[Lunatic]

00:20:530 (1) - 00:20:201 (6) - ちょっとだけ被っているのが個人的に気になりました
00:26:135 (2) - 00:25:146 (7) - とスタックさせるか配置を工夫したほうがいいかもしれません　ちょっと見にくい感じがします
01:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - DSを綺麗に整える
01:47:729 (2,3) - 01:47:234 (3) - 被っていてちょっと打ちにくいです


[Hard]

00:25:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DSを整えてきれいに
00:31:734 (3) - DS
00:31:898 (4) - ^
01:08:492 (2) - ^
01:13:272 (1) - 01:12:613 (1) - 完全にスタックしていません
01:31:734 (3) - DS

nice beatmap

細かい部分の御指摘ありがとうございます:)

[Hard]
01:13:272 (1) - 01:12:613 (1) - 完全にスタックしていません
→修正しましたが、完全に一致とはいきませんでした(泣

[General]
- 全て提案なので、気に入らなければスルーで構いません。

[Normal]
00:41:294 (1) の始点を 00:41:624 に変更(終点は変えない)
- この際、00:41:294 にノートを置いた方が良いかもしれません。

[Lunatic]
00:38:992 (1) - 前のスライダーとの間隔が狭く少し分かりづらいかもしれません。
01:30:421 (1)~(3) - スライダーの角度を揃えた方が綺麗に見えると思います。
01:47:234 (3) - ここからの配置が少しズレていて左右対称になっていなかったので直してみました。

頑張ってください:D

Modありがとうございます:)
Normal,Lunatic共に指摘された箇所の修正を行いました。

General:

• Remove "Touhou" from the tags because it's already in the source. Also, remove "Tatsh" because it's in the title.
• Easy and Lunatic have a different offset than the other difficulties.
• Delete that second timing point in Hard, Lunatic, and Normal.
• I think it would be best to keep the hitsounds on soft, only until 00:46:898.

Easy:

• 00:23:168 (3) - I would put a new combo on this note to match 00:17:893 (1).
• 00:33:718 (1,2,3) - I feel as though the flow here could be better that it is. Do something like this:
• 00:46:904 (1,1) - These two sliders don't look very good. I fixed it up for you~
1st Slider:

184,192,46904,6,0,B|224:120|256:256|296:120|328:192,1,164.999995082617

2nd Slider:

328,256,49541,6,0,B|288:328|256:192|216:328|184:256,1,164.999995082617

• 01:23:827 (3) - Add a finish to this note, you can here the drum crash in the background.
• 01:24:487 (1) - I would flip this slider vertically (Ctrl + J) so that it has a better flow into (2).
• 01:26:465 (3) - Slow downs in Easy diffs aren't such a great idea, new players are sure to screw up on them.
• 01:32:399 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note, it matches the music better that way.
• 01:33:718 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern gets pretty clustered and hard to read for newer players. I would do something like this:

• 01:48:223 (5,6) - These two notes seem pretty unnecessary. I would delete them and simply expand (4) like this:


Normal:

♦ AR 7 is way to high for a normal. Try 6 or 5.
• 00:41:624 (1) - This spinner does not fit, in my opinion. I think it would be best if you map through it. But this could work:

• 01:23:821 (1) - Add a finish to the slider start. You can hear a pretty clear drum crash
• 01:29:426 (1) - I would delete this note. It seems very unnecessary and too soon after the spinner.
• 01:31:074 (1,2,3,4) - I would do something like this to enhance the flow of this pattern:
• 01:37:008 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think having sliders like this instead of these circles would give this better flow and make it more fun:

Hard:

• 00:55:305 (2) - I would delete this note, it feels much better to play.
• 01:23:821 (5) - Add finish to the slider's start, you can hear a drum crash.
• 01:26:459 (3) - Change slow down slider to 0.75 instead of 0.50. It's quite easy to over jump a slider that is at 0.50.
• 01:46:898 (1,2) - This seems pretty hard to read, in my opinion. I would do something like this instead:

Lunatic:

• 00:25:805 (1,2,3,4) - This is really hard to read. I would do something like this:
• 01:10:476 - I would add a note here to maintain flow. You could do something like this:
• 01:23:827 (3) - Add a finish to the start of this slider.You can a hear a drum crash in the background
• 01:26:465 (4) - Same as hard. Change the slider to 0.75.

Overall:
I like the map. It's a pretty well made - well balanced - map. A few mods here are there and it would be ready for a rank~

Have one of my ♪Stars♪

Fixed! And thanks for a star!!

You called for a mod in #modreqs~
Just checking the Taiko though and pointing out some minor issues I found in the standard diffs.

Easy:
[*]00:32:392 (2) - delete this slider, Copy/paste (1) and Flip it horizontaly (ctrl+h) here. looks a bit more symmetrical.
Sliders could look a bit better, but I guess it works too like this.

Normal:
[*] I suggest Circle Size: -1
[*]01:04:701 (2,3) - these notes cross the hp-bar, move them a bit down.
Rest looks fine~

Hard/Lunatic:
Looks nice, good job.

Backfire's Taiko Oni:
Not much to say but two things:
[*]00:55:970 (251~271) - delete these nasty 1/6 at the end of this stream, they are barely playable for non authentic players like me :<
If you want to add 1/6 here though I suggest the following:
First part the stream should be ddkk until 00:56:794 (261) - add a kkkd 1/6 part here and place on the following white/red ticks k d D.
The Stream should look like: ddkkddkkddkkdd(kkkd) k d D now~

[*]01:48:876 - You may copy/paste that fixed stream from above here.

You're making so nice Taiko diffs backy, why do you "ruin" them with such long 1/6 streams so often?

All in all a nice map, good luck~

Here's my fixed diff

Download: Tatsh feat. Tsukiko - Floating Darkness (macponpon) [Backfire's Taiko Oni].osu

Nice beatmap! Just a little more work, my friend

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loven' it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DarkDunskin→Thanks for Mod ~

Backfire→Updated

fireballista,rokudenashi
→Thanks Star !!

Fixed!! And thanks for a star

Hi there. From #modreqs.
(Sorry, I can't mod Taiko. So [Backfire's Taiko Oni] is ignored here.)

[General]
In tags, "nue" should be Nue and add Houjuu.

[Easy]
No problem here.

[Normal]
00:41:293 (1) - Remove this note.
00:41:623 (1) - Suggestion IMO: Remove the note at 00:43:601 and spinner at 00:44:260, then extend this spinner to either at 00:45:579 or 00:46:239.

[Hard]
HP Drain +1 or 2
01:17:887 (5) - Reverse less one time and add another similar slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244325
* If you use the above suggestion, either add another reverse on 6 or add another note to finish.
01:27:777 (1) - (Wow, a lucky slider lol) Separate this into a few slider notes with reverses like the ones you did from 01:17:228 onwards.
01:38:326 (3) - ^
01:48:876 (1) - ^

[Lunatic]
OD +2
00:33:711 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Convert them to sliders like this and this.

I hope this helps. Good luck

Fixed! Thanks for your advice!

Hi from #modreqs

blue = 変更するのを考えてもらいたいです
black = ただの提案、気に入らなければ気軽に無視してください











ごちゃごちゃしてて申し訳ないです

Good song~ and Good luck

Star~ ☆彡

スターありがとうございます！
青文字の箇所と、ヒットサウンドに関する部分の修正を行いました。
ヒットサウンドについては特に参考になりました、ありがとうございます！

love this song

I was about to do a full mod, but the timing is off

There should be 一つだけの timing point, so delete the 2nd one

BPM: 182
Offset: 4677

- Also, consider using Normal sample set , it's kinda soft right now

グッドラック

Deleted unnecessary timing point.
thanks for your advice!

from #modreqs
日本語は下手なので、分からない所があるのなら説明する~

[General]
スライダの形はもっと綺麗になれるかも。
例えば、これ → こんな感じに？

[Easy]
特にはないのです。

[Normal]
星数高いですね、ちょっと難しいかも、こうやって見ようか?　http://puu.sh/sl8Q　
（もっとスライダを使う、サークルを削除するの意味です）
00:20:524 (1) - 前の00:19:206 (3) を覆うのです、多分もっと下へ放置して方がいい

[Hard]
00:42:118 (2,3,4,5,6) - こう？　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/305102
00:54:151 (5) - 前の3は一回のみの回る、だからここも一回のみでいい、00:54:645 ここに一つのサークルを放置してください

[Lunatic]
00:55:964 (7) - 一個のサークルとスライダに変わる、スライダの回りは二回です
01:23:656 (x) - 一つのサークルを追加
01:24:645 (x) -同じ
01:24:975 (x) -同じ
01:43:443 (1) - ふむふむ。。http://puu.sh/slcm

もう十分良いの譜面です、あんまり問題は見つけないだな、
それじゃ頑張りましょう～

Modありがとうございます。
参考にしながらNormal～Lunaticの修正を行いました。
Normalはサークル→スライダーへ何箇所か変更を行いましたが星数の変動はありませんでした(泣)

star

thanks

Hi from #modreqs~

[General]
1:29:096 - Start kiai here

[Easy]
00:20:524 (1) - Add finish?
00:22:502 (2) - ^
00:23:162 (1) - ^
00:25:799 (1) - ^
00:58:766 (1) - ^
00:59:096 (2) - Add clap?
01:01:733 (6) - ^
etc. every 2nd and 4th beat add clap?

[Normal]
00:15:250 (1) - Add finish?
00:17:887 (1) - ^
00:20:524 (1) - ^
00:22:502 (4) - ^
00:23:162 (1) - ^
00:23:821 (3) - Move one square right (Grid Lv. 3)
00:25:799 (1) - Add finish?
00:32:393 (3) - Try making it prettier (clone and rotate 00:31:074 (1) here?)
00:58:767 (1) - Add finish?
Again, add clap every 2nd and 4th beat?

I'm not good with harder diffs, so /me flies away*

Fixed! Thanks for your advice!

こんにちわー、 #modrequestから

ＭＯＤは初心者なので、気に入らないのや変なのがあれば無視でお願いします

[General]
Stooryboardingでcountdownが有効になっています、特にこだわりがなければ無効にしましょう
osb.ファイルがありますが、こちらも使わないのであれば消しましょう

[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]


なんだかEasy以外適当なＭＯＤでごめんなさい
Rankedまでファイトー

Modありがとうございました

各難易度の変えた方がいいなと思った箇所に修正を行いました

love map star

Thanks Star~

hello~
from #modreqs

[GENERAL]
- Delete the .osb file cause you are not using SB, and do a full submit.
- Some of your inherited point (green line) are unsnapped.

[EASY]
- Your first inherited point is unsnapped.
- 01:18:546 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[NORMAL]
- Too hard for Normal... =,=" Maybe it's all right...
- 01:18:546 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:22:502 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:26:458 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[HARD]
- 01:18:546 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[LUNATIC]
- 00:35:689 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[COMMENT]
- Re-check all of your inherited points, maybe I miss one... =,="
- Nice mapset~ Hope you can get it ranked.

Hello~

From Mod Request

insane
00:24:810 x208→200
00:26:788(2,4) :3 ?
00:28:766 clap
00:29:425 clap
00:37:677 綺麗に　00:38:986(1,3) delete clap
00:39:315(2,4) clap here
01:00:085 00:57:477 same?
01:07:997 :3 ?
01:10:634(1,3) delete clap
01:10:964(2,4) clap
01:20:524 clap?
01:21:843 -^
01:25:140 whistle?
01:25:799 clap
01:26:458 whistle?
01:27:477 note?
01:34:865 -^
01:38:326~01:39:563 KiaiTime delete?

nice soooooooooooooooooong!!!!!!!!!!

Good luck~

downbreeze >> thanks for mod
Dagger-Gazel >> Modありがとうございます

Hey there. Found this from mod requests~
First mod, I'll do my best :3


First, check this thread out: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
I learned A LOT when reading it. I'll mention a lot of your sliders.

Easy:

00:17:887 (1) - bad slider shape. try to make it more symmetrical with the help of the thread I posted above
00:20:524 (1) - ^
00:20:524 (1) - ^
00:23:162 (1) - ^
00:25:140 (2) -
00:31:074 (1,2) - ^ (Also, the spacing is too high at this point. Always use distance snap, at least in easier diffs)
00:35:030 (3) - Again, the slidershape looks bad
00:36:348 (1,2,3) - ^
00:41:623 (1) - ^ (In this case, just lower the middle slider point by 2 grids, the slider will become symmetrical)
00:42:942 (1) - ^ (same as the previous slider)
00:46:898 (1) - ^ (Good idea, make it symmetrical and it'll look nice)
00:49:535 (1) - ^ (same)
00:52:173 (1,4) - ^
00:55:469 (4) - ^
01:00:085 (4) - ^
01:06:678 (5) - ^ (u guessed it already, huh?)
01:08:656 (3) - ^
01:24:480 (1,3) - ^
01:34:370 (2) - Instead of this repeating slider, add a single circle here. The slider might be confusing for beginners
01:35:030 (1) - Slider shape (I leave this one to you, it looks like it's not supposed to be symmetrical, but in my opinion it would look better)
01:36:678 (2) - ^
01:39:645 (1) - ^
01:42:282 (2) - ^
01:44:590 (3) - ^
01:46:239 (2,4) - ^


So basically, recheck all your sliders. See, especially in easy and normal diffs, where u have slower slider speed, the player can, and WILL see even the smallest problems with ur sliders. It just feels better to play if they all look nice. The Diff is great though
Also, I wil NOT continue mentioning every goddamn slider in the other diffs. Just remember to recheck them all, even if it's a lot of work. U want to get this beatmap as perfect as possible, don't u? :3

Normal

Circle Size +1 O_O It's already rare for hard and insane maps to have to have such little circles...
Diff looks fine aside from that, but..

00:53:492 (4) - When seeing this, I realized something: You don't have any sliders with red slider points in Easy Diff. Why?

Hard
OD -1

00:25:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream looks..well...not good. I recommend using distance snap to get the spacing consistent. Also try to make it look nicer. You can use Grid Level 4 to make it look more round without any edges. However, consider this is only a hard diff, and this song has e pretty high BPM. I myself cannot pass this stream without any 100's (At least not without reducing the OD by 1) I recommend to make it a little shorter so the diff doesn't get too hard suddenly.

00:33:382 (5) - This circle might be a little hard to see. Move or delete it (Maybe instead of putting it below 3, you could place it below 4.
01:34:371 (8,9,10) - Actually, this triplet feels a bit random because its the only one.. It doesn't feel bad though. I suggest u add more of those in your diff, preferably at the end in the Kiai Time. Would improve the whole flow a little IMO.

Again, remember to make your sliders more beautiful

Lunatic

HP Drain Rate (AT LEAST) -1 (Still seems extremely high to me, lol)


00:20:524 (1,2,3,4) - Nice Idea, however, increase the spacing. Make the player jump a bit. Show him this is the hardest diff of your mapset.
00:23:162 (1,2,3,4) - When mapping such jumps, try to get the shape right. In a square like this, every circle should be 90 degrees from the previous one (I am VERY sure this was NOT correct grammar, I hope u understand what I'm trying to say). Also, as before, make those jumps harder, as this is the hardest diff on the mapset.
00:27:124 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:38:992 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:04:047 (1,2,3,4) - I like that formation of sliders, feels pretty awesome
01:17:234 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Well, I already mentioned it before. While the rest of the map is rather easy, such a long stream on such a high BPM always kills my Combo D: I suggest u make it a bit shorter...
01:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same goes for this
01:38:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - And again <_<


Awesome diff, awesome song, awesome mapset, however, u might add a few more jumps in Lunatic.
And dont forget to remake your sliders

Good Luck with getting it ranked

thanks for Mod

In all honesty I'm lucky to find one not-yet ranked song used in the WinDEU Hates You series, and I have to map them.

http://puu.sh/K8uo

BG for the taikos incoming, will edit.

Backfire's Taiko Oni BG : http://puu.sh/K8Zx

WinZoda's Taiko Inner Oni (if added) BG : http://puu.sh/K8ZR

thanks for Mod

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