good

[Insane]
00:21:802(5,6,7)-(5,6)与(6,7)之间距离相等 但是音乐时间间隔却不等 又因为是一种颜色的note 所以要调整距离 不然会误按
00:24:125(5,1)-与00:21:222(6,1)-感觉之间的间隔最好保持一致?
00:24:318(1,2,3)-1到2的距离和2到3要相同
00:27:415~00:31:867-这段明显间距变小 不是说是insane距离就可以随便调了..作为刚尝试做图的新手我建议先试着整张图用一个ds做
后面基本上都是这个问题

先搞好距离问题再教你排版

BakaHuang wrote:

[Insane]
00:21:802(5,6,7)-(5,6)与(6,7)之间距离相等 但是音乐时间间隔却不等 又因为是一种颜色的note 所以要调整距离 不然会误按
00:24:125(5,1)-与00:21:222(6,1)-感觉之间的间隔最好保持一致?
00:24:318(1,2,3)-1到2的距离和2到3要相同
00:27:415~00:31:867-这段明显间距变小 不是说是insane距离就可以随便调了..作为刚尝试做图的新手我建议先试着整张图用一个ds做
后面基本上都是这个问题

先搞好距离问题再教你排版

谢阿黄，我觉得我还是先重做的好。。

囧queue里看见了 不过我现在电脑有问题……mod困难 以后如果再需要mod直接游戏里喊我吧

Nymph wrote:

囧queue里看见了 不过我现在电脑有问题……mod困难 以后如果再需要mod直接游戏里喊我吧

恩~多谢了

先占位._.

毛夫人真是没有人性:3

路过

0w0/
[General]
BG的分辨率改为1024*768或800*600
PreviewTime没有设定（所有难度都要统一哦
好像需要full submit一下..我没有下到video._.
kiai不统一
tag和source什么的就不看啦...不了解这个系列...


[Easy]
调整过offset？所有note都需要resnap一下的样子
-Beatmap-
00:21:608 (1,2) - 建议结束在白线上..毕竟是Easy难度...（后面也有..考虑一下ww
00:40:189 (2) - 这里一定要改的吧...和节奏对不上..
00:41:737 (2) - ^
00:45:802 (1) - 和音乐好像对不上
00:47:931 (4) - 白线
....后面都是...全都在白线上吧Orz...

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:33:414 (1,2) - timing重合了...
00:41:737 (2) - 怪异的节奏...
00:46:769 (2,1) - ....
00:58:189 (1) - 怪异的节奏...
后面没看了...应该是哪里出了问题...节奏都没有对好的样子...

[Hard]
-Beatmap-
01:09:221 (1) - 这个是要放在中间的吧0.0
其他还好w再排对称整齐一些w


[ExTrA]
-Beatmap-
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 换成repeat吧...
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 1/3虽然也不错，不过和前面1/4排成一样的不容易读出来.换一下排列？
Others are all fine~

[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:55:286 (2,3,4,5) - 重新排列一下吧...

需要map的地方还很多啊...节奏蛮好~不过排列还是要改一改ww
加油~☆

/from Irc ReQ

[General]

BG需要1024*768的大小
需要设定preview time，具体方法，每个难度将时间轴停在某个副歌开始的点上，Timing下拉菜单最后一项点一下即可。所有难度preview time必须一致
所有难度的kiai time保持一致:< Hard的kiai结束时间有点不一样，其他的没查你自己看一下吧
tag里加上Aoi的曾用名

[Easy]

00:18:901 (1) - 结束在00:19:288
00:21:608 (1,2) - ^
00:24:318 (1,2) - ^
00:27:414 (1,3) - ^后面都不说了:< EZ尽量不要压红线，而且EZ对spacing的要求很高，建议全程开着distance snapping 调整间距

[Normal]

NM对distance的要求基本和EASY一样，spacing问题很多比如00:21:608 (1) - 这个:<
同样建议全程开distance spacing调整，我下面只讲节奏的地方:<不提Spacing

00:20:447 (3) - 减少一个来回
00:33:414 (1) - 少一个来回，两个slider重叠了，这里开始vocal不好跟，我建议你干脆直接下简单的1/2节奏..现在这样非常混乱:<
00:34:769 (3,4,5) - NM里不建议三连
00:41:737 (2) - 这个这样 http://puu.sh/pS6X
00:42:705 (1) - 这个也稍微拉长一点 从 00:42:898开始 http://puu.sh/pS7f

额后面的还是不看了，我估计你改过了sv所以很多slider都重叠了:<我给了你建议也是不针对你原谱的，赶紧调整一下

[Hard]

我建议SV1.6，不过这样所有slider都要重新调整:<
音效太稀薄了

00:32:060 (1) - spacing
00:32:060 (1,2,3,4) - 要么全加一个折返...要么就不要这么放...略怪
01:06:898 (4) - 调整下形状
01:11:931 (1) - 和前面的slider拉开一点
01:14:640 (4) - ^
01:16:189 (5) - 下移一些

[Insane]

音效依然太稀薄
和Hard感觉不出难度差距
I的sv还用1.5这相当不科学啊

00:21:996 (3) - spacing
00:23:157 (1) - 拉远
00:24:899 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这一块spaicng都不等距
00:32:060 (1,2,3,4) - 同hard
00:38:835 (2) - spacing
00:48:318 (1) - 和上一个note拉开距离
00:51:028 (1) - spacing
00:55:286 (2,3,4,5) - 和之前一样，后面不说了
00:59:931 (3) - 把尾巴对准2
01:04:189 (3,4,5) - 右移两格

[Extra]

00:36:318 (x) - 少了点什么的感觉，加个circle吧
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然超级帅超级帅超级帅，但是严重怀疑会被挑刺
01:20:060 (12) - NC吧

毛夫人鬼畜最后还用1/3

Taiko mod

[Taiko]
- [Aoiko]這名字可能會被吐嘈 至少我看了十秒才找到taiko diff
- Taiko BG不見了/連接失效 再加一次以後full submit

不錯 不用吐嘈了

no kd

Taiko mod... : O 今天第4張tama了？

[Taiko]
鼓聲太小了 嗯
00:12:683 - 音樂來說比較像 kkddd/kkkkd
00:23:468 - vocal高到低音 可試kddkd
00:55:232 - 音樂是單一鼓聲吧 <_<
00:57:780 ~ 01:08:957 - 道一堆串串與慢悠悠的歌曲完全不符吧
01:08:172 - vocal發生在white tick, kkkdk說不過去, 放kkkkd
01:10:329 - overmap

實在也沒必要特地去弄難一個taiko diff

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod... : O 今天第4張tama了？

[Taiko]
鼓聲太小了 嗯
00:12:683 - 音樂來說比較像 kkddd/kkkkd
00:23:468 - vocal高到低音 可試kddkd
00:55:232 - 音樂是單一鼓聲吧 <_<
00:57:780 ~ 01:08:957 - 道一堆串串與慢悠悠的歌曲完全不符吧
01:08:172 - vocal發生在white tick, kkkdk說不過去, 放kkkkd
01:10:329 - overmap

實在也沒必要特地去弄難一個taiko diff

3Q~我会快速联系作者看看

貼錯地方 嗚嗚嗚 我過一會再來remod

Taiko mod

[Aoiko]
我個人覺得diff name還可以 不過還真認不出這是taiko diff

00:16:577 - 可考慮把這spinner弄小聲一點
00:26:641 - 不算是重音吧 remove finish
00:39:318 - 建議加個note？ 這樣又可以沿用3/4又能跟vocal
01:03:415 - D
01:25:867 - d---k d k d k d k d k (spinner ---

ddddd5連的那些用的不錯

Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size)
改成(加个空格)
Jam Project - Meteor Lovers (TV Size)
不然是不能rank的。

popner wrote:

Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size)
改成(加个空格)
Jam Project - Meteor Lovers (TV Size)
不然是不能rank的。

OK，谢谢提醒

ok party time

kyuten wrote:

[ExTrA]
-Beatmap-
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 换成repeat吧... nope
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 1/3虽然也不错，不过和前面1/4排成一样的不容易读出来.换一下排列？changed
Others are all fine~

FIRE FIRE!

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Extra]
00:36:318 (x) - 少了点什么的感觉，加个circle吧 yep
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然超级帅超级帅超级帅，但是严重怀疑会被挑刺 nope
01:20:060 (12) - NC吧 yep

毛夫人鬼畜最后还用1/3

welcome to my world

Download: Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size) (Sagisawa-Yukari) [ExTrA].osu

DeeN wrote:

welcome to my world

收到！

又来了(／・ω・)／にゃー！

[General]
怎么每个难度的offset都不一样OAO???

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:31:769 ~ 00:33:124 - 这中间应该可以map点什么..normal的话
00:33:221 (1) - 这个节奏不对..按照歌词的话是1/4拍的
00:35:543 (6,7) - 前面有3个的stack了这里的2个可能会有些不舒服
00:48:317 - 缺一个note的样子....
00:54:898 (1) - remove NC
00:58:189 (1) - 和spin的连接可能有些太紧凑了...
01:05:931 (1) - 歌词是在这里..不过感觉在白线上会善良一些...


[Hard]
-Beatmap-
00:32:058 - add a note
00:32:058 (1) - spin移动到00:32:155 - 这里开始
00:38:252 (1) - end here 00:39:413
00:48:316 - 同样少了一个note的样子...
00:49:091 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里节奏和打击感好像不是很好...稍微remap一下？
00:58:187 (1) - 这个.....


[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:20:447 (3,4) - 节奏好像有些紧/怪
00:25:093 (4,5,6,7,8) - 排列有些单一加上这个stack...试试看stream？
00:27:415 (1,2,3) - 不建议用1/4...有些突然...?
00:31:673 (4) - 同Hard
00:44:544 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这个太突然...或者有些怪异..
00:52:093 (4) - 好好摆呀ww


[ExTrA]
00:30:318 (1,1,2) - 试一下其他节奏呢0 0?也许能找到更好的ww
嗯......应该是蛮好ww不过有些梗不知道会不会被吐槽...╮(￣▽￣")╭


[Overall]
Insane的分配不均匀...前面有蛮多连打后面高潮那里反而少了...多用用stream可能更好一些？
音效还没加的样子0 0...
大概就这些ww加油ww

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]

音效还没有加嘛....0.0 记得加音效喔..

1. combo颜色最好要统一 .-. (至于为什么.....原因很复杂)
   - [Easy] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   - [ExTrA] :
   Combo1 : 255,0,128
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   Combo3 : 0,0,255
   Combo4 : 255,128,0
   - [Hard] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   - [Insane] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   - [Normal] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   
2. 时间预览点要统一 就那跟黄色线 效果就是点一下歌就会放出的预览音乐(至于为什么....）
   - [Aoiko] : 58189
   - [Easy] : 58200
   - [ExTrA] : 58286
   - [Hard] : 58187
   - [Insane] : 58189
   - [Normal] : 58189
   
3. LetterBox (就那个休息时上下会出现黑框的那个) 最好统一全用相同的 （至于为什么...orz)
   - [Aoiko] : 0
   - [Easy] : 1
   - [ExTrA] : 1
   - [Hard] : 1
   - [Insane] : 1
   - [Normal] : 1
   
4. kiai要统一 (这个略重要）这里都是一些细微误差..不过之后肯定会有人挑刺...趁早改.
   - [Aoiko] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:27:802
   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:767, ends on 01:27:802
   - [ExTrA] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:24:318
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:27:800
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:769, ends on 01:27:807
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:769, ends on 01:27:802

[Easy]
AR-1 OD-1 Easy不建议使用略高的...
00:19:673 (2) - finish
00:45:996 (1) - 开头finish
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
01:10:770 (1) - finish
01:26:254 (1) - finish


[Normal]
00:19:673 (1) - finish
00:30:512 (1) - 移动到x:300 y:52 试试 没有和前面的slider有重叠个人感觉会好点
00:32:060 (1) - 可能这个太短不过貌似不要紧
00:45:996 - finish
00:49:093 (1) - spacing一点点偏差
00:55:286 (1) - 在这里结束00:57:609
01:05:931 (1) - 建议这里放个circle 01:06:125 ←slider从这里放
01:10:770 (1) - finish
01:21:609 (2) - 这里直接开始slider


[Hard]
00:31:673 (4) - 与00:30:899 (2)分开好看点
00:36:802 (3) - delete
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
00:56:835 (1) - 00:57:609 这里结束即可
01:12:318 (5) - 鼠标往下拖一点..和(4)分开差不多为止


[Insane]
00:19:286 (3) - spacing
00:28:964 (1) - 建议和(6)分开
00:52:673 (6) - 这个note应该在后面的红tick上也就是这里00:52:770
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
01:26:641 (4) - 建议分开..

[ExTrA]
嗯...好像只有这个难度有音效..
00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个感觉没声音很不舒服....
00:37:867 (7) - 去掉clap
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 哇这里有点恐怖....
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Great Mapset
嗯不错 再多要点mod..

Easy&Normal&Hard

这三个难度不加音效了吗

Insane

00:19:093(2,4)-add whis
00:20:447(3)-slider头上加clap 折点加whis
00:21:028(4)-add whis
音效多加点 老样子2 4白线上加clap 前段适当加点whistle kiai部分也是

ExTrA

00:18:899(1,2,3,4,5,6)-太轻了 打上去不舒服 或者你换成2个1/4的slider吧
我觉得这样排比较好 http://puu.sh/HDpO
00:22:286(6,7)-和(5)重叠 打起来比较舒服
00:24:706(4,5,1,2,3)- http://puu.sh/HDsU 这样摆比较好? (1)取消NC
00:25:673(4)-NC 如果你按照上面的改了..那这个就往上放 排版你随意 http://puu.sh/HDuR
00:32:931(4,5,6,7,8,9,10)- http://puu.sh/HDxJ 这样放比较好看？
00:34:383(2,4)- http://puu.sh/HDyo
后面部分他妈谁做的那么鬼畜

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
一直横竖感觉排的比较随意，最好再多花一些时间在Easy的排列上。
00:19:673 (2,3) - 太近了，Easy里要全程保持固定距离

[Normal]
Kiai开始时间检查一下
00:18:899 (1,2,1,2) - 做对称？
00:21:609 (1) - 怎么突然变成soft的音效了？
00:29:738 (3,1) - 压到了不太好看
00:33:222 (1) - Normal里不要放蓝线节奏
00:58:189 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:351 (2,1) - 叠一起？
00:45:802 (1) - 离前面转盘有些近，考虑早点结束转盘或把这几个note移到靠中间的位置
01:04:189 (3,1) - 叠一起？
01:26:254 (1) - 结尾soft

[Insane]
00:23:931 (8,9,1) - 这三个往前移1/2的话节奏就一致了
00:30:512 (1) - ^
01:01:286 (1,2,3) - nazi - 间距不相等
01:04:189 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:13:286 - 我的建议是Kiai段里不要有这种留空，会降低节奏的连续性
01:15:028 - ^ 以及其他一些地方

[ExTrA]
00:19:673 (1) - nazi - 往上移一格
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 比较危险，因为滑条没有自动偏移
01:27:899 (1) - 结尾soft

GL~

反正大概就這樣摟~ 加油吧 Taiko多找些人來看看會對你有幫助的~
good luck

更改无力，不改了233
把影片去掉吧，记得是在代码里改
下班~~下班~~

Simply Mod - Mod Request from Random Mod

• Aoiko

1. Timing -
   
   00:16:577 - 155.00 BPM : Sound Volume 80~100%
   00:18:706 - 1.0x : Remove
   00:33:318 - 1.0x : Remove
   00:44:447 - 1.0x : Remove
   00:45:802 - 1.0x : Remove
   
   
2. Notes -
   
   00:21:706 (5) - Remove
   00:21:996 (2) - o
   00:24:609 (4) - o
   00:24:706 (1,2) - OO
   00:25:093 - Add a o
   00:25:189 - Add a o
   00:25:480 (1,1) - OO
   00:33:415 (1,2) - Remove
   00:45:802 (1) - O
   00:47:544 (1,1,1) - ooo
   00:56:835 (1,2,3,4) - Remove and edit some long stream :/
   01:20:060 (1) - o

大致上這樣,簡易的Mod,不好意思囉~>A<
姐姐加油~♪

Hello~ from my queue :3 Sorry for late

[General]

Try offset 16,583?

also , how about finding new 192kbps mp3? 128 is little bit low

add some appropriate combo colours like 'ExTrA' diff? only Red / Blue is too simple in my opinion.

[Easy]

lack of hitsounds??? at least you should add some claps on 2 , 4 white lines and add finishes when cymbals' sounds exist.

00:16:577 (1,1) - this is too short for the beginners. how about delete slider and extend the spnner to 00:18:899 - ?
and 00:19:673 (1) - add new combo here for not being new combo bugged.
00:20:060 (2) - delete finish
00:54:899 (5) - delete this note since the beginners have slow response.
00:55:286 (1) - shorten this spinner to 00:56:835 - since it's too hard.
01:08:060 (1) - shorten this spinner to 01:09:996 - . same reason as above.
01:19:673 (3) - NC
01:23:157 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:27:802 -
01:25:480 (1,2,1) - and remove these

[Normal]

same suggestion as easy diff. you should add appropriate hitsounds. so lack of hitsounds here too

HP + 1
AR + 1

00:19:673 (1) - add finish
00:32:060 (1) - extend this spinner to 00:33:609 -
00:33:222 (1) - and remove this and 00:33:996 (2) - NC for not being bugged
01:07:673 (1,1) - make these spinners to 1 spinner and end at 01:09:996 -

[Hard]

Same suggestion as easy diff

00:34:964 (6) - NC
00:47:157 (7) - ^
00:53:738 (5) - ^
00:55:286 (1,1) - make these spinners to 1 spinner and end at 00:57:996 -
00:58:189 (1) - and delete this slider , and add a note at 00:58:383 -
01:19:286 (5) - ^

[Aoiko]

why only this diff has different setting of combo colours and 'letterbox during break' ? i think you need to set it like another diffs

[Insane]

Same suggestion as easy diff

00:32:060 (1) - extend to 00:33:222 -
00:35:157 (9) - NC
00:44:447 (8) - ^
00:47:544 (9) - ^
00:48:318 (1) - DNC
00:50:641 (7) - NC
00:53:738 (9) - ^
01:19:286 (8) - ^
01:27:028 (5) - ^

[ExTrA]

HP + 1

00:21:028 (1) - DNC
00:31:673 (2) - NC as you did before?
00:40:189 (1) - NC for not being bugged.
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - in my opinion , i highly recommend you to change this into 1 return-slider.
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7) - ^
00:51:802 - add a note here?
00:53:738 (8) - NC
01:00:706 (5) - add a finish on the tail
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - decrease spacing? this is too weird
01:17:157 (6) - NC
01:19:093 (7) - ^
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm is little bit unfit to the song. maybe change like this? http://puu.sh/PqQ2

at last, this map still needs more mods to be ranked ;3 good luck to you guys!

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Nice~

[Easy]
00:16:577 (1) - 嗯...这个是Easy diff 所以spinner最好不要太接近后面的note 在00:18:125这里结束 并且就这个降低音量> > 不会的话问我
00:19:673 (3) - 这个大重音 可以考虑Newcombo
00:23:157 (4) - Newcombo
00:32:060 (1,1,2) - 我的意见是这个.. 这样好听 而且spinner也可以略远离note

00:45:996 (1) - 删掉 然后把前面的spinner延长到这里 （别忘了后面那个00:46:770 (2) 再点下newcombo按钮）
00:58:383 (1) - ^ （或者也可以考虑这个↓）（当然也可以不改。。不过可能会被XAT挑..)

01:09:222 (1,1,2) - ↓


嘛 因为Easy难度最好保留下 不要密集...



[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:19:673 (3) - finish？
00:21:609 (7) - newcombo?
00:27:415 (4) - 考虑直接跟歌词↓

00:35:157 (7) - 跳太大
00:47:544 (1) - 哇 这个spinner意义不明啊 会被当成偷懒的 快删了map掉这里
00:55:286 (1) - 提前到00:57:609结束
01:14:835 (5) - 直接删除
01:18:706 (8,9,1) - 应该是这里连着3个 而不是前面..


[Insane]
00:44:447 (7) - newcombo
00:47:544 (7) - 喂喂这里距离哭了T T
00:48:706 (10) - 这里也哭了
00:50:254 (4) - 这里也是...
00:52:964 (8) - newcombo
00:55:286 (1) - 在00:56:835结束 后面那个往后移一点
01:18:706 (9) - 应该是这里连着3个 而不是前面.. 同Hard那个
01:18:512 (7) - newcombo
01:27:028 (5) - ^

[ExTrA]
01:26:254 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:512 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:770 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:028 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:286 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:189 (1) - Newcombo it.

00:37:867 (7) - 开头去掉clap
00:48:512 - 去掉clap
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 哇这是要逆天
--------------------------------------------------
哇 Remap过了好多了 好评

[ExTrA]
00:22:577 (1) - Very awkward slider to play, because it ends on a big white tick
00:25:673 (4) - Similar situation here, but it's on the reverse point
00:35:351 (7) - And this
00:36:512 (1) -
00:41:157 (5) -
00:53:931 (9) -
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wrong, don't use 1/6 here. Use 1/4
01:27:899 (1) - Loud hitsound on the end of the spinner

I suggest you to read this thread if you haven't

[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - NC
00:47:544 (7) - Spacing is bad (too close). At least place NC here if you wish to leave it like it is
it will resemble 00:39:415 (11,1) -
00:49:867 (3,4) - Why such spacing D: (too close for no reason)

[Hard]
00:18:899 (1,2) - You could make accent on them somehow. Making it one single pattern with 00:19:673 (3,4,5) - is kind of bad for my taste
00:27:609 (6,7) - Suddenly too far for a Hard
00:30:318 (5,6) - I dunno, but I think it's the same as above ^
00:31:093 (7,8) - ^
00:34:964 (6,7,8) - Where's the spacing?! Jump and then anti-jump D: Almost impossible to read for medium-skilled players
00:42:899 (3,4,5) - ^
00:52:770 (2,3) - I am fine with it, but make the jump smaller
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - Too hard (or make one NC here)
00:54:512 (8,9) - This is unreadable after triangle jump pattern before ^ (awkward antijump)
00:55:286 (1) - End it on 00:57:996 -
01:10:770 (2) - New combo
01:13:286 (11) - I suggest deleting this and adding one circle at 01:13:480 - instead
01:16:189 (10) - I think a longer slider will sound better here
01:18:318 (6,7) - Sudden hard jump
01:18:899 (1) - Delete NC
01:19:286 (3) - Add NC
01:19:093 (11,1) - Sudden hard jump
01:19:286 (1,2) - I'd say unstacking will follow music better
01:20:060 (5) - NC here or delete jump from the previous note

[Normal]
00:19:673 (3) - NC
00:21:222 (5,1) - Switch New combos
00:22:383 (3) - Ends on a big white tick and that's why it's bad to play D:
See the link above I gave for ExTrA diff
You're supposed to start a new combo there generally (I mean big white tick)
00:23:931 (6,7) - Bad upbeat sliders :<
00:32:060 (1,1) - Not enough time for a normal-player to react
Same for other spinners in this diff

[Easy]
I am kind of lazy, because this diff suffers from the same 'sliders issue' + time after spinners
Also, is it me or it has larger spacing than Normal?

Kert wrote:

[ExTrA]
00:22:577 (1) - Very awkward slider to play, because it ends on a big white tick
00:25:673 (4) - Similar situation here, but it's on the reverse point
00:35:351 (7) - And this
00:36:512 (1) -
00:41:157 (5) -
00:53:931 (9) -
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wrong, don't use 1/6 here. Use 1/4
01:27:899 (1) - Loud hitsound on the end of the spinner

I suggest you to read this thread if you haven't

[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - NC
00:47:544 (7) - Spacing is bad (too close). At least place NC here if you wish to leave it like it is
it will resemble 00:39:415 (11,1) -
00:49:867 (3,4) - Why such spacing D: (too close for no reason)

[Hard]
00:18:899 (1,2) - You could make accent on them somehow. Making it one single pattern with 00:19:673 (3,4,5) - is kind of bad for my taste
00:27:609 (6,7) - Suddenly too far for a Hard
00:30:318 (5,6) - I dunno, but I think it's the same as above ^
00:31:093 (7,8) - ^
00:34:964 (6,7,8) - Where's the spacing?! Jump and then anti-jump D: Almost impossible to read for medium-skilled players
00:42:899 (3,4,5) - ^
00:52:770 (2,3) - I am fine with it, but make the jump smaller
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - Too hard (or make one NC here)
00:54:512 (8,9) - This is unreadable after triangle jump pattern before ^ (awkward antijump)
00:55:286 (1) - End it on 00:57:996 -
01:10:770 (2) - New combo
01:13:286 (11) - I suggest deleting this and adding one circle at 01:13:480 - instead
01:16:189 (10) - I think a longer slider will sound better here
01:18:318 (6,7) - Sudden hard jump
01:18:899 (1) - Delete NC
01:19:286 (3) - Add NC
01:19:093 (11,1) - Sudden hard jump
01:19:286 (1,2) - I'd say unstacking will follow music better
01:20:060 (5) - NC here or delete jump from the previous note

[Normal]
00:19:673 (3) - NC
00:21:222 (5,1) - Switch New combos
00:22:383 (3) - Ends on a big white tick and that's why it's bad to play D:
See the link above I gave for ExTrA diff
You're supposed to start a new combo there generally (I mean big white tick)
00:23:931 (6,7) - Bad upbeat sliders :<
00:32:060 (1,1) - Not enough time for a normal-player to react
Same for other spinners in this diff

[Easy]
I am kind of lazy, because this diff suffers from the same 'sliders issue' + time after spinners
Also, is it me or it has larger spacing than Normal?

I will check it,thanks a lot :3

hi
一些建议

[General]
把自己名字写进tags到底是有多蠢

[Easy]
00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clap呢
00:32:060 (1) - 略短 而且后面跟得太紧不科学
00:38:254 (1) - ^
00:44:447 (1) - ^
后面还有好多 不说了...
01:18:899 - 加note
前面的combo数略长 尽量控制在4以下比较好

[Normal]
00:50:641 (1) - 这结尾是手滑了?
00:54:899 (1) - 从后面的长白线开始比较好

[Hard]
00:32:060 (1,1,2,3) - 还不如一个spinner到底...
00:36:318 - 加note
00:38:254 (5) - 这奇葩音效是什么情况
00:44:447 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 吵 另外(7)加个nc 而且叠起来感觉很没有可玩性
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - 起码加个nc呗
01:05:544 (7) - 放后面白线比较好
01:27:028 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 叠起来感觉很没有可玩性

[Insane]
00:36:318 - 求加note然后加nc然后去后面nc
00:44:447 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 和hard一样
00:47:351 - 求加note
01:10:770 (5) - 进kiai起码加个nc吧
clap用得有点奇葩

[ExTrA]
00:51:899 - 不加note吗
01:13:673 (2,3,4) - 极度不合歌啊这...
01:27:802 (1) - finish
感觉音效也有待提高

另外音效是不是普遍有点偏大

[General]
nothing

[Easy]
[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
[Insane]
[ExTrA]
thats all I can find, nice map

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[General]
nothing

[Easy]

1. 00:22:383: how about move them to x104 y68 ? it'll make a better flow
2. 00:41:738: 3rd slider point to x400 y8?
3. 01:12:706: 2nd slider point 2 grid up and 3rd point 3grid right?

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]

1. 00:48:706: nc?
2. 00:49:093: if you do so ^ then remove nc on here
3. 01:05:738: supposed to be 1 grid up

[Insane]

1. 00:35:351: add note?

[ExTrA]

1. In my opinion, this diff should be name as "Extra"
2. 01:27:802: add finish?

thats all I can find, nice map

thanks a lot,I'll check it.

Hi, Sagisawa-Yukari~
Sorry for delay, my midterm is so crazy

[General]
NCs and hitsounds are really disorder in all diffs

[ExTrA]
00:31:093 (1) - remove NC
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - So cute, I like it, while I am not sure it is rankable. Maybe you can combine them into one slider
00:59:544 (x) - add a note here
01:15:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not so regular, you can use Ctrl+Shift+D
01:23:157 (1) - I suggest you to add a note in the center before spinner

[Insane]
01:12:318 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer the rhythm like x_xxx
01:15:415 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:512 (1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]
01:18:512 (7,8,9,1) - like [Insane]

[Normal]
00:32:060 (1,1) - in Normal/Easy diff, such spinner is not recommended, since it is too close to the next note, which is hard to the new play
00:55:286 (1) - ^
01:07:673 (1) - ^
01:23:157 (1) - ^
00:54:899 (x) - add a note here

[Easy]
00:38:254 (1) - same
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - why not set like pentagon

Good Luck~

小米來看圖~
request in-game~

General
為啥tags裡有自己的名字 lol
整體說一下~需要改進的地方很多w 音效、排列都有~
新手要學會積累經驗哦~
~~~~~~

Easy
HP & OD +1
首先這個難度的clap似乎沒有一定的規律像2 4 clap那樣~同時音效也比較雜亂無章呢~所以最好加強音效方面的能力哦~
00:16:577 (1) - 這一開始的spinner結尾怎麼那麼大聲吶~減小一點
00:25:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - combo數字達到6不適合easy難度~NC方面多考慮
00:38:254 (1,1) - 這個spinner後面的slider出現的實在是太快了~對於新手來說肯定會鬱悶的~一定要改（建議去掉spinner換成別的）
01:07:673 (1) - 在 01:09:222 這裡就結束吧
01:21:609 (1) - 後移1/2
01:21:609 (1) - 是想中線對稱麼?01:26:254 (1) - 來個finish結尾
~~~~~~

Normal
00:16:576 (1) - 爲什麽不和easy一樣結尾消音呢?
00:23:931 (5) - NC
00:32:060 (1) - 結尾聲音小聲點
01:26:254 (1) - finish
~~~~~~

Hard
00:20:835 (6) - 碰到了血條~Rule裡有規定最好不要碰到~所以降低一點
01:04:576 (4,5) - 放正了~01:05:738 (7) - NC
01:15:222 (1) - ^
01:20:060 (7) - ^
01:27:802 (13) - 這裡用finish不是很好嘛~~其它難度也要保持一樣w
~~~~~~

Insane
00:25:867 (8) - NC
00:55:286 (1) - 在 00:57:609 這裡結束~
01:09:415 - 明顯有個音~加note
~~~~~~

ExTrA
不覺得這個diff的clap有點大聲麼~~考慮換一個clap音或者降低音量w
00:16:577 - 好奇爲什麽其它diff都有的spinner在這裡卻沒有了~ ._.
00:24:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 喜歡這裡~梗不錯
00:30:802 - 這裡考慮價格note~否則會感覺太空了
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7,8,9,10) - 略吵~
01:13:673 (2,4) - 雖然堆成梗很好~但總感覺有點違和~可能是vocal這裡是兩個音而卻用一個長slider導致少了什麽的感覺
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個打起來不舒服w
01:27:899 (1) - 結尾消音~
~~~~~~

好了~就這些~作為新手還算湊合~不過要改進的地方有很多很多~
多多領悟~積累經驗 ~ 一定能做的很好的吶 >3<
Good Luck~

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Sagisawa-Yukari~
Sorry for delay, my midterm is so crazy

[General]
NCs and hitsounds are really disorder in all diffs

[ExTrA]
00:31:093 (1) - remove NC
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - So cute, I like it, while I am not sure it is rankable. Maybe you can combine them into one slider
00:59:544 (x) - add a note here
01:15:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not so regular, you can use Ctrl+Shift+D
01:23:157 (1) - I suggest you to add a note in the center before spinner

[Insane]
01:12:318 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer the rhythm like x_xxx
01:15:415 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:512 (1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]
01:18:512 (7,8,9,1) - like [Insane]

[Normal]
00:32:060 (1,1) - in Normal/Easy diff, such spinner is not recommended, since it is too close to the next note, which is hard to the new play
00:55:286 (1) - ^
01:07:673 (1) - ^
01:23:157 (1) - ^
00:54:899 (x) - add a note here

[Easy]
00:38:254 (1) - same
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - why not set like pentagon

Good Luck~

OK，时间晚点没关系啦，非常感谢XD

Midasmens wrote:

小米來看圖~
request in-game~

General
為啥tags裡有自己的名字 lol
整體說一下~需要改進的地方很多w 音效、排列都有~
新手要學會積累經驗哦~
~~~~~~

Easy
HP & OD +1
首先這個難度的clap似乎沒有一定的規律像2 4 clap那樣~同時音效也比較雜亂無章呢~所以最好加強音效方面的能力哦~
00:16:577 (1) - 這一開始的spinner結尾怎麼那麼大聲吶~減小一點
00:25:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - combo數字達到6不適合easy難度~NC方面多考慮
00:38:254 (1,1) - 這個spinner後面的slider出現的實在是太快了~對於新手來說肯定會鬱悶的~一定要改（建議去掉spinner換成別的）
01:07:673 (1) - 在 01:09:222 這裡就結束吧
01:21:609 (1) - 後移1/2
01:21:609 (1) - 是想中線對稱麼?

SPOILER

01:26:254 (1) - 來個finish結尾
~~~~~~

Normal
00:16:576 (1) - 爲什麽不和easy一樣結尾消音呢?
00:23:931 (5) - NC
00:32:060 (1) - 結尾聲音小聲點
01:26:254 (1) - finish
~~~~~~

Hard
00:20:835 (6) - 碰到了血條~Rule裡有規定最好不要碰到~所以降低一點
01:04:576 (4,5) - 放正了~

SPOILER

01:05:738 (7) - NC
01:15:222 (1) - ^
01:20:060 (7) - ^
01:27:802 (13) - 這裡用finish不是很好嘛~~其它難度也要保持一樣w
~~~~~~

Insane
00:25:867 (8) - NC
00:55:286 (1) - 在 00:57:609 這裡結束~
01:09:415 - 明顯有個音~加note
~~~~~~

ExTrA
不覺得這個diff的clap有點大聲麼~~考慮換一個clap音或者降低音量w
00:16:577 - 好奇爲什麽其它diff都有的spinner在這裡卻沒有了~ ._.
00:24:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 喜歡這裡~梗不錯
00:30:802 - 這裡考慮價格note~否則會感覺太空了
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7,8,9,10) - 略吵~
01:13:673 (2,4) - 雖然堆成梗很好~但總感覺有點違和~可能是vocal這裡是兩個音而卻用一個長slider導致少了什麽的感覺
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個打起來不舒服w
01:27:899 (1) - 結尾消音~
~~~~~~

好了~就這些~作為新手還算湊合~不過要改進的地方有很多很多~
多多領悟~積累經驗 ~ 一定能做的很好的吶 >3<
Good Luck~

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶

非常感谢，作为新手要学的东西还很多，也很谢谢能抽空来看新人的图，我会努力的XD

Easy:
AR2略低建议至少+1

00:38:254 (1) - 建议换别的节奏 easy用这么短的转盘 很难通过
01:21:222 (1) - 建议这个转盘从01:21:609起 更适合

Normal：
OD HP+1 跟easy一样不太好
00:32:060 (1) - 这转盘结束的时间有些莫名其妙
01:23:544 (1) - 建议从01:23:157开始

Hard：
OD HP+1 更好点
00:44:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 我觉得hard要用这种连打不如替换成短滑条
00:55:286 (1) - 这个转盘跟normal前面那个一样 停的这个红线的时间很莫名其妙 因为这里也没有啥节奏能对应你这个停止的时间
01:15:028 (X) - 建议加note 节奏连接更舒服
01:27:028 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 同55秒 不多述（主要我是觉得你hard上面还有2个难度 是不是不太适合这么早就用了连打梗 个人偏见）

Insane：
00:21:415 (X) - 建议加note 节奏更连贯
01:09:222 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏不对头 extra那个这里的节奏才更像是对的

Extra：
AR9有点大了吧 感觉用不上
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - lol不坏但是我不知道别人会不会来找茬
后面对称梗觉醒了嘛

。感觉节奏还可以更改善一些 有的地方可以下节奏的但是有空着 我个人感觉下了似乎更舒服 有的节奏感觉可以更符合音乐一些，不过感觉这些东西需要循序渐进慢慢涨经验.

音效方面建议clap用的更整齐一些 现在感觉似乎有些哪里想起来就下哪里. 顺便多一些whistle和finish也能增添感觉.

for M4M
[General]
ok
bg不考虑换吗？ 全难度玩一遍 已经看到我眼睛密密麻麻的 肯定rating↓
[easy]
00:18:899 (1) - remove whistle 这么早的哨音太响了 吓人用
00:21:609 (1,2),00:23:157 (1,2,3), 需要这些whistle？ 如果需要 其他地方也相应的加上
这里00:25:867 (1,2), 这里00:28:964 (1,2,3,4)
音效感觉你是按照自己喜欢的下？ 太乱了 下次可以试着关了音乐听听音效 可以学更多
00:39:802 (1) - 出现的300盖住的hp
00:41:738 (2) - end remove whistle 这个结尾的音效太糟了点
00:46:770 (1) - 新手难度来说 转盘结束出现的位子有点太远 想象下新人转完后看到下个1在这里的慌乱感 00:49:093 (1) - 叠在这个1上
00:58:383 (1) - ^
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 多个单点对于新手太难了
[Normal]
00:23:931 (1) - 玩起来不是很丑的slider 但是edit里看起来太丑了
00:21:222 (3,1) - ？下在长白NC不容易被吐槽 不过你这样也可以 对应自己的摆设和音效
00:25:480 (3,1) - ^
00:27:415 (4) - NC
好吧 看了下整体NC 我不吐槽这些了 我就看看 如果你没把握的话 最好长白附近加NC
01:07:673 这里开始是spin
01:15:415 (1,2,3) - 1 2堆叠就够了 从节奏上感觉
[hard]
难度跨度好大？ 那么多连打 像00:44:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
kiai地方可以接受 前面略微减少难度 推荐部分rep会更安全
[Aoiko]
？ 原来是太鼓难度
最好换个名字 好容易认错的说
[Insane]
00:35:544 (10) - 穿hp 好评
00:42:512 (6) - ^
00:45:222 (9) - 9的弧度不太对应前面的连打 硬梆梆的感觉
00:47:544 (7,8,9) - 节奏松散
00:49:093 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:13:867 (2) - ^ 进hp
01:20:060 (1) - 跳太远了
？为啥kiai做的总是不错 好评个
[extra]
fine
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以考虑拉开点 不需要表现的那么厚重的堆叠
我收回前面fine的评价 你这鬼畜的kiai 至少请保持前面的作图手法 突然改成对称旋转风格


就这些 祝你好运