Hey there. Found this from mod requests~
First mod, I'll do my best :3
First, check this thread out:
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194I learned A LOT when reading it. I'll mention a lot of your sliders.
Easy: 00:17:887 (1) - bad slider shape. try to make it more symmetrical with the help of the thread I posted above
00:20:524 (1) - ^
00:20:524 (1) - ^
00:23:162 (1) - ^
00:25:140 (2) -
00:31:074 (1,2) - ^ (Also, the spacing is too high at this point. Always use distance snap, at least in easier diffs)
00:35:030 (3) - Again, the slidershape looks bad
00:36:348 (1,2,3) - ^
00:41:623 (1) - ^ (In this case, just lower the middle slider point by 2 grids, the slider will become symmetrical)
00:42:942 (1) - ^ (same as the previous slider)
00:46:898 (1) - ^ (Good idea, make it symmetrical and it'll look nice)
00:49:535 (1) - ^ (same)
00:52:173 (1,4) - ^
00:55:469 (4) - ^
01:00:085 (4) - ^
01:06:678 (5) - ^ (u guessed it already, huh?)
01:08:656 (3) - ^
01:24:480 (1,3) - ^
01:34:370 (2) - Instead of this repeating slider, add a single circle here. The slider might be confusing for beginners
01:35:030 (1) - Slider shape (I leave this one to you, it looks like it's not supposed to be symmetrical, but in my opinion it would look better)
01:36:678 (2) - ^
01:39:645 (1) - ^
01:42:282 (2) - ^
01:44:590 (3) - ^
01:46:239 (2,4) - ^
So basically, recheck all your sliders. See, especially in easy and normal diffs, where u have slower slider speed, the player can, and WILL see even the smallest problems with ur sliders. It just feels better to play if they all look nice. The Diff is great though
Also, I wil NOT continue mentioning every goddamn slider in the other diffs. Just remember to recheck them all, even if it's a lot of work. U want to get this beatmap as perfect as possible, don't u? :3
NormalCircle Size +1 O_O It's already rare for hard and insane maps to have to have such little circles...
Diff looks fine aside from that, but..
00:53:492 (4) - When seeing this, I realized something: You don't have any sliders with red slider points in Easy Diff. Why?
HardOD -1
00:25:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream looks..well...not good. I recommend using distance snap to get the spacing consistent. Also try to make it look nicer. You can use Grid Level 4 to make it look more round without any edges. However, consider this is only a hard diff, and this song has e pretty high BPM. I myself cannot pass this stream without any 100's (At least not without reducing the OD by 1) I recommend to make it a little shorter so the diff doesn't get too hard suddenly.
00:33:382 (5) - This circle might be a little hard to see. Move or delete it (Maybe instead of putting it below 3, you could place it below 4.
01:34:371 (8,9,10) - Actually, this triplet feels a bit random because its the only one.. It doesn't feel bad though. I suggest u add more of those in your diff, preferably at the end in the Kiai Time. Would improve the whole flow a little IMO.
Again, remember to make your sliders more beautiful
LunaticHP Drain Rate (AT LEAST) -1 (Still seems extremely high to me, lol)
00:20:524 (1,2,3,4) - Nice Idea, however, increase the spacing. Make the player jump a bit. Show him this is the hardest diff of your mapset.
00:23:162 (1,2,3,4) - When mapping such jumps, try to get the shape right. In a square like this, every circle should be 90 degrees from the previous one (I am VERY sure this was NOT correct grammar, I hope u understand what I'm trying to say). Also, as before, make those jumps harder, as this is the hardest diff on the mapset.
00:27:124 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:38:992 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:04:047 (1,2,3,4) - I like that formation of sliders, feels pretty awesome
01:17:234 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Well, I already mentioned it before. While the rest of the map is rather easy, such a long stream on such a high BPM always kills my Combo D: I suggest u make it a bit shorter...
01:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same goes for this
01:38:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - And again <_<
Awesome diff, awesome song, awesome mapset, however, u might add a few more jumps in Lunatic.
And dont forget to remake your sliders
Good Luck with getting it ranked