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Tatsh feat. Tsukiko - Floating Darkness [Taiko|Osu]

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macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
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macponpon
Finished fixing the note where you pointed out.

Thanks for your advice!
Priestess_old
Priestess_old
easy

00:33:718 (3) - new combo
00:38:992 (3) - ^
00:42:948 (1) - ^
00:52:179 (5) - ^
00:54:487 (9) - delete
01:15:915 (1) - new combo
01:24:487 (4) - ^
01:32:399 (3) - ^
01:33:388 (4) - delete
01:33:718 (4) - new combo
01:36:355 (3) - ^
01:41:630 (1) - ^
01:45:256 (4) - ->01:45:586 - and new combo
01:47:564 (7) - new combo


normal

00:33:712 (5) - new combo
00:38:986 (8) - ^
00:44:261 (1) - remove the tail ->00:46:239 -
00:54:810 (6) - new combo
01:00:085 (5) - ^
01:04:041 (5) - ^
01:09:316 (5) - ^
01:14:591 (3) - ^(?)
01:17:228 (6) - ^
01:23:821 (5) - ^
01:31:074 (4) - ^
01:43:602 (5) - ^
01:46:898 (5) - ^


hard

00:29:756 (4) - new combo
00:32:393 (7) - ^
00:35:030 (5) - ^
00:38:986 (5) - ^
00:42:942 (7) - ^
00:56:129 (6) - ^
01:00:085 (5) - ^
01:04:041 (6) - ^
01:06:679 (6) - ^
01:09:316 (6) - ^
01:12:613 (5) - ^
01:14:591 (5) - ^
01:27:777 (5) - ^(?)
01:30:250 (5) - ^
01:37:668 (5) - ^
01:44:261 (5) - ^
01:48:876 (7) - ^ and add 1 return arrow

insane

*please use 'distance snap' whole of map
00:28:113 (4) - x:384 y:192
00:32:399 (5) - new combo
00:35:036 (5) - ^
00:37:674 (7) - ^
00:40:311 (5) - ^
00:42:948 (8) - ^
01:00:091 (6) - ^
01:00:091 (6) - ^
01:02:729 (5) - ^
01:05:366 (5) - ^
01:09:322 (5) - ^
01:11:959 (5) - ^
01:14:597 (5) - ^
01:17:893 (1) - ^(?)
01:21:190 (6) - ^
01:25:146 (6) - ^
01:28:443 (9) - ^(?)
01:30:421 (4) - ^
01:32:729 (5) - ^
01:35:860 (4) - ^
01:38:333 (7) - ^
01:38:992 (15) - ^(?)
01:41:135 (6) - ^
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Thanks for your advice!
Lidan
268 posts
Joined February 2011
Lidan
Hey :3

[General]
  1. You forgot to add the source & tags on [Normal]
  2. The hitsound volume is on 100% on every diff, in every section, reduce it to maybe 60% - 70%
  3. The first 26 seconds aren't mapped, either cut the mp3 or map it, starting from 00:15:250. I suggest you to map it, since the taiko diff also starts on 00:15:250. If you map it, change Offset to 15250.
  4. I don't really like the hitsounds... :S They sound pretty... meh.
[Lunatic]
SPOILER
  1. Change the slider velocity to something higher, 1,40 is a bit slow for an Lunatic imo.
  2. 00:26:465 - That timing point here is pretty much useless, because it changes nothing.
  3. 00:27:124 - ^
  4. 00:27:454 - ^
  5. 00:28:443 (1) - Stack this with 00:28:113 (4).
  6. 00:28:443 - Useless timing point~
  7. 00:30:421 - ^
  8. 00:30:751 - ^
  9. 00:33:718 - ^
  10. 00:35:366 - ^
  11. 00:36:355 - ^
  12. 00:36:685 - ^
  13. 00:37:674 - ^
  14. 00:38:992 - ^
  15. 00:40:337 - Useless and unsnapped timing point.
  16. 00:40:641 (2) - Spacing
  17. 00:41:630 - Useless timing point.
  18. 01:04:047 - ^
  19. 01:05:366 - ^
  20. 01:06:025 - ^
  21. 01:08:003 - ^
  22. 01:10:146 - ^
  23. 01:10:641 - ^
  24. 01:11:959 - ^
  25. 01:14:597 - ^
  26. 01:16:804 - Unsnapped & useless timing point.
  27. 01:18:553 - Delete this timing point.
  28. 01:18:882 - Change sampleset to soft and use some claps.
  29. 01:26:465 - Change sampleset to soft
  30. 01:30:421 (1) - Spacing to maybe 2,0x it's at 6,02x right now, lol.
  31. 01:31:410 (1,2) - Spacing
  32. 01:39:075 (2) - Spacing to 0,5x
  33. 01:39:981 - Useless timing point
  34. 01:41:135 - ^
  35. What the heck did you do here...? Did you randomly add timing points for the lulz or what did you do? o.o

[Hard]
  1. 01:13:272 (1) - Stack the end with the repeat of 01:12:613 (1), like this: http://puu.sh/7v1V
  2. 01:26:476 - Move this timing point to 01:27:448.
[Normal]
  1. 00:41:294 (1) - Pretty random spinner imo... Maybe remove it and map something there?
  2. 01:17:558 (2) - Stack with the start of 01:16:569 (5).
  3. 01:26:465 - Remove this timing point.
  4. 01:27:774 - ^
  5. 01:31:404 (2) - Stack with end of 01:30:415 (3).
[Easy]
  1. Slider tick rate -> 1
  2. Reduce the slider velocity to maybe 1,10.
  3. 00:31:080 (1) - Spacing
  4. 01:01:410 (2) - ^
  5. 01:05:366 (1) - ^
  6. 01:18:553 - Remove timing point.
  7. 01:27:784 - ^
  8. 01:29:102 - ^
  9. 01:29:432 - ^
This still needs some work imo. Good luck though.
macponpon
33 posts
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Topic Starter
macponpon
Thanks for your advice!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Random mod for hit sounds ^^

294817237211

[Easy]
sliders curved with 2 points look better here than your 1 point ones...
I mean the 2-beat ones...
um use soft sound for the first part too

[Normal]
HP Drain -2
same sound suggestions as [Hard]...

[Hard]
vol 100% is too high for early parts...
um use soft sound for the first part

00:35:360 (2,3) - clap
00:33:052 (3) - ^
00:34:371 (3) - ^
01:06:679 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:283 (4,1) - ^
01:33:712 (4,6,7,8) - clap?
01:34:371 (8) - whistle?

[Lunatic]
use soft sound for the first part
00:28:443 (1) - -1 reverse
00:54:487 (3) - clap on the head
00:45:586 (1,2,3) - add finish
00:57:454 (1,3) - whistle
00:58:773 (5) - clap on the head & 2nd reverse
01:01:410 (1) - whistle
01:06:685 (2,3,4) - whistle on the head
01:12:289 (2) - clap or finish
01:26:465 (4) - spacing?
01:39:652 (9) - whistle
01:40:805 (5) - ^ on the end
01:42:289 (1) - ^
01:44:267 (4) - ^
01:43:443 (1) - ^ on the end
01:45:586 (3,6) - ^
01:46:904 (2,3) - ^ on the head
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Thanks for your advice of a hit sounds :D
Sherry
213 posts
Joined December 2010
Sherry
:)
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
[Lunatic]

00:20:530 (1) - 00:20:201 (6) - ちょっとだけ被っているのが個人的に気になりました
00:26:135 (2) - 00:25:146 (7) - とスタックさせるか配置を工夫したほうがいいかもしれません　ちょっと見にくい感じがします
01:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - DSを綺麗に整える
01:47:729 (2,3) - 01:47:234 (3) - 被っていてちょっと打ちにくいです


[Hard]

00:25:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DSを整えてきれいに
00:31:734 (3) - DS
00:31:898 (4) - ^
01:08:492 (2) - ^
01:13:272 (1) - 01:12:613 (1) - 完全にスタックしていません
01:31:734 (3) - DS

nice beatmap :)
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
細かい部分の御指摘ありがとうございます:)

[Hard]
01:13:272 (1) - 01:12:613 (1) - 完全にスタックしていません
→修正しましたが、完全に一致とはいきませんでした(泣
Nanakase Gizumo
240 posts
Joined August 2009
Nanakase Gizumo
[General]
- 全て提案なので、気に入らなければスルーで構いません。

[Normal]
00:41:294 (1) の始点を 00:41:624 に変更(終点は変えない)
- この際、00:41:294 にノートを置いた方が良いかもしれません。

[Lunatic]
00:38:992 (1) - 前のスライダーとの間隔が狭く少し分かりづらいかもしれません。
01:30:421 (1)~(3) - スライダーの角度を揃えた方が綺麗に見えると思います。
01:47:234 (3) - ここからの配置が少しズレていて左右対称になっていなかったので直してみました。
Img & Code

172,76,107234,2,0,B|260:76,1,85,10|0
257,76,107564,5,0
212,148,107729,1,0
300,148,107893,1,8
300,236,108058,1,0
212,236,108223,1,0
256,164,108388,5,0
256,252,108553,1,8

頑張ってください:D
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Modありがとうございます:)
Normal,Lunatic共に指摘された箇所の修正を行いました。
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
General:

• Remove "Touhou" from the tags because it's already in the source. Also, remove "Tatsh" because it's in the title.
• Easy and Lunatic have a different offset than the other difficulties.
• Delete that second timing point in Hard, Lunatic, and Normal.
• I think it would be best to keep the hitsounds on soft, only until 00:46:898.

Easy:

• 00:23:168 (3) - I would put a new combo on this note to match 00:17:893 (1).
• 00:33:718 (1,2,3) - I feel as though the flow here could be better that it is. Do something like this:
SPOILER
• 00:46:904 (1,1) - These two sliders don't look very good. I fixed it up for you~
1st Slider:
184,192,46904,6,0,B|224:120|256:256|296:120|328:192,1,164.999995082617
2nd Slider:
328,256,49541,6,0,B|288:328|256:192|216:328|184:256,1,164.999995082617

• 01:23:827 (3) - Add a finish to this note, you can here the drum crash in the background.
• 01:24:487 (1) - I would flip this slider vertically (Ctrl + J) so that it has a better flow into (2).
• 01:26:465 (3) - Slow downs in Easy diffs aren't such a great idea, new players are sure to screw up on them.
• 01:32:399 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note, it matches the music better that way.
• 01:33:718 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern gets pretty clustered and hard to read for newer players. I would do something like this:

• 01:48:223 (5,6) - These two notes seem pretty unnecessary. I would delete them and simply expand (4) like this:


Normal:

♦ AR 7 is way to high for a normal. Try 6 or 5.
• 00:41:624 (1) - This spinner does not fit, in my opinion. I think it would be best if you map through it. But this could work:

• 01:23:821 (1) - Add a finish to the slider start. You can hear a pretty clear drum crash
• 01:29:426 (1) - I would delete this note. It seems very unnecessary and too soon after the spinner.
• 01:31:074 (1,2,3,4) - I would do something like this to enhance the flow of this pattern:
SPOILER
• 01:37:008 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think having sliders like this instead of these circles would give this better flow and make it more fun:
SPOILER

Hard:

• 00:55:305 (2) - I would delete this note, it feels much better to play.
• 01:23:821 (5) - Add finish to the slider's start, you can hear a drum crash.
• 01:26:459 (3) - Change slow down slider to 0.75 instead of 0.50. It's quite easy to over jump a slider that is at 0.50.
• 01:46:898 (1,2) - This seems pretty hard to read, in my opinion. I would do something like this instead:
SPOILER

Lunatic:

• 00:25:805 (1,2,3,4) - This is really hard to read. I would do something like this:
SPOILER
• 01:10:476 - I would add a note here to maintain flow. You could do something like this:
SPOILER
• 01:23:827 (3) - Add a finish to the start of this slider.You can a hear a drum crash in the background
• 01:26:465 (4) - Same as hard. Change the slider to 0.75.

Overall:
I like the map. It's a pretty well made - well balanced - map. A few mods here are there and it would be ready for a rank~

Have one of my ♪Stars♪
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Fixed! And thanks for a star!!
DarkDunskin
1,874 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
You called for a mod in #modreqs~
Just checking the Taiko though and pointing out some minor issues I found in the standard diffs.

Easy:
[*]00:32:392 (2) - delete this slider, Copy/paste (1) and Flip it horizontaly (ctrl+h) here. looks a bit more symmetrical.
Sliders could look a bit better, but I guess it works too like this.

Normal:
[*] I suggest Circle Size: -1
[*]01:04:701 (2,3) - these notes cross the hp-bar, move them a bit down.
Rest looks fine~

Hard/Lunatic:
Looks nice, good job.

Backfire's Taiko Oni:
Not much to say but two things:
[*]00:55:970 (251~271) - delete these nasty 1/6 at the end of this stream, they are barely playable for non authentic players like me :<
If you want to add 1/6 here though I suggest the following:
First part the stream should be ddkk until 00:56:794 (261) - add a kkkd 1/6 part here and place on the following white/red ticks k d D.
The Stream should look like: ddkkddkkddkkdd(kkkd) k d D now~

[*]01:48:876 - You may copy/paste that fixed stream from above here.

You're making so nice Taiko diffs backy, why do you "ruin" them with such long 1/6 streams so often?

All in all a nice map, good luck~
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Here's my fixed diff :x

Download: Tatsh feat. Tsukiko - Floating Darkness (macponpon) [Backfire's Taiko Oni].osu
Noimanivone
3 posts
Joined July 2010
Noimanivone
Nice beatmap! Just a little more work, my friend :D
rokudenasi
2 posts
Joined November 2010
rokudenasi
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loven' it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
DarkDunskin→Thanks for Mod ~ :)

Backfire→Updated :D

fireballista,rokudenashi
→Thanks Star :) !!
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos
Hiyo~

I remember I played this song on the 1st day i tried osu lol

[General]
SPOILER

  1. Why do i feel timing is off (really) O_o
    Offset - 25? it was (at least) 25-30 ms early when i tested ur map =/
    Remember to resnap all notes and re-adjust all time sections
  2. Try to keep a same volume for all diffs (at 60%). Lunatic's main volume is 60%, while Hard is 70%, Normal is 100%. Any reason for this? o_o
  3. U should consider to add more hitsound to the first part of all diffs =/
[Lunatic]
SPOILER
Some suggestions for hitsound for the 1st part
00:15:249 - set (only) this time section volume ~ 40%
00:15:249 (1) - finish at the start
00:16:568 (4) - whistle at the start
00:17:228 (5,6) - finish
00:19:206 (3) - whistle at start
00:19:865 (5,6) - finish
00:22:502 (4) - finish at the start and the end
00:24:480 (5,6) - finish at the start
And we end the 1st part here lol
00:25:785 (1,1) - finish at the start
00:31:060 (1,1) - ^
00:36:334 (1,1) - ^
00:44:246 (1) - clap at the start
00:46:898 (x) - add note
00:58:752 (5) - finish at the start
01:18:862 (1) - end this slider at 01:19:192? x_x
01:29:082 (9) - finish, move time section at 01:29:411 (1) - to this point, KIAI should start here
make a change in other diff as well if u follow my suggestions, i wont re-post =/
[Hard]
SPOILER
00:46:868(x) - add note, or make break time start here
01:18:516(x) - ^
01:26:428 (3) - end this slider at 01:26:923 (red tick)
01:29:066 - KIAI should start here
01:48:846 (1) - star this slider at 01:48:681? end still the same
[Normal]
SPOILER
CS +1, OD -1
SV in this diff is the same with SV in Hard? O_o
00:41:624 (1) - this spinner is quite short for a normal diff
how about make it end at 00:43:601? remove 00:43:602 (1) -
01:18:546 (x) - add note
01:27:778 (1) - same problem with 00:41:624 (1) -
[Easy]
SPOILER
Some quick mod for this diff
00:56:129 (1) - too short for an easy diff
01:02:722 (1,2) - remove whistle
01:13:245 (1,2) - ^
01:18:520 - add note
01:48:850 (1) - start at 01:48:685

Ok...I think I should star this ^^
Good luck~
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Fixed!! And thanks for a star :D
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
Joined October 2010
PROGUY
Hi there. From #modreqs.
(Sorry, I can't mod Taiko. So [Backfire's Taiko Oni] is ignored here.)

[General]
In tags, "nue" should be Nue and add Houjuu.

[Easy]
No problem here.

[Normal]
00:41:293 (1) - Remove this note.
00:41:623 (1) - Suggestion IMO: Remove the note at 00:43:601 and spinner at 00:44:260, then extend this spinner to either at 00:45:579 or 00:46:239.

[Hard]
HP Drain +1 or 2
01:17:887 (5) - Reverse less one time and add another similar slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244325
* If you use the above suggestion, either add another reverse on 6 or add another note to finish.
01:27:777 (1) - (Wow, a lucky slider lol) Separate this into a few slider notes with reverses like the ones you did from 01:17:228 onwards.
01:38:326 (3) - ^
01:48:876 (1) - ^

[Lunatic]
OD +2
00:33:711 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Convert them to sliders like this and this.

I hope this helps. Good luck ;)
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Fixed! Thanks for your advice!
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
Hi from #modreqs :)

blue = 変更するのを考えてもらいたいです
black = ただの提案、気に入らなければ気軽に無視してください


Easy
  • [Easy]
  1. 00:52:173 (1) - remove clap
  2. 00:54:480 (1) - 削除? (Easyにしてはちょっと難しいかなと感じました)　（もしこの提案を使うのであれば次のnoteからclap削除)
  3. 00:55:469 (4) - サークル1つに?
  4. 01:02:722 (1,2) - whistleを統一した方がいいかと。つけるのであればスライダーの頭と末尾にも付けた方が良いです
  5. 01:05:359 (1,2,3,4) - EasyでBPM182の1/2を4連発は難しいかな? どれかスライダーにすれば少し楽になるとおもいます
  6. 01:13:271 (1,2) - ここもwhistle統一
  7. 01:22:502 (1) - 緑線がずれていてここだけ不自然にNormal Hitsoundになってます
  8. 01:33:711 (1,2,1) - [remove/add/remove] combo ?
  9. 01:41:623 (1) - remove new combo?
  10. 01:42:282 (2) - clapを頭でなく末尾に?
  11. 01:46:898 (3) - clap

Normal
  • [Normal+]
  1. 01:04:041 (1) - remove new combo?
  2. 01:09:316 (1) - ^
  3. 01:09:646 (2) - 01:07:997 (1)～　みたいにここをスタックさせず次をさせてみては
  4. 01:14:591 (1) - remove new combo?
  5. 01:15:250 (3,4,5,1) - [clapの場所提案] (3)の末尾にclap + (4,5)のclap削除 + (1)にclap ?
  6. 01:31:074 (1) - remove new combo
  7. 01:37:008 (4,1) - それぞれ末尾にclap


Hard
  • [Hard]
  1. OD -1?
  2. 00:25:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/4が4つあるスライダー2つ（後に出てくるようなもの）にしてみては
  3. 00:46:898 (1) - finish?
    {*]00:53:492 (3) - 末尾からclap削除


Lunatic
  • [Lunatic]
  1. HP -1?
  2. 00:33:058 (3,4,5,7) - それぞれ頭にclap
  3. 00:46:898 (1) - finish?
  4. 01:06:520 (1,2) - [remove/add] combo?
  5. 01:24:645 (x) - Add a circle? HardRockつけるとAutoでもHPが40%程になるのが気になりました。以下も同様
  6. 01:24:975 (x) - ^
  7. 01:25:634 (x) - ^
  8. 01:26:293 (x) - ^

Backfire's Taiko Oni
  • [Backfire's Taiko Oni]
  1. Feel free to ignore if you don't like :lol:
  2. 00:15:250 - why soft Hitsound? It's not a problem but I think Normal Hitsound is better
  3. 00:25:799 (63) - d ?
  4. 00:57:447 (269) - ^
  5. 01:17:227 (421) - k ?
  6. 01:24:480 (453) - kdd ?
  7. 01:27:778 (464) - K(big) ?



ごちゃごちゃしてて申し訳ないです :?

Good song~ and Good luck :)

Star~ ☆彡
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
スターありがとうございます！
青文字の箇所と、ヒットサウンドに関する部分の修正を行いました。
ヒットサウンドについては特に参考になりました、ありがとうございます！
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
love this song

I was about to do a full mod, but the timing is off

There should be 一つだけの timing point, so delete the 2nd one

BPM: 182
Offset: 4677

- Also, consider using Normal sample set , it's kinda soft right now

グッドラック :D
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Deleted unnecessary timing point.
thanks for your advice!
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
from #modreqs
日本語は下手なので、分からない所があるのなら説明する~ :)

[General]
スライダの形はもっと綺麗になれるかも。
例えば、これ → こんな感じに？

[Easy]
特にはないのです。

[Normal]
星数高いですね、ちょっと難しいかも、こうやって見ようか?　http://puu.sh/sl8Q　
（もっとスライダを使う、サークルを削除するの意味です）
00:20:524 (1) - 前の00:19:206 (3) を覆うのです、多分もっと下へ放置して方がいい

[Hard]
00:42:118 (2,3,4,5,6) - こう？　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/305102
00:54:151 (5) - 前の3は一回のみの回る、だからここも一回のみでいい、00:54:645 ここに一つのサークルを放置してください

[Lunatic]
00:55:964 (7) - 一個のサークルとスライダに変わる、スライダの回りは二回です
01:23:656 (x) - 一つのサークルを追加
01:24:645 (x) -同じ
01:24:975 (x) -同じ
01:43:443 (1) - ふむふむ。。http://puu.sh/slcm

もう十分良いの譜面です、あんまり問題は見つけないだな、 :o
それじゃ頑張りましょう～
macponpon
33 posts
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macponpon
Modありがとうございます。
参考にしながらNormal～Lunaticの修正を行いました。
Normalはサークル→スライダーへ何箇所か変更を行いましたが星数の変動はありませんでした(泣)
LinGt_old
2 posts
Joined December 2010
LinGt_old
star
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
thanks :)
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
Hi from #modreqs~

[General]
1:29:096 - Start kiai here

[Easy]
00:20:524 (1) - Add finish?
00:22:502 (2) - ^
00:23:162 (1) - ^
00:25:799 (1) - ^
00:58:766 (1) - ^
00:59:096 (2) - Add clap?
01:01:733 (6) - ^
etc. every 2nd and 4th beat add clap?

[Normal]
00:15:250 (1) - Add finish?
00:17:887 (1) - ^
00:20:524 (1) - ^
00:22:502 (4) - ^
00:23:162 (1) - ^
00:23:821 (3) - Move one square right (Grid Lv. 3)
00:25:799 (1) - Add finish?
00:32:393 (3) - Try making it prettier (clone and rotate 00:31:074 (1) here?)
00:58:767 (1) - Add finish?
Again, add clap every 2nd and 4th beat?

I'm not good with harder diffs, so /me flies away*
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Fixed! Thanks for your advice!
ArtBox_old
105 posts
Joined February 2012
ArtBox_old
こんにちわー、 #modrequestから

ＭＯＤは初心者なので、気に入らないのや変なのがあれば無視でお願いします :o

[General]
Stooryboardingでcountdownが有効になっています、特にこだわりがなければ無効にしましょう
osb.ファイルがありますが、こちらも使わないのであれば消しましょう

[Easy]
SPOILER
全体の音量を100％から80％に変更して下さい

00:16:568 (2,3) - 流れ的にほんの少しだけ引っ掛けになる気がします（問題ないとは思いますが）
　　　　　　　　　出来たら00:19:206 (2,3) - のように順繰りになるようにすると良いかも知れません

00:25:799 (1) - 若干スタック気味になるので位置をずらした方が良いかも知れません
00:46:898 (1) - ここの青線は消しても良いのでは？
00:52:173 (1) - ＾
00:46:898 (1) - ここのGreen Timing pointのhitsoundをNomalからsoftに（設定ミスだとは思いますが）
00:52:173 (1) - ここから00:55:469 (4) - までnoteが連続で来ています
　　　　　　　　Easyでこれは難しい（ＢＰＭも182と高い）ので
　　　　　　　　noteの間隔をどうにかして空けた方が良いと思います
　　　　　　　　（それでなければ、ＨＰを-1した方が良いと思います）
　　　　　　　
01:01:403 (5) - ＮＣ
01:01:403 (5,6,7) - Easyなのでスタックさせない方が良いです
01:12:612 (5) - ＾
01:17:228 (3,4,5) - ^
01:17:557 (4) - ＮＣ

01:34:370 (2) - Easyなのでこのスライダーの折り返しは出来たら止めて方が良いと思います
この↓3つは↑の代案です、他の方法でも構いません　　　　　　　
01:33:711 (1) - 01:34:370 (2) - 削除
01:33:381 (4) - add note
01:33:711 (5) - add slider01:34:041で折り返し一回

01:37:667 (3) - ＮＣ
01:38:326 (1) - ＮＣ
01:41:623 (1) - ＮＣ

この↓2つはかなり個人的な意見です、スルーしてもらって構いません
01:42:282 (2) - スライダーの終わりにvocalの始めが来ているのでなんだが不自然です
01:43:601 (1,2) - 次に打つまでの感覚が微妙に空いていて流れるように出来ていない気がします
　　　　　　　　　　　　　vocalとも合っていない気がするので、修正した方が良いかもしれません
01:45:579 (1) - Grid Level3で1～2grid下げ方が良いかも？

[Normal]
SPOILER
HP-1,OD-1（が良いかも？）
00:29:096 (3) - ＮＣ
00:33:382 (4) - ＮＣ
00:33:712 (2) - ＮＣ
00:35:030 (4) - ＮＣ
01:33:712 (3) - ＮＣ
01:41:953 (6) - ＮＣ

よく出来たMAPだと思います :)

[Hard]
SPOILER
ＨＰ+1、ＯＤ+1（流石にＯＤは+1した方が無難かと思います）
Slider Velocityが1.40ですが、これはＮｏｍａｌと同じなので変えた方が良いと思います。
（もう少しだけ早くしても良いと思います）

00:31:734 (3,4,5) -ここは綺麗に並べてあげると個人的に打ちやすい気がします ↓


これも良い感じのＭＡＰだと思いました


なんだかEasy以外適当なＭＯＤでごめんなさい :?
Rankedまでファイトー :oops:
macponpon
33 posts
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macponpon
Modありがとうございました :D

各難易度の変えた方がいいなと思った箇所に修正を行いました 8-)
motokunn
2 posts
Joined October 2010
motokunn
love map star :)
macponpon
33 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
macponpon
Thanks Star~ :D
dawnbreeze_old
17 posts
Joined March 2012
dawnbreeze_old
hello~
from #modreqs

[GENERAL]
- Delete the .osb file cause you are not using SB, and do a full submit.
- Some of your inherited point (green line) are unsnapped.

[EASY]
- Your first inherited point is unsnapped.
- 01:18:546 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[NORMAL]
- Too hard for Normal... =,=" Maybe it's all right...
- 01:18:546 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:22:502 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:26:458 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[HARD]
- 01:18:546 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[LUNATIC]
- 00:35:689 unsnapped inherited point.
- 01:27:777 unsnapped inherited point.

[COMMENT]
- Re-check all of your inherited points, maybe I miss one... =,="
- Nice mapset~ Hope you can get it ranked. :)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Hello~

From Mod Request

insane
00:24:810 x208→200
00:26:788(2,4)
:3 ?
00:28:766 clap
00:29:425 clap
00:37:677 綺麗に　
00:38:986(1,3) delete clap
00:39:315(2,4) clap here
01:00:085 00:57:477 same?
01:07:997
:3 ?
01:10:634(1,3) delete clap
01:10:964(2,4) clap
01:20:524 clap?
01:21:843 -^
01:25:140 whistle?
01:25:799 clap
01:26:458 whistle?
01:27:477 note?
01:34:865 -^
01:38:326~01:39:563 KiaiTime delete?

nice soooooooooooooooooong!!!!!!!!!!

Good luck~
macponpon
33 posts
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macponpon
downbreeze >> thanks for mod ;)
Dagger-Gazel >> Modありがとうございます :D
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