hi from m4m
[Lunatic]
[sahuang's Lunatic]
[Extra Stage]
good luck with your mapset!
[Lunatic]
- The distance between 00:01:626 (1,2) - and 00:03:511 (1,2) - looks similar each other, but the rhythm are different, at least lower the distance of 00:03:511 (1,2) - to 2 arrows (default skin)
- 00:33:667 (2,3) - unstack them as you didn't stack 00:30:526 (3,4) - these and having them unstack can increase the movement of the player too
- 00:44:662 (1) - recommend turning this into a slightly-curved slider so it doesn't seems to be out of place
- 01:01:625 (2,3) - blanket
- 01:03:510 (1,2) - switch nc as 01:03:824 (2) - seems more suitable to have a new combo in this case
- 01:04:138 (3,4) - having these two stacked may confuse the player a bit since it's 1/4 in kiai time (e.g. 00:55:028 (1,2,3) - 00:56:285 (1,2,3) - )
- 01:08:693 (5,6,1) - could have line them up better by moving the 1 to a lower position
- 01:20:631 (2) - the slider itself doesn't seems to be parallel, so this looks abit awful imo (the lines except the middle one)
- 01:21:102 (3,2) - consider stack these two in order to avoid the overlap?
- 01:22:044 (3,4) - same goes with the problem of 01:04:138 (3,4) -
- 01:29:269 (2,3,4) - these three should be curve imo as you did these 3 01:24:243 (2,3,4) - with curve sliders (for consistent d)
- 01:33:039 (2,3) - blanket again w
- 02:30:840 (2,3,4) - remove the triple as there is no sound on blue tick
- 02:55:342 (4) - recommend copy and paste 02:55:027 (3) -, ctrl+h and ctrl+g, then replace the 4 so it's not looking out of place
- 02:55:970 (3,4) - although no one will notice this, these two still has a bad-looking overlap, consider moving farther between these two
- 03:58:483 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - would recommend replace these with reversing sliders just in case player forget this 1/3 thing
- 04:17:017 (1,2) - changing these into straight slider while keeping 04:17:645 (3,4,5) - to be curve so as to emphasize the guitar sound afterward
- 04:22:043 (4) - too staight imo
- 04:38:692 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - what you did before for the 1/3 ones is ncing after 3 notes, which makes here no sense under this case, just change these nc after 3 notes is fine enough (for consistent again)
- 04:47:488 (1) - same thing with 00:44:662 (1) -
[sahuang's Lunatic]
- 00:00:684 (1) - the circle could have done better like this https://puu.sh/zfEr6/666adc2a2c.png
- 00:14:505 (4,5,6,7,1) - having the ds decreasing between the circles doesn't seems in place here, try having a more balanced spread on ds here
- 00:41:442 (4) - remove this circle since there is no sound on the blue tick
- 00:56:285 (5,6,7,8) - the stream here should be going in another direction because the 5 seems to be more important than 00:56:599 (1) - imo
- 01:44:034 (1,2) - the distance between 1 and 2 is different from 01:41:521 (1,2) - , while both has a 1/2 gap. This may lead to player's confusion, maybe try moving the 01:44:348 (2) - further so that it won't be confusing that much
- 02:16:389 (1,1) - not sure is this overlap intentional but recommend to remove the overlap
- 02:34:295 (1) - D
- 04:05:394 (3) - having this to have anchor seems out of place for 04:04:766 (1,2) - so better remove that anchor
- 04:43:091 (1,2,3) - these 3 should have the largest ds between them because it broke the gradation of 04:41:206 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
- 04:54:163 (1) - shorten the spinner to 05:04:137 - in order to keep the end length the same
[Extra Stage]
- 02:06:023 (3) - this slider seems out of place because 02:04:138 (1,2) - are all in curve sliders so better change this into curve slider too
- 03:31:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - the stream should be curved instead of angled because most streams in the kiai are curved, having this angled stream would be out of place
Looking good
good luck with your mapset!