:25:155 (6) - ^ fixed
    9. 01:25:929 (1) - D okey
 
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神图lol 燃成渣了。~ Good luck with ranking~

http://puu.sh/1Qzqx
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Strawberry wrote:

[ General]
 
  1. None!
 
[ Easy]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:55:348 (3) - i'd prefer to add a circle here and put it after slider(2) with finish, after that, shorten and delay the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 tick --fixed
    2. 01:07:735 - same pattern as above..
    --fixed
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:25:929 (1) - umm~~ sounds like there should be a finish on that start~~ i can heard the vocal with "A~~~" , and finish is very suitable imo. :p --fixed
    2. 01:14:703 (2) - 也加个finish? 很燃喔.
--fixed
 
[ Normal]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:55:348 - 这里和easy一样,下面的就不讲了. --fixed
    2. 01:23:219 - 这里也是~
    --fixed
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 01:15:477 (1) - clap on that end. --fixed
    2. 01:20:122 (1) - 这么燃不加个finish嘛 :3
--fixed
 
[ Hard]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 对了,还是提一句滑条前加circle的那个梗,如果别的diff都加了这里也改改吧~ 个人觉得很适合这首歌。
    2. 00:31:638 (6) - 这里听起来节奏理当是个四连啊~ 试试这样的节奏?~ 铺面基本不用变 去掉repeat就好了~ --fixed
    3. 01:20:122 (1) - 这个叠在原地打起来有点别扭。。前面刚是一个往返,觉得打这里的时候下意识的要继续往回走,所以干脆把这个滑条往下移,像这样?
    --fixed
     


     
    [ ExTrA Collab]
     
    1. Unrankable stuff
      ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
      1. None!
       
    2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
      ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
      1. clear.
       
    3. Hitsounds
      ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
      1. 00:42:961 (4) - sounds wired.. how about remove the clap or change it to finish?~ :3 --fixed
      2. 01:03:864 (2) - move the clap which on that slider's repeat to end? sounds a bit wired in red tick.. --ok remove and add clap at end of silder
      3. 01:25:058 (4,7,11) - add whistles on these circle?~ sounds pretty. :3
--fixed


 
 
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神图lol 燃成渣了。~ Good luck with ranking~
thank you for modding ><
Leorda
Before bubble

[General]
* Taiko BG are now unrankable (proof)


[Easy]
00:41:413 (1,2) - Make the same timing pattern as 00:39:864 (1,2)? For following vocal?
00:58:445 (1) - Why finish at end slider?


[Normal]
00:32:122 (1) - This slider must not have more than one slider, because i'll confuse beginner who play this diff
01:07:348 (3) - Stack under slider are confusing for beginners


[Hard]
00:21:090 (5) - Why finish?
00:25:735 (7) - ^
01:21:864 (3) - Why finish at head slider?


[Rotte's Insane]
01:18:574 (1) - Add clap at end slider?
01:20:509 (2) - Add clap?


Call me again when you're done
Rotte

Leorda wrote:

Before bubble





[Rotte's Insane]
01:18:574 (1) - Add clap at end slider? fixed
01:20:509 (2) - Add clap? fixed


Call me again when you're done
http://puu.sh/1QTZc
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Leorda wrote:

Before bubble

[General]
* Taiko BG are now unrankable (proof)
--fixed delete now

[Easy]
00:41:413 (1,2) - Make the same timing pattern as 00:39:864 (1,2)? For following vocal? --fixed,now the same pattern as 00:39:864 (1,2)
00:58:445 (1) - Why finish at end slider? ---fixed


[Normal]
00:32:122 (1) - This slider must not have more than one slider, because i'll confuse beginner who play this diff --fixed
01:07:348 (3) - Stack under slider are confusing for beginners --fixed


[Hard]
00:21:090 (5) - Why finish? --fixed
00:25:735 (7) - ^ --fixed
01:21:864 (3) - Why finish at head slider? --fixed



Call me again when you're done
Leorda
Ok then

Rebubbbled
minyeob
I think you should use "流星Lovers" for un-romanized song title... Am I wrong? D:
I saw front posts, but it was chinese so I can't understand it :<

Hearted after song title fix~
popner
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超过1 month价格面议。
图片价格是文字两倍。
SamiPale

popner wrote:

处女地广告位招租,价目表:
1 day ¥100
2 days ¥180
3 days ¥250
5 days ¥400
10 days ¥750
1 month ¥2200
超过1 month价格面议。
图片价格是文字两倍。
建议下楼抢劫 :x
Frostmourne
1st rankeddddddddd

gratz :D
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Frostmourne wrote:

1st rankeddddddddd

gratz :D
oh,thanks~><
Melophobia
congratz :D
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Melophobia wrote:

congratz :D
oh,thank you Melo chan~ :D
Cygnus
Your username is on tags. Anyway, congrats!!
Stefan

Philippines wrote:

Your username is on tags. Anyway, congrats!!
Inb4 nonsense Derank to remove the Tag.
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Philippines wrote:

Your username is on tags. Anyway, congrats!!
oh,thanks~><
Athena Tennos
lol
恭喜~~~
LKs
恭喜 来晚了233
Kawayi Rika
For normal : 00:32:122 (1,2) - Silenced slider sound weird to me.

Anyway congrats ~
Pokie
;)
Flask
恭喜啦~~
Snowy Dream
哇w 牛姐姐恭喜
Nymph
带我dota啊
Mei_coN
终于rank了,不容易啊....
Flower
congratz danna sama > <
Curisu
gratz
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