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Hi!

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d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

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  HP: 8
  
  Remove the Display Epilepsy Warning.

1. 00:07:989 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - Long and a bit hard pattern for a easy diff, please remove to flows much better 00:09:353 (15) - , 00:12:080 (22) -
2. 00:22:535 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - Same, remove 00:23:898 (40) - , add a k 00:25:489 - and remove 00:26:626 (46) - to keep consistency with the previous suggestion (Make it only if you apply the previous suggestion)
3. 00:29:807 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - Long pattern too, please remove 00:31:171 (53) -
4. 00:29:807 (50,51) - Change to k and change to k too 00:32:080 (55) - to variate a bit and flow much better with the tones.
5. 00:38:895 - End the spinner, because this sound 00:36:038 (64) - ends here.

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  Remove the Display Epilepsy Warning.

1. 00:02:989 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - Can be much better if you move 00:03:444 (12) - to 00:03:671 - for keep the tones, similar to 00:14:580 (17,18,19,20) -
   00:14:580 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - You need change and move somes notes to keep consistency and density with 00:00:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I suggest you make this:
   
   
2. 00:15:717 (21,22,23) - Change to k k d
3. 00:17:080 (24,25) - Ctrl G and move to 00:16:853 -
4. 00:18:217 (28) - Move to 00:17:762 -
5. 00:18:444 (29,31) - Change to k (To variate a bit but you still keep the density on both sections)
   
   
   Hope you like it, well let's with the other parts.
   
   
6. 00:24:580 (46) - Move to 00:25:035 - it keep much better the pitch. Is similar to 00:30:262 (62,63,64) -
7. 00:32:307 (68) - Change to k becaue the rhythm continues from here 00:29:807 (61,62,63,64,65,66) - so you need keep the sequence in that part.
8. 00:38:895 - End the spinner, because this sound 00:36:038 (77) - ends here.

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  HP: 6
  
  Remove the Display Epilepsy Warning.

1. 00:00:717 (4) - , 00:01:626 (6) - , 00:04:353 (15) - Why you put finish? This song is too soft to finish, its tones are low and the melody is very soft, a finish would not look great on this occasion, I suggest you remove the finishes you have.
2. 00:05:262 (19) - Change to k, high tone begin here and ends 00:05:489 (20) -
3. 00:11:626 (42,43,44) - Remove finish.
4. 00:19:353 (62,63) - Change to k, the tone is high compared with 00:20:035 (64,65) -
5. 00:32:307 (105) - Change to k to continues the rhythm you are doing here 00:32:535 (106,107,108) -
6. 00:38:895 - End the spinner, because this sound 00:36:038 - ends here.

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  HP: 5
  
  Remove the Display Epilepsy Warning.

1. 00:06:853 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You need to variate in this part to flow much better with the sounds, change to k 00:08:671 (1,2) - , Ctrl G 00:09:126 (3,4) - and Ctrl G again 00:09:580 (5,6) -
2. 00:22:989 (47,49) - Those parts have the same high tone, please change to k. Also for variation change to d 00:23:671 (50) - and then make Ctrl G 00:24:580 (54,55) - sounds much better.
3. 00:32:080 (81) - Change to k, same tone 00:31:853 (80) -
4. 00:38:895 - End the spinner, because this sound 00:36:038 - ends here.

Sweet map! I hope my mod has been helpful :33, Good Luck!