This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月31日 at 1:04:08

Artist: JAM Project
Title: Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size)
Source: Super Robot Wars OG2 -The Inspector-
Tags: SRW ryuusei Deen AoiX xykbear yelfea026 Sagisawa-Yukari -[NYAN]- Rotte kiddly
BPM: 155
Filesize: 9418kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Aoiko (4.83 stars, 385 notes)
2. Easy (2.58 stars, 78 notes)
3. ExTrA Collab (5 stars, 326 notes)
4. Hard (4.94 stars, 221 notes)
5. Normal (4.11 stars, 112 notes)
6. Rotte's Insane (5 stars, 228 notes)

Download: JAM Project - Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size)
Download: JAM Project - Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map
Easy done by me
Normal done by me
Hard done by me
Aoiko (Taiko diff) done by AoiX
Rotte's Insane done by Rotte
ExTrA Collab done by DeeN and kiddly
If you download in 18:29 19/1/2013 before
Redownload plz
hope you enjoy it :3

good

[Insane]
00:21:802(5,6,7)-(5,6)与(6,7)之间距离相等 但是音乐时间间隔却不等 又因为是一种颜色的note 所以要调整距离 不然会误按
00:24:125(5,1)-与00:21:222(6,1)-感觉之间的间隔最好保持一致?
00:24:318(1,2,3)-1到2的距离和2到3要相同
00:27:415~00:31:867-这段明显间距变小 不是说是insane距离就可以随便调了..作为刚尝试做图的新手我建议先试着整张图用一个ds做
后面基本上都是这个问题

先搞好距离问题再教你排版

BakaHuang wrote:

[Insane]
00:21:802(5,6,7)-(5,6)与(6,7)之间距离相等 但是音乐时间间隔却不等 又因为是一种颜色的note 所以要调整距离 不然会误按
00:24:125(5,1)-与00:21:222(6,1)-感觉之间的间隔最好保持一致?
00:24:318(1,2,3)-1到2的距离和2到3要相同
00:27:415~00:31:867-这段明显间距变小 不是说是insane距离就可以随便调了..作为刚尝试做图的新手我建议先试着整张图用一个ds做
后面基本上都是这个问题

先搞好距离问题再教你排版

谢阿黄，我觉得我还是先重做的好。。

囧queue里看见了 不过我现在电脑有问题……mod困难 以后如果再需要mod直接游戏里喊我吧

Nymph wrote:

囧queue里看见了 不过我现在电脑有问题……mod困难 以后如果再需要mod直接游戏里喊我吧

恩~多谢了

先占位._.

毛夫人真是没有人性:3

路过

0w0/
[General]
BG的分辨率改为1024*768或800*600
PreviewTime没有设定（所有难度都要统一哦
好像需要full submit一下..我没有下到video._.
kiai不统一
tag和source什么的就不看啦...不了解这个系列...


[Easy]
调整过offset？所有note都需要resnap一下的样子
-Beatmap-
00:21:608 (1,2) - 建议结束在白线上..毕竟是Easy难度...（后面也有..考虑一下ww
00:40:189 (2) - 这里一定要改的吧...和节奏对不上..
00:41:737 (2) - ^
00:45:802 (1) - 和音乐好像对不上
00:47:931 (4) - 白线
....后面都是...全都在白线上吧Orz...

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:33:414 (1,2) - timing重合了...
00:41:737 (2) - 怪异的节奏...
00:46:769 (2,1) - ....
00:58:189 (1) - 怪异的节奏...
后面没看了...应该是哪里出了问题...节奏都没有对好的样子...

[Hard]
-Beatmap-
01:09:221 (1) - 这个是要放在中间的吧0.0
其他还好w再排对称整齐一些w


[ExTrA]
-Beatmap-
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 换成repeat吧...
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 1/3虽然也不错，不过和前面1/4排成一样的不容易读出来.换一下排列？
Others are all fine~

[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:55:286 (2,3,4,5) - 重新排列一下吧...

需要map的地方还很多啊...节奏蛮好~不过排列还是要改一改ww
加油~☆

/from Irc ReQ

[General]

BG需要1024*768的大小
需要设定preview time，具体方法，每个难度将时间轴停在某个副歌开始的点上，Timing下拉菜单最后一项点一下即可。所有难度preview time必须一致
所有难度的kiai time保持一致:< Hard的kiai结束时间有点不一样，其他的没查你自己看一下吧
tag里加上Aoi的曾用名

[Easy]

00:18:901 (1) - 结束在00:19:288
00:21:608 (1,2) - ^
00:24:318 (1,2) - ^
00:27:414 (1,3) - ^后面都不说了:< EZ尽量不要压红线，而且EZ对spacing的要求很高，建议全程开着distance snapping 调整间距

[Normal]

NM对distance的要求基本和EASY一样，spacing问题很多比如00:21:608 (1) - 这个:<
同样建议全程开distance spacing调整，我下面只讲节奏的地方:<不提Spacing

00:20:447 (3) - 减少一个来回
00:33:414 (1) - 少一个来回，两个slider重叠了，这里开始vocal不好跟，我建议你干脆直接下简单的1/2节奏..现在这样非常混乱:<
00:34:769 (3,4,5) - NM里不建议三连
00:41:737 (2) - 这个这样 http://puu.sh/pS6X
00:42:705 (1) - 这个也稍微拉长一点 从 00:42:898开始 http://puu.sh/pS7f

额后面的还是不看了，我估计你改过了sv所以很多slider都重叠了:<我给了你建议也是不针对你原谱的，赶紧调整一下

[Hard]

我建议SV1.6，不过这样所有slider都要重新调整:<
音效太稀薄了

00:32:060 (1) - spacing
00:32:060 (1,2,3,4) - 要么全加一个折返...要么就不要这么放...略怪
01:06:898 (4) - 调整下形状
01:11:931 (1) - 和前面的slider拉开一点
01:14:640 (4) - ^
01:16:189 (5) - 下移一些

[Insane]

音效依然太稀薄
和Hard感觉不出难度差距
I的sv还用1.5这相当不科学啊

00:21:996 (3) - spacing
00:23:157 (1) - 拉远
00:24:899 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这一块spaicng都不等距
00:32:060 (1,2,3,4) - 同hard
00:38:835 (2) - spacing
00:48:318 (1) - 和上一个note拉开距离
00:51:028 (1) - spacing
00:55:286 (2,3,4,5) - 和之前一样，后面不说了
00:59:931 (3) - 把尾巴对准2
01:04:189 (3,4,5) - 右移两格

[Extra]

00:36:318 (x) - 少了点什么的感觉，加个circle吧
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然超级帅超级帅超级帅，但是严重怀疑会被挑刺
01:20:060 (12) - NC吧

毛夫人鬼畜最后还用1/3

Taiko mod

[Taiko]
- [Aoiko]這名字可能會被吐嘈 至少我看了十秒才找到taiko diff
- Taiko BG不見了/連接失效 再加一次以後full submit

不錯 不用吐嘈了

no kd

Taiko mod... : O 今天第4張tama了？

[Taiko]
鼓聲太小了 嗯
00:12:683 - 音樂來說比較像 kkddd/kkkkd
00:23:468 - vocal高到低音 可試kddkd
00:55:232 - 音樂是單一鼓聲吧 <_<
00:57:780 ~ 01:08:957 - 道一堆串串與慢悠悠的歌曲完全不符吧
01:08:172 - vocal發生在white tick, kkkdk說不過去, 放kkkkd
01:10:329 - overmap

實在也沒必要特地去弄難一個taiko diff

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod... : O 今天第4張tama了？

[Taiko]
鼓聲太小了 嗯
00:12:683 - 音樂來說比較像 kkddd/kkkkd
00:23:468 - vocal高到低音 可試kddkd
00:55:232 - 音樂是單一鼓聲吧 <_<
00:57:780 ~ 01:08:957 - 道一堆串串與慢悠悠的歌曲完全不符吧
01:08:172 - vocal發生在white tick, kkkdk說不過去, 放kkkkd
01:10:329 - overmap

實在也沒必要特地去弄難一個taiko diff

3Q~我会快速联系作者看看

貼錯地方 嗚嗚嗚 我過一會再來remod

Taiko mod

[Aoiko]
我個人覺得diff name還可以 不過還真認不出這是taiko diff

00:16:577 - 可考慮把這spinner弄小聲一點
00:26:641 - 不算是重音吧 remove finish
00:39:318 - 建議加個note？ 這樣又可以沿用3/4又能跟vocal
01:03:415 - D
01:25:867 - d---k d k d k d k d k (spinner ---

ddddd5連的那些用的不錯

Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size)
改成(加个空格)
Jam Project - Meteor Lovers (TV Size)
不然是不能rank的。

popner wrote:

Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size)
改成(加个空格)
Jam Project - Meteor Lovers (TV Size)
不然是不能rank的。

OK，谢谢提醒

ok party time

kyuten wrote:

[ExTrA]
-Beatmap-
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 换成repeat吧... nope
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 1/3虽然也不错，不过和前面1/4排成一样的不容易读出来.换一下排列？changed
Others are all fine~

FIRE FIRE!

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Extra]
00:36:318 (x) - 少了点什么的感觉，加个circle吧 yep
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然超级帅超级帅超级帅，但是严重怀疑会被挑刺 nope
01:20:060 (12) - NC吧 yep

毛夫人鬼畜最后还用1/3

welcome to my world

Download: Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size) (Sagisawa-Yukari) [ExTrA].osu

DeeN wrote:

welcome to my world

收到！

又来了(／・ω・)／にゃー！

[General]
怎么每个难度的offset都不一样OAO???

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:31:769 ~ 00:33:124 - 这中间应该可以map点什么..normal的话
00:33:221 (1) - 这个节奏不对..按照歌词的话是1/4拍的
00:35:543 (6,7) - 前面有3个的stack了这里的2个可能会有些不舒服
00:48:317 - 缺一个note的样子....
00:54:898 (1) - remove NC
00:58:189 (1) - 和spin的连接可能有些太紧凑了...
01:05:931 (1) - 歌词是在这里..不过感觉在白线上会善良一些...


[Hard]
-Beatmap-
00:32:058 - add a note
00:32:058 (1) - spin移动到00:32:155 - 这里开始
00:38:252 (1) - end here 00:39:413
00:48:316 - 同样少了一个note的样子...
00:49:091 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里节奏和打击感好像不是很好...稍微remap一下？
00:58:187 (1) - 这个.....


[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:20:447 (3,4) - 节奏好像有些紧/怪
00:25:093 (4,5,6,7,8) - 排列有些单一加上这个stack...试试看stream？
00:27:415 (1,2,3) - 不建议用1/4...有些突然...?
00:31:673 (4) - 同Hard
00:44:544 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这个太突然...或者有些怪异..
00:52:093 (4) - 好好摆呀ww


[ExTrA]
00:30:318 (1,1,2) - 试一下其他节奏呢0 0?也许能找到更好的ww
嗯......应该是蛮好ww不过有些梗不知道会不会被吐槽...╮(￣▽￣")╭


[Overall]
Insane的分配不均匀...前面有蛮多连打后面高潮那里反而少了...多用用stream可能更好一些？
音效还没加的样子0 0...
大概就这些ww加油ww

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]

音效还没有加嘛....0.0 记得加音效喔..

1. combo颜色最好要统一 .-. (至于为什么.....原因很复杂)
   - [Easy] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   - [ExTrA] :
   Combo1 : 255,0,128
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   Combo3 : 0,0,255
   Combo4 : 255,128,0
   - [Hard] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   - [Insane] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   - [Normal] :
   Combo1 : 0,0,255
   Combo2 : 255,26,26
   
2. 时间预览点要统一 就那跟黄色线 效果就是点一下歌就会放出的预览音乐(至于为什么....）
   - [Aoiko] : 58189
   - [Easy] : 58200
   - [ExTrA] : 58286
   - [Hard] : 58187
   - [Insane] : 58189
   - [Normal] : 58189
   
3. LetterBox (就那个休息时上下会出现黑框的那个) 最好统一全用相同的 （至于为什么...orz)
   - [Aoiko] : 0
   - [Easy] : 1
   - [ExTrA] : 1
   - [Hard] : 1
   - [Insane] : 1
   - [Normal] : 1
   
4. kiai要统一 (这个略重要）这里都是一些细微误差..不过之后肯定会有人挑刺...趁早改.
   - [Aoiko] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:27:802
   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:767, ends on 01:27:802
   - [ExTrA] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:24:318
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:27:800
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:769, ends on 01:27:807
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:769, ends on 01:27:802

[Easy]
AR-1 OD-1 Easy不建议使用略高的...
00:19:673 (2) - finish
00:45:996 (1) - 开头finish
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
01:10:770 (1) - finish
01:26:254 (1) - finish


[Normal]
00:19:673 (1) - finish
00:30:512 (1) - 移动到x:300 y:52 试试 没有和前面的slider有重叠个人感觉会好点
00:32:060 (1) - 可能这个太短不过貌似不要紧
00:45:996 - finish
00:49:093 (1) - spacing一点点偏差
00:55:286 (1) - 在这里结束00:57:609
01:05:931 (1) - 建议这里放个circle 01:06:125 ←slider从这里放
01:10:770 (1) - finish
01:21:609 (2) - 这里直接开始slider


[Hard]
00:31:673 (4) - 与00:30:899 (2)分开好看点
00:36:802 (3) - delete
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
00:56:835 (1) - 00:57:609 这里结束即可
01:12:318 (5) - 鼠标往下拖一点..和(4)分开差不多为止


[Insane]
00:19:286 (3) - spacing
00:28:964 (1) - 建议和(6)分开
00:52:673 (6) - 这个note应该在后面的红tick上也就是这里00:52:770
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
01:26:641 (4) - 建议分开..

[ExTrA]
嗯...好像只有这个难度有音效..
00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个感觉没声音很不舒服....
00:37:867 (7) - 去掉clap
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 哇这里有点恐怖....
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Great Mapset
嗯不错 再多要点mod..

Easy&Normal&Hard

这三个难度不加音效了吗

Insane

00:19:093(2,4)-add whis
00:20:447(3)-slider头上加clap 折点加whis
00:21:028(4)-add whis
音效多加点 老样子2 4白线上加clap 前段适当加点whistle kiai部分也是

ExTrA

00:18:899(1,2,3,4,5,6)-太轻了 打上去不舒服 或者你换成2个1/4的slider吧
我觉得这样排比较好 http://puu.sh/HDpO
00:22:286(6,7)-和(5)重叠 打起来比较舒服
00:24:706(4,5,1,2,3)- http://puu.sh/HDsU 这样摆比较好? (1)取消NC
00:25:673(4)-NC 如果你按照上面的改了..那这个就往上放 排版你随意 http://puu.sh/HDuR
00:32:931(4,5,6,7,8,9,10)- http://puu.sh/HDxJ 这样放比较好看？
00:34:383(2,4)- http://puu.sh/HDyo
后面部分他妈谁做的那么鬼畜

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
一直横竖感觉排的比较随意，最好再多花一些时间在Easy的排列上。
00:19:673 (2,3) - 太近了，Easy里要全程保持固定距离

[Normal]
Kiai开始时间检查一下
00:18:899 (1,2,1,2) - 做对称？
00:21:609 (1) - 怎么突然变成soft的音效了？
00:29:738 (3,1) - 压到了不太好看
00:33:222 (1) - Normal里不要放蓝线节奏
00:58:189 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:351 (2,1) - 叠一起？
00:45:802 (1) - 离前面转盘有些近，考虑早点结束转盘或把这几个note移到靠中间的位置
01:04:189 (3,1) - 叠一起？
01:26:254 (1) - 结尾soft

[Insane]
00:23:931 (8,9,1) - 这三个往前移1/2的话节奏就一致了
00:30:512 (1) - ^
01:01:286 (1,2,3) - nazi - 间距不相等
01:04:189 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:13:286 - 我的建议是Kiai段里不要有这种留空，会降低节奏的连续性
01:15:028 - ^ 以及其他一些地方

[ExTrA]
00:19:673 (1) - nazi - 往上移一格
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 比较危险，因为滑条没有自动偏移
01:27:899 (1) - 结尾soft

GL~

反正大概就這樣摟~ 加油吧 Taiko多找些人來看看會對你有幫助的~
good luck

更改无力，不改了233
把影片去掉吧，记得是在代码里改
下班~~下班~~

Simply Mod - Mod Request from Random Mod

• Aoiko

1. Timing -
   
   00:16:577 - 155.00 BPM : Sound Volume 80~100%
   00:18:706 - 1.0x : Remove
   00:33:318 - 1.0x : Remove
   00:44:447 - 1.0x : Remove
   00:45:802 - 1.0x : Remove
   
   
2. Notes -
   
   00:21:706 (5) - Remove
   00:21:996 (2) - o
   00:24:609 (4) - o
   00:24:706 (1,2) - OO
   00:25:093 - Add a o
   00:25:189 - Add a o
   00:25:480 (1,1) - OO
   00:33:415 (1,2) - Remove
   00:45:802 (1) - O
   00:47:544 (1,1,1) - ooo
   00:56:835 (1,2,3,4) - Remove and edit some long stream :/
   01:20:060 (1) - o

大致上這樣,簡易的Mod,不好意思囉~>A<
姐姐加油~♪

Hello~ from my queue :3 Sorry for late

[General]

Try offset 16,583?

also , how about finding new 192kbps mp3? 128 is little bit low

add some appropriate combo colours like 'ExTrA' diff? only Red / Blue is too simple in my opinion.

[Easy]

lack of hitsounds??? at least you should add some claps on 2 , 4 white lines and add finishes when cymbals' sounds exist.

00:16:577 (1,1) - this is too short for the beginners. how about delete slider and extend the spnner to 00:18:899 - ?
and 00:19:673 (1) - add new combo here for not being new combo bugged.
00:20:060 (2) - delete finish
00:54:899 (5) - delete this note since the beginners have slow response.
00:55:286 (1) - shorten this spinner to 00:56:835 - since it's too hard.
01:08:060 (1) - shorten this spinner to 01:09:996 - . same reason as above.
01:19:673 (3) - NC
01:23:157 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:27:802 -
01:25:480 (1,2,1) - and remove these

[Normal]

same suggestion as easy diff. you should add appropriate hitsounds. so lack of hitsounds here too

HP + 1
AR + 1

00:19:673 (1) - add finish
00:32:060 (1) - extend this spinner to 00:33:609 -
00:33:222 (1) - and remove this and 00:33:996 (2) - NC for not being bugged
01:07:673 (1,1) - make these spinners to 1 spinner and end at 01:09:996 -

[Hard]

Same suggestion as easy diff

00:34:964 (6) - NC
00:47:157 (7) - ^
00:53:738 (5) - ^
00:55:286 (1,1) - make these spinners to 1 spinner and end at 00:57:996 -
00:58:189 (1) - and delete this slider , and add a note at 00:58:383 -
01:19:286 (5) - ^

[Aoiko]

why only this diff has different setting of combo colours and 'letterbox during break' ? i think you need to set it like another diffs

[Insane]

Same suggestion as easy diff

00:32:060 (1) - extend to 00:33:222 -
00:35:157 (9) - NC
00:44:447 (8) - ^
00:47:544 (9) - ^
00:48:318 (1) - DNC
00:50:641 (7) - NC
00:53:738 (9) - ^
01:19:286 (8) - ^
01:27:028 (5) - ^

[ExTrA]

HP + 1

00:21:028 (1) - DNC
00:31:673 (2) - NC as you did before?
00:40:189 (1) - NC for not being bugged.
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - in my opinion , i highly recommend you to change this into 1 return-slider.
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7) - ^
00:51:802 - add a note here?
00:53:738 (8) - NC
01:00:706 (5) - add a finish on the tail
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - decrease spacing? this is too weird
01:17:157 (6) - NC
01:19:093 (7) - ^
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm is little bit unfit to the song. maybe change like this? http://puu.sh/PqQ2

at last, this map still needs more mods to be ranked ;3 good luck to you guys!

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Nice~

[Easy]
00:16:577 (1) - 嗯...这个是Easy diff 所以spinner最好不要太接近后面的note 在00:18:125这里结束 并且就这个降低音量> > 不会的话问我
00:19:673 (3) - 这个大重音 可以考虑Newcombo
00:23:157 (4) - Newcombo
00:32:060 (1,1,2) - 我的意见是这个.. 这样好听 而且spinner也可以略远离note

00:45:996 (1) - 删掉 然后把前面的spinner延长到这里 （别忘了后面那个00:46:770 (2) 再点下newcombo按钮）
00:58:383 (1) - ^ （或者也可以考虑这个↓）（当然也可以不改。。不过可能会被XAT挑..)

01:09:222 (1,1,2) - ↓


嘛 因为Easy难度最好保留下 不要密集...



[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:19:673 (3) - finish？
00:21:609 (7) - newcombo?
00:27:415 (4) - 考虑直接跟歌词↓

00:35:157 (7) - 跳太大
00:47:544 (1) - 哇 这个spinner意义不明啊 会被当成偷懒的 快删了map掉这里
00:55:286 (1) - 提前到00:57:609结束
01:14:835 (5) - 直接删除
01:18:706 (8,9,1) - 应该是这里连着3个 而不是前面..


[Insane]
00:44:447 (7) - newcombo
00:47:544 (7) - 喂喂这里距离哭了T T
00:48:706 (10) - 这里也哭了
00:50:254 (4) - 这里也是...
00:52:964 (8) - newcombo
00:55:286 (1) - 在00:56:835结束 后面那个往后移一点
01:18:706 (9) - 应该是这里连着3个 而不是前面.. 同Hard那个
01:18:512 (7) - newcombo
01:27:028 (5) - ^

[ExTrA]
01:26:254 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:512 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:770 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:028 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:286 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:189 (1) - Newcombo it.

00:37:867 (7) - 开头去掉clap
00:48:512 - 去掉clap
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 哇这是要逆天
--------------------------------------------------
哇 Remap过了好多了 好评

[ExTrA]
00:22:577 (1) - Very awkward slider to play, because it ends on a big white tick
00:25:673 (4) - Similar situation here, but it's on the reverse point
00:35:351 (7) - And this
00:36:512 (1) -
00:41:157 (5) -
00:53:931 (9) -
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wrong, don't use 1/6 here. Use 1/4
01:27:899 (1) - Loud hitsound on the end of the spinner

I suggest you to read this thread if you haven't

[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - NC
00:47:544 (7) - Spacing is bad (too close). At least place NC here if you wish to leave it like it is
it will resemble 00:39:415 (11,1) -
00:49:867 (3,4) - Why such spacing D: (too close for no reason)

[Hard]
00:18:899 (1,2) - You could make accent on them somehow. Making it one single pattern with 00:19:673 (3,4,5) - is kind of bad for my taste
00:27:609 (6,7) - Suddenly too far for a Hard
00:30:318 (5,6) - I dunno, but I think it's the same as above ^
00:31:093 (7,8) - ^
00:34:964 (6,7,8) - Where's the spacing?! Jump and then anti-jump D: Almost impossible to read for medium-skilled players
00:42:899 (3,4,5) - ^
00:52:770 (2,3) - I am fine with it, but make the jump smaller
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - Too hard (or make one NC here)
00:54:512 (8,9) - This is unreadable after triangle jump pattern before ^ (awkward antijump)
00:55:286 (1) - End it on 00:57:996 -
01:10:770 (2) - New combo
01:13:286 (11) - I suggest deleting this and adding one circle at 01:13:480 - instead
01:16:189 (10) - I think a longer slider will sound better here
01:18:318 (6,7) - Sudden hard jump
01:18:899 (1) - Delete NC
01:19:286 (3) - Add NC
01:19:093 (11,1) - Sudden hard jump
01:19:286 (1,2) - I'd say unstacking will follow music better
01:20:060 (5) - NC here or delete jump from the previous note

[Normal]
00:19:673 (3) - NC
00:21:222 (5,1) - Switch New combos
00:22:383 (3) - Ends on a big white tick and that's why it's bad to play D:
See the link above I gave for ExTrA diff
You're supposed to start a new combo there generally (I mean big white tick)
00:23:931 (6,7) - Bad upbeat sliders :<
00:32:060 (1,1) - Not enough time for a normal-player to react
Same for other spinners in this diff

[Easy]
I am kind of lazy, because this diff suffers from the same 'sliders issue' + time after spinners
Also, is it me or it has larger spacing than Normal?

Kert wrote:

[ExTrA]
00:22:577 (1) - Very awkward slider to play, because it ends on a big white tick
00:25:673 (4) - Similar situation here, but it's on the reverse point
00:35:351 (7) - And this
00:36:512 (1) -
00:41:157 (5) -
00:53:931 (9) -
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wrong, don't use 1/6 here. Use 1/4
01:27:899 (1) - Loud hitsound on the end of the spinner

I suggest you to read this thread if you haven't

[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - NC
00:47:544 (7) - Spacing is bad (too close). At least place NC here if you wish to leave it like it is
it will resemble 00:39:415 (11,1) -
00:49:867 (3,4) - Why such spacing D: (too close for no reason)

[Hard]
00:18:899 (1,2) - You could make accent on them somehow. Making it one single pattern with 00:19:673 (3,4,5) - is kind of bad for my taste
00:27:609 (6,7) - Suddenly too far for a Hard
00:30:318 (5,6) - I dunno, but I think it's the same as above ^
00:31:093 (7,8) - ^
00:34:964 (6,7,8) - Where's the spacing?! Jump and then anti-jump D: Almost impossible to read for medium-skilled players
00:42:899 (3,4,5) - ^
00:52:770 (2,3) - I am fine with it, but make the jump smaller
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - Too hard (or make one NC here)
00:54:512 (8,9) - This is unreadable after triangle jump pattern before ^ (awkward antijump)
00:55:286 (1) - End it on 00:57:996 -
01:10:770 (2) - New combo
01:13:286 (11) - I suggest deleting this and adding one circle at 01:13:480 - instead
01:16:189 (10) - I think a longer slider will sound better here
01:18:318 (6,7) - Sudden hard jump
01:18:899 (1) - Delete NC
01:19:286 (3) - Add NC
01:19:093 (11,1) - Sudden hard jump
01:19:286 (1,2) - I'd say unstacking will follow music better
01:20:060 (5) - NC here or delete jump from the previous note

[Normal]
00:19:673 (3) - NC
00:21:222 (5,1) - Switch New combos
00:22:383 (3) - Ends on a big white tick and that's why it's bad to play D:
See the link above I gave for ExTrA diff
You're supposed to start a new combo there generally (I mean big white tick)
00:23:931 (6,7) - Bad upbeat sliders :<
00:32:060 (1,1) - Not enough time for a normal-player to react
Same for other spinners in this diff

[Easy]
I am kind of lazy, because this diff suffers from the same 'sliders issue' + time after spinners
Also, is it me or it has larger spacing than Normal?

I will check it,thanks a lot :3

hi
一些建议

[General]
把自己名字写进tags到底是有多蠢

[Easy]
00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clap呢
00:32:060 (1) - 略短 而且后面跟得太紧不科学
00:38:254 (1) - ^
00:44:447 (1) - ^
后面还有好多 不说了...
01:18:899 - 加note
前面的combo数略长 尽量控制在4以下比较好

[Normal]
00:50:641 (1) - 这结尾是手滑了?
00:54:899 (1) - 从后面的长白线开始比较好

[Hard]
00:32:060 (1,1,2,3) - 还不如一个spinner到底...
00:36:318 - 加note
00:38:254 (5) - 这奇葩音效是什么情况
00:44:447 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 吵 另外(7)加个nc 而且叠起来感觉很没有可玩性
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - 起码加个nc呗
01:05:544 (7) - 放后面白线比较好
01:27:028 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 叠起来感觉很没有可玩性

[Insane]
00:36:318 - 求加note然后加nc然后去后面nc
00:44:447 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 和hard一样
00:47:351 - 求加note
01:10:770 (5) - 进kiai起码加个nc吧
clap用得有点奇葩

[ExTrA]
00:51:899 - 不加note吗
01:13:673 (2,3,4) - 极度不合歌啊这...
01:27:802 (1) - finish
感觉音效也有待提高

另外音效是不是普遍有点偏大

[General]
nothing

[Easy]
[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
[Insane]
[ExTrA]
thats all I can find, nice map

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[General]
nothing

[Easy]

1. 00:22:383: how about move them to x104 y68 ? it'll make a better flow
2. 00:41:738: 3rd slider point to x400 y8?
3. 01:12:706: 2nd slider point 2 grid up and 3rd point 3grid right?

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]

1. 00:48:706: nc?
2. 00:49:093: if you do so ^ then remove nc on here
3. 01:05:738: supposed to be 1 grid up

[Insane]

1. 00:35:351: add note?

[ExTrA]

1. In my opinion, this diff should be name as "Extra"
2. 01:27:802: add finish?

thats all I can find, nice map

thanks a lot,I'll check it.

Hi, Sagisawa-Yukari~
Sorry for delay, my midterm is so crazy

[General]
NCs and hitsounds are really disorder in all diffs

[ExTrA]
00:31:093 (1) - remove NC
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - So cute, I like it, while I am not sure it is rankable. Maybe you can combine them into one slider
00:59:544 (x) - add a note here
01:15:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not so regular, you can use Ctrl+Shift+D
01:23:157 (1) - I suggest you to add a note in the center before spinner

[Insane]
01:12:318 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer the rhythm like x_xxx
01:15:415 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:512 (1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]
01:18:512 (7,8,9,1) - like [Insane]

[Normal]
00:32:060 (1,1) - in Normal/Easy diff, such spinner is not recommended, since it is too close to the next note, which is hard to the new play
00:55:286 (1) - ^
01:07:673 (1) - ^
01:23:157 (1) - ^
00:54:899 (x) - add a note here

[Easy]
00:38:254 (1) - same
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - why not set like pentagon

Good Luck~

小米來看圖~
request in-game~

General
為啥tags裡有自己的名字 lol
整體說一下~需要改進的地方很多w 音效、排列都有~
新手要學會積累經驗哦~
~~~~~~

Easy
HP & OD +1
首先這個難度的clap似乎沒有一定的規律像2 4 clap那樣~同時音效也比較雜亂無章呢~所以最好加強音效方面的能力哦~
00:16:577 (1) - 這一開始的spinner結尾怎麼那麼大聲吶~減小一點
00:25:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - combo數字達到6不適合easy難度~NC方面多考慮
00:38:254 (1,1) - 這個spinner後面的slider出現的實在是太快了~對於新手來說肯定會鬱悶的~一定要改（建議去掉spinner換成別的）
01:07:673 (1) - 在 01:09:222 這裡就結束吧
01:21:609 (1) - 後移1/2
01:21:609 (1) - 是想中線對稱麼?01:26:254 (1) - 來個finish結尾
~~~~~~

Normal
00:16:576 (1) - 爲什麽不和easy一樣結尾消音呢?
00:23:931 (5) - NC
00:32:060 (1) - 結尾聲音小聲點
01:26:254 (1) - finish
~~~~~~

Hard
00:20:835 (6) - 碰到了血條~Rule裡有規定最好不要碰到~所以降低一點
01:04:576 (4,5) - 放正了~01:05:738 (7) - NC
01:15:222 (1) - ^
01:20:060 (7) - ^
01:27:802 (13) - 這裡用finish不是很好嘛~~其它難度也要保持一樣w
~~~~~~

Insane
00:25:867 (8) - NC
00:55:286 (1) - 在 00:57:609 這裡結束~
01:09:415 - 明顯有個音~加note
~~~~~~

ExTrA
不覺得這個diff的clap有點大聲麼~~考慮換一個clap音或者降低音量w
00:16:577 - 好奇爲什麽其它diff都有的spinner在這裡卻沒有了~ ._.
00:24:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 喜歡這裡~梗不錯
00:30:802 - 這裡考慮價格note~否則會感覺太空了
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7,8,9,10) - 略吵~
01:13:673 (2,4) - 雖然堆成梗很好~但總感覺有點違和~可能是vocal這裡是兩個音而卻用一個長slider導致少了什麽的感覺
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個打起來不舒服w
01:27:899 (1) - 結尾消音~
~~~~~~

好了~就這些~作為新手還算湊合~不過要改進的地方有很多很多~
多多領悟~積累經驗 ~ 一定能做的很好的吶 >3<
Good Luck~

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Sagisawa-Yukari~
Sorry for delay, my midterm is so crazy

[General]
NCs and hitsounds are really disorder in all diffs

[ExTrA]
00:31:093 (1) - remove NC
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - So cute, I like it, while I am not sure it is rankable. Maybe you can combine them into one slider
00:59:544 (x) - add a note here
01:15:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not so regular, you can use Ctrl+Shift+D
01:23:157 (1) - I suggest you to add a note in the center before spinner

[Insane]
01:12:318 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer the rhythm like x_xxx
01:15:415 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:512 (1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]
01:18:512 (7,8,9,1) - like [Insane]

[Normal]
00:32:060 (1,1) - in Normal/Easy diff, such spinner is not recommended, since it is too close to the next note, which is hard to the new play
00:55:286 (1) - ^
01:07:673 (1) - ^
01:23:157 (1) - ^
00:54:899 (x) - add a note here

[Easy]
00:38:254 (1) - same
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - why not set like pentagon

Good Luck~

OK，时间晚点没关系啦，非常感谢XD

Midasmens wrote:

小米來看圖~
request in-game~

General
為啥tags裡有自己的名字 lol
整體說一下~需要改進的地方很多w 音效、排列都有~
新手要學會積累經驗哦~
~~~~~~

Easy
HP & OD +1
首先這個難度的clap似乎沒有一定的規律像2 4 clap那樣~同時音效也比較雜亂無章呢~所以最好加強音效方面的能力哦~
00:16:577 (1) - 這一開始的spinner結尾怎麼那麼大聲吶~減小一點
00:25:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - combo數字達到6不適合easy難度~NC方面多考慮
00:38:254 (1,1) - 這個spinner後面的slider出現的實在是太快了~對於新手來說肯定會鬱悶的~一定要改（建議去掉spinner換成別的）
01:07:673 (1) - 在 01:09:222 這裡就結束吧
01:21:609 (1) - 後移1/2
01:21:609 (1) - 是想中線對稱麼?

SPOILER

01:26:254 (1) - 來個finish結尾
~~~~~~

Normal
00:16:576 (1) - 爲什麽不和easy一樣結尾消音呢?
00:23:931 (5) - NC
00:32:060 (1) - 結尾聲音小聲點
01:26:254 (1) - finish
~~~~~~

Hard
00:20:835 (6) - 碰到了血條~Rule裡有規定最好不要碰到~所以降低一點
01:04:576 (4,5) - 放正了~

SPOILER

01:05:738 (7) - NC
01:15:222 (1) - ^
01:20:060 (7) - ^
01:27:802 (13) - 這裡用finish不是很好嘛~~其它難度也要保持一樣w
~~~~~~

Insane
00:25:867 (8) - NC
00:55:286 (1) - 在 00:57:609 這裡結束~
01:09:415 - 明顯有個音~加note
~~~~~~

ExTrA
不覺得這個diff的clap有點大聲麼~~考慮換一個clap音或者降低音量w
00:16:577 - 好奇爲什麽其它diff都有的spinner在這裡卻沒有了~ ._.
00:24:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 喜歡這裡~梗不錯
00:30:802 - 這裡考慮價格note~否則會感覺太空了
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7,8,9,10) - 略吵~
01:13:673 (2,4) - 雖然堆成梗很好~但總感覺有點違和~可能是vocal這裡是兩個音而卻用一個長slider導致少了什麽的感覺
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個打起來不舒服w
01:27:899 (1) - 結尾消音~
~~~~~~

好了~就這些~作為新手還算湊合~不過要改進的地方有很多很多~
多多領悟~積累經驗 ~ 一定能做的很好的吶 >3<
Good Luck~

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶

非常感谢，作为新手要学的东西还很多，也很谢谢能抽空来看新人的图，我会努力的XD