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syatten remixed celas - Bird Sprite -Awakening of Light-

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Topic Starter
kaniel outis

galvenize wrote:

http://puu.sh/6l4u

Here's my hyper.
Thanks d ( ^ _ ^ ) b
galvenize
+ Hitsounds! + Intro!
http://puu.sh/6moI
FireballFlame
Use 2772 as the offset.

Also, the to find different bg images.
The current ones don't look very nice, and they're also kinda distracting.
galvenize
^I agree with the offset.
I think it's actually better at 2782.

I'll start looking for bgs .-.
Musty
^_^

here's my normal ;w;
http://puu.sh/6mmV
Topic Starter
kaniel outis
I think bg are distracting too but it the ones i've found in in the folder of the song so i added them xD
anyway waiting for galvenize's bg ;)

Mustaash wrote:

^_^

here's my normal ;w;
http://puu.sh/6mmV
Thanks ;D
Backfire
Can I make a taiko for this? =w=b :o :3 ;)
Topic Starter
kaniel outis

Backfire wrote:

Can I make a taiko for this? =w=b :o :3 ;)
Yes of course xD
FireballFlame

galvenize wrote:

I think it's actually better at 2782.
That's a bit late imo ... but something inbetween might be best.
galvenize
http://puu.sh/6pDF

my diff updated

Ok, offset will be changed to 2777
Flute
                                              
kanna sama  this map tanoshii desu :3
Topic Starter
kaniel outis

Flute wrote:

                                              
kanna sama  this map tanoshii desu :3
Flute (kami)sama arigatou /w/
LKs
bgbg so cute

Beginner

[00:07:392] 1 grid right
[01:23:216] i suggest moving this slider alone to the next red line

good. but the hitsound set seems kinda thin, needs some heavy beats in some key points imo

Musty's Normal

[00:42:337] 1 grid left (grid size=4)
some percussion needed

galvenize's Hyper

[00:04:095] NC
really good diff

Another

oh this is cool
no need more hitsounds in this diff
Topic Starter
kaniel outis

LKs wrote:

bgbg so cute

Beginner

[00:07:392] 1 grid right done
[01:23:216] i suggest moving this slider alone to the next red line i prefer keep it at [01:23:216]

good. but the hitsound set seems kinda thin, needs some heavy beats in some key points imo a bit better now

Musty's Normal

[00:42:337] 1 grid left (grid size=4) Done
some percussion needed

galvenize's Hyper

[00:04:095] NC done
really good diff

Another

oh this is cool
no need more hitsounds in this diff :o
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Mustaash galvenize
Thank you! :)
lovhin456
Hi! And I like this kind of music, really nice.

Begginer;
- AR+1, this diff played so much better with it at least for me, considering the slider speed a higher AR seems just a perfect fit for it.
- This difficulty has way too many breaks and also you don't even map all the song. It just doesn't make sense with all the breaks and the song's part that isn't mapped it looks like you mapped almost nothing I would dare to say.
- 00:25:524 (1,2,3) >> I screwed here twice. Is bad to put more than a repeat in a slider in the easiest diff plus that slider speed isn't helping. Here's my suggestion.

- 00:28:491 >> Here too, my suggestion is a simple slider starting here and ending at 00:28:820, sounds nice
- 00:34:425 >> May be too close after a spinner
- 00:39:040 >> Here too, make a slider from this point to 00:39:370
- 01:22:227 (2,4) >> These two break the nice beat ): My suggestion: adding a repeat to (2) and for (4) extend the slider until the next white tick

Musty's Normal;
- 00:25:194 (7,8) >> Sounds weird, my suggestion

- 01:16:623 >> Starting here and on the kiai no hitsounds, or at least I can't hear any. Why ? Makes me sad.
- 01:34:095 >> This blank space is useless, map it, breaks the flow

galvenize's Hyper;
- 00:14:480 >> I think the slider should end here
- 00:15:798 >> ^
- 00:17:117 >> Move (4) here
- 00:19:755 >> End the slider here ?
- 00:21:073 >> ^
- 00:24:370 >> Add a note here ? I'm not sure myself
- 00:36:403 >> Add a note here
- 00:58:408 >> Whistle at start
- 01:03:683 >> ^

Another;
- 01:08:381 (1,2,3,4) >> Keep the spacing consistent here
- 01:58:820 >> Touches a little the scorebar
- I don't like the first half of the mapping, the slowdows and speedups are not fitting at all

* star
Topic Starter
kaniel outis

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! And I like this kind of music, really nice.

Begginer;
- AR+1, this diff played so much better with it at least for me, considering the slider speed a higher AR seems just a perfect fit for it. AR 3 now
- This difficulty has way too many breaks and also you don't even map all the song. It just doesn't make sense with all the breaks and the song's part that isn't mapped it looks like you mapped almost nothing I would dare to say.I think it's fine but yes will recheck later
- 00:25:524 (1,2,3) >> I screwed here twice. Is bad to put more than a repeat in a slider in the easiest diff plus that slider speed isn't helping. Here's my suggestion.
done
- 00:28:491 >> Here too, my suggestion is a simple slider starting here and ending at 00:28:820, sounds nice Done
- 00:34:425 >> May be too close after a spinner Not changed
- 00:39:040 >> Here too, make a slider from this point to 00:39:370 Done
- 01:22:227 (2,4) >> These two break the nice beat ): My suggestion: adding a repeat to (2) and for (4) extend the slider until the next white tick Done

Musty's Normal; Waiting for Mustaash
- 00:25:194 (7,8) >> Sounds weird, my suggestion

- 01:16:623 >> Starting here and on the kiai no hitsounds, or at least I can't hear any. Why ? Makes me sad.
- 01:34:095 >> This blank space is useless, map it, breaks the flow

galvenize's Hyper;
- 00:14:480 >> I think the slider should end here No
- 00:15:798 >> ^ ^
- 00:17:117 >> Move (4) here No
- 00:19:755 >> End the slider here ? No
- 00:21:073 >> ^ ^
- 00:24:370 >> Add a note here ? I'm not sure myself No
- 00:36:403 >> Add a note here No
- 00:58:408 >> Whistle at start ok
- 01:03:683 >> ^ ^

Another;
- 01:08:381 (1,2,3,4) >> Keep the spacing consistent here ok
- 01:58:820 >> Touches a little the scorebar Fix'd
- I don't like the first half of the mapping, the slowdows and speedups are not fitting at all
* star
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galvenize

Thank you for mod an star :)
artpiggo
Another
I prefer circle size +1

Hyper
00:22:557 (6,7) - this works better


Normal
I still think that the break is too much, which may makes player boring. dunno.

easy
recommend to make the diff end as same as other diff

8.5/10 cuz of easy-diff stuff.
Good luck. I wish this map ranked.
Topic Starter
kaniel outis

artpiggo wrote:

Another
I prefer circle size +1 I prefer keep Circle Size 5

Hyper
00:22:557 (6,7) - this works better ok


Normal Waiting for Mustaash
I still think that the break is too much, which may makes player boring. dunno.

easy
recommend to make the diff end as same as other diff Mapped the whole song now

8.5/10 cuz of easy-diff stuff.
Good luck. I wish this map ranked.
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galvenize
Thanks for mod and star! :)


EDIT: Remapped Beginner Difficulty
Apricot
[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Beginner]
Resnap All Notes !
00:37:722 (3) - NC.
00:38:875 (1) - Drag the ending of the slider to 00:39:370.
00:44:645 (4) - Instead of slider use a circle ?
01:17:282 (3) - add clap to end of sldier.
01:17:941 (4) - remove finish.
01:19:260 (7) - NC.
01:23:875 (1) - add finish to end of sldier.
01:40:359 (1) - remove hitsounds ?
01:41:678 (3) - remove clap ?

[Musty's Normal]
00:24:864 (6) - NC.
00:31:128 (1) - add whistle to end of slider.
00:32:447 (4) - add whistle to repeat of slider ?
00:31:787 (2) - whistle
00:42:007 (5,6) - whistle ?
01:11:348 (3,5,7) - add whistle to start of the slier.
01:17:282 (2,3,6,1,4,5,8,9) - add clap ? ●●○○●●○○●●
01:21:897 (1,2) - add clap to end of slider.
01:24:535 (3) - add finish to end of slider.
01:25:853 (4) - add finish to start of slider.
01:25:853 (4) - add finish to end of slider !
01:27:502~ - hitsound !
01:32:117 (8) - NC.

[galvenize's Hyper]
Resnap All Notes !
00:27:007 (2) - add whistle to end of slider ?
00:43:656 (7) - add finish ?
00:43:820 (8) - add finish to repeat of slider ?
00:44:315 (9) - add finish to start/end of slider ?
00:44:809 (1) - remove clap ?


[Another]
Resnap All Notes !
00:23:546 (1) - remove whistle then add finish.
00:38:381 (1) - Should use the same distance snap as 00:37:722 (1,2). If fix it, remember to remove new combo.
00:38:711 (2) - if fix ↑, add new combo here.
00:58:656 (1) - RNC !
00:59:315 (1) - ^
01:06:073 (1) - finish.
01:08:546 (2) - remove whistle.
01:15:304 (1) - remove finish.
01:38:381 (1) - RNC.
01:39:700 (1) - ^
01:40:606 (*) - Add circle ?
01:41:266 (*) - ^
01:45:221 (1) - RNC.
01:45:468 (1) - ^ !
01:46:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to read D:
Topic Starter
kaniel outis

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Beginner]
Resnap All Notes !
00:37:722 (3) - NC. ok
00:38:875 (1) - Drag the ending of the slider to 00:39:370. ok
00:44:645 (4) - Instead of slider use a circle ? good idea + i added a circle at 00:44:974
01:17:282 (3) - add clap to end of sldier. done
01:17:941 (4) - remove finish. done
01:19:260 (7) - NC.ok
01:23:875 (1) - add finish to end of sldier. ok
01:40:359 (1) - remove hitsounds ? prefer keep whistle and finish
01:41:678 (3) - remove clap ? same ^

[Musty's Normal] Waiting for Mustaash
00:24:864 (6) - NC.
00:31:128 (1) - add whistle to end of slider.
00:32:447 (4) - add whistle to repeat of slider ?
00:31:787 (2) - whistle
00:42:007 (5,6) - whistle ?
01:11:348 (3,5,7) - add whistle to start of the slier.
01:17:282 (2,3,6,1,4,5,8,9) - add clap ? ●●○○●●○○●●
Thanks for mod and star !! :D
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